#rewritten character

[densitywell]

spent like an hour trying to find a post abt the disparity of origin companion's content in bg3 and couldn't so, hey, this fucking sucks

#baldur's gate 3 #bg3 #the fact that the astarion favoritism is baked into the game itself is so darksided oh my god #bc what do you mean wyll has TWO THIRDS THE AMOUNT OF DIALOGUE??? #anyways this thread was also how i found out that astarion is the only one with durge specific scenes #and bc the writer was being forced into crunch and writing for both of them. lol #ETA I know abt Wyll being recast/rewritten and Karlach being added last. the post I linked goes into all of that in detail #as well as linking to another post that goes into even more detail and explains where these numbers came from. #you do not have to tell me. or accuse me of making shit up to make people mad. i know and i'm still mad lol #game design is very complicated yes but there's many ways they could've avoided giving the one black character the least amount of content

[sorio99]

Knowing “Nerdy Prudes Must Die” was the first idea the Lang brothers had for Hatchetfield makes the whole series so much funnier.

Like, did they know in “The Guy Who Didn’t Like Musicals” that the weirdo who demanded a hot chocolate would be the leading man of the high school horror show?

Did they know the prude they mentioned a few times would be a homophobic murderer who defiled a corpse, fucked a ghost, and became a vessel for dark lords?

Was the homeless man joke in BEFORE the recast because they were still brothers, or not?

#nerdy prudes must die #the guy who didn't like musicals #hatchetfield #team starkid #starkid #for those who didn’t put it together #the hot chocolate boy in TGWDLM is supposed to be Peter Spankoffski #but was recast after Robert Manion got put on hold for a while after a scandal then seemingly decided to go full burned bridges with them #also as a side note #that ‘obnoxious teen’ was also supposed to be the ticket taker in Black Friday but was rewritten to be a Joey character #because Robert Manion was going to be playing Ethan Green in the same scene against him #and then the ticket taker was going to be Richie Lipschitz in NPMD #but then Joey Richter was chosen to take over as Pete #so Ritchie was separated off and given to Jon Matteson #so the ticket taker went from being a Pete cameo to a Ritchie cameo to just an entirely unrelated character #I feel like I know too many behind the scenes details about these shows just through TVTropes #also does this technically mean Ritchie’s death is kind of sort of a way for the Langs to kill a Robert character again even after he left? #oh and the homeless man was Ted the whole time #nightmare time is a trip

[the-winterer]

IT'S THE FINAL ROUND OF THE UNDERTALE/DELTARUNE OC POLL ON TWITTER DON'T LET MY GENDER-NEUTRAL BOY CHARKIS LOSE, GET OVERE THERE AND VOTE IT'S SO GODDAMN CLOSE https://twitter.com/The_Ginger_Heed/status/1714053828163580258

#Deltarune #undertale #deltarune chapter rewritten #chapter rewritten #charkis #deltarune au #deltarune oc #deltarune fan character #deltarune fanart #deltarune charkis

[r0th3freak4rtist]

Sonic Prime ReWritten characters concept art of "No Place"

Capitan Knuckles the dread and Cap Topaz (Rouge)

(Possible Exes)

Fishbone along with his cockatoo and adoptive son

Dahlia (Kinda inspired on Soro from one piece)

Topaz's crew

More concepts soon...

#sonic the hedgehog #artists on tumblr #sonic #sonic fanart #sonic fandom #fanart #sonic the hedghog fanart #character design #character art #concept art #sonic prime #sonic prime au #sonic prime rewritten

[spooksicl-e]

small comic for a thing i’m very deviously constructing with a friend (nemesis)

#like imagine sherlock (bbc) but rewritten by two people on the internet #who are deprived of sleep #and unwell about characters played by benedict cumberbatch. #yeah anywho you’re not getting context for this but there is SOOO much context #happy theorizing !! #my art #no @ bc i forgot #so just don’t use or steal ig #fanart #fanartist #art #sherlock holmes #sherlock #benedict cumberbatch #martin freeman #bbc sherlock #johnlock #john watson #sherlock fanart #trf #teh #the reichenbach fall #the empty hearse #comic

[caxirune]

✨️ Scampton 🃏

#scampton #scampton the great #deltarune chapter rewritten #chapter rewritten #deltarune #deltarune fanart #deltarune au #spamton fanart #my art #art #drawing #artwork #digital art #fanart #character art #my artwrok #illustration #my illustration #artist #artblr

[yrrtyrrtwhenihrrthrrt]

Just saw a take that Nimona (2023) was a Failed Adaptation of the comic

But like

It's not an adaptation

It's a retelling

Like yes it is a failed adaptation in the sense that I am a failed Auto Mechanic (I am not an Auto Mechanic)

#idk i just did not appreciate that take #it is very clearly a retelling there's literally a line by the narrator about how “sometimes the story needs to be rewritten” or smth #both the comic and movie are good #they aren't the same story though?? the characters aren't the same?? #not trying to beef w anyone who feels that way I was just flabbergasted by that take #in much the same way I'd be flabbergasted if someone told me I was a failed automechanic like huh?? #anyway I love the movie and the comic they are beloved to me #nimona movie #nimona #nimona comic #ballister blackheart #ballister boldheart #ambrosius goldenloin

[candy-sticks-zaza-blogs]

I redesigned Alastor demon form to look unsettling,unhinged,creepy and scary. Vox is very short so yes because I like Vox being short and pull someone shirt to bend down to him and he will shout at them if they didn’t listen. If Alastor have a full demon form with eldritch features than why Vivzie gave him tentacles like bruh that would make him look boring though. Also Deers have night vision which mean Alastor eyes have gone smaller cause he is colour blind.He only opens his mouth when he eats or pissed in his demon form his mouth and teeth’s move like Jax from TADC when he’s chilled he doesn’t open them more often when he talks only the speaker on his chest would make a voice coming out of him.

#hazbin hotel #hazbin hotel redesign #redemption motel au #character redesign #alastor #hazbin hotel critical #hazbin hotel rewritten

[becauseplot]

Penciled Lines

(Cross-posted on ao3, if you prefer to read it there. Reblogs still appreciated!)

Missa wakes up, and he thinks he might be doomed. This doesn’t scare him nearly as much as it should.

Missa is awake early—by his own metric, anyway. His nocturnal nature causes “early” for him to mean “early night” and not “early morning.” Regardless, “early” means that Philza is not asleep yet, still going through his nightly rituals. “Early” means that Philza is sitting up in (his? their?) the bed, pillows propped up behind him, notebook in his lap, sketching away.

And when Missa wakes up to the soft scritch-scratch of a charcoal pencil on textured paper, his forehead just so happens to be brushing Philza’s hip.

Missa can hardly breathe.

Oh no.

He knows that if he gives any indication that he is awake, Philza will stop sketching, close his notebook, shift himself over until he is politely seated on his side of the bed, and greet Missa with a friendly smile. Philza has done it before, when Missa wakes up early. That’s how Missa knows he’ll do it again.

Thus, Missa can hardly breathe—his breaths have to be the slow in-out of sleep. He can’t so much as twitch, either. He has to keep quiet and play dead or else he’ll be found out. Seen. Caught living the lie.

“Husband,” Philza calls him. They’re not married. They share a bed. They’re hardly ever in it at the same time. They have a son and a daughter. Neither of them know Missa very well. Philza has had an extra set of armor and a skull on his backpack for months, waiting for Missa. Missa doesn’t even know Philza’s last name.

Philza is a good man and a good friend—and Missa doesn't deserve him. Still, he takes what he can get. Curls around it. Hoarding every innocent kindness Philza extends like a starving creature: the generosity of a backpack fully stocked with equipment; the trust Philza places in Missa to watch the kids when he’s asleep; and now, the courtesy of not moving his hip from Missa’s forehead to ensure his “sleeping” isn’t disturbed. Missa clutches all of these little offerings in his greedy claws and hugs them into his chest, even as the guilt eats away at him.

Because, regardless of the lack of mutual feeling, he loves Philza. He loves him so, so much, and that is why he is doomed. He can’t afford to lose what little he has. He can’t cross that line. 

So Missa lies beside Philza, forehead pressed against Philza’s hip, pretending to sleep so he can imagine that they’re not just lying in bed together, but lying in bed, together; and later, when Missa truly wakes, he will sit on his side of the bed and look at Philza’s face soft with sleep and think about how lucky he is that he still has a side-of-the-bed to begin with.

Missa doesn’t mean to drift off. When it starts to happen, he’s hopelessly torn between shaking himself awake and thus giving himself away, or remaining how he is, silently fending off the inevitable. In the end, Missa clings to that scritch-scratch sound of Philza’s pencil on the paper for as long as he can before the fog at last pulls him under. 

Eventually, he dreams. In fact, he dreams of the calloused fingers he dreams of every night, hands like his own, an artist of Death, cradling and shading the contours of his face—a softness dashing charcoal across his jaw, and over his cheekbones, and perhaps on his lips, too, if he’s lucky. Defining every edge of him.

~*~

A deep sigh. Phil stops sketching as Missa shifts in his sleep. He tilts his head up so that the tip of his nose is now just nearly brushing against Phil’s hip. The motion disturbs the wild splay of his dark hair, revealing more of his face: eyelashes, cheeks, warmth. Tender blush of something Stygian and otherworldly. New.

Phil’s lips tilt upwards. He turns to a fresh page, and he starts again.

#qsmp #pissa #qsmpshipping #qsmp missa #qsmp philza #i hesitate to put main character tags bc it's shipping content but i think we're all p much okay with that?? we chill??? we chill thumbsup #my fics #ficlet #anyway would you believe me if i told you this took me a week to write. hhourgh. #i'll prolly make small edits as time goes by if i dont scrap this version entirely. #i really like it rn but we'll see how i feel abt it in like a couple hours or a day. the sheer number of times ive rewritten this hhhhh. #this little character/relationship study is primarily for me to try to work them out in my head. #so if this doesnt quite hit the exact vibe you know why. #im still getting acquainted w missa's character but i gotta start somewhere ya know #i didnt actually get to explore missa's feelings of inferiority as much as i wanted to but thats bc i found trying to tackle that As Well- #-as everything else saddled the fic/setting w too many Things and made it cumbersome and muddied the story being told. #so another time perhaps. #anyway i adore them. beloveds.

[pelideswhore]

my penelope wears a dorian chiton when odysseus is there and an ionian one when he’s in troy/out at sea.

#yes there is a reason behind this #and no nobody asked but i like rambling about my characters #greek mythology #greek myth #penelope odyssey #odysseus #the odyssey #lowkey curious anyone whos read my writing can figure out why this is a thing #the poll is still up if you want to vote on when i upload my rewritten odyssey or if you want to be tagged in it #tw eden

[laundrybiscuits]

Eden actually likes her name. When she thinks about the muslin-draped horrors she could’ve gotten stuck with, like poor Suzie, she feels guiltily glad she dodged that bullet. If she’d been the one who had to shoulder the impossible burden of being named Suzie, who knows how she might’ve turned out.

Eden is a word that could go a lot of ways. It’s almost as good as Lilith or Isis or something. It’s the kind of name that could be sexy, in the right hands. The kind of name you could say on stage: ladies and gentlemen, introducing the one and only Eden—

That’s where the picture stalls out, though. Eden Bingham is pretty awful, no matter how you spin it. She wants to pick a stage name like some glamorous Hollywood actress, but she hasn’t decided exactly what she wants yet. She thinks it would be real elegant to pick something French, like…like Verne. 

There’s a battered paperback tucked under her mattress at home, where sticky, prying little fingers can’t get at it. She’s not a fast reader, but she’s read it about a million times by now. Sometimes when she can’t sleep, she’ll take it out and just squint at it in the moonlight, tracing her fingertips over the faded elephant on the cover. It’s a story about some guy who was so bored he decided to travel all around the world, and nobody stopped him. He could just go. He didn’t have any kids or anything that he had to take care of or look after; in fact, there was some guy whose whole job was to look after him. 

For a little while, Eden thought about borrowing the main guy’s last name, but Eden Fogg sounds kind of old and stuffy. She could take the French valet’s name, but she’s not completely confident she knows how to pronounce Passepartout, and she’s terrified she’s going to say it wrong and nobody’s going to take her seriously ever again. 

The author’s French too, though, and his name seems a lot easier to handle. So, lately she’s been looking in the mirror and saying Eden Verne, hi my name is Eden Verne real quiet to herself, just testing it out. She’s not sure about it yet, but it’s definitely better than Eden Bingham. 

Eden Bingham is just a handful of years away from Edie Bingham, who spends her time looking after a house full of kids and wears shapeless floor-length dresses. But Eden Verne could be someone who travels and wears exciting makeup. Eden Verne drinks and swears and smokes, and she never has to deal with kids ever again. Beautiful, sophisticated men and women alike despair for love of her, but she never lets anyone stay more than a night. 

Anyway, she doesn’t have to figure out if she can carry off Verne yet, because the stupid boy she followed halfway across the country introduced her to his friends as Eden Bingham, so she never got the chance to decide if she was going to say something different. She probably wouldn’t have, but—maybe she would. Maybe. She’ll never know.

The thing with Argyle fizzled out pretty quick. He’s cute, and making out with him is fun, but he doesn’t ever seem to want anything real out of life. Eden can’t understand him at all, and worse yet, she’s pretty sure he doesn’t understand her. When they’re high, they communicate just fine giggling about the cosmos, but that’s not enough. She’s sure there’s supposed to be more, even if she’s not entirely sure what that means.

She broke up with him on an impulse, and sometimes she regrets it. He’s a good guy. He’s not like any other guy she’s ever known. He’s willing to drive clear across the country, which is what she liked about him to begin with. Maybe that’s as good as it gets for her.

But she can’t take it back now. It’s not even that she thinks he’d say no, necessarily; she just can’t handle the idea of trying to walk back something like that. She’d die of humiliation before the words made it out of her mouth. 

So Eden’s just here, in Hawkins, staying in her ex-fling’s best friend’s step-dad’s spare room because it’s still marginally better than having to hitch home to Utah. Argyle is planning to drive back to California in a few weeks, so she’s going to just ride with him then. In the meantime, she’s going to have a nice, quiet vacation in Indiana, doing whatever it is Midwesterners do in the summer, and then she’ll go home and nothing at all about the life of Eden Bingham will have changed.

#eden bingham #so yeah this is the robin rarepair I mentioned! I don't want to talk too much in the tags bc I want to see if I can sell it via narrative #obvs this is the same story as the matchmaking snippet I posted last night but I don't think it follows directly #I just wrote it & it seemed like a pretty self-contained thing so here u go #(also I'm kinda assuming this post is not going to be too popular given it has zero ship content and is about a very minor character haha) #(which is fine! that's just how fandom works! maximum engagement is not my goal I'm just here to try stuff out) #anyway there's a pretty good chance this'll get rewritten once I have a better handle on eden's voice #fic: somewhere sometime somehow

[vanilla-flavored-icecream]

Dr. Reflex is a cool guy

#vanilla-flavored-icecream #baldis basics #dr reflex #my art #dr reflex is a cool character:) #(help i think i might have a new hyperfixation/obsession) #(i still like deltarune chapter rewritten tho) #art wip

[ganondoodle]

im kinda glad i was a tiny child when windwaker came out and i only played it years later without having internet access for the longest time bc i would have NOT survived the hatred i know ww got when it first came out bc it wasnt what most people expected (ww is my fav zelda)

loving botw but not liking totk and seeing the vast majority praise the latter like its the holy grail while alot also discrediting and needlessly hating on botw for it is already making it hard to stay calm about :U

#ganondoodles talks #special interest go brrrr #sucks when you care so much about a piece of media thats out of your control and it does something you hate #i do not control the hyperfixation #it wouldnt be so bad if people wouldnt keep hating on botw just to praise totk more tbh #and before people say but arent YOU doing the same thing in reverse??? #welll ... its suppposedly a sequel yes? #direct sequels should build on the first title and totk does the opposite doesnt it? #again one of my biggest problems is that it was advertised and called a direct sequel qhen it really isnt #like at all #how some characters also made a weird turn in their personality it really does feel like it did a majoras mask thing without admitting to i #like majoras is GOOD #it was weird and kinda nonsensical but ultimately worked #can you imagine if totk just went with the whole other dimension thing properly and really went ham with it- #.... i am coming up with even more ideas for totk rewritten arent it.. #anyway i dont think im gonna get a collectors edition ever again given the risk of me not liking what its for #regret spending that kind of money on it after i calmed down my fears and in the end they turned out to be mostly right #;__;

[negativespace06]

miss miseryguts

#synthesizer v #synth v #R.I.P #riproducer #miss miseryguts #THIS SONG MAN #my brain has been rewritten after listening to it on loop for the past 2 days #ignore how wonky the hands are i was NOT cooking #also #don’t sexualize the character! it’s weird! #my art

[r0th3freak4rtist]

Sonic Prime ReWritten characters concept art of "No Place"

Capitan Knuckles the dread and Cap Topaz (Rouge)

(Possible Exes)

Fishbone along with his cockatoo and adoptive son

Dahlia (Kinda inspired on Soro from one piece)

Topaz's crew

More concepts soon...

#sonic the hedgehog #artists on tumblr #sonic #sonic fanart #sonic fandom #fanart #sonic the hedghog fanart #character design #character art #concept art #sonic prime #sonic prime au #sonic prime rewritten

[appleflavoredkitkats]

knocks on the lps fandom's door. u guys kno the channel mlp fever remade lps popular right. u guys kno it has better writing and prop design and completely dunks on sage right. u kno this version ends with brooke and savannah ending up together right. you know the creator is also planning to make a s3 and you should go binge the entire series and support mlp fever rn right

#littlest pet shop #lps popular #savannah reed #brooklyn hayes #i do think some side characters were rewritten poorly but overall a good series