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ahundredtimesover · 2 days

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Mimi, oh my god, Mimi, what did you just put me through?😭

In all honesty, it was a terrible day. The thrice in a year sort of terrible day, and the mere notification on my phone reassured me. I had something to look forward to, and I can't express just how much I feel better by reading this.

That aside, OH MY GOD WHAT THE HELL??? The tension that had been growing so thick was just set loose like a whirlwind in this chapter. Oh my god, everything - I'm literally rendered speechless. I can barely form the words rn because oh my god did they just kiss? YES THEY DID😭😭💗🫶 The way I cried out loud when Jungkook finally decided to talk to Y/n. I was soo happyyy and relieved and tbh, I was beyond the stars and moon when I read what followed. The subtle teasing from Jungkook literally blew my mind, and I have solemnly commited it all to my memory and saved it all so that I can read it over and over and over again. And the kiss, oh my my, it was literally fire. It set loose all the desperation I had been feeling, and put me on cloud nine. I loved, loved, loved it. I can't express enough just how happy I am😭🫶

And also, the way the story finally clicked into place after Mr.Ri's confession. His story is so tragic, and in a way, the ultimate declaration of deep and unconditional love that he feels for Y/n's mom. It was such a beautiful story - heart-achingly so. Everything that had been lurking was finally out for us to know, and the revelation was just so wonderfully done, Mimi. Hats off to you for writing such a climax, because your writing and storytelling is just *chef's kiss😭

I also love how particularly Jungkook understood Y/n and choose the decision to let go. Ultimately, love is letting go when the time calls for it. And you writing that in text just reminded of that, and was such a gentle nudge to our own reality that stands to face us outside all known comforts. I was crying every few lines😭 Like, quite literally. Today had been emotional and this fic just made me experience all of those emotions in more depth, and relieved me so much of that well known crippling anxiety. I can't thank you enough for that, Mimi.

I loved, loved the chapter, and I love how Y/n finally allowed herself to truly acknowledge her feelings. The last scene stood a reminder for that considering how she's not one of those who lets themself cry that easily. It was just so heartbreaking, but I love to think that Jungkook has caused this change of heart in her where she allows herself to truly feel things for what they are, and what gravity those emotions hold. Just as Y/n allows Jungkook to do the same. I love their understanding of each other, and how they are the same when it comes to these thing but still willing to subject themselves to change, all for the sake for their feelings for the other person.

It's truly wonderful to see this change in both of them, and seeing how far they've come.

And I'm so heartbroken for Jungkook, knowing he will hate to let Y/n out of his radar, but he will do it all the same for her sake. It's just so tragically beautiful to see him like that, so down bad for her. The way he's down bad for her tho, lol. I'd swear all hell will be set loose at some point in the fic once again (or more *fingers crossed), like it did in the kiss scene, hehe. It's just so satisfying to see him break like that. I live to read that, I swear.

Well, that's enough of a rant and I hope you have had a great week so far. Don't pressurize yourself too much, as I sense that you're quite the person to push yourself. Take care of yourself and pat yourself for all that you do everyday - even the tiniest tasks.

You have me whipped for this beauty of a fic you've written, Mimi🤍

Hii I'm sorry this is late. And the fact that I didn't get to reply considering you had a bad day. I'm sorry you did but I'm glad that the chapter gave you a bit of joy. I hope you're feeling much better now! ☺️☺️

And yay. I did hope that the chapter would make people go through a whirlwind of emotions! I mean, JK went from teasing to being down so bad and then... yeah. We at least got to see that side of him!

As for Mr Ri, tragic is the right word. It's one of those times where either choice he made would've hurt him regardless, as if he was fated for that life. But I'm glad the revelation had that impact! Literally that storyline just came to me one day and it ended up being such a core aspect of the plot. Thank you for liking it!! 😊

Jungkook has caused this change of heart in her where she allows herself to truly feel things for what they are, and what gravity those emotions hold - this is such a good point! We know that OC doesn't like feeling all that much. Sure, she's kind and warm but a lot of times, it's all towards others, it's like her defence mechanism so that she doesn't share herself. And JK is making her feel all these intense emotions. It's just that she doesn't know what to do with them, just like JK. But still, we'll see how it's really not easy for either of them to manage it. I think that'll be the heartbreaking part that we'll see in ch12.

This was so lovely to read. I'm glad you've enjoyed it. And yes, I do pressure myself a lot haha but it pushes me to write something worth sharing and I'm just happy you like it! Thank you so much for dropping by!! 💕💕

#mimianswers #fic: iwyts

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theold-ultraviolence · 2 years

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friend !! thank you for tagging me, firstly !!

and secondly, for your wip tag game, i think i gotta know about the eddie munson alice cooper one? 👀 my musical faves combined, i am sure to be deeply obsessed 💗🎶

Hello my beautiful friend!! thank YOU for dropping by to ask!

OMG I literally wrote this on the spur of the moment when I was waiting at the cafeteria at work. I haven't really continued it but it's an idea I really really like, and will most likely pick back up when I'm done with other WIPS. It's about the reader character wanting to go to an Alice Cooper show but they're a bit sheltered so they're not allowed to go on their own. They ask Eddie because he seems to be the best choice, even if they've never talked, ever. Eddie agrees and drives them both, and then afterwards they have some issues on the road and they have to stay the night at a motel and then, "OH MY GOD THERE'S ONLY ONE BED!"

Here's a little snippet! <3

It’s in such dire need that you find yourself sitting in your own little corner of the cafeteria, on a Monday morning, alone with one of your hands anxiously thumbing the pair of concert tickets that you had had in your possession for about a month now.

You gaze at the table on the other side of the room, where Eddie Munson and his Hellfire club sit and wreak havoc on occasion. Either on the receiving end of it, or the provokers themselves, they’d always find themselves at the heart of turmoil.

Which is why you were debating whether this was a good idea.

The Alice Cooper tickets you had bought with your hard earned pay from working shifts at the movie theater downtown were the ultimate Holy Grail for you, but your parents had dropped the bomb on you that they wouldn’t let you go unless you found someone trustworthy to accompany you because they refused to be seen in ‘those kinds of places’, much less drive you all the way to Chicago for that, or let you ride the bus alone.

Not only didn’t you have any friends, but you didn’t know anyone with a car that might be willing to take that trek with you to a rock show.

The only person that you could come up with was Eddie, and you weren’t even sure if he liked Alice Cooper, and then again, you had never spoken to him.

WIP tag game

#hersweetrevenge #tag thingies #thank you so much for this friend!#also #Alice Cooper is the actual spooky king #I LOVE HIM #and he puts on the greatest shows I've ever been to

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setsugekka · 11 months

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hi, hello!! i just got around to reading the last part of paradise lost & i have so much to say :’) so much that i’m not actually sure how to say it, so please bare with me lol.

first of all i’d like to thank u for writing & publishing such a wonderful yet heart wrenching piece of art. it truly is one of the most beautifully written things i’ve ever read, it’s real and it’s raw - it’s simply beautiful, i don’t think i can describe it any other way.

it’s so easy to get unrealistic when writing fan fiction & while i don’t necessarily think that’s a bad thing (it’s fiction after all), but i’ve always found pleasure in reading fiction that feels realistic & i’d say pl is the realest thing i’ve ever read. the way you write and portray emotions is so … human? i could both feel and experience the emotions as i read & i don’t think any piece of fiction has ever done that to me before tbh.

it was such an intense yet heartwarming story, getting to watch two people fall apart together - just to go ‘you know what? if we’re going to fall apart together, we’re gonna work through it together, too’ & i just think it was such a beautiful love story, really. beautiful, and most definitely real.

i simply cannot wait to read more of your previous & upcoming works, just like i can’t wait to go back and reread pl and experience the rollercoaster of emotions all over again :’) it really got me fucked up in best way possible !

as i said, i have so much to say that i’m not even sure how to say it so i hope this whole paragraph makes sense. i just needed to tell u how incredible of a job u did writing it, really.

i hope u have an amazing day/night & i’ll most definitely be tuning in to read atarashī up next, i can’t wait to see just what emotions u will bring out of me next lol. once again, thank u so much for blessing us with pl ❤️‍🩹

hello there, and welcome to the ranks of paradise lost enjoyers!

first of all, thank you so much for the very kind and thoughtful compliments! 💗 it means so much to me, and i keep each and every one of them in my pocket to remember always!

i don't disagree, and i'm happy to hear this story was able to be that for you! i love fantasy as much as the next person (and have dabbled as much as the next person in writing it myself), but sometimes being in a very real-world, real-feelings sort of setting with characters that don't feel that unlike you, or me, is very special. i'm just glad you were able to experience that with this.

i'm so thrilled to hear this, really!

when i first posted paradise lost, a lot of people wanted a happy ending. i think at some point in the story one has to ask themselves what does that look like for these two people after everything that they've been through together? it didn't feel right, or real, just sending them off with a "and everything was perfect and great and they lived happily ever after" so i really wanted to do something different that didn't just ignore the amount of hurt that was there. of course, there's still another part of the story that will still shed a lot of light on their life together after the events of the main paradise lost story if you should choose to read it once it's up, but for the way it ends now...i think that yeah, at the end of the day, it is real.

i simply cannot wait to read more of your previous & upcoming works, just like i can’t wait to go back and reread pl and experience the rollercoaster of emotions all over again :’)

i have such a massive backlog of content plus new stuff (and a 150k word pirate au reader insert fic on ao3 🙄) that it's going to be a long time until i am caught up, but i appreciate your willingness to come along for the ride hehe, hopefully some of the other stuff can be just as enjoyable as this was!

as i said, i have so much to say that i’m not even sure how to say it so i hope this whole paragraph makes sense. i just needed to tell u how incredible of a job u did writing it, really.

as i always say, you are welcomed any time to dump thoughts in my ask, ask questions about a story, anything like that! i am happy to give what i can, but no pressure at all to do so. i love my silent readers too ^^

i’ll most definitely be tuning in to read atarashī up next, i can’t wait to see just what emotions u will bring out of me next lol

atarashii is definitely going to be a far different reading experience i think, but much within the same realm of real people and their lived experience, even if it is somewhat of an ugly one. i'm really excited for it, and i'm happy that other people are too because i was very on the fence about writing it at all for quite a long time!

thank you again and again for all of the kindness, it's been a treat to read and bask in the good vibes! i hope you have a wonderful day/night for yourself, as well. the door (ask box) is open to you any time 💗

#☕️ ask #fic: paradise lost

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