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Girl I was literally one of your first likes but I couldn't respond right after I read it because I was running late for my lecture. But this is what I think of the latest POYT chapter

IT WAS AWESOME : 11/10

1) For the first time I did not hate Steve and was actually hurt when he hurt in the very end. It was as if I had the mark and I could literally visualize him being hurt seeing Omega being taken away just after she's aid yes to marrying him, after he told her he loved her and after she told him she was pregnant. That's absolutely devastating.

2) I STAN OMEGA. The way the girl finally let her real emotions out this time. For once her inner Omega was stiffened by her other feelings. Each time she hit him for each of his bs was so so so stress busting. Fr she was under so much pressure. I am so happy she finally put herself first and stood up for herself. The way Steve treated her was absolutely unacceptable.

3) FUCK OFF BUCKY. Tf is wrong with you?! What kind of sick person leaves a girl out in pouring rain and laughs? The audacity he had to think Omega would cheat. It doesn't only show how bad of a friend he is but also how low he thinks of Omega. You really think she would be unfaithful to Steve because he did that to her? And even if she was - trust me lad - not happening with you out of all the people. Fucking knob. I wish Steve threw him out of the house.

4) Even tho Sam was shitty throughout the series seeing him sincerely apologize was kinda nice and sweet. Made me break into a little smile between all the angst.

5) Peter, baby ik you're heart's in the right place, but respectfully ...... piss off. Not happening. Also hilarious that he's the one GRIPPING Omega and dragging her away. WHY CANT THESE BOYS LEARN A BIT ABOUT ✨️CONSENT✨️

6) Jensen getting to play was so sweet, now all he needs is some nice company who actually treats him well.

7) As a reader I want to feel like a part of the story, I DID. IT WAS FUCKING AWESOME. I felt as if I, myself was in that poytverse. I saw Omega cry and imagined Steve sketching her at night in the dim moonlight when her skin glows and she's so peaceful and finally looks like an angel cause she is one. I felt the love, I felt the rage and I felt the hurt. There was so much that I can't even begin to comment on everything. I bet I missed out a lot but I really wish I got to comment on each and every line.

It was everything I imagined and more. It was so well written, love. Honestly, it probably made my entire week and will get me through my hectic schedule. I also recommended it to my best friend and I Def think she'll love this too.

Btw, the I love you and I am pregnant at the football game after they won the game - straight out of a fairytale. It think Steve might truly deserve Omega now. And the one where he exposed his neck for her to mark - MADE ME SO WEAK.

Ok I should stop now or else I'll get carried on-

~A <3

ooof bestie so many opinions!!! firstly thank you so much for reading, ily😩💕 lemme answer them in order!

1. Poor Stevie😩 finally poured his heart out (as much as someone as heartless as him can) and it was all thrown back in his face when his omega left him. His perfect life — future wife, baby, everything — was ripped away from him and I wonder how sadistically he will react to that🤔

2. Yassss omega finally let Steve have it! I wanted to write this for all of us, bc all my readers have hated how she was treated — so i was hoping it would be super satisfying to see her voicing her frustrations!

3. Bucky is kind of delusional… I guess he just can’t seem to grasp that Steve got to omega first. He’s insulted that she’s not interested in him — bc he’s slowly becoming obsessed with her😮‍💨 her rejection insulted him so much that he not only locked her out in the rain, but he also twisted her arm painfully😭😭 the villain of poyt, and we haven’t seen the last of him!

4. Sam showing signs of maturity! But also… omega didn’t forgive him and she doesn’t have to hehe.

5. Unfff exactly!! All these boys need to chill and give omega some space to figure things out for herself!! 😤😤😤

6. Jensen played well!! I didn’t write it in the chapter, but he played well and even Steve was begrudgingly impressed. Not nearly as good as Bucky would’ve been tho.

7. Oh bestie, as a writer this is so lovely to hear!! All I wanna do is make sure my writing invokes some kind of emotion within the reader, so I’m so so so happy that you felt that when reading!! Thank you so much!💕💕😌

#a<3 anon #anon #poyt ask #poyt 4 ask

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paxywaxyy · 8 months

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miguel ohara fic time again

alright heres chapter two, sorry if the mc seems a little...bland 😭 i swear itll get better

chapter 1

word count: 1,895

Earth 928, Nueva York - August 15th, 2099, 9:57 AM

After dragging you down the never ending corridor and trying his best to ignore your constant stream of questions, Miguel tossed you into what looked like a conference room.

"Ow! What the fuck, dude!" You rub your head in pain.

He snaps his fingers at you, pointing to one of the nearby office chairs. "Sit down and shut up," he growls menacingly, pinching the bridge of his nose.

Pursing your lips in frustration, you get off the floor and sit down in the plush black leather of the office chair, tapping your finger lightly on the armrest.

"Dios, what is taking them so long…?" he mutters, not enjoying being in this room with you by himself.

Almost as if he spoke it into existence, the door suddenly opens, and a small line of spider-people begin to file through.

You turn your head, admiring the dazzling suits of all who walked through. You saw a heavily pregnant woman in a red motorcycle suit and frizzy afro, a man in a classic red and blue suit with a pastel pink robe and a red-headed child strapped to his chest, a lanky gentleman dressed in complete grayscale with a trenchcoat and fedora, a younger looking boy with spikes running down his head and a studded leather jacket, a girl in an all white, hooded suit accented with hot pink, and a strong looking man with a bluish vest on top of his suit. You gape in awe.

Miguel seems to get angrier. "What the- Jess, I thought we agreed it would just be you, Ben, and the Peters. What the hell are they doing here?" He points angrily at the punkish boy with the leather jacket and the girl in the white hooded suit. You look back and forth between them, confused.

The boy draws back, placing a hand on his chest to act offended. "Ouch."

Miguel sighs angrily. "You better have a good explanation for this." You turn to look at the adults standing separate from the younger spider-people.

The pregnant woman steps forward. "Look, at most of these meetings, it seems like some of us…" she glares at Miguel, "...are very set in our beliefs and are unwilling to see the situation from another angle." She points behind her to the teenagers. "We need some fresher perspectives."

Miguel seethes, not happy about being called out, but he controls himself, scowling at the two teens. "No. They're just going to cause a distraction."

The woman glares at him intensely. "Miguel," she warns angrily. Your eyes widen a little at her sudden change in demeanor.

He snorts in discontempt, hesitating. "...Fine. But if anything goes south, they're out of here."

The boy fist pumps in celebration, plopping down in the chair next to you. "Hell yeah! Nice to finally see you come around, lad." You look up at him, smiling at his antics.

Miguel sighs. "Ay, me voy a arrepentir de esto…" he mutters, not impressed with the teen's reaction. He strides over to chair at the head of the table, gripping the top of it angrily.

The man with the toddler and the man in grayscale sit down across from you, the other teen sitting on the other side of you, with the pregnant woman and the muscular man sitting on the end farthest from you.

"Uh…" you say in confusion, "...so, what exactly is going on?"

Miguel glances at you in annoyance. "Shut it. Let us do the talking."

The pregnant woman shoots him a disappointed glare before turning back to you. "Ignore him. Let me catch you up a little. I'm Jess."

She scans across the table. "This is Ben," she points to the muscled man next to her. "That there is Noir," she points to the grayscale man, "and that's Peter," she points at the man in the pink robe next to Noir. The toddler on his chest chirps. Jess smiles. "And that's Mayday."

"Ey, mate, ma name's Hobie," says the boy next to you, extending his hand to you. You laugh a little, shaking it. You turn to the girl on your other side. She smiles softly. "Hi, I'm Gwen."

You return the smile, turning to look back at Jess as she nods. "And I assume you already know Miguel."

Miguel grumbles in response. Jess scowls, turning back to you. "Let's cut to the chase. Why don't you tell us how you got here?"

Your smile fades into a blank expression. "Well, I was trying to get away from that weird glitchy thing. I saw Miguel going into some portal thing, so I jumped through it."

A few of them start to murmur softly. "You escaped from your collapsin' universe? That's mental, dude," Hobie says. He daps you up. You smile at him.

"Don't encourage her, Hobie," Miguel snarls. The others glare at him.

Jess only nods at your story. "Well, what should we do with you? You…can't exactly stay here. I'm sorry to say, but there are certain things that us spider-people have to keep hidden from humans."

Peter looks at her strangely. "Oh, come on guys. Where else is she supposed to go?" He holds his child tightly so she won't crawl across the table.

Jess shakes her head. "To be honest, I don't know. It's not like we have a place she can stay here at the society. You know it's strictly spider business here." Your face falls a little.

"Well, she has to go somewhere," says Gwen. Noir nods. "We have to find her some place to stay. It's our duty as Spider Men to help people."

"And it's not like she can just go back to her universe. She has to stay in an alternate one," Peter responds. You wince a little at his words as it fully hits you that you'll never be able to go home again.

"I don't know about the rest of you, but I wouldn't trust myself just dumping her in some random universe to fend for herself," Jess says coldly.

"No, no, that's not what I was suggesting at all. But you're right. Something else has to be done," says Peter.

"Why don't she just stay wit one o' us?" Hobie asks nonchalantly. Your eyes light up a little.

Miguel sneers at him, but the others start to nod a little. "Actually, that's not a bad idea," Peter tells him. You start to get excited. You'd be happy to stay with any of them. They all seems so cool.

"Well, she can't stay with me," Ben pipes up. "My place needs space for all my weights." He flexes his bicep, and a few of them roll their eyes.

"I don't think MJ would be too happy about having to make space in our house for an extra person," Peter tells you sadly. Gwen nods. "Yeah, I wish I could help too, but my dad would kill me."

Jess looks at Hobie. "Hobie, you suggested this. What about you?"

He shakes his head sadly. "Ain"t got no mo' space at me flat, m'afraid." You frown. You were sad to hear that, as you liked Hobie.

Jess looks at you, pity in her eyes. "I'm so sorry, I don't have any space either." Your sadness grows. You liked Jess too.

Noir lowers his head. "I'd be happy to, but…I don't think it would be safe for you. There's mob bosses constantly shooting around in the streets back in my universe." Your eyes widen scaredly, and Peter elbows Noir.

Gwen looks around the table. "Well, who else is left?" Everyone thinks for a moment. Then all eyes turn to Miguel, who has been strangely quiet.

Miguel glances up, confusion written across his face, before he realizes what's happening. He scowls. "No. Absolutely not."

Jess starts to get angry. "What do you mean no? She has nowhere else to go. We can't just dump her anywhere. And I wouldn't trust anyone else with her, other than one of us."

Miguel's anger also begins to grow. "I said no. It's not happening." You frown a little. You don't exactly want to stay with Miguel, but you don't have any other option.

Everyone groans. "Miguel, don't be an asshole! No one else can take her," Peter snaps, covering his daughter's ears.

Hobie smirks mischievously. "And we all know you've got plenty o' space that mansion o' yours, big man."

Miguel growls at him. "I don't have a mansion. And I'm not taking her."

Jess stands up angrily. "Why not? What reason could you possibly have?"

Miguel stays silent. Clearly he can take you with him, he just doesn't want to. Why? You have no idea.

Jess stomps over to him, even angrier now. "So you don't even have a good reason? You're just an asshole that only cares about himself?" Everyone stares at the two of them. They've never seen Jess this mad, and they don't know how to react.

Miguel snorts, standing up. "I am not having this conversation right now."

Jess crosses her arms. "Fine. You want me to leave you alone? You know what you have to do."

Miguel seethes. He contemplates for a moment before lowering his head. "...I'll take her with me," he says softly.

Jess nods. "Good. Glad we settled that." The two of them sit back down.

Miguel grips the side of the table. "You're all dismissed."

The spider-people stand, shuffling out of the room. "See ya, mate," Hobie says, fist bumping you. You smile. Gwen smiles at you. "Good luck." They all leave, the door clicking shut behind them.

As soon as they're all gone, Miguel picks up the nearest office chair, throwing it out the window. You recoil at his sudden rage.

He exhales sharply. "Why did I have to get stuck with you…" He walks toward the door, not looking at you. He throws it open, standing in the open space. "Come on," he says, still not looking at you. He walks out into the corridor. You swiftly get out of your chair, following him.

After a moment you catch up to him, walking next to him. You swallow the lump in your throat, nervous. "Wh-where are we going…?" He keeps his eyes ahead. "Just follow me," he grumbles, speeding up.

Your face goes red. You don't know why he's acting like this, but you don't like it. You follow him out of the headquarters and into…a parking lot?

He walks up to a red pickup truck, pressing the unlock button on the key fob.

You look on in curiosity. "Huh, I didn't think Spider Man had a car," you say, smirking.

He glances over his shoulder at you. "Didn't think you wanted to be left here to fend for yourself, yet here we are."

You shrug. "Alright, that's fair," you tell him, climbing into the vehicle. Despite his seemingly unmotivated hatred for you, the anger rolling off of him in waves, he still holds the door open for you.

He gets in, starting up the truck. "Just be quiet on the way there," he hisses at you. You turn to look at him. "Are you taking me to your house?" Miguel glares at you. "Apartment." You take that as a yes.

He drives out of the parking lot, and into the gorgeous city of Nueva York.

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phew, hope yall liked it 🙌

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