#azuli writes

[azuli]

Looking for a Beta Reader for My Time at Sandrock fanfic: Desperado Desert Nights.

Between my friend and I, we catch some of it but I keep finding typos neither of use found.

What I need to a Beta to check for:

- spelling

- story flow

- grammatical errors (like mixing up tenses, punctuation, capitalization)

- when i say the same metaphor three times in a row 😔 (I really love strikes like a Desert Hopper)

- event consistency (like Logan taking Lucy’s shirt off twice lol)

- familiarity with Google Docs

- ability to tell me where I hecked up

- familiar with all the current updates to MTaS

- likes Logan preferably (or it might be awkward

- NPC characterization

- okay with NSFW and 18+

I would also like:

- suggestions for additions

- jokes/funny hahas

If you’re comfortable suggesting them.

Pros of being my beta:

- early access to chapters

- i’m really funny!!!

- my graditude

Cons of being my beta:

- i write either slow as heck or ALL AT ONCE

- i cannot pay you BUT i will either write you a short fic 1k~ words OR a quick sketch for your Builder or NPC of choice. This can be for a pairing as well.

You can message me here or on twitter @ azuzuzuli

#azuli writes #azuli psa #mtas logan #my time at sandrock #mtas #mtas builder #mtas fanfic

[biconickyoshi]

Sorry to bother you. But in your answer to my question you wrote that Azula will receive redemption. And will May and Tyle Lee forgive her as part of that redemption? It would just be interesting to see Azulie try to be nice to her friends, like Zuko did in the second half of season three. And it would be cool if at the end they started a threesome relationship.

I definitely always thought that Mai and Ty Lee would forgive her, especially if she genuinely apologized! Unfortunately even 15+ years later, Azula has yet to be redeemed in canon, so I really want to try and give it a shot. Maybe she’ll end up following a similar arc that Zuko does in canon book 3, and will end up joining the Gaang after the Day of Black Sun. Still not sure exactly where I’ll go with that - we’ll see once we get closer to that part of the story!

I have definitely also given thought to making Mai x Ty Lee x Azula canon, because they would be so cute! Especially since Azula will be redeemed in this AU. I had already planned on making Mai x Ty Lee canon anyway. Once again, we’ll see what happens as I keep writing :)

#atla #the avatar and the fire prince #taatfp #asks #avatar the last airbender #azula #mai #ty lee #azula redemption #mailee #maizulee #dangerous ladies #atla fanfic #atla au

[peasthedumb]

For the OC questions thing: #3., 14., &15.

Oh, and if you're up for it (I need a reason to draw too ngl) Mind if I redraw an OC of yours in my style?

If so, which one?

3: Azulis is my favorite!

14: I basically neglect every character other than Azulis ;-;

15: Toast is surprisingly difficult to write/Draw. Although another one I struggle with is Mutemare. I only know so many ways to make it clear he’s writing, not speaking, it gets difficult sometimes.

An heck yeah you can draw one of my OC’s! Maybe you could draw either Azulis or Patchwork? (Here’s the refs. They’re also the only ones I have up to date refs of)

If you do actually draw one of them, any chance you could show me the results?

[hero2222-nsfw]

To the anon who just sent the ailen anon: Are you planning on interacting with Azuli or are you suggesting a prompt for me to write?

I don't want to take any fun away from you but I don't also want to leave you disappointed.

#ooc post

[koko-101]

A and B? (Since you said you're missing the wiz OC talk~)

A - Ships that you currently like a lot. (They don’t have to be OTPs because not everyone has OTPs.) Friendships, pairings, threesomes, etc. are allowed.

I just read a super cute brotp fic w/ Cori and Lionheart, so them!!! 

and ofc the classic blazdus is always a classic >:3 all of dragonspiraling’s angsty writing prompts are bringing back a lot of feels

I’ve also seen rly cute art of wizzygalpal’s irma and muriel and I get v soft thinknig about them ;w; they are Great Gals

I also think I mentioned these 2 before so I wont asy it again but icy brotp and ellie/azuli brotp MAKE ME WEAK

OH YES AND I ALMOST FORGOT MY SUEPR OTP FROM THE-SEVEN-SCRYS-COMMONS SANFISA AHG I remember crying abt them when they were first introduced,, im hiccuping w/ love

I ALSO GET TEARED UP WHEN I THINK ABOUT FALLONTHESORCERER’S CALEB AND FALLON!!!! my heart is FLUTTERING they were my main otp for a long time.. I remember I was trying to draw a couple art of them for the fifi yandere comic but I wasn’t doing them justice so I had to stop orz||||

also they are underrated but save-the-spiral’s tamer twins ;-; I love sibling relationships so much they are my dream… their sibling interactions make me so happy bc its like!!! siblinfs and parent/mentor relationships mean so much to me my heart palpates when I think abt them,, in a good way,, this is me being soft i’m running out of words,, ;-;

and ofc i cant forget my husband BLAZE FROM LIGHTNINGBATS hes going thru some tough things rn but he better save his bf karic or i’m gonna riot im just saying if jacob sees this..

OH OM G I ALMOST DIDNT INCLUDE THEM BUT KMT’S FIONA AND LEOTH ODFSHJGFHJKGJGHKHJGHHDGFA AFTER I READ THE FIC WHERE THEY FAKE DATED I CRIED i love fake dating to real dating……..

god this is getting long but I love ocs… I had 1-2 more on my mind but..?? I got distracted and fforgot what it was…. I’ll probably edit when I remember..

I do randomly rememebr that I’m trying to get into pinochimo’s ocs just idk where to start lol ;-; but I’m so mad at myself for rememebring that and NOT what I was thinking about a few seconds ago smh

B - A pairing–platonic, romantic or sexual–that you initially didn’t consider, but someone changed your mind.

This is probably rly weird but…. Mitchell and Elliot brotp…. bc like… the thing is that I wrote them as initially hating each other but SOMEHOW that turned inTo mutual respect and secret admiration and idkkk I think I rly like that.. like the whole “no one can talk shit about mitchell except for me HUFF HUFF” kind of relationship hahaha

its my sister’s fault

#this got a liiitttle longer than I wanted but its ok

[kangofu-cb]

Playlist Meme

I was tagged by some absolutely WONDERFUL fellow authors: @remsyk-blog @claraxbarton and @downwarddnaspiral

Preface: my current playlist is for something I'm writing, so it's a little odd. Here goes.

1. Paint it Black - Ciara

2. Monster - Starset

3. Everybody Wants to Rule the World - Lorde

4. Dark Paradise - Lana del Rey

5. Be Your Love - Bishop Briggs

6. Religion - Lana del Rey

7. Seven Devils - Florence and the Machine

8. Glory and Gore - Lorde

9. King - Niykee Heaton

10. Arsonist's Lullabye - Hozier

Tagging @invidiamalice @lifeaftermeteor @fadedsepia @maevemauvaise @anaranesindanarie @amberlyinviolet @chronicwhimsy @azuli @gundamwing-ellesmith @helmistress @weiclown

(I know some of these are probably duplicates but oh well)

#playlist Meme

[azuli]

Desperado Desert Nights

Chapter 1: Gimme a bandit after midnight

Pairings: Logan/Female Builder

Tags: Smut, PiV sex, Unsafe Sex, what happens in the desert stays in the desert, the mask stays ON, default female builder, who I’ve practically adopted as an OC after this, probably OOC Logan, western slang, pre-Logan Strikes Back update, minor spoilers for Behind the Mask update

While out gathering resources on the other side of Shonash canyon, the Builder injures her ankle and seeks shelter in one of the abandoned ruins for the night. She thinks all she needs to worry about is Tripions and Boxing Jacks, but there’s more prowling the desert than just monsters.

An electrifying encounter with Sandrock’s resident bandit ensues.

#logan sandrock #my time at sandrock #mtas fanfic #azuli writes

[azuli]

Desperado Desert Nights

Chapter 5: Can we turn this knife the blunt way around?

Pairing: Female Builder (Lucy)/Logan

Tags: Smut, PiV sex, Unsafe Sex, what happens in the desert stays in the desert, the mask stays ON, default female builder, who I’ve practically adopted as an OC after this, probably OOC Logan, western slang, SPOILERS FOR ALL CURRENT UPDATES

Chapter 5 Tags: MAJOR SPOILERS FOR KNIVES OUT, misunderstandings, pining, violence, himbo Logan, captivity, failed seduction attempt, head injuries, mentions of sexual assault but no SA happens at all

Summary:

Duvos has invaded Sandrock! Lucy finds herself at the center of it all as the commander takes a special interest in her. Determined to save her friends at any cost, she decides to play the role of good little Builder to get under his guard. She’s playing with fire in this race to save Sandrock.

#azuli writes #mtas #mtas logan #mtas oc #mtas fanfic

[azuli]

Desperado Desert Nights

Chapter 2: Heat waves been faking me out

Tags: Smut, PiV sex, Unsafe Sex, what happens in the desert stays in the desert, the mask stays ON, default female builder, who I’ve practically adopted as an OC after this, probably OOC Logan, western slang, pre-Logan Strikes Back update, minor spoilers for Behind the Mask update

Chapter 2 tags: post-Logan Strikes Back update, minor spoilers for Behind the Mask update, bondage, Oral Sex Female Recieving, Logan being a little shit

After the showdown to rescue Matilda, Lucy can’t stop thinking about a certain bandit. Their one night of passion in the desert still haunts her. Desperate for answers, she heads back to the Eufaula Outback hideout to investigate it further. Trouble lies in wait for her, as she runs right into Logan’s arms.

Lucy isn’t sure how to define the relationship between them. Being bad has never felt so good.

A/N: If you like my fic, please consider leaving a comment. I am very motivated by words of affirmation. 🥺👉🏻👈🏻

#azuli writes #mtas logan #mtas fanfic #my time at sandrock

[azuli]

DDN chapter 5 is nearing complete. Just need to add the suffering cherry on top. 🤭

#azuli writes #mtas fanfic

[azuli]

DDN chapter 5 rough is almost done. Can’t wait to make everyone suffer emotionally with this chapter.

I wonder if I’ll catch up in time for the next update.

#azuli speaks #azuli writes

[azuli]

I haven’t even finished writing DDN and I already have AU ideas. RIP me.

#azuli speaks #azuli writes

[azuli]

*slaps DDN chapter 5* This chapter can fit so much suffering.

#azuli writes #azuli speaks #mtas fanfic

[peasthedumb]

So I sorta wrote a story thingy about Azulis (mah sona). Yall can get a hint of the very beginning of my OC’s full story from this I guess

(Am very awkward about sharing my writing but fuck it, I wrote this and I can’t think of any other way to get my OC’s story out there)

Azulis followed closely behind her new friend. Their name was Nova, wasn't it? She was pretty sure that was their name. They were rather interesting. They had 3 sets of ears, and a long thin tail that had a plume of extra fluffy fur at the base and the end. Their fur itself was in some of the most spectacular shades of purple and yellow. They almost looked like they came from space…that explained the name. She also knew they said something about dealing with…crystals? Magic crystals. Crystals that heal. So they’re a healer? Azulis thought that was boring but hey, Nova seemed invested in healing. At least the crystals seemed pretty.

How had Azulis even gotten here? It seemed like it was just a few weeks ago she was still up on that mountain. Her species was still rather tribal in nature. They came in 5 different clans,distinguishable by the colours of their markings, red, green, blue, yellow and Purple/pink. Each clan was very proud, and liked to segregate themselves from the other clans out of belief that they are lesser than them. Although, they especially hated the red clan, and the red clan especially hated them.

Azulis was doomed from birth. She was the child of two from different clans. Most who are born like this end up clanless, with white markings, but she was cursed to have blue and red markings so that everyone knew. If it had been any clan other than red that marked half of her, she probably would've been forgiven, but no. She was red clanned on her Right and Blue clanned on her left. She was a stain on the perfect record of the clans, and so she was forced to stay with the clan that everyone hated the most. The red. But obviously they hated her too. She was imprisoned, and although not intentionally harmed, she wasn't kept in great conditions. Red clan itself was struggling, so she was hardly even left with scraps of anything to eat. And then there was Xara, whose mere existence was like salt to a wound. She was narcissistic and cruel, but worstly, she was a mixed clan too. Red and Green. She had been exiled here too, but had gladly devoted herself to the Red clan. When she eventually got herself on good terms with the Master of the clan, she was allowed to be welcomed as a part of them, even if half her markings say otherwise. She was the proudest of all the Red clan. And she HATED Azulis. To Xara, Azulis didn't deserve to live bearing the markings of red clan if she's not going to be loyal. She went out of her way to make Azulis’s life worse. But still, Azulis lived, keeping herself calm. She was good at that. Blue clan is renowned for their calmness. But red clan is renowned for their violence, and it didn't take more than a few years for that to come out in her.

She waited until a mistake was made in locking her cell, then she bolted. She ran for all it was worth. Somewhere in the panic she clawed a red clan person's stomach open. She took his sword, and continued running. She never looked back.

And now she was here. Far from where her species called home. Most people here didn't even know what species she was.She was seen as Exotic. Her long, glossy grey-blue fur, her long and incredibly fluffy tail, her massive ears and glowing markings, even her glass like claws, sharper than knives. Most who saw her left a compliment on one of these aspects. Too bad she didn't take well to strangers trying to interact with her. But then there was Nova. The two had bumped into each other, literally. Azulis had looked up for a split second at the forest canopy as she heard an interesting bird call, and when she looked back down, she'd collided with this purple bundle of fluff. And now they were friends.

She told Nova the basics of what had happened to her, and I do mean the very basics. Something along the lines of ‘I escaped imprisonment and have been surviving in the woods ever since’.And Nova explained how they had fled their old village as it was becoming a trend to trial people for witchery there. It was only so long before they went after them, so they decided to pack up and leave. They were looking for a new village to settle in. Azulis had never been to a real village. Even back with the red clan, that was more of a camp than a village. The ‘prison’ had just been some bars blocking off a section of a cave. Nova promised to help Azulis adjust to village life, and try to explain civilisation to her. She thought it sounded interesting enough. And so now she's tagging along with Nova.

She wonders what it’ll be like if she ever manages to settle into a village.

#should I write another part?