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yeaahishowedupatyourparty · 3 years

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PARK HAMILTON - PLOTS/REVISED BIO

I said I’d do this ages ago, better late than never :’) I feel like most of these are new connections, so please don’t use a character he already has things with if you want a specific plot. Thaaanks!

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Park is at St Judes to avoid becoming famous. It sounds ridiculous but that’s genuinely his reason. At thirteen, he signed to his Dad’s record label with a band that’d been manufactured by several of the label’s executives. They rose to fame on the premise of pure talent, a good PR package and huge budget. It happened quickly and, to be honest, unlike his twin sister, Park wasn’t equipped for it. The attention messed with his head and changed him for the worst in countless ways. He was 17 when he finally left the group, convincing his father he wanted to go solo - he didn’t, but it was the only condition he was allowed to leave on. So here he is now, pretending to develop the birthright talent he wishes he never had.

important character points...

He lives with Imogen in downtown springs and as much as he complains about his sister and the rest of his family, he’s hugely family-orientated. He’ll back his sisters/parents before he backs anybody else.

Easy come, easy go is honestly the best way to describe him. Despite being cocky and quite intimidating at times, he is really easy to get to know and generally treats people well. But with that, he’s just as easy to lose touch with too. He can put walls up as quick as he lets them down and once he feels like there’s a disconnect, it’s hard to change his mind.

Not really jealous, but definitely protective over people he genuinely cares for. A good example is his relationship with Charlie.

He has been brought up being treated like he put the stars in the sky and it shows. He’s definitely not short on self-esteem or self-confidence.

WANTED: romantic

Exes: Other than Charlie, I find it really hard to remember who his exes are because the plots have pretty much died so I’m going to start them again if that’s ok! - Ex 1: Someone his manager set him up with when he was around 15/16 for PR reasons. I feel like it’s too cliche to say they had to pretend to love each other when they really hated one another, so maybe it was more of a slow burn? They really didn’t care about one another but slowly realised they liked one another. Maybe their contract expired just as they got close to admitting it, and then ended up losing contact? [Charlie & Margo] - Ex 4: After Charlie and Margo, so essentially his last real relationship. He would’ve fallen out of touch with ex one, is on good terms with Charlie, and blurry terms with Margo. So, I feel these two could be straight up messy. He wasn’t in the best headspace in the first few years after moving from LA to the Springs. Maybe he just kept flaking on plans and was unwilling to compromise & they had regular fights about almost everything. Bonus points if the bitterness is still very much alive.

TAKEN BY NATALIE: He had a whole arrangement with Gisele that he wouldn’t sleep with anyone else because they were ‘together but not’, but it’s almost like he can foresee what’s going to happen LOL because the moment Owen got back, that’s all that’s been mentioned in various conversations, in various forms on the dash. Like I said before, he doesn’t get jealous because his god complex doesn’t let him BUT he has a leave before you get left/burn the bridge before you cross it mentality. So long story short, he’s absolutely not honouring that whole thing anymore and will definitely start sleeping around again.

Unrequited Crush - This one’s a bit less intense, but maybe a friend of one of his sister’s whose been into him for a while, but never actually got round to getting close or friendly with him? It could progress based on chemistry.

WANTED: Friendship & other

LA/Rising Star friend: Someone else who found fame quite early (Park would have been 13) So, maybe they grew up together in the spotlight and were one another’s support system. I feel like this would be the one person who knew that he wasn’t enjoying it and wants nothing to do with being in the public eye this time around.

Hometown friend: A friend he had before he went out to LA and joint his dad’s record label. I feel like there could have been tension because Park changed a lot and maybe he was a lousy friend but they’re slowly building things back up now they’re older. Park would definitely feel really bad about it.

WANTED: Frenemies & worse

Family frenemy: Unlike most others, Park doesn’t actually mind the “world” of the rich families in VS. Sure, the parties and gatherings are over the top, but the people who cry about it are the definition of first world problems to him. Maybe there’s someone in that circle he’s never gotten along with and winds them up endlessly. It’s up to you how they respond to that.

Industry Enemy: Someone who was supposed to be in the band that his Dad put together and they worked hard for it for years, but at the last minute their spot was filled by Park. Maybe it’s more of a blow now they realise he dropped out while they struggled for years to get their career together.

#save: connections

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ladybirdanimalsanctuary · 5 years

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Bird rescue! Tony, Jonathan, Angela, Samantha, and Mona were surrendered to Mississauga Animal Services by their owner because they no longer wanted them. MAS separated the boys from the girls, and reached out to us for help. The girls have some missing feathers that we're hoping will grow back with time and proper care. These sweet birds will have a vet check up, and if all is well they'll be ready to start the search for their forever home. Welcome wee finches! We're so happy you're here! Visit our website to learn more about Tony, Jonathan, Angela, and Samantha, and Mona, and to donate to their care: ladybirdanimalsanctuary.com (link in bio) Bonus points to anyone who can tell us where their names came from! . . . #ladybirdanimalsanctuary #lookwhatlovecando #hamont #hamilton #animalrescue #rescue #rescued #rescuedismyfavouritebreed #bird #birds #birdsofinstagram #finches #finchesofinstagram #zebrafinch #zebrafinches #adoptdontshop #dontshopadopt #foster #fostering #fosteringsaveslives #adopt https://www.instagram.com/p/ByMHWJ_FXz1/?igshid=1jgqrerv6u6j4

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thranduiliens · 7 years

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A REVIEW FOR -- crossedswordsrp

It's the year of 1641 and the city of Paris shudders upon the brink of revelation or destruction. It is a powder keg waiting to explode - and only time will tell who will be left standing once that fuse finally burns down to light. All it might take is a single -- - spark.

Please note that these critiques are meant to help and not insult. It was never my intention to be rude. Ultimately, it is still up to you to follow my advice! You know your roleplay better. I’m just here to help. If you have read this, like/reblog the post. If you have any more questions, my ask is always open! The review can be found under the cut.

first impressions -- the url, theme, and overall look of the rp

I’m a sucker for urls that are clear and have no dashes because it makes tagging easier. And it gives the idea that it’s a period rp which, sure enough, is what it is when you look at the plot.

And I love this theme! I love how it’s not boxed in like so many rp themes I see nowadays. There’s just enough space occupied by your posts without it looking too cluttered. I also love how dark it is without it being unreadable or straining to the eye, and the colors compliment each other well. None of the colors clash, and it’s great that you chose one standout color. The font size is great, as well. Although I think the title on your header image could be a bit bigger, or in a different font that would fit the feel of the roleplay Try this --which would look cohesive with the header, in my opinion. Or this, if you want a font with no texture.

(I’m actually just being nit-picky here because I actually really love how the main page looks as it is)

the story itself -- the side as well as full plot and other things about the roleplay

The introduction is great. It’s good that you took the time to explain what inspired the roleplay. It also helps, I think, for people who may be new to joining period rps to get a sense of what to expect from your group. The fact that Hamilton is also great because a lot of people get excited when they see it come up. At the same time, you let applicants know that the roleplay is still your own, still original, which makes it less intimidating to apply.

The side plot only needs a teeny, tiny bit of editing, particularly in the first paragraph. Try this: “The year is 1641...” instead of “It’s the year of 1641...” It’s a period rp, so it’s best to set that tone and try to not use contractions without it being awkward. Also ‘of’ is a preposition that can be dismissed in this sentence. You don’t really need it there. As for the second paragraph, “powder keg” are two separate words, not one.

As for the full plot. Again, it’s intriguing, exciting and it reels people in and is just the perfect length for it to give enough ideas for anyone interested in applying without it being wordy or boring. The only improvement I would suggest is with grammar. I’ll strike out words that I think should be removed or changed, and any suggested changes will be bolded. Let’s start with the first paragraph:

“In 17th century Paris, beneath the brightness and romanticism, the decadence of the French court where kings and courtiers hold sway, underneath all of it, the true nature of the city dwells still.”

You’ve already started the paragraph with “beneath the brightness and romanticism...”. It would flow better without the added phrase of “underneath all of it”

Also, “...that glittering bauble of made and broken dreams“ I think it’s just a typo but it should be “...that glittering bauble of made of and broken dreams.

On to the third paragraph: There’s a point where it gets confusing and my attention is taken out of the plot for a bit because of the last few sentences. It’s written in a stuttering, stopping manner that can get distracting.

“... secret from the general populace and court by his councilors Rossignol and Jean Bourbon - Louis temperate enough to wait for an heir by Angeline before revealing the controversial match.“

The bolded part was where it became confusing. I don’t think there should be a dash there. A period would be less confusing--it completes the thought and brings the attention right to the next sentence. (Never underestimate the power of proper punctuation!). And I think you meant to say “Louis was temperate enough to wait...”

That’s all I can find, actually! This is such a great plot, honestly, I love it.

the laws and their enforcers -- otherwise known as the rules and admins

Ehhh... Not really too sure about including passwords in rules. While it does force people to read through them, it can also send the idea that you don’t trust your applicants to read the rules on their own accord. Take from that as you will. I don’t personally mind it but you know how Tumblr can be... sensitive, sometimes. Besides, the password placement makes sense. It’s important that people read the Activity section of the rules, anyway, so it’s not a deal-breaker at all.

You never come off as strict or unwelcoming, too, even if it’s just the rules page. You even put in just a little bit of extra effort to explain what god-modding, meta-gaming, etc are and give links to examples as well which will definitely be appreciated. Again, it’s quite welcoming to new applicants, and not just for those new to period rps but also new to rps in general. Your FAQs page is also concise and answered one of the first few things in my mind, which was LGBT+ rep. Bonus points for being welcoming to that!

the important pieces -- the characters

So many POC! I love this so much! You have a wide range of characters, all of whom have interesting bios. This is a great cast with a lot of potential for character growth while still establishing a past for players to shape the characters around.

the pretty pictures -- the graphics, sidebar, icons, etc.

Simple but beautiful. The graphics do their job and all come together cohesively. No complains here. Everything looks good and fits the rp’s aesthetics.

This group is a breath of fresh air amidst many modern roleplays that limits characters to being high-schoolers or such. It offers a great opportunity for applicants to improve their writing and everything is just so well-made. The plot is intriguing, the characters are diverse, and the admins seem approachable. This is such a great group and I hope it flourishes and that many people join! Good luck with everything!

#rph #rpc #rp review #rpcw #crossedswordsrp #review

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ladybirdanimalsanctuary · 5 years

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Bird rescue! Angela, Samantha, and Mona (shown in this video) along with Tony and Jonathan, were surrendered to Mississauga Animal Services by their owner because they no longer wanted them. MAS separated the boys from the girls, and reached out to us for help. The girls have some missing feathers that we're hoping will grow back with time and proper care. These sweet birds will have a vet check up, and if all is well they'll be ready to start the search for their forever home. Welcome wee finches! We're so happy you're here! Visit our website to learn more about Tony, Jonathan, Angela, and Samantha, and Mona, and to donate to their care: ladybirdanimalsanctuary.com (link in bio) Bonus points to anyone who can tell us where their names came from! . . . #ladybirdanimalsanctuary #lookwhatlovecando #hamont #hamilton #animalrescue #rescue #rescued #rescuedismyfavouritebreed #bird #birds #birdsofinstagram #finches #finchesofinstagram #zebrafinch #zebrafinches #adoptdontshop #dontshopadopt #foster #fostering #fosteringsaveslives #adopt https://www.instagram.com/p/ByMIDooli64/?igshid=qn5c2gqjaz6r

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ladybirdanimalsanctuary · 5 years

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Bird rescue! Tony and Jonathan (shown in this video) along with Angela, Samantha, and Mona were surrendered to Mississauga Animal Services by their owner because they no longer wanted them. MAS separated the boys from the girls, and reached out to us for help. The girls have some missing feathers that we're hoping will grow back with time and proper care. These sweet birds will have a vet check up, and if all is well they'll be ready to start the search for their forever home. Welcome wee finches! We're so happy you're here! Visit our website to learn more about Tony, Jonathan, Angela, and Samantha, and Mona, and to donate to their care: ladybirdanimalsanctuary.com (link in bio) Bonus points to anyone who can tell us where their names came from! . . . #ladybirdanimalsanctuary #lookwhatlovecando #hamont #hamilton #animalrescue #rescue #rescued #rescuedismyfavouritebreed #bird #birds #birdsofinstagram #finches #finchesofinstagram #zebrafinch #zebrafinches #adoptdontshop #dontshopadopt #foster #fostering #fosteringsaveslives #adopt https://www.instagram.com/p/ByMHqg6F4hX/?igshid=9o3vb4n59sni

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