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dbphantom · 1 year
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10, 36 and 44 from the fanfic writer game . Hope you enjoy your day!
Thank you so much!! Right back at you!
10) In your xxx fic, why did you decide to end it like that? Did you have an alternative ending in mind?
Oooh, loaded question! For Alkali, I chose to follow the episode Noctis ending bc I always wanted them to have a happy ending and, honestly, I just thought the book/planned ending was really good. I changed a few things to fit the focus of the story better, but overall it's the episode Noctis ending. As for the changes, you know that one scene in the last episode of H2O Season 1 where Rikki steps into the ocean? Yeah. It's a little like that.
For alt. endings, I'm not the biggest fan of the verse 2 ending from episode Ignis, but [BUT] with a couple big changes I thought it made for a fun detour with the same episode Noctis ending. It actually ended up becoming the 'main' timeline for this fic because I was having so much fun with it. I fit in the events of Episode Prompto, plus Ravus and Aranea team up with the chocobros to navigate through Zegnaurbfjflhs Keep and shut down the wall breaker wave machine. So, Ignis still puts on the ring and loses his sight and Prompto still takes down worm Verstael, it all just happens a little out of order and in new fun and exciting locations. [Verstael, to Ardyn: would you still love me if I was a worm?]
So the other timeline I had was Leviathan taking her payment early during the events of Episode Ignis, leaving Iggy with no memories of Noct to keep him from acting irrationally next time. It ends poorly. It's me, boy, I'm the sea godess, speaking to you from inside your brain. Listen to me, boy, lead the prince, to the crystal. Then come with me and guard this space. We'll have mermaid times. On Eos! Do do da do, yeah. You need me, boy. Your free will is an illusion.
36) Can you give us a spoiler for one of your WIP’s?
Yesssss, I would love to!!! I'm having such a hard time deciding which fic to choose because I love everything, but you know what? Surprise attack!!! Here's an excerpt from chapter 10 of Masked, my genrex secret identity fic.
"... I wasn't with Noah for half of the classes I went to, but I aced a pop quiz the trigonometry teacher gave us!"
Holiday's heart ached. This was the sort of stuff he should be talking about on a daily basis, not EVOs or training or which painkillers worked best before his nanites neutralized them. He reminded her so much of Beverly in that moment, excitedly going on about her day at school and the things she'd learned to her big sister in college. She wanted to do nothing more than hug him and tell him everything was going to be okay, that the adults were going to handle it all from now on and he didn't need to worry.
But Providence wasn't so kind.
Thankfully, Holiday was, and she was fiercely stubborn to boot. The one thing she wanted to do in that exact moment was protect that innocent smile on Rex's face, and she was going to do her damndest to try.
44) What is the last line you wrote?
Prompto's fumbling the reload, electric panic surging through his veins.
Uh oh... This is from the area right before Keycatrich. Cor's around, so they'll be okay XD
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carolinahope · 4 years
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It doesn’t matter whether TPTB knew months ago or just weeks ago that 10.22 will be the series finale. There is no universe in which having Catherine in it, and in that moment, makes narrative sense or constitutes good writing. 
After Steve reads Danny’s text, he could have replied I miss you too. Fade to black. 
And they would have had a completely serviceable ending. They would have appeased the McDanno fans, the casual viewers and even the homophobes. 
But they didn’t. Instead they decided on a last eff you to the characters, actors and fans. So eff them very much back and I will continue to consume content from people who know a good thing when they have it. And treat it and me right. 
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xradinoxinterloperx · 4 years
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Vs Series Summary. Hazbin Hotel fanfic
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Well, I have decided to Try to leave an Organized Publication with a Summary of the Chapters of the fan fic that I have been writing. It is the first one that I write and I am a novice writer, but it is something that I have been enjoying a lot.
As you will probably notice and more in the english translation, there is probably a lot of grammatical errors and some expression may sound weird, this is my first time trying to seriously translate tale to english, so im still learning and correcting the documents.
 The stories like the original series are aimed for adults.
Initially it is a story centered on an OC and Vaggie, to explore her personality a bit, but little by little it  comes  to include more of the main cast and others from the universe of Hazbin Hotel. Each title of the chapter will lead to a  link in the document. 
Ocs Character Sheets:
Vic
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Chapter 1 -  Day Off: Vaggie takes a day off from the hotel to clear herself. Looking for old friends  she ends  up in a dangerous situation and maybe meeting some new ones. Characters:  Main: Vaggie, Vic  (OC). Secondary: Alastor, Charlie, other OCs.
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Chapter 2 - Trip off: The organization of a new event for the hotel is underway. But in the process of advertising it, Angel is kidnapped in the street in front of Vaggie and Niffty. Angel receives an unusual acting offer. (Chapter contains NSFW) Characters: Main; Angel Dust, Madelaine (*Jlaiyon Oc) , Vaggie, Velvet, Vic (OC), other OCs. Secondary: Alastor, Charlie, Valentino, Niffty.
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From Here i named the previous known Ocs indistinctly
Chapter 3 - Surprise Visit: The preparations for the event at the hotel are almost ready. Vic decides to visit the hotel and meet all the staff. Characters: Alastor, Angel Dust, Charlie, Francis (Oc), Husk, Niffty, Vaggie, Vic, Zaza.   
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Chapter 4 - Hangover: Vaggie wakes up at night after the event, the hotel is still standing but something  wrong seems to have happened between some of  the hotel members.  Characters: Alastor, Angel Dust, Charlie, Husk, Niffty, Vaggie, Vic, Zaza. Secondary / Cameos: Madelaine (*Jlaiyon Oc) Velvet, Lucifer, Stolas, Von Eldricht Family.  
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Chapter 5 - Lovelorn: Immediate aftermath of Hangover. dates, romance, feelings! & more. Happy Valentines! ... 
Ocs Mentioned:  Polaris(Godess-of-Waifus),  CP, Deux, Madelaine (Jlaiyon), Larry (i guess it’s cameo?- Kronosaurus)   *
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Chapter 6 - The Dinner: Preamble and meeting of the Dinner Organized by Charlie, Vaggie and Zaza. A fun night for all participants. Good food, Games, Karaoke. What can go wrong? (pretty long 43 pages, Epilogue contains NSFW) 
Characters: Alastor, Angel Dust, Charlie, Husk, Niffty, Vaggie, Razzle & Dazzle,Lucifer, Lilith (cameo). 
Ocs Mentioned:  Adrem (cameo) , Havok,  Maria, Vic, Zaza. Madelaine (Jlaiyon), Polaris(Godess-of-Waifus),   Larry ( Art and character by Kronosaurus), Sally/Salem ( cameo - FreakyTrash)*
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Chapter 7 - Between Hell’s Royalty: On a scorching hot day, Charlie and Vaggie visit Lucifer spending a day of luxury at the palace spa. But even with a relationship to compose, Father and daughter will not be on the Margin of Royal Affairs. More so when the king's secretary witch, Salem, finds impossible for her to control the king's two new young  intern assistants alone in the palace, no less than two young nobles of different ranks in the nobility of hell.
Characters: Alastor, Charlie, Damian (Zoophobia),  Lucifer, Lilith, Satan (Zoophobia interpretation) Vaggie,   Velvet.
Ocs Mentioned:  Adrem, Candor, Vic, Sally/Salem ( FreakyTrash)
Cameo: Boogie, Dax,  Draco (FreakyTrash)*
*Personal  interpretation of the  Original Character. Visit the original creators for their wonderful art!. Thanks for letting me use them!
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Bueno, me he decido a Tratar de dejar una Publicación Organizado con un Sumario  de los Capitulos del fan fic que vengo escribiendo. Es el primero que escribo y soy un escritor novato, pero es algo que vengo disfrutando mucho
  Los relatos al igual que la serie original están apuntados para adultos.
Inicialmente es una historia centrada en un OC y Vaggie, para explorar un poco su personalidad, pero poco a poco viene incluyendo a mas de los personajes principales y otros del universo de Hazbin Hotel. Cada titulo del capitulo conducirá a un  link del documento. 
Planilla de personaje de OCs: 
Vic
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VERSION EN WATTPAD DEL FIC (ULTIMA MAS ACTUALIZADA EN ESPAÑOL)
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Capitulo 1 - Dia Libre: Vaggie se toma un día libre del hotel para despejarse. Buscando viejos amigos termina en un situación peligrosa y tal vez conociendo algunos nuevos. Personajes:  Principales: Vaggie, Vic  (OC). Secundarios: Alastor, Charlie, otros OCs.
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Capitulo 2 - Tropezón: La organización de un nuevo evento para el hotel esta en marcha. Pero en el proceso de publicitarlo, Angel es secuestrado en plena calle en frente de Vaggie y Niffty. Angel recibe una oferta de actuacion inusual.  (Capitulo contiene NSFW)  Personajes: Principales; Angel Dust,  Madelaine (*Jlaiyon Oc) ,Vaggie, Velvet, Vic (OC), otros OCs. Secundarios: Alastor,  Charlie,  Valentino, Niffty. 
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Desde este punto especificare los nombres de los Ocs indistintamente.
Capitulo 3 - Visita Sorpresa: Las preparaciones para el evento en el hotel están casi listas. Vic se decide a visitar el hotel y conocer a todo el staff. Personajes: Alastor, Angel Dust,  Charlie,  Francis (Oc), Husk, Niffty, Vaggie, Vic, Zaza.
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Capitulo 4 - Resaca: Vaggie despierta de  la noche luego del evento, el hotel sigue en pie pero parece haber conflictos entre alguno de los miembros del hotel.  Personajes: Alastor, Angel Dust,  Charlie, Husk, Niffty, Vaggie, Vic, Zaza. Secundarios/Cameos:  Madelaine (*Jlaiyon Oc) Velvet,   Lucifer, Stolas,  Familia Von Eldricht.
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Capitulo 5 - Mal de Amores: Continuación inmediata del Final de Resaca. Citas, romance, sentimientos! Feliz día de San Valentin! ...Personajes Ocs Mencionados:  Polaris(Godess-of-Waifus),  CP, Deux, Madelaine (Jlaiyon), Larry (i guess it’s cameo?- Kronosaurus)   *
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Capitulo 6 - La Cena: Preámbulo y reunion de la Cena Organizada por Charlie, Vaggie y Zaza. Una noche de diversion para todos sus comensales. Buena comida, Juegos, Karaoke. ¿Que puede salir mal?.  (Capitulo Largo, 43 paginas, Epilogo contiene NSFW)
 Personajes:  Alastor,  Angel Dust, Charlie, Husk, Niffty, Vaggie,  Razzle & Dazzle , Lucifer, Lilith (cameo).                                                                      
Personajes OCs:  Adrem (cameo) , Havok,  Maria, Vic, Zaza. Madelaine (Jlaiyon), Polaris(Godess-of-Waifus),   Larry ( Art and character by Kronosaurus), Sally/Salem ( cameo - FreakyTrash)*
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Capitulo 7 - Entre la Realeza Infernal:  En un día de calor abrasador, Charlie y Vaggie visitan a Lucifer pasando un día de lujos en el spa del palacio. Pero aun con una relación que componer, Padre e hija no podrán estar al Margen de los Asuntos Reales. Más cuando la bruja secretaria del rey ,Salem, le es imposible controlar sola a los dos nuevos jóvenes asistentes del rey en el palacio, nada menos que dos jóvenes nobles de distintos escalafones de la nobleza del infierno.
Personajes: Alastor, Charlie, Damian (Zoophobia),  Lucifer, Lilith, Satan (Zoophobia interpretation) Vaggie,   Velvet.
Personajes OCs:  Adrem, Candor, Vic, Sally/Salem ( FreakyTrash)
Cameo: Boogie, Dax,  Draco (FreakyTrash)*
*Interpretación Personal del  Personaje Original. Por favor visitarlos para arte de los personajes.  Gracias por permitirme usarlos!.
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