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What is it today (*2) ?? It's posting BB day !! [affection levels]

My S-Class Hunters was a dating simulator that had taken the internet by storm. It was a good game. A great game, even.

That didn’t mean that he wanted to be in it!

In which Han Yoojin gets stuck in a dating sim and romances Sung Hyunjae.

more pictures below. BEWARE spoilers !!

#sctir #han yoojin #sung hyunjae #jinjae #SClassBigBang2023 #the s classes that i raised

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#my s class hunters #sung hyunje #sung hyunjae #han yoojin #the s classes that i raised #tsctir

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i can’t believe this is happening… i’ve been thinking of the al-shifa siege for the past five six days and it has literally made me sick. when will this end?

#free palestine 🇵🇸

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HYV Clark Kent meets HYV Bruce Wayne

#Argenti #Diluc Ragnvindr #Kaeya Alberich #Genshin Impact #Honkai Star Rail

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I’m so tired of every show that takes place in the past (wild west, medieval, pirates etc) ALWAYS having so much sexual violence towards women like writers can cry “oh it’s realism” all you want but it’s very transparent how realism only applies when you want to hurt women on screen. If we’re talking staying realistic, why doesn’t everyone have brown teeth? Or bad skin? Or dying of dysentery? Just admit y'all want an excuse to brutalize women on screen lol

#realism #medieval #true #writing tips

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#free palestine 🇵🇸 #palestine

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#awh #cute #wholesome

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If any of y’all didn’t know, there’s a free online library, aka

https://openlibrary.org/

and I found like, twelve ebooks I’ve been wanting to read on there, and blasted through like three of them during the course of a boring-ass shift.

#library #ebook #book #books

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THE DEPRAVITY HATH RETURNED UNTO US. ALL HAIL

Merry Christmas, and Happy Holidays everyone.

Let us commit some sins.

#fell star #fell star if #i missed this so much #asol

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he keeps the monster guide in his bra

#this is what I'm talking about #dungeon meshi #laios touden

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dungeon meshi but they end up in the back rooms, a cursed idea that was eating away at my brain

#dungeon meshi #backrooms

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some dunmeshis bc i love them

#dungeon meshi #dunmeshi #delicious in dungeon #falin touden #laios touden #marcille donato

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Boss is asleep, cannot stop me from frogposting

#prog

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some of the best writing advice I’ve ever received: always put the punch line at the end of the sentence.

it doesn’t have to be a “punch line” as in the end of a joke. It could be the part that punches you in the gut. The most exciting, juicy, shocking info goes at the end of the sentence. Two different examples that show the difference it makes:

doing it wrong:

She saw her brother’s dead body when she caught the smell of something rotting, thought it was coming from the fridge, and followed it into the kitchen.

doing it right:

Catching the smell of something rotten wafting from the kitchen—probably from the fridge, she thought—she followed the smell into the kitchen, and saw her brother’s dead body.

Periods are where you stop to process the sentence. Put the dead body at the start of the sentence and by the time you reach the end of the sentence, you’ve piled a whole kitchen and a weird fridge smell on top of it, and THEN you have to process the body, and it’s buried so much it barely has an impact. Put the dead body at the end, and it’s like an emotional exclamation point. Everything’s normal and then BAM, her brother’s dead.

This rule doesn’t just apply to sentences: structuring lists or paragraphs like this, by putting the important info at the end, increases their punch too. It’s why in tropes like Arson, Murder, and Jaywalking or Bread, Eggs, Milk, Squick, the odd item out comes at the end of the list.

Subverting this rule can also be used to manipulate reader’s emotional reactions or tell them how shocking they SHOULD find a piece of information in the context of a story. For example, a more conventional sentence that follows this rule:

She opened the pantry door, looking for a jar of grape jelly, but the view of the shelves was blocked by a ghost.

Oh! There’s a ghost! That’s shocking! Probably the character in our sentence doesn’t even care about the jelly anymore because the spirit of a dead person has suddenly appeared inside her pantry, and that’s obviously a much higher priority. But, subvert the rule:

She opened the pantry door, found a ghost blocking her view of the shelves, and couldn’t see past it to where the grape jelly was supposed to be.

Because the ghost is in the middle of the sentence, it’s presented like it’s a mere shelf-blocking pest, and thus less important than the REAL goal of this sentence: the grape jelly. The ghost is diminished, and now you get the impression that the character is probably not too surprised by ghosts in her pantry. Maybe it lives there. Maybe she sees a dozen ghosts a day. In any case, it’s not a big deal. Even though both sentences convey the exact same information, they set up the reader to regard the presence of ghosts very differently in this story.

#this is nice #writing

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more from the multi university au Continuation of the first one. No one but g1 op knows basketball. I’ve wanted to draw tfp orion in a cheerleader outfit since the beginning. Turn of a switch is still my favorite fic.

#megatron #optimus prime #megop #mtmte #transformers animated #tfp #g1 #maccadam #lost light #megaop #multi university au #awesome

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#Transformers #Optimus Prime #Megatron #megop #earthspark

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#😌 #megatron #optimus prime #tfa #megop