#letzgo

[chococorico]

For my bday I will have:

The Stand by Stephen King

The song of Achille by Madeline Miller

The Goldfinch by Donna Tartt

One of them or maybe two, idk want they will take

I am but first I have to finish IT ! And it is very long as a slow reader

My bday is on the 5th April so it is soon

I am happy and unhappy about it

Does anyone else feel scared being older ? Because me, yes, I do

#choco talk #my bday #the song of achilles #the stand #the goldfinch #so to sum up it is gay or gay or nerd #letzgo

[theproflife1]

Some quality time before she heads off to college. #OaklandAs vs #NewYorkYankees. Hanging on the field before @csueb day at the Ball Park!, #TheProfLife#LivingInMotion #SelfCare #MLB #LetzGo https://www.instagram.com/p/Chs_eMOJn2R/?igshid=NGJjMDIxMWI=

#oaklandas #newyorkyankees #theproflife #livinginmotion #selfcare #mlb #letzgo

[vroomvroommbtch]

So i guess I’ll be buying a AT shirt in the future uh?

#LETZGO BOYYYY #daniel ricciardo

[ilikepjo24]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/24920380/chapters/60307450

what do you think of this Octeyna fic (it's my fav fic ever)

Many things I want to say... I'll say them all.

First of all, I KNOW THAT PERSON!! I've read other works of theirs, like [Clarisse fuc] and [drew fuc]. Both very good fics. I even chatted with them on TikTok once. It was a crazy coincidence. A couple of weeks after I read the homecoming fic I saw a TikTok video appreciating similar fics that came out during quarantine and in the comment section someone had mentioned a Clarisse-centered fic with that plot that they wrote, and I replied saying I've also read a similar fic. We talked a bit about each fic until we realized we were talking about the same one. And that's the story of how I met (not irl) the author of [Clarisse fuc], who's also the author of this fic that you linked.

Moving on onto a different thought: It was foolish of you to ask a teacher what they think about a text. In my country 30 is a perfect score for an essay. 15 for the content, 10 for the grammar/vocabulary, 5 for the structure. Due to it being a fic and not an essay meant to show support or disapproval towards a stance, I won't be viewing the content threw my reading glasses, so for this fic the 15 remaining points will be a perfect score.

The sentences are, for the most part, consistent, containing at least one verb in each period of words. I noticed a couple of grammar mistakes, specifically with the usage of "would" and "could". If there was anything else there, it slipped my attention. The description is very visual, as it should be, kudos for that. The vocabulary used is satisfactory. The punctuation marks weren't always used properly, although those mistakes were rare. The paragraphs were a tad too sort in some cases, and pieces of text were seperated when it would make more sense for them to belong in the same paragraph. Not all of the word periods start with capital letters when they should, although that was rare as well.

Grammar and vocabulary wise: 8/10

Structure wise: 3,5/5

The critique of the content will be my view as a reader, not an teacher.

WHAT THE FUCK IS OCTAVIAN DOING!?? GOSH, I WANTED TO PUNCH HIM SO BAD EVEN THOUGH I LOVE HIM. That was borderline assault!!! It was disgusting, vike, manipulative, abusive, inhumane, I fucking hated him!! Which, I suppose, was what the author wanted, so good job author, you achieved your goal. And poor Reyna!! She's been neglected, abused abs manipulated by so many different people and overlooked it, that she seems to be unconsciously romantizing the bad situation she's in. Although I'm glad she managed to snap out of it, because things can get pretty ugly in situations were a victim doesn't realize they're being abused. I really hope she manages to get herself out of that situation in later chapters.

I'd like to apologize for my son's (Octavian's) behavior, I got him recently from pest control and I hadn't had the chance to instill some values within him or teach him to behave. I promise, I can fix him, I just need some more time.

Overall, that's a pretty good fic right there. 👍

#fic review #pjo octavian #reyna ramirez avila arellano #octeyna #abusive relationships letzgo

[definitelyailuj]

ALCHEMY OF SOULS PT 2 PLOT IS SO

GOOOOOOOOOD

#alchemy of souls #tbh i cant believe seo yul s1 and s2 was played by the same person coz the acting skills growth is phenomenal #all the characters and storyline is chefz kiss i missed this feeling #my blood is aliveeee well not as alive as that seo yuls parasite but thanks for this series ending my 2022 with a bang to say the least #JANG UK AND NAKSU SHIP IS SAILING LETZGO MORE MORE

[biromantic-treebark]

#coming out #letzgo! #Gender go wonk #still a xenogender user just like its to like label silly parts of the gender

[imanangrynb]

Not me having a anxiety attack 1h30 before work

#this is embarassing #the C in Cptsd is for CRINGE #i literally cant move nor eat letzgo

[1letzgo-entertainment]

Positivity over negativity

#letzgo entertainment #love #tumblr #music #food

[lxrd-ren]

Team Soul Fire letzgo

#qsmp

[hcvenue]

i got my phone repaired after 6 months LETZGO 🔥🔥

[lammfleisch]

Another reaction thingy Post. Heard Season 3 became ridiculous. But i dont believe it can be worse than the first episodes of Season 2 and Joes weird L***born bullshit Plot.

I just dont expect anything so i cant be disappointed about bad writting. Letzgo

#the man in the high castle

[uncertainwallflower]

Okay wait wasn't done. 14 & 19!

Okeeeeey, letzgo.

14. Is there something you wish readers would pick up on more in your stories?

Ooo, that is in'eresting. Err...not really. I think all creative works are up for personal interpretation and appreciation. Although, someone commented saying they liked my rhythm one time, and I figuratively fell flat on my face.

19. Who is another author (fanfic or otherwise) that you admire? Why?

Madeline Miller for ripping my guts out and draining my body of tears. Vladimir Nabokov for his poetic mastery. And, like, every single fanfic writer ever? I don't think I could possibly make a short list. AO3 stories be impaling me left right and centre with their magnificence.

More Writer Asks

#thank you for all these asks darling #writers asks #athenasparrow

[swiftfootedachilles]

i got tagged to make a joy list by @mickeysgaymom and tbh i had to this about this a lot. so uh yeah okayyy letzgo

my dog

music and singing

my interests and hyperfixations. like talking about shameless and gallavich and seeing fanart of the song of achilles and reading poetry and ranting about opera

talking to my friends

gay queer homosexual transgenderification

succeeding at things i work hard for

sleeping

taking naps

making things, like baking and embroidering

justice being served

being myself

watching funny videos

good food that fits my dietary needs

i tag @babygirlmickey do it or die

#joy list: threatening cam 🫶 #tagged #a.txt #joy list: being a hater

[missshame]

I'm so stressed but I haven't smoke in two weeks letzgo

#Putting this there so I don't buy cigarettes first thing when I step outside lol #Also resisting the urge to just drink instead of facing stuff 🤡 #Maybe urge is a bit extreme like I just think about alcohol a few times a day thinking how much nicer it would be lol #Nothing crazy is happening I'm just easily overwhelmed lol

[elfilibusterismo]

rant: 😭

blue school 🦅💙 is killing me 😭 but jspqksjdwoksjs sobrang accepting (from my experience here) nila about lgbtq+ peeps dito emz, much better compared sa old school ko na bullshit masyado 😭 but n e ways, masaya naman din ako kasi open ako about my being non-binary sa club ko 😌 plus ginagamit nila they/them pronouns ko so it's a win for me, PLUS trans guy yung editor in chief namin so kampante pu ako 🥺

and like, yung theology teacher namin isn't homophobic??? like, sir??? i love my theo teacher emz 😭 hindi niya ginagamit yung bibliya against gays as he should and grabe niya ka open about the topic and like 🥺

pero even though july kami nag-umpisa, i'm still struggling to make friends kasi ang sobrang busy namin and i feel like hindi kakayanin na magkaroon ng kaibigan dahil doon. istg pag dating ng nobyembre mag-iisa talaga ako sa classroom namin :(

ang magiging last hope ko na lang is yung campus tour so, fighting! 😔✊

last na talaga hehehehehe, nakita mo yung kay LBM na UN thing? emz nakakahiya, halos walang tao, dasurv 💅

eyyyy happy for u sa acceptance!! kudos din sa theo prof omg. sana lahat ng theo teachers ganyan gjdfkhgkjfdg

online pa rin ba set-up ng admu? alam ko may f2f na sila dahil sa mga kaibigan kong egels din. pero tru medj mahirap magkaroon ng mga friends sa umpisa pero i believe in u <3 letzgo campus tour

tinanong ko rin mga kaibigan kong egels for Tips tas eto sabi nila HAHAHHAHAHAHAHA

#kung bet mo rin - sali kang org! dun mas madali magkaroon ng kaibigan at ng jowa HAHAHAHAHAHAHA #kung bet mo lang naman ofc #anonymous #answered

[lxrd-ren]

Just sayin' if q!BBH comes to the conclusion that kills increase points significantly then red better run cause like that day 1 of torture? That was just for fun. But if there's an actual point to it then he's going all-out O-O

Woo letzgo

Edit: Ye no he's on Tina's stream in a vc and already planning to get more kills 🤣

#qsmp #qsmp badboyhalo #q!badboyhalo