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kabartmatzu · 9 months

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I wanted to redesing and rewrite Miraculous for a while. Then thought why not share my ideas so here is Chloé Bourgeois. (Duddeee I forgor the wingss?? 💀)

In my rewriting, power system is different. I will explain it on my further posts. Here I want to tell you more about my version of Chloé aka Queen Bee.

Chloé’s character is similar to show version. (First two seasons) Mommy issues, struggling with social relationships, bully… The difference is I keep the redemption arc :D In my version Ladybug and Chat Noir get their miraculouses when they were in high school. But show will take place at their twenties when they are in university. We will have flashbacks about high school years and how they got their miraculouses. Chloé also gets her miraculous in high school but it will be taken from her by Ladybug. This events will be similar to show too. Chloé won’t reveal her identity to everyone but will do wrong things to fix and seem like a hero. Her plan was to impress her mother as Queen Bee so later she can reveal her identity to her and make her mother proud of her for once :’) (Damn you Audrey)

Her only friend was Adrian for her whole childhood (same goes for Adrian) thanks to Audrey’s business with Gabriel. I thought her whole feelings towards Adrian is platonic but in her high school times she thought she has romantic feelings towards him because she never had friends other than Adrian and never had romantic interest. That’s why she will be clingy towards Adrian in high school.

In last year of high school after Ladybug took Bee miraculous from her, Marinette will try to fix her relationship with Audrey like in the show but it won’t work and Audrey probably say some really heartbreaking things and this will make Chloé angrier. She will blame Marinette and will be ruder to everyone (espacially to Marinette) at school, Sabrina will dump her (yaaay), Ladybug won’t trust her about an akuma attack (there are no akuma in my story tho but i want you to know what i am referring to rn) and Adrian will talk with her about her actions and how he doesn’t want to keep being friends with her anymore if she continues. She will get akumatized too and hurt her teacher (forgor her name) and Sabrina. She will collapse and leave Paris. I am not sure where she will go, probably i will make her go another country at Europe.

She will change her contacts so Adrian won’t be able to reach her. She will go therapy there and will be emotionally better. I feel like she would study child psychology maybe become a teacher or something. I also thought she will take self defense classes too since Ladybug told that she doesn’t have enough experience on fighting and they ve been getting educated for years to hold a miraculous, when she took bee miraculous from her. ( thats a lie tho it has only been a few months not years lmao)

After 2 or 3 years she will return to Paris (when show takes time at)for a few days just to see her father and apologize to Sabrina, Adrian and Marinette. I thought Sabrina won’t even wanna listen her. So she will decide not to see Adrian because she will think he doesn’t want to see her either. Then she will find herself in the middle of akuma attack. She will see where the akumatized item is. Ladybug and Chatnoir will be surprised to see her there of course but they are in the middle of fight. Chloé will try to tell where the akuma is but Ladybug will immediately tell Chatnoir to take her somewhere safe and he will. Chloé will tell Chatnoir that she knows how to defeat the akuma and she is sorry for being a bad holder back than. Adrian is so confused seeing her friend after years of course but can’t say anything (you know ,secret identity 🤷). Akuma will be defeated and he will go to Chloé to thank.

So then she will go to bakery hoping Marinette will be there in university break and hoping at least Marinette would like to listen her like back then. And as she hoped, Marinette wants to listen her. I might make a comic with this scene later. Right now I don’t have the words to describe the dialogue in here. But it will be about how she came to apologize and she is now a different person but how she doesn’t expect to be forgiven since Sabrina didn’t. And I thought Marinette would hug her seeing how in the edge she is and she might cry :’’(

I know I know it is so plane but i am not good at writing. I just tell what my ideas are. It is not the end. I will write about what happens later but first I should make posts about other holders and power system. Powers are different in my version so story might be confusing without knowing them. Bee miraculous also has slightly a different power. So first I will tell about them. Then I might try harder and write the story better hehe.

About Zoe btw I don’t even know if I want her to exit lmaoo. No hate don’t get me wrong but she is not even a character in the show. I am not sure what to do about her yet.

Thank you for reading, I appreciate that. 🪐🌟

=====Turkish translate======

Bir süredir Mucize’yi tekrar tasarlamak ve yazmak istiyordum. Kendi kendime dedim ki neden fikirlerimi paylaşmayayım ve paylaşmaya karar verdim. Ta daa Chloé Bourgeois! ( kanatlarını çizmeyi unutmuşum ama çaktırmayın)

Benim alternatifimde güç sistemi farklı. İlerki postlarımda açıklayacağım. Burada daha çok benim tasarladığım Chloe’den diğer adıyla Kraliçe Arı’dan bahsetmek istiyorum.

Aslında Chloe’nin karakteri dizidekine yakın. (İlk iki sezondaki) Annesi ile sorunları, sosyal ilişkilerde sıkıntılar, zorba biri olması… Fark ise ‘redemtion arc’ ını çöpe atmadım. :D Benim versiyonumda Uğur Böceği ve Kara Kedi mucizelerini lise okurken alıyorlar ama hikaye üniversite yıllarında, yirmili yaşlarında geçiyor. Lise yıllarında yaşadıklarına arada ‘flashback’lerle değinmeyi düşünüyorum. Chloe de mucizesini lisede alıyor ancak Uğur Böceği ondan geri alıyor. Bu olaylar da dizidekine benziyor. Chloe kimliğini herkese açıklamak yerine önce Kraliçe Arı olarak annesini etkileyip sonra ona kimliğini açıklamayı düşünüyor. Böylelikle sonunda annesinin onunla gurur duyacağını düşünüyor. Dizideki gibi sorunlar çıkarıp sonra kahraman gibi davranıp insanları kurtarmış gibi gösteriyor kendisini.

Küçüklüğünde tek arkadaşı Adriandı. O da annesi Audrey’in Gabriel ile olan işi sayesinde. Aslında Adrian’a karşı tamamen platonik sevgi (arkadaş olarak seviyor yani karşılıksız sevgi anlamında değil) beslediğini düşünüyorum. Hiç bir zaman romantik hisleri olmadı ama Adrian’dan başka arkadaşı olmadığı için ve daha önce hiç romantik duygular hissetmediğinden Adrian’a olan duygularını romantik sevgi ile karıştırdığını düşünüyorum.

Lisenin son yılında Uğur Böceği, arı mucizesini ondan alıyor; Marinette Chloe’nin annesi ile olan ilişkisini düzeltmeye yardım ederken işler ters gidiyor ve Audrey, Chloe’ye kalp kırıcı şeyler söylüyor. Bu Chloe’yi ilerki günlerde daha agresif yapıyor, Marinette’i her zamankinden daha fazla aşağılayıp olanlar yüzünden onu suçluyor, Sabrina dayanamayıp onunla ilişkisini kesiyor (yürü be Sabrina), Uğur Böceği akuma saldırısı konusunda Chloe’ye güvenmiyor( akumalar benim versiyonumda yok ama şimdilik anlaşılmak için akuma diyeceğim) ve Adrian böyle biri olmaya devam ederse onunla arkadaş olmak istemediğini söylüyor. Bunların hepsi Chloe’nin duygusal olarak yıkılmasına hatta belki akumalanarak sevdiği insanlara, şu adını unuttuğum öğretmenleri ve belki Sabrina’ya, zarar vermesine yol açıyor. Tüm bunlar Chloe’nin Paris’ten ayrılarak başka bir Avrupa ülkesine gitmesiyle sonuçlanıyor.

Burda Chloe iletişim bilgilerini bile değiştiriyor ve Adrian dahil kimse ona ulaşamıyor. Terapi alıyor. Üniversitede çocuk psikolojisi okuyor belki de öğretmen olmak istiyor diye düşündüm. Hatta bazı dövüş sanatlarını da öğreniyor çünkü Uğur Böceği mucizeyi alırken ona yeterli savaş deneyimi olmadığını ve kendilerinin yıllardır eğitim aldığını söylüyor. ( Yalan tabii. Sadece bir kaç aydır çalışıyorlar yıllardır değil.)

2 ya da 3 yıl içinde ( hikayenin geçtiği zaman ) Paris’e dönüyor. Sadece bir kaç günlüğüne babasını görmeye; Sabrina, Adrian ve Marinette’den özür dilemeye geliyor. Sabrina onu dinlemek bile istemeyince Adrian’ın da aynı tepkiyi vereceğini düşündüğünden onu görmekten vazgeçiyor. Marinette’i görmeye giderken kendisini akuma saldırının ortasında buluyor ve Uğur Böceği ile Kara Kediye yardım etmeye çalışıyor. Kahramanlar Chloe’yi gördüklerine çok şaşırıyorlar ama savaşın tam ortasındalar bu yüzden Kara Kedi onu alıp daha güvenli bir yere götürüyor. Chloe, Kara Kedi’ye akumanın nerde olduğunu söylüyor ve önceden kötü bir kahraman olduğu için özür diliyor. Adrian eski arkadaşını gördüğüne çok mutlu oluyor tabii ama hiç bir şey söyleyemiyor çünkü gizli kimlik şeysinden. Akumayı yeniyorlar tabii ve Chloe ye teşekkür ediyor.

Daha sonra Chloe Marinette’ i görmeyi umarak pastanelerine gidiyor. Ve umduğu gibi Marinette orda oluyor. Burdaki sahne hakkında daha sonra bi çizgi roman yapmayı düşünüyorum şimdilik dialog kafamda tam değil ama basitçe Marinette’den özür diliyor, artık eskisi gibi olmadığını ama yine de Sabrina gibi affetmek zorunda olmadığını sadece farklı biri olduğunu bilmesini istediğini söylüyor. Burda Marinette’in ona sarılacağını düşündüm bu da yaşlarını zor tutan Chloe’yi ağlatacak.

Biliyorum biliyorum anlatımım aşırı düz ama yazmakta iyi değilim. Sadece kafamdaki fikirleri aktarıyorum. Bu son değil. Devamını yazacağım ama önce diğer Mucize kullanıcıları hakkında ve güç sistemi üzerine postlar yapmak istiyorum. Neleri değiştirdiğimi bilmeden hikayeyi anlamak zor olabilir. Yazım şeklimi de daha akıcı ve güzel hale getirmeye çalışacağım.

Zoe’yi sorarsanız onun hakkında ne yapacağımı henüz bilmiyorum. Onu hikayeye ekler miyim emin bile değilim. Açıkçası dizide hiç bir kişiliği olmayan bom boş bir karakter. O yüzden emin değilim.

Okuduğun için teşekkür ederim. 🪐🌟

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creepy--claws · 8 months

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new sansmaeda au (this time a bit more of uh ironic fanime haha + horror stuff): komaeda's a schoolboy, yknow nothing special!

and his personality's just yknow normal komaeda + stereotypical anime schoolgirl n a LOOOOT of obsessiveness. like..alot.

it all starts with the cute, although weirdly obbsessive gestures like letters (some written with blood), cookies n pastry baskets put in lockers and desks (some of them have the meat n organs of his victims) and then the whole "hiding the murder so it doesnt look suspicious" jig is up and he still does what he does, although the murder is more obvious now.

like...he chopped off someone's arms and made them into a heart shape and put them on a cake when he heard sans's birthday was coming up, he litterally wrote I Love You with someone's blood and left their body still there bleeding.

he also pretends to be a school girl named Fuku-Chan on message boards like Ayashii world or 2channel (i forgor 2 mention this au is set in like...1999-2006 i guess idk)and takes pictures of his victims corpses and badly edits them so they look cutesy enough to pass for the gurokawa forums.he usually says "if you want to use this as your profile picture, go ahead<3".

he even has a physical diary where he documents all his kills and his hitlist is in it too!! and yknow the best part....HE DOTS ALL THE 'I'S WITH HEARTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

aaand to further push the weird schoolgirl who is actually an even weirder fucking dude, he dresses like a schoolgirl when he kills his victims (primarily at night,around 18:00-23:00ish), but that comes with some..problems, but he's prepared to deal with them whether theyre weird perverts who wanna look up his skirt to rabid wild cats n dogs trying 2 attack him.

his weapon of choice is usually either a crowbar or a gun but sometimes he switches it up just for fun lolz

i think this would be a pretty rad fanime....if i knew how 2 animate of course^^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

also the way he switches from ok this kids kinda weird i guess but hes actually a nice dude to PSYCHOPATHIC SCHOOLGIRL ON THE LOOSE is like the uboa/ponikos room event in yume nikki lolz

Sans has caught up on all of this and is still trying to find out who this so-called "Fuku-Chan" is,when suddenly..Komaeda (still wearing schoolgirl costume when this happened btw) got hit by a truck and got seriously injured and had to go to the hospital. coincidentally, Fuku-Chan said she wasnt posting today cuz she was in the hosptial because he got hit by a truck last night.COINCIDENCE???????? I THINTK NOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oh yeah and reigen survived one of his attacks and told the cops lolz

wHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEW...,this was long

anyways i hope you like komaeda fucking around in a cheap dokuro chan-esque disguise n being a yandere n such

[● Really enjoyed this latest entry of "Oh this fucking guy", especially putting it into a new time frame. Only like one or two beats that don't sit right with me but it's not that big of a deal, and overall pretty neat! The truck part got me harder than it should've, like people getting run over shouldn't be funny but it is.]

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octoxen · 2 years

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"Ah, the young man from Fontaine. He is Known for his bombs and it either helps people or result to utter mischief."

(Please take note that i do not know Fontaine or Klee's lore very much! qwq)

•Meet Kladen/Paix, My Genshin Fontaine OC!

•he is based of Klee, Actually, i made him her older bro :D

•Kladen/Paix - "Clover in the streams"

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Ah, the young man from Fontaine.

He is known for his bombs and it either helps people or result to utter mischief.

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On the streets of Fontaine, comes firing rumours of the young man being an outsider not from this Nation, but from another.

Despite the fact that he lost his memory of his homeland, he never gives up on making explosives and discovering who he really is every day..

"That young man, hes not from here, isn't he?"

"He isn't. I think he is someone from Mondstadt but he chose to live here."

When Enemies emerge from within the abyss, Kladen comes to silence them.

"Dovixen, Cheerful Firefox, let's go on an Adventure!"

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Elemental Skill: Fiery Cheerfulness

Voicelines: "Blazen!" "Fiery Light!" *giggles*

(Paix throws a "Dovixen" bomb on the target, dealing pyro damage. It starts with two charges.)

Elemental Burst: Blazing Clove Spark!

Voicelines: "Blazing Clove Spark!" "Dovixen go!" "Boom Boom bomb!"

(Paix summons his Fire-fox companion, Dovixen then enlarges his bombs that increased the speed of the elemental skill's CD, Pyro Dmg and lowers the target's defense. This Burst only lasts up to 15 seconds.)

Vision story Quote:

"If i could make a hundred bombs in a day without getting tired, then its not the same for my passion to protecting my loved ones and this dear Nation which, lasts till the end of time. Even if everyone has already forgotten about me, my blazing heart will always set itself afire to protect them"

(i forgor to screenshot the Character Vision story qwq, but its something abt Paix protecting Klee from some hostile Hillichurls and his rage/passion on protecting Klee has already been accumulated very much to the fact that the Gods have peeked down on him and granted him the Blazing, Pyro vision. In that way, Paix could protect Klee from them using his Pyro enlightened bombs.)

Background/Character Stories:

More Info:

Real Name: Kladen

Gender - M

Pronouns - He/him

Body type: Male, medium type

Age - 16

Weapon - Catalyst

Signature Weapon - Tales of Dodoco, "Clover of fire" (4 - star)

Rarity - 4 Star

Voice - (no CV yet)

Voice Description - Soft, male medium pitch (Kinda like Albedo's but more cheerful ig)

Food Specialty: "Pile em' up" - "Packed Explosive Adventures!"

Favorite Food: Fisherman's toast, especially Klee's special dish

Dialouge - Favorite Food: "Now that you mention it, the dish that i really. REALLY like is Fisherman's toast! Klee's fish-flavored version of it is very Yummy too! Im very proud that i taught her how to make it, she made them even better than mine."

Least Favorite Food: none

Dialouge: - Least Favorite Food: "Well, even if you ask me a hundred times about this, I would always say food is food and everyone shall consume them to gain the nutrients of it. Of course if it tastes bad then you know how it is."

Constellation: Vulpecula

Character Usage: Sub DPS/DPS

Talents:

"Blaze Thrust" (normal attack)

"Blaze" (Priority)

"Blazing Clove Spark" (second priority)

"Adventure" (increases pyro dmg)

"Swift Fire" (Immune to Pyro damage and takes elemental particles to the burned area, activates on Lvl 60.)

Ascension Materials:

Agidnus Agate chunk

Everflame Seed

Dandelion seed

Forbidden Curse Scroll

M o r a

Best Artifacts for him:

Wanderer's troupe

Crimson witch of flames (4-set, increasing pyro dmg bonus)

Priority stat:

Pyro dmg bonus

Elemental Mastery

Crit rate/Crit Dmg%

ATK

hsjehrnrhnebr oof

#Genshin OC #Genshin Impact

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sunbentsky-archived · 2 years

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Good afternoon fellas today I'm thinking about my new Pinkerton man and how historically the agency employed people from all walks of life who wouldn't normally have a lot of options in "civilized" society to work as spies and informants. (I think it varies from case to case how much this is out of pure pragmatism and how much it has to do with more progressive policies-- presumably, Allan Pinkerton was a forward-thinking man for his time, and the Pinkertons did hire the first female and the first Black detectives, but this was still the 19th century, the Civil War had just ended, voting rights still have a long way to go, and of course all of this is taking place on colonized territory so, like, even the most open-minded people at the time would still hold questionable world views for modern standards, which !! is not to say escapist fiction doesn’t have its place, but when it comes to real-life private law enforcement organizations, painting them as Woke TM heroes is the last thing I want to do.)

I forgor where I was going with this 💀 but uhhh have something semi-related:

I’ve mentioned Ray has an older brother, but perhaps he has a younger sister as well. She’s married off to one of the family’s business partners, unhappy with this arrangement, and... I haven’t made up my mind about this part yet, but in the end, Raymond helps her disappear and start fresh under a different name under the condition that she supplies him with a steady flux of intelligence regarding situations and people he can’t otherwise breach. In other words, his sister becomes a spy for the Pinkertons.

I think maybe their mother knows about this arrangement, but she wouldn’t be allowed any communication with her daughter regardless. Their father, older brother, and the ex-husband believe her dead-- Raymond would make sure to erase any trace that indicates otherwise. This is possibly the first (and only?) time he goes directly against his father’s wishes when it comes to family affairs. And I haven’t decided yet if it’s because he has a soft spot for his sister or just... seeing an opportunity and seizing it. But either way, it has impacted his personal life negatively in the sense that it put additional strain on his marriage, his wife suspecting infidelity while he was busy going through the process of creating a new identity for his sister.

Idk. Complex sibling dynamics and also !!! your muse can spy for Raymond 👁

#RAYMOND ABOUT: abashed the devil stood and felt how awful goodness is #i want to him to stay terrible and maybe a little pathetic and fundamentally unlikeable #but the brain said let's add some layers to that #so layers we shall add #i *still* don't know much about the internal organization during those times #how funny would it be if i hit up their public email like #ayyy homies what's good can we chat #i have some questions for my oc xoxo #which to be fair can be constructed as i'm doing research for my novel or some shit lmao #anyway. i still have some work to do and will be here later 😘

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modgirlyreposts-revamped · 2 years

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Ok time for Security Breach AU lore. Always on that grind

TW for child neglect, abuse, death, and abandonment, divorce, attempted murder, manipulation, trauma in general, and breakups.

Security Breach is basically an entire new chapter of the story, so we're no longer focused on the Aftons, and the main characters are almost totally unrelated, save for Glitchtrap and Glamrock Freddy. Caleb is no longer much of an important character as he's basically trying to heal and progress his life but God I can't stop thinking about Caleb meeting Michael as Freddy again and. Fnhshfhdhf-

Anyways, main characters we're looking at here are Vanny, Vanessa, Gregory, Mike, and a few more minor OCs- Raha Salib, Anna Kwento, Nora... something? I forgor, and Mark whose last name I also forgor. Raha and Nora are technicians, Anna is a manager, and Mark just does the bare minimum to not get fired. Anna and Nora are very gay and Mark has a crush on Raha but he respects that she doesn't like him back. Ok they're all rlly minor actually I just love them.

Basically this story starts back in 1997, when Vanessa (Vanny) and Vanessa (not Vanny) are born- Vanessa is born to Joanne and Richard ("Bill") Alexander, and Vanny to Angela and Clayton Torres.

From the start neither of them has a great home life, and when Vanessa is ten her parents divorce, and Richard basically manipulates and scares Vanessa into lying about Joanne in court to win custody of her.

Three years later, Vanny's little brother Gregory is born, and after that, Clayton leaves the family entirely, already not wanting to care for one child, let alone two. This leaves infant Gregory in the hands of Angela and Vanny. He's raised by Angela with Vanny's help, until- when Vanny is 20 and Gregory 7- she leaves as well, and Gregory is brought into the foster system. Three years later, Vanny becomes a beta tester for Help Wanted, where she meets Glitchtrap who begins taking over her brain and psychologically torturing her to wear her down until she begins to obey. To be... completely honest, despite the tapes implying the Ness in the emails to be the security guard Vanessa, it's still just Vanny in my AU.

Also worth noting is Vanny and Vanessa's relationship, which started in high school and ended not too long after Angela left, which ended because it sent Vanny into a state of major distress that upended their relationship despite Vanessa doing her best to be there for her.

Vanessa was working for Fazbear Entertainment at the time, as was Vanny- though not in the tech department like Vanny was. Using Vanny, Glitchtrap tried to extend his reach to Vanessa by manipulating her, which she actively tried to resist like Jeremy did before Vanny. She took a job as a security guard to try and stop Vanny, but they simply utilized her position for their goals, making Vanessa an accessory to Vanny's crimes.

Around this time, Gregory runs away after Vanny tracks him down and attempts to kill him. Devastated and with no reason to return now that his only family has betrayed and abandoned him, he just runs, and hides from those searching for him. Especially Vanny.

He had actually been to the Pizzaplex before, knew Freddy, and suspected something was.. up with him that made him safer than anyone else, so he went back there to see Freddy, and hopefully find his sister and investigate what had changed about her.

Michael, through Freddy, desperately wanted to just protect a kid for once, not scramble to atone for the aftermath of his failure. So he allied with Gregory to protect him, recognizing aand empathizing with Gregory's want to save his sister.

In comes Vanessa, who's just tired and fucking burnt out and does NOT want Vanny dicking around in the mall, but also doesn't want Gregory and Freddy doing so either and thus stands as an antagonist to them for a.. little while? I have an idea for how she would ally with Gregory in particular but that'd need to be another ask.

Anyway I'm kinda not sure how this shit ends or anything I just wanted to talk about Them

I know you said that he's really minor, but Mark doing the bare minimum is a total mood lmao-

And can't really blame Vanessa, if my ex was being manipulated by a virus and running around a mall commiting crimes the last thing I'd want is a kid running around that same mall after hours, and a sentient animatronic bear helping him

#asks #answered #valleyfthdolls

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paper-mario-wiki · 6 years

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had a dream last night that was about super powers again. this time it was less like the hunger games and more like the my hero academia universe but like. early into the first few years of people having powers and people are still largely afraid of them. and also it was kinda detroit become human-y.

i was on a task force to hunt down rogue power users to stop them from causing damage. my power was the ability to blow myself up unti a bunch of pieces and have them reform back into my body, but they were never truly severed since they were just stretched really far apart. kinda like elastigirl. my hero name was TNT, "the take apart and put back together again hero". my partner was this girl who looked like one of my classmates in 4th grade. i forgor her name. her power was the ability to see pathways in slow motion that would be optimum for getting from one point to another as fast as possible. naturally she used this to be a really dope parkour user. i dont think she had a hero name because she wasnt really that into the idea of hero culture. also, our powers werent super suited for each other or for our jobs, but this before a lot of people had powers and there were plenty to pick from, so we were just put together because we both had powers that were substantial and well within our control.

our task was to find this one woman who was causing deaths to people around her without people being able to identify how. it looked as if they had been killed using a melee weapon of some kind, but witnesses said that there was never any physical contact made. we tracked her up to this bar on the top floor of a building where the lights were really dim so nobody could see very well and she wasnt able to get recognized by anyone who wasnt looking for her. i went up while my partner stayed on the ground floor of the next building over, which was just a concrete frame since the building was still under construction. i went up to the bartender and asked to see his record of customers. i found the woman and once she realized i recognized her she tried to get awat but i blew my arm off and slammed her against the table with her hands and face planted against the tabletop. i yelled at the bartender to get something to hold her down while people started running out of the bar. the bartender, freaking out, grabbed a hammer and nail from under the tabletop and in one swift motion drove a nail through her right hand. i yelled at him and he ran out too. the woman at this point was crying and yelling. i forget what happened next but it turns out she didnt know what was happening either and she was scared of killing people and scared of herself. i hears police sirens getting closer and closer and she started freaking out and trying to get away but her hand was nailed to the table. i tries grabbing her by the shoulders to calm her down but then something happened.

its kind of hard to explain, but imagine this is a movie. the screen at this point would go black for a second and a single shining trail that would usually be seen across the top of a blade thats being swung downwards is animated, accompanied by a fitting "SHIIING" sound effect. in that moment im cut open from my left breast down across my stomach.

the woman stops struggling for a moment and looks at my stomach, shocked and afraid, and she here mouth is hanging wide open. she looks at me in the eyes as im looking at her, im in shock as well, and she doesnt say anything but i know she means to say "im sorry". this eye contact lasts for a second but then the sound of the police sirens take focus again. she starts struggling again and i immediately bolt for the window, smashing through on the side where my partner is. while falling i blow myself up to spread out the impact of the fall so i dont get hurt, but theres still a hearty "splat" when i touch down since my stomach is cut open. my partner freaks out and so do i and as tensions are rising while my partner is telling me that we have to run and im yelling at her that we need to see her accompanied into custody, you cut back to the top floor where it looks like shes at her limit of struggling. shes screaming and thrashing around and right as the police break down the door the screen cuts to black again and the white outline of a spear appears at the top left of my vision and it quickly strikes down to the bottom right, and im impaled on a spear i cant see. the dream ended with me losing conciousness, shock making me unable to respond to my partner who is freaking out, and i slowly bleed out and die. but im alive in the real world so its ok.

#text #dream

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