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slo-liveblog · 4 years

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Witch’s Heart: Bonus Stage Final Thoughts

Hello hello! Honestly I can’t believe I finished Bonus Stage after all this time... took me quite a few months, oof. Many thanks to the handful of you that stuck around during all that, and to the few new people who popped in too! Hope you’ve all been taking care of yourselves, and don’t mind the long post.

CHARACTERS

Claire: After finishing the first game, I didn’t know it was possible to love Claire even more. I was absolutely wrong. The way she took charge at the end was incredibly powerful and I’m so fucking proud of her, even if it’s sad as hell. I really really like how the game both criticizes and respects her unconditional empathy, I think there’s definitely room for both conversations and they’re both incredibly fascinating. I do think she suffers from some of the most writing pitfalls out of everyone, though. Like I said while playing, there’s really no reason given why she wouldn’t confide in Leon, or at least acknowledge that he’s likely the person there she can trust most. In addition, I found it really bizarre that Claire just... never tried to talk to Reynaldo or Sirius after learning about their pasts. Like, at all. I understand why the emphasis on Ashe was important, but it was jarring and kind of unsatisfying to see Claire act so uncharacteristically by not even really acknowledging them after their stories were over. It’s more of a story problem than a character problem though, I think, and I understand why it had to be that way especially considering the conclusions will touch on a lot of the missing pieces- I just wish there could’ve been more of a justification for it. The way her personality was explored through her interactions with everyone, and how other characters were depicted based on their reactions to her ideals, was incredible and I would die for her.

Ashe: Oh Ashe. Fuck Ashe. I do appreciate the depth given to his character, he’s definitely far more complex than I expected and kudos on that. I don’t really empathize with him as much as I do the other four mains, but I do think his writing is incredible and his relationships with Leon and Claire continue to be some of the most interesting to see play out, if not THE most interesting. Star shaped carrots man. Fucked up. Super excited to see how his dynamics with everyone continue, and he’s probably the character I’m the most interested to see make decisions going into these conclusions. His arc feels the most... unfinished, he’s never really reached any sort of closure at any point of the story so far and especially not bonus stage so it’ll be cool to see where he ends up.

Reynaldo: MY BOY. I’M SO FUCKING PROUD OF HIM... going into bonus stage my expectations for him were pretty much rock bottom from the moment I realized he didn’t have a single line in the opening scene outside of saying his name. Like, I kinda made my peace with the possibility that the writer just wasn’t that interested in developing him, and would rather spend time on the rest of the mains. But holy SHIT did he pull through in the second half of the game. The subtle but noticeable build to him deciding to side with Claire was so, so well done. I still wish there was a little more solidity to his characterization- I do have to reach way further to understand him than I do any of the other mains- but I think what we DID get for him was wonderful and god, I appreciate him so much. Definitely the character that improved the most for me from the first game to bonus stage. I can’t wait for his conclusion, here’s to hoping we do in fact get it this year. The way his similarities with Claire were set up makes me SO excited to see how their relationship develops when it’s actually the focus, and how he’ll be fleshed out more in general so we can finally have a clearer picture. Because to be honest, as much as I like the development he was given in bonus stage... there’s still a LOT of gaps to fill in with him.

Sirius: continues to be the perfect human being 1000000/10

Leon: Sweet baby boy whose expressions always make me cry. Leon is still a character I’m sort of on the fence on. Like, he’s very well written and easy to sympathize with. But I realized I’m always far more interested in how OTHER characters react to HIM than the other way around, though. He’s not really a character I personally would find interesting in general, he’s a little simple for my tastes, but that doesn’t mean I’m not 100% invested in seeing him end up happy... eventually. Something tells me it might be a while.

Charlotte: I feel like Charlotte definitely got the short end of the stick in bonus stage, moreso than any other character. Her only memorable scenes that I can think of off the top of my head were when she told Leon he could kill everyone but Claire, when she thought about how Ashe probably can’t be saved, and when she reacted to Claire after the completion of Ashe’s backstory. None of those scenes even come close to hitting the same level of intrigue or emotion as the sparse Charlotte scenes had in the first game, even if that last one does have some interesting bits in it. I said at the end of the first game that we’d only really scratched the surface and I was interested to see more from her and, well, my opinion hasn’t changed. I don’t think there was much I would’ve wanted out of her here anyway unlike the boys, so I’m not especially disappointed. Just hoping we get more excellent Charlotte moments somewhere down the line.

Zizel: I would’ve liked Zizel’s deal to be... a bit more built upon, to be honest? I could just have missed things along the way, but her triumphant moment is a little harder to get in to when we know almost nothing about her or the way she thinks beyond stuff reveled about her in the same scene. I could definitely see that her siding with Claire was being foreshadowed, but I think there needed to be juuust a bit more characterization given to her for that particular development to have the impact it seemed to be going for. Still, it was a good moment, and I think it definitely made up for a lot of the sore lack of Zizel in both games. Can’t wait to see what she does from here.

Lime: Goddddd. Okay look, I still love Lime probably more than I reasonably should. She’s wonderful and I love her design and her personality and her backstory and her motivations but... yea she’s a very very bad person. Bonus stage did really make it clear that she’s not just lashing out occasionally, and this isn’t anywhere near harmless teasing. She’s full on the primary villain of the game, in some ways, and has been doing pretty horrific stuff knowing (and intending for) exactly what she’s causing. Which we sort of knew in the first game anyway, but now it’s very explicit. And like, damn dude... I do wanna see what’s gonna happen with her. It’s tough, wanting to see a character get their comeuppance and stop hurting others while simultaneously just wanting good things for them. this really is how y’all ashe stans feel huh

Side Characters: I gotta say, I really loved a lot of the smaller characters introduced in bonus stage and the way their presence added to the development of the mains. Dorothy and Nicholas, the old dude and the thief woman (I didn’t actually realize until just now but nobody in Wilbert’s backstory had a name, huh. It may not have been intentional but considering that he might literally just not remember that far back I actually really like that decision.), and Ashe’s family and friends were really smartly integrated into the story’s themes and I appreciated that a lot. also lucy and coco rights

Overall This one gets a fucking 10/10 from me chief, some small issues certainly but as close to perfect as they get, in terms of the kinds of stories I like.

STORY

I debated breaking this up into chunks, like I did in the first game with the scenarios, but I feel like the writing quality is more or less consistent throughout the game so it would be a little redundant. I definitely need more time to think on bonus stage before I have a really solid opinion, but at the moment I kind of think the story was even better than the first game? My only major issue was the aforementioned use of Claire’s character, where she’d only really react to the boy’s backstories as she finished hearing them, with the exception of Ashe’s. And her not confiding in Leon. But other than that, it was a constant rollercoaster, with pretty much every scene being jam packed with 3000 layers of character development and relationship building with lore sprinkled in. The elements that were amazing in the first game, like the fun dynamics between the characters and the subtle and unobtrusive exposition, are nothing but improved upon. I do wish we got to play more with the idea of the demon girls living alongside the mains, I think that aspect was severely downplayed almost immediately after it was introduced, but I’m crossing my fingers those potential dynamics get some time in the conclusions. Once again, my biggest gripes with the story are just that I feel like there’s so much more to explore and I can’t wait to see how the rest plays out. still giving this bitch a 10/10 on this one it was everything I wanted and more

GAMEPLAY

Combat: This was kind of... not even really utilized in bonus stage, which I didn’t actually realize until just now. There weren’t any real “boss battles” in the way there were in the first game, the closest thing to it would I guess be Dorothy’s showdown. Considering I didn’t even notice, I think that was a perfectly fine decision. The climax worked well without any actual fights. The battle mechanics continued to be functional and everything, just... not much of a thing.

Demon Requests: It could just be because I played a lot of bonus stage at a very different pace than I did the first game but the demon requests didn’t feel as frequent or intrusive this time around. I was always really excited to get to the request portion anyway cause of the photo booth and all the cool new areas, I had a super fun time using the deep sea bubble and I think overall the stuff that was added to the fantasy spaces was really neat. also lucy and coco rights

Minigames: Very hit or miss. It felt like the minigames were either so quick and easy they were hardly memorable or so tedious they made me wanna die. Take that with a grain of salt, though, I’m really bad at video games. There were very few of them anyway so it doesn’t matter much, but I guess it would’ve been nice if the minigames were less... Like that. To be fair, they were all still pretty charming or cool conceptually. Can’t really complain about getting to fucking shoot people as Dorothy even if it was hell to play.

Overall The demon requests were actually really enjoyable this time around, but the minigames and combat were kind of downplayed. Not to big of a deal, though, it’s not as if they were a focal point of the game to begin with. 7/10

ART & SOUND

Character Design: Not much to say that I didn’t already say after the first game, but the special bonus stage outfits are absolute bangers and I wish they got shown more often. And maybe I would’ve liked the guys to have a little more variety to their suits. But that’s nitpicking, Claire and the demon girl’s dresses are absolutely gorgeous.

Sprites and BGs: The overall art quality definitely got shaky in places but I gotta say, they pulled out ALL the stops for the sprites in this one. Ashe just fully has an entirely new set of them, and everybody else gets tons of new expressions too, all of which are super super good at conveying incredibly specific emotions. All I’m saying is, this would be a totally different game for me without the sprites, and I was always ecstatic to see new ones and figure out what was going on in the character’s head based on them.

OST and Sound Effects: Again, pretty much the same deal as the first game. I think there was a bit of a higher frequency for songs that made me immediately want to search for them so I could listen to them later though, thank god for that. So many good tracks.

Overall Continued to impress me, and then some. Only a slight improvement from the first game, in my opinion, but even that is pretty impressive since I didn’t have many issues with the first game to begin with. 8/10

So uh, in other words, I really really loved this game. Cannot WAIT to start best boy’s conclusion!!!

#witchs heart #slo reviews #slo talks #LETS GOO

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ocalaghan · 3 years

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Do all of them! PS I love all your writing :-)

thank-you so much!! this was really fun. i’ve just deleted all the ones i already answered.

1. What was your first fic and could you stand to reread it today?

according to livejournal, it was a jalex smut called sex it all better. i thought it was a different one but apparently i didn’t write that until a couple fics later.

i wrote it when i was 14, and i just skimmed it there. it’s bearable, it’s not great and the concept of alex cheating and that just being kinda... brushed off is weird to me now ten years later but it’s not the worst piece i ever did lmao.

3. In your opinion, what’s your best fic?

really, really pleased with the work i put into got forever to spend with me on a fool’s holiday.

4. In your opinion and without looking at any numbers, what’s your most popular fic?

without looking at numbers? fuck. uhhh. i want to say good things come in small packages because the sheer number of asks i got about it whilst i was writing it must add up to dozens alongside actual views and comments.

7. What’s the fic you most want to continue (unfinished or no)?

my first chaptered fic, i’ll be there when your heart stops beating. i really do intend to finish it... at some point. lol.

8. What’s the oldest (longest since last update) fic you most want to continue (unfinished or no)?

...see above answer adfuhjlk;lsad. i’m the worst.

10. Have you ever written for a fandom without reading other fanfic for it?

yes! definitely. i’ve never read gossip girl fic and never intend to, but i did publish one.

11. Have you ever written a fic for a concept you know someone else has done before? How did it impact your writing process or feelings after posting?

absolutely. it was probably one of the things that encouraged me to keep posting my first ever smuts, because i knew the concept was popular and well-loved.

12. Have you ever written a fic and decided never to publish it? Why?

some kink stuff that i didn’t want attached to my name, yeah.

13. What’s the biggest change between your style when you started in fandom and today?

i’m not really sure. i think i’m just overall a better writer.

14. What’s the biggest change in your taste between when you started in fandom and today?

probably that a lot of my old fave fics are of the high school genre but being that i am now in my mid-twenties myself, it’s a little strange. when picking fic to read nowadays or coming up with new ideas, i would likely set it in college or just with adults not in any school setting. some of my ideas are still for unfinished high school fic which also feels weird now. but it’s a fun thing to explore, to remember how it felt being that age.

16. Have you ever stopped writing a fic/for a fandom because it wasn’t receiving enough attention?

no. i write for me.

18. What’s your most underrated fic?

you could say that your demons excite me did not get the attention i hoped it would. it’s one of my better pieces so i wish more people read it. i put a LOT of blood, sweat, and tears into that one.

19. If you had to pick one fic/scene/chapter of your work to describe your entire portfolio to a stranger, which would you pick?

lol not to be repetitive but see above answer. it has supernatural/fantasy elements which i really enjoy but it’s also angsty romance and has smut. i think that pretty much encompasses my writing catalogue.

20. Have/Would you ever rewrite a fic? If yes, would you take the original down?

probably not, i don’t have the patience for re-writing.

21. If someone starts kudosing and commenting your fics in a spree and has a few works of their own, would you go look through theirs?

yeah, i’m nosy af and i like to see if the person is a fellow writer or just there to read.

22. Has there ever been anyone who’s made you freak out because they read your work and followed/favorited/reviewed?

yeah, i was super pleased when some popular atl fic writers started noticing and enjoying my work when i was younger. proud day for little me.

23. What’s the nicest review you’ve ever gotten?

oh... i couldn’t say by memory. i’d need to go through all my comments honestly but i do know i’ve gotten several very, very lovely ones and i like to look back over them every so often.

24. What’s the meanest review you’ve ever gotten? Do you think the reviewer intended it?

i don’t think i’ve ever gotten a really bad one. i saw someone say they wished i hadn’t included a certain element on one fic but i hate that fic so it was whatever to me.

26. What aspect of your writing do you most enjoy to see praised?

the way i write people speaking. readers say it’s realistic and paints a picture and i really enjoy that cos i often feel like i ramble.

27. If you could only ever write crossovers or single-fandom fics ever again, which would you pick?

single-fandom.

28. if you could only ever write for a single crossover or a single fandom again, which would you pick?

does bandom as a whole count as a fandom? lmao.

29. Does the division of your writing across fandoms line up with your reading? What’s the biggest discrepancy?

not sure i get this question? like do i read the same amount of fic that i write for X fandom? because i definitely write more than i read.

40. Do you feel like you put out enough content?

i don’t post as regularly as i would like to. #depression

41. If you cross-post your fics on multiple sites, do you have a favorite? Are there certain fics you would only post on certain site?

eh, i used to post to mibba and ao3 but i am transferring to just ao3. i don’t know if i should bother finding a replacement for mibba.

42. How many views has your most popular fic gotten?

idk how to count that cos my most popular ones are posted across lj and mibba.

43. Your least popular?

probs like i feel absolute fantastic or something.

44. Do you follow/favorite/kudos/comment/review more stories than you have received?

yeah, i think so, honestly.

46. Do you consider yourself a diverse author?

yeah!

47. If someone you know in real life who isn’t involved in fandoms asked to read your work, would you let them? If yes, what would you recommend they read first?

i’ve let my boyfriend read my fics! he has no context for any of them but he’s read a few of my most recent ones because they’re the best lol.

48. Does anyone you know from outside of fandom know you write fanfic? Are they involved in the same fandom too?

yeah, a couple of people. not involved in the same fandoms though.

49. Has anyone in your life ever read your fanfic just because you wrote it?

absolutely yeah lol. i have nice friends.

#all time low #jalex #callakarth #anon

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lindyhunt · 7 years

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GUEST BLOG: Rooms by Abbie – practical advice for a successful property sale

We love to bring you great content from our partners, and this time we’ve been chatting with Abbie of “Rooms by Abbie“. She has written this blog for us to share with you, as it’s a hot topic, especially at this busy time of year:

“When it comes to selling property, most people will be hoping for a quick sale at an asking price offer. But how do you achieve this? While most physical attributes, such as the location, orientation of the garden and rooms sizes can’t be changed, there are lots of things you can do to showcase your property so it appeals to the wisest possible audience.

Take the opportunity to declutter

You may not want to hear this, but I promise that decluttering – before you do anything else – will make everything else in the house moving process easier! That may seem like a bold statement, but decluttering means less stuff to store, less stuff to keep tidy for viewings, and less stuff to pack. Now surely that’s worth the effort?!

Before our last house move I sent my husband and then one-year-old daughter to stay with his parents for the weekend, while I painstakingly sorted though all the excess ‘stuff’ in our house. I even tested and threw away all the pens that didn’t work anymore. Yep, unfortunately, that is absolutely true…

Before you start, have a system to follow, some uplifting music, and try not to get side tracked reminiscing over childhood photos and letters!

Complete any unfinished odd jobs

You know those little jobs that you never quite got around to doing, before you no longer noticed them, and the half-finished paint job became part of the décor…? Well, now is the time to finish them! Hanging pictures, replacing cracked tiles, and filling the misjudged hole in the wall next to the curtain pole will all make a huge difference when someone is viewing your house. It may take their perception from “This is a project that I don’t want to take on” to “I can move my things in straight away!”

If, like me, you think your DIY skills may be more of a hindrance than a help, consider hiring a handyman for a day and asking him or her to work through a list of prioritised jobs.

Create a welcoming entrance

First impressions count – sorry for the cliché, but it’s true! When a prospective buyer walks through the front door they may subconsciously make up their mind about your property there and then.

A hallway with shoes to step over or coats to step around may translate that the rest of the house is cramped; a dark hallway may indicate that the whole house has a lack of natural light; peeling wallpaper or yellowing woodwork may give the impression that your property is a ‘project’ and result in a lower offer being made.

To combat this, apply a fresh coat of paint in a light neutral colour, buy a new mat, add a mirror to reflect light, and use neat storage for shoes and bags. Even though you might wear any of your eight coats on a given day (spring is so unpredictable!) hang any surplus items in the wardrobe upstairs – and you can even store the pushchair in the car!

Smarten up outside spaces

Your priority should be the front of the property, as first impressions are so important. If the pathway up to the entrance is overgrown and the front door is faded and peeling, potential buyers may be put off before they’ve even walked inside.

If you have a back garden there’s no need to book a landscape gardener, but cutting the grass, removing any dead plants and tidying away garden toys will all help make the most of the outside space.

Ensure each room has a clear function

Sometimes we end up using our rooms in a non-conventional way, mostly because it suits our needs at the time. I think most of us have ended up with a spare room filled with old furniture, storage boxes and an exercise bike that we were absolutely definitely going to use on a daily basis at some point!

People viewing your house will want to imagine how they would live there. So if you currently have an amalgamated playroom / study / dining room, it is best to decide on a function and dress the room accordingly. If you’re not sure of the best solution, your estate agent will be able to advise you what type of room will appeal most to your target buyer, so you can make the most effective changes.

Don’t feel you need to paint the whole house Magnolia

It’s true that the ‘safe’ option is to have neutral walls and floors when selling a property – potential buyers will find it easier to visualise their belongings in a ‘blank’ space and it will seem like an easier transition than if your vibrant teal feature wall doesn’t match any of their furniture.

But, as long as the decoration is in good order it’s probably not worth the time, effort or cost of neutralising your space, at least when you first put it on the market (if it’s not selling this may be something you consider later on). The chances are the new owners will want to put their own stamp on it anyway, and who knows, they might hate Magnolia and be a mutual admirer of teal!

Present sparkling bathrooms

Without wanting to state the obvious, make sure all bathrooms are clean – as in sparkling clean! It is said that kitchens and bathrooms sell houses, and if a bathroom looks dirty the viewer may (consciously or subconsciously) translate this to needing to replace the bathroom, and as a result may put in a lower offer – or decide not to put in an offer at all.

Obviously you don’t want to go to the expense of installing a new bathroom suite, but a good limescale remover, a grout pen to liven up old tiling and a fluffy bathmat will improve appearances and create a better impression.

Toy storage

It’s likely that if your family home is full of toys, then prospective buyers will be in the same boat. There’s nothing wrong with toys and games being ‘on show’ but at the same time, no-one wants to walk into a room where every inch of space is covered with brightly coloured plastic… except maybe a two-year-old!

This is the opportunity to declutter old toys and books (see point 1 above!) and also move some items to children’s rooms to maximise space in the living areas. Neatly stacked games alongside smart storage boxes won’t cause any offence, but toys spilling onto the floor starts to look cluttered, giving the impression that the rooms are short on storage space.

Don’t over fill rooms

Too much furniture, or bulky pieces that are too big for the space, will make a room feel small – even when it is spacious. An oversized coffee table or large ottoman may be practical but if they fill the space in your living area, the room will feel cramped and awkward.

If you want to keep the furniture, either move it to another room (being careful not to overfill that room in turn!) or ask a very nice family member or friend to store it for you for until you move.

Maintaining tidiness

So, you’ve decluttered, touched up the paintwork, rearranged your rooms, and neatly stored the toys in preparation for photos to be taken and your lovely home to go on the market. But what happens when someone wants to come round and look at it? Surely keeping your home ‘viewing ready’ is actually impossible?!!

Don’t panic – there are a number of things you can do to help maintain this state…

Tidy as you go – this might sound obvious, but putting toys in boxes, clean washing in drawers and dirty plates in the dishwasher straight away will prevent mess from building up.

Cleaning wipes are really handy for a quick wipe around the bathroom or kitchen floor if you have a short notice viewing. OK, I know they’re not great from an environmental point of view, but it’s only short term, and think about all that recycling you’ll be doing as part of decluttering!

Lastly (and perhaps most importantly) have an emergency I-DON’T-KNOW-WHERE-TO-PUT-IT box! If time is against you, you can put today’s post, your current magazine and the birthday card for your sister into the box – throw a nice blanket over the top for an effortlessly styled accessory to blend into the room!

Good luck with your sale! There are so many variables at stake, but one thing’s for definite – you’re in safe hands with Move Revolution!”

Thanks Abbie!

If you would like a design consultation, see Abbie’s website for details.

If you’re thinking of selling or renting your home, please call the Move Revolution team on 0330 223 1000.

from Move Revolution http://moverevolution.com/blog/guest-blog-rooms-abbie-practical-advice-successful-property-sale/

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billwells3 · 7 years

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GUEST BLOG: Rooms by Abbie – practical advice for a successful property sale

Take the opportunity to declutter

Before you start, have a system to follow, some uplifting music, and try not to get side tracked reminiscing over childhood photos and letters!

Complete any unfinished odd jobs

If, like me, you think your DIY skills may be more of a hindrance than a help, consider hiring a handyman for a day and asking him or her to work through a list of prioritised jobs.

Create a welcoming entrance

Smarten up outside spaces

Ensure each room has a clear function

Don’t feel you need to paint the whole house Magnolia

Present sparkling bathrooms

Toy storage

Don’t over fill rooms

If you want to keep the furniture, either move it to another room (being careful not to overfill that room in turn!) or ask a very nice family member or friend to store it for you for until you move.

Maintaining tidiness

Don’t panic – there are a number of things you can do to help maintain this state…

Tidy as you go – this might sound obvious, but putting toys in boxes, clean washing in drawers and dirty plates in the dishwasher straight away will prevent mess from building up.

Cleaning wipes are really handy for a quick wipe around the bathroom or kitchen floor if you have a short notice viewing. OK, I know they��re not great from an environmental point of view, but it’s only short term, and think about all that recycling you’ll be doing as part of decluttering!

Good luck with your sale! There are so many variables at stake, but one thing’s for definite – you’re in safe hands with Move Revolution!”

Thanks Abbie!

If you would like a design consultation, see Abbie’s website for details.

If you’re thinking of selling or renting your home, please call the Move Revolution team on 0330 223 1000.

source http://moverevolution.com/blog/guest-blog-rooms-abbie-practical-advice-successful-property-sale/

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moverevolutionestateagents · 7 years

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GUEST BLOG: Rooms by Abbie – practical advice for a successful property sale

Take the opportunity to declutter

Before you start, have a system to follow, some uplifting music, and try not to get side tracked reminiscing over childhood photos and letters!

Complete any unfinished odd jobs

If, like me, you think your DIY skills may be more of a hindrance than a help, consider hiring a handyman for a day and asking him or her to work through a list of prioritised jobs.

Create a welcoming entrance

Smarten up outside spaces

Ensure each room has a clear function

Don’t feel you need to paint the whole house Magnolia

Present sparkling bathrooms

Toy storage

Don’t over fill rooms

If you want to keep the furniture, either move it to another room (being careful not to overfill that room in turn!) or ask a very nice family member or friend to store it for you for until you move.

Maintaining tidiness

Don’t panic – there are a number of things you can do to help maintain this state…

Tidy as you go – this might sound obvious, but putting toys in boxes, clean washing in drawers and dirty plates in the dishwasher straight away will prevent mess from building up.

Good luck with your sale! There are so many variables at stake, but one thing’s for definite – you’re in safe hands with Move Revolution!”

Thanks Abbie!

If you would like a design consultation, see Abbie’s website for details.

If you’re thinking of selling or renting your home, please call the Move Revolution team on 0330 223 1000.

The post GUEST BLOG: Rooms by Abbie – practical advice for a successful property sale appeared first on Move Revolution.

from Move Revolution http://moverevolution.com/blog/guest-blog-rooms-abbie-practical-advice-successful-property-sale/

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penandaheart · 7 years

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I’m having fun lately. I was able to find my rhythm and started working on something again.

I really enjoy writing. It’s so fun, especially when the ‘eureka’ moment happens, when an idea just pop up in my head spontaneously and like puzzle pieces, the whole story starts to complete itself.

I’ve always found that weaving a character and his/her personality is a lot of work. It’s true though and maybe that could be the reason why I always end up midway or I just leave my stories unfinished. I’ve always been a perfectionist, I guess. I just can’t seem to accept that sometimes inconsistencies in stories happens too.

When I notice that I created such inconsistency, I lose motivation. What usually happens when rectifying it is that there tends to be a lot of things needed to redo. It eventually becomes a major plot change and after realizing how much work would that be, I just find myself thinking that it has become too troublesome to do. Huhu. After all, I just write to pass time, sometimes out of whim (whenever an idea just come by), but purely for selfish joy.

Because after all, I like writing and I find joy while doing it.

But now it’s quite different. I started telling myself that this year, I will finish whatever I started (be it a story or a being on a diet, haha). So definitely, I will finish this work. I am really hopeful and very positive. I can do it! :)

It’s also a challenge on my part because first, this work isn’t written in my native language. It’s in English and somehow I just want to practice my English-writing skills. Second, I am trying my hardest not to create any inconsistency, which is really hard. Third, this is a test on how faithful I can be, not only in writing but also in life in general.

I’m not really sure if I should post the first chapter here but oh well, maybe doing so will motivate me more so… I think I’ll do it. :) It doesn’t have a title yet though.

I’m not really sure if anybody will take their time to read it. Nevertheless, just thinking that I’m posting it online gives me pressure and I feel like sometimes, pressure is exactly what we need in order to motivate ourselves.

So yup, without further ado… :)

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A Mini-series Inspired by Mitsubachi-sensei’s Namaikizakari

Act 1

Being able to receive this kind of recognition and responsibility is definitely an honor, no questions asked.

For Emi Hernandez, accepting the position of Assistant Director of the school’s famed drama club means there is no room for failure. She felt the pressure right away but her wonder and joy came rushing at the same time. She has always set her eyes on this particular spot of the production team for almost a year now and while she continues holding back her tears because of the sudden news, she realizes that all her hard work has finally paid off which didn’t help in actually keeping more of her tears from welling up.

It’s been a long-awaited episode in her life, to actually be able to handle the bulk of work of the whole drama club and also to actually be able to work alongside the one person she’s been admiring since she first came to school; the person of expertise, the reason why everyone recognizes that the production of the school’s theatrical plays is almost on the same level as the country’s most famous theatrical production, the director himself, Luke Goncalves.

She’s speechless, really. She’s gonna work so closely with this kind of person starting tomorrow. Tomorrow. In the same room, with her desk beside his. And with the prospect of occasionally being alone with him.

The thought makes her stomach churn in funny ways.

Of course, no one knows this little secret. She absolutely made sure that there’s not a single soul aware of her hidden affections. Emi is more than prepared to take the secret of crushing on a 30 year old big shot director to her grave. As much as it pains her, she’s well aware that their age gap is not socially acceptable. But before of actually worrying about how they are more than a decade apart, she must first worry if the man actually sees her as a woman, in other words, a prospected girlfriend.

But ever since she started being the assistant director, she felt like being treated in a harsher manner than she thought.

“I see. You do that as well, huh.” There was one time when Luke crept behind her without her knowledge and saw all the detailed schedules and planning that she’s been doing for the drama club on her laptop screen.

She nearly yelped in surprise upon hearing his sudden comment. “I didn’t notice that you were behind me, Sir.”

“That’s because I made sure you won’t be able to notice.” He replied. “Hey, Emi, let me ask you this one question. Promise me that you’ll answer truthfully.”

Although she knows that the question he might ask is probably club-related, it just doesn’t help with the fact that she’s somehow expectant of something. She doesn’t know exactly what this something is, but she hopes that it’s because he has finally noticed her in some other way.

At that moment, she desperately wants to silence or put up some kind of restraint to her beating heart for being so loud and fast and all.

“How many hours have you been sleeping lately?”

“Huh?” She was quite taken aback. She didn’t understand his question at first or how it was related to her work as the assistant director.

“Well…” She tried counting and while counting with her fingers, she was shocked upon realizing that she has been sleeping for not more than 3 hours a day since the week started.

“You need to better take care of your health. If you collapse because of lack of sleep or fatigue then you’re not actually being productive at all. Didn’t you know that? You idiot.” It was his director-ish tone that made him sound so stern.

She wasn’t able to speak right away. Her mood went south all of a sudden. She thought of what she feared the most. Sir Luke is disappointed, he’s definitely disappointed in me.

“I-I’m sor—“

“I’m looking out for you here, Emi.“ He said in a softer tone making Emi sneak a glance at him. There was no trace of being angry in his face. It was simply serious with a little glint of worry. "Even if you try hiding those panda eyes with wearing glasses, I would still know that you’re lacking sleep.”

"Well, it’s just because—”

“In case you’re not aware, you’re the one I trust the most in the club. You’re my right hand. It’s part of your responsibilities to take care of yourself. It’s how you can efficiently work as my assistant.”

She started feeling a different emotion this time. It suddenly feels like he’s actually noticing her now, in that particular light. It feels as if he actually cares for her.

“But I must admit though, I see some similarities between you and me. Overworking and that meticulous planning, in addition, our obsession to caffeine…” And he smiled that smile that makes Emi melt inside every time. “You make me feel like…”

She’s expectant. Every nerve endings in her is somehow alive and alert. All of a sudden, it seems like Emi’s hope lit up as bright as hundreds of bulbs lit altogether.

“… Like I have a daughter. We’re way too similar, don’t you think so?” He finished it off with a soft chuckle.

It’s amazing, really, how this one person could make her feel different emotions within a short span of time. But finally knowing what he thinks of her makes it appear as torture, and she’s convinced that it’s actually the most accurate term for this unrequited admiration of hers that has ran for almost two years.

If the mnemonic YOLO could be someone’s motto, then it is definitely Reece Albarrasin’s way of life. Add it with the idea that there is no younger version of himself other than the present person he is and also the notion that the only one who can live his life is none other than him… voila! There you have it—the most popular boy (mostly because of the wrong reasons) in the whole Stranton High.

Well, simply put, he just thinks that the world is vast and wide and that he hasn’t explored enough yet. Even though he has done a lot of things already, considerably at his young age. For the record, he had tried doing some illicit activities having quite a rebellious streak such as smoking weeds, some little gang fights here and there, and other related law-breaking stuff. But ever since he got himself involved in the drama club wherein a supposedly ‘boring’ girl caught his interest, he started thinking that the floating experience he gets when he’s high is not even comparable to the excitement he feels every time he discovers a new expression on Emi’s face.

Emi was definitely a boring girl in his perspective. He sees her almost everyday as he also takes the same bus as her in going to school. He doesn’t know if she had noticed it beforehand but eventually it was revealed to him that she believed she hasn’t seen him anywhere else before he started showing up in the drama club.

She is not really that striking if we were to base it on physical appearance. She’s sorta cute, someone with gentle features that people doesn’t notice at first glance because of her somewhat inborn resting bitch face. Actually, her eyebrows are to blame. But it can’t be helped, it’s not like she wanted to be born with pointy eyebrows that speak for themselves.

What Reece actually doesn’t know is that it takes a whole conversation added with a little budding friendship when people around her start realizing that she’s a good-natured person with quite a unique personality. For Reece, girls like Emi are too typical, too mainstream and average to notice. Nothing really special, nor remarkable.

But he proved himself wrong when he found out that Emi is nothing like he expected. And it was the start of everything.

“Bring everything on the list tomorrow exactly at 12 noon by lunch time. I’ll be checking them personally. Be sure to get the right materials and be attentive to the brand. We can’t afford to have another delay because of this.” She says naturally to him as if he’s been a member of the production team for years.

“Those brands on the list are the club’s sponsors so the least we could do to thank them is buy their products.”

This was actually the first time that Emi talked to him. He was in the drama club because of detention (for playing with the ketchup bottle in the cafeteria with his pals and smearing a huge amount on the music teacher’s shirt) and it was definitely the least place where he wanted to be.

He gave the list a quick glance without even trying to understand what’s written on the paper, then turned to her again. “I’m gonna be busy tomorrow, I’m probably ain’t here anymore.” He said with a yawn.

Of course what he said was a lie because the music teacher told them to help out for a week. It was decided as quite a long-term service, given that he has accumulated enough troubles within the month. But Reece is just simply trying to irritate her a bit and see what reaction he could get.

“You’re going to help out for a week.” Emi said, looking at him directly without even flinching. “Sir Fahro informed me about you guys.”

At this point, Reece was kind of surprised. She was looking at him in a too straight-forward manner. As if she isn’t bothered that she’s talking with the most troublesome guy at school. He’s aware of his troublemaker reputation which explains why most students are wary of him and his friends. Isn’t she even scared of him or something? Or maybe she doesn’t even know him? But that’s impossible, cause he’s Reece Albarrasin.

“Oh…” Reece dryly replied. “Really? We were supposed to help out for a week? Well, that’s a pain.”

“Can you do it or can you not?” She may have sounded a little impatient but it actually came to him as a challenge. “If it’s impossible for you, then I can just pass this task to others and give you a more… doable job.” It’s as if she’s saying, you can’t even do a simple thing such as buying materials?

He didn’t expect her to be this frank.

“Of course, I can. At your service, Miss…?” He leaned a bit towards her but she’s still standing unfazed with her straight face and serious expression.

“Emi Hernandez, the assistant director.”

“Miss Emi.” He gave her a smile. Partially because he wanted to redeem himself by appearing friendlier and partially for realizing that his first impressions of her was nothing like how she really was.

“Alright, I leave it to you then.” She was about to turn away but she suddenly remembered something that needs confirmation. “But if I’m not mistaken, your name is Reece Albarrasin, right?”

Reece’s face suddenly lit up. She knows him, after all.

“You got that right.” He can’t help the grin across his face.

“I figured.” And then she walked away and went to talk to another person in the production team.

He was amused. She’s quite something. For the rest of the club activity, his eyes has always found their way towards her. And as he observed the girl, he became more curious as to how she’s really like.

Woah so it’s like that. I am currently on Chapter 4 (Act 4) and quietly revealing some mysteries, especially behind the character of Reece, my beloved son, about what his deal is and all. Kung sa tagalog, anong hugot niya.

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Complete any unfinished odd jobs

If, like me, you think your DIY skills may be more of a hindrance than a help, consider hiring a handyman for a day and asking him or her to work through a list of prioritised jobs.

Create a welcoming entrance

Smarten up outside spaces

Ensure each room has a clear function

Don’t feel you need to paint the whole house Magnolia

Present sparkling bathrooms

Toy storage

Don’t over fill rooms

If you want to keep the furniture, either move it to another room (being careful not to overfill that room in turn!) or ask a very nice family member or friend to store it for you for until you move.

Maintaining tidiness

Don’t panic – there are a number of things you can do to help maintain this state…

Tidy as you go – this might sound obvious, but putting toys in boxes, clean washing in drawers and dirty plates in the dishwasher straight away will prevent mess from building up.

Good luck with your sale! There are so many variables at stake, but one thing’s for definite – you’re in safe hands with Move Revolution!”

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If you’re thinking of selling or renting your home, please call the Move Revolution team on 0330 223 1000.

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