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lotsstuf · 7 months
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mr-e-nigma · 1 year
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A fun fact about me is every time I try to name all of the tf2 mercs from memory I miss one and it’s a different one each time. This has happened with all of them at least once.
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bb-enablefreebuild · 29 days
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NTN opinions
so I haven't read NTN very recently (or the other locked tomb books) but its the most recent installment about Nona I think about a lot.
Muir said that she was splitting Alecto the Ninth into two parts, NTN and then ATN. She explained that Nona already had a complete story arc and could be its own separate book. Obviously there's nothing wrong with that.
But to be quite honest, I feel like most of NTN could have been cut. The most important parts of Nona are these:
More detail about the Blood of Eden
Nona's relationship with Varun the Eater
Her dreams of John Gaius
Now don't get me wrong, I loved seeing Nona going to school as a teachers aide and making friends! The problem is, the relationships she develops with the kids like Hot Sauce aren't...very important. I think it would have been better if Nona developed relationships with characters that she already knew, like Crown (Coronabeth) for example.
If Nona being friends with a group of kiddos is important, then maybe she should do it specifically with kids from the Blood of Eden. Out of all of Nona's friends, her relationship with Noodle the dog is the most important, and maybe Hot Sauce. She could be another niece of Wake, the same as Pash. It would explain why Hot Sauce is so suspicious of necromancers and why she shot up Nona in that one scene.
Also, If Nona is the secret weapon, why isn't she more involved with B.O.E? It's implied that the Blood of Eden is on the struggle bus. Wouldn't the inception have more depth if Nona was among their ranks right before their eyes, it'd be a major example of why they've failed for so long to stop Mr. Jod.
Cam and Palamedes could have gathered a few trust worthy relationships used to protect Nona too. Heck, the Blood of Eden could have a "school" of their own where they teach the kids of their soldiers propaganda, look at how Pash was raised!
I genuinely believe that all of the stuff that happened could have been condensed to a feasible first part. As an author, cutting things we're proud of writing is like shooting yourself in the head then doing it again. But I think if I was in Muir's shoes, I would've done it. I love Hot Sauce, Kevin and the other kiddos so much but they're just...not important enough for the over all plot :(
Lastly, and this is where I'm getting super nit picky, but I wish there was more world building. I 100% appreciate Muir's trust in the readers intelligence and for us to put the pieces together. I understood that Steles were used to travel far distances and "flip" planets to be colonized for necromancers. I VASTLY prefer this instead of five hundred pages of exposition (Fourth Wing) slammed into the beginning of the book.
That being said, a little bit of exposition is fine. Gideon The Ninth does this perfectly with explaining thanergy and other necromancer related info. We learn more in HTN as well. I think Muir was thinking that "Nona wouldn't know these things, so it can't be expressed in the book" which I totally get, but Nona has a canon excuse for just Having knowledge! Her uncanny reading of body language and understanding of different languages? Her ability to draw animals from Earth that were lost to public knowledge? Nona just casually absorbing information and thinking about it in her internal monologue is completely reasonable. I say this to point out that Muir was too vague with the world building in NTN. Yes, I could fill in the gaps but I would have loved more information about the colony planets outside of the House system! She's doing too much showing, which I think is precisely why NTN got much too long.
Anyway, PLEASE take all of this with a grain of salt. I love Nona the Ninth and I think the way it was written is digestible and good! It's just not how I would have done it. Please Tamsyn I'm begging you for lore I am BEGGING YOU FOR LORE.
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babygirlificationn · 8 months
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The swimsuit :) the tan lines :(
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patoka-pal · 4 months
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participating in the meme
the other guy is my dnd character Raphael Featherlight. he’s a detective aasimar fighter
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notyuta · 7 months
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ooouhh nooo sungchan's verse ouch
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sleepyeena · 1 year
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hai. i have moved on from my naruto hyper fixation yet again 😸
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crystalmagpie447 · 10 months
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how the fuck is it already the fourth of july
where am i
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dteamain · 1 year
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fuck 😵‍💫😵‍💫😵‍💫😵‍💫
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infernaleikon · 7 months
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so tempted to change my url to something ffxvi related 😭😭😭
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gnaga37 · 1 year
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omg nobody told me they were wizards too
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knivesv · 1 year
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rip to nastasya filippovna but I would've married rogozhin in a heartbeat
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winchester101 · 10 months
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He’s so endearing to me because he’s entirely doing all this song and dance for himself, they’re all ignoring him
Bonus Luffy drinking Sanjis tea
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kakyogay · 4 months
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ugh guh I finally made a thing for it ples buy idfk
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alt text fixes some wording and misspelling and also is just there if my handwriting is hard to read
also quick edit uh I'll be using paypal for the receiving of the dabloons so yeah
yet another important quick edit!!!! changing the per character to per drawing‼️‼️‼️
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shartfinz · 1 year
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assorted nonsense
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hyakunana · 2 years
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Just some lighting testing and practice...
— I say as an excuse to work again on some sketches I made before
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