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it was after choosing a job! all choices throw that error

Thank you. I was able to locate the error immediately after getting your response. ☺

#lovely anon #error

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got this error: chappy1 line 68: increasing indent not allowed, expected 1 was 2

Thanks for pointing that out. Um, do you remember the page you were on.... what the dialogue or the choice looks like?

(I'm not at home.... so I was able to update this demo using my mobile device. Which I don't recommend.)

#error

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Hiya how's it going? Anyways I finished earlier than expected with the rewrite so I'm just going to leave this here.

Once again.... there are grammatical errors so don't come at me. 😂. So it's the first chapter.... plus intro which is the prologue. Anyways I won't continue blabbering. I hope y'all enjoy it. See ya!

#tainted soul rewrite #first chapter and prologue #The next chapter update will come out soon enough hopefully. 🤧

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When it comes to procrastination I believe that I surpass everyone. 😩. I've been going over what I've written these past few days and making a lot of drastic changes. The reason being that I felt like when I wrote chap2 and chap3 the way how I paced the story just seemed wrong. A couple of days ago I was feeling under the weather. And so I ended up opening the file on my phone. While reading I got some inspiration. That led to changes that I feel content with..... my problem lies with the fact that I suck at editing. 😂 you guys are most certainly aware of that.

I plan to give myself some slack. It's not easy learning about coding and having to write a story from scratch. 😭. So I plan to post the unedited rewrite that I have of Tainted Soul on January 14th. (The time is still unknown) I am hoping to get some feedback. (Be nice y'all. :D).

This post is all over the place I am aware. So forgive my tardiness. Anyway, I hope everyone has been well these past few months. Healthy, happy, and prospering. It's the New Year..... There are a lot of things to be accomplished! See ya.

#update #rewrite #tardy post

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I'm a bit late but...

Merry Christmas!!!🎉🎄

Hi Anon, thanks for the seasons greetings.

Merry belated Christmas and happy belated new years/ happy belated holidays!

I do apologize for the late response as well. I hope all is well on your side. ☺

#belated holiday wishes #lovely anon

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So today I felt a bit tired.... I overworked my brain these past few days with adding new things to what I've currently written down. I made the mistake of opening my gosub file and y'all know what i bumped into? Everything I wrote for the first scene was just off. The MC had no sympathy whatsoever towards Ada who just walked in on her cheating boyfriend. So I decided to make a few changes. Majority of what I had at first was deleted by me because it made absolutely no sense, in my eyes. I completely left out the description of Ada in the opening, when our MC got introduced.

So look at this. It's unedited. (Yea so majority of what I'm writing now is unedited.)

Now I know why writers wait until they've reached somewhere before they start rereading and such.

I also have good news. I am a lazy couch potato on my days off. Because of my laziness I can't seem to write anything at all. But you know what? Everything has finally pieced itself together. The reason why the MC was trapped in all those timelines. The reason why Cadmus is stalking them. The reason why the MC keeps on dying. Hey! This revelation has caused me to stumble a bit, because i don't know if such a tag is accepting. In all the ifs I've read since joining this community, I've never seen such a tag. *clears throat* but I believe that we should not always stick with the cliches, some times we need to think out of the box and that is what I did. Also.... well that is all I wanted to say for now.

I'll try to see if I can get these revamped scenes posted to the public by the middle of next month, so that I'll be able to focus on more important stuff. Also I've decided that instead of the MC moving into the house their mother left behind, why not let them move back home to their ancestral home. (I feel like my thoughts towards this story has truly matured over these past months. 🤷‍♀️)

Anyways enough rambling. I'll be going now. Enjoy the rest of your evening.

#rambling #revamp

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october-themed writeblr ask game

I fully admit it: I’m a sucker for fall. so, here you go- an october-themed ask game! This isn’t specific to world-building or drafting or a specific part of writing, so hopefully there’s something in it for everyone.

🎃 pumpkin: do you have any favorite brainstorming techniques? how do you like to gather ideas for your wip?

🍂 leaves: what does your editing process look like? how does your wip typically change as you work on it?

☕ coffee or tea: describe your OC’s favorite place to relax.

🧥 warm coat: share a happy or fuzzy scene from your wip!

🍎 apple: let’s talk about friendship in your wip. do you have any favorite friend/platonic dynamics? any friendships gone sour?

👻 ghost: can you tease some wip ideas that have been haunting you/something you want to write in the future?

🌧️ rain: share a sad or emotional scene from your wip!

🥧 pie: let’s talk about food in your wip. are there any special recipes or traditional meals? do any of your OCs cook or bake?

🍬 candy: share a sweet or fluffy scene from your wip!

🌙 moon: do any of your OCs have dark backstories or secrets they’re trying to keep?

#writer's ask game

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Unedited. So please don't come at me. Having a few coding errors here and there cause it's been a while since I've coded anything. 😂

New prologue intro.

Added two new choices and I forgot to write a proper choice option for number 4.... meh.

Introducing a potential love interest.

Ex boyfriend/girlfriend of the MC. (I don't even remember how the MC met them. 🤷‍♀️)

Something's amiss.

Waking up in your living room. Which is suspicious because..... (won't spoil it)

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I think imma straighten out these coding errors. I got five days off work so hopefully my creative juices will be flowing these days. I hope all is well for every one. Have a good one! See ya!

#progress

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Omfg the NSFW is hot asf but make me mad so much lol I mean I know T is an a****** but God damn I can't barely hold my rage im pissed there's no way in hell I will find them attractive or consider them as our LI. But bravo to u that's brave, the only thing I can't stand irl and fiction is a cheater so they can go to hell. Sorry for my rambling u have a knack to write a unique personality for our LIs.

Thanks 😅 I try. I had to rewrite that nsfw scene a few times before publishing.... it took alot of me.

Out of all the routes I'll be writing for each ROs, I think Trysten/Trista's revenge path will be the dirtiest. So my dear Anon you ain't seen nothing yet. 😈.

Over these past months I think Trysten/Trista's HCR route has matured. Majority of the things I've visualized for this route isn't on paper as yet, but I do believe it is much better. They've matured in a way where they'll be content with being blunt with MC.... hey the sex between us is only for fun nothing else. And then when they've started falling for MC they'll embrace the fact, they won't want to hide anymore. And the sex will be even fiercer cause they want to mark the MC as their own.

Anon I've said it countless times, as much as I'm the one writing this IF, I for one simply cannot stand this character as well. I've never read about such a despicable character before and in a way I kind of hunger to read something like this so I decided to create a character that will be bad for the heart and the brain right through. I was expecting criticisms left, right and center for creating such a monster but so far it seems trysten/Trista has a small fan base. 🤭. They're indeed red flag material.

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Thanks for your rambling, I found myself cackling like a lunatic a moment ago. Had to reread this ask of yours multiple times before I even answered. Have a great rest of day.

#ask #lovely anon #trysten/trista

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if the ros were to be animals, what would they be?

The higher a Phasron's ability level is... the higher the possibility of being granted the gift of "shapeshifting". This ask is a SPOILER MINEFIELD. Be careful now anon. 😏

I'll tell you this though, Cadmus's "other" form can trample a whole city within seconds. Atticus own sets fear in the hearts of many high ranking carnivorous creatures. Nyssa's/Nyala's own signifies the "purity" of their heart. But alas due to the fact that there was a riff in time and the storyline got awired Nyssa/Nyala's beast was tainted. As for Trysten/Trista at this moment in time they're too weak to even use 50% of the abilities that they stole in the past.

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I hope this response at least quenched your thirst for more info on the ROs a bit. Thanks for the ask and have a splendid rest of day.

#lovely anon #ask #trysten/trista #cadmus #atticus #nyala/nyssa #other forms #spoilers!

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Based on that first chapter, if the princess gets pregnant a male MC can easily disregard whatever demon spawn is in there as not theirs lol.

Things did get a bit heated there didn't It? 😂 to answer your question maybe.... in the past the princess has had many lovers. Not to mention she loves it the old fashion way. Skin to skin.

Let's not forget the princess will have a slight obsession towards the MC. She'll be so obsessed she'll slowly start dropping her lovers one by one. So how exactly will the MC disregard the demon spawn in her stomach, if she has only been sleeping with the MC? Also it is very important to note that the man the princess was getting it on with in the first chapter is someone nobody knows about except the princess's personal guards. So 🤭 good luck getting out of that one Anon.

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Thanks for the ask. Enjoy the rest of your day.

#ask #lovely anon #trysten/trista #preggo ask

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I love cadmus so much, the scene where he consoles the mc when Drusilla flirts with him 🥺, I want to climb him like a tree and cling onto him like koala and never let go, my sweetie 🫂

I know right. That right there is screaming healthy relationship. 👀 but is it though? Look at what Cadmus did in chapter1 . Y'all haven't seen it because I just did a rewrite, can you believe Cadmus opened the gates to Ostror because he saw MC in the back of their (mc) old beat up truck getting waaaaayyyyyy too friendly with Briar/Bria. 😩. What a jealous man. Even had the audacity to [REDACTED]. This rewrite really puts me in my feelings.

Especially when our red eyed husband said. "Your questions brings me nothing but pain. Why must you always ruin my mood with those detestable words? Will you not be satisfied until you've driven me to the brink of insanity once again Mi Sol? Alas the gods are truly cruel."

Over the years he has really endured alot. 😖

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Sorry for the late reply and thanks for the ask. Enjoy!

#Cadmus #ask #lovely anon

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I spent an entire day hunched over notebooks and my tablet screen. I am simply exhausted. And yes it's unedited. I was trying to get the code together so that I'll be able to send the beta testing file to a friend of mine, so that they'll be able to look it over and give me their honest opinion. I added a new plot of sort to the prologue. I am aware of info dump so please don't come at me. Currently I am taking my time to iron through chapter one, just rereading I am filled with other ways the bar scene with Ada could actually go. By doing that I introduced two new characters. (Unedited! But 👀)

I added two other choices in the opening of chapter one. For these two routes Ada doesn't exist..... well she does exist but well y'all ain't that close. I am also rewriting the scene for Cadmus introduction..... I feel like this intro is better. I'll wait for the feedback to see if I should continue on this journey. Anyways majority of what I typed out here doesn't make sense 🤣. Blame my exhaustion. Thank you all for your patience. And I'll see ya later.....

#chapter progress #ramble

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Hey, how are doing, dear author? 🌹 Haven't seen you on tumblr for a while, but I'm happy you still work on your IF, it has so interesting and unique concept 💖

I am doing alright. Been feeling under the weather as of late. Sometimes the sadness just kicks in for no reason with no explanation whatsoever and boom there goes everything you've been working hard on. But you know these days I've been improving. And getting back in the mood for writing. This time away has finally made me figure out something about what I've posted so far.... so that's a win right there.

Where are my manners? How about you anon? I do hope you're doing much better than me.

And most certainly I am still constantly working on this IF. I made a promise to myself. And I have to fulfil that promise. Even if it takes me five years I will get this game up on playstore. I just need to push myself to at least remember to write something every day. Work is hectic but we can't allow work to take away the little joy and de-stresser that I have. (There's probably no such word).

Recently I've been writing alot of openings for the continuation of dialogues that I believe could have gone further. Like for example..... the scene where the MC's "bio" mother woke up in a foreign world. I was thinking of expanding on that. Giving a bit more information as to why she was injuried and the current background she has.

Then I opened a paragraph where there was an injuried stallion pulling a unmarked wooden carriage into the wilderness..... inside that carriage is a vermilion eyes boy whose heart was ripped viciously from his chest.

Then I did an opening where the MC slept with Trysten/Trista for the first time.... 😫. The sex scene is one I am still hesitating to write. As y'all know I am a simp. Imagine if I start simping for that slag. It'll be over for y'all. I'm sure of it.

The year hasn't ended as yet and I do believe that if it's even a 20,000 words update I must can give it to y'all so don't worry. Just keep me in your prayers of motivation. 🤧.

Anyways that's enough babbling. Thanks for checking up on me. Stay safe anon and I'll see ya around.

#ask #lovely anon #writing #progress #babble

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Been missing nyala like crazy now😔. Say, author, can nyala and fem!MC have children together that biologically related to each other???

Don't be sad my dear Anon. Nyala/Nyssa hasn't left us behind as yet. So wipe those tears of sadness for they are still here with us!

Alright so to answer your question yes. Male MC can impregnate Nyala (female). And a female MC can be impregnated by Nyssa (male). A nonbinary MC might be able to impregnate a fem!Nyala or a male!Nyssa.

I do hope that made a bit sense. 🤧

Anyways see ya! Enjoy the rest of your day!

#lovely anon! #ask #nyala/nyssa #pregnancy

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When will we be able to meet Nyssa? also, what is N's female and male name because to be honest I can't tell.

Hello there! How are you on this fine day? I do hope all is well.

To answer your the second question. N's female name is Nyala while his male name is Nyssa.

As for the introduction of this character. You'll be able to meet them in the upcoming chapter. (I feel disappointed in myself for not putting out this chapter as yet 😪). Here's a sneak peak.

Also please be aware that this is unedited.

Anyways thanks for the ask. And enjoy the rest of your day. See ya! 🤧

#ask #nyssa/nyala #sneak peak #might contain spoilers #uneidited

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After Class Confessions.

Soft-core Revenge Path.

Trysten/Trista × MC

Unedited. (Before starting I just wanted you all to be aware of the fact that I wrote this drabble today while on break.)

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"Need something?" You asked after swallowing the last sip of your water from your paper cup. Trysten/Trista brushed a stray lock of lustrous hair from their forehead. Removing their gaze they focused their attention out the window aimlessly. You crushed the paper cup within your grasp with a look of boredom. "If there's something on your mind, you need not keep it to yourself."

"This project of ours is way more important than the thoughts I shouldn't be having."

You bumped their knees with your own. "You've already gotten my attention, so just say it for gods sakes."

Their eyes flicked towards yours once again. For a moment you felt the air being knocked out of your lungs. You were once again falling into those soft picturesque golden brown eyes of theirs. The same eyes that brought you nothing but pain and hatred with a twinge of confusion. When you had started down this path, you were sure that you could face anything that was tossed your way, but now you see how wrong you were. Day by day just being in their presence breaks the sole purpose of your existence and that didn't sit well with you.

"$!{name} do you enjoy our shared intimacy as much as I do?"

You shrugged nonchalantly. "It's okay." It was more than "okay", you've never craved the touch of another this much until they came into your life. Every time you both fucked it felt like the very first time and that is a feeling you cannot ignore. Like a crestfallen child, their shoulder slumped in disappointment. Thanks to your mother you've learnt the art of "closing-the-door-on-your-true-feelings-cause-nobody-gives-a-shit"

You raised an eyebrow in question at them. "Why do you ask?"

They fiddled with the pen on their desk, with downcast eyes. "The sex between us is - it's unexplainable for me at least. The other day a classmate of mine said something." They took a deep breath, awkwardly rubbing the back of their neck. "Look I know my words are incoherent. What I am trying to say - I mean to ask is if there's anyone you like?"

You rose from your seat, kicking the desk out of the way you loomed over them. "And how is that any of your concern Your Royal Highness? Before we started sneaking around we established a rule that both of us must abide by." They scrambled to their feet and you took a step back to give them breathing space. A fine sheen of sweat coated their forehead. "It's different now." They blurted out.

With your hand stretched forward you hooked your index finger on the waist of their uniform pants/skirt. Their body trembled as your nails grazed the soft patch of skin that was left on full display. "How is it different? We've got a good thing going on. Don't mess it up." You rasped, licking your dried lips. With every motion of your tongue, their eyes followed.

Hands that felt like a warm oven curled around your wrist, tugging you closer until you were plaster against their chest. You could feel their heart pumping aggressively.

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Hope you all enjoyed that small drabble. It's time for me to get back to work. Have a wonderful rest of day. See ya!

#trysten/trista #drabble #soft-core revenge route #mc