#week5

[eosbishova]

Chapters: 1/1 Fandom: Hawkeye (TV 2021), Marvel Cinematic Universe Rating: Teen And Up Audiences Warnings: Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings, No Archive Warnings Apply Relationships: Yelena Belova/Kate Bishop Characters: Kate Bishop, Yelena Belova Additional Tags: BishovaHolidayChallenge23, Christmas Fluff, Christmas Eve, Alternate Universe, Supernatural - Freeform, Established Relationship, alternate universe - small towns Series: Part 5 of Hawkliday '23 Summary:

"So, about that drink?"

"Sure. We deserve break." Yelena pressed herself closer against Kate's warmth.

#bishovaholidaychallenge23 #kate and yelena #kate bishop #kate bishop x yelena belova #yelena belova #week5 #smalltown #bishlova #bishova #fanfic

[mirkwood-tardis]

Peer Review Request #2

This is an excerpt from my audience analysis. I included demographics and a discussion of them, but I am not sure if that is enough. Is there any other aspects of audience I should include?

#writ318mu #week5

[gashface]

HEY GUYS!!! ,

This weeks prompt, was set out to learn more about your models, and delve a bit into their lives! <;3 These stories should be an important moment in their life, or just a memory that shaped them.

WARNING: This weeks prompt has a couple trigger warnings, which will be listed above the edit, so keep this in mind and proceed with caution &lt;3

With this in mind, onto the results! This week I was looking for edits that embrace your models story again, but from an earlier time in their lives. The main focus was on storytelling this week, and the edits reflecting this story. Whether this be directly, or in an abstract manner.

Charline Morel by @cyazurai

“Quand il me prend dans ses bras…” Fifteen-year-old Charline could hear her own voice singing, and she knew she was, but there was no heart in it. She hated singing. Well, perhaps she didn’t hate it, but through the circumstances she had grown to despise it. “.. qu'il me parle tout bas…” A tear streaked down her left cheek and she avoided her mother’s disapproving gaze. Beside her, her little sister Delphine enthusiastically played her violin to accompany her as they entertained their parents’ guests. “... le vois la vie en rose.” Another tear, this time on the right. This was not a sad song. This was a happy, romantic song. She should be putting her all into it, but all she could feel was the walls closing in. She was surrounded by people she could no longer see - they were just becoming only silhouetted blurs, judging her and family. They must be perfect. This happens every year. It was her parents’ New Years Eve party, and every year it was her and her sister’s obligation to make sure not to disappoint the hundreds of prestigious guests their parents invited. They had to be perfect or else. She hated this. She hated it. She didn’t want to be forced to sing just for a little bit of positive attention. Why did she have to do this? Why did Delphine have to be perfect at the violin just so that their parents might agree to let them go out for ice cream (when it wasn’t even a guarantee)? It was unfair. It was at this moment that Charlie realized she didn’t want to do this anymore, and so as the tears streamed down her cheeks, she decided to pour her heart into it one last time - because next year, she was going to be her parents’ performing monkey over her dead body.

POINTS

ORIGINALITY: 8/10

STORY: 10/10

EXECUTION: 9/10

STYLE: 9/10

Parker Winston by @morgynemberisagenderfluiddaddy

TW!: Suicide, self harm, mental health

Hi! My name's Parker, and I've tried to commit suicide multiple times. I know you're thinking that's a morbid and socially awkward way to introduce myself, but hey, it's a big part of my story and who I am. Don't get me wrong, there's a lot more to a person than just their mental health, but a lot of the time, these things tend not to get discussed, period. Let alone when we are trying to get to know somebody, so for today, I hope we can put that stigma aside, and I can tell you a little about my journey.

I have ADHD, and depression is something I have lived with as far back as I can remember. By the time I was twenty, I had tried to kill myself three times, I had a family that didn't talk to me, I'd cut my arms up so much my forearms were more scar than skin, my heart was crushed by someone I thought was the love of my life, and I was hooked on anything I could get my grubby little hands on.

I think about that shit a lot, the things I did, and the decisions I made. I think about the person I was and the person I am today.

They're wildly different people, but now that I'm able to see it from another side, I realize one can't exist without the other. I would've never learned the things I did, and I couldn't have grown from it. It was hell, and I had to claw those life lessons from my struggle like a damn wolverine, but hey, I survived! Despite my best efforts... Yeah, I know that's not funny, but if you don't laugh sometimes, you'll cry, and I'm sick of crying about it.

I hated who I was, and I had a hard time coping with everything I did, not just the suicide attempts but everything. Though I finally realized I couldn't change the past, but I could change the future.

I could get help, and I could make sure none of that ever happened again. I can't change the past, and it aches to know that somewhere in space and time, that kid is still struggling, and I wish I could talk to him... I don't know what I'd say to him because I know he wouldn't listen and probably just lift my wallet. But I still want to hug him, tell him that really it's all going to be okay, that he needs to let go of a lot of shit and learn to love himself, then I'd tell him to get rid of that asshole's shitty T-shirt.

The pain you feel, it's not for nothing, but it's also not forever. You'll learn from this, and in a way you least expect it, it will come full circle. Ease up on the drugs, stop cutting, and get yourself some help. I know you don't think you deserve it, but you do! And believe it or not, one day you're going to have a lot of people that want and need you around. This shit doesn't get any easier, but it does get better. You just need to let it.

So tell that jackass his band ain't shit, tell your parents they're full of shit, and tell your siblings you love them even though they all suck, hang onto your friends, don't be so scared, let yourself feel, and listen to yourself once in a while! You know yourself better than you think, and you know what you need, and guess what! The answer isn't always coke! I can't help that kid anymore, but I can help the one's reading this, and if in this moment you feel hopeless, do me, a stranger on the internet, a favor. Take a deep breath, know that it gets better, and reach out to somebody! You deserve help, you deserve love, and you deserve to be alive! With love, - Parker W.

POINTS

ORIGINALITY: 9/10

STORY: 10/10

EXECUTION: 7/10

STYLE: 7/10

Ember Arendse by @wolfrynn313

Ember: "When I saw this week's prompt,I knew that I had to recreate a childhood photo of me at the keyboard with my Mum/Mom. I've always been creatively inclined and so have both of my parents and brothers; I thought it important to focus on the crystallization of my musical inclination and creativity, hence the feature of ice freezing in place. I realized who I was pretty early on and remain to be proud of the person that I grew into."

POINTS

ORIGINALITY: 8/10

STORY: 8/10

EXECUTION: 8/10

STYLE: 8/10

Dillion Carter by @mewo-ita

Idea: Cherished memory of being with family at a rollerskating rink’s 80s night.

“Figured I should say something myself this time. My comfort place for the past decade whenever I feel overwhelmed to do anything has been this rink.

I discovered it the first three months after being adopted. I barely talked to anyone an’ just prepared to go back to the orphanage. That never stopped my new family tryin’ though and one day, we put on retro clothes and drove down to this place. It was 80s night, like it is now, and my sisters who I brought today helped me skate.

“Beat it” was playing in the background and I ‘member it being the first time I smiled in years. I was wearing a tomodachi my ma brought me and had no clue what soul or funk was, but I loved it. Did a lot for my confidence and ability to be around strangers— I don’t think I’d even consider being a model if not for that experience. I’d say it affected my fashion sense too, in a good way; makes me more open to change and bold colors.

Sure my folks will be able to find me here from now on; they didn’t know where I went off to before. S’not too bad.”

POINTS

ORIGINALITY: 9/10

STORY: 10/10

EXECUTION: 9/10

STYLE: 9/10

HOLY MOLY GOOD WORK GUYS!

I just want to say, thank you for all the effort you put into every weeks prompt. Your dedication is amazing x it makes hosting this so much fun

The next prompts will be released 8pm aest 25th of June.

Thanks guys x

- Buddy

Prompt Hint:

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[soulofherkarmaart]

Inktober 52 : Squash_week5/2022

#autumn #fall #pumpkin #squash #watercolor #watercolorart #week5 #inktober #fallvibes #inktoberweek5 #inktober2022 #inktober52

[krispykroissant]

Original Content Peer Review Request (Week 5)

"Share a section of your Data Analysis Practice Project content. What is the work of this sample? How can we help you revise?"

So this is clearly still a work in progress, but my attempt here was to make it feel less like an essay with just paragraphs and more like a tour of my thought process during/throughout my data collection and analysis. I've still got a long way to go with the content that I need to include and analyze, as well as the conclusions I need to come up with, but I was just wondering: besides the lack of color, is the formatting/division of pieces of content easy to navigate? I added bigger and bolder headings to steer away from the monotony of a traditional essay, but is that enough?

#writ318mu #week5 #@npfannen #peer review

[anneruss]

Peer Review Request 3

How do you feel about captions? Are you more likely to engage with content that has larger or shorter captions? I believe that it depends on what platform you’re using. Tiktok, for example, is better with smaller captions on videos, while Instagram is better for longer captioned content. What is your opinion?

#writ318mu #week5

[gretamothgrrrl]

Hashtags

When I post my art, I notice it draws in a lot of new followers. Does anyone on here have experience benefiting from using hashtags? And would you recommend using it as a work around for instagrams algorithms?

#writ318mu #week5

[cham-the-enby]

Peer review request 1

So this is from last week and I chose to create a slide presentation to show each post individually and show each ones likes more on its own so I had room to write the purpose and the importance of each post I made . I was thinking is this the best way to present the data or is there another way that may be more effective in showing off the data . If there is another way to show this data I would be very interested in seeing another proposal that can also be organized and be more effective in showing the data

#week5 #writ318mu

[aubreyontheweb]

Peer Review Request #2

Here is my Data Chart that I created for the first part of the assignment. I'm happy with the information I was able to pull, but I'm interested in your opinions on how I can incorporate the graphic itself into my paper portion. I'd like there to be some sort of visual element within my paper that says the same thing, but I know I will be explaining the information shown here in more detail in my paper already. I want to avoid redundancy within my paper. Should I create a second infographic that gives more/different information that I don't include in the writing of my essay or should I just eliminate this type of graphical element within the essay and come up with something new? Thanks!

#writ318mu #week5

[jbrycee]

The last thing I am looking for feedback on is my introduction! This was the first thing that I wrote out and I think it is my weakest point in my essay. Since I am still used to traditional essay formatting, I did my best to apply it here. I feel like a sentence or two between the first and second sentences might do some good but I am not sure. Another thing is the graphic, I feel like adding some elements around the graphic could also add something to the essay but I'm not sure what!

#week5 #writ318mu

[mgfuentes25]

Peer Review Request 3

I am wondering if my overall format and organization of the project is effective. It is currently organized as seen in the image provided where it is mostly an essay format, but includes design elements (chart, images of posts, possible other images) as they are relevant to the analysis. While this is easy for a reader to follow, it feels slightly bland. I noticed some classmates had interesting visual graphics that parts of their analysis was organized into. I would love to hear suggestions from those who followed that path to see if I can incorporate it into my own project.

#writ318mu #week5

[brainfogwixq]

❇❇Peer Review Request❇❇

Hello Writ318! I'm having difficulty imagining what viewers of the WIXQ Instagram page are hoping to gain from visiting our page. So here's my question:

If YOU were an audience member for the radio station's social media pages, what would you hope to gain? What are your expecting to find when visiting?

#writ318mu #week5 #peer-review #like just IMAGINE pls #or visit our page @wixq on instagram.com >:)

[mirkwood-tardis]

Thursday Check-In

this is a peer review week. What question can I answer to help strengthen your revision work?

In order to include context about my Instagram account, would discussing the history of my accounts purpose as well as the follower count and interactions be helpful? Should I include that in my analysis?

@npfannen

#writ318mu #week5

[katelynma]

Peer review 1

I have this table that I used to collect my data but really am at a loss for how to make a graph or chart showing the data differently. Any recommendations on how to show the likes, comments, and shares in an efficient way? @npfannen

#writ318mu #week5

[themageden]

Peer Review Post 3

I added a graph of my Instagram interaction because I thought it was clever and useful. Many of my peers made graphs, and they inspired me to do the same. The design of this graph is very plain, which I will probably change later. Would this graph be useful to include in my essay as a visual aid?

#writ318mu #week5

[krispykroissant]

Original Content Peer Review Request (Week 5)

"Share a section of your Data Analysis Practice Project content. What is the work of this sample? How can we help you revise?"

This is what the first page of my essay looks like so far. I used Canva to make the image (inside the black box) by taking a screenshot of the ENWL Instagram page's logo and then writing the text below it using the default font from the Canva template. Does anyone have any suggestions for how I can spice this up/make it more appealing? I think it's ok but feels like it's missing a touch of something that can potentially make it more eye-catching and hook the audience in from the get-go.

#writ318mu #week5 #@npfannen #peer review