#rwby rewrite

[fanstuffrantings]

I have an agenda.

Bonus:

#rwby #rwby fanart #arkos #jaun arc #pyrrha nikos #rwby rewrite #the man has never had a girlfriend and the most popular girl in school bags him #im just saying #rwby arkos

[spectralscathath]

Sing, O Muse, of the rage of Achilles

A concept sketch for Antares!Pyrrha, how her headgear and hairstyle changes up to the Atlas Arc.

#rwby #pyrrha nikos #rwby redesign #rwby rewrite #scorruby au #sketches #if you can catch the three homages to Nora in her Mistral fit you get a cookie

[lara-prism-light]

I hate RWBY rewrites haters!

Sorry the show isn't perfect!

Sorry that some fans are not satisfied with the original story!

Sorry that some fans are more creative than the writers of the show itself!

Sorry that you have to complain that everything isn't exactly step by step identical to the original!

You guys complain that male characters are getting attention but you don't realize that this is exactly the same problem as the canon show!

Stop bothering or harassing rewrite writers!!! They just do it for fun and you can't just treat the show as if it were the most perfect thing in the world because it's NOT!!!

Arrg, I'm going to block everyone who hates RWBY rewrites because you guys only know how to complain about the same shit but refuse to accept criticism of the show!!

I like RWBY in concept, in execution the show is an inconsistent mess!! Stop treating it like it isn't!!

#rwby rewrite #rwby #rwby rant #fandom rant #rwby fandom #rwby critical #rwby criticism

[velvetcake96]

Oscar Pine Redesign/Rewrite

(Note: I do like Oscar how he is, he is my favorite character, but I wanted to do something fun because midterms are kicking my ass and if I have to use more brain cells towards my academics without a break I will lose it.)

So… I made him a fox Faunus, not only because we only have one in the main cast, but because it would be interesting. (And even more adorable)

He’s a little more imaginative here, while still carrying his sarcastic humor/streak. I decided to double up his fairytale inspirations with The Little Prince and his original Tip! I also added some actual pine green because not only does it look good with the orange but because HIS NAME IS OSCAR PINE! PINE!!

I also thought of the idea that he got his last name from his mother, a huntress who decided to retire when she gave birth to her only child, only to pass away after defending that son from a Grimm attack. Everything other than that is about the same, works on a farm, lives with his aunt, but has more respect for hunters/huntresses.

Okay, I get that his magic is supposed to be his semblance, but dang it, I wanna explore the possibility of him having a semblance but it going out of wack because of the sudden invasion of magic.

(The name is a work in progress.)

He got his semblance not long after he lost his mom, out of the wish to be able to save a couple of minutes with the people he cares about. (Also because I like the idea of semblances reflecting some kind of trauma idk call me a weird psychology major) When he stops time, he has to be touching someone or something so they can still move around.

Volume 6-9:

This is what boredom and the need for a break gets ya. Rwby fanart.

#rwby #rwby fanart #rwby art #rwby fanfiction #(?) kinda #rwby redesign #rwby rewrite #rwby headcanon #rwby au #rwby oscar pine #rwby oscar #oscar pine #gosh dang it velvet #I crawl out of my hole for this #I’m a little rusty when it comes to digital art #I haven’t done anything in months #also a moment of silence for Roster Teeth man… geez

[uncaught-coolfish]

ever after

#rwby #rwby fanart #rwby art #rwby au #penny in ever after au #penny polendina #rwby penny #curious cat rwby #curious cat #rwby rewrite #rwby fanfic #fanart #art #illustration #doodle #digital art #artists on tumblr #penny and cc agenda taking this world by storm!!!! spreading this au as far as the eye can seeeee!!!!!!! #uncaught-coolfish

[reashot]

Spoiler for my next RWBY fanfic project:

(We all know it's going to be Jaune so don't ask who's it supposed to be.)

Sorry if it seems long because I have to do some little world building (I lied. I have to create RWBY from scratch because the lore are non-sensical & made no sense.) Because I want to provide my reader better quality story telling.

Some changes I made is as follows:

- Grimm are stronger now. The heroes will have to work harder to even beat a beowulf. With a few special one able to gain self awareness and have some "slight" reality altering power. Think the witches from Madoka magica franchise.

- Of course with the Grimm getting stronger. So does the Huntsman. With someone like Qrow or pretty much any Huntsman older than the main cast no longer be a pushover.

- Rank System for the Huntsman.

- More (named) students at Beacon.

- Huntsman are treated like a Rock stars.

- There will not just be four relics but hundreds of them. Each with varying degrees of power. And most are monopolized by the state.

- Don't know what to do with the maidens though. Any suggestions?

- Grimm no longer feed on negative human emotion. Biggest reason for the removal is that it contradict the Faunus Racism subplot. And I don't know about you but I think racism is one heck of a negative emotion. (They still want people dead though)

- Faunus Racism subplot will be handled much better.

- Salem still can't be killed but she can be sealed. With her needing to be sealed every few decades or so.

- Grimm will appear less frequently and only starts appearing more and more when the seal around Salem starts to weaken.

- There will be a cult dedicated to bring back Salem and serves as the primary antagonist.

- Of course everybody favorite part of prequel trilogy. Politics. But it mostly be in the background until it isn't & the heroes are then forced to make a choice.

- There are other group beside the Huntsman fighting Grimms and they hate their guts.

- The event of Ice Queendom is mostly canon and even part of the Grimm Eclipse. Because I needed something to pad out the world building.

& there's more but I would like to keep some a secret for now.

And yes many character's story will be expanded or in a few case rewritten. Adam especially will be rewritten to better reflect the freedom fighter he supposed to represent. He's angry at the world but not an a-hole.

And that's about it I'm already halfway in and I will post the 5k fanfic soon as a form of early preview.

#rwby #jaune arc #jaune big dick adventure #10k words #rwby fanfiction #fanfiction #writing tips #spoiler #upcoming projects #ruby rose #moby dick #shion zaiden #ice queendom #rwby ice queendom sequel #rwby ice queendom #grimm eclipse #rwby: grimm eclipse #rwby au #rwby rewrite #adam taurus

[oddlyhale]

Call me a boomer or whatever, but I actually like doing budgeting.

If they're that strapped for cash, and if I had to make budgeting decisions, I would: - Cut Jaune out of the volume. Since his arc ends with him reverting back to his younger self, there's no need for him to be in Ever After. - Weiss killed Penny on the Golden Bridge. She's in terrible grief for what she did and is in constant anxiety to explain herself to Ruby. - Cut Little out of the volume. From what I understand, creating Little was a huge feat because their model is more complex than the usual models we see. Cut them out and save money and time from creating them. - Move the Red Prince battle at the end of the volume. We can keep the marketplace throughout the volume since it helps set some world-building of Ever After through the NPCs and environment. - Neo is fine in the volume, she didn't pop up much. And since she has no VA to be paid, Neo is very expandable, but it was good that they didn't overuse her this volume. - No suicide arc!! It was stupid!! - Keeping Ruby separated from her team for the majority of the time. Would save quite a bit of time and money to only focus on Ruby rather than having to focus on them all at once. Yang, Blake, and Weiss can have their own episodes. - Ruby starts to see glimpses of Weiss running off into different wooded paths, yelling something about being late. Ruby chases Weiss throughout the volume. Weiss doesn't stick around often and vanishes. - Neo is down on her luck. She doesn't feel the need to go after Ruby because she feels like she's trapped in another universe and she can't get back home. However, a new anger towards Cinder festers. - Instead of creating more Ever After characters, utilize the main characters. Weiss can be the White Rabbit and Blake can be the Cheshire Cat. Yang can either fight to stay normal or become a character. All will be cured by the end of the volume. Neo also starts to act like the Mad Hatter. - It appears that Ever After is taking over the minds of whoever has fallen. Ruby and Yang both feel the effects as they both start to feel different from their old selves, but they're able to stay original. - Eating food (A LOT OF FOOD) and drinking a lot of tea was a notable part of Alice in Wonderland 1951. They could say that eating anything from Ever After causes the character change. - Ruby can't find Cresent Rose but she does find Summer Rose's weapon at a blacksmith's shop (but she doesn't know it belongs to Summer Rose). She carries that around because it feels familiar to her, but also she wants a weapon to defend herself. It'd be fun to watch as Ruby tries to work with a new weapon. - Weiss sees the glass sword of Penny's. She doesn't remember Penny, but the sight of the sword throws her into a frenzy and makes her lose time. Her time dilation goes out of control and it causes bouts of chaos wherever she's at, but the Red Prince isn't bothered by it.

i'll come up with more later in a reblog

#rwde #rwby rewrite #volume 9 #budgeting

[invested-in-your-future]

I have curious to know more about that:

In your version what would Jaune fallout would be?

Would he be an outcast or a you suck speech to be better?

How would the team dynamic be especially after the situation?

If I were to alter stuff in V1-V3, the bully arc would need some significant changes - far too many things in a show are built around excusing him rather than making him confront his flaws.

I think I said most of these before, but if I were to put it into a list.

Starting with the Bully Arc:

DON'T have Pyrrha help Jaune save Cardin and actually show that while his mindset is toxic, Jaune has the conviction to risk it all when pushed - of course, since Pyrrha wouldn't help him there, Jaune would actually get hurt, making the confrontation a bit messier even if the outcome is the same. And Cardin seeing someone like him put his life on the line to save him would likely sting a lot more.

DON'T do the weird "Ursa Grimm like honey" at all - the show has literal bullies prey on people in the forest, and Grimm are attracted to negative emotions - this means we don't get the "harrowing" scene of Jaune throwing honey at people and the whole plot is a bit less silly - and that means Jaune is NOT here because of blackmail or anything - having Jaune risk his life to save Cardin despite him being a bully is good enough as it highlights the qualities needed for being a Huntsmen and there must be no possible upsides to Jaune doing this - Pyrrha won't change her opinion and she is not involved in the fight - there's no benefit for him doing it other than it being his calling.

DO make Pyrrha genuinely angry with Jaune and have Jaune actually openly apologize to her after the Cardin incident and come clean to her.

DO have Cardin threaten to blackmail Jaune, but resolve it with Jaune coming clean to his team first (ALL of them) and then resolving to come clean to Ozpin and co.

DO have Ozpin shrug it off, either when Jaune comes clean or when Cardin decides to rat him out because, to him, the forest events would be all the proof he needed that Jaune has "needed qualifications" - can even throw in some shady Ozpin stuff and imply the teams are the way they are for a reason too.

DON'T have just Jaune and Pyrrha train. DO have the entire team JNPR decide to work spar together and train together to help him and make him regain their trust by putting in actual work to earn his spot.

There's no instant forgiveness or reassuring Jaune that he's great actually - everyone involved agrees that it's a work in progress, but his willingness to come clean and work to be a better person is a good first step. Team building.

Oh look we just got done with Jaune Arc arc of V1 in, like, two episodes instead of four or five.

V2 stuff

Just erase the "trying to woo Weiss" arc for Jaune Arc. Completely. Have the feud be about Cardin shifting targets and fighting Pyrrha in that sparring match and Jaune being unable to stay in his lane when she handled them just fine herself.

Drop the "I can't dance part" from Neptune. How about Neptune, despite his womanizer façade, actually likes guys but thinks it would make him seem uncool if he asked a guy out to a dance. Here, you have an actual LGBT rep two volumes in without "having to build up a relationship", and it ties nicely into the theme of dealing with toxic masculinity and how it affects different people. And we avoid a scene where two guys treat Weiss like an object they own.

It overall also ties better into the cross-dressing segment because it now becomes Jaune basically going - "Look, I learned my lesson, and I am comfortable without stereotypical macho nonsense" to Pyrrha. And it's a message to Neptune that there's nothing "silly" about not adhering to heteronormative "coolness" - oh look, suddenly there's no need for a laugh track of everyone pointing out that a guy in a dress is oh-so-funny in this diverse and accepting world of Remnant. EDIT: also yes monty intended ot to be about him keeping promises but that still works - Jaune regressing at the start by whiteknighting is him faltering on the promise he made to the team on v1 arc of this version - so the message of him reaffirming his promises still remains.

That's just off the top of my head in what could make him more bearable without sweeping his flaws or his forgery under the rug.

There are PLENTY minuscule things to change that would expand upon his characterization in a way that doesn't detract from the actual protagonists.

BUT

Since I am keeping the first three volumes as-is instead, I am treating the Fall of Beacon as Jaune's wake-up call for self-reflection.

Jaune had quite a bit of time to rethink everything that happened in Beacon - what he did or didn't do, what he said, and his overall priorities in life.

Coming face to face with how insignificant he ended up being ironically had provided him with a sense of clarity - everything falling apart allowed him to look at it all from a different angle.

He did not like the person he used to be, and that's where V4r starts - Jaune views his staying at Beacon due to forgery as a debt Jaune can never repay, and he strives to be a better person - actually worthy of that chance. He also understands just how privileged and stupid his behavior during Beacon was.

He has newfound respect for Pyrrha for having put up with him all this time. He also is regretful over how his antics had prevented them from actually exploring what could have been between them till it was way too late.

There's no melting her weapons for himself, no hero's journey for him. After the tragedies that hit Beacon Jaune ended up with a more clearcut understanding of who he wants to be and how he wants to honor Pyrrha's memory, in turn having processed grief in a bit more healthier way than the others.

#rwby #rwde #rwby au #jaune arc #rwby rewrite #rwbyr stuff mine

[dextixer]

See, stuff like this is why whenever people try to pretend that they are only "criticizing" rewrites i just laugh out loud and tell them that they are well, full of shite.

This person is literally fighting ghosts, people who do not exist, all because they want to make a point against "rewrites".

Who says that BB happening is a plothole? Who says that Adams handling is a plothole? Who says that there not being fanservice is a plothole? I can go on but seriously. Who says that?

Nobody. But for the sake of being mad at rewrites, people will create ghosts to fight against.

And then they have the gall to go around and say "Well, we are just criticizing rewrites". No you aint. You have not even read them or watched them. Yeah, i know that you havent.

This entire RWBY anti-rewrite movement is full of people who have never actually interacted with rewrites, all you do is regurgitate the same BS that someone originally told you. Thats why you repeat your points ad nauseum.

Basically, how is anyone supposed to take your "criticism" of rewrites seriously, when you literally create ghosts that have never existed to fight against?

#rwby #rwde #rwby fndm #rwby fandom #rwby rewrite

[digitalbug999]

autism is a disability, and by that i mean i have developed a rwby hyperfixation against my will. say hello to rose branwen: my version of ruby rose

shes the daughter of raven branwen and some guy (i havent named her dad yet), raised by her father until the age of 8 when he died, and then by taiyang xiao long alongside her half sister yang. her uncle qrow is her number 1 role model, which is why she chose to use her mothers last name. my thoughts have been dominated by qrow after her dads death going “hey tai, i know shes not your kid, and i know youre busy with your own daughter, but we both know ravens not gonna take her and my semblance would kill the kid, can you—“ and taiyang just going “of course”

she isnt even my main character, im making jaune the main character, but shes the 15 year old weaponsmith he meets bc hes trying to make his hunter weapon and has no idea where to start. i will likely never talk more about this au on here, but shell be the main character of season 2 since season 1 will focus on jaune and pyrrha and their respective teams (im splitting them onto 2 different teams, jrny and vprz, i have to make 3 ocs for this project), and then season 2 is team rwby who are all experts on their own but need to learn teamwork, and then season 3 will pick back up with the tournament arc connecting the 3 teams, its gonna be a whole thing

bonus: take this edit i did of her weapon to add more color to it

#my art #rwby #rwby redesign #rwby rewrite #technically? #ruby rose #rwby ruby rose #my brother encouraged me to post this #im still unsure about it but its pretty good

[diaryofamadsunwukongfan]

One big, happy family/s

#one of these are a bastard child #can you tell who the bastard is? #anyway I like how the artist made sure you could tell none of them are happy #even whitley with his fake smile and glass eyes #you got the abusive & racist rich daddy #you got the mom drowning her sorrows with wine #you got the golden child that ran out the house as fast as possible #you got the affair baby that wants to kill his half siblings #you got the black sheep thats somehow also the nice one #and then you got the new favorite child that low key hates everyone here #rwby fix it fic #rwby rewrite #rwby au #jacques schnee #willow schnee #winter schnee #adam taurus #weiss schnee #whitley schnee #rwby

[fanstuffrantings]

Rwby rewrite idea pt 2:

Volume 3 follows the Grimm Eclipse volume 2 events. Roman's increasing robberies and rising criminal empire becomes harder to ignore so the gang along with some new friends coming in for the vytal festival, see if they can do something about that.

In this version there isn't a white fang so Cinder hires Roman to act as a red herring while Salem's forces prep for the downfall of Beacon.

#rwby #rwby rewrite #moltentarts #roman torchwick #rwby neopolitan #ruby rose #weiss schnee #blake belladona #yang xiao long #team rwby #junior xiong #digital art #sketch

[zerm2v0hg]

#rwby #rwde #fanfiction #rwby rewrite #youtube #relatable #i fully agree

[infoglitch]

So I need all of your guys opinion on something. (For story Purposes)

(apologies for my terrible humor)

So I'm a guy who likes jaune-

"GET THE FUCK OFF THE STAGE, NO ONE WANTS TO HEAR YOUR GLAZING-"

Shut!

Ok. It's also was saying before the voices of the void interrupted me, I'm a guy who likes jaune, he's my second favorite character behind yang. And I'm also the same guy who's writing RWBY: fate (my reinterpretation of rwby)

And I have a really really bad idea when it comes to this man.... I wanna kill him off. No not in place of Pyrrha I still have full intentions of her dying early. I plan on killing jaune off at the end of what I'm calling "the fall" arc. Which is basically volume nine but its not actually going to be volume nine (hell no I have full intention of writing this story at its proper length of time needed for the story to go).

And basically what I intend to do is before the ark begins Jaune would sustain a mortal wound from cinder and while he's in the ever after he's not dying but the wound is still slowly killing him. So after the whole adventure jaune knows he doesn't have long and hands Ruby crocea mors and decides to stay in the ever after (and no he would not be reverted back to being young I have no intention of doing that) and live out his life before the wound kills him when he gets home.

It's a dumb idea but I want to avoid Jaune feeling like he's the protagonist because I do want to focus on team RWBY.

(Of course this technically would go against the rule of any characters who did die in the show dying in the rewrite which would also technically apply to characters who still live but fuck it I kept adam alive so I could majorly change his character. Might as well make up for that)

What are y'alls thoughts?

#rwby #jaune arc #rwby discussion #rwby: fate #rwby rewrite

[dearestfamilyrwby]

Things aren’t looking so good for ya jaune

Merry LATE Christmas

Welcome to the official Dearest Sibling RWBY AU page! Here is some doodles I had made for this page and for Christmas!

This AU is a what if - Pyrrha and Roman were actually siblings.

We will have two different stories

Dearest Brother- FANON(Roman ran away from home when Pyrrha was 3 ) follows a non canon way of things as we change backstories for characters and add In characters and change they fate of our for them as well.

Dearest Sister- CANON (Roman was abandoned as kid way before Pyrrha was born) keeps the same background for characters, like Roman being abandoned when he was young. We keep the deaths but we add more and follow the Canon more closely.

We will be changing certain canon events to better push the stories we wanna make. We are being very hush about the plot because the actual story will be wrote on another website, the link will be posted soon.

This page will be for chapter updates,questions, and art, even fanart! We will happily take criticism,just be aware we are doing this for fun and are people behind the screen too! Thank you!

#rwby fanart #rwby fanfiction #rwby au #rwby #rwby shitpost #ruby rose rwby #rwby pyrrha #rwby rewrite #rwby roosterteeth #rwby roman #rwby team #rwby thoughts #rwby theory #artwork #digital art #artists on tumblr #fanfic #fanart #fandom

[outcasts-redeemer]

The florescent lights hummed as they came on one row after the next, illuminating the white room with a hard glow. The girls of RWBY and Sun and Neptune cringed as the light momentarily blinded them.

Ruby, after blinking a few times to adjust her eyes, looked around the room spying several cabinets and a large metal door to the side only to stop as her eyes landed on Headmaster Ozpin who standing in front of a table located in the center of the room.

Ozpin gazed at them coolly, his eyes withholding any warmth that the girls were used to. “Do you know where we are?” He asked them, his hands tightening on his cane.

Neptune fidgeted as he answered. “The sign outside said this was the morgue?”

Ozpin glanced at the blue haired young adult and nodded. “Yes.” He said, “This is the Vale City Morgue Station A-12. It was built forty years ago to answer the ongoing logistical issues of dealing with fatalities on newly built trans-city highway. Unlike its older siblings this facility was designed to hold ten times the number of fatalities a normal morgue would hold.” The white haired professor motioned to the room they were in. “This room is one of ten autopsy rooms connected to the main cadaver storage room.”

Ruby swallowed and stepped forward. “Why are we here?”

Ozpin leveled his eyes upon her own silver ones and stepped to the side waving her over in the process. “You are here because I convinced the Council that what happened on the Highway was not your doing.”

Ruby took a step forwards but froze as she saw the small shape hidden under the white cloth

Ozpin noticed her gaze and spoke again, “However, as hunters any choice you make holds the lives of countless others. This is the price of making the wrong choice.” With that statement the white haired headmaster pulled back the white cloth showing the body of a six year old girl, her face a mask of peace that was contrasted by the broken and torn form that was her lower body and legs.

The results were instant. Weiss and Yang both gasped in horror covering their mouths in an attempt to keep from crying out. Blake and Sun paled and took a step back while Neptune turned a shade of green and ran towards the nearest trash bin and threw up the noodles he and Sun had eaten.

The most affect however was Ruby herself. Standing still, her face ashen with understanding and her eyes focused on the immobile form of the young girl, Ruby asked a simple question. “How many?“

Ozpin hated hearing the brokenness of one of his most talented students but this needed to happen. She and the other students needed to know their actions have consequences. “There were one hundred thirty six fatalities as of last count with an additional twenty four injured.”

Yang tore her eyes from the young girl and looked at her headmaster with a look of growing horror. “W-what?”

Ozpin gave her an unimpressed glance before turning back to look at Ruby. “I will be frank with you. What happened tonight should not have happened. Not only did you break regulations, engage in vigilantism, and break restrictions put on you for your previous stunt.  You fundamentally failed as a team on multiple levels. Miss Rose. Tell me. Why are you the Team Leader?”

Ruby swallowed her shame and guilt and answered, “I showed exceptional skill when working under hazardous conditions to both organize and communicate with several other Hunters to both utilize their strengths and limit their weaknesses.”

Ozpin slammed his cane to the ground as he raised his voice. “Then why did you allow members of your team, as well as members not apart of your team to organize this one!?” He reached over to the girls still attached leg and read the tag connected to her toe.”Susan Brianne Grace, age six, cause of death: blood loss due to numerous Crush and Avulsion injuries along the lower extremities and torso.” He stopped reading and gazed at the six of them. “She died shoving her four year old younger brother out of the way of a falling four ton advertisement billboard for Hunters. She loved horses and liked to draw...”

Ruby was silent as tears pooled in her eyes. Everything had happened so fast all she could remember feeling was the rush of the chase and the determination to capture Torchwick. She never even stopped to consider anything else. And because of that. So many...

Ozpin sighed and lifted a stack of clipboards. “This lesson was supposed to be learnt during your second year, before going off on your first unchaperoned mission. But now I have no choice. Each of you will take a clipboard and work alongside the city morticians, recording everything there is about those lost to us due to the failures of their protectors. You will be here all night and in the morning you will report to Miss Goodwitch for aditional disaplinary action.” 

The grey haired headmaster began walking towards the exit but stopped before speaking one last time. “There is nothing you can do now to change their fates. All you can do, is learn from this and strive to be better.” He looked down at his feet lost in thought for a moment before whispering  Fore that is all we can do.” With those final words he shoved open the exit and left them to their new task

#RWBY #rwby rewrite #snippit #ruby rose #yang xiao long #wiess schnee #Blake Belladonna #sun wukong #neptune vasilias #Ozpin #RWBY highway incident