Idk if this is asking too much, but could you please write an intricate description of Anakin and post it? You write him so so well and I’m trying to write my own fic, but I can’t really get a complete grasp of him as a complete character.
idk about an intricate description, but i can definitely give you some tips/things to remember when writing Anakin!
rule 1: Anakin is always going to be overcome by his emotions--boy has BIG FEELINGS that are always going to cloud his logical, intellectual judgment. another thing to remember here is that Anakin, when faced with a negative emotion, almost always first processes that negative emotion as anger. i think it's the *trauma* and that anger is easier for him to express because it's less vulnerable. in the prequels, we only see Anakin being vulnerable expressing fear/sadness to Obi-Wan and Padme, and no one else. so it's less common for him to be vulnerable, except with anger.
rule 2: Anakin, bc of his big feelings, is almost always going to be conflicted about SOMETHING. whether he's fighting his emotions back, or he's conflicted about something external, a good rule of thumb when writing a character like Anakin is to make sure he has to hold two conflicting ideas or emotions in his mind at once (also, this just makes writing any character more interesting)
rule 3: Anakin wants to win and be the best all the time, and he thinks he's the best Jedi. so, that sometimes brings conflict, bc there's a rational part of him that's like, oh, maybe i do have something to learn from [insert master here] or whatever, but a part of him thinks he knows best and his judgement is flawless lol
rule 4: on the deep down inside Anakin very much wants to be swaddled like a cat (insert that one meme I posted) and he's always seeking reassurance from both Obi-Wan and Padme in the movies, so i interpret that softness as him seeking reassurance from reader often
rule 5: he doesn't usually want to or try to hide his emotions, particularly his affection/love for Padme. in the movies, he's very forthcoming to her--"you're more beautiful" "i can't breathe" etc. he tells it like it is in a way that's even a bit socially awkward? so in my fic, he's obviously fallen for the reader first, and he hasn't tried to hide his feelings much (and he will get even more obvious with them with time haha)
i can add to this later if you want! but that should get you started. send me the fic when you post it!
64 notes
·
View notes
It always gets me how in Rebellion, Homura starts getting suspicious and eventually breaks out of her conditioning because she's too happy. She's like "Wait a minute.... my friends are too happy, I'm too happy, things are just too good to be true. Something smells fishy."
Imagine breaking out of your own Witch barrier brainwashing because you know deep down you're not supposed to be that happy. Like Homura, girl.....
1K notes
·
View notes
not to be a hater but it does drive me insane how so many online conversations are so centered around sidon and yona (and link 😞) and not any of the delicious narratives that totk gave us
like why should we talk about rauru and sonia and their relationship w zelda? why would we talk about zelda and how her relationship w link progressed post calamity? oh are we gonna talk about the sheer insanity that is ZELDA TURNIJG INTOA. FUCKING DRAGON??? no??? shipping discourse over sharks? ok
not to swing a bat at a hornet's nest but it really does feel like specifically mlm ships take precedence in fandom spaces over EVERYTHING else regardless of whether the ship in question actually has like. any canon backing whatsoever. like totk specifically, a ton of the story revolves around zelda, a female character which certain fans notoriously hate for the crime of. being a woman with feelings. like gee i wonder why we all simultaneously decided to ignore the story of this one. i wonder why we really really really want to focus on this random male side character's incredibly minor story instead of the literal titular character of the game. could it perhaps be because some of us are predisposed to ignore and dismiss women in all contexts. could it be perhaps that we don't want to reckon with a woman we didn't like in the last game reclaiming her agency and healing from her trauma and being a positive driving force in the narrative and would rather talk about 2 men and how lame and stupid the woman who dares to exist inbetween them is instead. hmm
109 notes
·
View notes
spring awakening truly has one of the wildest librettos in broadway history because melchior just casually drops the fact that the only time he’s truly happy on this bastard earth is when he’s imagining that he’s a woman who’s getting dicked down so hard that she doesn’t believe in god anymore. sings a whole song about it. n then they never bring it up again for the entire rest of the musical
17 notes
·
View notes
I just can't get over how hot and sweet Hayden is and that's a rare combination 🥺
I honestly don’t understand how…just, how??? how is this person real?
did God put crack cocaine in his face? like why is he so addicting? watching him act is literally spiritual for me, i don’t understand what he is 🥵
and also how articulate he is, how kind he is toward his fans, how humble he comes off 😭😭😭 i can’t
26 notes
·
View notes
yeah fully agreed on how they have their bad moments even during the series where theyre at their best but the tumblr users that love team rocket despite not watching the show since they were kids would crucify me for saying they were bad during the earlier series too LMAO
HDHDHDHDHDHDHFHDFFUDJDUDD NO UR RIGHT…. i think its easier to forgive those earlier moments bc tbf, they fix my indigo league criticism by johto bc i think they instantly get put on stand duty. (also there were several reasons that league was total ass for the most part and most of it comes down to “its the first one”) i think their behavior during the kanto league was too much even for their most diehard fans at the time. but boy does it get harder and harder and harder to like them the more that happens bc that overall issue of TR hogging really took a while to die. even after they stopped being a requirement for each episode it was a straight up plague in XY
4 notes
·
View notes
At long last! I can finally upload this.
This the cover to my Fict Back to Basics which is an introductory to my AU. It is currently got 7 chapters with 8 on the way an takes place 5 years after the anime ends.
This is the summary:
星のカービー: Back to Basics
This story follows Meta Knight, his vassals, Sword Knight and Blade Knight with his young granddaughter, Myra who have returned to Dream Land under orders of King Arthur...but for what purpose? And why has Meta Knight brought a girl with him whom he claims is his granddaughter?
What secrets does she hold? Seems like Kirby knows her, much to Fumu and Bun's surprise...
What could be going on?
The cover is a collaborative effort between myself JumpyL123 and FayeleneFyre who also owns the black dragon on the cover.
Myra, Serena and the Hikaru (the dragon fella on the top right) belong to me. As well as the Logo design
Snowfoot D'nnos belong to Faye and the art is by Jumpy with me doing everything else.
You can find the story here
and if you prefer AO3 over DA the story's first chapter is up here
I will be uploaded each of the chapters daily as I work on Chapter 8.
A couple content warnings, this story has minor blood, swearing and violence.
Meta Knight is married in this AU
There are uses of witches and magic.
All things Kirby belongs to Hal Labs inc and Nintendo.
Back to Basics is a fanwork written by me.
40 notes
·
View notes