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smoll-tangerine · 7 months
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One of your stories: set in 1659
Your Y/N in said story: “i’Ll sEe yOu gUyS tOmOrRow”
Just in what universe did people from the 1600s speak like this? And you have the audacity to put a disclaimer that says “aNy siMilAriTiEs aRe cOiNcidEnCes” when you can’t even keep their manner of speaking as historically accurate as possible — and this should have been the least of your “story”’s problems.
Another thing.
smoll-tangerine in her A/N: “tHaNkS tO mY pRoOfrEaDer”
The “proofread” work not even halfway through later:
“aT tHe aGe oF mAjOrITy”
“lEft riGhT fInGEr”
Yeah, don’t ever come back and write. Y’all put to shame and great waste every resource material available for actually-decent writers.
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I honestly don’t know why I’m taking the time of the day to reply to such message. But I figured, since you also took the time to read through 30k words and also took the time to write wtv issue you had with my fic, I might as well answer it lol
1) “Just in what universe did people from 1600s speak like this?”: If I were to use the English people used to speak back in the 1600s, no one would be able to understand. Technically, Early Modern English which was prominent from the 1400s to the late 1600s, is unintelligible to modern speakers (i.e., plebs like you and me) unless you’ve studied it. I would have to write like Shakespeare. You can argue that a lot of Modern English words or sayings came from Shakespearean English, and people will only understand some of it. Also, issue is, I can’t write Shakespearean English, and Shakespearean English is so complicated that I didn’t even want to attempt it because of annoying hating readers like you who nitpick at every irrelevant detail that has nothing to do with the plot.
2) The fic is also set in Versailles, France. Going by your logic, the characters should then be talking in French. Hell, I could’ve written everything in French if I wanted to because I am French. But that wouldn’t be fair to people who cannot read French. Once again, Middle French is highly complicated and no one would be able to understand unless they’re a) a native speaker, and/or b) someone who studied and understand Middle French. Honestly, in WHAT universe do FICTIONAL CHARACTERS set in FRANCE speak ENGLISH!!! Cannot fathom this logic!!!
3) “And you have the audacity to put a disclaimer that says ‘any similarities are coincidences’ when you can’t even keep their manner of speaking as historically accurate as possible.”: Bestie, go back and read what you just wrote because it makes no sense, and there’s no correlation between the two.
4) “The age of majority” is a thing. I don’t know why you’re so pressed about this. Are you illiterate.
5) “Left right finger”: Thanks for catching that typo! I still don’t understand why you’re so angry about the fact that my FANFIC had typos (but ok). But also, let’s see you try writing a fic that’s 30k words and see if you won’t make any mistakes or miss any typos. Make sure to drop the link in my inbox when it’s ready. I’ll give back the same energy you gave me. 💅🏼
Next time, don’t be shy and come off anon. :-)
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taesanrot · 2 months
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aaah you're too nice !! i'm super glad you like them, thank you so much 🫶🏻 i don't remember if i followed you first or if you followed me first, but i got so happy when i saw your notif and realized it was you 🥹 LOVE U TOO POOKIE ! 🤍
THATS SO CUTE STAWPPPP we love u so bad brieeee
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taesanrot · 3 months
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I love your works and your doing so well <333
thank uuu omfg 😢😢 ilysm and i love ur fics too 😽😽😽
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smoll-tangerine · 11 months
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Part 8 of the jaehyun fic 🥲 ?
i’m assuming you’re talking about ten reasons??
but chapter 8 is there in my drafts!! (here’s a little sneak peek):
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i just got a couple of things i want to post so i’m trying to post them at an interval so that i’m not spamming but also make my account more “active” rather than posting it all in one shot and then ghosting lol
meanwhile, feel free to check out the rest of my masterlist while you’re waiting🥰
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smoll-tangerine · 1 year
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Can we have a sneak peak 👀 or am i asking for too much 🧎‍♀️🧎‍♀️🧎‍♀️
Literally, anxiety will eat me alive (😔🫠🫶
I can't wait for Jaehyun to be actually hurting...
LMFAO, as much as i wanna give you all a sneak peek, i think it would be revealing too much. you guys will have to be patient hehe.
i'm almost done with my finals, so you guys can expect the latest update posted sometime during the first week of may :)
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smoll-tangerine · 10 months
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HIII WB even if its for a short moment!!
Glad to know you’re putting yourself first and living in the moment !! i sincerely appreciate the time and effort you put into your stories and providing us updates when you can :)) keep taking care of yourself anddd your writing is ABSOLUTELY PHENOMENAL <3
HI YOU BEAUTIFUL ANON!! thank you so much for your kind messages/asks (i'm assuming you're the same anon or there's this anon in my head that i keep thinking it's you AND HOPEFULLY I AM CORRECT). but either way, thanks so much!! i love you!!
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smoll-tangerine · 10 months
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Ummm so when are you updating 10 reasons 🥺
hopefully soon! i've just been super busy; one of my close friends just visited me recently, and my cousin is also visiting so there hasn't been much time for me to sit in front of my computer and write.
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smoll-tangerine · 10 months
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Hey I just stumbled upon ur ten reasons y I hate u ff and just finished reading all the parts. I absolutely loved it! Are u still writing that series?
hello, thank you for your kind comment! ten reasons is still ongoing with 2-3 chapters left before it's completed. so yes, i'm still writing it :)
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smoll-tangerine · 10 months
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hiii, can you add me on "after the tone: voicemails i want to keep" taglist, please? ♥
hello, yes, you are added! <3
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smoll-tangerine · 1 year
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Chapter 7 of 10 reansons was... A sharp object that pierced my heart :)
I imagined myself in that position, putting trust in someone you actually crushed on, but LITERALLY got crushed by the same person.
I hope nothing bad happens to OC, because damn, karma did not understand its job in the recent chap. Dude got the wrong target I swear 🥹
I hope even if Jae ends up with her, he will went thru hell first
...i can't say anything because i'm scared i'm gonna spoil the future chapters lol but yeah, jaehyun's a dumbass unfortunately :')
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smoll-tangerine · 1 year
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I have a question, not sure if it's relevant for the rest of the story (if it's feel free to not answer ofc) but I remember something about a marriage present or something. And OC and her friends bought Jaehyun's on that trip.
I wonder what it was, and IF she ever gave it to him...
YES, it was a wedding present she had prepared for him. (and yes, it is/will be relevant for the rest of the story)
and no, she didn't give it to him... yet! you'll see in future chapters what exactly is the gift that OC prepared for jaehyun :-)
i'm surprised that you caught on!!! i intentionally left it as a mystery, hoping that ppl will ask, so kudos to you hehe
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smoll-tangerine · 1 year
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just read "ten reasons why i hate you: reason #7" and i enjoyed very single part of it!
I can't help but wonder how Jaehyun was able to make a promise to the main character with a set timeframe. Like 5 months is not enough time to get over someone you really love and care about (imo and based on my experience)! Is it because he knew Chaeyoung was dying and he need to get on the main character's good side ASAP so she can save her? I would feel sick if he was just taking advantage of her :-(
Cant wait for the upcoming chapters!
ahhh, thank you so much!! tbh, i really enjoyed writing this chapter too, so i was super excited to see how you guys would react to it.
i think that was the point. it was the fact that jaehyun gave an unrealistic timeline/timeframe — because like you said, it's hard to get over someone that quickly. and that's why OC didn't want to believe him at the beginning until she saw that jaehyun was making efforts for the first 3 months and she kinda went, "oh, like, maybe he wasn't joking? maybe he's actually serious about this?"
and that's why it hurt her even more: because the second she actually started to trust him (by like the 4th/5th month), jaehyun kinda "betrayed" her and destroyed all of her expectations.
so no, he didn't know chaeyoung was sick until the 4th month, when he wasn't able to pick OC up from work. and then by the 5th month, OC finally understands why he's been so distant and flaky: because he was too busy trying to find a doctor for chaeyoung. and by the end of the 5th month, both jaehyun and chaeyoung realize that oh, OC is their only option left.
i wouldn't say that jaehyun is taking advantage of her in that way, but the main character kinda decides to save chaeyoung because before she is a woman, she is a doctor. throughout the chapters, i tried to make it obvious that OC was someone who always puts her career before everything — even before herself.
i hope this makes sense (& thank you for asking such an interesting question!!) and ahhh, thank you!! i hope you will enjoy the future chapters hehehe <3
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smoll-tangerine · 1 year
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hello it's jae-bam fr back then, hope you've been well!!!
did i just hear surgeon!jaehyun x surgeon!oc PLUS exes-to-lovers?!!? i'm sold already.
missed seeing you around and wishing you all the best! xx
OMG HELLO!!! i've been well, i hope you've been well too!!
and YES, YOU HEARD CORRECTLY. i think it's about to become one of my favourite stories that i have ever written. i love the dynamics between the characters (and there are a lot of them), and they're all very stubborn, hard-headed, and +++ prideful cuz they are all surgeons LMFAO also, just a lot of drama and angst (aka my signature fics ifsjfksj)
thanks so much for sticking around!! i should be more active now that my semester is almost over :)<3
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smoll-tangerine · 7 months
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Ha ha yeah, no, I didn’t take the time to read through 30k — the moment your character said “i’Ll sEe yOu gUyS tOmOrRoW”, I exited that abomination of a “story”. Your entitlement to even think I’d finish it when not even halfway through and you’ve had that much errors 🙄 — and I certainly didn’t read through your unnecessarily long response to my ask either, so I’ve got nothin’ else to say except thanks for even wasting your words with me 😉
awwwwn bestie, thanks for proving to me that you’re illiterate AND don’t understand english for shit.😋
the fact that you’ve also sent a hateful ask to my best friend is also hilarious. nothing better to show that you’ve got nothing good going on in your life.
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smoll-tangerine · 11 months
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HONESTLY I WANTED JAEHYUN AND MC END GAME BUT HUHUHU ROSE WITH CANCER mc is pretty kind ngl and Jaehyun forgetting the 5month mark TF IS HE
HE'S AN IDIOT SANDWICH, THAT'S WHAT HE IS!!!
jaehyun:
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smoll-tangerine · 1 year
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hello friend!! my nostalgia for nctblr has inspired me to say hi to every active nct writer i know :) i hope you are doing well <3
omg hello love, thanks for saying hi!! i'm doing super well, what about you? ♥
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