#the sheer amount of times she repeats that she's drunk and unwilling to do things implies it isn't the translation

[blacksurvivalnostalgichanges]

JP:What happens if i microwave a raw egg in its shell?

Leon:I don’t know. Go find out.

JP:Good idea, alright.

(one minute later)

JP:It explodes!

#immortal soul incorrect quotes #incorrect quotes #eternal return incorrect quotes #jpblacksurvival #leonblacksurvival #ice cream cola #i'm watching the plessi vod where he reads through yuki's pass #i have to ask:why is the dialogue really bad but only sometimes #dialogue in the FIRST ONE was okay. dialogue in the manhwa was good #dialogue in mediocre ending? really really bad. dialogue in apocalypse? pretty bad #i physically shrivel up at li dailin's dialogue. feels like a caricature of drunk people #yeah alcoholics are often self deprecating but not in this specific way ya feel me? #it's always a little off because of translations but i feel like dailin shouldn't be insufferable when dialogue never got this bad #the sheer amount of times she repeats that she's drunk and unwilling to do things implies it isn't the translation #there's a big difference between her dialogue and the sort of slightly off sentences that come from mistranslation #i think the ones that have worse dialogue are the ones that are tougher to put oneself in the shoes of #li dailin and hart have really specific values that are harder to relate to #isol aya sissela chiara and shoichi's dialogues all ranged from perfectly passable to pretty okay #still i feel like if the dialogue was literally just proofread i'd have enjoyed this pass #one takeaway i've got is that if i write dialogue for dailin a small quirk i should keep in mind is nicknames over names