What If Choices' Race-customizable LIs Had Surnames Reflective Of Their Ethnicity?: An Experiment Just For FUn (Part 1/3)
As we're probably all aware, Choices has been going ham on their formula of "one LI whose appearance is choosable" for the past few years (ever since they started drawing criticism for narratively favoring white male LIs, i.e., when the Ramsey bubble finally burst; draw your own conclusions), and these LIs almost always have canon names or default names associated with white Anglo Americans. This is one of several reasons these LIs are described by players as "white-coded", or written as if they are white men with any changes reduced to a one-line afterthought, which kind of nullifies the point of romancing an LI of color.
Getaway Girls impressed me with branching that gave two of the six Jordan appearance options (the ones described in the asset files as "Indian") the surname Paudwal, as opposed to the other options that had the surname Parker. And then they NEVER DID IT AGAIN (ingnoring Kiss of Death cause it was a weird case I don't know how to categorize)!!
So here's me assigning surnames to race-custom LIs of other books because it's fun for me:
DISCLAIMER: The Choices single LI formula has for the most part consisted of a white LI, a Black LI, and one or occasionally two other option(s) of varying races. Framing it as white, Black, and "wildcard" raises a lot of questions about racial dynamics and percieved binaries in the United States which are NOT the point of this post but I didn't want to not address it. Also have to address that I will not be assigning new surnames to the Black LI options since most of them are American and a lot of Black Americans have Anglo surnames due to the community's history with enslavement and enslavers, and Choices has simply not given us enough lore to determine if each of the custom race LI Black options are African (or another background) and which languages are a part of their heritages. Would really appreciate if they started writing more African LIs though. Also, similar reasoning applies to face options described as "Native American" in the files re: American colonization.
ALPHA
Channing Luna
These face options are described in the files as "Hispanic". Luna was a Spanish-language surname sound match for Lowe, and plus it also means "moon"!! Yippee werewolf theme!!!!!
Channing Liu
These face options are described in the files as "Asian". The Chinese surname Liu was just the closest sound match to "Lowe" tbh.
BABY BUMP
Clint Kao
This face option is described in the asset files as "Asian". He reminds me a little of the Taiwanese actor Godfrey Gao (rip) so in my head he's Taiwanese like meeee!!! Which sucks cause I didn't like this LI that much lmao. Anyway Kao is the Taiwanese spelling of the surname that is Anglicized as Gao in Chinese Pinyin so I gave it to him cause he reminds me of Godfrey Gao (rip). Not a spelling match but then again there aren't any Chinese surnames that start with the same letter and sound as Covington (e.g., Chang and Cai both start with the letter C but start with the sounds "ch" and "ts" respectively.).
DIRTY LITTLE SECRETS
Charles Quiñones / Charlotte Quiñones
These face options are described in the asset files as "Hispanic". Went with sound matches since there aren't many (any?) Spanish-language surnames that start with K like King.
Charles Kim / Charlotte Kim
These face options are described in the asset files as "Asian". I thought Kim was a pretty good sound and spelling match for King. But it did make me realize that although Kim is the most common surname in Korea by a lot, a Choices Wiki search revealed to me that there's only one character in the entire Choicesverse with that surname and it's the FBI guy from Veil of Secrets?
DISTANT SHORES
Edward Mao
This face option is described in the asset files as "Asian". I originally chose the Japanese surname Morishima because it was an initial spelling match, multisyllabic, and had the ending "ma/mer" sound, but I wanted to honor the great Ming Dynasty Chinese tradition of piracy and its far-reaching legacy. So I went with the Chinese Mao.
Also I know he's canonically from like England which would explain why he's an 18th-century Asian man with an English first name but just for fun if he was from China I think he would be called Mao Aiwei. Or Morishima Eiji if he was from Japan.
Edward Montoya
This face option is described in the asset files as "Hispanic". Montoya was a relatively close Spanish-language sound match.
And if he had a Spanish first name too he would be Eduardo Montoya ovb.
THE DUCHESS AFFAIR
Nathaniel Pandit / Natalie Pandit
These face options are described in the asset files as "Indian". Not a lot of sound matches for Pippin but the Sanskrit surname Pandit has the intial "P" and the ending "i" sound, plus it means "scholar" and fun fact, this word is also the origin of the English term "pundit".
Also since in my research I learned that the vast majority of Indian immigrants to England in this time period adopted English language aliases for use in English society, I came up with some potential real names for these face options: Nathuram for Nathaniel and Nalini for Natalie.
FIRST COMES LOVE
Blake Mai
These face options are described in the asset files as "Asian". I decided on Mai since it could be Vietnamese or broadly Sinophone.
FOREIGN AFFAIRS
Blaine Juárez
These face options are described in the asset files as "Hispanic". Not any Spanish-language surnames that start with the letters "Ha" as far as I know so I went with a sound match.
GUARDED
Ash Harada
These face options are described in the asset files as "Asian". The Japanese surname Harada is a sound and spelling match and also one of the most common surnames in Japan! EASAYY!!! Though headcanoning them as Japanese brings the total number of Choicesverse Japanese-Americans Named Ash to three. Laugh out loud.......
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CFWC F/AotW - Feb 25 - Mar 3, 2023
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BLADES OF LIGHT & SHADOW
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CRIMES OF PASSION
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THE CURSED HEART
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DESIRE AND DECORUM
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ENDLESS SUMMER
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IT LIVES WITHIN
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Male MC (Will Redgrave) x Charlie Smith
Part 2
Will and Charlie have been transported to the modern age, and first and foremost is seeing to Charlie's survival...
Written in the present tense
Part 1
Tagging: @choicesficwriterscreations, @jerzwriter
Warnings: Talk of death
Word Count: 1354
Notes: I don’t own these characters, they are the property of Pixelberry Studios.
An Alternate Path made on cooltext.com
I was thinking about this post I made ages ago, and decided to write a story sort of based on it
With no choice but to sit in the waiting area, Will grabs his phone, switching it on, but it switches off straight away. Getting to his feet, he goes over to the reception desk.
Will - Hi, do you have a lead I can use to charge my phone?
She quickly checks the shape of the charging port of his phone.
Nurse - Uh.. yeah. Here you go.
She hands him the end of a lead and he plugs his phone in. After a few seconds, he switches it on and takes a step out of the way whilst the nurse returns to their work. Opening up his photos, Will smiles at the one he took of the entire crew, Axton, Adelia, Charlie, Edward, Ginny, Jonas, Maggie, everyone. He sets the photo as his new wallpaper and also emails it to himself so he can do the same on his computer.
Doctor - Excuse me, Mr. Redgrave?
Will sets his phone down and turns to the Doctor.
Will - How is she?
Doctor - She'll be okay. We were able to counteract the poison, but we'll need to keep her here overnight.
Will - Can I see her?
Doctor - She's unconscious, but if you want to sit with her, that's okay.
Will - Yes please.
Doctor - This way.
The doctor leads Will to the room they're keeping Charlie and he finds her sleeping. Her arm hooked up to what Will guesses is the antidote to the poison. The doctor leaves them and Will closes the curtains around them to give them some privacy. Standing at her side, he takes her hand in his and smiles in relief.
Will - I'm so glad you're alive, Charlie. You changed my life in ways I never imagined possible. You all did.
He takes a seat, settling in for what is probably going to be a long night.
Groaning as she blinks awake, Charlie looks around to find herself somewhere she doesn't recognise. Looking over, she sees Will asleep in the chair and sits up. Will opens his eyes and rushes to stand, wrapping her in a tight hug.
Will - Charlie!
Charlie winces and he steps back.
Will - Sorry!
Charlie looks at the screens around her and at the tube connected to her arm.
Charlie - So we're really in your time?
Will - Welcome to the twenty first century. How much do you remember?
Charlie - I remember being at the temple and there was a woman.
Will - Magdalena. She was the reason we had a chance to say goodbye to Edward and Oliver.
Charlie - So what happens now?
Will - A new life. Together... if you'll have me.
Charlie laces her fingers with his and pulls him closer, capturing his lips with hers in a soft kiss. When they part, she smiles, giving his hand a squeeze.
Charlie - You're al mine, love.
Will laughs quietly, bringing Charlie's hand up and kissing her knuckles.
The next morning, Will and Charlie arrive at his home via a taxi and as they get out, Charlie looks at the vehicle in shock while Will pays the driver. They head in and Will hands up his coat while Charlie looks around.
Charlie - This is all... so strange... I don't even know where to begin.
Will - Wherever you want.
He sits on the sofa and Charlie sits with him, looking at their clothing and then seeing some of Will's hanging up.
Charlie - I guess I should consider some different clothes.
Will - We can order you some to be delivered.
Charlie - You can do that?!
Will - Yeah. Yeah, that's a thing these days.
Charlie - It's strange to think, yesterday we were in the nineteenth century, and now here we are.
Will - I know the feeling. But I'll help you get used to technology and other parts of this time.
Charlie - Thank you. For saving my life.
Will - That wasn't me, that was the Doctors.
Charlie rests against him and he wraps an arm around her, holding her close. They sit in silence for a while before Charlie breaks it with a whisper of three words.
Charlie - I love you...
Will - I love you too.
A few days later, after getting Charlie a few clothes as well as showing her a few things for day to day life in the modern world, Will sets a few parcels down on the floor next to him before taking the last one from the delivery driver and giving a signature.
Will - Cheers, have a good one.
Driver - You too.
He closes the door, setting the parcel in his hands down by the sofa before grabbing the others. He goes through them, and one in particular contains two phones. He grabs his sim card and puts it in one of them before plugging both in to charge. A few minutes later, Charlie steps out, running a brush through her hair.
Charlie - One thing I'm definitely enjoying about this time is the showers.
Will laughs, wrapping an arm around her. She looks over at the parcels, along with the two phones charging.
Charlie - Is that...?
Will - One's to replace mine. The other's for you...
Charlie picks up the phone for her, looking it over.
Charlie - You'll need to guide me in using one of these.
Will - Sure thing. I also found something else, I thought might be of interest to you...
He points at the computer screen and she sits down, reading about a museum exhibit.
Charlie - This is...
Will - Yeah. Wondered if maybe you wante--
Charlie - Yes! I need to know what became of them...
That afternoon, Will and Charlie arrive at the exhibit where they find a painting of the Poseidon's Revenge, along with a portrait of Oliver and Edward hanging side by side.
Curator - Good afternoon, I was told you were interested in the exhibit. To be honest, it has a lot of mystery surrounding it.
Will - How so?
Curator - Well, there is the mystery of what happened to the Quartermaster. We've been lead to believe that she died during an exploration, along with one of their crewmates.
Will and Charlie share a knowing look.
Curator - But what it known is that after their disappearance, they took the ship belonging to Admiral Cochrane, renaming it the Charlotte.
Charlie - The Charlotte?
Curator - After their Quartermaster.
Will - Wow...
Curator - There are also these drawings made their youngest crewmember, Ginny.
The Curator leads them over to a series of drawings. Each one of each member of the crew, including Will and Charlie.
Curator - You know, you two bare a resemblance to these two.
Will - Uh, coincidence.
Charlie - What happened to them?
Curator - Well, going by a journal kept by Captain Mortemer, as the world changed, so did they. Oliver returned to the navy after his father passed, and it seems there was an arrangement made between the two. The crew sailed, distributing their wealth to the people. But eventually, as time passed, so did they. One of the pages speaks of how Edward returned to his home, Gorvershire to live out his last few years. He left the Charlotte under the command of Ginny.
Charlie - Good for her...
Curator - Is there anything else I can help you with?
Charlie - No, thank you.
The Curator takes her leave and Charlie takes a shaky breath as she looks at the drawings. Will laces his fingers with hers, giving her hand a squeeze.
Charlie - Do you know where Grovershire is?
Will - No, but it won't be hard to find.
A few days later, Charlie and Will stand before Edward's grave. Charlie lays some flowers down before wiping some dirt from the headstone, reading the words.
'A life well lived'
Charlie - Thank you for everything, Edward.
She stands and Will kneels down, laying his own flowers down.
Will - We'll follow your words and live well...
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