#it rewrite prologue

[whitecatindisguise]

tails taken in forces as well my beloved 🫶 asking you about it 👀🍵

Okay, so.

Sonic gets killedcaptured by Eggman, Tails goes MIA, Rouge finds out Sonic is alive on the Death Egg, they rescue him, yadda yadda, we all know the drill.

And of course, once Sonic is free he's looking for his little brother. He's not there, but his friends tell him he's just been over somewhere else, doing his best to help and no, he can't contact him right now because he's spying/going undercover whatever and him calling Tails would jeopardize the mission and of course he wants to talk to him but he understands it's important and it's not like they would lie to him, especially right after escaping Eggman, riGhT?

Well, fast forward to the final battle.

Of course, Sonic is still kind antsy because he still haven't seen Tails and they keep telling him Tails is still on the mission whenever he asks and then he gets pulled into helping the Resistance and the thought kinda slips his mind with everything going on and plot twists happening at every occasion (Chaos, Shadow, Metal and Zavok weren't real but clones created by Infinite? like, who would have guessed!) and before he knows it the Resistance is making their final stand, Infinite defeated, Mobius saved from being burnt-slash-hit by the sun and if only they could find Eggman-

Suddenly a huge hologram of the man himself appears on the sky. Figures he turned tail and ran like a coward he was, probably only appearing for his usual "you might have won this time, but next time it'll be my victory" routine.

But Sonic isn't ready for what the man says. He is ready, when Eggman's hologram switches to a video recording. He's not ready when he sees Tails, his little brother. Bloodied. Bruised. Fur stuck together, some patches missing entirely. Forced to his knees. Shock collar clipped around his neck. Arms, legs, even his tails chained together so he wouldn't escape.

Amy lets out a strangled gasp behind Sonic and he turns, staring right at her. In her eyes, in all of his friends' eyes he can see it.

They knew. They knew and they have been lying to him.

Maybe they didn't know Eggman had him, the shock and terror is genuine, but they fucking knew Tails wasn't with them. They knew he was missing and they didn't do anything!

"Your turn, Sonic," Eggman says, his hologram once more switching with the recording, but it doesn't take away the image of his little brother broken by the same man now staring down at him.

Sonic looks up at the hologram, flames burning in his eyes. He's gonna find him. He's gonna drag the man from whatever hole he buried himself in this time and he's going to make damn sure he never tries to mess with his family again!

#well that escalated quickly #i didn't mean for it to turn into a small oneshot/prologue i promise #but when i write i write #can't do anything about it #well hope you enjoyed it anyway and are as hooked as i am #fingers crossed i get to writing it at some point #miles tails prower #sonic the hedgehog #dr eggman #sonic forces #forces rewrite #kitty mom answers

[taintedsoul-if]

Hiya how's it going? Anyways I finished earlier than expected with the rewrite so I'm just going to leave this here.

Once again.... there are grammatical errors so don't come at me. 😂. So it's the first chapter.... plus intro which is the prologue. Anyways I won't continue blabbering. I hope y'all enjoy it. See ya!

#tainted soul rewrite #first chapter and prologue #The next chapter update will come out soon enough hopefully. 🤧

[mummer]

someone found several different wip drafts of the affc prologue in grrm's collection at the cushing library and in one of them rosey is the POV and she's in love with alleras and wants to be a maester too im going insane we could have had it all????????

#this is actually fascinating but like. Damn........... #other tidbits: -lazy leo couldve been a full on murderer -glass candles were planned at one point to give users immortality #-leo and alleras are going to be Important to sam's story #mostly it's extremely interesting re: grrm's writing process. the amount of rewriting and different drafts and huge changes he makes #he tried to write this prologue like 12 times.......... george!!!! #i wish i lived in texas i'd LIVE in this basement.

[high-fantasy-sw]

A long time ago, in a great sea far, far away, there was a great and powerful Republic, to which belonged many island nations. This ocean was as vast and dark as the night sky, and the islands in it were as numerous and beautiful as the stars, and so it was known as the Galactic Archipelago. Many peoples and tribes called the Galactic Archipelago home, and for a thousand generations, there was peace.

This peace was kept, in part, by the Jedi Order, a noble order of monks of whom it was believed could use magical powers. In truth, the Jedi were indeed blessed with a great gift: they were smiled upon by the Force, which governed and ruled all living things in glorious harmony, and because of this high favor, the Jedi did in fact have abilities that could be called miraculous. They were known as great peacekeepers in the Republic, a reputation they earned through their wise and just balance of diplomacy, their miraculous abilities, and their legendary weapons: lightsabers, beautiful swords inlaid with Kyber Crystals- sacred gemstones that, by the will of the Force, caused the blades to burn with a holy radiance, the color of the flames determined by the color of the crystal.

However, despite the fervor the Jedi poured into preserving peace in the Galactic Archipelago, there were some who would delight to see its ruin. At the forefront of these enemies were the Sith, an ancient clan of dark warriors who were themselves a twisted parody of the Jedi. They, too, possessed supernatural powers, but their abilities flowed from their greedy, selfish dealings with the Dark powers that opposed the Light of the Force. And like the Jedi, the Sith too used lightsabers, but they had corrupted their Kyber Crystals, twisting and distorting the sacred gemstones until their blades blazed only one color: bloody, crimson red alone, not like the beautiful prismatic hues of the Jedi’s.

But to the comfort of the Republic, the Jedi had fought nobly for her people for centuries, until at last the Sith were thought to be no more. For millennia, the Galactic Archipelago had known nothing but peace and prosperity.

How quickly that all would change.

#writing #hey let me just write a prologue here-- #actually i am currently working on rewriting all the GOOD movies into legendary format so. this will eventually be on AO3

[encrucijada]

i just woke up to go to class. have the opening of chap1 of i'll never fall asleep

[ transcript below! ]

The Sun was in Adam’s dreams.

1

Warning Mechanism

He woke up choking on manifested light, stuck in his throat and airway like phlegm. It illuminated the bathroom when he spit it out on the sink, it made him aware of how early it still was. Adam coughed, head bowed before the mirror, trying to breathe again, before remembering to look himself in it and count his fingers to make sure he was truly awake and not stuck in one of those fake-out nightmarish loops.

The light was the idea of it, so it was yellow the way yellow was when imagined. Like egg yolk and candlelight and a sunny afternoon. It illuminated Adam’s face below his chin and highlighted every crease of tiredness. He opened his mouth and looked at the remains of light between his teeth, on his tongue, underneath his tongue, and decided to just swallow them.

#not actually the opening because there's a prologue but shhh #finding the way i wanna describe dreams and dreamwaste #this was originally gonna be a direct rewrite of pointed north but without the pjo stuff #but it didn't work in an appealing way so i just started writing from scratch lmao #pia.docx #( wip ) greek tragedy!

[solradguy]

if sol dragon installs, and someone cuts his tail off, when he uninstalls dragon would the cut off tail disappear or would it still be like on the ground?

That's a REALLY good question, actually. I'm not sure if there's enough data to figure this out, but we can try.

The amount of characters we know can install is really low: Sol/HOS, Dizzy, and Ky. I'm considering an "install" anything where a character goes from looking mostly human to either entirely changing form or gaining at least partially transformed Gear-like physical aspects.

Of those three characters, only two of them have ever been shown getting significantly hurt.

Sol gets his gut ripped open in Begin by a Gear bear and Ky's been shot full of bullets in Xrd Sign. In both those cases they heal really fast but there's a lot of action going on in those scenes besides that so there isn't much attention spent on what happens when they heal. They don't show Ky's body possibly pushing the bullets out of him Wolverine-style and Sol's wounds were mostly described as "like watching a recording play in reverse" when they healed in earlier parts of Begin.

Later on in the scene with Sol and the Gear bear, he rips one of the tentacles off its back and then kills it by punching it over and over faster than it can regenerate. Sol installs for the first time a bit earlier in this scene too. The bear possibly installed (as opposed to just growing tentacles without entering an actual power-up state) because it didn't have the tentacles at the start of the fight and only grew them after it fell into a big pit trying to kill Sol and Viidia.

The carnage from this scene isn't described as dissolving even after the bear is killed, just that its body stopped regenerating and that Sol's body was so exhausted it also stopped healing his wounds. The bear isn't described as growing new tentacles after Sol rips one off either.

So, based on all this, I think it might be safe to say that:

Sol's cut off tail would remain after he returned to his human form

He probably would grow a new one pretty quickly (<1 hour?) if he was given time and had the energy to

It is possible to kill a Gear after it installs and its corpse wouldn't dissolve after it died. Though, Sol is the only confirmed Flame of Corruption Gear and he could explode in a ball of fire or something. It might be different for him but from what we know of other Gears I'm not 100% it would be. The intensity of his install is based on his emotions and if he's dead then there are no emotions lol

This is all speculation. Gear biology is a frustrating enigma....

#asks #I had to skim over parts of my translation to get info for this and am fighting the urge to rewrite it so bad lol #It's... fine.... but urrrrrgh these sentence structures are clunky..... I can make it better....... #I redid the prologue a while ago haha But haven't gotten to the rest of it yet #Once I finish this cosplay I'll be able to get back into translation stuff. Cosplay things have taken up most of my freetime

[compacflt]

took my two week break from opening any top gun-related word document. Was very relaxing. now starting to edit & repost chapters, in anticipation of printing out my final copy

every year-old typo i encounter makes me want to end it all i swear to GODDDD

#found a kazanaky. struggled not to immediately k*** ****** #you guys have to TELL ME this shit #i know there are hyphen issues & italics issues on AO3 that is an AO3 problem #but also sooo exhilarating to finally rewrite some very very old scenes the way they SHOULD be written #now that i know where everything’s ending up #just adding that last little 2% #it’s so fucking cathartic #rewriting some scenes from august 2022 just that little bit better #it’s like watching my informal & formal writing educations meet & exchange notes. just so cool. #taking what I’ve learned & reapplying it #fixing research fuckups on the way #will be rereleasing chapters as i finish editing them. new prologue is up #as is a new chapter one #as is now a new chapter two (which I realize is 3 on AO3) #obviously not a call to action. just letting u know

[coeluvr]

Oh by the way chapter 2 has been finished writing and now is in editing, I've been overwhelmed with real life so I haven't picked the beta testers yet but I will probably be messaging people in the next few days so that's that

As always I'm excited and nervous about the new chapter but mainly excited 🥰 it has 33k words and I just hope the feedback my editor gives me doesn't make me go over 35k 🫠 That would feel like too much to me but yay for content!

Thank you for your support and patience! 💗

#coe is not writing #ANYMORE BECAUSE YAY #except I'll be rewriting prologue + chapter 1 because some scenes feel too short #crown of ashes and flames #crownofashesandflames #crownofashesandflames if #interactive fiction #interactive story

[camzverse]

i think im gonna make a sb rewrite fic.... Giggles

#im not even a writer at ALL its not generally my thing but i feel so compelled to make it #the idea came from a tag carousel carouselrabbit left on one of my posts one time :33 ivebeen rotating the idea in my head ever since #its not gna be a heavy rewrite i think ? just adding a lot of the stuff they cut + making vanessa actually fuckin important to the story Et #basically its like. greg accidentally frees himself from glitchtrap -> wakes up with no memory of any of that -> leads to hiding in fred -> #and then the SB stuff starts #working on a prologue(?) rn that starts with him waking up (+ends w him hiding in freddy) . im also making a drawing to go with it :33333 #idk if it will be any good but WHO GAF!!!!!! Joy of creation #cam.txt

[shmorp-mcdurgen]

When do you plan on writing more about the lab au?

I'm. not sure honestly.

The WORLDBUILDING is actually the main focus of the au rather than the storyline, so writing for it in a story is. pretty hard.

however, I should actually find a way to show off all the cool biology stuff me and a friend (THANK YOU IVAN) are coming up with for the patients.

#asks are neat #tmc labrats au #Maybe a rewrite of the prologue? but I can't guarantee anything

[catman-draws]

Chapter 6- Page 3

First- Previous- Next

#homestuck #homestuck dancestors #kankri vantas #homestuck fan comic #homestuck fanart #catman mega comics #ancestor rewrite #ooo baby we're playin sgrub #and for the first time since I started this fuckin thing! #a version of porrim is not on screen in either plot! #only took six chapters and a prologue! #y'all this section took SO Much Research You Would Not Believe

[eccentrcks]

You know it’s serious when the prelude has some serious angst and action.

#sheena talks #final rewrite for the prologue #my OC only knows hurt no comfort #comfort be damned #she’s the epitome of pain #well my other OC is the ACTUAL epitome of that

[aparticularbandit]

and another chapter of dr1 end rewrite fic into the fic backlog.

which makes for twelve chapters roughed out so far (and a slot for a remnants chapter that i'm waiting to write until post-dr2).

at this point, i think i'm going to write the first unlocked memory before continuing further, but. we'll see when i get back to writing.

#musings #bandit writes fic #dr1 end rewrite fic #bandit fic backlog #so like - even if the prologue goes up tomorrow #and i post the first chapter on thursday #i'll still have /ten/ weeks worth of chapter updates for this #wow that's a lot

[northern-passage]

Hey,

I was wondering if there're any hard set facts about the Hunter, the Hunter's partnership with Lea and the Hunter's feelings towards Lea in general that we should be aware of?

I don't want to roleplay or headcannon things about my Hunter that wouldn't work, like deciding how my Hunter views Lea/feels about them after the last job they ydid before the start of The Northern Passage (as an example).

hmmmm i don't... think so? at least nothing that's not already mentioned in the game.

the hunter has been with Lea for about 4-5 years, the partnership started out strong but deteriorated quickly over time. they've always had a more "professional" relationship, and both Lea and the hunter have overall kept each other at a distance. Lea doesn't know about the hunter's family, and the hunter doesn't know about Shoshana.

otherwise, i try my best to keep the time before Keld pretty vague so players can fill in whatever they'd like for their hunter. Keld is always the "turning point" so to speak in their relationship where they both were at their worst - Lea cocky and unprepared while the hunter was reckless and angry.

so the game always starts off with the hunter and Lea being pretty tense and frustrated with each other, but it's up to the player how they want to approach it, either the rival path or the partnership path.

and since you asked, i'll take this as an opportunity to say that the hunter will always want to keep the rot hidden from Lea regardless of what path you're on, but you will eventually get to choose your own reasoning as to why. you will also always be protective of Lea, again regardless of what path you're on - and Lea will always be protective of you, too, in their own way.

if there's anything else i've mentioned on the blog in previous asks or lore posts it's pretty fast and loose - like i said i do try to keep it intentionally vague. as for snippets, those are sort of.. non-canon? it's hard to write those to be compatible with every single hunter since they're just linear blurbs and i don't ever write them to be interpreted as word of god. a lot of them are scenarios that may literally be impossible and could never be canon, anyways, but are just little "what-ifs" i like to write.

#hopefully that clears things up for you! #lea chen #the hunter #ask #anonymous #i also really want to go back into the prologue and rewrite the whole keld scene but im saving that for once i finish #the blackwater route and go back to edit the wraith fight eventually

[freakwiththeknifecollection]

On the topic of fanonizations (this is one I've utilized a lot for the drama of it all), but Ellen was actually sweet to Dean in canon. She cared about him and Sam. I do think it would be a little different if Dean was dating Jo, I think it's very reasonable to assume Ellen wouldn't want her to date a hunter, especially not wanting Jo to end up losing a partner to hunting like she did. But if anything, that conflict would be between Jo and Ellen, not Dean and Ellen. I don't think in canon Ellen would hold any grudge against Dean for it

#em rambles #ellen harvelle #dean winchester #jo harvelle #chestervelle #deanjo #I do have an issue with my prologue to house of memories for this reason which is why I'm rewriting it. but I digress

[whileyoureinschoolidothisallday]

Y'ALL I FINISHED EDITING CYN'S PROLOGUE 2 DAYS BEFORE SCHEDULE PLEASE CLAP

#real life with risa #risa is an author now #I'M LITERALLY SO PROUD OF MYSELF I DIIIIIIIID IIIIIIIIIIT #literally everyone already told me the prologue was their favorite part and now I feel like it's even BETTER #if this is what work looks like after working with an editor all the time #you hoes are not ready for the art I would release onto the world #IT WAS JUST ONE MAIN SUGGESTION TO FOCUS ON. AND IT'S SO MUCH BETTER. #I really want to do a whole new semi-rewrite of chapter 1 as well but idk if I can do that in two days tbh #WE GON FIND OUT!!!!!!!!!!