The Suitor to Suit Her
We didn’t get to see all of the boys attempt a proposal 😂 so here’s some quick dialogues I came up with, written in the style of a play script for the sake of simplicity; it’s sort of a “what if” each of the remaining guys, including the four in the final rescue squad, had a chance to woo the Ghost Bride.
I was able to make each proposal a little longer than the proposals shown to us in-game! It was really fun to write these, especially the side banter.
Please note: I do include Ortho in this, but he is NOT proposing. In Ortho’s scenario, he is volunteering to be the ring bearer or a flower boy so he can at sneak over and inform Idia of the plan and/or so Ortho can swap the ring out for the magical one to banish ghosts.
Another exception to the proposal prompt is Malleus. Since he can’t propose to some random ghost due to his own status as crown prince, his scenario is framed as something different.
Operation Propose, START!
Riddle: HOLD IT!!
Eliza, the Ghosts, and the “guests”: !!
Eliza: What’s this?! A fresh new squadron of suitors?
Ace: You’ve got that right!! If you think you’re gettin’ hitched, you’ve got another thing coming!
Ortho: That’s right! Hands off of Nii-san!
Idia: O-Ortho! You brought all the other normies...!
Eliza: Oh, there seems to be no end to you!
Ghost: Of course! You’re the most desirable bachelorette there is, princess!!
Eliza: Tee hee! Oh, you’re flattering me!
Eliza, to the group: Very well. Let’s start with you, the one in the smart crimson suit that matches your hair.
Riddle, with a polite smile: Ah-HEM! Good evening, princess. I do hope I’m not intruding on your time. I’m thankful that I’ve been granted this audience with you.
(Cater: Look, there it is! Riddle-kun’s surprisingly suave side!
Leona: Well, what do you know? It looks like the red young master’s able to hold his own.
Deuce: E-Eh, Rosehearts-senpai is doing so much better than I did… How cool!
Ace: HAH? Who’s a ‘refined gentleman’, ‘surprisingly suave’, and ‘cool’?! I don’t remember Riddle-ryocho ever being this nice to us! Definitely not to me!
Trey: Ahahahah… Well, Riddle did have manners drilled into him from a young age. It’s not surprising that he’s caught the ghost’s attention.
Ace: You have GOT to be kidding me!)
Riddle, bowing to the Ghost Bride: I am Riddle Rosehearts, dorm leader of Heartslabyul–and I would be honored if you would permit me to court you.
Eliza: Refined as you are, the prince that I seek is at least 180 cm tall! I’m afraid that you are a far cry from that.
Riddle, face tensing: Grrk…!
(Everyone: !!
Idia: Y-Yikes, Riddle-shi looks like he’s about to go berserk mode!!)
Riddle, sighing and relaxing: ………………
(Cater: Nice save! He came in clutch and managed to calm himself down!)
Riddle: I assure you that what I lack in height, I make up for with my talents and abilities. You may test me however you like. I am certain that I can provide the perfect response to any question.
(Ace: … Huh? Is it just me, or is he treating this like it’s a written exam with a short answer section?
Trey: Er, I think that’s exactly what he’s doing.)
Eliza: Very well, then tell me this: how do you plan to sweep me off my feet without that princely height I long for?
Riddle, smirking as he crosses his arms: Simple.
Riddle, a hand on his hip: We’ll have afternoon tea beginning at 3 o’clock on the dot and concluding at 4. No sooner and no later than that. After that light luncheon, we’ll take a 30 minute stroll in a rose garden to let the tea and finger foods digest.
Riddle, waving a hand: From 4:30 pm to 7 pm, we will exchange colloquial conversation so we are able to learn of one another. Dinner will be at 7, and I will return you safely to your place of residence at 9 pm.
Eliza: …………………….
Riddle: ... Well? Have you reached your decision? I’m in a hurry here. There is an important deadline that I must meet—
Eliza: YOU’RE OUT.
*SMACK*
Riddle: ?!
Eliza: You don’t have any sense for romance! Plans? Schedules? Routines? Love isn’t something so rigidly defined!!
Riddle: What?! Just how do you intend to get anything done if you don't...
Eliza: Surprise candlelit dinners! Spontaneous serenades by the moonlight! Getting so lost in my prince’s eyes that I lose track of time! These are the hallmarks of the ideal romance, and they’re all lost on you!!
Riddle, face turning red: YEEEARGH!!! You seriously expect to marry a man you’ve just met to go along with all of that nonsense?! Have you lost your mind?!
Eliza: I’ll not hear another word from you! Bring me the next suitor!
Eliza: Next up is you with the heart.
Ace: You called?
Ace, smiling: Heh, I see you looking at me from across the way. I know I’m hot stuff! You don’t need to be modest!
Eliza: Eh?!
Ace, winking: Hey. Don’t even bother looking at any other guys, cuz I’m your man—and that’s that!
(Jack, Floyd, Vil: …
Vil, offended: … And just who does Potato #1 think he is, waltzing in with such swagger?
Riddle: That overwhelming cocksureness of his is rubbing me the wrong way.
Cater: Eeeh, it seems to be working though, doesn’t it? Ghostie’s got her eyes glued on Ace-chan!
Deuce: This somehow feels… wrong to watch.
Trey: I don’t know whether that says more about the groom or more about the bride.
Idia: H-How can you people watch this without cringing so hard you reincarnate into another world?!)
Ace, smirking: How about it? Have I captured your heart with my wicked charm yet?
Eliza: You’re so bold! So forward! Tell me, how did you temper that confidence?
Ace: Oh, you know! I’ve got tricks up my sleeves.
Ace, looking smug: Unlike those guys, I’m not forever alone. This isn’t my first rodeo, either! I actually know how to talk to girls AND I’ve got mad game!
Ace: You’d be crazy NOT to choose me!
(Everyone: ………………..
Riddle, looking disappointed but not surprised: Fool.)
Ace: Huh? Why’s everyone glaring at me? Don’t get mad just cuz I’m spitting cold, hard facts!
Eliza: YOU’RE OUT.
*SMACK*
Ace: OW OW OW OW OWWWW!!
Ace: What was THAT for?!
Eliza: Shame on you! How dare you talk about other women in front of me!! The last I want to hear about is your EX!
Eliza: If you’re still lingering on her, then how can I expect you to be faithful to me?!
Ace: HAH?! I didn’t even SAY anything about my ex!!
Eliza: THERE! You just did!
Ace, wincing: Gack…!
(Deuce, sighing: … Should’ve known something like this would happen. When Ace runs his mouth for too long, trouble’s gonna brew.
Riddle, looking smug: Hmph. It serves him right!
Trey: Riddle, you’re looking a little too pleased there...)
Eliza: Next! You, with the big ears and the lopsided smile.
Ruggie, mumbling to himself, ears flattened: Sheesh, I can’t believe I got called away from making bacon to make goo-goo eyes at a ghost… Oh well, whatever’s gonna net me that bonus for saving Leona-san’s keister.
Ruggie: Hey, I’m Ruggie! Ruggie Bucchi.
Eliza: Hmm? Did you say something before that?
Ruggie, grinning with his hands behind his head: Nah, don’t sweat it! ‘S nothing.
Eliza: What a winsome smile you have! It’s a little rough around the edges, but it conveys a lot of heart.
Ruggie: Nishishishishi! Thanks. You’ve got a good smile on yourself too!
Eliza, blushing as she cradles her cheeks: Oh my! Such a flatterer!
Ruggie: And your voice makes me want to break out into laughter! It just puts me in the mood to sing, like the sun lighting up the whole savanna.
Eliza: Oh, you…!!
(Jack: Hoo, boy… Ruggie-senpai’s really laying it on thick.
Leona: Hmph. He’s just got a real knack for kissing up to people. Reminds me of a certain octopunk, actually.
Azul, with a passive-aggressive smile: Ah-hem, I can hear you loud and clear, Leona-san.
Leona, smirking: Oh, don’t worry. I know you can.
Idia: My life’s on the line here and you’re just going to sit around and make sarcastic quips?! This isn’t a high school anime romcom!!
Floyd and Jade: Hehehe/Fufufu…)
Eliza: Wait, what’s that sticking out of your pockets?
Ruggie: Huh? Oh, you mean these?
Ruggie, pulling out a bunch of dandelions: There’s tons of these things all over campus.
Eliza: To think that you’d go out of your way to prepare such a thoughtful gift for me… Yes, yes! I’ll happily accept this bouquet!
Ruggie, looking mildly annoyed: Huh? Bouquet?
(Leona: Argh, here we go again…
Jack: ?
Rook: Ah, could it be?!)
Ruggie, getting defensive: You’ve got it all wrong. This ain’t a bouquet, and this ain’t yours. This is MY dinner.
Eliza: It’s…your dinner?
Ruggie: Yeah. Dandelions are basically free food, so I pick’m and cook’m tons of different ways.
Ruggie: I was working my tail off all afternoon hunting these down. If you want your own, that’s on you. No way am I sharing MY food.
Ruggie: *MUNCHMUNCH*
(Jack: Ruggie-senpai just chowed down on all those dandelions!
Leona: *Sigh* His appetite knows no bounds.
Rook: Ahhh, Monsieur Dent-de-Lion consumes his meals with such fervor and gusto! Why, it looks as though he is savoring every last morsel of his supper!)
Ruggie, rubbing his belly: Phew! That sure hit the spo–
Eliza: YOU’RE OUT.
*SMACK*
Ruggie: BLEGH?!
Eliza: Unbelievable! I’ve never seen such selfishness!! What kind of prince not only denies his princess of a present, but then proceeds to take that present for himself!? Reflect on your overindulgence!
Ruggie: Aw, man… I was doing so well, too.
Ruggie: I should’ve stuck with ‘every hyena for himself’!
Eliza: Next—
Kalim, bursting into the venue on a massive elephant (plus all the bells and whistles, a la Prince Ali style): SORRY I’M LATE!!
(Everyone: ?!
Idia: Kalim-shi?!
Jamil, off to the side and looking disappointed but not surprised: ………………)
Kalim, descending on the magic carpet and hopping off: I didn’t miss anything important, did I?
Eliza: Who’s this sunny fellow in the gold earrings?
Kalim, smiling: I’m Kalim! Nice to meet’cha!
Eliza: YOU’RE LATE! It’s simply unacceptable to be running late for a meeting with your one true love! If you cannot be on time, how can I be certain that our love is true? Do you realize how many misunderstandings have occurred because of tardiness?!
Eliza: YOU’RE O–
Kalim: I’m sorry! You’re upset with me. It’s totally my bad.
(Everyone: !!)
Eliza: !!
Kalim, smiling: Meeting your special someone’s a once-in-a-lifetime experience. So I spent a long time getting ready… and I got so busy with that that I didn’t realize I was going to be late!!
Kalim: But I wanted to see you. I wanted to see you with all my heart, so I came as fast as I could!
Eliza: Oh my!
*Step, step*
Kalim, circling Eliza: I haven’t seen many ghosts before! It’s so cool that you can fly all on your own! I’m pretty much grounded without my magic carpet!
(Jade: Fufufu. Kalim-san’s sincerity shines through each and every one of his words.
Jamil: … We’re doomed. Absolutely, positively doomed.)
Eliza, following Kalim with her eyes as he circles her: …
Eliza, looking serious: *Spin, spin*
Kalim, smiling: *Spin, spin*
Eliza, starting to smile too: *Spin, spin*
(Jamil and Idia: ?!
Jamil: I don’t believe it, Kalim’s redeemed himself–and he’s…
Epel: … dancing with the ghost bride?!
Lilia: Kufufu, that’s Kalim for you: charming in the most unpredictable of ways.
Cater: Go, Kalim, go! Slay that dance floor!
Ruggie: He could’ve gotten her attention WAY after if he just showed off his fat wallet instead of his dance moves!!)
Kalim: You’re a great dancer! So light on your feet, it’s like we’re floating!
Kalim: We don’t have to worry about stepping on each other’s toes! Come to think of it, do ghosts even have feet to begin with?
Kalim, smiling: Gahahah! You could have two left feet and I’d never know!
Eliza: YOU’RE OUT.
*SMACK*
Kalim: EEEEEH?!
Eliza: How rude!! My prince would never make such inconsiderate comments! He should be always cordial and sensitive to his princess’s feelings!! You sit there and repent for your careless words!
Kalim, surprised: Huh, did I say something wrong just now?!
{Jamil: The fact that you have no clue you said something wrong says it all!)
Jamil, stepping up: Please excuse Kalim.
Jamil, under his breath: ... He’s an idiot.
(Kalim, eyes sparkling: Jamil!! You’re coming to save everyone?)
Eliza: And just who are you with the intricate hair?
Jamil, with a small smile: I believe you’re referring to me? Jamil Viper, your majesty. I’m pleased to meet your acquaintance.
Jamil: I do not claim to possess nearly the same level of charm and talent that my peers do–but if you will have me, I would be happy to call you my own.
Jamil: If it appeals to you, I am quite skilled in matters of domestic work. Cooking, cleaning, and any kind of housework.
Jamil: I’m also a professionally trained bodyguard and I have extensive knowledge of first aid. I will be able to look after you and protect you well into your… golden years.
(Azul: My, it’s rare to see Jamil-san ‘let his hair down’ and be himself, as it were.
Idia: I-Is that really a good thing, I wonder...
Leona, scoffing: Real humble servant you got there, Kalim.
Kalim: Gahahah! Jamil’s just a modest kind of guy!
Floyd: Eeeeh, Sea Lion-senpai was totally just being sarcastic there.)
Eliza: What will you do to prove your love for me?
Jamil: Pardon?
Eliza: I said, ‘What will you do to prove your love for me?’ Would you scale a tower? Slay a mighty dragon? How far does your drive go?
Jamil: I will do whatever is asked of me.
Jamil, to himself: ... even if I don’t particularly care to.
Jamil, crossing his arms: If you request for me to scale a tower, then I will. If you say to slay a dragon, then I have no choice but to do so. My drive only ends where yours does.
Eliza: YOU’RE OUT.
*SMACK*
Jamil, wide-eyed and annoyed-looking: What did I do wrong?! I was certain that I’d gain the ghost’s favor if I went along with everything she asked of me!!
Eliza: Your devotion is extremely shallow!! Where is the emotion in your voice?! The enthusiasm?! Your eyes are deader than a ghost’s!! If you’re going to profess your love, DO IT WITH MORE CONVICTION!!
Eliza: How can you expect to win a princess’s heart with a deadpan expression like that and little meaning behind your words?! I can see right through your deception!!
(Kalim: Aww, you were really close, Jamil! If it makes you feel any better, I thought you looked really cool saying all that stuff!
Azul, smirking: Indeed! I very much enjoyed your heartfelt performance, Jamil-san.)
Jamil: You’re the LAST people I want to hear from!!
Rook: Bonjour, des fantômes!
Eliza and Ghosts: ?!
Eliza: Dear me, the one in the bob cut speaks in a tongue I have never heard before. What language might that be?
Rook, smiling: But of course, it is the language of…
Rook: LOVE!
*insert explosion of sparkles here*
Rook: I, le Chasseur d’Amour, have been searching far and wide for the one to call my own, my beloved. I have chanced a perilous journey through blistering cold and scorching deserts, risking life and limb to find my other other half.
Rook: And now! Now, I have discovered you at long last! Oh, be still, my pounding heart!!
(Leona: Tch. You Pomefiore lot are all shine and no substance.
Vil: Ex-CUSE you? Take that back this instant, Leona. I won’t have you insulting me or my dorm when yours could use a good polish.
Leona: Fat chance.
Jack: … Is now really the time to be arguing about this?)
Rook, dropping to one knee and looking at Eliza tenderly: Mon amour, mon trésor. From the time I first laid my eyes on you… you’ve captured this huntsman’s heart!
Rook: Skin and lips the color of sapphire, supple lips pleading for a kiss, eyes that light up the night sky… You’re truly a vision in your white gown, a beauty to all that behold you!
Rook: For this life, and for every lifetime and every afterlifetime that comes, you shall always hold a ghostly grip over my heart! I will be eternally devoted to you, were you to embrace me as your groom.
Eliza: Ah…!! How romantic!
(Deuce: HUNT-SENPAI IS HAMMING IT UP!!?
Trey: Yup, I’m not surprised. That’s pretty much how he always is.
Deuce: H-Hunt-senpai’s power level is seriously amazing…
Idia: IT’S SERIOUSLY GONNA MAKE ME HURL FROM HOW AMAZINGLY CRINGE IT IS.)
Rook, to Deuce: Ohlala~ Monsieur Spade, your compliment has set my heart aflutter! Such surprise, delivered with such earnest… Oui, your naivete carries your unique brand of charm!
Rook, to Idia: Roi de Ta Chambre. Your intense emotion moves me! Quiet as you typically are, when you call out... oui, the mountains tremble! The world shifts in accordance with your cries. The fear that coats your melancholy voice... it is as though a God of Death has appeared before me, eager to stake a claim upon my soul.
(Deuce: Uh, thanks…? I think.
Idia: A-Are you NUTS?! You’ve seriously gotta be!!)
Eliza: ……………….
Rook: Mon amour, what is distressing you?
Eliza: YOU’RE OUT.
*SMACK*
Rook: !!
Eliza: How cruel can you be?! Letting your eyes wander, and when I’m RIGHT in front of you?! And even flirting with my own groom... I’ll bet that you spout those sweet words to everyone you meet!
Eliza: You’re not a prince! You’re nothing more than a cad, a conman, a playboy!! Get out of my sight! I won’t have you playing with my feelings!!
Rook: Fufu. It appears that I’ve been dealt a swift and harsh rejection!
(Vil, looking annoyed: And yet you’re still smiling without a care in the world...)
Eliza: You with the cute face and large doe eyes! You’re next.
Epel: … Nngh!
Epel, to himself: Calm, Epel. CALM. Don’t lose yer cool o’er the first thing! Ya gotta woo this chick and show Vil just how cool ‘n strong ya really are!!
Epel, smiling and with a hand to his mouth: Eheh. It’s nice to meet you. I’m Epel Felmier. I hope I can… have the chance to be your prince.
Eliza: Appled cheeks, with a blush like apple blossoms and a sweet complexion… You are befitting of your name!
Epel, looking disgusted: *Cringes*
(Deuce: Epel’s soul looks like its left his body…
Ruggie: Where’d he even learn this kinda stuff from?
Vil, glaring: …………………….
Rook, looking proud: Fufu. Monsieur Crab Apple has come a long way.)
Epel, forcing a smile: Thank you, princess. Your kind words humble me.
Epel, to himself: So far, so good…
Eliza: Winsome looks and a polite demeanor… I shall be gracious and overlook your petite stature.
Epel, awkwardly smiling but obviously mad deep down: …………………….
Eliza: But how would you protect me if some dastardly villain were to kidnap me? You appear to be smaller and more fragile than even I.
Epel: !!
Epel: HOLD UP, DID YA JUS’ CALL ME WEAK?!
(Idia, groaning: Aaaaaand there goes any shot at victory.)
Epel, angry: Heh. Ya’d all be eassy pickins!! Ah’ll beat the crap outta ya ‘n show ya what for!! Ain’t no way ya’d stand a chance against ME!!
Epel: I’ll take ya AND yer whole ghost army on!!
Eliza: YOU’RE OUT.
*SMACK*
Epel: CONSARN ITTTT!!
Eliza: A prince would never speak in such an unrefined tone!! Your words blend together, and I can’t understand a lick of what you’re saying!!
Eliza: My prince must be able to clearly communicate his undying love and passion to me!
Eliza: And not only that! No prince would lose his temper at his princess! A prince is cool and mild-mannered at all times!!
Epel: Yer off yee rocker if ya think fancy talk ‘n temper got anythin’ ta do with it!!!
Eliza: Silence! You are no more than a petulant child playing pretend.
Epel: NOT LIKE AH WANNA BE YER APPLE PICKIN’ PRINCE ANYWAYS!
(Vil: Goodness. I held my tongue knowing that chatter from the peanut gallery would throw Epel’s concentration off—but here you are, having lost your composure all on your own.
Vil, glaring: What were you thinking, challenging the bride and the entire army behind her?
Rook: Ohoh! It was an honest effort from Epel-kun! Beauté! 100 points!!)
Epel: DANGNABBIT!!! So close and yet so far…
Ortho: Excuse me, Ghost Bride-san!!
(Idia, shocked: ORTHO?!)
Eliza: What is it now? Haven’t I already seen enough fake princes for 5 lifetimes over?
Eliza: Hmm? Oh, you… You look like my dear Idia-sama!
Ortho: Hehe. It’s only natural, since I’m Nii-san’s little brother!
Eliza: Little brother?! Idia-sama mentioned nothing of the sort to me!
(Trey: Er, that would probably be because he was too busy cowering in fear to bring it up.
Idia: Bingo...)
Eliza: But… you share too many features with my prince for it to just be mere coincidence. The luminous skin, the lustrous hair, the charming smile. Yes, I suppose you must be Idia-sama’s relative after all!
Ortho: Affirmative.
Eliza: So? What is it that you need?
Ortho: Requesting to participate in the wedding festivities!
(Idia: HUUUUUUH?!
Idia: O-Ortho, what’s with this insubordination, going to aid the enemy?! Th-This moment would for sure make its way up into a top 10 anime betrayals list!!
Ace: Ah, shuddap! We’ll explain everything to you later!!)
Eliza, giggling: You wish to join in the ceremony? As Idia-sama’s bride-to-be, I will allow it. It wouldn’t do to leave my dearest bridegroom’s little brother out of our matrimonial celebration.
(Everyone: She accepted it so easily?!
Vil: I’m… feeling faint.
Sebek: IMPOSSIBLE! HOW COULD A CHILD SUCCEED WHERE LILIA-SAMA’S CUTENESS COULD NOT?! THIS IS A TRAVESTY! A TRAVESTY, I TELL YOU!!
Lilia: Kufufu. Perhaps we should have sent in young Ortho from the getgo.)
Eliza: I think you’ll make for a very cute flower boy.
Ortho: !!
Ortho, with a sly, smug expression: I’d actually like to be the ringbearer. That way, I can hand off a very important item to my big brother.
Eliza: You already know what you want to be when you grow up! You’re a proactive little one.
Ortho: All I want is for Nii-san to be safe and happy.
Eliza: Awww! I’ll see to it that you have a proper place in the wedding.
Ghost: Princess, it might be a tight squeeze to make a last minute alteration…
Ortho: I can immediately run the necessary calculations to determine the most efficient way to incorporate an unanticipated guest into the logistics of this event. All I need to do is scan the venue and account for the wedding elements in my algorithms.
Eliza: What? I don’t understand anything that you’re saying.
Ortho: Hehe. You don’t need to! Nii-san says it’s a kind of ‘magic’ only I’m capable of. He’s amazing, right? He built this cool body of mine all by himself!
(Idia: Ortho...)
Eliza: YOU’RE OUT.
*SMACK*
Ortho: Uwah!!
(Everyone: ?!
Cater: Bride-chan’s not holding back!?
Trey: Such a quick change of heart too?!
Jade, sighing: Oya, how terribly cruel.
Floyd: Ehhhhh, Ghostie herself’s recoiling from hitting metal.
Idia: Ortho!! A-Are you okay?!)
Ortho: !!
Ortho: My circuits are locking up!! My commands to execute movement aren’t going through!
(Epel: So robots are affected by her touch?
Idia: Why’s this ghost so OP?)
Eliza: After 500 years of waiting... Today is meant to be MY special day! Mine and Idia-sama’s…!!
Eliza: I don’t want to compete with a relative for the spotlight, nor for Idia-sama’s love and attention!
(Idia: YOU NEVER HAD IT TO BEGIN WITH.)
Eliza, to Ortho: You’ll sit with the rest of them as our guests! I won’t have you anywhere near the altar!!
Ortho: No way… Mission failed?!
(Idia: N-Not even Ortho could stop this crazy woman... I-I’m doomed!! DOOMED, I TELL YOU!!)
*BAM!* (Doors to the wedding venue fly open on their own, and all the lights are snuffed out, then reignited with green flames.)
(Lilia and Sebek: !!
Idia: What? What’s this feeling? Why do I feel like there should be final boss music here?
Lilia: This magic is…
Sebek: OOOOOH! HE’S COME!
Sebek, to the others: DROP TO YOUR KNEES AND PROSTRATE YOURSELF BEFORE HIS GREATNESS!!
Leona, angrily: In your dreams and over MY dead body.
Ace, to Sebek: We couldn’t kneel even if we wanted to!)
Malleus, appearing in a flash of yellow-green lights (Silver is close behind): Well now, quite a glittering assemblage we have here.
Malleus, looking at the other failed grooms: Royalty, nobility, the gentry… how quaint. Even the rabble.
(Everyone except Lilia and Sebek: Grrr…
Lilia: Malleus, whatever are you doing here?)
Malleus: You could say I was ‘in the neighborhood’. Passing by, as it were. It occurred to me that I should make a stop to grant Shroud and his bride-to-be my blessing as his peer.
Silver: My apologies, Fa… Lilia-sama. I tried to stop him, but…
(Lilia: Kufufu. No apologies needed. This is shaping up to be quite the spectacle.)
Eliza: I don’t believe this! Yet another wave of intruders seeking my hand?
Malleus: What strange ideas you have. I had no such intentions.
Silver, putting out an arm to stop his prince from stepping up: Please leave this to me, Malleus-sama.
(Lilia: Ohoh, so it all comes down to this.
Sebek: GO GET THAT GHOST, SILVER! YOU MUST AVENGE LILIA-SAMA!!
Kalim: Oooh, are we cheering Silver on? Lemme help out!
Jamil: By the Seven, PLEASE don’t.
Azul, smiling: Kalim-san’s enthusiasm is something to behold!)
Malleus: … Very well. I entrust you to act on my behalf, Silver.
Silver, sighing: …
Eliza: I don’t have time to keep entertaining any more of these preposterous proposals! Please vacate the premises at once, or I will have no choice but to…
Silver: Please wait. I don’t want to fight you any more than you do. All I ask is that you remain open to peaceful negotiations.
Eliza: !!
Eliza: You have mesmerizing eyes. They’re like an aurora borealis!
Silver: My eyes…?
Bird on his shoulder: *Chirp, chirp*
Silver, to the bird: I’m sorry, not now. This is important.
Eliza: … Speak, then. What makes you think you have anything worth offering when all the others before you have failed? They’ve only proved that Idia-sama is the only one in this world for me!
Silver, to Eliza: If it is a groom you seek, then I volunteer as tribute.
Silver: Truthfully, I don’t know whether I meet your standards, or how I compare to Idia-senpai, but… I know in my heart of hearts that I must do whatever it takes to defend to protect those who are not able to protect themselves.
Eliza: !!
Silver: If you must fight, I will be your sword. If you are in danger, I will run to you and be your shield.
Silver: If you were to choose me, I would ensure that you remain safe. I swear it on my life, and on my honor as a knight.
Silver: You have my word.
(Jade: My, Silver-san is honest to a fault.
Sebek, smugly: Of course he is!! Silver can charm the pants off of a snake!!
Lilia: That’s my boy~
Epel: Th-The ghost bride looks entranced… Is she seriously rethinking her decision?!)
Silver: …
Eliza: …
Silver: … Zzz…
(Lilia: Oh dear. What inopportune timing.
Jack: Oi, oi… This isn’t the time to be falling asleep!!
Floyd: I’m way more surprised that he’s able to sleep so soundly standing.
Idia: I’M ABOUT TO DIE, AND YOU’RE JUST GONNA SNOOZE?! Do any of you people have your priorities straight?!)
Eliza: ………………..
Eliza: YOU’RE OUT.
*SMACK*
Silver, snapping wide awake: ?!
His bird: *Nervous tweet as it flies away*
(Everyone: ?!)
Eliza: Never in my life… have I seen someone more princess-like than me!!
Eliza: Beauty, grace, and a noble heart… and even cute animal companions to boot!! You’re the dictionary definition of a fairy tale princess!! So much so that it hurts!!
Eliza: It hurts even more to watch you sleep!! You SLEEP prettier than me!!
(Everyone: HUUUUUH?!
Ace: What kind of a reason is THAT?!
Trey: She was so close to getting the point… before veering off to the completely wrong conclusion.)
Eliza: A sleeping prince and an alert princess… It’s all wrong!!
Eliza: It should be the prince that kisses the princess awake from her cursed slumber, not the other way around!! I won’t accept this kind of a role reversal!
(Riddle: In other words, she’s jealous.
Vil, sighing: Set to a certain script, it seems.)
Silver, to Diasomnia: I apologize for failing you, Malleus-sama. Lilia-sama. Sebek.
(Sebek: HOW?! How could a single ghost have bested us?! We’ve failed the young master...!!
Lilia: It’s quite alright. You tried your best, Silver, Sebek. We all did.)
Eliza: ENOUGH!! I’ve had enough of this charade. This nonsense of entertaining proposals ends here.
Eliza, giggling: Tonight, I’m going to be married to my one true love with you, my captive audience, as our witnesses!!
Ghosts: Idia-sama is almost ready to walk down the aisle with you, princess! Just a little longer until your fated happily ever after.
Eliza: Ooh, this is so exciting!!
Malleus: That is enough.
Ghost Bride: !!
Ghost Bride: This daunting, overwhelming presence… Just who are you, horned one?
Malleus, laughing a little: Oh dear, what an awkward situation. You must forgive me. I’m still feeling quite distressed at having not received an invitation to this momentous occasion.
Malleus: And quite miffed that you would so swiftly take out my retainers.
Malleus, raising a hand: Malleus Draconia. Crown prince to the Briar Valley. Charmed, I’m sure.
(Leona, annoyed: Oh, great. JUST what we needed, the lizard.
Sebek: QUIET, YOU CUR! You have no right to speak to Malleus-sama that way! You’re nothing more than a kitten paralyzed in fear before his magnanimous aura!!)
Malleus, to Sebek: Sebek.
(Sebek: YESSIR!)
Malleus: I believe I’ve already had this discussion with you on multiple occasions.
Malleus, smirking: See to it that you treat the… dignitaries of other countries with proper respect. Do not make me repeat myself again.
(Leona: Grrrr…
Sebek, looking crestfallen and conflicted, to Malleus: A-As you wish, young master…!!
Ace: Whoa, your lameness is so off the charts now…)
Eliza: !!
Eliza: My!! This is how a real prince SHOULD be!
(Everyone, including Malleus: ?!)
Eliza: Over 180 cm! An air of nonchalance! Luminous skin! Lidded eyes! A charming smile! Long lustrous hair! Lips that long for a kiss! Grace and poise beyond compare! Mindful and diplomatic, with a mysterious air about him!
Eliza: A real, genuine blue blood!
(Ace: Is it just me, or did she tack on MORE items to her list just now?!
Jade: It seems our Ghost Bride’s feelings may be just as fickle as yours, Floyd.
Floyd: Ehhhh, don’t compare me to her. It feels gross.)
Eliza, dramatically, with a hand to her head: A tall, dark, and handsome stranger disrupting the holy matrimony of my fated prince and I...
(Idia: D-Did that do it? Did Malleus-shi manage to win her over with the power of ‘the mysterious prince’ archetype?!)
Eliza: Oh, the sorrow of being ensnared by love on both sides! My beloved Idia-sama, faced with a sudden love rival! This is… THE FABLED “LOVE TRIANGLE”!!
Eliza: Oooh, having two suitors engage in combat for the right to a princess’s hand in marriage...!! It’s so romantic!
*Swoons*
(Everyone: WHAAAAAAT?!
Idia: S-Somehow the situation got even WORSE?!
Ortho: This is a scene straight out of one of Nii-san’s shoujo manga!!
Ortho: … But!! I have no doubt that he can overpower Malleus Draconia-san and claim victory!
Idia: P-Please! I’ve already been through enough today, I don’t need to be getting involved in any fights on top of that!!
Sebek: YOU KNOW NOT WHAT YOU SPEAK OF!! THE YOUNG MASTER COULD EASILY FLATTEN ANY FOE LIKE THE INSIGNIFICANT WORM THAT THEY ARE!
Jack: I don’t think the identity of the winner is the issue...)
Malleus, confused: … I beg your pardon?
Malleus: You are mistaken. I never came with the intention of proposing to a phantom.
Malleus, sarcastically: I would appreciate it if you did not assign arbitrary labels to me. I have only come to witness what I am sure will be the happiest of unions. I’m no home wrecker.
Malleus: In any case, did I hear correctly that you are a princess?
Eliza: …
(Deuce, wincing: Here it comes…! Please watch out, Draconia-senpai!
Idia: It’s the blue screen of death for me...)
Eliza: … Yes. I am a princess.
(Everyone: ?!)
Eliza: 500 years ago, my nation was attacked by a hostile neighbor. In my attempt to flee, I was…
Malleus: … I see. Yours is a story that ends in tragedy.
Eliza: I was never able to meet my one true love before passing. You understand as fellow nobility, don’t you? Isn’t that sad? Don’t I… Don’t I deserve happiness?
Malleus: ……………………… No, I disagree.
Eliza: !!
Malleus: The world does not owe anyone a happily ever after. Not you, nor I.
Malleus: Cruel as it is, it is the way of the world.
Malleus: And moreover… you are the sovereign of your country. It goes without saying that nobility must place the needs of the many over the wants and the feelings of one.
Malleus: Your duty is to your people and to your country, not to your heart.
Malleus, glancing around at the ghosts: A number of your attendants are with you. Have you given a thought as to how they may feel? What they may think?
Ghosts: Th-That’s not true! We... We just want our princess to be happy.
Ghosts: All this time, she smiled at us and told us “it’s fine”, when she was suffering deep down. Our lonely, tragic princess...
(Ace: AH GEEZ, HOW ENTITLED CAN YOU GET?!
Everyone: !!
Deuce: Oi, Ace! Are you looking for more trouble?!
Ace: What, you’re just gonna sit around and do nothing? Your mouths still work, don’t they? How about you actually DO something with them?
Ace: Listen up, lady! The perfect prince? He doesn’t exist!! And if you think he is, you’re only deluding yourself!!)
Eliza: !!
Malleus, to himself: Ohoh. That Trappola... Fufufu, quite the mouth on him.
Malleus, laughing: I came seeking a happy ceremony. Instead, I find shadows of the past, clinging on to desperate hopes and unfulfilled dreams.
Malleus, smirking: And a princess so vain as to put her own desires above those of her people, her guests, and even her bridegroom.
Malleus: Galivanting about, so blindly in pursuit of love that they cannot stop to think of how they are inconveniencing those around her.
Malleus: A sham wedding such as this is not worthy of receiving my blessing.
Eliza, looking sad: …
(Silver: Malleus-sama…
Sebek: Young master…!!
Lilia: Malleus…
Lilia, to himself: … You’re speaking from your own heart, hmm?)
Puffy Ghost: That’s enough!! You… How dare you barge in and begin lecturing the princess like this!
Puffy Ghost: You could never understand a maiden’s heart! You could never understand her!
*SMACK*
Puffy Ghost: !!
(Everyone: !!
Sebek: She… She just… slapped the young master…
Sebek: REJECTING LILIA-SAMA, SILVER, AND THEN MALLEUS-SAMA?! THIS ILL-TEMPERED BRIDE HAS TRASH TASTE IN MEN!
Leona: Oi, quit your shouting!! You’re going to blow out my ears!!
Vil: I hate to say this, but I agree with Leona.
Lilia, to himself: Malleus could have easily avoided that blow, but...)
*BOOM!* (Outside, lightning strikes.)
Malleus: ………………………………………..
Malleus, calm but cold: … Did that do anything to fill the hole in your heart?
Eliza: …
Eliza, to her attendants: Please take him away and seat him among the other guests--Idia-sama and I will proceed with the ceremony as planned!
Ghosts: Yes, princess!! (The Ghosts rush off for final preparations)
Malleus: To think that this is how I would be invited to an event... Hmph. How rude.
Eliza: I’ll show you…! I’ll show you the happiest of endings!!
Puffy Ghost, looking sad: …………………………………..
Eliza, to Idia: Idia-sama! Please don’t be shy! There’s no need for you to keep dodging my kisses. Let’s prove our love to all of these fake princes!
Eliza: Midnight and our happily ever after... they’re just a single peck away!
(Idia, looking defeated: ... Womp womp womp. Looks like it’s game over for me, no resets or extra lives or save scumming. Good-bye, cruel world. I leave my anime merch and manga collection to Ortho.
Ortho, distressed: Nooo, Nii-san!!
Ace, to the Ghosts: Hey, are you guys seriously gonna just move forward with this? You’re...
Ace: ...
Ace: ...?
Ace: Huh? I can move again? When did that happen...?
Malleus, quietly, as the ghosts cart him past Ace: ... I’ll entrust the course of this story to you, Trappola. Show me the truest of happy endings.
Ace: !!
Lilia, off to the side and to himself: ... My, so a youngster from Heartslabyul has been “blessed”.
Ace, grabbing his bouquet from the ground and smirking: Heh, looks like you’ve made a good choice~ I won’t let you down.
[From here, just picture Ace confronting Eliza again, Puffy buffing up, and basically the rest of the event playing out the same as it did in canon (maybe with some extra dialogue from the additional students, and Riddle/Epel/Rook still being frozen instead of mobile).]
***BONUS***
Grim: Step aside, ya chumps! The great Grim-sama’s here to woo the lady ghost!
(Everyone: ?!
Idia: Grim-shi?!)
Eliza: Who’s this… sassy lost tanuki?
Grim: I’M NOT A TANUKI!
Grim: I’m the great Grim-sama! Remember that name, cuz I’m gonna be the strongest magician in the world someday!! I’m gonna go down in the annals of magic history!
Grim: Check THIS out!
*FWOOSH* (Grim breathes a plume of fire, just narrowly missing Ace and Deuce’s heads)
(Ace, angry: OI, WATCH IT!! I almost got roasted!
Deuce, sighing: I saw my life flash before my eyes for a second…)
Grim, crossing his arms: How’s that? Pretty impressive, huh?
Eliza: Be that as it may, I can’t marry a tanuki! My prince must be a human–or at the very least, something resembling a human!
Grim: What?! I’m WAY better than those saps! And how do ya know that I won’t turn into a handsome human when ya kiss me at the altar, huh?!
(Idia: E-Eh? But cats are just objectively better creatures overall than humans of any kind...)
Eliza: No chance, no way! I’d rather kiss a mucus-covered frog than a furry beast!
Grim, angry: Lady, you don’t know what you’re missing out on! The great Grim has more charisma in ONE paw than these sorry excuses for ‘princes’ have in their entire bodies!
Eliza: YOU’RE OUT.
*SMACK*
Grim: FNGHNYA!? THAT SLAP SMARTS!!
Eliza: A tanuki that talks back to its princess has no place being a prince! At best, you can be a cute talking animal companion or sidekick! I would invite you to come back when Idia-sama and I are seeking a pet, but we’re more of dog people than cat people!
(Idia: Th-That’s a lie!! Cats are obviously superior!!
Idia: ... Though she hasn’t been listening to a thing I’ve been saying all night anyway...)
Grim: YOU’VE GOTTA BE JOKING!!
(Ace: BAHAHAHAH! She got you good, Grim! Serves you right for almost boiling us alive.
Deuce: Oof, I guess the more, the merrier…)
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