#I'M SO FUCKING FIRED UP HHHHHHHHHHHH

[bapydemonprincess]

Sebamey RP Mey Rin really went

#kuroshitsuji #Mey Rin #sebamey RP #rp commentary #I'M SO FUCKING FIRED UP HHHHHHHHHHHH #🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 #THE POWER OF LOVE FOR A SLUTTY DEMON BAE WITH A BUSSY COMPELS ME #IM MEAN WHAT GRSHTDJFKU

[idlecreature]

the buried fic comment from hell (it's so long i'm SO SORRY, I GOT EXCITED)

DEL.. I WASN’T SURE IF IT WAS APPROPRIATE TO LEAVE A LONG ASS COMMENT ON UR BURIED FIC IN PUBLIC….. SO I’M DROPPING IT HERE i’m so sorry in advance this is about to be a mess,, i’m so fucking emotional right now

((the review under the cut is in response to my fic which can b read here))

okay first –

The mental image of tiny gangly Barnabas and Jonah crouched with their hands in the dirt….. is so fucking cute?? I could feel Jonah’s jealousy just burning off of him. You had me right away. Fuck. You know how to open a story and I’m deeply envious, I’ve always struggled with it. Also, you threw in that little hook:

Despite what Jonah believes, there are some things that just can’t be explained in words.

Barnabas’ voice is so fucking good… guh… you know. I didn’t much care about Barnabas in any deep way before I joined the Jonah server and you guys have all just completely GUTTED me, I can’t believe how much I care about this highly-strung bastard,, he is so GOOD. HE’S SO GOOD???? HE’S SUCH A SWEETIE. LIKE. BARNABAS FEELING GUILTY AND HORRIFIED THAT PEOPLE ARE GRATEFUL TO HIM AND WANT HIM AROUND???? AAAAAAAAAA. And the melancholy aspect, too, which I imagine is how Mordechai was able to relate to him, get attached to him… Barnabas being bitter about how useless his tears are while he’s crying anxiously at the prospect that he might not be able to help those families after all…….

All of those scraps of Barnabas’ letter to Jonah made such EXCELLENT transitions, holy hell. Again I am inspired by your storytelling prowess. I am taking notes, for whenever my ability to write longform fic returns from war. This one was my favorite, made my heart clench:

A good world starts with a good person and a few choices that are made with the heart—

He’s so earnest I’m going to weep ;_; Barny.. you can’t make Jonah a better person he’s AWFUL,,

(Side note, super digging that I can indent stuff, block quoting makes this SO much easier.)

Also really digging that Jonah doesn’t have as nice a reputation as Barnabas… Jonah is the bad influence friend lmfao. AND JONAH’S CAT… I LOVE HIM…

And then you delivered a swift blow straight to the religion kink, as promised… “There’s something undeniably old testament about Jonah; the fire and fury of creation, the self-annihilating stare of Lot’s wife.“ LOSING IT I’M LOSING IT… WHAT A WAY OF DESCRIBING HIM God, here I thought I couldn’t possibly be more attracted to this bastard man. I am aghast at myself.

LOSING IT EVEN MORE OVER BARNABAS STACKING TEACUPS ON JONAH’S HEAD???? Why must you make them so fucking cute oh NO this is going to hurt isn’t it. ((This was the note I stuck in the Word doc while I was reading it and I thought I’d leave it as was for your enjoyment))

“Taking cues from your dreams?” Barnabas replies. “You know only the desperately mad do that?” 

“Or desperately inspired—savants and prophets and visionaries.”

And then you continued to try to kill me… Jonah thinking of himself as a prophet……. hhhhh canon-typical overambitious zealotry I’m HERE FOR IT………

“Are you trying to make me angry with you by playing the devil’s advocate?” 

“Just testing you,” Jonah says in his alloyed voice, silver-and-honey-gold. 

Del I cannot stress enough… My religion kink………. It’s been SO VERY ACTIVATED.

“Your morality has only ever been a thin cover for your shame.”

OUCH, JONAH, JESUS

Every bit of their dialogue was so familiar and tinged with bittersweetness and I owe you my entire life… Sincerely. Ugh. Like, how you described Barnabas’ internal angst about it later on – when he’s thinking of Mordechai, and he refers to "his many dog-eared fantasies” about Jonah it just really vividly conjured the thought of he and Jonah having a sort of? Queer solidarity, ESPECIALLY having grown up together. And that makes Jonah’s flash of betrayal at Barnabas not wanting to be SEEN with him that much more agonizing, personally. Like. I’ve had that happen to me more than once in real life. And much as Jonah is a piece of shit who is absolutely manipulating him………. still, ouch. Ouch. (Barnabas’ thoughts on the company Jonah keeps also made me wince. You did an AMAZING job with all of the internalized shame and frantic rationalizations, hooooooboy.)

The Lukases being colorblind is such an interesting piece of lore by the way I love it????? Now I have. Some questions, about Peter. Mordechai’s characterization in this is so fascinating to me. I’m enTRANCED by how you reverse-Uno’d it so that Barnabas was the reason Mordechai lost himself to the Lonely… the power dynamics……. so tasty. Ugh. And all of the sensual descriptions, especially of that first visit Barnabas had at Moorland house?? I didn’t clip any because I would have ended up clipping the whole fucking thing. It was aching, haunting, beautiful, holyshit. Their romance is somehow more fucked up than Barnabas and Jonah’s…

Also, I was so eager to read this I skipped the tags/warnings and completely didn’t realize Mordechai was going to be an actual vampire so that was a VERY fun surprise lmfao.

Barnabas feels like he’s close to learning something about violence and desire, how close they are, how the wires can get crossed.

THIS QUOTE IS EVERYTHING TO MEEEEEE ugh I’m having an aneurysm over how Jonah managed to fashion Barnabas into a creature that could understand him by gifting him to Mordechai for a while… letting Mordechai crack him open at the points where he was already brittle and experience an influx of some of the true darkness of the world. Just a tasty taste. That way when he discovers the truth of Jonah’s occult interests he won’t run away, because he’s already got his own fingers in the mess. He’s already given himself to one horror, why not Jonah? Shave some of the shine off of his morality, make him nice and gray so he won’t contrast so much with Jonah… And satisfying his curiosity at the same time. Two birds.

Oh, also, still sobbing about this line:

he realises that he doesn’t want to wear any colours that Mordechai can’t properly see.

EVERY TIME I let my guard down for ten seconds you smacked me with more of Barnabas being the most precious bleeding heart in the universe!!!!!! He aches so much for the people he’s trying to help and he hates people like Mordechai but part of him also wants to save Mordechai, somehow… maybe recognizes the parts of him that are like these people, still. Nearly faded but not quite gone yet. And as you’ve already established, Barnabas simply cannot let things go. Can’t disappoint people… can’t leave them when he could be doing something. Anything. Augh, FEELINGS.

Of course he knew Mordechai and Jonah were friends, he’d just temporarily believed in a sane and fair universe where things like this don’t happen. 

AND YOU HAD SUCH A PERFECT BALANCE OF HUMOR… This could have been such a feelbad fic, and tbh it still would have been spectacular. But you always eased it at just the right moment to keep it from going off the rails into irretrievable deepdark territory. Fed me little soft moments so I’d still be vulnerable enough to have my HEART RIPPED OUT LATER…

I’m not super interested in the Buried canon-wise but I love how you’ve written Barnabas’ natural affiliation with it… so subtle but powerful? (Of COURSE Jonah was jealous, lmao. He had to work so hard and he’s still not on Barnabas’ level. There’s some kinda beautiful commentary on ambition versus goodwill in there somewhere but I’m too busy nursing my battered little heart right now to articulate it.) It wove its way in and out of the rest of the plot so naturally, too. For some reason it compliments Barnabas’ temperament as I read it in canon just… so well. Was there a discussion about this on the server, and if so, PLEASE tell me about it sometime I’m so fascinated.

Jonah wasn’t even present for a lot of the fic but his characterization was so INTENSE and luminous, Christ… I know I already praised it a bit but. Woof. I wasn’t expecting to get a taste of his POV at the end and I was so excited I kicked my feet (my cat was very disgruntled) like, this line!!!

Now, he thinks there’s some truth in those false statements, in the lies we tell and why we want to be believed.

GOD, YOU’RE REALLY GONNA GIVE ME FEELINGS ABOUT JONAH AND FUTURE-JONAHLIAS IN THE SAME FIC?????? EVIL… I’m so so so fucking here for it, oh my God, Jonah with an amplifying anxiety disorder, THE PRICE OF IMMORTALITY… too bad the Eye doesn’t let you see the future, Jonah, lmao… the line “immortality just made his anxiety turn nuclear” is SEARED into my brain now, I am NOT accepting canon to contradict this ever again. I’ve always wondered how Jonah’s neuroses might have worsened in two entire fucking CENTURIES and I love the way you wrote it. I am fucking. Losing my mind.

There’s so many other things I could comment on, like. The brief but glorious Jonah-grinding-himself-off-on-Barnabas’-thigh shenanigans. Was incredibly hot, and Mordechai’s poor fragile heart breaking, and Barnabas telling Isabel that it’s fine to call him Barny…….. I’m hhhhhhhhHHHH fuck, fuck, fuck. I’m just!! I am incomprehensible!!! Everyone told me this fic was amazing but it’s fucking amazing, Del, what the hell. I’m never gonna be the same after this. The end was SHOCKINGLY sweet and I have WHIPLASH.

………… So, now that I’ve made you read a novel. Hah. Sorry. My point is. I loved every bit of this. It deserved heaps more praise but my eyes are starting to cross. Thx for sharing :’) 

Love,

Tony xx

TONY. TONY THIS MEANS EVERYTHING TO ME. FIRSTLY I’M SO GLAD YOU LIKED THIS. SECOND OF ALL, THANKS TO YOU I’LL BE SCREAMING FROM THE ROOFTOPS FOREVER HAVE YOU ANY IDEA HOW THIS REVIEW HAS AFFECTED ME? IT’S THE BEST FEEDBACK I’VE EVER RECIEVED IN MY LIFE I FEEL LIKE A FIRSTGRADER GETTING THEIR FIRST GOLD STAR I FEEL ON TOP OF THE WORLD LIKE I COULD THROW THE JEWEL OF THE SEA OFF THE SHIP AND LEAN OVER THE RAILINGS BECAUSE YOUR ARMS ARE AROUND ME TONY IT’S BEEN MONTHS AND THIS REVIEW HAS BEEN A FIREPLACE KEEPING ME WARM THROUGH THE WINTER MONTHS I LOVE YOU DEARLY FOR THIS YOU ARE AN ABSOLUTE CHAMPION IF YOU WERE IN FRONT OF ME RIGHT NOW I WOULD FRENCH KISS YOU WITHOUT HESISTATION UNTIL THE BOTH OF US HAVE RUN OUT OF AIR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FUCKING BLESS YOU TONY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

#fic review #mayormurdock #what the fuckkkkkk tony when are you getting your sainthood #long post #submission

[oceanswife]

ALL OF THE HOGWARTS QUESTIONS THAT YOU HAVEN'T ANSWERED YET. (I'm too lazy to check so you get to!!)

YOU KNOW WHAT BUD........................CHALLENGE ACCEPTED

putting it all under the cut and if anyone actually reads it I’ll be shocked

3. what kind of animal would you bring to school?

a cat definitely

5. what do you think you’ll be doing right now?

as in time wise?? well it’s 2:30am on a Saturday so uhhhh I guess since I’m assuming there’s no technology that I’d be reading maybe?? or maybe my lack of distractions would give a normal sleep schedule and I’d be asleep who knows

6. what’s the core of your wand?

unicorn hair!!

7. do you think you’ll be part of the quidditch team?

YES I’m part of the quidditch team at my college and I love playing as a beater

8. will you be part of any organization?

yes!!! I love student orgs, I actually run a theatre club and I’m gonna be on the exec board of the quidditch team next year lol

9. will you go home during the holidays?

assuming I don’t live in California in this case then yes

10. do you think you’ll have friends from other houses?

OF COURSE a lot of my friends aren’t hufflepuffs!!

17. will you be a student who gets in trouble a lot?

god no lol

18. do you think you’ll get a lot of detention? for what reason/s?

you know what probably yes if they give out detention for being late lol I’m always late and god all those stairs...

19. on hogsmeade visits, what shops will you go to?

HONEYDUKES FOR SURE also Gladrags Wizardwear, J. Pippin’s Potions, Scrivenshaft’s Quill Shop, Spintwitches Sporting Needs (since I’d be on the quidditch team), Tomes and Scrolls, and Weazley’s Wizard Wheezes!!!

20. will you be supportive of your house’s quidditch team?

considering I’d be on it, yes

21. will you read hogwarts: a history?

no lol sorry Hermione

22. do you think you’ll get a lot of letters from home? how frequent do you think you’ll get them?

assuming I don’t have a cell phone and calls from my mom = letters, I’d get one a week probably, maybe a little less, maybe a few from friends??

23. will you subscribe to the daily prophet or the quibbler or other wizarding world media?

probably not

24. which part of the castle will be your favorite?

hmmmmmmmm.....I can’t remember the castle’s layout too well sadly but I’d like to sit by the lake I imagine

25. when sleeping in your dormitory, will your four-poster bed’s curtains be drawn or closed?

closed

26. If the team your house played against wins, do you think you'll be bitter towards the other team after the game?

oh fuck yeah lmao I’m a sore ass loser

28. will you be curious enough to try and explore the whole castle, even if you know you can get in trouble for visiting some parts of it?

no I’m a goody two shoes lol

29. how frequent will your visits to the library be?

very infrequent if I’m comparing to how often I go to my school’s library lmao I prefer finding other places to study

30. If someone was to form an organization similar to dumbledore's army, will you join?

hhhhhhhhhhhh I wanna say yes but tbh.......probably not

31. If you were to get detention, what task would you prefer? would you want to scrub cauldrons or clean trophies or sort through unlabeled books or…?

if there’d be any form of punishment involving taking care of animals I’d sign up so fast

32. on your o.w.l.s, what subject/s will you get an O in? which ones do you think you’ll get a T on?

care of magical creatures for fucking sure and maybe defense against the dark arts and charms????? also probably herbology

if I got a T in anything (which I mean.......not to brag but is very very unlikely knowing me lol) it’d probably be potions cause I forgot to do something

33. how about in your n.e.w.t.s?

I’d get an O in care of magical creatures for sure and idk about the rest I’m too lazy to think I have so many questions to answer lmao

34. If you were a pure-blood, would you take interest in reading muggle literature?

sure!

35. at what time do you think you'll go to bed on weekdays?

hopefully earlier than I do now lmao

36. would you prefer firewhiskey over butterbeer?

hell no

37. what wizard snack would be your favorite? or which one would you like to try?

FUCK ME UP WITH THEM PUMPKIN PASTIES BITCH !!!!!!!!!! I’ll try pepper imps because apparently they make you breathe fire which would be cool

38. will you collect chocolate frog cards?

nah

39. Will you keep track of which flavor of beans you already tried?

I wouldn’t be daring enough to try a majority of them tbh

40. what quidditch team (excluding hogwarts houses) will you support?

HOLYHEAD HARPIES FUCK ME UP WITH THAT ALL FEMALE TEAM

41. what classes will you take for n.e.w.t.s?

care of magical creatures and herbology, maybe charms

43. will you stay in the hog’s head or the three broomsticks?

three broomsticks for sure

44. if you are of age, will you try to enter the triwizard tournament if they ever host one again?

hm.......my quidditch team hosted one and it was really fun......but I am a coward........so probably no

45. what do you think happens during graduation?

this is..........such a valid question...........god who fucking knows with how weird the wizarding world is, I’d imagine it’d have similar elements to regular graduation

46. will you see the thestrals carrying the carriages?

no thank god

47. if you were invited to join the slug club, will you accept the invitation?

honestly I’d be honored so yeah I would

48. will you consider becoming a professor in hogwarts after school?

I’d consider teaching care of magical creatures tbh!!

50. what memory will you think of when making a patronus?

right now the best moment of my life is the moment I walked into wizarding world ironically lol I just...have never felt more home it was literally a dream come true

51. what year are you supposed to be in right now?

I would have graduated a few years ago lol

#that took me a goddamn hour BUT THERE YOU GO LORRAINE #shout out to hp wiki for helping me answer 80% of these questions #pens-swords-and-clarinets #answered asks