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How would you rewrite Atmos most wanted?🤔🤔🤔

Oh this is a good one. Anyone who's been in the discord for a while will know more or less my ideas for this one.

Unlike Energy Crisis, I have actual grievances with this episode, and they are as follows:

The Raptors' disguises were just… why? I know why, it's because Storm Hawks is a kid's show, but surely you can give your audience a bit more credit than that. It's Dark Ace in Velocity all over again. I forgive it for the most part because it's a cartoon, but Nerd Corps is on thin ice XD

The people who are on the war path after the Hawks makes no bloody sense for when the episode happens in relation to the rest of the show. Yes, the show has episodic writing but by AMW, the Rex Guardians, Absolute Zeroes and Rebel Ducks all have an established history with the Hawks. If anything, more people than just Dove should've been trying to help them clear their names.

The crimes and items stolen is just nonsensical. There was no end goal for the Raptors here, they were just being evil for the sake of it and as a result the stakes were depressingly low. We deserved a bigger threat than what we got.

With those problems established, let's go over how I'd fix them, starting with the teams who think the Storm Hawks robbed them.

This episode would've been a great opportunity to introduce some squadrons we don't know very well. Perhaps the Buff Buzzards and the Screaming Queens, both teams we've seen in passing during Velocity, but that never got much development.

As for the teams we do know better. All of them felt like they were being written terribly out of character, excluding Wren. Wren can stay the crazy accusing old man he originally was. This man almost yeeted these kids into the Wastelands on their first meeting because he refused to believe that they weren't Cyclonians until Radarr bit him.

So we have Wren on the war path making false accusations again. How about the rest of the Rebel Ducks are following him to make sure he doesn't give himself an aneurism. Meanwhile Harrier and Suzy Lu are trying to get to the bottom of these thefts before pinning it on the Hawks. These kids surely wouldn't steal such valuable and even dangerous items, would they?

Now what is actually being stolen? And why?

The Cheese Stone is funny but ultimately useless. Let's replace it with a box of high-grade explosives, because one of my headcanons for the Rebel Ducks is that blowing things up is their favourite way to get shit done. Nobody makes a bomb like a Galeman can.

The snow blaster is… ok, I guess? One of the few instances of gun weapons being seen in Storm Hawks. But let's make it a bit more specific and have it that one of Suzy-Lu's frost crystals was stolen. An extremely rare one that's capable of freezing metal to the point where it shatters.

The Rex Guardians always seemed to me like one of the most influential squadrons in the Free Atmos, so as well as old Sky Knight relics they probably have archives of current and recent goings-on in the war, maybe even things that let them access high-security locations such as prisons.

If anyone can see where I'm going with this, you can have a cookie.

Stealing the Aurora Stone pieces is a brave move, and I'm sure anyone's attention would be grabbed by an attempt at such a crime.

So we have some new antagonists, and a running theme for the items that have been stolen. What can these things be used for? What goal shall we give the thieves of this rewrite?

How about a prison break?

The Atmosia Stockade is a high-security prison that houses Carver, and no doubt numerous other prisoners of war, such as high ranking Talons, turncoat Sky Knights, powerful Murk Raiders, the list goes on. The Free Atmos would stand to lose a lot if so many dangerous individuals escaped. Imagine the chaos!

And if that wasn't enough, I have one last major change to bring out.

The Raptors aren't the thieves in this. Not the main ones anyway. Perhaps they were hired as distractions, perhaps they did help with a couple of the thefts, but they're not the primary culprits. It's the Storm Hawks Reserve team.

This ties into other rewrite ideas I've got lined up, specifically Talon Academy. I decided a while back that several members of the Reserves that Aerrow suggested in TA and that never got mentioned again what the hell were in fact Cyclonian double agents. People with a huge motivation to break people out of the Stockade. And it'd explain why the likes of Wren are so sure that it was the Storm Hawks who robbed them. They have the right uniforms, the right insignia, and they are not a pack of giant lizards in paper masks.

...Sorry, I'm a bit salty.

I want the Storm Hawks to fail in this episode. It would've been interesting to see how they handle a loss like this, and I think it would make things incredibly interesting for the lead-up to Cyclonia Rising. Imagine all the new threats we could've gotten.

So that's my extensive ideas for how I'd rewrite Atmos's Most Wanted. Maybe one day I'll do a fanfic or even an audio drama based on this rewrite, because apparently recording my attempts at voice acting is something I want to so. I hope you enjoyed my ramblings!

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[crossyyt]

Voice headcannon idea if Storm Hawks ever gets redubbed

Ben Diskin (who voiced Ban in Seven Deadly Sins, Toxsa from Tenkai Knights, Numbuh 2 from KND and Joseph Joestar from JoJo P2) as Finn

Another suggestion by @nakii-nyah and lemme be honest it fits ^^

#storm hawks #voice headcanons

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MUTUAL MEME! MUTUAL MEME! Credit to gremlin-of-sweet-revenge for this idea.

@lavenderr-starrs @starlightshadowsworld @sabellabella @stardust-maiden @kingboohoo37 @thundermarisol @nakii-nyah @angel-of-sweet-revenge @the-geek-librarian

#mutuals #hope you guys enjoy it

[kabukiaku]

Soooooo jazz propose to gunmax....when the wedding!!! And who gonna be jazz man of honor?! And who invited!!!

*cracks knuckles*

WELL- I’d say they have their wedding like, asap. The next day, they tell everyone. And boy- does preparation happen FAST.

It will be Prowl of course! Prowl being one of Jazz’s closest buds n all, so of course, it’d be his cyber ninja bro.

As for who's invited- all the bots on earth, and the BP :). This is including human allies. 

#ask kabuki #shfksdfdsk i wanna draw this #jazzmax #nakii-nyah

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Pass the happy! When you receive this, list 5 things that make you happy, and send it to the ten most recent people in your notifications! HII ❤❤

aww thank you for this! well lets get into my 5 happy things 

~ The birds nesting in the tree right outside my window 

~ My dog (his name is Oberon)

~ Women❤❤

~ My friends

~ And chocolate

and my ten recents @galahadwilder @chatalyst @herobrine4hire @deer-magiks @scawwytons @smol-potato-thing @themrgloop @nakii-nyah @pompoxregs

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Voice headcannon idea if Storm Hawks ever gets redubbed

Cherami Leigh (who was Asuna Yuki from SAO, Lucy from Fairy Tail, Makoto Nijima from Persona 5) as Piper

A suggestion that @nakii-nyah made ^^

And it fits perfectly

#storm hawks #voice headcanons

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Voice headcannon idea if Storm Hawks ever gets redubbed

Ray Chase (Who plays Sukuna from JJK...after watching 4 eps that show is wild....and Tengen Uzui from Demon Slayer) as Repton

Figured i try out @nakii-nyah's suggestion after recasting Patrick Seitz for Tritonn since everyone will miss the snarls and hisses from Repton and i think with Ray he can do that equally well if he does his Sukuna voice on Repton

#storm hawks #voice headcanons

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Storm Hawks Headcannon Redub cast that's a w.i.p

Headcannon voices so far Aerrow - Justin Briner Piper - Cherami Leigh Finn - Ben Diskin Stork - Aaron Dismuke Junko - Zeno Robinson Dark Ace - Aleks Le Master Cyclonis - Amalee Ravess - Colleen Clinkenbeard Snipe - Clifford Chapin Lightning Strike - Sam Vincent (for Origins p1 since i wanna give Lightning Strike and the other OG Hawks members the og cast voices)

Thanks to @nakii-nyah and one other member in the Storn Hawks discord server who suggested for Aerrow, Piper and Finn ^^

#storm hawks #voice headcanons

[kabukiaku]

Do u have plans to draw jazzmax wedding like some sweet fluffy ones and some funny ones(like a energon wedding falling thanks to the autobot younglings)

AH YES OF COURSE? Just wanna get commissions out of the way, while having time between to draw wedding stuff

#ask kabuki #BUT IT WILL HAPPEN- #i must #jazzmax #erika speaks #nakii-nyah

[kabukiaku]

I love ur comission of dai atlus/yokotron, and now I starting to ship them!!!! What their ship name?I think is yokoatlus or daitron

Yokedai! Two ol’cyberninja bots who are in love.

#ask kabuki #yup its #yokedai #nakii-nyah

[kabukiaku]

Are you going to draw more Yokedai fanart in the future soon?!

yeah, I think i will! 

#ask kabuki #its a cute ship omg #would've loved to see dai atlas bein the new sensei n season 4.... #nakii-nyah