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demodemogon · 9 months

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My new video playing Roblox Brookhaven 🏡RP

Thanks for watching

#gaming #funny #Youtube #Roblox #Robloxfunnymoment #Brookhaven #Brookhavenrp #meme #arianagrande

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bouchai · 7 months

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Faccio la dottoressa

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addiction-recovery-life · 5 months

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Roblox BrookhavenRP Store Manager is a SCP zombie. #roblox #brookhaven ...

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pandaaabi · 8 months

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brookhaven #brookhavenrp #brookhavenkiyafetkodlari #brookhavenroleplay #brookhavenidcodes

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imoim36news · 1 year

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➪Tín dụng thanh toán tiếng động: đến công ty chiếm hữu hợp lí! ➪ Làm hồ sơ Roblox: ➪ Nhập cuộc group của tôi Theo dõi tôi bên trên roblox nếu như bạn rất thích! TAGS (BỎ QUA): #roblox #meme #memes #robloxmemes #relatable #brookhaven #brookhavenrp #tiktok #comedy...

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youtuberwithcrushonbatgirl · 2 years

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My Brookhaven RP Halloween Update THIRD VIDEO

#BrookhavenRP #I <3 Batgirl #@Roblox User: @ILuvBatgirl Display Name: ILuvBatgirl4Evr

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arianaroxicake · 3 years

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#roblox#brookhavenrp

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misslaviniagame · 2 years

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Roblox Brookhaven RP ОБНОВЛЕНИЕ Новый Год 😱 Брокхэвэн Лавинья Роблокс 😘 https://youtu.be/u7XwZnmnTds https://youtu.be/u7XwZnmnTds Приветики друзья! Подписывайтесь на мой YouTube канал 😊, лайки 👍 комментарии и репосты приветствуются 😘. Спасибо и до встречи 💖💖💖! Пока! Пока! https://www.youtube.com/c/MissLaviniaGAME #Roblox #Роблокс #Brookhaven #MissLaviniaGame #RobloxLavinia #RobloxBrookhaven #BrookhavenRP #СмешноеВидео #ПрохождениеИгры #ПрохождениеРоблокс #брокхэвэн #GameplayRoblox #Lavinia #Лавинья

#роблокс #roblox #lavinia #лавинья

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purdunkin · 3 years

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Mackenzie Turner Roblox - I GOT ADOPTED BY CELEBRITIES IN BROOKHAVEN! (ROBLOX BROOKHAVEN RP) #MackenzieTurnerRoblox #Brookhaven #BrookhavenRP #BrookhavenRoleplay #Roblox #OnlineGaming #TrendingGame #MarkALongstreet https://www.fortnite-minecraft-amongus.com/2021/03/Mackenzie-Turner-Roblox-I-Got-Adopted-Brookhaven.html

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mychildishfantasies · 11 years

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H-hi.. I'm Crissy, I just got here.

#brookhavenrp #brookhavenstarter

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imoim36news · 1 year

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THAM GIA PHÂN BIỆT TẠI ĐÂY: Thả một lượt mến & Sub :) Bỏ lỡ cụm thẻ: #BrookHavenRp #RobloxRoleplay #RobloxRp #roblox #robloxtrend #robloxshorts #Robloxgang #robloxmemes #robloxgames # Strangerthings #strangerthings4 #robloxgames #robloxmemes #robloxedit #robloxtrend #robloxtrend #robloxshorts #robloxbedwars...

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runningcritic-blog · 11 years

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Could we possibly get a first look review? Also could you tag it with brookhavenrp?

Of course! Here you go. Sorry for finishing this so late.

In an instance, I could already tell that your roleplay is related with some sort of boarding school. But you know what? I guess I’m partially right and wrong?

The way you write your full plot seemed quite short, but I love the words that you have used. Personally, for me, there should be no need for you to write the highlighted part:

A myriad of single strand stories come together to weave a tapestry that is the overall plot of the Brookhaven rp.

You can write it like this instead:

A myriad of single strand stories come together to weave a tapestry; welcome to Brookhaven Academy.

Or something along those lines. You can put it in bold or in a bigger font, because I really love this line. Don’t remove it, it gives me this Cloud Atlas vibe.

Also, since your plot is quite short I would recommend putting them in them some paragraphs, this way it would seem people are not reading a lot of words shoved up into one paragraph. So, I would like to see something like this:

A myriad of single strand stories come together to weave a tapestry.

The setting is a therapeutic school where students may receive counseling while remaining in school. It is key though that the methods of the Headmistress are immensely corrupt. Aiding the children is not always the main objective. Professor Hyde believes that in order to rehabilitate students they must be stripped to their core.

The less severe students are referred to as B’s while the dangerous ones are labeled A’s. Hyde utilizes the A’s to break down the B’s, so that she may start anew. Let it be clear that Hyde is mostly interested in experimenting on the student body, but her end goal is to mold/brainwash them into upstanding citizens.

The other two therapists mean well, yet Hyde domineers them into bending to her will. There is little they can do. Acceptance is corrupt department as well. For the sake of financing her demented experiments, Hyde often admits students that have no place at Brookhaven.

The propaganda or advertising Brookhaven emits is drastically different to the reality. It is not at all what the brochures claim. Staged pictures with beaming children efficiently shroud the school’s true darkness from potential students. If the wall could talk it should come as no surprise that they would likely screech “RUN!”

Also, who is the other two therapists? You can write their names and a little about them there.

I think the plot’s interesting. Not my type of roleplay, but still interesting.

The theme is alright, but the color scheme can be worked on a little. The posts background seemed too striking for me, you can choose a much more subtle color to replace it (it can be a lighter version of your background color). Once you fixed the post color, I think everything should come together naturally.

Can you change the color of the links to a different one from the body text, please? It’s hard to differentiate which one is the link and which one is not.

I’m not a big fan of how you arrange your open and taken characters page. You can tag your bios instead of putting them in one custom page. I mean, you did it for the promotions, and you’ve also tagged the taken and open characters, why don’t you just link it to it? For me, it should be easy to edit and organize everything through that method. You know how tumblr is a lot of times a jerk that won’t update pages.

You also have quite inconsistant length of bios. While some on your character bios are short, some are fairly longer. While some character bios only cover their personalities, I would love to see more elaboration on their history. It would also be wonderful if you can write down the general concept about the characters’ condition, this way some people could get an idea of what the condition is before researching it further.

I would recommend you to remove the gifs from the follow list; it can spice your page, but it becomes bothersome once it takes too long for your page to load. You are also using the justify margin, so it looked really shifted because the first and last names of the characters are too far apart because of the gifs. It’s just (sorry) unappealing for me. Removing the gifs wouldn’t have much effect on it, right?

Your rules are straightforward, I have no problem with this. I think these rules should be easy to follow so your members shouldn’t have a reason not to. Your application is also the standard one, but it seems that you are very strict about activity, so I would recommend putting in an activity level section on your app. As for the admin(s) you are nice when answering questions you seem professional enough.

Anyway, have you considered adding a locations page? I also know that the Brookhaven is an academy, do you have any schedule list for studying? This would give the roleplayers more settings to roleplay to.

I think you have a roleplay with potential here. While your plot is very common (I’m not even going to lie on this), you have to make your roleplay stand out.

Good luck!

*This review is simply my opinion, I truly apologize if I ever come across as rude or condescending in this review. You can take the advice I have given you or not. Thank you for asking me to review your roleplay. Hopefully, this review will be provide the help you need.

#brookhavenrp #rpc #rph #rpa #flreviews #reviews

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bouchai · 7 months

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povera signoraaaa

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