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grimallkine · 6 months

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Tfa x Tfp

(WIP 2.0) chapter 1

I desperately need a beta reader because I suck at English and constantly make grammatical mistakes. (You can comment on the mistakes you see and I will edit to correct them)

I have tried my best but every time I open the text file I write myself into a corner and get demotivated by the grammatical mistakes I make. Which is why it took this long for this to come out- that is also the reason this is so short. (⁠╥⁠﹏⁠╥⁠)

I also write on my phone so if the spacing looks weird - no it doesn't.

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The sound of weapons clashing filled the air as Bumblebee maneuvered around the battlefield, in an attempt to get closer to the modified Transwarp. He had no idea what Megatron was trying to achieve through it, but considering that the second he got near it, Megatron turned his full attention towards him and started ramping up his cannon, that was enough for him to understand that whatever this Transwarp is, it's incredibly important to Megatron.

As Megatron fired a powerful shot toward Bee, Optimus fired his own weapon. The clash of energy caused by the shots colliding sent the Transwarp into a haywire state. Amidst the chaos, Bumblebee found himself pulled towards the swirling vortex. In a flash of light, he disappeared from the battlefield.

He came to with his back on dirt and his head aching as it tried to catch up to malfunctioning systems.

As Bumblebee slowly regained consciousness, he tried to sit up, dusting off the dirt from his chassis, noting the small wounds littered across his body, most likely remnants of the Transwarp accident. He instantly noticed that he was no longer on the battlefield and that he had no idea where he could possibly be. He found himself on the outskirts of a bizarre cityscape, filled with towering buildings and vibrant colors. His first instinct was to hide, yet upon seeing that no one was around, he decided that exploration was the best option available.

At the Autobots' base, everyone gathered as a sense of confusion filled the room. Everyone's attention was fixed on a screen displaying an Autobot signal on the outskirts of Detroit.

Optimus frowned and voiced his confusion, "This doesn't add up. We should have been informed if another Autobot was coming to Earth." He paused, contemplating the situation. "Could it be a trap?"

Bulkhead interjected, "Perhaps it's a crash landing caused by an encounter with a Decepticon?"

Ratchet, wearing an annoyed expression, dismissed the idea, saying, "No, that can't be the case. We would have received the signal much earlier." He studied the signal's location on the screen. "The only plausible explanation is an escaped prisoner, though even that seems unlikely considering the location."

Optimus's optics flickered with realization, and he responded, "What if the Decepticons attached a signal dampener to them? It would account for the lack of a signal until now, as well as the unusual location."

"So, what you're saying is," Bumblebee leaned forward with a smile, "we're going on a rescue mission?"

Optimus nodded in agreement. "However," he continued, "we must formulate a plan."

"What?! Why? We just need to go there, get him back and kick some Decepticon aft if they come in our way." Bumblebee made a punching motion. "Simple."

Ratchet, just as aggravated as he tends to be, interrupted Bumblebee. "An escaped prisoner is guaranteed to provoke extensive Decepticon patrols. We cannot afford to just dash in hoping to succeed," Ratchet conveyed with exasperation, as if stating the obvious.

"I mean, yeah, it's true," Bumblebee replied, his optics scanning the landscape around the signal, looking for a way to win this argument. "But we also can't leave them out here injured and defenseless. There's got to be a way we can get them back to our camp without alerting the Decepticons." He then proceeded to put a hand on his chest. "What if I just race in there, get them, and race out? I am the fastest after all." Bumblebee then made a pointing gesture at Prowl. "He can even use his ninja skills to sneak around, to make sure no Decepticons will be in the way."

"You can't just race in; what if they are bigger than you?" Interjected Ratchet before Bumblebee talked over whatever point he wanted to make. "If we have their signal, then the Decepticons have it as well. It's a race against time," stated Bumblebee, making it clear he thinks his answer is the best one.

Sari, who had been quiet the entire time, spoke up. "What if I just go with Bumblebee and heal them? Then their size wouldn't matter."

Ratchet, whose patience wore thin as they spoke with newfound intensity, said, "The possibility of either getting cornered or the Decepticons already being next to the presumed prisoner is way too high. Your idea is almost guaranteed to end in disaster."

Bumblebee, amidst their stubbornness, had a nugget of wisdom in their argument. "And we are talking about something time-sensitive. We must be there before the Decepticons. And if anything, I will be fast enough to get away from them!"

Optimus surveyed the room, the situation at hand was not something he was prepared for.But he knew that time was of the essence, and a hasty decision could lead to disaster, but leaving, what is most likely, a fellow Autobot stranded and injured was not an option either.

After a moment of contemplation, Optimus spoke, "Bumblebee, your speed can be an advantage, but we need a plan to ensure your safety." After pausing for a few seconds, before adding "Prowl, you will accompany him to scout the area and warn him of any potential threats, quietly. Sari, your healing abilities will be invaluable... stay as close to Bumblebee as you possibly can. And if anything, and I mean anything, goes wrong, you will retreat."

Prowl nodded and left to scout the general location, making sure to keep his distance.

As Bumblebee and Sari prepared to leave, Ratchet couldn't help but express his concerns once more. "Be cautious, both of you. This mission is far from straightforward. And, Bumblebee, don't underestimate the Decepticons."

Bumblebee nodded "yeah, yeah, we'll be fine Ratch. It's not the first time we'd met with them anyways"

With that Bumblebee and Sari sped off towards the mysterious location on the outskirts of Detroit. They approached cautiously, their sensors scanning for any signs of Decepticon activity.

Oddly enough, there was not a single sign of Decepticons. It was like they never realized that their autobot prisoner escaped. This set all of Prowl's red flags off, because this meant one of Theo 's: one- they didn't realize their prisoner escaped.

Or two (the most likely one)- it was indeed a trap.

Prowl decided to investigate further. That was until he got startled by the approaching bot, who had somehow managed to get close without him noticing.

The way he managed to get so close to Prowl is beyond him. One thing is clear, though - he is an Autobot; the blue optics and the insignia leave no room for doubt. Another thing made clear, which makes him question his own optics, is that the bot in front of him is certainly, without a doubt, a warframe. Towering over him, the bot looks down with skepticism, analyzing him.

Unknown to either of them, they had the same exact thoughts: "Who is this? Why is their frame like that, and why are they on Earth?"

As Bumblebee looked down on the bot that was spying on him mere seconds ago, he felt a wave of confusion hit him. The Autobot insignia being the main reason, one- he wasn't aware of a Autobot that looked even remotely like the one in front of him, and considering the fact that he has had to meet almost every single one because of his close relationship with Optimus, he would have known about a autobot that is so small. He could hide behind a bush for prime's sake!

He also looks very... odd to say the least, small, not a lot of details, long face and bright colors (he knows this statement is hypocritical).

Another question on his mind being, why spy on him at all?

Bumblebee gets taken out of his thoughts when he hears another bot nearby, they most likely came here together.

Not wanting to make a bad impression he helps the bot in front of him off the floor get up. And gets out of the hiding spot that, because of his size, didn't really do anything to hide him.

Bumblebee sees a yellow car approach, transform, and a small yellow autobot, along with a small human girl, walk towards him, but before saying anything to him, they turn the the first bot he meet and all but yell "See prowl" (huh, so the bots name is Prowl) "we told you it's gonna work out! You guys worried for nothing"

Prowl ignoring the yellow bot. Turns to tfp Bumblebee.

"How did you get here? We didn't get any sort of announcement or even a signal beforehand. You just appeared." Prowl said, stoic as always.

.: I got caught in a Transwarp accident :. Answered tfp Bumblebee, still looking around for any sort of hint that would help him pinpoint his location. Unaware of the panic his response caused the other bots. tfa Bumblebee and Prowl both felt their sparks drop, even though neither of them understood what the bot in front of them said, they both recognized the fact it was a form of morse code, the one used by bots rendered mute. Neither of them had the language module needed to decipher the code downloaded.

"..." tfa Bumblebee looked at the bot before him in complete silence for a few seconds before springing into action " So, uhh, big guy, we can't really understand you. BUT! But Ratchet will 100% understand you. We just need to return to our base."

tfp Bumblebee was a bit taken aback by the fact that the bots couldn't understand him, wasn't downloading the language module needed for this kind of morse code mandatory in the war? The mention of Ratchet left him sorely perplexed as well. What was Ratchet doing here, did he get teleported too? But, Ratchet was far away from the Transwarp when it went haywire, for him to also get teleported the warp should have had an absurd range of teleportation. Did these bots know Ratchet personally?

That would explain why they speak about him as if he is a close friend, he never heard of them though,and his team wouldn't keep an entire group of autobots being on earth a secret from him.

"Bumblebee." Said prowl, both Bumblebee's looked at him " we need to head back, and the possibility of Decepticons being present is still high, so no speeding ahead" Prowl pointed at tfa Bumblebee as he finished his sentence, oblivious to the distress he caused tfp Bee to experience.

tfp Bee gaze shifted from one bot to the other, analyzing them with a look of disbelief in his optics. The more he looked, the more he noticed the resemblance the small yellow bot had to him.

Actually, now that he thinks about it, this city looks way too advanced technologically for humans, and everything seems a bit too colorful as well. As tfp Bumblebee tried to make sense of the situation, he remembered a conversation he had with Wheeljack.

Alternate universes and the possibility of their existence.

Alternate universes, they would explain everything going on. It becomes even more plausible when considering the fact that it was a modified Transwarp, which is treasured to the point of obsession by Megatron, that had played a crucial role in his arrival. This wasn't a question of possibility by this point, but a realization…

.:Scrap, this cannot be happening:. Tfp Bumblebee let out an exasperated groan as he finished his sentence.

Tfa Bumblebee and Prowl, not understanding what Tfp Bee said, took it as a confirmation to proceed and prepared to guide Tfp Bee to their base. Prowl gestured for both Bumblebee's to follow him.

Tfp Bee, decided to play it cool for now, he could not afford to panic or draw too much attention to himself, at least until he sees the rest of the team, and judges the best course of action based on their reactions. As they made their way back to their base tfp Bumblebee observed their interactions and listened closely, noting the stark differences between himself and this version- a younger, more carefree, and, seemingly, more childlike counterpart. There was also a pang of jealousy that tfa Bee still has his voice, but he doesn't dwell on it, pushing that thought aside to focus on the task at hand.

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satancopilotsmytardis · 3 months

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Thinking about TMA and the LOV as avatars based on how I interpret the characters

Twice: The Spiral, though his quirk also lends itself to the Stranger, Twice's greatest source of fear is not knowing his own mind or how to make sense of the reality around him. He is a living fractal through his quirk, and that has both destroyed him and lent him great power. That's an avatar of the Spiral baby!

Toga: The Corruption, rather than focusing on the crawling, decaying, infections, the aspect that calls to her, of course, is the consuming love that the Corruption offers. She has had the way she expresses her love called horrifying and disgusting all her life, to be part of an Other that loves her in the same vein-deep way that she has always craved would make her accepting of any other horror it bestowed in her, even if maggots under her skin isn't very cute.

Spinner: Spinner is interesting because I think that the Lonely would want him and would have tried to claim him. But (TMA spoilers) just like Martin, he would actually fight it off to be claimed by the Eye instead. His connections to the Lonely are obvious, he was isolated and discriminated against for his whole life and was in danger of slipping away into nothing for so long. However, the Lonely can be defeated by hanging onto the bonds we have with those we love, and Spinner loves the League. He follows Shigaraki, he believes in his companions' abilities, and he knows that despite not being as strong/useful/driven as them, he can stand at their side and be content watching them reach their goals (MLA arc), which is why he becomes an avatar of the Eye.

Compress: Although he is smart as hell, Mr. Compress is not an avatar of the Web. The Web is antithetical to his belief that everyone should choose their own values and not have them chosen for them. And while he might have fun performing at the Stranger's circus, he wouldn't fit in there either. Compress would also be an avatar of the Eye with Spinner. He catches and misdirects attention and has a vested interest in ensuring that his companions' stories play out even at the cost of his own (PLF War).

Dabi: Despite Dabi being all about fire and burning those who have wronged him, he is NOT an avatar of the Desolation. Which i am gonna explain a bit. So the Desolation is the fear of loss, pain, suffering, and destruction but especially senseless destruction and avatars of this entity love to destroy things to stop them from ever reaching their true potential. And that is the opposite of a lot of Dabi's motivations. He hates the fact that Shoto has a miracle quirk and won't ever push himself as hard as Dabi thinks he should to put that potiential to good use, it disgusts and enrages him. He is not about senseless violence. His acts of terror are planned out and focused to ensure maximum effectiveness, even when he is burning random villains, he did that to make himself a worse criminal so that during his reveal, he would damage Endeavor's legacy even more. That is deliberate, and he has had this plan in the works for nearly a decade, so I propose that Dabi is an avatar of the Web. Not only has he been planning his revenge for years, but he believes that his fate was sealed for him the moment he was born and that nothing can change that path. Additionally during the PLF War arc and his fight with Hawks, he points out how he was overlooked even as he set things up in the background to ultimately set up his confrontation with his father, and in the Summer Camp arc he was made the leader of the mission which shows that Shigaraki also considers him a suitable tactician and leader. The Web suits him.

Shigaraki: While I did consider the Slaughter and the End, I ultimately think that Shigaraki would be an avatar of the Desolation. The Slaughter was dismissed because that fear focuses on sudden, unprompted violence. While the Slaughter might have started to get its claws into him when he killed his family, it cannot contain the deliberate destruction that he has cultivated throughout the rest of his life. Additionally, the End is inevitable and patient, all things will die, and it takes no great joy in that fact, it simply is-- which is way, way too passive for Shigaraki. He is seeking to create a new world by destroying the previous one and he revels in that destruction as he brings it. He is passionate, ruthless, and dedicated-- which also draws other people in to follow and even worship him even after being partially destroyed by him (see Re-Destro). That is the Lightless Flame drawing in a new crop of moths if I've ever seen one.

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