So I picked up a short story anthology recently, which I don't normally do, and I thought it'd be fun to go through and do little reviews of each piece. I've always been a longform fiction girlie and it couldn't hurt to look a little closer and see what makes shorter fiction work.
The anthology is Someone in Time, containing stories about time travel romance, here's the 4 that I read today:
1: Roadside Attraction, by Alix Harrow
The Time Travel: A strange rock in the woods that sends you to some random time and place in the past, then eventually back to the present. Or not.
The Romance: Floyd, a young man recently broken up with, and Edmund, the groundskeeper.
I think this was a good choice to have as the first piece, because as far as time travel stories go, it's pretty straightforward. "Young man goes out into the world seeking adventure, and is still left wanting, because he doesn't realize that what he's looking for is right in front of him", but with time travel. Notably, his adventures in the past are largely glossed over, most of them being described in a sentence or less, which is to the benefit of the piece's theming. Floyd's characterized as a man looking for adventure and never finding what he needs, so those adventures being summed up as "two hours he spent swearing and almost dying", "he made out with a pirate", "he spent a week hungry" adds to that vibe.
His arc is, as an extent of this, very predictable. He spends months traveling to different time periods looking for some grand destiny, and at the end of the story, he'll realize "oh actually, I'm gay for the groundskeeper that's always here to greet me when I come home, and living in the present is all I need, actually." I don't find that to the story's detriment, though, it is a romance- it doesn't matter if you figure out the destination early.
I'm not handing out stars or rating these out of ten or anything. I liked it.
2: The Past Life Reconstruction Service, by Zen Cho
The Time Travel: A service that lets people experience half-hour snippets of past lives.
The Romance: Rui, a washed-up film director, and Yiu Leung, his ex and soulmate.
I may be a little guilty of "rating" this higher than I maybe should, simply because I like the concept of past lives in fiction a lot. Rui looks into the past five times, and each time he recognizes Yiu Leung as an important person to him, rubbing salt in the wound of their recent breakup. Soulmates can be a little hit-or-miss for me, so I appreciate that Rui doesn't try to make amends with Yiu Leung just because their soulmates, but because he sees how important Yiu Leung has been in his past lives, and the repeated encounters make him realize "oh, I fucked this up bad and I want to make amends".
Much like Roadside Attraction, the time travel functions as less of a plot element and more of a narrative tool to help the main character learn the lesson they need to learn. Plotwise there wasn't too too much going on, we learn about the fight between Rui and Yiu Leung that caused them to breakup, and Rui encounters him at the end and makes the effort to get back together. Big chunks of the text are spent in past lives, but fortunately, I found them pretty interesting. It starts with the good old "angst-filled wartime setting", but then moves on to "Rui and Yiu Leung are both women married to the same nobleman carrying out and illicit romance", and later, "Rui is a cow and Yiu Leung is a fly who won't leave him alone". Honestly that one bit is kinda carrying for me, it was very short but I'm going to be thinking about that one for a while.
3: First Aid, by Seanan McGuire
The Time Travel: An early 22nd century agency that sends people back in time to better study overlooked aspects of various time periods, to then send their observations back the long way. Operatives spend years learning about the time period they're going to live in, getting reconstructive surgery to better learn the part, and as they can't be compensated the agency instead provides for one person of their choosing for life.
The Romance: Taylor, a researcher going back to the past, and Marianne, a woman from the 90s she falls in love with.
"Hey ghost, why'd you spend so much more time describing the time travel here" because that's what reading the story's like. Marianne isn't introduced until 2/3rds of the way through the story, and so much more time is spent on explaining the circumstances and purposes of Taylor going back in time. And it's not that these things aren't interesting, but it leads to the story being so unbalanced that the romance feels barely there in comparison. If the story had opened on Taylor landing in the past, and meeting Marianne soon after, and her backstory had been explored through comparisons between her past future life and her present past life, that could've led for so much more time for Taylor and Marianne's relationship to develop.
The best way I can summarize it is that First Aid so badly wants to be a novella at least, and can't properly fold itself into the constraints of a short story. The funny twist near the end is that Taylor's supposed to go to the 1500s, and instead lands at a ren faire in 1996 with no way home. In a longer story, the repercussions of this could be properly explored, but instead, we have Taylor internally panicking about both the immediate and long-term repercussions, but the former are skipped over and the story ends before the latter can become relevant. For the purposes of the short, this didn't need to happen- if Taylor landed in the 1500s and met a woman there, the overall plot would be unchanged, and there'd be much more time for her relationship with Marianne to feel like a relationship.
4. I Remember Satellites, by Sarah Gailey
The Time Travel: A time travel agent goes to the past on a lifelong mission to alter the course of history by marrying a prince and keeping him from the throne.
The Romance: Violet, a time agent, and Dani, another agent sent on an overlapping mission.
First point, why was this immediately after First Aid lmao, if you have two "woman working for a time travel org goes back in time to spend the rest of her life there and falls in love with another woman there" stories, space them out a bit!
Of the four I read so far, I think this one did the best job of integrating time travel, making it deeply necessary to the plot and character arcs without it overstepping. Violet, leaving to spend the rest of her life with a man who sucks, struggles with having to forget her life in the future and being forgotten by the people she knew. She and Dani aren't supposed to be in the same place at the same time, interacting with other agents on missions is expressly forbidden due to the likelihood of operatives breaking character when they're not completely immersed, but naturally she holds on to Dani both as a lover and as the only tangible reminder of the life she used to live.
As such, the story takes two routes towards being a forbidden romance- which is to its benefit, because as Violet points out, it's not as if her bosses can punish her when she's already on a mission that's going take up the rest of her life. While that is initially a compelling reason for Dani, I as a reader was more open to Violet's perspective, but the fact that she was married to a shitty prince helped keep the appeal of a forbidden romance going despite that. While I'm not expecting a full capital-R Romance from short stories like these, this was the closest to it in the collection so far, and I felt Dani played a larger role in the story than most of the other love interests (though Edmund is also a contender!). I'd say this is my favorite in the anthology so far, though there's certainly plenty more to go.
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What time is it? It’s ✨Lizard talks about queer sci-fi✨ once again!
Hello hello, after well over six months I’m back with another set of book recommendations! Trying to pull this together was honestly a good way of convincing myself to read more, and since the last installment I’ve read…41 books? So you know, it worked.
Do you like queer sci-fi? Do you see the same books recommended everywhere? Well I’m here to scour local bookshops and slowly consume their entire stock for you!
Anyway, this is another ten books I’ve loved, and specifically my:
Top ten queer speculative fiction (since April)
(Speculative fiction because even this many books isn’t enough to have ten good queer space operas. In fact, I’ve only read seven space operas in general!)
This list includes:
Last Exit, by Max Gladstone
A Psalm for the Wild-Built, by Becky Chambers
This is How You Lose the Time War, by Amal El-Mohtar and Max Gladstone
Ancestral Night, by Elizabeth Bear
Even Greater Mistakes, by Charlie Jane Anders
The Darkness Outside Us, by Elliot Schrefer
Murderbot, by Martha Wells
Someone In Time, edited by Jonathon Strahan
Our Wives Under the Sea, by Julia Armfield
Gideon the Ninth, by Tamsyn Muir
Once again, I originally wrote this on my Instagram so some of my thoughts and reviews are below the cut :)
(This time with alt text!!)
If you’ve read any of these or read any because of me, feel free to come chat!! And if you have any suggestions for me I’ll totally check them out too (thank you to everyone who hounded me into reading Gideon, it’s now the defining facet of my personality /half joking)
Now go forth, and read!
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