Since I read this chapter I haven't been able to sit still, so here's a little something I couldn't stop thinking about.
I really love that Kagi spoke so openly about why he likes the 10-second touch. It's a huge step from last chapter, where we saw him struggling to find the words to explain what he feels when they touch. He had even been hoping that Hirano figured it out from just the hug alone.
Now with Hirano taking the initiative, both in terms of the touch and in defining what they're doing in his own words ("I mean, this is supposed to be practice to see if I could ever think of you as my boyfriend, so..."), something probably clicked for Kagi. He already knew that Hirano was trying to understand him, but I think it's now that Kagi realizes they'd gotten to this point in their relationship because he didn't shy away from expressing his feelings in the simplest of terms: "I'm saying that I'm in love with you. In the romantic sense."
The only one who could truly help Hirano understand Kagi's feelings is Kagi himself. There's no need to make it complicated, to search for the "right" words to make Hirano see why Kagi treats their agreement to touch like lovers so seriously.
We see him trying to express that in chapter 20, though he focuses more on the "fairness" of it instead of telling Hirano how his touch makes Kagi feel.
It almost appears like Kagi is stalling. We know he cares about being fair, he said as much to Niibashi, but it isn't the full reason. And Hirano notices.
And when he does get around to saying that he enjoys touching Hirano, it doesn't sound very convincing, because Kagi is still searching for those "perfect" words.
Even though this chapter was more about Hirano's introspection on their current circumstances, it was wonderful to see Kagi being unapologetically in love with Hirano again.
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was about to post a fun fact about one of my original plans for writing the one year anniversary of may’s death in homeward bound before realizing i can incorporate that idea in a similar way for another event i have planned for the sequel which has made me very excited especially because i’ve had that idea for the sequel ever since deciding to make hb a series but i couldn’t think of how to actually write it and now i know EXACTLY how i want to write it.
step one, though: actually finish hb first before focusing too much on hb2
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