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genericpuff · 10 months

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Hiii, I read your post about the stiff dialogue in LO, and I wanted to add my own two cents!

I myself am a person with a nice case of dyslexia (it will most likely show in this message). While I can’t speak for everyone with dyslexia, I pesonally cannot and will not publish anything ”official”, without spell checking it to hell and back. This is mostly because I’m hyper aware of this being one of my ”shortcomings”.

I also wanted to say, that most of, if not all, people with dyslexia that I know are rather self-consious about it. I just find it a bit unbeliavable that all the misspellings/awkward text in LO are there simply because Rachel has dyslexia. To me personally, it seems to be more a product of laziness and/or indifference.

Of course there is the fact that I’m not working on a long project, and I can usually take my time with my work, so maybe I just have more recourses to be careful. I also want to make clear that I don’t mean to say that Rachel’s dyslexia doesn’t affect her workload at all, but I do think she should have the means to check these things, especially since she is quite successful in the field.

Thanks for pitching in on this! I myself do not have dyslexia, but I do understand the struggle of missing words or misspelling them as my brain tends to move too quick at times for my writing speed to keep up LMAO It happens a lot when I'm writing by hand as I can't handwrite as fast as I can type so words sometimes go missing while my brain speeds ahead 😂

I can get why someone might be a little more self-conscious about typos being pointed out if they're making their comic entirely on their own and for free, or if they're just self-conscious about making mistakes in general (it can be scary to put a piece of work out into the world!) but Rachel is literally the top creator on the platform so there's zero excuse for it to have gone this long without at least a copy editor. And frankly it's still weird that they hire a copy editor at all just for checking typos because that's something that can be done so easily (again, Rachel has 4-5 other assistants per episode, you're telling me NONE of them could do it for her? Oh that's right, because she has them all draw their panels in isolation of one another and then she slaps the dialogue in at the last minute -.- the copy editor she has right now seems like the 'last step' before she submits the comic).

That said, if you go back far enough, you can actually find Rachel's take on correcting her misspellings and it's... frankly way saltier than it ought to be? Like I get it, it might feel like an attack for someone to say "hey, I spotted this mistake!" especially if you're self-conscious about it or are living with a learning disorder that affects your every day life, but when you get over that self-consciousness of making mistakes, it's really not that big of a deal? Like, yeah, it can be really frustrating when people point those mistakes out because it makes you feel bad or reminds you that you're struggling with something like spelling that seems so natural and 'easy' to everyone else, but I find true genuine fans of your work don't point these things out to be mean, just to be helpful. Yes, some people are mean about it, but you can usually tell which ones are the mean ones and which ones are the nice ones.

I've made spelling and grammatical errors in both Time Gate and Rekindled that have been kindly pointed out, and you know what I do when people find them? I thank them for spotting what I clearly didn't and I go and fix it. Because it makes my work better for my audience and my own peace of mind.

Rachel, meanwhile-

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Question: Why do you have typos?

Rachel's answer: Yes, believe it or not I speak English. (English-New Zealand not English-American) Remember... not everyone cares about spelling. And frankly if go around pointing out spelling mistakes in peoples comics you have an issue. Plus I'm dyslexic you insensitive ass!)

Like... that whole thing is from her FAQ section that she made herself and she's still having a tone of voice that implies she's directing her answer at one specific person as if it was like an anon ask LMAO and really, I get the spirit of what she's saying, it can be pretentious/rude to point out people's spelling mistakes... in an informal or conversational setting. If you're making a comic or writing a book, though, it's basically a bare minimum expectation that you should be using spell check and making sure things are readable. You're making the work for other people to read after all. So her tone in this followed by the whole "I'm dyslexic you ass" bit just feels so unnecessarily hostile over something that was an innocent mistake and happens to literally everyone. Like, she really do be hurting her own feelings in her own FAQ that she made on her own time, this isn't the only question in there that reeks of 2000's edgy era "fuck you for asking" energy lmao

That said, to be fair, that is from her 2000's edgy era, so I'm hoping she's grown out of that at least slightly, but judging by how she's been managing her comic the past few years, it's clear she still isn't bothering to employ simple tactics to keep mistakes from slipping through the cracks and would rather lean on her dyslexia as an excuse rather than a reason. Dyslexia is a reason for typos, but where it becomes an excuse IMO is when she blames her dyslexia and then doesn't fix the mistakes that arise due to her dyslexia or do anything to make her life easier going forward.

Again, she's hired a copy editor, so if they're a permanent part of the team now, that will hopefully make things better. But why weren't they one of the first people hired when it's clear that Rachel could really use the help to ensure her comic comes out being the best version of itself it could be? It's like she's been literally shooting herself in the foot for the last 5 years.

It really feels lazy and, frankly, disrespectful. I know that might be a hot take or seem a little overblown to use that word here, but if you're going to be creating a comic for an audience - and expecting that audience to read your comic each week and in Rachel's case be expected to pay money for it - then you should be doing them the service of making it worth reading and sticking around for. If you can't even do so much as spell check your work - or go back and edit the errors when they arise - then that really goes to show how little you care about your own audience because you're not willing to put in the time and effort to even just fix a typo, let alone give them something worth coming back to and paying for each week. Sure, not everyone pays for the comics, but those viewership analytics are still valuable and it's very clear at this point that they're dropping rapidly week after week, and yet Rachel is doing barely anything to help turn things around.

Lore Olympus disrespects its audience in more ways beyond just the typos, of course, but the typos feel like the shopping cart litmus test - it costs next to nothing to resolve the issue, so if you still choose not to, it speaks to how little effort you're willing to put in to do something helpful for others that already only requires the bare minimum to do.

Of course, much of this is all speculative so take it with grains of salt, but judging by her responses to her own audience way back in the day, it really paints a picture of how Rachel views her audience. It makes it feel like she doesn't release her work into the world to genuinely entertain people or to find others who may connect and resonate with the work, she does it purely for herself and herself alone. That wouldn't necessarily be a bad thing in and of itself, it's pretty difficult to keep up a project if you aren't doing it for yourself to some degree (and you shouldn't create a comic just to earn an audience because that's just setting up unfair expectations for yourself lol), but in Rachel's case, it feels more like she's emulating the same edgelord energy of her "boss babe" Persephone - if you don't love every part of her and her work regardless of its genuine flaws, no matter how easy said flaws would be to fix, then you should just shut up and read her work and/or pay for it anyways because she should be allowed to do whatever she wants and if you don't like it, then you're an insensitive ass.

#ama #ask me anything #anon ask me anything #anon ama #lore olympus critical #lo critical #antiloreolympus #anti lore olympus

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ehilikeshoney · 1 year

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(Correcting the typo: it’s “leave the poor girl alone”, not “let the poor girl alone”, God, what was I thinking? I mean, I could fix it, but I’m too lazy to redo the entire post)

Felt cute today, so I decided to make yet another post about my AU :D

So, since she's mute, Claudia can't really communicate with most of the other girls, but she did find some friends nonetheless:

Tonia: She was the first one Claudia interacted with, and since she already knew her, she decided to stick around her and quickly became friends. They even decided to share a room together (each girl has to do it since there's 12 of them and only 6 rooms in that house) and became closer and closer. Claudia views Tonia like a big sister because she's overprotective and cares for her. Plus, Tonia perfectly understands Claudia's sign language and would often translate it to the other girls, thing which got them even more attached to each other.

Tommy: The first thing she felt as soon as she saw Tommy was admiration, the latter one being the head of the house thanks to her confidence and insight. On the other hand, Tommy thinks that Claudia is a pretty interesting girl, finding her muteness intriguing. She also likes that she listens to her orders and does them without any hesitation, unlike the other girls. This thing lead to them slowly becoming friends and enjoying each other's company. Tommy is also capable of understanding Claudia's sign language, this thing shocking both of them and actually confirming their friendship.

CJ: She instantly recognized CJ, since she met her years ago, and so did CJ, the only difference being that she glared at her. She feels a strong antipathy for Claudia since the events in 1992 and often avoids talking to her. Yet, Claudia developed a rather strange obsession with her, wanting to prove to her that she's trustworthy and friendly, but everything she tries doesn't seem to work, as CJ continues to hold it against her. The other girls (especially Frankie, CJ's obvious bestie) try to convince her that she's not that bad after all, and that she should forget about the past. Eventually, CJ gives up and decides to befriend Claudia, but she still tries to keep a certain distance between them, while Claudia tries to do the exact opposite.

Ok, I'm done with that.

Now, drawing only Claudia became a bit boring, so if you guys want me to draw the other girls doing literally anything, just ask/tell me and I’ll see what I can make out of it, ok? Ok :)

#grand theft auto #gta #gta 3 #claude speed #gta vc #tommy vercetti #gta san andreas #carl johnson #gta lcs #toni cipriani #gta v #franklin clinton #genderswap #genderbend #drawing #doodle

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lavenoon · 1 year

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What are the boys texting styles? (the boys as in all three)

I can imagine Sun texts very proper, grammar n everything. Meanwhile Moon doesn't really care and uses anything that lets him type less... and Eclipse? Mostly emoji's and meme's to the point that sometimes his brothers go "USE YOUR WORDS, WHAT IS IT"

Pretty close, yeah!

I haven't fleshed these out before so what snippets of texts there are might not be entirely accurate, but I'll stick to these in the future <3

Sun is definitely a boomer in regards to texting, he has auto-capitalization on but doesn't even need it, he just does it all manually, anyway. Takes ages to finish a message because he insists on fixing every typo he makes, and adding correct punctuation. Fortunately his brothers have at least clued him in that in texting that kind of no-nonsense style is easily misinterpreted into "I'm angry with you", so he tries to add a few emojis every now and then. Sometimes signs off his messages with the sun emoji (after learning early on that apparently, you don't sign off every message with your name), but otherwise throws in a few of the classics - :) :/ >:( - and Moon and Eclipse still make fun of him. It still softens his messages somewhat, and he's satisfied with that

Moon is much more relaxed. Switches between having autocaps on and off, and goes entire weeks before getting fed up and changing it back. He likes the chill vibes of all lower caps, and very much prefers not having to care about correct capitalization. Gets annoyed when autocorrect fixes brand names, so that's turned off, too, and whether he fixes typos is dependent on the position of the planets in the sky. A roulette game, even. Thinks it's a special form of humor actually, and definitely gets a kick out of "ourple", "woag", "joak", and the like. Tries to be professional in work contact, but in casual chats he's the one who pipes up with a lower case one word reply that just obliterates everyone, and then quietly snickers to himself. Doesn't use many emojis because he's lazy, but steals a few of Eclipse's reaction images to drop at the funniest times

Eclipse is. Well. He's definitely laying it on thick with reaction memes and showing his reaction with emojis - even if technically the laugh cry isn't really possible for him. It's about the vibe! Cringe is dead and he killed it, so he also goes for the beloved classics like UwU, ^w^, ToT, and abbreviations like brb and lol! It's extra funny when Sun misunderstands and asks "What does UwU stand for? Is it also an abbreviation?" and he can simply send a little emoji equivalent and not get an answer back until Sun copes with yet another little smiley face he has to learn. Finds uses for the most obscure emojis, and sometimes throws them in the middle of a sentence just to annoy his brothers. With anyone else he probably wouldn't do that, unless they think it's funny, but he does mostly text Sun and Moon! Has autocaps on, but typos either get fixed by clicking autocorrect or remain in the text forever, he doesn't usually care to fix them. The outcome is a mess of a text that is mostly intelligible, but the 30% that aren't are anyone's guess

#answer let luce #anonymous #accidentally undercover #this was relevant for the drabble I'm currently writing (not in the way you think) so I answered it!#there's still a bunch of other asks in my inbox and I swear I'll get to them #this week's just busy and my priorities were a little. well. CS focused GFHDJS #but I WILL get to them all #they're all very good and I wanna ramble lots <3 #for now; texting styles hehe

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freddys-sweet-treat-circus · 2 years

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A few years ago I started my very own fnaf au that I called Project Biotronic. I was... not a very skilled artist when this all began and pretty much all of this au's current content consists of old and bad art. Despite my past cringe I'm still in love with this au and very proud of it. Today, I present to you a total redraw of the very first location in my au: Freddy's Sweet Treat Circus! The place where my story begins. Will I redraw the other locations as well? I'd like to! But that's a long way away. For now, enjoy the bittersweet beggings of Project Biotronic!

Ladies and gentlemen, boys and girls, welcome to Freddy's Sweet Treat Circus! This story takes place in the year 2062, Freddy fazbear's pizza has been rebranded and reopened. In this time period, the animatronics are programmed with a futuristic AI that makes them almost human. They are also coated with a unique sweet scent that makes the entire establishment smell amazing! Our nameless protagonist works the nightshift, cleaning and repairing things around the establishment. Recently, there has been a break in within the establishment and the criminal allegedly hacked into the animatronics' security database. The animatronics have been unable to control themselves, seeing staff as criminals from their database and snapping at them. The unique thing about these animatronics is their built-in attack mode to stop any malicious people that may threaten the establishment or its patrons. Normally they are only supposed to restrain the attacker and contact police, but lately their attack mode behaviors have become a bit.... violent

But don't mind that! Say hello to your new friends!

Ignore the typo on minty's sheet I know it says infate and not inflate I'm too lazy to fix it lmao

Oh! And these little fellas are the bon-bits, pay them no mind! They run about the establishment freely, doing dances for kids in the day and serving as walking security cameras at night. They're completely harmless, but try not to step on them!

Sugar? You mean that old character? The kids weren't a big fan of him so we replaced him with Gresh. We just use him for parts now. What do you mean you saw him? That's impossible! He's locked up in the maintenance room, you must be seeing things

#fnaf au #five nights at freddy's au #fnaf oc #fnaf original character #my art #my artwork #freddy's sweet treat circus #fstc #Cherry Freddy #Lime hen #mango marco #Cotton candy gresh #peppermint bb #Peppermint balloon boy #the bon bits #sugar the bat

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teaffrogy · 2 months

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Finally Back Home

Sum. A parents first priority is to protect their child. And when you are finally back at Bulder Gate, the first thing you do is to go find your daughter.

Note: hi! So I wrote about this idea here. And I wanted to write something. So yeah, anyways, if you want more pls tell me :) any ideas help as well. Thank you :D also I randomly named the kid and she's a girl. And I may have HUGE typos so sorry and also I am too lazy to fix anything lol

You were finally at Baldur's Gate. You felt some sort of anxiety as you walked. Astarion, Gale and Shadowheart were with you. They all talked about how they remembered places or what they did and so much stuff you just ignored all of them. Your walking speed starts to increase as you start to remember those red bright roses by the old lady who took so much care of them that she would throw water at anyone and anything. Kids, adults, cats, and dogs. Astarion noticed how far they are from you. They all run towards you and he looks at you. You were biting your lip and looking everywhere. You were anxious.

“Is something the matter darling?” He asks and you just nod. He hummed, not really satisfied with your answer. Shadowheart notices the Orphanage as you all pass by it and says, “Aren't we supposed to go here?” She asks, after all there was a name of someone who could be dead or will be killed soon. Gale raised a brow at you not answering and looked at both Astarion and Shadowheart, but they both shrugged. Your eyes keep scanning every corner and place you look. And finally, you see those blue doors with green dye splattered on it. You hurry towards those doors and go to open but it is stuck.

It's locked, that's good. Or not…. My key!

You look in your pockets but remember something, you lost it when the damn mind player ship took you. It's long gone now.

“Would you like me to open that for you?” Astarion asks while giving you one of his charming smiles. You couldn’t help but smile back and nod. He moves to the door and starts to lockpick it. He opens the doors and is met with a child. He gave the child a disgusted look but the girl gave him disgusted look back. That's when he is shoved to the side. “Ugh, excuse you!” he says to you. You ignore him, looking down at the little girl as she looks right back at yours. “Mommy/Daddy?” The girl says, her voice cracking. You go down on your knees and she comes running into your arms. “Yes honey, mama/papa is back.” You say as your own voice cracks, tears falling down your cheeks as you hear your own little girl cry in your arms.

Your companions stood there as they watched you. “Is that your kid?” Gale asked. “Yes, she's mine.” You sobbed as you held her tightly. They noticed that she has the same hair as you, the nose, and even the lip shape. She looked so much like you. “Wait, so you had a kid this whole time and didn’t tell us?” Shadowheart asks. You look at your daughter and give her so many kisses on her sweet face. “Go upstairs, pack your things for me, okay? Tell grandma that I am back.” She nods as she wipes her tears away and hurries upstairs. You wipe your own tears and stand up. “Yes, I did, is there a problem, Shadowheart?”

“Well, for me, yes, I told you everything about me and you didn’t?” She says. “I am sorry, But i was doing it to protect my daughter.” You say. You go upstairs. “ I would do the same if I had a kid.” Gale says. “I mean, we are hated by a lot of gods and also chased by very powerful people.” he says and Shadowheart nods, agreeing. But she looked hurt, maybe a little betrayed. But she understood. You soon come back downstairs and smile while holding your daughter's hand. “Let's head to camp, I'm really tired after talking with gortash.”

You trust them all, you trust them so much that you decided to introduce your little girl to everyone in camp. “Wow, she looks all like you.” Jaheria says as she sees Layla chase after scratches. “I know, i've been told that a lot.” You say while smiling. Jaheira smiles and slams her hand on your back, “Welcome to the club of parenting, Cub.” She says while smiling. You chuckled and looked at Layla as she looked up at Astarion. “Thank you crow.”

“You look old.” Layla says.

“Uh- EXCUSE ME?”

You go up to her and pick her up. “Apologize!” You yell.

“No” Layla shakes her head and wraps her arm around you.

“Yes!” Astorian yells. Layla simply hugs her parents and hides her face in their neck. “I'm sorry , Astarion.” He glares at Layla as Layla sticks her tounge out at him. You sigh and tell Layla to leave Astarion alone. She hurries over to Wyll and is in awe as she sees him.

“Why hello there. I'm Wyll, and you are?” He asks as he goes on one knee. “Layla.” She says and Wyll holds his hand out. She holds her hand out as well and he grabs her small hand and shakes “it's a pleasure to meet you. You have such a pretty name Layla.” He says and Layla nods. She hurries back to you and hides behind your leg. You smiled and looked at Wyll. “She likes you. She gets shy with people she likes.” You ruffled her hair.

“Well that's good, I didn't want her to see me as any danger or someone who is bad.” He says. You smiled and saw Layla run to scratches and the owlbear Cub. “Where is the other parent Of the kid?” Wyll asks as everyone else approaches. “Out of the picture.” Is all you say as you look at how happy Layla is. “Why didn't you speak of it? Or mention you have a daughter?” Wyll asks. “Well, it was to protect my daughter.” You say. “We literally fought A man who was immortal, murdures going on around, Orin after us, Gortash wanting to make a deal with us, and lastly a whole tadpole is still in our brains. You think I'd ever bring her up when all of this is happening?” You say. Everyone nods agreeing. After all, a parent wants nothing more than For their kids to be safe, it's their first priority. And it was when you were on the ship. To get out and find the way back home.

But then you met Shadowheart, Astarion, Gale, Karlach, Lazel, Wyll, Halsin, and Jaheira. And then took down the goblin leader and the rest of the goblins, then fought Ketheric, and now the emperor wants to defeat the elder brain with the nether stones. Yet, even After all of that, your first priority was your daughter. Find her and keep her safe. “Well, you are one kick ass parent Soldier!” Karlach says and you smiled at her. “She's going to be proud to have you as a parent.” She says. “I did the same.” Jaheria said. She did tell you why she never spoke of them in the first place, and you understood her.

“I suppose you are a nice parent. But your little shi- ahem, sorry, kid here has been grabbing my things!” Astarion yells as he points at his tent. Layla touches the mirror and then gets to the books and knocks them down. “Are you serious!” he runs up to her and Layla giggles as she runs Away.

Everyone talks with Layla and plays with her. She was a mess, she is 7 years old after all. It was starting to get dark. Everyone changed into their comfortable clothes. And Layla lays in your arms as you hug her and wrap her with a blanket. She was fast asleep. After all, she was playing and running around all day.

You made a promise to yourself that after defeating the elder brain, you'd go back to your home, with your daughter, and go back to your old life.

Comments, likes and reposts help thank you :)

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fr3akinthecorner · 6 months

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dear lord pls make menswear unattractive at my new school it's brian your new friend it's not a new school u just got suspended oh hahaha... awkward... is menswear attractive? yes! god! im gonna kill u! why? bc my momma hates jeeps! ok so don't call shirogane please are you guys nervous about something? perhaps feeling guilty? i love u will ubplease just come and makeout with me? ok sure but hurry up dude i have to find a dress to wear why? bc this guy named brian i forgot to call him oh ok so ur in trouble with ur bf? who is also named brian? and ur plan is to wear a dress? yes ok so ur new personality is so fucking sexy and trust me u are high enough! ok good i was worried about being too sober that's it? pretty much my dude did u just call me daddy?? no? i said dude ok u know what we are fuxking ok u know what i'm just gonna wear this and go to class u don't want ro duxk? no i don't why? im lazy ok! so that is not the answer! it's a different reason! it's not feminism right? no its not! ok good ur not a feminist? no i don't have opinions on genders ok so that's weird yea it is have u seen veronica? whose that? my bff i need to ask her something ok so ur trying to get out of fuxkinf? yes i am ok so we can't duck? no we can't sorry why aren't u fixing my typos? well... bc i didn't like their words ok so u don't like the word fuxk? it's ok ok so u don't need to be this sexy i am fuckinf u right now i promise this is awkward bx i'm at school in public aren't u a porn star? yes i guess do u care? yes i care why? it's stupid ok irs keeho send it now sorry my dad is calling me which one? keeho ok so ur dad is keeho ans he doesn't want us to tak anymore bur ue still talking to me? yea i miss u u don't even know me do u like tekken yea it's alright omf let me fuck her!! the skateboarders? yea they said they're good i think ok so u still want to talk? aorr of ok leabe ok no u can't! irs his friend brian omg hi brian irs keejo u need to go to fuckinf school ok so ik gonna leave for yea um that place ok cool ride out

#rocket power makeup club #bite hurts #bye bye club #princeton high school #black fan fiction from mars

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the-art-in-arthesia-is-loud · 6 months

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RGverse Story Summary (Season 1: Part 1)

i was too lazy to continue on so have the summary from arc 1 to arc 7

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i have......a lot to say before we start, actually.

and it's about the post title. you see the "season 1" thing? yeah. the main storyline is split into seasons.

season 1 is supposed to focus on ars and the more earlier characters i've made more i think. it's also supposed to go in depth with ars' conflict with dark ars, and maybe some destonio-fate lore too.

season 2 is more focused on the severed eden gang, mainly abstruse tho. it's also more focused on the rest of team destruction as a whole, and this season is overall the one that ends the story completely.

now.......there's a third season. "oh! season 3?!" WRONG! season 1.5

it serves as a bridge between season 1 and 2. it has two arcs, with the first arc focusing on one objective and also on the conclusion of two specific characters, while the second arc focuses a little more on ana, primeval, and technicolour.

OKAY DONE FINALLY. LET US START NOW. THERE'S ARCS HERE TOO BTW. OK LET'S START FOR REAL THIS TIME. NO PROCRASTINATING ONCE AGAIN. FUCK IT WE BALL.

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• arc 1: starting arc

i don't have names for these arcs so just take random words/sentences that have smth to do with the story of the arc itself ok thanx

anyways, i think it's safe to say arc 1 focuses on introducing some of the characters here first. i think the characters introduced are ars, lucas, ana, aresi (she only appears for like a brief moment sorry aresi 😔), the thunderriders members, fate, and destonio. that's abt it

this arc also focuses on introducing the conflict in hand; team destruction and a weird reoccuring dream ars keeps having for some reason.

as for the dream, the premise is always the same; the sky for some reason is pink and there's a weird gateway to god knows where that sucks in everything in the world and ultimately causes destruction and shit. some guy (supposed to be abstruse) is just watching some girl (supposed to be arghena) cause everything and be the bad bitch she is. also in the dream ars just watches some randos (supposed to be the rest of severed eden) die one by one in the same ways every single goddamn time (like the lore related art i posted like. so so long ago).

the dreams always ends up in both abstruse and arghena being consumed by a rlly bright light and them boom. ars wakes up. how odd.

timeskip to like. awhile after he got the dreams. he constantly get those dreams and then finally he got tired so he consulted to aresi abt it. "dude maybe you're going insane how abt you go on a morning stroll to keep yourself sane" she said.

and he fucking did that (idiot).

during that walk he met lucas who just got to the cantate kingdom. lucas was like, looking for a place to stay ig so ars was like, "oh you can stay at my place!!!!" like the fuckinh IDIOT HE IS. lucas agreedeither way bc he"$ greedy as hell at the time. i'm not even gonna bother fixing the typos but you get it right

anywayzzzzz after awhile ars told lucas abt that dream bc lucas was like "yo why do you look like you're gonna lose your sanity 💀💀💀💀💀" and uh yea. lucas did NOT suggested that ars should go to a therapist but instead told him that he should actually find the answer himself. and then boom. actual shit begins

they went to the astra kingdom first bc ars wanted to visit ana first. ars tells her abt the dream, and then she agrees to come with him and lucas. and then whoooooshhhhhh to modelista city they go

they nearly got killed once they stepped foot into it btw.

DON'T WORRY THO!!!!!! TROJAN IS HERE TO SAVE THE DAY!1!1!1!11!1!1

trojan then offers to take the trio to the thunderriders base and then foosh. they meet the rest of the thunderriders :)

also i never rlly mentioned who the thunderriders members are so lemme just list it here uhhhh:

- tempo

- shifta

- trojan

- galactic

- satellite

- terabyte

- glaciaxion

- pamolia

- pupa (tho at the time he didn't appeared yet lol)

- aleph-0

yeah.

anyways

moving on

tempo told ars, lucas, and ana abt their goal in defeating team destruction, and how if team destruction successfully carries out their plan to destroy the entirety of planet earth (LMAO AORRU CALLING IT PLANET EARTH IS FUNNY TO ME), then everyone is doomed (and they'll probs die obv)

i think the best way to kick off this arc was to have them be in a bit of danger facing the thunderriders' enemies; team destruction.

well. it's just their minions that came to fucking obliterate them but THATS BESIDES THE POINT. THEVPOIMT ISSSSSS. FATE CAME TO SAVE RHEM BC THEY NEARLY DIED.

FATEEEEEEEE THE FIRST BEST GIRL HERE (i still ly primeval i prommy)

also the arc rlly ends when destonio first appears. he would say smth abt lumine ig. and abt how he hates everything. based destonio moment

from here, pls keep in mind that their objectives are:

1. defeating team destruction and their plan to destroy the world, and

2. find out an answer to ars' dream

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• arc 2: oh god things get a lil tricky arc

THE ARC NAMR YOODBYE.

anyways, in this arc we get to know more abt fate. the Sillies™ find out that she's a fucking goddess and nearly everyone freaked out. ars might look like he's calm abt this when he is screaming on the inside.

^ visual presentation

moving on from that, fate was like "oh i'm just visitinf here ykyk hot girl stuff" and lucas was like "okay bozo" wow soooo misogynistic /j

suddenly some guy comes into the base. fate was shockex enough to seehim BC IT TURNS OUT IT'S DESTONIO⁉️⁉️⁉️⁉️⁉️⁉️⁉️⁉️⁉️⁉️⁉️⁉️⁉️⁉️⁉️⁉️⁉️⁉️⁉️

anyways convo between fate and destonio in a nutshell ig:

fate: what the FUCK

destonio: HELLO LUMINE.

fate: NO SHUT THE FUCK UP GET AWAY FOM ME I'? NOT LUMINE

destonio: oh. i get it now. so you decidsd to go by a new fucking identity

destonio: ok fine whatever idgaf anymore.

destonio: anyways hello everyone

ars: What The Fuck.

things went normal after that for some reason. fate, despite her horror of reuniting with destonio, decided to bother him either way. "dEsTo ThIs, DeStO tHaT, WHEN EILL SHE LESVE ME ALONE??????" my guy you fucking asked for this yk 💀

anyways after so much filler stuff we finally get to the part things get interesting. dark ars starts invading ars in his sleep instead of the reoccuring dream he always has every night. dark ars is like "hey ars can i. can i take over." and ars would be like "NO??????? LEAVE ME ALONE????"

ok ok uhhh after so much tormenting and even more filler stuff, the Sillies™ start to realize Something Is Wrong with ars. trojan decided to interrogate ars alone on that matter

Worst mistake possible.

because dark ars was annoyed enough by this to the point where he actually makes ars suffer and feel so much physical pain during the interrogation, which honestly sounds like a shitty premise, but i'm writing this on the spot, so that's why it's shitty. trojan was fucking concerned, let me tell you that.

he was all like, "ars!!!!!!!! are you fucking ok??????!!!!!!!!!!!!" and ars is like "NO I'M NOT." and then after so long dark ars finally takes over and nearly kills trojan. ouch.

lucas managed to confront dark ars abt this and was like "ars?? what the fuck man????" and dark ars was like "shut the fuck up human. i'm seriously going to kill each and everyone of you lowly idiots."

"OUCH??????" — fate, probably.

anyways they managed to defeat ars, but fate accidentally summons a portal that takes ars to a whole different place. probs far away from modelista city. "ms. fate....what the hell???" tempo asked.......this isn't a fic.

the arc ends with ars just....waking up elsewhere. as for where it is.....we'll find out in a little bit.

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• arc 3: aegle city arc

uwogh

i....originally didn't exactly want to put aegleseeker as a main character in the story, but now that i think abt it, he can be a supporting character in a sense.

anyways ars turns out to have woken up in aegle city, a city that.......is currently trapped in an eternal night.

heh. mlp moment /j

ars woke up in some house ig, so he quickly realized someone found him unconscious and took him in. turns out that someone is- OH MY GOD THE AEGLESEEKER HIMSELF??????!!!!!!

yea. it could get weirder and nonsensical from here /j again

i don't have much to say abt this arc, other than the fact that ars and aegleseeker just.....help each other in a sense ykyk? it's just them bonding and becoming besties somewhat.

at one point tessi gets mentioned. aegleseeker criticised her for making this world somewhat odd. he also criticised amazing mighty at the same time. this guy is rlly bold.

not much to say abt this arc. it's...really boring compared to the other two ones i think.

IT ACTUALLY DOESN'T END THERE THO.

ars has to get tormented by dark ars again,,,,,,,,,

after that, ars decided to distance himself from aegleseeker, which obviously made him confused. like i would be confused too if my friend started distancing themself from me and talked to me less. he just didn't know that ars is doing that for his safety.

eventually, ars ran away from aegle city, not even telling aegleseeker first. that...definitely made the latter felt a bit hurt in some way, but he's good at hiding things, so that's not obvious enough from the outside.

in the end, we shift focuses...

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• arc 4: lucid traveler arc

huh? lucid traveler? could this mean.....oh! lucas is the main focus here now!

it turns out, during ars' time in aegle city, the rest of the thunderriders were trying to find him. fate didn't talked to them that much out of guilt. destonio just went along i guess.

ig throughout this arc lucas reminisces on his time with ars. it's short, but he ended up feeling a lot of things because of his time with ars LMAO.

oh god,,,,feelings?

also at one point pamolia takes the spotlight, which definitely teases something for a future arc lol

god this is all going so slow i hate this AHAHSHDBUDDBF

in the end, one day, lucas decided to find ars all by himself when one can least expect it. after some finding and even more reminiscing, he ended up finding ars in the end. they're not in modelista city anymore btw. they're kind of nearly back in the cantate kingdom, but not exactly there either.

ars was literally trying to avoid lucas so dark ars doesn't hurt him, but lucas just kept on coming to him even more. it can't be helped when dark ars decided to take over eventually. they both then had a super intense fight (real) and despite all of dark ars' efforts, he actually lost Again. he ended up falling unconscious again, and because he felt pity for ars, lucas decided to jusf LEAVE HIM LIKR THAT WHAT THE UFCK MENA.

uh. anyways.

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• arc 5: malware arc

oh wow. it's trojan time besties

the main character here is still lucas honestly lmao, but the real main focus here is trojan

lucas got back to the thunderriders base after some time, and the first thing he saw was trojan and terabyte watching the fucking news.

yeah, apparently, the deal with ars and dark ars got a bit out of control, huh?

the whole first part of this arc is pretty normal.......until we get to the second bit. tempo and shifta start to notice something wrong with trojan. trojan starts to say...really weird stuff, like "haha guys what if someone here betrays us or something?" or "y'know, a traitor could be among us (SUS???? /J), right?" OR "[insert name of anyone near him right now], don't you think acting is a strange thing to be made into a profession?"

they both didn't exactly mind this at first, but then the questions and what-if scenarios get even weirder and that certainly made tempo a bit suspicious. so, he decided to confront trojan abt it.

tempo, being dumb for once, tried to force an answer out of trojan bc for some reason he isn't giving any answers???? dawg what are you hiding m8.

WELL.

TURNS OUT.

HE IS INDEED HIDING SOMETHING.

.......

.KDCNFK

he.

he"$.

he's a spy from team destruction.

HE HAD TO EXPLAIN THIS TO TEMPO SO THAT HE DOESN'T GET KILLED OR WHATEVER BUT BASICALLY the reason why he became a spy for team destruction was because they offered him a good enough deal and they thought he'd make a good enough spy considering how close he is with tempo, the leader.

he was like "oh yea sure i hate the mfs here anyways lmaoooo" at first but then he got attached. that's how you know things got bad for him.

tempo was a bit disappointed at first, but then he was like "alright fine." trojan was relieved that he was forgiv—

"but what about that time you asked me about something related to acting?"

shit.

he doesn't trust him yet.

and now he thinks trojan is acting all of this time when he is NOT acting.

"it's just something related to this...whole ordeal. sorry."

this is really shitty ngl /hsrs

anyways trojan felt a bit bad after that, because tempo started avoiding him a lil more, and that's when the conflict between them started.

oh dw abt them, they'll solve things once.....uhhhhhhh season 2 comes in /hj

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• arc 6: confrontation arc

WE'RE BACK WITH ARSI CANT ATE BABYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

uh. so!

ars is actually back in the cantate kingdom! with aresi and his parents! how peaceful!

......ok not rlly actually lmfao

dark ars continues to torment him every night in his sleep. it irritates ars a lot, honestly, so yikes. BUT THAT ALL CHANGED ON ONE FATE(oh hi girly /j)FUL NIGHT.

ars meets dark ars in the dream world AGAIN. BUT THIS TIME......ARS HAS HAD ENOUGH OF HIS SHIT‼️

ars and dark ars have a lil duel and shit, but then, for some reason, dark ars got defeated again for some reason. what a bitch (affectionate). the two then have a lil talk! like a heart to heart, bc that's all dark ars is capable of at this rate.

basically, their conversation was abt how dark ars is a personification of ars' self hatred and perfectionism. it's hard to explain without his backstory post bc i haven't posted his yet (i wanna finish up on the worldbuilding ones first lol), but yeah, that's the gist here.

if ars learns to accept himself more, then dark ars will disappear and stop bothering him. as a little extra, dark ars will become one with ars. ars then decided to just accept himself for who he is and then boom! he wakes up with dark ars now being an actual part of him that he'll appreciate a little more!

also he gets a new look that i actually used for his proseka stamp redraw, but i haven't made a ref sheet yet lmaoooo

ars tells his whole family abt this and they all hug and cry in joy <3333

ars then decided to get back to modelista city to find the thunderriders, lucas, ana, fate, and destonio again.

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• arc 7: OH GOD THE GANG IS BACK TOGETHER BUT. BUT LUMINE AND DESTONIO LORE ARC??????

OH GOD FINALLY THE FOCUS IS ON DESTONIO LETS FUCKING GO.

but for a small half of this arc lucars is the focus (yay)

ars gets back to the thunderriders base and literally crushes lucas and ana with the most biggest bear hug ever. what a silly guy. "if we started this together, then we might as well end this together too." he told the two of them.....haa......i love tjem....

anywayzzzzzz the focus is finally on destonio after that. basically he keeps talking about this lumine girl, and how he misses her, even if he hates to admit it sometimes. that obviously made fate a lil frowny lol

ars tries to get an answer from destonio regarding who lumine is, but destonio refuses to answer.

howeverrrr pov switch to destonio just for the sake of flashbacks happen.

throughout the arc, random flashbacks pop up here and there. uhhh the premise of each flashback goes like this:

1. flashback 1: lumine and destonio's first meeting basically. rlly basic shit.

2. flashback 2: the two of them finding out one is older than the other and vice versa when they saw each other at high school, followed by lumine teasing destonio abt his short height that fits his age. destonio Does Not like this at all.

3. flashback 3: The Besties™ hanging out at an amusement park. they got ice cream too and destonio jokes abt how lumine would be a messy eater when HE'S THE ONE WHO HAS ICE CREAM ALL OVER HIS MOUTH LMAO

4. flashback 4: this is where things get...concerning. i think. lumine rants abt how much she hates this world and how she'd rather be dead then see The Horrors™. needless to say destonio was fucking confused.

5. flashback 5: basically what one of my vent arts reference. "i wanna die, and when i die, i'm going to ascend to heaven and be god's most special angel ever! haha- eh? why are you looking at me like that, desto?"

6. flashback 6: lumine tells destonio abt an upcoming summer festival that they both should go to. this is foreshadowing Very Bad Events.

7. flashback 7 (THE LAST ONE BTW GOD BLESS): lumine and destonio are near the edge of a cliff. lumine tells destonio stuff that are muffled out for some reason (to add to that mysteriousness frfr) and then the firework show happened and then—

ah.

that's all.

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yea this is all i can write for now. i'll probs continue either today, tonight, or tmrw. depends rlly lol

uhhh if you have any questions feel free to ask me! i love getting asks :)

also this is indeed very shitty-ly put together i apologize in advance. maybe one day future me will look back at this and go "oh god this is bad i need to rewrite this" but for now! this.

#why is arthesia rambling so much...?#arthesias ocs #rgverse: story related stuff #not tagging everyone mentioned here #esit: also a piece of a.rs artwork is here so uh.#rgverse: artwork #rgverse: shitpost artwork

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batfamfucker · 2 years

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Superhero/villain roles I would love to play that I think I could somewhat pull of because of my appearance:

-Kara Zor-El (Dream role right now ngl, she is such a good character and has so much potential to be explored. This girl lost everything and everyone she loved and she is just ❤. She could be a really emotionally moving character on the big screen to portray).

-Harley Quinn (When I'm older and they may need a new one in future because who knows what DC movies they could be putting out in 10 years).

-Martha Wayne Joker (Again, older. And in Flashpoint).

-Gwen Stacy (But like, the interpretation would be close to that of her personality in the Spiderverse movies because God her characterisation there is my favourite, she slaps).

-Squirrel Girl (I don't actually know much about her but she has potential and let's just assume we have similar energies. For this one I wouldn't even need to act. Just let me loose on set and keep the camera rolling lmao).

#yes kara has a TV. and tho I love the show I would do things differently #one she's meant to be a teenager. two her whole career and stuff just copies Clark's #let her be her own person with her own interests. don't just have her be like Clark because you can't think of anything else #I do love the show but yh. the cw is not it #also. her interpretation is very different there form comics. which is completely fine because no interpretation is ever the same #but I would do a mix of the two personally. in terms of personality I mean #God she wod be such a blessing to play #me and my friends are hoping to go to comic con in May #we're going as the Rogues Gallery 😁😁😁#They already think I'm like Harley 😭🤚😂#I went as a vampire for Halloween but a few days ealier someone said they thought I should do Harley. Now I get a chance to which is cool #I'm too lazy to go back and fix the typos in these tags so suffer #tell me you're an acting student who is hoping to be an actor without telling me such *Gestures to this post*#I would also love to play the Sole Survivor if they ever did a Fallout 4 based TV show.#or anything for a Skyrim show #also Lara Croft #then again I'm 4'11" so unfortunately some of these roles might be iffy but shhh #I would also like to play a wlw lesbian pirate. because of course I would

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corrodedsteel-blog · 6 years

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while i still have many pages and tags to work on, a “proper” promo, as well as colored/anime icons, seeing that my birthday’s in 2 hours and to celebrate the beautiful latest episode i just watched where my boy is amazing so obviously the logical choice is this blog. Oh and you might know me as Rye from stainlesstetsu (probably dead blog), bet thought you seen the last of me

REBLOG / LIKE THIS POST IF YOU'RE INTERESTED IN RPIN WITH A CANON DIVERGENT/VILLAIN AU TETSUTETSU FROM MY HERO ACADEMIA. PLEASE CHECK RULES AND ABOUT BEFOREHAND.

#my hero academia rp #bnha rp #boku no hero academia rp #tetsutetsu tetsutetsu rp #canon divergent #villain au #idk s'been a while i'm not even half done with this blog but hey #yolo now regrets later #also i am aware of typo in header just too lazy to fix it #again not sure if i'll be able to make this last that long #might remake twice as well cus idk twice's always been easier #but hey #never know till you try #again

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croik · 7 years

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Chapters: 9/15 Fandom: The Evil Within (Video Game) Rating: Explicit Warnings: Violence, Rape/Non-Con, uhhhhhh vore kinda???? Summary:

Platinum Trophy, Ultra rare. Unlock conditions: Get Seabass fucked in every chapter of the game.

This chapter is a little short because we’re running low on time and also I FUCKING HATE THIS BOSS, SUCK IT BETA!!!!

#the evil within #tew fanfiction #give me my goddamn platinum #eventually I'll piece together greatest hits from my latest playthrough #literally hits #i die #a lot #also this isn't well edited #i'm sleepy #will probably go through the whole damn fic at some point and fix all the typos and shit #too lazy now

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fuck-abled-people · 3 years

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so, it's the anon who was screaming about their (now former) doctor after they marked my handicapped application as no qualifications and I have an update with no good news

I spent a lot of time writing a very long letter explaining that my disability is chronic and that I do meet the requirements, etc. etc. I didn't just apply for a handicapped parking pass, I was also asking for a letter to get out of PE. the PE letter had a lot wrong with it but the most glaring issue was she said I have never had a dislocation of subluxation, which just isn't true (she never even thought to ask if I've had one before writing this into the letter?)

I didn't even ask a whole lot of her--just that she correct the factual inaccuracies and consider that I've been prescribed a cane by my PT + had documentation from said PT that I couldn't walk more than 100 feet unassisted.

she uh, she didn't take this well. she responded with a one paragraph letter written between appointments that included 2 typos (I had spent several hours writing and modifying my letter) where she refused to change anything, not even the factually incorrect statement about never having a dislocation or subluxation. the worst part about this all is it's not even my word on the matter--there are records of the times I've visited the ER at the exact same hospital for dislocations and I know for a fact they were forwarded to her. she just didn't care and was either too lazy or too petty (or both) to fix it.

so I've fired her, and I'll be getting the parking pass from my PT (thanks to the person in the comments who suggested that) I'm quickly running out of physicians in town so I'm hoping the next one will be better than the last 4. fuck ableist doctors.

Bad doctors get fired!

Good luck on your continuing quest for quality care.

#update #answered ask #anonymous

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Hey!

It's me again, if I keep coming regularly like this, probably you're going to get sick of me, sorry for that.

It just cross my mind; Why was y/n alone when jinsol found her? What could have happened? Did the other person panicked? Or, maybe, because the person realized y/n's drunken state, he worried and went to find something to help her, but that doesn't make sense, if he wanted to make sure of y/n's well-being, he would have taken her with him to help her, then, my current question is, what happened to made y/n end up alone?

The more I try to figure things out, concludes in me with more questions than answers. Like, now I'm thinking maybe at the date, after jinsol and wooyoung lost y/n and yunho, something happened, possibly yunho told y/n what was the "embarrassing" thing she did at the fw, and discovered that it wasn't yunho the individual she kissed. Or, maybe not, and it's too early for that. The more I think, the more I end up getting entangled in speculations, I'm starting to think it wasn't san, maybe it was yeosang, now that we haven't had any appearance of his since, chapter five or so, basically, it's the same case with seonghwa, but I'm not starting to suspect of him, I think it's not time to put him in doubt, yet, maybe in the next chapters, but not now, at the same time, while I'm starting to suspect of yeosang, also I don't want to say goodbye to the assumptions I have for san, and it's because I started to think about the possibility of being yeosang without anything that could support that theory. You don't have to answer me, I'm just here putting my thoughts in words, and trying to organises them.

Not to make this any longer; 1) Could it be that the typo you mentioned on chapter ten was/is when wooyoung said; "i just don't think her yunho r good together but it's whtv". I'm not sure, I'm not good to find this kind of things, because I do typos, and other mistakes pretty often. 2) If I'm bothering you with this regular asks, please let me know, and my apologies in advanced. 3) The last one; Thank you for always being nice, and reading my silly theories 💕💕

Have a good day/night 😊

OH WOW HELLO AGAIN <3333 yes u found the typo haha 😅😅 i was too lazy to fix it tbh 🤧 AND OMG NO YOUVE NEVER BOTHERED ME 💞💞💞 TRUST ME UR THR OPPOSITE OF A BOTHER I LOVE SEEING UR ASKS 💘💘

#asks #big brain anon #smau*tt

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I don't know if this has been suggested but maybe you should get some proofreaders. The updates might be a bit slower but at least you would have less correction messages. And perhaps you might get feedback on what kind of questions people might have about the translations. I'm sure some people might be interested in helping you out with that.

I'm going to write a lot here because the short answer is no but that’s also a very reasonable suggestion and I don't want people to think I'm horribly lazy or that I don't care about having something that reads well.

I wouldn't be comfortable with proofreaders. That might sound like shallow reasoning but that's a large part of it. Part of how I have maintained so much stamina for these translations is that they are a way of relieving stress and boredom for me. To add other people to the equation would increase the stress level of the work. Now, that in itself is not a bad thing (some level of stress is good, and other perspectives can be helpful), but it's just not what I want to do with such a personal project that is entirely on my own time.

If time isn’t an issue, I am actually capable of proofreading the text myself. The thing is though that in order to do it properly, I have to sit on it for a week. This allows my mind to separate from the work, as it were, and see it with fresh eyes. Thus the mistakes don't blend into what I'm reading as much, and I can pick them out. But there is a LOT of ground to cover with Evillious (ten years worth of content and it's still not over), and I don't always have a lot of patience for spending a lot of time on things. My attention span is awful and has, I think, been getting progressively worse over the past year. Not to mention, it is not the only creative project I have going in my life (and I have to work for a living too). Thus, I view minor typoes and punctuation errors as an acceptable compromise for speed. I love Evillious but I would also love for there to eventually be a point where I'm only needing to translate it when mothy's made a new release. That day doesn't have to be soon but it would be nice if it wasn't five years from now. That's why I'm not translating mothy's non-Evillious work, even the things that take place in the Fourth Period.

It would be different if I was publishing this or being compensated in some fashion that made it more accountable--then I feel there would be more pressure to have a polished product right from the get-go. But it's not. And I don't mind fixing errors after the fact. It's just that the error messages are filling my blog to where it might soon be difficult to find other things on it.

I do know one or two people that I would trust to provide that kind of proofreading if it ever comes to it though.

#i mean who knows maybe when the suggestion is able to sink past my own stubbornness I may go ahead and do that #or find some other system where i'm posting every day but still able to properly check the posts beforehand #()anonymous

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crispyapplesareinferior · 5 years

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Fear | Dazai Osamu x Socially Anxious! Reader (Bungo Stray Dogs)

(Sorry, I'm writing about bsd quite a bit because? Imlove??? but feel free to send requests for other animes/one-shot concepts!! Also, I'm writing this in bed at midnight on my phone instead of my laptop out of laziness so apologies for typos I'm exhausted and will fix them tomorrow if there are any! ^^)

You walked into the crowded cafè, your heartbeat becoming louder with every step you took towards the line at the counter. You were out shopping for used books to read in your spare time and decided to get some coffee as a pick-me-up; unfortunately, the particular spot you had chosen to buy from was very popular, especially on weekends.

Once you got to the back of the line, you felt the blood rushing to your face and considered leaving. Two girls around your age had gotten in line behind you and were laughing loudly, blocking the exit. You decided you'd stay to get your drink rather than subject yourself to the painful situation that would inevitably ensue should you try to get out the door. It would likely go something like this: you'd turn around and say "excuse me" in your usual quiet, polite voice and, because they were busy talking with one another they wouldn't hear you. You'd then try to maneuver around them and accidentally bump into one of their shoulders, and the girls would either glare at you, laugh at you, or say something rude like "watch where you're going." Things always went this way, and while you knew it was mostly your fault for not speaking up and being assertive, part of you just wished people would be more aware and mindful of their surroundings in public.

Since you left your phone at home, you didn't have much to distract yourself with while waiting, other than the art of finding patterns in the floorboards. You liked to have something to fiddle with in situations like these so you didn't accidentally make eye contact with a stranger or engage in unnecessary interaction.

You saw the back of the person's shoes in front of you step forward out of view and you shuffled up a bit, grateful that the line was progressing. Wondering how many more orders there were before yours, you decided to glance up quickly. Instead of your gaze falling on the back of some stranger's heads, you directly met a pair of vibrant hazel eyes.

You felt more heat rise to your face and you quickly looked away, smiling amiably, glancing around aimlessly at anything but the man in front of you. You wished he would turn back around.

"Excuse me, miss! I don't mean to be too forward but you are positively angelic! I am truly blessed to be in the presence of such beauty, would you perhaps want to commit a double suicide with me?!" With this, he clasped his hands together as if in prayer and leaned closer to you, his mouth upturned into a beaming smile, awaiting a response.

"Er.. haha, what?" You laughed awkwardly, certain that your face was now the color of fresh strawberries. You'd never had such an odd encounter with someone before, and you weren't sure if this guy was crazy or...?

"Ah my apologies, I should at least introduce myself before I suggest an act of eternally-binding love. Dazai Osamu." Dazai extended his hand toward you, and you shook it hesitantly. You knew your palms were covered in cold sweat and you hated yourself for it, you couldn't help but think he probably found you unappealing now.

"Ah, my name is (y/n). Nice to me- et y- ou." You felt the air leave your throat in a distorted, constricted manner as it typically did when you felt overwhelmed. Talking to anyone, let alone a tall, handsome guy was immensely difficult. Again, you cursed yourself for being so stupid and felt a small wave of nervous laughter pass your lips.

Dazai took note of your anxious state and his brow furrowed slightly. He felt an odd desire to protect you.

"Hey, this line is taking quite a long time, hm? I know a much better place to get coffee, and it's a lot less crowded! Care to go, love?" After asking, he gestured back towards the doors, and you shook your head with a faint, jumbled 'ohmhmsurethankyou.'

Once you were back outside, you began to feel a bit better. The streets were expansive, so it was easy to avoid bumping into others. Dazai led you on a short trip to a new cafè wordlessly, and only once you finally sat down to drink your coffee did he ask you a question.

"You seemed a bit nervous back there, is everything okay?"

You finally looked up at him properly and took a second to appreciate the pleasantness of his appearance. His dark brown hair matched his eyes, which coordinated well with the tan dress coat he wore. The sun hit the jewel of his tie at such an angle that caused small, blue spots to flicker across the table as he shifted his body.

"Ah yeah, I'm alright, thank you. I just, don't do too well in crowded places, ahah.. I guess I'm pretty shy, you know.." You said this in a forced sort of tone, which Dazai must have seen through instantly given his retort.

"Hmmm.. I could be wrong, but I don't think 'shy' people have trouble breathing around strangers. Seems to me that you have social anxiety, no?" The man brought his coffee to his lips and was now watching the people across the street. You wondered if he was avoiding eye contact to make you more comfortable.

"I guess so.." you laughed nervously yet again, and went on, "I've tried all sorts of things to help it but I'm just not good with people. I don't let it prevent me from living my life or anything, so it's not that big a deal." You chewed on the side of your cheek, despising the silence.

Dazai said nothing, but he had a grin on his face and still was not looking at you.

"Funny you should ask about me though, I mean, apparently you want to kill yourself. That's a more, uh, prominent issue." You felt relieved when he finally turned his head back to you and spoke.

"Guess we're both problematic, huh? Meant to be? True love? Shall we face the despair of life together, dear (y/n)?" You laughed genuinely for the first time all day, feeling the knot of unease in your stomach begin to slowly unwind.

#bsd #bungo stray dogs #dazai #dazai osamu #fanfiction #reader insert #dazai x reader #dazaixreader #bsd x reader #socially anxious! reader #atsushi #bsd atsushi #kunikida doppo #bsd kunikida #ranposan #ranpoxreader #ranpo #edogawa ranpo #mafia dazai

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