Fay World (Draft)
It took Gwen ten minutes to explain to the deputies from the San Bernadino Sheriff’s Department that the enchanted green and purple bonfire currently lighting up her parent's backyard was harmless and entirely legal under the Mythic Magic Act. As she talked and answered their questions, they nodded but their eyes remained skeptical and their hands rested on their weapons. It was the kind of uneasiness Gwen had come to expect from most humans, especially humans confronted with a large group of Mythics.
“Look why don’t you come and see for yourself?” She gestured to the house. Though it was still two hours to midnight it was as bright as dawn, the electric lights inside combining with the bonfire and the tiny magical lights hanging in the sky. The babble of voices and laughter intertwined with the distant melody of someone playing a pipe and Mythics of all shapes and sizes were scattered across the unnaturally green lawn.
“I don’t think that will be necessary. We don’t want to interrupt your party.” The junior deputy said with barely concealed apprehension. Gwen tried not to smile at how easy they were to get rid of.
“Well then if there is nothing else?” She looked between them and her eye caught on something, or rather someone, behind them. If the officers had looked they wouldn’t have noticed anything but since the age of ten, Gwen had learned to detect the slight shimmer that came when Jack, her brothers best friend, went invisible. She gritted her teeth as he flitted about the car and hoped that whatever mischief he was up to wouldn’t land them all in trouble.
She focused back on the officers as they made their goodbyes and gave the standard warning about the penalties of illegal magic. She assured them again doing her best to look relaxed. They got into their car and Gwen held her breath, waiting for Jack’s trick to manifest. When the car was halfway down the long gravel drive and nothing exploded or seemed wrong she let it out in a whoosh.
There was a chuckle beside her.
“What did you do to the car?” She asked the night air.
“Something they won’t trace back to their visit here.” She could hear the smile in his voice.
“They better not or I swear this time I will turn you in.”
“You are no fun.” Jack appeared before her, stepping into the night as if parting a curtain. Unmasked, his magic hit her; strong and unmistakably wild. Her traitorous heart skipped a beat, he was too close. She tipped her head to meet his deep green eyes.
“We have different definitions of fun”
“You used to like my tricks.” He said with a pout that didn’t fool Gwen for a second.
“That was when I was a kid and thought you and Owen were cool.” She didn’t add it was also when she’d had a ridiculous crush on him.
He gasped theatrically and placed his hand on his heart. “How dare you imply I am not cool.”
In spite of herself, Gwen smiled. “You are trouble.”
“Actually I’m a puka.”
“Same thing.”
He grinned wide enough for his dimple to flash and dipped his head as if acknowledging a compliment. His white-blonde hair looked purple in the bonfire light and Gwen tried not to notice how attractive he looked. He really was trouble. As a puka Jack was a natural born trickster and never let something as trivial as human laws get in the way of having fun. Worse he was always dragging Owen into his schemes and landing Gwen’s simple guardian faerie brother in jail.
A roar followed by laughter and cheering sounded from the bonfire.
“Looks like the dwarves have started brawling,” Gwen said.
Jack chuckled as he turned from her. “Trouble calls.” Then he stepped back into the air disappearing into the night.
Gwen shook her head, telling herself she was glad to be rid of him. Without really thinking about it she pulled out her phone to text her sister, Elaine, knowing she would understand.
Jack is the worst
Gwen stared at the screen and the five previous messages she had sent with no reply. Unlike Gwen, Elaine was hard to get a hold of and always traveling. Ostensibly she was hunting for a gateway back to the Otherworld but from her social media, it seemed the only thing she was hunting was the best photo-op. Despite her trooping faerie ways, this was the first year Elaine had missed the annual Samhain party. Gwen had been up since dawn working with her mother to accomplish what was usually a three-person job. Though working in the kitchen was vastly preferrable to making small talk with the gnomes from Arizona, Gwen couldn’t help but be resentful that her sister had left her to face the party alone.
She put her phone back in her pocket as she weaved through the various vehicles, motorbikes, pedal bikes and a school bus painted neon green that littered the driveway and front lawn. Though many guests had arrived via magic more and more Mythics were growing practical and adapting to human modes of transportation, thanks in part to the recent changes in the laws. Changes that Gwen had helped enact, not that any of them knew or cared.
The porch step creaked as she trudged to the door. If Gwen didn’t go back into the kitchen to report about the police her mother would send someone looking for her. Steeling herself she opened the door and stepping inside.
The various types of magic, overwhelming and impossible to sort out the origins, hit her like jumping naked into a glacier lake. Taking a deep breath she reminded herself that it would be easier once she adjusted to it. As she struggled to acclimate Gwen scanned the room for her mother.
She wasn’t part of the knot of pixies that were listening to Amy Takanaka. By the laughing and sly look in the kitsune’s eyes Gwen assumed she was telling about tricking her latest human boy toy. Even knowing that Mythics existed Amy still managed to fool a surprising number of men. Beyond them was Henrik, a tall, lean, Nordic elf, talking to Chetna. The naga’s snakelike eyes looked mildly interested so Gwen guessed that she didn’t yet need saving from Henrik discussing his pet wolf’s bowel movements. Scanning further over the eclectic assortment of Mythics filling the room Gwen realized her mother must be in the kitchen.
She was wondering if it would be easier to sneak outside and around the house when a frisson of magic pulled her up short. It pressed upon Gwen, making every hair stand up and her heart pound. Liquid smoke wrapped around her legs before pouring itself into the shape of a human woman in front of her.
Gwen didn’t know if all jinni had the same annoying habit of ostentatious materializing but for as long as she could remember it was how Afiya had moved even short distances. The pressure of the magic eased as Afiya took form and Gwen gave a sigh.
“If you spent more time around magic it wouldn’t affect you so strongly,” Afiya said before its mouth had fully formed.
“Nice to see you too, Auntie.” Gwen gave a sweet smile. Ignoring the advice Afiya had already given her a hundred times. Afiya was a family friend and one of the first Mythics Gwen’s parent’s had met when they came to America. Sensing its unique, powerful magic they had followed it to a cave in Death Valley. Afiya, like so many American Mythics, was a refugee and luckily had taken a liking to Branwen and Cormac despite their British origins.
Afiya wrinkled its nose, it had chosen an aristocratic one this time. “You even smell human. Our kind was never meant to spend so much time with humans.”
“So you have told me. Just as I have told you that it’s a good job, doing important work for all Mythics.”
“Your generation! The very idea of taking worthless pieces of paper and plastic instead of bartering is offensive.”
Gwen didn’t bother pointing out that Afiya’s power made it easy to disdain currency because it didn’t need it to survive. Just as it didn’t care about the Mythic laws Gwen worked on because humans couldn’t enforce them on it.
“You need to spend more time with your sister. She will teach you how to be a true guardian faerie. Where is she?”
“Not here.” Gwen couldn’t keep the sharpness from her voice.
“And you resent her for that? She is doing the work she is meant for, the most important work of all. All of this nonsense about taking orders from humans will cease when your people finally open a gateway back home.”
As it spoke Afiya began to turn smudgy at the edges and its eyes, shifted from a deep blue to an unnatural orange. Magic rolled off of it in waves and Gwen gritted her teeth to keep herself from an angry retort. With a huff, the jinni abandoned its form entirely and became a swirl of smoke that spun up to the ceiling. Gwen hoped it went out the chimney and didn’t come back so that she wouldn’t be tempted to tell it how wrong it was.
While it was true that Gwen and her family were guardian faeries and that their kind had always been the keepers of the crossroads, with abilities to both sense where doorways were possible and to open them between the worlds. It was also true that no doorway had been opened for 26 years, almost all of Gwen’s life. Afiya talked of going home but America was the only home Gwen had ever known.
Pulling out her phone she sent Elaine another message.
I almost yelled at Afiya. This is what happens when you aren’t here to run interference.
As an afterthought, she added a smiley face so Elaine wouldn’t think she was angry.
“Hey.”
Gwen looked up to see her brother Owen approaching.
“Hey.” She put her phone away.
They were of a height, his purple eyes a match to hers, but his hair was short and grass green, framing his pointed ears while hers was dyed black and shoulder length, ears safely hidden. The excess magic in the room didn’t seem to be bothering him at all as he smiled and took a bite of a honey cake that Gwen had helped make that morning. Exhaustion swept over her and she longed to grab his cake and go hide in her old bedroom.
“What did you say to Afiya?” Owen waggled his eyebrows and Gwen was sure he had a good idea of the conversation.
“I was polite. Afiya just doesn’t want to accept the truth.”
“You mean your truth that the doorways are locked forever?”
“Remind me how many doorways you have found in your ten years of looking?”
“Ouch, little sister, no need to rub it in. And to think I was going to give you a gift.” Out of the air he produced another honey cake and offered it to her with a smile. The small magic was a party trick Jack had taught them when they were younger, though Gwen had never managed to master it.
“What do you want?”
“Can’t I just do something nice?”
Gwen raised her eyebrows.
“Fine,” he said. “I got into a bit of legal trouble and I was hoping you could help me out.”
“Ow-en.” She half groaned.
“It’s not a big deal. We don’t even have to talk about it now. Just after the party before you go back to L.A.”
“Okay. After the party.” He broke into a grin and she held up her hand “But I need two more honey cakes and you have to run interference with Mom for the next hour.”
“Done.”
They didn’t shake on the bargain but Gwen knew it to be magically binding by the zing up her spine. Normally she wouldn’t make a bargain so cavalierly but Owen was her brother she trusted him not to take advantage. In quick succession, Owen produced two more cakes. Gwen took them with a smile.
“I’m going upstairs to my room,” she said.
“I will make sure you are undisturbed.”
“And tell Mom there were no issues with the police.”
He gave a mock salute before turning and plunging back into the crowd towards the kitchen. Gwen went the opposite direction to the sagging old staircase.
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Laying in her old bed Gwen sucked the last bit of honey from her fingers. The full moon streamed through the window bathing the dark room in silver. Below and outside the party continued but at this distance the gathered magic faded into the background like hearing the pounding of waves from a beach house instead of having them break over her and drag her into the ocean.
Her families first Samhain party had been a small affair, just her parents, a nymph named Laurel they had met on their way to America, five-year-old Owen, three-year-old Gwen, and one-year-old Elaine. They had made the traditional foods and stayed up until midnight trying to catch glimpses into the world that had been suddenly closed to them. But there had been nothing to see, the Otherworld was hidden from them even on the night when the barrier between worlds was thinnest. Owen said that they sang songs and danced under stars until dawn in defiant joy but Gwen only remembered the feeling of emptiness and the desolation on her mothers face.
The next year, after her parents had made countless Mythic friends traveling the country, their small apartment had been bursting with guests and the party held a week before Samhain. Her parents had said it was to avoid upsetting their human neighbors by having so many Mythics gathered together on a day of power but Gwen was never sure that was exactly true. Especially because it seemed every year, no matter where they were living, the police were always called about the party. Gwen was wondering who had called them this year when she heard a thud from Elaine’s room.
Holding her breath she sat up and strained her ears, which were more acute than a human’s. Over the sounds of the party, she heard the faintest of footsteps and the scrape of a chair. Gwen frowned. Who could possibly have a reason to be in Elaine’s room? If it was a hobgoblin looking to do some cleaning in exchange for more food she wasn’t going to stand for it.
But when she got to Elaine's doorway the occupant wasn’t three foot and hairy nor was he cleaning. The stranger appeared to be almost six feet and was inspecting the contents of a desk drawer a red ball of faerie fire glowing above his shoulder.
Gwen switched on the electric light. The stranger reared up hitting his head on his faerie fire and cursing.
“What are you doing?” Gwen demanded as she stepped into the room.
He turned to her scowling as he rubbed the back of his head. “Was that necessary?”
“What? Who the hell are you? And why are you snooping in my sister's room?” Gwen crossed her arms trying to figure out just what kind of Mythic he was.
“Just exploring.” He flashed her a smile that would have been charming under different circumstances before continuing in a smooth accented voice, “Sorry if I scared you.”
“You didn’t scare me.” Gwen wondered if she should be scared of his magic but when she tried to feel for it all she got was the weak pulse from the faerie fire. “You’re human.”
“And you are a Mythic.” He tipped his head slightly, and a dark curl slipped onto his forehead. His face was narrow and handsome despite the slight crook in his nose.
“Why are you here?” Gwen looked at the open desk drawer. There was nothing but junk in it. Elaine didn’t really use it but this man clearly didn’t know that and his accent made it unlikely he was a local attracted by the light and noise.
“I was invited by my friend. Couldn’t pass up a chance to see a real Mythic bash.”
“What’s your friend's name?”
“John.” He barely paused but Gwen knew in her gut he was lying. She hated liars.
“No, you’re not.”
His lips twitched. “No, I’m not. Quite clever aren’t you.” He smiled and it was sharp at the edges. “Well, now that we have established that I don’t belong here shall we make a deal?”
Gwen frowned. Nothing good could come from a bargain with this man but she had finally placed his accent, some variety of British, and in spite of herself she was intrigued.
“What would be your terms?” She asked.
“I will tell you who I am, why I am here, and leave immediately if you answer one question.”
“What question?”
“First promise.”
Gwen put her hands on her hips. “I am not stupid enough to agree to anything without knowing the full terms. Especially with a human who could easily break their word.” Human’s had a choice in bargains but for her it was always magically binding. A fact she had learned painfully as a child.
“So untrustworthy.” He gave a shake of his head. “Alright. I want to know where Elaine is.”
Ice stabbed Gwen’s heart. What had Elaine gotten mixed up in now? “I will tell you what I know about where Elaine is if you tell me who you are, why you are here and leave immediately.” She hoped he hadn’t noticed her change to his wording. But his smug smile eased her fears.
“Agreed.”
“Agreed.” Gwen felt the zing up her spine sealing the bargain. “You first.”
He grinned broadly like a poker player about to lay down a winning hand. “I’m a private investigator and I am here because my employer suspects that your sister kidnapped Vivian Jamison. My job is to find Elaine and turn her into the authorities.”
“What? That’s insane. Elaine and Vivian are friends. She wouldn’t kidnap her.”
He shrugged. “And yet Vivian Jamison is missing and was last seen with your sister. Elaine’s innocence or guilt isn’t really my business. I am here to find her, turn her into the authorities and collect my money.”
Gwen was appalled by his naked avarice. This was her sister's life they were talking about. She thought of all the unanswered texts and her stomach clench in panic.
“When did Vivian go missing?”
“That wasn’t part of the agreement. Now tell me where is Elaine?” He stepped closer.
Gwen wanted to throttle him and his smug smirk, he had deliberately given her information so she would know she was selling out Elaine. She was now grateful for how little she knew.
“I don’t know where she is. The last time we spoke she was in Edinburgh.”
He glared and took another step into her space. “She was in Edinburgh five days ago. You agreed to tell me where she is now.”
“No. I agreed to tell you what I knew about where she is. That’s all I know. My end of the bargain is met.” She felt the confirming coldness wash over her. She owed this man nothing.
“But you have an idea of where she might have gone or where she might be?”
This time she stepped toward him with a sickly sweet smile. “That wasn’t part of the agreement. Now leave before I call my jinni friend up here to make you leave.”
She was close enough to see that his eyes were a deep blue as they flashed and he looked on the verge of arguing but then he broke into a laugh that took all the bravado out of Gwen. She stepped away confused.
“Well played, little fae.” He sat on the desk and eyed her speculatively “You know there is no reason for us to be enemies.”
“You are trying to get my sister pinned for kidnapping.”
“If the price was right I could be convinced to help you instead.”
“So all you care about is your payday?”
“A man’s got to eat.”
Gwen felt sick at his words. She wasn’t even sure if he was being honest or if this was just another attempt at getting information from her.
“I don’t need the help of a human bounty hunter to find my sister.”
He considered her for a long moment before nodding. Then he reached into his black motorcycle jacket and pulled out a card. “In case you change your mind.” When she didn’t move to take it he set in on the desk. He gave her one last smirk before sauntering past her and down the stairs.
She watched from the top step as he closed the front door and then went to Elaine’s window and watched him jump into an unremarkable sedan with California plates. Only when his taillights had disappeared into the dark did she move to go find Owen.
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Hi Pete, Can you recommend some questions to ask during the phone call when an agent offers representation? There seems to be so much to potentially cover. I've targeted agents who seemingly have great reputations, but are there a few succinct questions that you could recommend asking? Thanks again and all the best!
There’s a pretty thorough overview on questions to ask here: http://www.victoriastrauss.com/2014/02/26/questions-to-ask-your-prospective-literary-agent/
I had an author just ask point blank (paraphrasing here): why would I sign with you as opposed to another agent – what are your strengths or what sets you apart? I really appreciated how direct the question was, and how the author asked me to explain in no unclear terms the value I bring to the table. It showed me the author (now a client) knew her own value and was taking her career as a writer seriously, not treating it like an afterthought. It’s important to remember that you are hiring someone to represent your career – this relationship will require a lot of trust – so you should feel empowered to be thorough, to follow up with emails or additional phone calls, to ask to speak to a client of the agent, to ask to speak to the agency’s relevant staff (ie, foreign rights director, any film agents if applicable, or any other important team members; you may not have to speak to these people if the agent explains their role and answers your questions to your satisfaction, but if you think it can help, you should feel comfortable asking to be in touch with them). Without meaning to diminish the rich interpersonal aspect of the author-agent relationship, this is a decision that can have an impact on your future earnings as an author. It is, in other words, a very important business decision, and it can be easy, especially if you are a debut author, to feel like you get one hour with each agent you speak to and that’s it – then you have to make the decision without bothering them again. But that’s not true, and you should make sure you have as much info as you need to make an informed decision you can be confident in.
Just off the top of my head, a few possible questions you might ask:
Editorial: What are your thoughts on the manuscript and what changes are needed before it goes on sub? How do you deliver edits? What is the timeline on delivering edits for this draft if I sign with you? How do you see this book fitting into the market?
Submissions: What is your submission strategy? Do any specific editors come to mind? What happens if it doesn’t sell the first time you send it out?
History: Who do you represent? What is your experience? How does the agency support the client?
Communication: How accessible are you? How do you prefer to communicate?
Sub rights: How are foreign and film rights to a property managed? Other subsidiary rights? (In a perfect world, your agent should have an in-house foreign rights manager, as foreign rights can be hugely important to author’s bottom line and, in an increasingly connected world, to an author’s global brand).
After submission: after a book sells, how actively do you stay involved in consulting on the publication process? How accessible are you? How do you help support an author’s brand beyond just an individual book or series? If a book doesn’t sell, will you continue to represent me for the next project?
Agency agreement: Is there an agency agreement? May I review the agency agreement prior to making a decision? What is the commission structure?
There are probably a bunch more I’m missing right now, so take a look at the link above, and good luck!
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