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101flavoursofweird · 1 year
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12 + 27 for the writing asks?
((Thanks!))
12: Do you outline your fics?  If yes, how detailed are your outlines?  How far do you stray from them?
I don’t have the best track record of finishing long fics lol. But for most, even oneshots, I’ll usually know where I want them to go before I sit down to write them. My problem is that I usually get attached to characters when writing about them, so if one character was planned to have a bad fate, that might change. In a Rhythm Thief AU I wrote, I’d planned for the main character (Raphael/Phantom R) to reject his absent father (Isaac) after everything they went through, but I felt sorry for Isaac, so he got to reunite with Raphael in the end. 
27: What area of writing do you feel strongest in?
Dialogue! I suck at physical descriptions but I could write a whole fic based around character dialogue.
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101flavoursofweird · 1 year
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Chapters: 10/10 Fandom: リズム怪盗R | Rhythm Thief & the Emperor’s Treasure Rating: Teen And Up Audiences Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply, Major Character Death Relationships: Raphael & Fondue, Raphael and the Vergiers, Raphael & Isaac, Raphael & Charlie, Marie/Raphael | Phantom R, Paul Vergier/Emma Vergier Characters: Raphael | Phantom R, Charlie | Charlotte Vergier, Marie (Rhythm Thief), Inspector Paul Vergier, Emma Vergier (Rhythm Thief), Duchess Elizabeth (Rhythm Thief), Fondue (Rhythm Thief), Alfred (Rhythm Thief), Jean-François (Rhythm Thief), Leonard Bonar (Rhythm Thief), Josette (Rhythm Thief), Isaac (Rhythm Thief) Additional Tags: Family, Alternate Universe - Canon Divergence, Rhythm Thief AU, spoilers for the game, Uploaded from my old account, Kidnapping Summary:
When Raphael's first heist goes awry, he is assigned a new place to live. (AU)
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Since the Rhythm Thief fandom seems to be a bit more active lately, I’m just sharing a Rhythm Thief AU I wrote a while back on AO3. Sixteen-year-old Raphael gets taken in by the Vergiers and things spiral out of control from there. 
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101flavoursofweird · 3 years
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Fic Questionnaire
Thanks for @sixtyfourk for tagging me! I’m putting the questions under a cut because it’s quite long :’)
I’ll tag @northernscruffycat, @northelypark, @edward-elbowlick, @vermontwrites, @asa-liz, @yoshi-g-teh-first, @call-me-rucy, and @aquamarineglow but if there’s anyone else who wants to do this, please go ahead!
How many works do you have on AO3?
107… but a lot of these are just reposts or prompt-inspired fics that are 10 lines long!
What's your total AO3 word count?
378242 words
How many fandoms have you written for and what are they?
Professor Layton, PLvsAA, Layton Brothers Mystery Room, Rhythm Thief, Voltron: Legendary Defender (I only watched the first two seasons, haha…), The Ancient Magus Bride (I was in it for the cute dragon mage— not for the main romance), Steven Universe, Ace Attorney (only as a part of PLvsAA), Kipo and the Age of Wonderbeasts, My Hero Academia
…10 fandoms altogether, but some like PLvsAA and LBMR fall under the PL category.
What are your top 5 fics by kudos?
Aizawa Doesn’t Give Hugs - MHA- 1111 kudos - (Why can’t I update my most popular fic?)
Fireflies - Steven Universe - 221 kudos - (Again, WHY DID I NEVER UPDATE THIS?)
Reset - PL - 134 kudos - (This is the one I feel the worst about because it’s an ongoing long fic for my main fandom and I’ve had so much support from readers but I just can’t find the strength to update it…)
Worth Fighting For - PL - 86 kudos - (My incomplete Whumptober fic!)
Mending - Voltron - 85 kudos - (I think this was one of the first fics I posted on AO3 and I was really happy about the response it got! And for a fandom I’d never written for before!)
Do you respond to comments, why or why not?
I usually respond to comments pretty quickly because I want to show my appreciation for people who take the time to comment :) If I’m ever slow to respond it’s probably just because I’m busy or I’m trying to formulate a long response. If a person leaves a longer comment, I try to make my response longer!
What's the fic you've written with the angstiest ending?
That’s probably ‘To Boldly Flee’. It’s a fic I originally posted on FF.net but it’s now part of an Aurora & Luke oneshot series called ‘Looking Foward’ on AO3. The fic stars Aurora and Luke in an AU set during Azran Legacy. It diverges from canon after Descole steals the Azran keystone in the Nest. Aurora doesn’t want to go to the Azran sanctuary and face her ‘duty’ as the Azran emissary— she also doesn’t want to get STABBED IN THE HEART— so she decides to run away with Luke.
Aurora receives even more angst in this AU than in canon. After Descole’s betrayal, she starts to doubt herself and her friends, aside from Luke.
With a bit of help from Rook and Bishop, the two of them fly to London and then to Misthallery when they hear Targent have taken over the town. During this time, Aurora has her identity crisis about being a golem and having the fate of the world resting on her shoulders. She eventually decides to help Luke save his hometown because Luke is worth the world to her.
This all culminates with Luke getting fatally(?) wounded and taken to the Golden Garden. Aurora is so distraught by this point that she almost ‘floods the whole world’ in a kind of failsafe doomsday device the Azran may have implanted in her. Luckily, Descole and Layton show up to assure her that Luke is alive— but just barely. Aurora returns to her normal self and they get Luke to hospital. Aurora waits by Luke’s bedside for him to wake up. Aurora mentions that Emmy’s fate is unknown, but they still mourn for her.
In the original FF.net ending, Luke wakes up.
In the AO3 ending, Aurora just keeps waiting for Luke. ‘She could not age, so she would wait until he awoke. Even if it took forever...’
If I ever did write more of this story, Aurora and Co would probably go to the other Azran sites (Ambrosia, the Infinite Vault of etc) to search for a cure for Luke. But at it is, the fic is left open-ended as to whether Luke ever recovers.
Have you ever received hate on a fic?
Not really hate but there was one anon review that may have been ‘too brutal’ (their words). I can’t say it hasn’t affected the updates on that particular fic.
Do you write smut? If so what kind?
I wrote a couple of light smut fics back when I really shipped Layton/Emmy. I think I’d cringe if I went back to read those fics (but then again, I do that with a lot of my old writing). I can’t see myself writing smut now.
Have you ever had a fic stolen?
I can’t say I’ve had a fic stolen, but I was reading a fic a while ago and the wording was veeery familiar. I’m not sure why because the fic was already good up to that point? Why would they bother copying my writing? XD I can’t complain, though! We’re all technically stealing the original creator’s characters and concepts by writing fanfic.
Have you ever had a fic translated?
Yes, for my Rhythm Thief AU, Déjà Vergier! In this AU, 16-year-old Raphael gets taken in by the Vergier family. A Deviantart user called BakApple kindly translated my writing into French. With the help of Google Trabslate, I started translating their French Rhythm Thief fic— ‘July the Fourteenth’— into English, but I didn’t get around to finishing it. My translating skills are nowhere near as good as BakApple’s!
Have you ever co-written a fic before?
I wrote a PL fic with called ‘If You Only Had Time’ with an awesome writer called Glowbug. It’s an AU (of course) where Rachel Bronev survives and she runs away from Targent with eight-year-old Emmy. Glowbug doesn’t seem to be active online anymore, which is a shame, but I don’t mind! I’m just glad we were able to write 6 chapters.
I don’t think I’d co-write any more fics now… but more for the co-writer’s sake than mine! I’m notoriously bad at updating long fics and I struggle to write under pressure or within a time limit. There’s a reason why I don’t enter Big Bang events, as much as I’d like too :’)
Writing fics is a hobby first and foremost. If I don’t feel like writing something, I’ll leave it and come back later, hopefully with renewed inspiration.
But I’m always happy to discuss fic outlines/ideas/characters’ with other people!
What's your all time favorite ship?
Apparently the ship I’ve written the most fics for is Janice/Melina on AO3?
There seems to be more content for them recently and that makes me SO HAPPY.
Ranhengela might be a close second favourite… Sometimes I literally forget both of these ships aren’t canon.
My favourite characters tend to be those who are so selfless and would sacrifice their lives for the ones they love— e.g. Janice and Henry— even if their significant other is presumed to be dead. I want these characters to be happy but I also want them to through ANGST.
What's a WIP that you want to finish but don't think you ever will?
I don’t want to say Reset… but maybe Reset? I haven’t given up completely but I’ve lost a lot of confidence with this fic. What I wanted most out of this story was for Luke to bond with other characters aside from Layton— his parents, Arianna, Emmy, Flora etc.— and to give these characters a chance to shine. But I guess I realised I can do this without all the crazy plot twists and time travel mechanics… like in Ready Now, for example. Most of that fic is just Arianna bonding with Luke, Layton and the others, and it’s hopefully giving Flora her chance to shine too! I guess after giving Arianna her own chapter in Reset I just really wanted to write about her, haha.
What are your writing strengths?
Someone mentioned in a nice review that I often fuse canon with fanon? That’s usually just me poking fun at the series— like when Arianna’s mother asks about Flora’s age and her adoption status, Arianna and Tony just shrug at her comedically. Who knows, really? :’)
I’ll often just make two character sit in a room TALK about their feelings.
Dialogue is an easy one, but I like writing dialogue for characters and getting their voices down. (I will forever portray Dalston with his official Yorkshire accent— not the fake posh accent they gave him the the US version of Miracle Mask.)
What are your thoughts on writing dialogue in other languages in a fic?
I think it’s cool! …If it’s not used to mock another language— apart from English. Please make all the English jokes you want. I’ll probably agree with you and laugh at them.
I remember when I was re-reading Goblet of Fire and I cringed every time J. K. Rowling wrote about a character who wasn’t English.
I’ll occasionally throw French words or sayings into Rhythm Thief fics especially because that’s what they do in the game. It’s hilarious how Charlie has an English accent but then she’ll sprout a random French phrase.
What was the first fandom you ever wrote for?
Pokemon, but that short oneshot is long gone.
What's your favorite fic you've ever written?
I’m going to be boring and say Bonds Left Unbroken— an AU where Layton and Desmond both get adopted by the Laytons. I think I enjoyed the earlier chapters more, focussing on younger Desmond and Hershel, and especially their time in Stansbury. The later chapters don’t really branch out from canon that much, aside from the fact that Hershel and Desmond are on the same page during Azran Legacy.
I feel bad that I never got around to finishing the ‘bonus’ episodes, but it kind of just felt like the original series with Desmond phoned in :’) But I’m still proud of the original fic!
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101flavoursofweird · 6 years
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Fic Writers Week: Day 5
Day 5:  Verbatim - Share some of your favorite quotes from the fics you’ve read or written.
Quotes in fics I’ve read:
@northelypark‘s The Lamplight Letters: I can’t believe I almost forgot to mention this fic! It’s written like a professional mystery novel but still feels so Laytonesque - This is a day for quotes, not fangirling. Here’s a quote from the latest chapter that, I’m almost embarrassed to say, made me swoon from the sweetness. (I think it’s short enough to avoid spoiling anyone.) ‘I cut him clean off with a quick, tip-toed kiss on the cheek. Checkmate.’ 
Mew Universe’s Sibling Detectives:‘“Father went missing YEARS ago!” Alfendi slammed his hands on the desk. “No one has found a single lead in his case- not the Commissioner, not Inspector Grosky, not anyone! Not even any international forces!” He growled and bared his teeth. “What makes you think that you, a small-time detective with nary a resource to her name, can prove that he ISN’T dead?”’ This oneshot was written before the release of LMJ... but does it really matter when it’s that good?
@askalfendilayton‘s As Kind a Soul as You: “You don’t act like it, but what I did hurt you,” he continued, voice growing louder. “I promised you that I’d be a better person, and I will, so I won’t take what I obsessed about for years. I’ll get myself out of this mess, but not that way.” [...] “You did hurt me, Ernest,” Katrielle finally said, voice quiet.�� A Kat and Ernest conversation that was missing from LMJ. 
Minmei’s Storm's End: ‘“He hasn't been charged with murder, thankfully...but they are serious charges, and numerous. Kidnapping, blackmail, destruction of property, and while acts of terrorism have not yet been added to the list, I'm certain that, at some point, they will be considered...”’ Presented without context due to spoilers. 
Quotes in fics I’ve written: 
Under the cut due to spoilers and mainly length  
To Boldly Flee -
‘Luke frowned. “You said if Targent get hold of you, the whole world will be in trouble. 
“Yes,” Aurora whispered. It was foolish, selfish to risk everything for a single child. Human weakness. No... Human nature. She squeezed his hand. “But you are worth the world to me.”’
((An AU in which Aurora and Luke flee from the Nest. Who needs the Azran legacy when they can be besties forever?)
Déjà Vergier -
‘Where do you live?’
“The land of cheese.”
“And your name is?”
Raphael bit his lip, peering up at Vergier. “Promise you won’t tell anyone?” Vergier leaned forward in his chair. “The honest-to-goodness birth name my parents gave me is... Vergier.”
Vergier almost flipped the interrogation table.
(From a Rhythm Thief AU so many AUs where Raphael briefly joins the Vergier family and shenanigans ensure.))
Reset -
“‘Sometimes, in the course of long summer evenings, the friends would take a… a stroll together…’”
Luke had almost drifted off into the Wild Wood, when Clark sighed and closed the book. "Dad?” he yawned. “What’s –?”
"I miss him too, you know," Clark confided. "We hadn’t spoken properly for seven years… "’
(Clark suffers in this fic... but hopefully people feel sorry for him?)
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