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#It did have a pretty sad ending though I didn't write it yet. Probs gonna be like 10 chapters long
novuit · 1 year
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Sorry I'm aliveeeee. I spent too much time thinking and not enough drawing :')
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sk3tch404 · 1 year
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(Resurfaces like in the Milk Cat meme) I've returned- YOOOOOO CONGRATS ON COMPLETING YOUR FIRST ROUTE!!!! 💃🏼💃🏼🎉🎉
https://imgur.com/a/CjwwBix
Shit wrong link, uhhh-
https://imgur.com/a/IihtOxh
There we go :D
That is one BIIIG Milestone reached, so even if you can't complete the full game, you're definitely ready to upload a fully fledged demo👌be proud yourself, you definitely deserved it bro, and about length, I think it's a good amount, considering the short timeframe you had to work on it.
Also don't even worry about character arcs, as long as your story has Beginning/Build Up/Climax/End you're good to go 👍. Sometimes it's better when you don't have everyone's backstory explained to you ya know?
For example Michael Myers, like yeah, we saw him stabbing his sister as a kid, but we sure as hell don't know why exactly he did it and what he went through during his stay at Smith's Grove Sanitarium, yet he still managed to be one of the biggest horror icons today. (I'm strictly speaking about the OG Movie btw, idk shit about what they did to him in the sequels)
Sometimes, just some cool shit happening is enough for a story, it's not like we're expecting a full on 24 episode Anime in LN form either 🤷‍♀️ also considering that it IS a Yandere Story, having sympathy for the LIs falls a bit short, when they're probably gonna go full sicko mode on us somewhere in their routes 0_0"
Yandere: (insert sad backstory) ...and that's why I have mommy issues 😔
Darling: (chained against the wall of the Yandere's house, hasn't seen sunlight for a solid week or so) cowabummer 😐
Like don't get me wrong, it's not bad if you want to put their full backstory in the game, but it also wouldn't hurt the overall quality of their route if you didn't (also you could save time 👀)
Anyhow, I hope ya treated yourself to some fancy food and rest or smth after completing the route 😎
Also, AYO NEW LI REVEAL?? Is the fact that he's human an invitation for me to beat his ass 👀? Jkjk but at least there's a feasible chance of me winning against him, compared to Rory lmaooo
So only the Triple Threats of Christian holidays are left to be revealed rn 👀👀 (or double trouble technically, since it's just two holidays, but you did also say that Easter are twins 🤔)
-Ren'py anon
WHAT THE FUCKKKKKKKKKKK YOU DREW JAYCE???
OMG I LOVE YOU SM IM BLUSHING HEHEBUHEUHUEUHHEU
YOU HAVE MY HEART FR OMG HEHEHHEHE HE DESERVES THAT TBHHHH
PLATONICALLY KISSES AND SMOOCHES U FOR THIS LOVELY PUMPKIN JAIL SACRIFICE 🌹💋💕😘😘😍😘😍❤😁🙌
GOOD NO GRIPPERS FOR HIM. I EVEN HAD PLAYER WEAR SHOES WHEN THEY GOT NAPPED BC IM NOT ENVISIONING BARE DOGS 💀💀💀
MINI JAYCE OMGOMGOMGOMG HE LOOKS LIKE THOSE JJBA MICROORGANISMS I LOVE ITTTT
AND ITS OKAY LOL HE WEARS BAGGY JEANS BC HES TRENDY AND INSECURE
This is really funny because in one of the endings is called jack o'lantern. This is their revenge ig lmao
omae wa mou shinderu
Thank you for the silly drawings! I'm so glad I got some cute fanart already hehe
Thanks again for the congratulations! Though it's not realllly finished, I have a couple of CGs and endings sewn in! I think I wanna change a few things so it's not just blatant trauma dumping lolol + script.gui things
It's bland and cheesy asf
Yeah, I think the line up for the storyline falls into Beginning/Build Up/Climax/End. It's not like I'm writing any flashbacks of his past so 😭 ur right
LMFAOOOOO Jayce does go sicko mode pretty quick, so, him wanting a lot of sympathy and him gaslighting tf outta player does goes strong here 💀
I haven't watch the OG Michael Myers bc I have no idea which one is the actual OG soooo yeah, but I totally agree with you! The premise of it is pretty cool and is still iconic even though his motives and identity are still very vague.
That little bit with darling and yandere is SOOOO true 😭 If darling stayed really friendly with Jayce (prob out of fear) he would trauma dump but not tell them everything. He's totally is attracted and interested in player, but he's just testing the waters yk?
damn, cowabummer fr
I could just have Jayce give player a story of when he was young that fully traumatized him, buuuuuutt Jayce doesn't trust player all that much. It would make player understand why he is doing what he is doing, but I want him to be vague and just a bit cruel without any known motives other than, "I like you."
After I'm done tweaking the dialogue and putting in the appropriate images, I'll most definitely take a fat nap and binge read fics hehe
LMFAO I MEAN IF YOU'RE AN ACTIVE PERSON AND WORK OUT A BIT, YOU MIGHT OVERPOWER HIM IF YOU'RE SMART. YOU'LL UNDERSTAND WHY WHEN YOU PLAY IT. HE MIGHT BE A LONELY LOSER BUT UNFORTUNELY HE CAN FEND FOR HIMSELF 💀
HAUGHGUHUUHUHAGH THE FUCKING CHRISTAN HOLIDAY TRIPLE THREAT HELPPPPP MEEEEE
Christmas man is a bit arrogant and a broke bitch (Elliot Astros lmfao)
He be looking like black and white toothpaste rn tbh 🤷‍♀️
His design was gonna look like he was a nice guy, but I looked through my old drawing from last school year, and I saw this really hot random OC guy I drew bc I was in my Tokyo revengers, Bonten era 😜 He was realllly hot and yk what, I said fuck it and just replaced the OG design for this fine ass mf.
The twins lowkey do illegal shit, but they're nice if ur nice.
They're ginger 😁and idk their names yet BUT IT'S A WORK IN PROGRESS
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clanwarrior-tumbly · 2 years
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I have a request, FNAF security breach x reader
Basically reader is known as Punkrock Fredbear and Nightmare, kinda of like a Siamese twin scenario, they are based of Nightmare and Nightmare Fredbear.
They perform more heavy metal songs and are know to play the drums, they are very tall, towering over the daycare attendent (who is said to be at least 9'0 ft tall)
They didn't get corrupted by the virus and ends up helping Gregory and Freddy, and they're grateful for that because reader is disturbingly strong.
How would they're relationship be with the glamrocks, daycare attendents, Gregory and Vanessa?
Love your writing!
Thanks! And here’s the drawing that was inspired by this ask ^^
Also since this is drifting more into OC territory I’ll use “they/them” instead.
......
Glamrock Freddy
A bear just like him?? That’s cool.
Though he didn’t expect Nightbear to be a twin animatronic resembling edgy bears with sharp teeth, punk attire, and a massive height.
But the kids love them! Only because there’s so much of their form to look at--from the belts around their arms to the different colored eyes to the skull painted across their torso. It’s all so fascinating.
Even so, their appearance worried Freddy during SB’s events...when he thought they were gonna be corrupted too.
But, ironically (and thankfully), they’re not. And they choose to help their fellow bear and Gregory survive the night.
They’re scary strong, as seen when they crush STAFF bots and fences that get in the way, which he’s grateful for.
Gregory
This dude is shitting bricks fr.
Usually he doesn’t care but this animatronic’s appearance makes him feel legit terrorized.
Has he shot them with the Fazblaster or Fazcam accidentally? Yes.
But he realizes his mistake and doesn’t hit both of their faces.
He’d rather be with both bears at the same time, though the one time it had to be him and Nightbear two was when they got trapped somewhere and had to pass a group of Endos.
He nearly screamed as they grabbed him--only to hoist him on their gold-plated shoulder as an Endo approached.
And all they did was push past it with ease, knocking over the rest of the group like tin cans.
It made Gregory chuckle a little. Now he’s not afraid anymore and honestly thinks they’re badass.
Monty
Heavy rock/metal was definitely a taste he and Nightbear had in common, even bonding over it and becoming best friends and performing duets together.
But after being corrupted, he only sees them as trying to be better than him: in strength, in teeth (yeah he’s jealous of their chompers), and in songs.
Literally everything they do he thinks he can be better at (except growing two heads, of course).
Will def try to one-up themat every opportunity, even when they reassure him not everything’s a competition and he is already great on his own.
Basically turns into Roxanne, esp when he gets broken in SB, as he directs all his anger at Nightbear, thinking they’re gonna outshine him and replace him.
It gets so bad he attacks them, hoping to get a punch throw at him in return. Yet..they don’t.
He utterly despises them and their stupid twin heads. Too weak and cowardly to use their full strength, he thinks.
But deep down he doesn’t know where all this resentment is coming from..
Glamrock Chica
Would prob be the most skittish around Nightbear out of all of the gang.
Big, scary, twin-headed bear who looks like they’ll eat her for breakfast, lunch, dinner, dessert, and snack is all she thinks about.
In reality they’re pretty chill around her, though they sometimes tease her and call her “Chicken Little” affectionately.
Freddy sees nothing wrong with their looks and would innocently stand by them like “don’t be shy, Chica, say hello!” while they creepily grin.
It’s strange when they see her totally unbothered by their presence after she gets corrupted. Always preoccupied with garbage and bolting at the slightest scent of pizza or sight of Gregory.
It’s sad. And they don’t wanna hurt her and end up making her more afraid of them, so they’ll stay out of the way unless she hurts Gregory.
Roxanne
Tbh she’d square up to prove she’s not intimidated by their size. Like throw playful punches here and there (that just feel like plushies being thrown at them).
She also digs heavy rock music, being Nightbear’s #1 hype-woman when they come on the stage.
Unfortunately they’re too heavy to use the go-karts, but they watch her races and cheer her on when she wins.
All in all a decent friendship, up until she gets corrupted and they’re not.
She’ll only lightly interrogate them on where Gregory is--but grows more desperate as the night passes.
At that point she begs for answers, not caring if she sounded “pathetic” for needing help.
She just had to win.
Yet they don’t help her at all, keeping their promise to Freddy and Gregory, and she feels betrayed.
Sun
Originally he had no idea a non-Glamrock existed until a child proudly showed him their drawing.
He was disturbed to see a two-headed black and yellow bear with sharp teeth and tons of spikes.
Nervously he asked who this was suppose to be and they just said “Nighty-Bear”.
He then asks an employee and they decide to bring the punkrock star themselves to personally visit him---only for Sun to immediately scream and dive into the ballpit in terror.
They’re so freakishly tall. Towering over him!
It took ages to coax him out so they can properly say hello. But after that, he was still anxious to be around them (not bc he’s scared but rather bc they could be dangerous to kids) and shooed them out of the daycare.
He wouldn’t see them at all during SB’s events but that’s probably for the best.
Moon
He’s made kids sob just by looking at them.
But when Nightbear is literally towering over him and a tiny toddler with their teeth bared...they look all starry-eyed and coo as they touch their spiky wristbands.
It makes absolutely no sense.
Sun fears them and Moon envies them so...yeah a friendship is essentially nonexistent.
Once he tried asking Nightbear if they wanted to play the part of the “boogeyman”, and they went along with it.
But the tipping point was when the children found more comfort in them than Moon...and since then he’s resented them.
So when the glitch gets to him, he doesn’t hold back his hatred, stalking them when the lights go out and making it very clear he despises them, thinking they’re gonna take away all the children.
To protect him they had no choice but to break Moon, shattering his limbs so he couldn’t chase after them or Gregory.
Vanessa
Of course, she gave Nightbear the same orders to find Gregory but doesn’t know they’re secretly helping him.
If she questions them, all they do is stare and intimidate her, telling her to be more patient.
But she’s just tired of this bs and remains unfazed by their scariness, insisting they kept searching.
They did try warning her the others are might hurt him since they’re not acting right, though she brushes it off.
Like Gregory she wonders why someone made them look so freaky but says nothing.
Sometimes they’ll mess with her by asking which head she’s talking to “Nightmare” or “Fredbear” if she doesn’t address them by their name.
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