#deleted dialogue

[mistikfir]

Mizumono

#hannibal #hannibaledit #hugh dancy #will graham #mizumono #deleted dialogue #hannimake #mistikfiredit

[daitranscripts]

In Hushed Whispers: Deleted Dialogue

Related Quest: In Hushed Whispers

Various snippets of dialogue that didn’t make it into the final cut of the game - listed in scene order.

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Varric: Walking into a trap. This bring back some memories.

Cassandra: Let us hope this ends better than your stories wound. Varric: Not up for a frantic run through the castle with three dragons on your heels, Seeker?

Solas: Let us hope this ends as just one more for your collection.

Vivienne: Shall we go in?

Varric: Just keep Alexius talking until our agents have finished their dirty work. You ready?

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Vivienne: We shouldn’t keep the magister waiting, my dear. He’s so been looking forward to this.

Sera: Oh, of course. Can’t have fancypants knot his knickers.

Cassandra: I’m sure he is. I hope we’re as prepared.

Iron Bull: Sooner we get inside, sooner I can hit something.

Vivienne: Let’s try not to start a fight until Leliana’s people have finished their work, shall we?

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Blackwall: It’s a brave thing you’re doing. Let’s hope we live to talk about it.

Sera: Is “brave” just another way of saying “dumb”?

Blackwall: Just remember: we have to keep Alexius busy until his reinforcements have been dealt with.

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[heckoffmate]

Did you know they cut "Tier 9" from this infamous Adventure Time scene?

#my art #fan art #adventure time #jake the dog #tier 15 #tier 9 #deleted scene #deleted dialogue #cut scene #cut dialogue

[justobuy]

So proud of his jokes and having a support.

(small deleted scene)

#THAT SECOND PICTURE THOUGH #almost meme material #phantom investigators #storyboard #deleted dialogue #jericho #kira williams

[mourninglamby]

someone asked for my fav c!disc scene. Guys why did he say this

#I ACCIDENTALLY DELETED THE. INITIAL ASK #IM SIRRYYY #whatever anyways #idk why I made this a comic #also this is a good time to reiterate if ur a dream Stan ur not welcome here fuck off #this is cdream. his character who is also fucking repulsive evil awful #anyways #c!tommy #dsmp #my art #art #doodles #comic #link is the audio for the dialogue

[insanesonofabitch]

Me when I remember that Dean was supposed to gently and lovingly touch Cas’ face in Tombstone:

#they deleted that and deleted the dialogue about Dean being the one and only one to spread Cas’ ashes #in the meadow by the windmill cus he thought Cas would love it. and he did. #they deleted all that. #supernatural #spn #spn deleted scenes #spn 13x06 #tombstone #destiel #deancas #casdean #dean winchester #castiel #dean x castiel #reiotalks

[the-modern-typewriter]

"Tell me something nice."

"What?"

"It's been a day," the protagonist said. "And I feel spectacularly mediocre. So tell me something nice."

The villain blinked at them. "You're wonderful."

"And now tone it down to something believable."

"I happen to really like you," the villain said, "and if you were extraordinary I'd have to kill you."

"...I'll take it."

The villain snorted.

#creative writing #writing #heroes and villains #villains #flash fiction #dialogue #enemies to lovers #to delete maybe #writing inspo #hero x villain #i'll write properly later

[bixels]

I'm glad nobody's questioned why Sunset's personality is so different in the AU, but I'll explained anyways. AU Sunset basically has Tempest Shadow's personality. I decided not to adapt Tempest because too many redeemed villains, she doesn't play an important role in the overall story, and her broken horn is so cool and unique to her as a unicorn that any adaptation wouldn't do it justice. So I fused the two together. Sunset's backstory and hotheadedness with Tempest's tired, jaded, anti-social disposition and fighting skills.

Anyways, I hope it's not too jarring of a change. The more I develop Sunset, the more you'll probably notice how OOC she seems. I'll probably end up adopting Sunset into an OC once I'm done with the AU, since she's basically a completely different character.

#i'm saying all this cuz i'm reading tempest's mini arc in the comics #and i'm thinking “wow. all of tempest's dialogue fits au sunset better than actual canon sunset” #just constantly silently stewing in her own head and suppressing eyerolls and avoiding hugs or long conversations with anyone #idk. i just find this sorta personality way more interesting and fun to work with than canon sunset #pre-redemption sunset's just a high school bully. post-redemption sunset's fun and complex but she's just a little too nice and apologetic #like. she kinda has protagonist syndrome where she's allowed to have flaws but not ones that make her disagreeable or hard to root for #so she just ends up a bit more boring than villain sunset. at least starlight got to keep her bitchiness and sass lol #gg20s sunset is an edgy badass loser who can reload a 6-shooter in a split second but also hasn't taken a bath or spoken to anyone in 5 day #wants to do her best in doing the right thing but doesn't know how #personal #delete later #tbh between redeemed villains i like tempest way more. but sunset's more popular so. majority rules

[aq2003]

has anyone gotten the idea that odysseus' storyline in hades 2 is a depiction/exploration of trauma over his SA and how he's blaming himself for things that were out of his control? because that's the impression i'm getting from what i've seen. he talks about "goddesses" as his "greatest weakness" and that "he's not one to say no to them"...

when mel invites him to the bath, he brings up mortals having different standards for intimacy than gods and how it usually has a more romantic/sexual connotation. she then asks if he's uncomfortable and he has a startled reaction and brings up circe and calypso again (but never actually by name)

(this isn't ship/romance bait btw. odysseus knew mel as a kid and they're stated in-game to have a sibling/uncle-niece relationship)

also he grew apart from penelope after his return, but the game makes a point of showing that his love for penelope and telemachus is what drove him on at all so that element of his character isn't brought into question

#i made a post abt it but deleted it bc it was speculating and i don't have the game bc i don't have a pc #but i found more screenshots and now.. i think it's a VERY real possibility they're going in this direction. #circe is in this game also. so i really need to see whether odysseus has any character specific dialogue about her #hard life when you can't even play the game and are hunting down bits of story from other people #hades game tag #hades 2 spoilers #sa mention #hades 2 #hades game #odysseus #penelope #i don't have any hard coping shipper brain on or anything but like. just. thinking about where his character can go given what we know #guaranteed penelope will be in this game too from how much she's brought up. we'll probably meet her on the surface #SO ITS LIKE. story wise. are we going to make a wife forgive her husband for cheating on her #or are we going to make a guy realize him being assaulted wasn't the same thing as him cheating on the love of his life #and i am heavily leaning towards the latter. #it's like if he genuinely did cheat on her and they grew apart what direction would his story go in. #how will us as the player help him in the same way we helped achilles/patroclus or orpheus/eurydice

[commsroom]

Okay! Obviously, I love Wolf 359. The available scripts for Wolf 359 are recording scripts, meaning they're inaccurate in a ton of places when it comes to finalized or improvised dialogue, and don't function well as transcripts (especially since the scripts for the live show and some of the mini episodes were never made available.) That said, I think everyone should read the scripts; the sheer amount of physical description that you can feel in the show, even if you can't see it... I guarantee it will enhance your listening experience. Most visual show to ever be an audio drama. So, in pursuit of both of these goals at once, I went over every word in the scripts, and wrote up new scripts for the unavailable ones. Some of the sound effects described - especially in early episodes - might not line up exactly, because I didn't want to mess with the non-dialogue portion of the show, but I hope this strikes a good balance and can be a useful resource.

#wolf 359 #w359 #i went back to standardize some s1 formatting last minute so um if i accidentally deleted anything in the process. let me know? #or if there's anything else that stands out but. it should all be there more or less. the dialogue should be accurate now. #do whatever you want with these. compare them to the unedited recording scripts. #use them for screenshots of things you couldn't accurately screenshot before. #use them as actual functional transcripts for dialogue you can't parse. though i had to make some choices with cross talk #especially in the sound and the fury where most of it isn't really meant to be heard and it doesn't easily. format together. #anyway. um. that's it! i hope someone finds this useful and i hope it gets some more people to check out the scripts. maybe.

[mistikfir]

“Œuf” (Deleted dialogue) ~  “Coquilles”

#hannibal #hannibaledit #mads mikkelsen #laurence fishburne #Gina Torres #hannibal lecter #Jack Crawford #bella crawford #phyllis crawford #ceuf #coquilles #deleted dialogue #scripting #hannimake #photomake #mistikfiredit #the mystery is solved why Hannibal invited him to dinner so often.

[daitranscripts]

Wicked Eyes and Wicked Hearts Deleted Dialogue

Various snippets of dialogue that didn’t make it into the final cut of the game - listed in scene order.

Wicked Eyes and Wicked Hearts Masterpost

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Guard: This storeroom is locked for the party. The palace entrance is over there… through the very large, gilded doors.

Guard: My lady. You have had too much wine. This is a locked storeroom. Not an entrance. Guard: My lord. This door is locked for a reason. Please go into the palace through the front doors.

Guard: What was that? Merde…

Guard: The steward will have our hides for this.

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Sera: I could break more stuff. Just for fun? This place is so dull.

Dialogue options:

I need a diversion.

We’ll go in soon.

I need a diversion. PC: Do me a favor, Sera. Distract those guards over there so I can see that they’re protecting. Sera: You bet your arse I will!

We’ll go in soon. PC: We’re going inside soon. Just be patient. Sera: Ugh! So bored!

Sera: (Yawns.) Whatever.

—

Dialogue options:

General: It’s an honor. +10 Court Approval (Vivienne in party)

Celene (Vivienne in party): Accompanied by our court enchantress, no less. Vivienne: Your loyal servant is delighted to be in your presence, Your Majesty.

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Solas: Such lovely pageantry.

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Iron Bull: They said this stuff is a garnish, but nobody stops you if you fill your plate with it.

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Vivienne: Watch your back, Inquisitor. Remember: everyone here wants you dead.

—

Speaking to Gaspard’s vassal

Nobility perk: I am interested in heraldry. (Use the Nobility/Politics persuade.) PC: It’s good to see the council present. I’ve always had a love of heraldry. Vassal: Indeed, the council had to be present, since the talks concern inheritance of the throne. Of course, they would have hardly refused any invitation from Empress Celene.

Dialogue options:

She is delightful.

That would be madness.

What about from Gaspard?

She is delightful. PC: The empress is very elegant. Vassal: Her majesty is a far more brilliant jewel than anything from the imperial treasury!

That would be madness. PC: No one would turn down the empress! Better to paint yourself blue and live in the trees! Vassal: You have it exactly right, Inquisitor! Better to give up civilization entirely than live without the empress.

What about from Gaspard? PC: But would they refuse an invitation from the grand duke? Vassal: Absolutely! He had allies on the council once, but burned those bridges years ago. Gaspard is a villain. Little better than a bully. Shouting his vile death at the council to give him the crown. The Chalons heraldry will never over the palace. The council will not bow to him.

Vassal: But I must get back to work! It is a rare pleasure to speak with someone knowledgeable. Good evening, Inquisitor

—

Speaking to Lady Marcellette

Nobility/Politics: Court history is fascinating. (Use the Nobility/Politics persuade.)

Nobility/Politics: Court history is fascinating. PC: I’ve always been intrigued by the history of the Imperial Court.

Lady Marcellette (non-human PC): Really? I would never have expected… Lady Marcellette (human PC): History is a living subject. So few understand that.

Lady Marcellette: The struggles of the court a hundred years ago still plague us to this day.

Dialogue options:

Even longer than that. PC: Not only the last age. Thousands of years of history still make their mark on the future.

Some people never learn. PC: We are doomed to repeat the mistakes of the past if we don’t pay attention to our forebears.

They caused the civil war. PC: Certainly, they brought us to the current war.

Lady Marcellette: Truly! How much of what happens tonight was set in motion by the Queen Mother Asha Subria in the Exalted Age? How much bloodshed could have been avoided by a word from the Emperor Etienne I in the Blessed Age?

Dialogue options:

If only we could find out.

It’s fun to speculate.

Better not to wonder.

If only we could find out. PC: It’s a pity we’ll never know. Lady Marcellette: True. But understanding where our trouble begins is the first step toward solving them.

It’s fun to speculate. PC: I’ll bet you concoct stories in your spare time about how different things would be. Lady Marcellette: Well, I’ve written a few… but they’re not worth sharing.

Better not to wonder. PC: It’s wiser not to play “what if?” Lady Marcellette: Very true.

Lady Marcellette: You should visit the library while you’re here! It isn’t open, but I can give you the key. It’s an absolute treasure for history lovers. You must not miss it.

—

Noble 1: Very well.

Noble 1: Indeed? If the Inquisition intends to hold those deserters accountable, I should be glad to pledge my support.

—

Noble: She’s trampling the wisteria! Has she gone mad?

Noble: He’s brutalizing the wisteria! How dreadful!

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Noble 1: Is that the Inquisitor? What is she doing? Noble 2: She wouldn’t actually climb that trellis, would she?

Noble 1: Is that… the Inquisitor? Where is he going? Noble 2: He wouldn’t dare climb that trellis, would he?

Dialogue options:

Just looking at the garden.

It’s adventurous.

Shut up.

Just looking at the garden. PC: Of course not. I’m simply admiring these plants. Noble 2: A thousand pardons, Inquisitor.

It’s adventurous. PC: In every Orlesian romance, someone climbs a trellis. Admit it, you were thinking of doing the same. Noble 2: Whatever I might have thought, I wouldn’t have done it…

Shut up. PC: Mind your own business. Noble 2: Hmph!

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PC: Uh-huh. Something funny about this.

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PC: Maker, these people hate me. How do I fix this? PC: Josephine will kill me if I mess this up any worse. Now what?

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Underworld: We might work together. (Use the Underworld/Criminals persuade)

PC: I want the grand duke’s men there out of the way, and unless I’m mistaken, you want the same thing… Elf 2: I think we understand each other. Elf 1: My [lord/lady] Inquisitor.

—

In the game room:

Dialogue options:

I can answer. (Use the arcane persuade.) PC: The answer is “What does it have in its pockets?”

Noble 2: How did you answer that so easily?

—

Dialogue options:

Why did you two part ways?

You still love her.

Investigate: Why did you two part ways? PC: What made the two of you part ways? Celene: She wanted change. And she thought I should deliver it. My word is law, Inquisitor, but laws don’t command people’s hearts. Culture does not transform itself overnight. She never loved me. Only my influence. Wisdom is never bought cheaply.

General: You still love her. PC: Maybe you kept it because you still care for Briala. Celene: I do. it is not wise, but… we cannot always be wise.

—

Dialogue options:

Maybe it’s sentimental.

It was yours, then.

Maybe it’s sentimental PC: It might have meant something to her. Briala: Or she held onto it in case she needed something.

It was yours, then. PC: So, this did belong to you. Briala: It did. But that was a long time ago.

—

On entering royal wing:

Varric: I didn’t think you were drunk enough for this plan, Handy.

Varric: Usually we don’t reach this stage of a plan without a lot more drink, Lucky.

—

In Celene’s Quarters:

If the PC doesn’t free the man and speaks to him again: Noble: You piece of shit. Let me out!

—

Josephine: Oh, no, no. You can’t dance in that.

—

Celene: I do. Those “wild stories” have made some things abundantly clear. Gaspard: I hardly know what to believe anymore. Briala: I think everyone believes them, Your Grace.

—

Celene: Gaspard? Do you have any last words?

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[1percentcharge]

im amused by those comics I sometimes see that are just two people talking without making a specific point or having a clear punchline so here’s mine

#I posted & deleted a sketch of this bc I wanted to fix some of the dialogue lol #doodles #oc: tawny #oc: Valentine

[brother-emperors]

listen. listen, there's a kind of intimacy in having a dedicated rivalry, okay. who else is going to know you like this!!! also it's funny

Ascanio Maria Sforza: la parabola politica di un cardinale-principe del Rinascimento, Marco Pellegrini

Julius II: The Warrior Pope, Christine Shaw

and on della rovere’s soldier comment:

Popes, Cardinals and War: The Military Church in Renaissance and Early Modern Europe, D.S. Chambers

and finally! regarding the delightful Mess of political-family relationships, including the marriage comment (altho the montefeltro family that giovanni married into did have sforza family ties, since giovanna's mother was battista sforza, but this is about the more immediate alliance based relationship and della rovere's hand in the rejection of a milanese match for his brother. and. this is not even remotely a serious comic, but now I am once again thinking about insular all these families are. the fucking medicis are here too, if you go half a step to the left on della rovere's family tree)

Julius II: The Warrior Pope, Christine Shaw

Giulio II, Il papa del Rinascimento, Giulio Busi (Bianca Maria Visconti is Ascanio's mom. btw)

panel inserts of the cards they're playing with are all from the Visconti-Sforza tarot deck! (I used public domain scans/photos for the comic itself)

ko-fi!⭐ bsky ⭐ pixiv ⭐ pillowfort ⭐ cohost ⭐ cara.app

#weeping. ascanio's dialogue covers up della rovere's sleeve collar. i spent all that time drawing details on it and FOR WHAT #(it was fun) #there was another deleted bit where ascanio has some petty line like 'i bet arguing makes you hard' but then i realized #that's something that lucullus would probably say to crassus and also i need to set that line up for ascanio #we gotta. we gotta character build (lays down face in the ground) we have to provide the character set up for it #it's really more of a line for cesare to drop at some point over how much rodrigo and ascanio argued #shout out to the time rodrigo threatened to throw ascanio into the tiber river or that time ascanio like. decided to physically get into #a fight with juan borgia #and they were still gambling partners after that????? damn okay. sometimes the vice chancellor can be (checks note) im not finishing #that statement #komiks tag #italian renaissance tag #ascanio sforza #giuliano della rovere #i WILL get a relationship dynamic tag for them once i can figure out something punchy and fun. anyway! #ehgh. I NEED. to go to milan. and go thru the archives. let me in. LET ME INNNNNNNNN

[totalshockwaves]

Dear Diary, my stupid sexy mortal looney tunes'd their way out of another trap today! the roller coaster cart somehow managed to jump back onto the track after that useless camera threw it off the first time! I DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW THAT'S EVEN POSSIBLE!?

ps. I saw a really cute picture of an axlotl today with a little hat on; it looked something like this

I really loved supernatural bf bullying simulator 2k23

#i drew this a while back but deleted it bc of potential beta spoilers but now that the games out in full...lol #a date with death #my art #of course referencing some of my favorite dialogue paths/lines and also one of my favorite horror movies lol #and yes it IS written in black sparkly gel pen lol

[craqueluring]

LMFAOOOOOOOO

#he is so real #nbc hannibal #hannibal lecter #hannibal #will graham #oeuf #hannibal 1x04 #hannibal scripts #hannibal deleted dialogue #pluto speaks