#5/10 overall

[ad-reviewer]

this doctor's hand is the size of a finger

thanks for the ask @livingloops!

clarity: 7/10 this is pretty obviously an ad for clickbait about skincare, although the specific remedy is of course not mentioned.

format: 3/10 the text is repeated twice and the parenthetical inside the quotation is odd. the image may be bizarrely eye-catching, but that doesn't really make up for it.

targeting: N/A (this ad was not displayed to me)

verdict: 5/10 the ad is upfront, but repeats things strangely

weirdness: 7/10 the thing being advertised isn't too weird, but the picture is..... so strange.

#tumblr ad review #ad review #7/10 weirdness #5/10 overall #livingloops #ask

[blobbei-art]

Rain World really went off with their atmosphere but the Iterator puppets aren’t quite my taste in design so I tried giving Five Pebbles and Moon a little makeover

#rain world #rainworld #five pebbles #looks to the moon #iterator #fanart #my art #someone please appreciate that the dots on his face are overall 5 #and also that moon has a cooler moon on her head #i just wanted to see if i can get pebbles' design to work #i dont think theres anything wrong with his canon design the devs only have like 10 pixels to work with #but i did wanna challenge myself to see if i could make him work better aesthetically #also literally where the fuck do people get his eye dots from i see it in drawings all the time but i have NOT seen it yet in game #but i did work with it i guess bc the iterators all seem to have symbols

[yardsards]

clint mcelroy creating a dnd character: oh yeah, this bad boy can fit so much simple zest for life in him

#eliot posts #taz #the adventure zone #merle highchurch #zoox anthellae #ive not listened to graduation yet (and idk if i ever will) so idk if this applies to argo or not #i remember so little of amnesty and am only 10 eps into steeplechase so i can't speak for the non dnd campaigns either #it's funny how a lot of people's ttrpg characters often have common themes in them #me and my friend john from our irl dnd group were talking about that and it's like #alicia plays the most Friend Shaped girls imaginable. caleb's Cause Problems On Purpose. julia's are sassy and tend to do their own thing #john's are edgy in theory but extremely friend shaped and caring in practice. and i tend to play The Mom Friend. #not ALWAYS but pretty often. and basically always they're just really looking for human connection (whether they know/accept it or not) #even my goddamned PISS WIZARD is quickly careening towards mom friend territory??? somehow??? #very few people tolerate him so he's protective of those who do. even if it's mostly just a coworkers situation in the party #and most of the party is So Fucking Stupid #it's a very hilarious party composition overall. just 5 guys all thinking ''wow. what a bunch of freaks. good thing i'm normal :)'' #and the only one who is REMOTELY accurate in that assessment is the cleric whose catchphrase has quickly become #''hey. don't look at me. i just work with them.''

[blamemma]

candid 😊

cw: somnophilia, non-con/dub-con :)

Max pads down the hallway, socked feet hitting the cool wood, heading towards Daniel's office.

"Daniel, do you maybe know which suitcase I packed my toothbrush charger in?" Max asks, entering Daniel's small office space. It's a dark room, Corey apparently told Daniel that would be good for when he was editing his photos. A few of Daniel's less important trophies adorn the walls, photo albums are stacked onto shelves that Max takes down regularly to fawn through, rolls of film and cameras that Max isn't allowed to touch are off to the side, resting on a chest of drawers.

Daniel leaps forward in his chair as Max enters, the desktop screen in front of him going black, before turning sheepishly around to look at Max, eyes wide.

"What were you doing?" Max laughs, walking closer to Daniel.

"Nothing- just catching up on emails." Daniel fumbles out, avoiding eye contact, choosing instead to pick up Max's hand from where he's stood in front of him, and playing with the ring on his finger.

"That is a lie," Max chides. "If you were watching porn you do not have to be ashamed." Max chooses to sometimes, the ring on his finger proof that Daniel would never get bored of him, but they both like to try new things, and Max likes to do the research. He lets himself get all worked up, doesn't touch himself, just waits, achingly hard, until Daniel comes home and falls to his knees in front of him. Takes care of him.

"No--" Daniel rebuts quickly. "Just e-mails. Photos. Ya' know. After holiday stuff."

"You were looking through the holiday photos?" Max asks. He immediately sits himself down in Daniel's lap, swinging them back around towards the computer. "We can look through them together. Then choose the best ones of course for your instagram." Daniel's hand comes around Max's waist, pulling him tight to Daniel's chest and Max can feel the beat of his heart, fast--erratic.

Max pushes the small button on the side of the computer and the screen lights up again--it's him. Asleep. In the hammock tied under a palm tree. Sun falling over his face, his hair a golden blonde in this lighting, his mouth slightly wide. Max shuffles in Daniel's lap, getting more comfortable. He surprisingly doesn't hate the photo, more surprised that Daniel would hide it from him. He pulls the mouse towards him, and clicks onto the next one.

It's him, again. On the queen sized bed. Asleep on his front. His knee bent upwards, a thin sheet draped across his lower half, leaving Max with only a tiny bit of decency. It must of been a late afternoon nap, as the room is lit up in warm amber hues. Max can feel himself going red all over, can feel Daniel barely breathing below him. Seeing himself so at peace, rested, he looks calm, serene. He's never seen himself like this.

He reaches forward for the mouse again, grasping it, but Daniel's hand rests on his, forceful.

"Don't," Daniel whines, resting his forehead onto Max's shoulder at the same time. Max doesn't listen, Daniel's begging only making him want to see more.

The next photo--Max takes a sharp inhale. Daniel grips him tighter to him, fingers pressing into Max's waist.

Max is in the same position as before, but this time, the white sheet has been removed. The photos in portrait, and at the bottom, the head of Daniel's dick is in view, cum pooling at the tip. Max's mouth waters. Daniel's other hand, the one not holding the camera, the one with the rose tattoo Max loves to bite down on when they have to be quiet, is cupping Max's ass, holding it. Max's back and hole is covered in cum--Daniel's cum-- white streaks intermixed with the freckles littering Max's back. It's quiet between them, the only sound filling the office being them both breathing heavily.

"Daniel--" Max whispers.

"I'm so sorry baby," Daniel timidly says, kissing Max's neck. "You're such a deep sleeper. You look so relaxed, calm, rested. It just does something to me. You looking so looked after. I can't help myself sometimes. Sorry. I'll stop. Sorry."

Max twists in Daniel's lap, turns away from the photo he can't stop looking at, blinks finally, holds Daniel's cheek in his hand, rubs his thumb in circles across it, through the days old stubble he loves to feel against him.

"You have done this before?" He asks. Daniel blinks slowly, looks down, and then back up, locking eyes with Max, smiling slightly.

"Got a whole album baby." Daniel says, his tone sounding a mix of jokey and nervous. Max can feel his shorts getting tighter, the idea that Daniel jerks off over him whilst he's sleeping, that he can't wait for Max to wake up, that there are tens of, hundreds maybe, photos of him covered in Daniel's cum that he's unaware of.

"Show me," Max demands, and it clicks for Daniel then. Max isn't disgusted by this. Max is just as turned on as he gets. "Although I do not think we can approve these for your Instagram." Max adds.

Daniel takes the mouse from under Max's hand, his other hand now moving away from his waist, travelling lower to cup him, and navigates to a folder multiple clicks away, types in the password one-handed, rubbing Max through the thin material of his shorts.

#lolllllllll im gunna log off for 3-5 business days sorry #doesn't actually include the word but u get the idea probably #also this is way longer than 10 sentences sorry #dr #mv #fic rec #<- i need to find a new tag for this i am not reccing my own fic its just my overall fic tag #max/daniel #i cant put this in the m*xiel tag #also unedited idc if i read this through im going to delete it

[hotasfahrenheit]

hyperfixated 2023 kpop tracks

[Monsta X - Beautiful Liar]

[NCT U - PADO]

[Seventeen - Super]

[NCT Dream - Broken Melodies]

[NCT 127 - Fact Check]

[Shaun x Jeff Satur - Steal The Show]

[Ateez - Bouncy]

[Pentagon - PADO (wave to me)]

[Blitzers - Macarena]

[EVNNE - Trouble]

[ONEWE - Gravity]

[ZEROBASEONE - In Bloom]

[DPR Live - Hula Hoops (ft. Beenzino and Hwasa)]

[DPR Ian - Ballroom Extravaganza]

[KARD - Icky]

#here's fifteen oops #i was like “i'll do top 5... no 10.... noooo 15” #sorry my top songs are just too good what can i say #i thought about doing 20 but that would have actually been too much #these are the top 15 from my spotify wrapped #there's things i would have expected to be here that weren't but overall i'm unsurprised #is hula hoops in the top 15 because i play it and sing “hula Poops” to my dog Poops regularly? maybe (yes) #finally making some gifs after what feels like so long #i am still sick but i wanted this done for new years eve because i'm a nerd #monsta x #nct u #nct dream #seventeen #nct 127 #jeff satur #shaun 숀 #ateez #pentagon #blitzers #evnne #onewe #zerobaseone #dpr live #dpr ian #kard #kpop #mia gifs things #mia gifs kpop things #pado supremacy #top kpop 2023

[pyxaperson]

now that i have watched the Fionna and Cake finale, i feel like my belief is strengthened that it should've more episodes than 10. don't get me wrong, i am quite satisfied with how it ended (especially with Simon and Fionna's arcs) but i feel that it's whole delivery is a bit rushed. i think the series would have benefited from less focus on the multiverse concept and more on the main cast's struggles and relationships which could have been solved if they threw in a bit more episodes to slow down the pacing a bit. it should of had like 15 episodes at least.

#fionna and cake spoilers #fionna and cake #adventure time #at #thats my opinion at least #i was feeling that at episode 5+6 tbh #but i thought to wait it out to see if it improves at all #and it did but i think it's still my main grievance i have with the show #overall i think i would give the show a 7/10 #its a great show but it's concepts are much more stronger than it's execution #that being said i do not want a season 2 #i don't see the point of it especially with how Simon's arc concluded

[pefkid]

Real Quick Thoughts...

Because when you are rooting for a relationship, people sometimes look at you sideways and look at your opinion differently. Throw the ship out for a second (even though the lack of temporary closure for the ship is the episode's biggest flaw).

From a writer's perspective, you have two characters and you have them be parents to a child, share looks with soft music (music that is their themes mixed) in the background, fight together, work together, become inseparable, and pledge loyalty to each other (a pledge of loyalty that, might I add, is framed close to a similar pledge that makes the differences in lighting, tone, and music clear). Hell, you even have an entire episode (by BDH aka the romantic angles director) with two sets of lovers to parallel the duo, and side characters calling out a main character for her actions towards the other. You take all this... and you don't even include a simple farewell?

I'm not even asking for a super sappy romantic one (even though you earned it with the great development of their relationship). I'm not asking for them to try to get the other to join them because they can't stand to be apart, or for her to take off his helmet similar to how Omera tried in the first season to show not only the change of Mandalorian culture but also how deeply in love loyal Din is to Bo. I'm just asking for a simple "see ya" with a payoff to the development and the wine. And I think this can also explain why people seem to feel "indifferent" or "hollow." They didn't pay it off, but the ending was open-ended, but the action was good, but the pacing was off at the end, and you just come back to...

The middle...

On the bright side, these three are the focus of this era of Star Wars so this is for sure not the last time we see them, and I believe the slow burn will pay off... in two years 😒

#final thoughts on the episode #overall it was fun but it could have used 5-10 minutes #dinbo #din djarin x bo katan kryze #bo katan x din #din x bo

[quatregats]

How do I exist in a way that is both kind to my body and does not make my brain feel like it's going to explode

#really not sure what's going on here but we need to find a middle ground or else i'm going to drive myself to an early grave #literally why did i not sleep on friday night. could i not have done that. everything hurts i hate life #the worst part is that routine is great for a couple of days but eventually the brain itch inevitably drives me up the wall again #and the cycle repeats. and repeats. and repeats #i'm honestly very good at self care overall but it's a spiders georg situation #percy sleeps 5 hours per night a lie average night percy sleeps 10 hours random hyperfixation all-nighters are outliers #it would just probably be cooler overall if i slept 7-8 hours a night instead and Didn't Do That #perce rambles

[necra-loid]

greetings my fellow normal people I finished all of transformers earthspark in one day today and I'm being so normal about it

#IM UN WELL IM SICK IM DISEASED #IT WAD SOSOSOSOSOSOSO GOOD AAAAA!!!!!! #im SCREAMING!!!!!!!!! #special shoutouts to: steve blums starscream i will accept no other living voice actor for him kn a serious show now #and also to nightshade who has SKYROCKETED to being in my top 5 transformers OF ALL TIME #im gonna need to marinate on it but i think this may be one of my fav tf shows of all time #lets fucking GOOOOOOOOO #also the animation tuled. ruuuuled #really liked the 2 effects in a 3d world it worked very well #and the models were beautiful and i LOVED HOW MUCH they looked like TOYS in some scenes it worked REALLY REALLY well #overall absolutely a 10/10 #transformers earthspark #tf

[quickhacked]

i finished the index page for my portfolio are you proud of me

#personal #all it took was 1) a massive depressive episode that lasted from december to february #2) a severe existential crisis about my overall future #3) a good 10-15 fistfights with the suicidal ideation man in my head #4) horrible mental breakdowns every other friday-monday #and 5) entirely too much jacking off. if you must know #i genuinely do not know how i managed to make it through art school relatively unscathed #but hey at least i did not fall back into alcoholism. we're still rawdogging life out here #i Could however use a drink or two though but i'll stay strong. for the sake of my fucking bank account

[aq2003]

my verdict on ark is that dt is like. the only celebrity voice actor in it that is doing a really good job but i forgive it bc the rep is pretty good

#episodes 1 and 6 were the best 2-4 were kind of boring 5 was good for the meiyin content #the art/animation are pretty good (like it's a cut above tlovm/invincible standards) #However i think the characters are a little underutilized. like rockwell especially what the hell is his deal i want his backstory so bad #i also want to know more abt the past connection between rockwell and meiyin. he was part of the rebellion and BETRAYED her #can we delve deeper into that.. that kind of drives me crazy can we see more between these two #also i'd like it if the show focused more on helena's personal struggles and flaws. i LOVE the look into her backstory on earth #like w her wife and her mom. but i'd like to see more of like. how that backstory affects how she views the world #they do this really good w the side characters meiyin especially i just wish . like.!!! helena struggled w anxiety/depression #she was so dependent on victoria for like any sense of stability can we like. See More Of That #can we see her and meiyin be codependent toxic yuri . for me. for fun #overall.. i think it's alright of a show 7/10 i need to see more of it to deliver my verdict fully #cuz in the next time trailer there's bits of rockwell backstory and Please Give It To Me

[deus-ex-mona]

when you have to act like you’re fine (but you’re really not)

#‘lightly seared’ my fingers on this 100+ degrees hotplate earlier and just. o w. #it didn’t leave any marks but my fingertips still sting a little. #thank goodness im a thumb player for mobile rhythm games. else i’d have to play on hard difficulty (priorities) #overall a 0/10 experience. the initial pain is about the same as that of an acid burn but the pain lingers more than the acid burn does… #actually wait this is worse than an acid burn. both don’t leave long-lasting marks or scars or anything but. hm. #the initial marks from acid burns last for about 3-5 days so… hmmmm. #hope my fingers will uncook themselves soon though. the pain’s getting kinda annoying.

[bragganhyl]

y'know seeing how many mutuals of mine who are far more into bee gee three than I never actually finished it is... interesting and it does have me wondering if i never finished it, i'd like it more too

bc y'know what i remember from the ending the most as far as just... experience goes? the bugs, the damned game breaking bugs that kinda just clustered at the end of the game for me, seriously I ran into 3 of them in quick succession and I spent more time researching how to get around those than playing the final stretch of the game so the actual climax of the game was just... infinite frustration and reading reddit threads for me

#hablaty #so yeah at one point i said i'd give it a 7/10 but my experience is more of a 5/10 #yeah neither of those numbers really reflect the actual overall quality so yeah don't listen to me on that front #i just had a bad time with the climactic segment of the game like... right at the worst possible time i was about to rip my own face off

[fefairys]

sort of just dawning on me how i still have like, the levels of caution and paranoia that was sort of necessary back in like 2014-2018 tumblr where you could say Anything and you'd immediately get someone in your askbox misinterpreting it very angrily and violently, but the number of asks people send has gone down so much that i literally do not even have to worry about that anymore as a small blog. like it is literally a non issue. in 2014 i had like 5 followers and i'd get anon hate for saying something someone disagreed with and now i have 2.6k followers and no on gives a shit i get no mean asks anymore, but i still carry the anxiety from when it was the wild west out here

#personal #i guess it depends where ur followers come from #cuz i do have mutuals with approx the same amount of followers as me or even less #who get insane asks still #but i get none of that because all my followers either inactive or like... #idk ppl who are cool about homestuck still #specifically feferi #maybe thats it #ive curated a nice following #but still like random strangers dont send asks anymore #from like seeing posts in tags #cuz i once made a post about disliking a ship when i was 12 and had 10 followers #and got like 5 death threats over it LMAO #now people just block. which is overall a good thing of course but id be lying if i said i didnt miss the excitement of it all

[ahabsleg]

just finished ffvii rebirth. holy fuck

#that’s it #that’s the post #in 5 business days I’ll be back with a review or smth #spent the last two (2) nights BARELY sleeping just so I could finish this game lol #I have—Not Joking-about 60 diff notes app opinions I just wrote throughout #I’m both insanely relieved to have finished the game before my week’s break off school is over and also depressed over it being done #anyways I’m gonna go sleep and cry over aerith #overall tho I’d give it a 9/10 personally I enjoyed the changes from the og

[diwns]

so *knuckles cracking* dexter

#ss1: great intro to the series. 8/10 #ss2: good follow up from ss1. loved the chase. also lila. wow. probably my favorite. 9/10 #ss3: first half of the season was cringe. motive was predictable. mid. 6/10 #ss4: trinity was overhyped? or outdated. meh. better than ss3. 7/10 #ss5: vigilante plotline. felt the thrillin' part again ever since ss1. last episode was rushed for the exit part. 7/10 #ss6: blood & gore & tons of catholic symbolism. the most eyes popped moments i've had watching dexter. great up until the last 3 eps. 8/10 #ss7: wtf... 5. debra my girl sufferred so much *sobs* #ss8: aint watching that. #i'd give dexter an 8 if i watched this when it aired. but i didn't so 7. the show IS old. but good overall. #dippi.txt