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The Rules: If you're tagged, make a new post and share one or two sentences* (or lines for artists) from your most recent unposted WIP with zero context.
I was tagged by @powerful-owl and @diablointercept, thank you!
*or paragraphs, in this case. Forgive me.
They're in the same press conference. It is a battle — a desperate, furious battle — for Daniel to stay focused on the camera and not on Max, who is sharp and frustrated and borderline rude. Max snaps at an inane interviewer later on. Daniel watches the footage five times in a row, video pinched wide, him zooming in until it's Max's mouth, as big as he can get it, and wants to put his dick in it. He tries to meditate the night before Free Practice, the night before Qualifying, the night before the race. He should be doing a full body check but instead he's just remembering Max's skin, the way he tasted, the places Daniel hadn't had a chance to map before it all ended. He wants to learn him like he learns the track, but the opportunity is gone. It is done. It is over. He mentally scrolls his way through their message thread, at the soft dick pictures, the times Max said Daniel's name out loud, the pictures in bed with Zoe asleep by Max's side.
He should be horrified, but all he wants is more of it. He wants Max's attention, he wants it at the expense of Zoe, he wants it more than he wants literally anything on this fucking planet. He wants, he wants, he wants.
He opens his eyes and he's alone. He's so, so fucking alone. It hurts.
Heartbreak fucking sucks.
And I'm sharing one or two paragraphs rather than sentences because
I haven't shared anything in ages
this fic is in the HOME STRAIGHT
I'm writing the LAST CHAPTER (cough, probably) and it's 110k+
we're in the 'I don't think anyone will want to read this/it's too long/what are we doing' mental battle phase of finishing a piece of writing, so it's SHARING TIME as I wail WE WILL OVERCOME YOU at my screen.
(PS OBVIOUSLY this is heartbreak but my fic will end positively for Max and Daniel because I don't write anything that doesn't).
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not trying to dismiss my senior's effort that she put in her assignment and it's awfully nice that she lends hers to me for reference
I can't help but wondering in her assignment, which talks about homosexuality in media, only shows the gay movies/tv shows as examples, she (and her guests) only talk about mlm, as if the entire queer community only has gay men and I just????????
I mean gurl your title is homosexuality, that's not an exclusive term refer to gay men only
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okay so spoiler free (?) review of ASTV:
This movie was good. Like really good. In a time where every intellectual property is getting a reboot or sequel, it’s refreshing to see a continuation that has a purpose.
visually, this blows the first one out of the water. itsv brought us one consistent and beautiful animation style and atsv builds on that by masterfully incorporating other art styles and even mixing forms of media. i’m not an artist though, so i’m sure that someone can say something more profound that lmfao
narratively, the story takes a on a much darker tone and more mature themes, especially towards the end. sequels are supposed to have stakes that are grander than the first and this movie delivers on that. the villain is delightfully terrifying to watch and there are so, so many things working against miles it seems that there is no way out of the predicament he’s in. character motivations are complex and everyone is set up to have something that they are willing to give everything up for.
gwen<333 go white girl go!
not to say that it’s completely devoid of jokes or lightheartedness; the humor is tighter than ever and there are so many references and cameos that i probably need a second watch and a youtube video to get them all.
the people who said that they showed the whole movie in the trailers were so wrong, it’s laughable. it was a such smart move to get everyone fixated on the more superficial aspects so that when twists come, it hits you like a sucker punch.
overall, great movie 100000000/10 go see it now!!!!
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