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Ch.2 ~ Night Out

Summary: This is my first fanfic, bare with me i promise i’ll get better...A story where Miya, Y/N & Sakusa, Kiyoomi fall deeply in love not knowing that their fathers are rivals...both of them being Yakuza leaders. It'll be a messy love story.

Warnings: 18+, smut, violence, yakuza, strong language, alcohol and drugs mentioned. Readers discretion is advised.

Status: Ongoing...

Genre: Romance, Slow Burner, 18+

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Notes:

When it's italic it's dialogue and when it's not those are y/n thoughts in her mind.

Y/N always carries a mini Glock in a thigh holster (she gangster like that lol).

Y/N is wearing a black dress with a slit and black heels.

You made it home to Nekoma Towers. Walking through the parking garage, taking in the sights that you missed the last four years.

You stepped into the elevator and scanned your card then you pressed the "Penthouse 45" Button. The elevator doors opened into your living room, it looked the same, nothing out of place. Suna says " I'll pick you up at 7:30 pm, I'ma head to my apartment and get ready."

You just nod at him, while he presses the "44" button and the doors close.

You glare at the clock noticing you have about an hour to get ready. You walked into your room, throw your luggage into your walk-in closet, you're heading to the bathroom, you start to run the bath, waiting for the water to warm.

You start undressing once the tub is filled. You stepped in, throwing your head back while closing your eyes, deep in thought "what should I wear tonight? Should I call Kita and check on him? I felt guilty going out while he's not himself...wait NO, Kita needs to get out of my mind"

"Ugh, I hate that I always catch myself thinking about him...this isn't healthy anymore, he broke you and I shouldn't be worried about him. I just wanna let loose and have fun, explore the city I missed the last four years. My dad did give me three months to myself before I start working for the family business"

Wrapping a towel around your body, and one around your long brown hair. You started walking into your closet looking for what you should wear. You are going to a bar but you felt like wearing a sexy dress, something with a slit and "ooooh it has to be black!"

Browsing through your dresses, you stop at one you wanted to wear tonight, with a smirk on your face, just thinking to yourself "Wow ima look like a bad bitch tonight, like who wouldn't go home with me, damn" You laid the dress on the bed with a pair of black heels. You headed to your drawers, taking out your favorite pair of lingerie, and putting it on. You headed to your vanity to start your makeup.

You normally don't do a heavy makeup look but you still putting on your favorite pair of lashes and lip gloss. You looked smoking hot, damn. You were definitely feeling yourself tonight.

After getting yourself all dressed up, you just stood in front of the mirror just looking at how hot you looked tonight, like damnnnnn girl. That dress was hugging you in all the right places. You got your phone to check the time. You grabbed your phone to check the time and it was only 10 minutes til Suna said he'll pick you up, you sent him a quick text.

You:

Rin I'm ready, lets's go!

Rin:

Okay come down to my place and we'll head out.

You had gotten in the elevator and made your way to Suna's place. You knocked on the door and Suna had answered it. He was wearing a black turtleneck and trench coat and some dark blue jeans, in your mind, all you could think was "damn my best friend is hot af, we both look hot"

"You look decent." Suna started to chuckle at his comment. "Don't lie, you know I look hot!" You snapped back at him.

"Whatever you say, Y/N" he had that sly smirk on his face."Ummmm, you know I'm hot" You stated while rolling your eyes.

"Let's go I bet Kiyoko and Tanaka are there already" You started to head to the elevator with Suna. We get to the garage level and you told Suna to take your BMW i8 your father just gave you as a graduation present. You handed him the keys. He already knew you were going to make him drive.

We arrived at the bar and you could already hear the music, it was so lively. You started to hum to the song playing, "She got that rich girl L.A vibe, she whip it good in her daddy's 95. Rough sex on the bedroom floor, hop in the shower she begging for more." You spotted Kiyoko and Tanaka, see they already got a table for the night.

You ran up to them, wrapping your arms around Kiyoko's neck "I've missed you so much, omg I can't believe how long it's been" Kiyoko hugged you, wrapping her arms around your waist. "Hi Y/N!!!! I missed you as well! Oh hi, Suna!"

You let go of her and waved at Tanaka, who was gulping down his beer like it was a contest. "You're really gulping that beer huh" You started laughing at him. "Hi Y/N!!! Long time man! know I love my beer" Tanaka said while placing the glass down on the table and started picking up a chicken wing. He hasn't changed at all, you loved being back home.

"Bitch why are you looking so hot?" Kiyoko had eyed me up and down, and you put on a show around really slow so she could catch all of you.

"Girl I already told you, tonight I need new dick!" You said while sticking your tongue out, Kiyoko slapping your ass, and started laughing at how carefree you were being. You wanted to be bold tonight, especially since you've only had sex with Kita.

Suna laughed at you guys since this is how you guys always act when together. Suna had mentioned he is heading to the bar to get you guys a drink.

Tanaka and Kiyoko left for the dancefloor. You started to drift into your thoughts while watching the couple dance and have fun. "Wow I miss being in love. Look how beautiful they are dancing and having fun. I remember when me and Kita would go to bars, get drunk, dance all over each other, and then get home and just have that intense, passionate sex, God I miss that"

You were snapped out of your thoughts by Suna's hand was waving in front of your face. He reached out and waited for you to take your drink, Scotch on the rocks. He knows you so well. "Here, start drinking so you can stop zoning out. You said we were getting lit tonight"

"Thanks Rin, and you are so right! I need a couple of drinks in me before I can go dancing" You said while reaching for the cup and taking a big sip.

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Bloodstained Hands, Ch 2:

Kakashi shot awake in a panic, gasping for breath and covered in a cold sweat. His hands were trembling, and, for a long moment, he was disoriented. This wasn’t his room, or his apartment. Where were his pictures of his team? Or Mr. Ukki? Even his body felt wrong. But then, suddenly, Kakashi remembered where he was. When he was.

“Kakashi!”

His eyes widened at the sound of the sweet, sing-song way his name was called. No… It couldn’t be. Throwing himself from the bed, he rushed to the front door, ignoring the way his skull flared painfully and how he stumbled. Panting, he slowed as the front door came into sight.

“Kakashi, I know you’re in there. You didn’t show up for training today. Minato-sensei said you weren’t feeling well, so I thought I should bring over something for you to eat…”

“Why do you even bother?” Came a loud, familiarly obnoxious voice. Dread rose in Kakashi’s chest, threatening to consume him. “You know he’s not even going to answer the door.”

Unbeknownst to his teammates, the Hatake was only a few feet from the door. He could sense their chakra, weaker than he last remembered it, but still there, strong and steady. The wound in his heart begged him to open the door, to wrap them both in his too-small arms and beg for their forgiveness. Yet, he couldn’t find the strength in him to move, paralyzed by fear. The darkness within him too easily reminded him that he was the reason for both of their deaths. If anything, he should push them away. He should push them far, far away, and then maybe then they would be safe from the destruction that he caused everywhere he went.

Obito and Rin were freshly fallen snow, and Kakashi was soaked in their blood, trying to keep it from dripping from his fingers with every breath.

“See?” Obito broke through his thoughts. “I told you he wasn’t going to answer.”

“Hush!” Rin scolded. Kakashi silently approached the door, using every ounce of restraint that he had finely honed during his decades as a shinobi. “Kakashi, please, talk to us.”

His voice came through low and hoarse, like a hiss. “Go away.”

Unfortunately, his acknowledgement of their presence only encouraged Rin. “Kakashi!” She exclaimed. The happiness in her voice tore at his soul like savage claws, and everytime she said his name his resolve crumbled a little more. “I brought some miso soup, since I know it’s your favorite… It has eggplant, too! I-”

“Go away. I don’t want to see you.”

“Oh. Alright…” Rin trailed off, and Kakashi could hear the dejection in her voice. Of course, if Rin was upset, Obito felt the need to jump to her defense.

“Why do you have to say that, Bakakashi?” Obito shouted. “You’re always so mean, and Rin was just trying to do something nice for you-!”

ooooh this is a cool section !! i’ll do my best to give a Good DVD Comment on it but i wrote it... at least a year ago so LMAO

the chapter begins with a nightmare and that nightmare ends with rin saying kakashi’s name when she was killed - and i liked the transition of her, in real life, saying it to him to wake him up. and kakashi’s freshly time traveled, so he’s disorientated and confused af. 

meanwhile, obito and rin are... concerned out of their minds. kakashi? sick? missing training? he must be dying. so of course they’re going to go check on him. but kakashi hasn’t actually seen them yet. it’s his first interaction with his formerly dead teammates (save for minato).

and he’s just confused, especially awoken from a nightmare like that, and his most significant memories of them are of their deaths, and he’s just not ready. not ready to accept this is his reality now, not ready to lock eyes with two people he failed so spectacularly and pretend like everything was normal, like he was his bratty 12 year old self who didn’t care when actually he cares so so much.

this is also the first time we see a theme prevalent throughout the first half of the story-- what does kakashi do different? does he hold them closer or push them father away? savor their presence or protect himself from another possible failure-- their possible deaths, again?

he just doesn’t know right then, so he pushes them away. he doesn’t have a solid plan of action and that scares him. he doesn’t know what he’s going to do and he can’t show them all this emotion that he has-- emotion that he’s not even used to dealing with himself --because if they see that emotion then they’re going to know something’s wrong and then they’re going to press him. press him for information he doesn’t have and isn’t ready to give. he just... doesn’t have any answers. and with kakashi the way he is, a strategic genius since he was a toddler, i imagine not knowing what to do is frightening. he’s always been quick on his feet, with a witty retort or a plan of action and here he’s got nothing. nada. the obvious tactical solution is to retreat until he does have a plan.

so he pushes them away. or tries to. rin is wholeheartedly concerned for him and wants to express that in a way kakashi would appreciate -- something practical, like a meal -- and she’s undeterred by his expected backlash. her concern for her teammate far extends the severity of his words, which she’s used to by now, and his barbs aren’t so much as barbs to her. she recognizes it for what it is: a defense mechanism. she also knows that he just can’t keep closing himself up but that’s pitted against her politeness and fear of upsetting him, which is why she gives up relatively quickly after kakashi insists that they leave.

obito, on the other hand, is vulnerable. he’s concerned for kakashi for once, not seeing him right now as a rival but a teammate in need-- because when, ever, has the prodigy kakashi seemed so human? --and when kakashi uses that vulnerability to push him away, obito gets understandably angry. he’s defensive of himself for being vulnerable, which was obviously a mistake since kakashi didn’t take the olive branch, and it presents as defensiveness of rin, even though she can well enough handle herself. why rin, though? well, we could just put gender roles into place and say something outdated like “he was protecting her” from someone she.. didn’t need protecting from. but in reality, he gets defensive over rin because he can’t get defensive over himself. saying that he didn’t like kakashi’s response is the same as admitting weakness, and 12 year old kakashi caught scent of weaknesses and exploited them like a bloodhound on a trail. and obito wants nothing more than kakashi’s respect, to see him as an equal. so if he shows that he’s concerned, that he’s hurt, kakashi would just see him as a crybaby plus some. since he wants to avoid that, shifting his protectiveness onto rin is the next best option.

ultimately it just presents a team dynamic that i thought was... fitting. obito and kakashi still clashing, right off the bat, as if nothing had changed although everything had changed. putting a bigger strain on their first true meeting. it’s all kakashi trying to juggle time traveling and his not-dead dead teammates and all this unusual physical pain he has in his left eye, while at the same time obito trying to handle kakashi and rin trying to handle the both of them.

i could honestly ramble about this a whole lot more -- i’ve already written a fuckn more in depth analysis of my own damn writing than i was expecting (why cant i do this on my college essays) -- but i think that about sums it up. can you tell i like introspection a whole lot? :)