“I just don't like Gosho's use of ideas nowadays” do you have some examples? I’ve been feeling the same but I still don’t have like articulate thoughts on it
Well, 'nowadays' has been for. About ten years, ish? The most glaring example that always sticks out in my mind is the Sun Halo MK chapters, with the complete and utter waste of the very common fanfic tropes of 'Aoko gets suspicions' and 'Kid gets injured around someone'. But it kind of matches the general problem I have with his writing that I don't think used to be this bad: He's trying to stuff too much around the strict case-by-case structure (or for MK, introducing the heist-by-heist structure) without actually giving anything focus. (And for MK it's so much worse because he writes it so rarely, that he makes everyone cameo every time but they tend to just get hand waves to whatever drama plot gets instigated by Kid having his next heist.)
For DC, it's the whole. 1) Overarching plot with the BO and suspects and 'here's the available suspects for who's involved with the BO that we introduce one at a time at the end of cases and then maybe leave more clues about them during future cases'. 2) Dangling character or relationship progress and then constantly pulling it away, usually as a joke. 3) When we do occasionally get some of the major plot, it's all at once and then maybe mentioned once in the next case, but otherwise completely dropped. (Amuro and Akai and Kudo tea party tease also lingers as a 'Gosho is just evil at this point'.)
Basically rigid structure that doesn't allow for much of the subplots aside from breadcrumbs.
For the current situation, it's also tied into interview comments. Which. have no bearing on the story until he actually uses them. But instead of even that, the movie gets exciting stuff instead and puts it in a giant limbo of is it meant to be canon or not, because no one has been able to settle on that for any movie, even as some details get connected back to the manga more and more.
It's bad writing. Gosho has been a bad writer for a long time, and it's kinda just getting worse. It's my opinion that it's because he tries to have his case after case after case (because mystery manga), and then stuff little bits of everything else in the seams, whether it works well with the case he's writing or if it's a good delivery or (more usually) it's just. Kinda tacked on.
It's partially because of time investment, partially because I have low standards of entertainment, and partially because I want to see how it all ends that I stick with DC. MK is. Similar, but hurts more because I really hate how it morphed into the DC structure when old MK had more you could do with it. Gosho will never drop his rigid case-by-case structure at this point, but it really would be better if he did at this point. Things need development that they're not allowed to have. Or at least smooth out the lines between his hints. And stop with Heiji and Kazuha, just. God. Stop. Is this how people felt about Kid appearances? I feel like at least when people were mad about Kid, they knew nothing was going to happen from the get go, the romance 'tease' is just painful.
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Some Erlang Shen Ships!
I looked it up and it turns out I'm super unoriginal & specifically the chinese fandoms for LMK/JTTW are big yang jian (erlang) fans, im sorry if my design or storytelling offends any longtime fans, or if i gave the impression that i owned the idea to begin with (i hope that never happened, because i stated my inspiration multiple times, but i just want to be sure!)
and in looking it up, i found the common ship names for SWK, Macaque, and for fun my friend recommended drawing him w/ Chang'e, so her too ! (and then i immediately made a design for hou yi, i felt guilty lol)
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There is something so primal(?) in me that melts at the idea of small children with dark and dreary parental figures. It makes me all happy and calm and such, which is why I keep going back to your comic about Luffy trying to come up with a title for Croc.
I just love it so much...
I also have such a soft spot for Crocodile being trans and Luffy's parent, and man oh man...you are checking off all the boxes!!!
Anyways, back I go to read your little comic again /gen
!!! :DD i love the small child & scary parent that will doom the world for them dynamic, it's so interesting!
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Six at Gabe :
I am weary of your voice and the way you uniformly censure me for not achievement the plethoric task you designated me. I shall depart from your presence and locate my offspring
What's funny about this is that Lucifer would let Six go if he did/said something like that. But only because he knows Six would go running to his 'son' and it would be amusing to him to let Six get so close to what he wants more than anything else. He'd let Six interact with Adam, let him plead his case, and just as it's all about to fall into Six's fingers Lucifer would simply take it all away. He'd finish what he started that night after the Heathcliffs', but this time there'd be nothing left of Six at all.
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⭐️ directors cut!! 👀
first of all, thank you!!
second, okay i had to really think about which story i wanted to do bc i love all my stories but i really wanna talk about Not Dating but More Than Friends (it’s the first story i ever posted on ao3 and i have Feelings about it so time to share them)
that story was inspired by me realizing john and rodney’s relationship is very similar in many ways to my actual relationship. i’m in a very unconventional relationship and most people who look at us just say we’re dating and too scared/stupid to put the actual label on it (which is not the case). i think john and rodney have a very similar relationship in the show in the sense that it’s not a traditional or typical relationship in most aspects.
they bicker like an old married couple, and play like best friends, and tease each other like brothers. they have gotten into the stupidest of arguments, and actual serious arguments, and they’ve committed war crimes and rewrote time for each other. nothing about john and rodney is a typical relationship or something that can be define by a simple title. as much as i love and ship mcshep, i think that their relationship is a lot more complex to just reduce them to boyfriends
i really like the dynamic i wrote between them in that fic and the way they have their own secret thing to themselves. i think it’s a really fun way to look at their relationship
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What if the boys… play the eating game again… and Hakoda sees sokka play this game that he used to play with his mother and realize “oh fuck my sons in love with him”
Also I would kill for zuko to ask one of the SWT warriors about the “great otter penguin war” and none of them having any clue wtf he’s talking about
ANON YESSSSSS!!!!!
I am eagerly waiting for the moment Zuko tries to awkwardly talk to one of the SWT warriors and he brings up the GREAT OTTER-PENGUIN WARS!!!!
SWT person: “wtf are you talking about?”
Zuko: “the…. Uhhh…. The penguin wars….”
*Sokka slowly slinking away in the background*
At least he now knows that Zuko was listening to all his stories….
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Where are you seeing huntric negativity ?
To be fair I never shipped it so if it is in the tag I wouldn't have ever seen it but still I didn't see it in the hunter tag either
recently in the huntric tag ! idk if i’d call it “negativity” but when i was browsing earlier today i saw a surprising amount of “alador and darius are dating so huntric is problematic” like at least 5 different people saying this with their whole chest and i’m honestly just. very confused LOL
i didn’t care at all for this ship until like last week so i don’t check the tag often. and it’s not like i’ll be devastated or anything but i just don’t understand where people are coming from. it really just feels like people are pretending their headcanons are objective facts and then getting angry about it. kinda weird
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