#criticism pls

[cat-jammies]

IM SO PROUD OF THIS BUT IDK IF IVE BEEN LOOKING AT IT TOO LONG AND THATS WHY I LIKE IT SM, SO CAN SOMEONE CONFIRM IF IT ACTUALLY LOOKS GOOD OR WHAT I CAN FIX BEFORE I START RENDERING PLS ^^,

I have genuinely never done lineart this like smooth before tho so yay! ^^

Edit: it’s done!!!! ^^ ty for all the kind words mwah

Also a few people said they wanted to colour it, and ur totally welcome to! ^^ just credit me for the lineart if that is okay <33

edit: UR ALL SO KIND AND IM HONA CRY OMG HOW DO FUNNY LITTLE INTERNET PPL MAKE ME SO HAPPY AHHHHHHHHH (seriously though I’ve felt down abt my art lately but everyone is being so kind and it’s made me like super motivated and happy! So tysm mwah <33)

#katana #katara atla #atla #avatar #avatar the last airbender #katara avatar #waterbending #fanart #atla fanart #lineart #wip #tips #criticism pls #criticism #ibispaint #ibispaintx #rendering #this took me 2 hours #just for lineart #so I need to know whether it actually looks good or if my eyes are decieving em #END RESULT TOOK ME 7 HOURS #HHHHHHHHHH

[screwzara]

Tried a painting look

Any tips? 👀👀👀

#art #criticism pls #jcjnfjfjf #digital art #digital painting

[your-turn-to-play]

I tried updating Leah's borders, what do you guys think? Any suggestions and criticism, I'm not that good at pixel art right now, I just know some funky shading tricks and that's it and I still need more funky shading tricks

#pixel art #criticism pls #fangame #kimi ga shine #your turn to die #yttd au #yttd oc #oc #sprite

[netheritenugget]

Sometimes, a fic doesn't have to get published, it can just be a series of messages on a Discord channel, between a dedicated group of friends going "oooh, you know what else would be cool?" continuously over a period of weeks and months :)

#For those of you only seeing this post and not the subsequent reblogs pls know that this post is not a criticism it is a Hug

[toodrunktofindaurl]

“you’re my tether”

#critical role #critical role fanart #imodna #imogen temult #laudna #listen i teared up drawing this #pls support me on patreon so i can afford to draw pieces like these more often #because my god did i miss it #and do i love it #anyway DO NOT SEPARATE THEM #MaryneArt

[biorust-art]

"Leave Him-- He's Dead."

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[Image Description: A comic featuring Ashton Greymoore's fall from Critical Role. The comic has three panels. The first is a low perspective looking up at a leering tower, the two moons are shining, Catha is in a crescent and the city of Jrusar sleeps at the edges. The windows to Hexum's manor are red, and from the top window of the tower, Ashton falls along with shards of sparkling glass. The second panel is of Ashton, laying on their back with their head turned to the side. Half of their face has been crushed and crumbled into pebbles. Blood seeps all around them and shards of amethyst crystal sit in the foreground. Ashton's remaining eye glows red. The final panel is an areal view. Ashton lays with red all around him and two members of the Nobodies shirk away from their body. The shattered glass all around Ashton looks like a crescent moon. End ID]

#ashton greymoore #critical role #bells hells #critroleart #artist on tumblr #cr3 #i spent days on this yall pls show this some love #the perspective lines....... dayss

[talkdilftome]

ride, cowgirl

joel miller x fem!reader

summary: you ask joel if you can ride him

warnings: smut, piv, riding, fingering, one use of the word daddy (i'm sorry), joel's southern drawl, soft sex

word count: 1.1K

joel’s scruff tickled your face as you kissed him, lips molding together, his tongue teasing yours. you couldn’t get enough of him. his soft lips and hard, defined chest; his thick brows that furrowed as you pulled away. there was lust in his eyes - a look that you were grateful for (considering that your panties were soaked). 

joel bent forward, pressing sloppy kisses against your neck. you whispered his name, as desperate as a prayer. your voice only spurred him on, pressing you up against the kitchen counter, the sharp edge poking your lower back. you arched, pressing into him, running your fingers through his soft hair. an idea sparked through your mind. 

“joel..” 

“yeah darlin’?”

“can i ride you?”

his lips against your neck stilled, cock growing painfully hard. he licked a trail upwards and bit the shell of your ear softly.

“fuck, baby. ‘course you can.” he was breathless, in awe of you. “let’s go upstairs.” 

joel led you up the stairs, fingers laced within yours. you peeked in ellie’s room, mentally noting to be quiet. joel’s eyes found yours, reading your mind.

“nothin’ to worry about, darlin’. ellie’s at cat’s.” you nodded, following him into his room across the hall and shutting the door behind you. you crawled onto his bed, relishing in his soft covers. he sat at the edge of the bed, a small smile on his face. 

“you gonna fuck me baby? or are you just gonna lay in my bed all night?”

you sat up, skin warming at his brusque words. you leaned onto your hands, crawling towards him. you crawled onto his lap, looping your arms around his neck. 

“can’t i do both?” you smiled, feeling his cock twitch underneath you. you ground your cunt onto him, the hard of his cock rubbing against your clit. you let out a soft moan before joel captured your lips again. 

joel released you, only for a moment to discard his flannel and jeans and lay himself against the headboard. you took the opportunity to do the same, both of you only in your underwear now. you sat on his lap, once again rubbing your clit along his thick shaft. his warm, calloused hands grazing up and down along your sides, then reaching up and cupping your lace-covered breasts. 

“god, sweetheart, you’re gorgeous,” joel breathed, enamored with you. enamored with your body, your pussy, your heart. his chest swelled at the sight of you grinding your hips back and forth upon his. he leaned forward, letting your bra straps fall and unhooking it, throwing it to the floor. your breasts fell, nipples perked. joel was quick to take one in his mouth, sucking on your sensitive nipple, while pinching and kneading the other. 

you moaned, running your hands through his hair once again, gripping tight and pulling him close. your pussy clenched around nothing, aching for his thick cock. you took joel’s wrist in your hand, pulling it from your nipple and leading it down to your cunt. his fingers ghosted down your stomach before slowly dipping down past your panties. 

his thick fingers brushed your clit gently, pulling a gasp from you before continuing further, dipping into your wet hole. he pushed one finger into your tight heat and curled, causing your head to fall onto his muscular shoulder. 

“joel,” you whined, wetness dripping down his finger. “i need you.”

he tsked. “need to open you up first darlin’. don’t want daddy’s cock to hurt ya, right?” 

you nodded, dazed. all you could think about was joel and his strong shoulders and his thick voice and his big dick. all you could think about was his hot mouth on yours as you squeezed around his finger. he added another, slowly stretching your pussy, thumb rolling over your swollen clit. 

“jo-” you started, almost asking him to fuck you again, but he shushed you. 

“you ready?” you nodded as he pulled his fingers out of you, and slid your panties off. you did the same to his boxers, tossing both to the floor. you stared at his thick cock in awe, his head pink and swollen and beautiful. you met his eyes and kissed him fervently, his cock brushing through your folds. your whimpers were the only sound heard throughout the house. 

you wrapped a hand around his length, slowly sinking onto him. your cunt stretched around his broad girth and you squeezed your eyes shut at the burn. joel pulled you into a kiss again, seeking to ease your pain. 

“s’okay darlin’, i got you. go real slow.” once he was fully sheathed, you sat for a moment, adjusting to his size and resting your forehead against his. you began to move slowly, letting his tip brush lightly against your g-spot. 

“feels good, joel. feels so good,” you slurred, picking up your pace. you were bouncing on him now, putting on a show. his eyes shifted from your face, mouth open and moaning, to your breasts bouncing along with you, to the sight of your cunt sliding up and down along his cock. his hands rested on your ass now, helping you glide up and forcing you down, his head bruising your spot. 

“f-fuck!” you whimpered, head thrown back. 

“so fuckin gorgeous,” joel grunted, watching you lean back and letting his dick curve and hit your spot even harder. his gaze was glued to your pussy, amazed at the way your wet cunt swallowed him. “tell me this pussy’s mine.”

“it’s yours, joel, all yours.” your moans became staccato as joel grabbed your ass harder and began to fuck you from beneath, lewd slapping filling the room. you fell forward, hands gripping his shoulders as you locked eyes with him, wanting to watch him as he came. his own moans started to sound, mixing with yours. 

“want you to come with me, baby. can you do that for me?” you could tell he was close, just by the change in his voice. the hunger that laced his voice. you nodded frantically, your hand reaching down to touch your clit, rubbing tight, hard circles to the pace that he was fucking you at. 

“i’m close, joel.”

“ugh,” he moaned, “me too. where do you want it, darlin’?”

“inside, please, please fill me up, joel!” you exclaimed as the tightness built up, cresting as you came. your nails dug into his shoulders, overwhelmed with pure pleasure. seconds later, you felt his dick twitch, and the warmth of his come filling your cunt. 

you fell forward, resting your head on his chest, his dick softening inside of you. you placed a peck on his sternum before laying your ear to his chest, hearing his soft heartbeat echo. his hand found your hair, fingers pushing it behind your ear. you felt safe in his embrace, eventually falling asleep to the hum of his breath and the rise and fall of his chest. 

#this is my first time writing joel #sry if it's ooc #spare me of your criticism pls #joel miller #joel miller smut #joel miller x reader #tlou #tlou2 #the last of us #the last of us 2 #the last of us hbo #pedro pascal #pedro pascal fanfiction #pedro pascal smut #pedro pascal x reader #ellie williams #joel the last of us #tlou fic #the last of us fic #joel miller fic #jackson era joel miller

[logan-the-artist]

decided to try and draw a wheelchair for the first time and why not shove prinxiety in there

commission me!

#if anyone has any criticism on how i can improve pls tell me!!! #i used a reference but i don’t know if it’s very accurate #my art #drawing #art #sketch #sanders sides #sanders sides fanart #log’s art #virgil sanders #ts virgil #tss virgil #virgil sanders sides #roman sanders sides #roman sanders #ts roman #tss roman #prinxiety #romantic prinxiety #roman x virgil #virgil x roman #disabled virgil

[blorbologist]

Gwendolyn was absolutely listening in when Percy gave Fearne and Mister a gun lmao

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I think we as a fandom need to consider the idea of ‘Calvin and Hobbes but it’s Gwen and her owlbear teddy’ more. Redrew parts of this og comic by Bill Waterson but with the de Rolos

Alt last panel:

#critical role #campaign 1 #vox machina #percy de rolo #percival de rolo #gwendolyn de rolo #de rolo family #perc'ahlia #percahlia #does it count as perc'ahlia if it deals with one of their kids and papa Percy? NKTRGNGKRTN #pls I slaved over this silly joke #calvin and hobbes #im just combining my beloved childhood Thing with my hyperfixation! it's fun and good practice

[bixbiboom]

Sam’s gas can has a very special announcement for Travis! Somehow, Travis did not register the presence of a massive sign saying “Travis I’m pregnant” at the table.

Sam soon swapped it out for a sign saying “Travis it’s a meme.” Laura is grateful, this is not a bit to announce another pregnancy. Travis doesn’t know what anyone is talking about.

“Internet: no one is pregnant.” Be chill, guys, it’s just a gag.

#sam riegel #sam's gas can #critical role #cr spoilers #cr c3e067 #gentle reminder: pls don’t message me with theories about unconfirmed pregnancies of cast members <3

[cjskribblez]

They got that "air of tragedy" about them

#vaxleth #idk its just the vibes I'm not caught up outside of the show #that being said no major spoilers pls! #vax'ildan #keyleth #keyleth of the air ashari #tlovm #critical role #tlovm fanart #critical role fanart #the legend of vox machina

[soup-bender]

Mog wake up your gf is eating people and feeling bad about her choice of snakk

Tumblr hates letting me have good quality on images but here, have a fully coloured piece that was supposed to be a colour/face study but Imodna happened.

some lil close ups or whatever

#pls peep the references i scrambled in this #its like a game of seek and find #im having feelings and thoughts about hunger of the shadows #imogen doesn't know... #critical role #imodna #imogen temult #laudna #critical role fanart #bells hells #critical role art

[amysgiantbees]

The Christmas animation was so disrespectful to Wyll.

I want you to imagine how funny this would be if it was Astarion blushing at his abuser instead.

Like it's frustrating enough that Wyll had to go through rewrites and so seems to have the least amount of content as well as the most inconstant writing. However, unless this special was made over a year ago, which I doubt, there's no excuse for Wyll to still be characterized like this and for his creators to be doing him dirty while putting so much attention into everyone else. It's also so weird that it's Karlach who's egging him on. She's Mizora's No. 2 hater.

#bg3 #balders gate 3 #myanalysis #baldurs gate #bg3 animation #baulders gate wyll #bg3 wyll #wyll #wyll ravengard #dnd #bg3 astarion #baulders gate astarion #astarion #astarion ancunin #astarion bg3 #mizora bg3 #baldurs gate mizora #karlach #larian critical #larian pls #larian studios

[crumbpigeon]

they are a package deal, pls do not separate  💖 

#i did these last year so they're wayyy less detailed than the fearne piece #anyway its big missing laudna hours #imodna #imogen x laudna #imogen temult #laudna #bells hells #cr fanart #critical role fanart #cr3 #cr imogen #cr laudna #critical role #pls let them have a very romantic reunion!!! i am begging!! #myart

[skyeblue8]

Ɗᥙҽ 𝜏σ ᙏყ Ɲҽɯ⨍σᥙɳԃ Ƒιχα𝜏ισɳ... ♚

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Specifically with the Gluttonous Sin of Beelzebub being my favorite Sin of the group (not necessarily in Helluva Boss, but just in general), I wanted to make a ranking list of my favorite Queen Bee redesigns and their creators for really no other reason than I just feel like it. Now, this is all personal opinions and should not be taken to heart by any means, it's just for fun:

#1. "Beelzebub & Bibi" by @gravcore

♡ In terms of an actual redesign of the original, I love how this artist made "Bibi" because, for one thing, they made sense of the originals hair by giving her a ponytail since way too many characters have a mohawk style (Loona included); two, I cannot explain just how much I adore the clothes they gave her. The top is actually insect based and gorgeous, and not some recolor version of Loona's outfit; and third, they made canon Bee her own character rather than a royal because nothing about the OG read "Ancient Sin" to anybody.

♡ Now, in terms of the actual Beelzebub, here, she's legitimately stunning. Rather than a redesign, I can tell this was the original long before the Queen Bee episode came out, and I love how it reads both "70's party girl" and "regal ruler" all in one. That, and the actual bug design aspect and the color scheme. Above all else, I love how they incorporated the lava stomach in her design, too.

#2. "Beelzebub" by @s3tok41b4

♡ This design can best be described as a literal re-imagine of the canon Beelzebub as it shares almost all her similarities with the actual bug aspect to it that it desperately needed. It's legitimately simplistic but still appealing to the eye, futher showing us that Viv was perfectly capable of making something so simple, but actively chose to make it more confusing than it had to be.

#3. "Beelzebub" by @ruinxl0ve

♡ Similar to the first two, this shares both a regal and party girl bug aesthetic with the added bonus of actually being beautifully emotive despite not even having a mouth. I feel this beautifully differentiates the design from the original while also making it recognizable and I feel that it kinda feeds into the original concept that Queen Bee could literally "feel the vibe", hinting to her being an empath in some manner.

#4. "The Three Bees" by @onehelluvatime

♡ Long story short, these are three individual versions of the Queen Bee and her new placing within the Hellaverse outside of the canon one. For more in-depth explanation of these interpretations, it's best to check the blog yourself. Truly, I love these designs not only because of the visual redesigns themselves, but also the well-crafted and creative explanations and backgrounds regarding these characters. I especially like the idea that the hellhounds within society are half-undead with skull-like appendages and facial aspects.

#5. "Spontaneous Beelzebub" by @redd-byrd

♡ I know it's essentially the same as the canon design, but with the small tweaks that were made to this one (the giant "Bee Butt", the added black lines, the actual bug-like wings, the blue-thin eyes), all of them give a more clear indication (at least to me) that this Bee is more higher up than her fellow hellhounds, meaning she looks a lot more like a hybrid thus making her more grand. It's nice how they added these small details for improvement while still essentially leaving the design like its original.

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Anyway, thanks for listening to my Ted Talk. Have a nice day!

#helluva boss critical #vivziepop critical #helluva boss criticism #helluva boss #helluva boss critique #hazbin hotel critical #helluva critical #hazbin hotel #hazbin hotel critique #vivziepop criticism #personal opinion #pls dont hate me #pls dont be offended #credit to artist #credit to artists #helluva boss redesign #beelzebub #queen beelzebub #queen bee

[devdirt]

Alternative ideas for Lucifer's wings!

I'm no artist but I found his wings to be very plain in that reveal shot. The lack of feather details leave them as giant red blots taking up nearly half of the screen. I think he could go with some kind of accessories, gold to match his accent and elegant to match the suit design. Chains or a sparkling cloth can add some lighting effects in there, or you can go with the starry design on the inside of his wings to give the large feeling of space to accompany how much of the screen they're taking up.

If he's a former angel, the morning star, there should be some kind of shiny, sparkly or starry effect in there! Play it up!

#hazbin hotel #lucifer morningstar #hazbin redesign #hazbin hotel critique #hazbin critique #pls be nice im not an artist lol #vivziepop critical #hazbin hotel critical #hazbin critical