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calmdownandlistenn · 3 months
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How to write smut ?
(@urfriendlywriter | req by @rbsstuff @yourlocalmerchgirl anyone under the appropriate age, please proceed with caution :') hope this helps guys! )
writing smut depends on each person's writing style but i think there's something so gut-wrenchingly beautiful about smut when it's not very graphic and vivid. like., would this turn on a reader more?
"he kissed her, pulling her body closer to him."
or this?
"His lips felt so familiar it hurt her heart. His breathing had become more strained; his muscles tensed. She let herself sink into his embrace as his hands flattened against her spine. He drew her closer."
One may like either the top or the bottom one better, but it totally depends on your writing to make it work. Neither is bad, but the second example is more flattering, talking literally.
express one's sensory feelings, and the readers will automatically know what's happening.
writing, "her walls clenched against him, her breath hitching with his every thrust" is better than writing, "she was about to cum".
here are some vocabulary you can introduce in your writing:
whimpered, whispered, breathed lightly, stuttered, groaned, grunted, yearned, whined, ached, clenched, coaxed, cried out, heaved, hissed
shivering, shuddering, curling up against one's body, squirming, squirting, touching, teasing, taunting, guiding, kneeling, begging, pining, pinching, grinding,
swallowing, panting, sucking in a sharp breath, thrusting, moving gently, gripped, biting, quivering,
nibbling, tugging, pressing, licking, flicking, sucking, panting, gritting, exhaling in short breaths,
wet kisses, brushing soft kisses across their body (yk where), licking, sucking, teasing, tracing, tickling, bucking hips, forcing one on their knees
holding hips, guiding the one on top, moving aimlessly, mindlessly, sounds they make turn insanely beautiful, sinful to listen to
some adjectives to use: desperately, hurriedly, knowingly, teasingly, tauntingly, aimlessly, shamelessly, breathlessly, passionately, delicately, hungrily
he sighed with pleasure
her skin flushed
he shuddered when her body moved against his
he planted kisses along her jawline
her lips turned red, messy, kissed and flushed.
his hands were on his hair, pulling him.
light touches traveled down his back
words were coiled at his throat, coming out as broken sobs, wanting more
he arched his back, his breath quivering
her legs parted, sinking into the other's body, encircling around their waist.
+ mention the position, how they're being moved around---are they face down, kneeling, or standing, or on top or on bottom--it's really helpful to give a clear picture.
+ use lustful talk, slow seduction, teasing touches, erratic breathing, give the readers all while also giving them nothing. make them yearn but DO NOT PROLONG IT.
sources to refer to for more: (will be updated soon!)
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calmdownandlistenn · 3 months
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MOOD FOR TODAY 😩😩
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calmdownandlistenn · 4 months
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if you reading this you deserve some head
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calmdownandlistenn · 4 months
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No one understands the pain that daughters go through when their mothers’ are not only pick me’s but completely men focused.
We go through heartbreak after heartbreak, with own parent. The shit is exhausting.
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Queen Latifah as Georgia Byrd in Last Holiday (2006)
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calmdownandlistenn · 5 months
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calmdownandlistenn · 5 months
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Realising that you have no one in your corner is one of the worst feelings ever.
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calmdownandlistenn · 5 months
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My issue is that I want people to treat me how I treat them, when they would never treat me that way.
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calmdownandlistenn · 5 months
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i love wholesome questions like plz ask me genuine questions if ur curious abt me
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calmdownandlistenn · 5 months
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Welcome to Sagittarius season everyone!!!!! ♐️♐️♐️♐️♐️♐️♐️♐️♐️
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calmdownandlistenn · 5 months
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Sagittarius is wildness, travel, the hunt, risk, dares, luck, gambles, bluntness, honesty, truth, exaggeration, personal truth, truth vs. lies themes, stories, instinct, instinct vs. intellect, sport, competition, seeking, quests, adventure, questioning, philosophy, belief, optimism, the big picture, rudeness or tactlessness, freedom, carelessness, irresponsibility, carefreeness, idealism, extravagance, restless, impatience, forward thinking or looking, teaching, learning, knowledge, wide-open spaces, archery, books, horses, stags, hoofed animals, prey or hunted animals, foreign and/or ideas of "exoticness", stables, great houses, hunting clubs, fields, hills, high places, fireplaces, upper levels, treehouses, humor, jokes, liveliness, the foreigner or stranger, good company, journalist, comedian, guide, philosopher, adventurer, pilot, preacher, guru, the inspiration.
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calmdownandlistenn · 5 months
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you gross nasty freak wanna hangout
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calmdownandlistenn · 5 months
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Mood
Just wanna suck his dick and play with his balls and make him feel good and let him do whatever he wants to me
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calmdownandlistenn · 5 months
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Me when another black girl does anything
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calmdownandlistenn · 5 months
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May you never get attached to a person who isn't for you.
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calmdownandlistenn · 6 months
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I’m on that leave me alone energy for now on.
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