I’m rereading Po3 and despite its flaws I really enjoyed the introduction to the three. Jaykit isn’t mentioned to be blind in the first few chapters and instead they chose to show how much MORE capable he is compared to his littermates; until at the end of chapter 3, he brings up his blindness on his own. It makes forcing him to be a medicine cat SO much more frustrating because it really feels like they’re setting him up to be a warrior and choose his own fate (note i haven’t finished the reread this is just my first impression)
I like how you seem to take that path in BB regardless! It makes his arc so much more enjoyable
His arc in canon is super frustrating because he's such an independent character who clearly wants to make his own decisions in life, but then he just gets shoved into the medcat den. I LIKE that he ultimately goes there and that he enjoys it; but it was still really fucked up that they stripped away his autonomy in the process.
Re: they are not real, they are writing choices. Taking away the choices a disabled character can make over their own life, forcing them into a celibate nun role, and then going "awwwww dont worry see? he likes it! This was the best thing for him :)" was fucked up.
And imo it didn't have to be that way! You wouldn't have to go the FULL route I did with big changes, he could just be more involved in the descision to stop being a warrior apprentice and it would be fine. Minor change that would make a world of difference.
I do also have to interject to say though... blindness should really not be an extremely severe impairment for a ThunderClan cat.
I'm dead serious.
Whiskers are built-in sensors that tell you the exact position of everything within several inches of your head, ears swerve to pick up sound, and the jacobson's organ provides a sense of smell so keen that I have an entire Clanmew expansion draft because I needed to make WORDS describing the power of this sense that humans do not have. I cannot stress enough how delicate their other senses are, felines do not rely on their sight like primates do
ThunderClan lives in a mixed-oak woodland, where sight is already often obscured by foliage, objects are close together (for whiskers to feel), and nearly every movement makes noise against the leaf litter. RiverClan and (moor-running) WindClan cats would have a harder time with this disability than Thunder or Shadow.
Cat sight SUCKS to begin with. It sucks BADDD. They don't have color vision, they're significantly nearsighted, and they can't track up-and-down movements well. WC doesn't write realistic cats (more like small fuzzy people really) and I also work with more humanesque eyesight, but the only thing Jay should really lose is an ability to rapidly track a small animal swerving fast. Blind cats are often still excellent hunters in spite of that!
So it's an extra big waste that they railroaded him into a position he didn't choose, saying he couldn't be a warrior. This is the perfect disability to write, if you want to explore how ableism can impact the characters in this society who ARE legitimately still capable of nearly full independence, but still need to find accommodations for what they can't do.
In the same arc they're doing the dumb Cinder Reincarnation Plotline, no less!! Where SHE is also feeling like she has no choice over her "destiny," and gets a conflict over a potentially disabling injury
"Oh nooo if cinderpaw breaks her leg she wont be a warrior!"
"What the f-- Im Jaypaw and im reporting live from the scene where a Category 1 Idiot Moment is taking place. Woman breaks leg, suddenly everyone believes she is a horse, more at 11."
One of these days I should really make "herb guides" just covering how various sensory disabilities impact the lives of Clan cats and some tips for writing them as warriors, especially between Clans. Stuff you wouldn't usually consider, like how much noise deaf cats tend to make, how RiverClan would get a ton of sinus infections and lose their sense of smell, being blind in Sky vs Thunder, etc.
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The Twitter Mari Lwyd saga (2019 - part two)
Since people seem to be happy that I'm copying over the Mari Lwyd sagas, have another transcription! This is for the second round of 2019, between @seananmcguire and @kbspangler. Part one is here, the source to this round starts here.
(Seriously, these aren't mine, they're the property of @seananmcguire, @tkingfisher, + @kbspangler, I'm just transcribing so extra records exist. Support their works!)
That being said, if anyone can find the 2020 Twitter thread, can you send me a link so I can transcribe it (or transcribe it and link me)? It has been found! Thanks to @dor-min for finding the thread, it's going to take me a bit to transcribe.
CWs for food, alcohol, and caps.
K.B.:
SO YOU SAY YOU WANT A BATTLE?
YOU'RE BRINGING NAUGHT BUT PRATTLE
TO THIS FESTIVE DAY WE DESIGNATE
WITH LIGHTS AND FOOD TO CELEBRATE
THE SOLSTICE, DEAR, WITH ME AND MINE
AND YOU AND YOURS
AND HIS AND HERS
AND THEIRS AND OURS
A BREAKING DAY
A FRESH NEW YEAR
WE CALL SPRING UP AGAIN
Seanan:
WE'RE PAST THE LONGEST NIGHT
AND I'M ITCHING FOR A FIGHT
IF YOU'RE COLD, WE'RE COLD,
SO LET US IN.
WE HEARD YOUR LARDER'S STOCKED,
SO GET READY TO GET ROCKED
THIS TALE'S OFTEN TOLD
WE ALWAYS WIN.
K.B.:
YOU SAY YOU'LL FIGHT
THIS GARDNER'S MIGHT?!
THE GROUND IS COLD
MY PLANTS ASLEEP
I'VE GOT ENOUGH STRESS
TO PUNCH A SHEEP
I AM WIGGING
TO GO DIGGING
AND HERE YOU COME
TO STEAL MY PLUMS?
Seanan:
I DON'T WANT YOUR PLUMS
THE MARI LWYD COMES
TO SAMPLE YOUR CHEESE AND YOUR BOOZE.
YOUR GARDEN IS SLEEPING
SO WHY ARE YOU KEEPING
A SENTRY POST YOU DIDN'T CHOOSE?
COME WASSAIL WITH US.
THERE'S NO NEED TO FUSS.
THERE'S NO SHAME IN CHOOSING TO LOSE.
K.B.:
I'M NOT YET CONVINCED
A DEAD HORSE HAS ENVINCED
THE SPIRIT OF THIS WINTER'S PAST
CAN YOU SWEETEN THE DEAL
WITH A CAROLING PEAL?
THEN MY GARDEN WILL HAVE TO HOLD FAST
Seanan:
WE ARE NOT RETREATIN'
THIS HORSE WON'T BE BEATEN,
IT A BATTLE OF HOOVES VERSUS HANDS.
THE JINGLE OF BELLS
IS A SOUND THAT FORETELLS
OUR CONQUEST OF ALL OF THESE LANDS.
K.B.:
THEN I GOTTA SAY NO
SORRY, CAN'T GO
YOU SEEM LIKE A NICE HORSE AND ALL
BUT MY HOUSE IS QUITE HAUNTED
AND I AM UNDAUNTED
BY YET ONE MORE SPECTRAL ODDBALL
Seanan:
IT'S NOT REALLY RESPECTFUL
TO SAY THAT I'M SPECTRAL.
I'M CORPOREAL AS A GIRL COMES.
YOU CAN PURCHASE MORE CHEESE
SO JUST GIVE ME THESE.
DON'T FORCE ME TO BREAK OUT THE DRUMS.
K.B.:
(My parents are about to arrive so)
FINE, I DON'T CARE
IF YOU'RE BIRD, DOG, OR MARE
ON THIS DAY WE'RE SUPPOSED TO EMPLOY
THE LOVE OF THE SEASON SO HERE,
HAVE SOME CHEESE IN
PRECUT SIXTY-FOUR SLICES OF JOY
Seanan:
DESPITE THIS GRAVE LOSS,
YOU'RE A SHEPHERD TO MOSS,
AND I AM A CHILD OF THE GRAVE.
SO I'LL GO NOW IN PEACE,
AND I WON'T BREAK YOUR LEASE,
THOUGH YOU DIDN'T ASK ME TO BEHAVE.
K.B.:
[Alt ID: A small Black child in a crowd. The child takes off his black baseball cap as if to say "I tip my hat to you dear sir," which has RE2PECT embroidered on it in white thread.]
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Marked.
(Revenge of the highlighter brush)
I had a Thought last night, and while Emmet doesn't actually have Arceus's crest on each of his eyes in WtST, I thought that it would look really cool, so here we are.
Now that I'm more awake, I realize that this concept was most like implanted in my brain a while ago after looking at this piece of artwork by Esprei. Which is fantastic, by the way, go look at it and give it attention, look at it it's beautiful.
(Still a little confused on the mentioning etiquette on here; I don't know if I should tag people whenever I mention them or not, as every time I've tagged another user has been when I've either made something for them or found something I think they'd like, and I'm quite concerned about bothering people. Sorry)
While I'm not totally, 100% happy with everything about this piece, I do really the contrast with everything being monochrome but a few sparkles and the crests in his eyes. I do like that a lot. Contrast, beloved.
Could I have done this with Akari or Rei and had it not be WtST stuff? Yes, yes I could have.
Did I?
No, of course not, how was I supposed to resist the chance to give Emmet a li'l extra funk?
Welp, have a good day!
(Program used: Krita; time taken: 1 hour, 45 minutes)
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Oh my god I hit tag limit on that one I am so sorry. 🧍
BUT LIKE. HONESTLY. I AM. AUTISTIC ABOUT THE ART PROCESS ITSELF. ABOUT SHAPE LANGUAGE AMD COLOR LANGUAGE AND HOW A DESIGN IS LIKE. A Strong character design with a clear intention behind it should not just Look Cool (though that is an added bonus!!!) it should tell a story in and of itself!!!!!!!! That, even at a glance, you can get a feel for who this character is, what their personality is, what role they play and/or are forced into, AND ALSO!!!
Something I'm esp autistic about tbh as someone who has an interest in fashion/crafting/sewing as well, how the clothes Work With the character. In a few different ways: again, the clothes themselves tell a story! The costuming! But also! How does the character move in them? What does that Say about that character? Where are they from? Not to mention the shape language/colors come back again, now w alllll the fucked up shit you can do with fabric!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Fluffy? Not just in the fur sense (eg, a petticoat with bouncy puffy frills)? Could be a really bubbly character!!! Flowy? Graceful? Could be someone who's mature, knowledgeable, wise. A female character who opts to wear shorts instead of a skirt? Could be sporty! Or practical! And also in general Big Clothes/accessories can make a character look imposing.
LIKE...... reading this over it is so basics character design 101 but like. I am ALWAYS frothing at the mouth about it 😅
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