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#toralei fanfic
the-lavender-creator · 8 months
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OKAY! I’m sleepy and tried as fuck, it’s 1 am and I feel like I’m about to slip off into the best damn sleep ever. But for some damn reason I decided NOW was the very best time for me to come and rant my heart out about your fic.
forgive me. This might be long.
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Sorry. Had to get that out of me. It’s my knee jerk reaction to before, during, and after reading you fic.
now onto the- AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHGHHHHHHHHHHHHH-
oh! Guess I had a little more in me! Ok now I seem- AGHHHH- to be- AGHHU- a little - Hxjdsisjsi- better???
BUT GOSH ALL THE THUNDER ANGST IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL AND I LOVED IT AND MY POOR LITTLE PATHETIC WET CAT LITERALLY
ok on to the specifics!!
first of all. I like how you make this a whole ass overall arc about Clawdeen and Toralei getting together, Toralei dealing with her plan and her feelings. And also hee super horrible mom RATerina! While also sprinkling in some absolutely god damn DELECTABLE thunder angst scenes. Oh I ate those up so ravishingly. They were so nice and angst and the most tasty words alive!
But yeah. The opening contrast of how Lighting is a norm to Monsters. And lots of times needed and wanted, compared to Thunder. Which is something Toralei fears more than anything. It’s just such a nice highlight. Cause really. Just like Cleo had her fear of the dark. It’s an unusual fear for monsters. These are stuff Humans are afraid of. And that’s probably something that gets under Toralei’s skin as well. Because Monsters don’t fear the dark or storms. They thrive in it. So when she, a definite monster, has this fear of a species she’s been trained to despise, it’s probably just this extra level of overwhelming humiliation and shame. And it really sets the tone nicely opening up!
I loved the first flashback, how it really shows the early signs of brainwashing and toxic ideologies her Mom had ingrained into her. Toralei loves power and thrives on it. It’s an unknowing coping mechanism. But at a young age she isn’t shown that it’s okay not to be in charge, and that others can be royalty too. Thag others can be in charge as well. That she’s not better than others. She was never taught that and it’s sad to read it through a child’s eyes.
and It’s so weird to see the dynamic Toralei and Lagooona have. Not friends. And more like. Hostages. Lagoona is somewhat of a hostage in her own room. Having her most personal thing used against her- where have we seen this before OH YEAH! FROM Raterina!!!
to think Toralei has inherited some of her mothers abusive traits is terrifying. For she truly is just an abused little girl who never got the love she deserved.
And oh. Oh my dear little heart. How it shriveled at reading the part where her mom yells and rants at her for hours until she is sobbing and crying hysterically for hours on end. My poor sweet girl who just wanted a hug got nothing but hate instead.
and OH. my head as poor little Toralei who wanted to be all grown up. Left alone in the house and realizing she left her guitar outside. Poor little kitten clinging to a branch and crying for all she’s worth as she thinks she’s gonna die. And what’s worse is she’d rather risk that imminent death and fear instead of going inside and risking her mothers wrath. god that sounds like a trauma inducing fear if I’d heard of any.
Ooooo the first Clawdeen and Toralei scene. Very interesting. Tantalizing. Fun how Toralei finds her adorable but excuses it like everyone does. It’s odd to see her try and manipulate her. But also it’s just. So easy to see at the same time. Hee wirh her British accent and feline smirk. Sharp claws and predatory eyes. So complex
Damn Raterina really was pulling the strings to Toraleis entire childhood. It’s gross in a way. Like she’s nothing but a puppet to her. A plaything she can control what happens too.
Also odd. Toralei says she doesn’t actually have anything against Lagoona. But it’s rather the fate of species. Is this something her mother has said? Or something that people assume from her that she eventually went ‘Oh, uh. Guess I have to hate her then?’ Too.
OH MY BABY. MY SWEET SWEET GIRL. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH DONT CRY AND SHUFFER AND FUEBUFSNAIFHSUS (I love it. Hurt me more!)
Lol. Not her having a journal that said ‘diary’ in giant fancy letters that she can’t find a way to cover up. That’s such a mood. Why do companies even put diary on the front. It’s obviously embarrassing.
still rolling in my bed over the thunder angst. Poor kitty huddled up in a ball and crying and shaking and-
ok. I’m really trying not to loose myself in the angst here!
”that’s insensitive to mer-folk”
ok BESTIE THAT WAS ACTUALLY SO FUCKING FUNNY. idk y but I found that so hilarious.
Toralei giving draculaura a compliment then immediately insulting her lack of appreciation for the compliment is such a mood and a her thing idk what to do.
LOL ‘how to lure in a wolf and date her’. Throw the saddest fucking party in existence and fully lean into how much of a pathetic wet cat I am, and desperately try to ignore how deeply this all plays into my everlasting trauma from my mother!!!!
No but Raterina never celebrating Toraleis birthday 😩
Toralei the DRAMA. the one woman act. Turning up the pathetic wet cat levels to extreme today.
Aww little Frankie just wants to help but was definitely shoved into high school way before they were ready and honestly that’s so much trauma in itself cause they’re parents literally created them and the first thing they do is send them away to literally live out their life. Like- um. WHAT. The abandonment and rejection they must subtly feel. Like. Wow.
uh anyway this is about toralei.
Toralei. The drama. Who decides to have along ass gay fake romance with Clawdeen to get the necklace instead of just snatching it from her while she sleeps is such a gay mood I can’t.
it’s like ‘On one hand. I could sneak into her room and jsur steal it away? I’m a werecat I’m agile and silent! No one would hear or see me. It’s foolproof. And I have the necklace to give to my mom and win her love!….. OR I COULD DATE CLAWDEEN AND HAVE A SLOWBURN GAY ROMANCE AND BE GAY AND POSTPONE THE MISSION AND MAKE IT TAKE AS LONG AS FUCKING POSSIBLE!
oooo I’ll go with the second one! Definitely a smart decision!
AND NO POOR BABY NOT MORE PAIN AND ANGST AND YES I FUCKING LOVE IT ITS SO DELICIOUS AND JUICY AND RAW AND ANGSTY AND FONDUFNSUD CLAWDEEN IMMEDIATELY HUGGING HER AND TELLING HER ITS GONNA BE OK AND MY HEART IS BLEEDING EVERYWHERE
NO MORE TRAUMA WITH RATERINA. RHAT BITCH.
KSKSKDKS OOOOOO TORALEI YOU GAYYYY. WE ALL SEEEE ITT.
the vulnerability of fears 🥹. The little heart to heart is so precious. The exact moment toralei kinda screws up her plan by falling in love with Clawdeen
DAMN MEOWLODY AND PURRSEPHONY SO SUPPORTIVE AND MEAN AND BRUTAL AT RHE SAME TIME. like on one hand they’re being good people. But on the other GUYS TORALEI IS JUST A BAY GAY. A PATHETIC WET CAT. SHE DOESTN KNOW ANY BETTER BE KIND TO HER.
THE CONFESSION. BE STILL MY HEART.
AND YEAH THEIR ALL GAY AND HAPPY AND-
OH FUCK HERE COMES RATERINA. TIME FOR MORE AMAZING ANGST
NOOO NOT TORALEI IMMEDIATELY SHIFTING TO THE MEAN COLD TRAUMA PERSONA SHES BESN FORCED TO BE BY HER SUPER MEAN MOTHER.
oh man how angry I felt when Raterina greeted her by roughly grabbing her chin and telling her she looked like shit basically. Like THE ANGER
nooo more trauma. Her mom sucks ass.
Aw Toralei just wants to protect Clawdeen .
NO. NOT A THUNDERSTORM. NOT AT THE WORST POSSIBLE TIMING SHOWINB THE MOST HUMILIATING VULNERABILITY IN FRONT OF SOMEONE WHO WILL EXPLOIT IT MERCILESSLY AND MAKE THEM FEEL PATHETIC ABOUT IT! (Not me reacting as if I didn’t prompt that exact thing)
NOOOOO SHUT UP RATERINA.
YEAH GET OVER THEIR AND DEFEND YOUR GIRLFRIEND
SOMEONE GIVE TORALEI A FUCKING HUG
WHOOOOO LETS GO DRACULAURA.
LETS GO BLOODGOOD. SLAY BITCH
YES KICK HER ASS OUT!
Love how Frankie and Draculaura know to leave them alone. Almost as if they know Toralei showing this much vulnerability must already be mortifying for her. Especially with her mom calling her pathetic for it.
HDBSUDNS CLAWDEEN BEING SO SWEET AND TORALEI ADMITTING HER ORIGINAL INTENTIONS THROUGH THE TEARS AND FEAR. THIS WAS ACTUALLY SUCH AN EMOTIONAL RAW SCENE AND PROBABLY MY FAVORITE ONE BESIDES THE RATERINA THUNFER CONFRONTATION.
legitimately I love how she admits it. Cause she doesn’t want to keep anything away from her now. Cause she loves her so much and she’s getting love and comfort she’s so unfamiliar with and her mom truly just sucks ass and gosh. And how Clawdeen knew but had so much faith in her. Probably the first one to every trust and have faith in her. Loving her nevertheless. Finding the good in her.
YES. THEM ENDING WITH SNUGGLES AND COMFORT THROUGH THE STORM. THIS IS FUCKING AMAZING!
I LOVED THIS SO MUCH LAVANDER. THANK YIU SO GOD DAMN MCUH FOR WRITING THIS THIS IS TRULY A WORK OF ART. THIS REVIEW LITERALLY TOOK ME AN HOUR IT IS NOW TWO AM IM TIRED AS SHIT. BUT I HOPE YOU LIKED THIS. IM SO SORRY ITS SO LONG!
NUHBGYVFT AND THE WINNER FOR THE LONGEST NON-BEE MOVIE ASK EVER SENT GOES TO-
But also. AHhhhhhh thank you so much this is like legit my favorite ask ever, I love when people give me their scene-by-scene thoughts on my fics, tysm <3
For anyone who hasn't read it, the fic in question is There's Always a Storm!
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teamghoulstudiosmx · 5 months
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Two can play that game - Monster high GX
panel inspired by the artist randowis
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There are currently 825 fics on fanfiction.net for Monster High. Of these, 652 fics are tagged with at least one MH character (the others not being tagged at all or only being tagged OC).
Shown above are the Top 15 tagged Monster High characters!
Below are all the Monster High characters that have been tagged in fics on fanfiction.net in order of how much they are tagged:
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vivi-designs · 2 months
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If you were to make like an MH reboot what would it be? Do you have any headcannons for Monster High?
Sorry for the absolute delay of this response but here it is !!!
Full and complete list, my Pinterest board is also on there.
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I hope you ! If there are any additional questions, please ask, id love to talk about it, however ever after high is my true love so im not aaaas invested in MH as I am with EAH, so I'm not as caught up on everything.
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rarepairqueenmochi · 8 months
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Fic Circulation Time!
Out of ideas for the time being, so I thought I'd reshare some of my fics!
All of these are exclusively EAH ships!
A cute Toradeen G1 fic I did, which seems kinda popular rn so-
Someone say MH and EAH crossover fic?
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newwwwusername · 5 months
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Fic title : It Came Out of Nowhere! (How am I Supposed to Be Okay???)
@hurtcember 2023 prompt : Astraphobia
Rating : Teen & Up Audiences
Fandom : Monster High (Live Action Movies)
Pairing : Frankie & Toralei
Additional tags : Astraphobia, Toralei Stripe Has Astraphobia, Good Friend Frankie Stein, Toralei Stripe Needs a Hug, Anxiety, Anxiety Attacks, Panic Attacks, Phobias, Hurt/Comfort, Friendship, Embarrassment, Stimming, Autistic Frankie Stein, Canon Non-Binary Character
Word count : 998
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pens-and-gems · 1 year
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Calling All Monster High & Hairspray Fans~
I’d recently just revived my old fanfic called “Scarespray” back from 2014 on Fanfiction.net! I’d recently just added a fifth chapter (technically sixth if you count the casting list). 
Please, if you enjoy both Monster High and Hairspray both, please give this fanfic a go! It’s even on my AO3 as well! And yes, I will be posting the fifth chapter on there as well!
I’m really excited to be writing this fanfic again and I hope you all will enjoy it!
Link to the chapter is right here
Link to the full story
Please and Thank you!
Don’t forget to like, comment, and fave! Reblogs are acceptable too!
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P.S. If anyone is wondering why Frankie goes by feminine pronouns, as mentioned before, this fic was written back in 2014 when Frankie was a cis female. Please do not assume that I’m transphobic because I had Frankie use she/her pronouns. Again, this was written back during Generation 1. I LOVE Non-Binary Frankie, but this was when they were a cis female. Okay? ^^ 
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obsessedwithtodoroki · 4 months
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Summery:
Clawdeen had what she thought was the perfect boyfriend, everything she read and watched growing up told her as much, but why does she get butterflies around Torali and not him? What is he going to say when she finally tells him, not wanting to lead him on?
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So I have decided to try to write a sort of rewrite of a G1 monster high fic with G3 stuff in mind.
So in the original version of course Toralei was a 'street cat' and thus 98% of her issues revolved around that.
Of course in G3 we know she has at least a mother and an aunt/uncle.
So not sure how I'm gonna blend those two story lines together.
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belfryprepz · 2 years
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Wrote the fic 🤡
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feline17ff · 1 year
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Hey! Evil pal! You write fanfic? Tell me more. *leans closer in attentive interest*
Yeah! 🤩
But limited
My AO3 account is feline17ff
I've mostly posted Ever After High —some of them co-written! 🤩
My longest and favorite is my WIP of Sparrow Hood's diary — I've posted like 12 chapters but I've written like 30
I just keep forgetting to post plus I'm also stuck on the next 13th chapter. I keep meaning to complete it but I keep forgetting
I was/am really excited for this fic, even got a tag for it #feline writes sparrows diary
But Tumblr search function is broken and this link may or may not work, and might not even be in chronological order :/
I've also written but never completed and posted some Monster High fics — but I do want to! Particularly because I wrote some hilarious lines for Holt Hyde that send me every time XD
"What are you ghouls staring at? There's plenty of the Holtster to go around."
"You're right, Frankie Fine. Mommy Hyde did say my transformation process would change at least once more before I became a full fledged manster."
Very soon, the machine stopped. The electricity sizzled down. Frankie and Toralei stood their ground. Toralei's music was still playing. From the smoke stood up Holt Hyde, but without his signature YEAHH for perhaps the first time. 
"Nothing, Fire Cat, just wanted to say that your ride is smokin'. I love flames, but your ride is the coolest iceberg in this Sahara."
"Dang girl, I may be the one with fire hair but your ride is sssmokin."
"I may like hot rod flames but your wheels are the coolest iceberg in this Sahara."
He's just so silly 🤣🤣🤣
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stupidemigod · 4 months
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just posted fresh toradeen fanfiction!
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teamghoulstudiosmx · 1 month
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Here, Some Choccy Milk, Because Your Epic
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mr-walkingrainbow · 2 months
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TORALEI ANGST LORE DROP???
TORALEIS FINALLY IN FUCKING THERAPY WAHOOOOOO!
NOOOOO ITS FAMILY THERAPY MEANING SHE HAS TO SEE HER FUCKING NIGHTMARE OF AN ABUSIVE ASS MOTHER. IT ALSO PROBABLY MEANS SHES GETTING RETRAUMATIZED NEARLY EVERY FUCKING TIME
COME ON CLAWDEEN WHY ARENT YOU LOVING YOUR GIRLFRIEND?!?!
THE REFORM CENTER FOR BEASTIE BADDIES?!! THE FUCK DID THEY JUST COMBINE JAIL. A MENTAL HOSPITAL. ALCOHOL ANONYMOUS AND CHILD PROTECTIVE SERVICES ALL INTO ONE ?!
ALSO? CATARINAS ALIVE? THATS UH? Not bad I guess? This is literally the first confirmation we’ve gotten that she survived the finale. So uh. That’s good I guess. Somewhat. HAHA ALOWS ME TO TORTURE TORALEI MORE IN FANFICS HAHAHAHAHAH!
I’m literally in love with this so fucking much. But really. Come on. The society could do better. Get toralei in individualized therapy. Catarina should be in rehab WAY longer then she’s been before they even initiate such type of conjoined therapy. Operating under basic guidelines. They can allow supervised visits between mother and daughter but they shouldn’t be in something like therapy till the mom’s somewhat proven/served time that allows them to see she’s headed on the right path. Not to mention they’d BOTH be in individualized therapy as well. It wouldn’t just be family therapy like this. Also. I love that Toralei got to stay at the Wolfs house. But??? What the fuck was CPS thinking? They’d never put a child with a random family who has no foster care license when she has ALIVE AND WELCOMING NEXT OF KIN. Toralei literally could have stayed with the weretwins and her aunt/Uncle. Like??? The cousins ADORE her! (Too a concerning agree. Don’t get me wrong I love their relationship. But Persephones treating dissapointing toralei like it’s life or death. I could somewhat understand that panic for a parent. But it’s somewhat unhealthy for a cousin. Although it’s not completely odd. I know I’d be destroyed if I ever dissapointed my older cousin who I look up too. I feel like it’s somewhat like that?)
Anywho. I LOVE how supportive Meowlody and Pursephony are with toralei and family therapy. They don’t judge her. And they don’t judge their aunt. Just tell her to say hi for them. They offer unwavering support and with how much Toraleis currently getting I’d say it’s dearly needed.
also. Not related but I LOVE Meowlody having adhd. I have adhd and I connected with her SO FUCKING MUCH in this episode. Jsut in this clip. Her volume control and excitement about the ‘wrong things’ just is so relatable. Her being confident but also somewhat not confident about a list of tasks. Practically begging her sister to realize she really did listen but it’s so hard to remember and things get confused and to show that we DO have good memory! We just see it in different ways! God. Amazing. My only thing is I wish she would have audibly confirmed it. Like we know they had Twyla verbally say she’s autistic. Why couldn’t they do that for adhd? It’s odd but I’ve never actually seen it verbally stated in tv before.
anywho uh- I’m gonna be writing so much fucking toralei angst so yall should be on the lookout!
AND YO THAT OPERETTA GENERATION ONE REFERENCE WAS UNHINGED I LOVE IT
And yo was that a hint of FUCKING YARN SALT AKA MEOWLODY X BARKIMEDES I SAW???
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sparklyballoonballoon · 6 months
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Would anyone want to make a Clawdeen x Toralei song fic of “Something about the Sunshine” from the Disney movie “Starstrucked” or make a parody song of them singing it called “Something about the Moonlight”, or maybe make an AI cover song or a aniamtion/animatic?
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=6BLoKR-wjoU
After watching the second Monster High movie, Monster High 2, I remembered Toralei saying to Clawdeen, “We're werecreatures, Wolf. We share the moon.”
This got me also remembering an old Disney movie that had a song called “Something About Sunshine”. I listened to the song and the chorus went something like,
“There's something about the sunshine, baby
I'm seeing you in a whole new light
L.A.'s a breeze with the palm trees swaying
Oh, it's alright”
What if there was a parody song of it that went like
“There's something about the moonlight, baby
I'm seeing you in a whole new light
Monsterdom’s a breeze with the ghost trees swaying
Oh, it's alright”
You guys would probably come up with better lyrics than me but I’m trying to come up with something that is a reference to how they’re both were creatures and share the same moon, and how they’re seeing each other in an different light and growing closer the more time they spend together and getting to know each other better. Imagine this song being like an anthem to the Toralei x Clawdeen ship.
Imagine a fanfic or an animation or animatic of it. Clawdeen and Toralei seeing each other in a different light and becoming closer, hanging out and doing stuff together in a montage. It would probably work well in a beach setting.
Maybe like in Monster High 3, if Toralei does play a role in the trilogy maybe the location they go to has a beach. Though, there probably won’t be.
Maybe like a beach episode in the TV series
Would anyone attempt to make a song fanfic of the song?
Or maybe an animatic or animation?
Make an ai cover of the characters singing it?
Maybe an actual parody song with people singing it in their voices?
Anyways what are your thoughts? Lemme know in the comments below of if you want this to happen or if you’d do it. If any of you guys do happen to do it, send me a link of it.
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rarepairqueenmochi · 2 months
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Got this idea and had to write it, it was too silly to push aside xD
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