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theforgottengreatpoem · 9 months
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"You know what it's like when you don't know anything at all and yet you're totally certain that everything would be better if you were just near one particular person?"
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lemonemenom · 2 months
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Absolutely LOOSING my mind over @kermits-cup-of-tea PRINTING and BINDING my goddam Tos Spirk fic
MY life is so WEIRD and i LOVE IT
please see their whole submission and images below
WILD;
so fun news about "of trees and telepathy" :)
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we started off fist fighting the printer until i put this sticky note on it and then it magically worked. we will not be discussing the... far too many wasted pages from the first few attempts at printing
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then came the fun part: sewing the booklets together >:)
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and then it was just. so much glue, SO much glue and waiting for it to dry but now! 3 days later "Of Trees and Telepathy" is fully bound!
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thank you so so much for letting me bind it <33 i had a blast, it'll be joining my few other bound fics (its a small collection rn but its growing) i didnt intend to make it so soon, however... i got hit with the must create bug and just couldnt stop myself because frankly i love binding and it was the weekend so i figured why the hell not. again, thank you for letting me do this, im so glad to have this one on my shelf <33
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kiki-kakapo-art · 11 days
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Gift for @sleepinginmute
It’s them!!!!! I really really love the designs and the ship and them being in a QPR so I just had to draw them!!!
Hope I did them justice :>
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plulp · 6 months
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JORDAN PLEASE DONT WEAR SO MANY CLOTHES. PPLEQASE
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daily-sloop-john-b · 28 days
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I know we all love to say "fuck mystra" this and/or Gale's Folly (subtitled: How Could You Be Such A Callous Idiot)—but really, Gale and Mystra are primarily REALLY BAD at communicating. The whole issue started when Mystra a) couldn't provide a satisfying answer to Gale's desire for more, b) Gale decided that instead of being vulnerable and working through it, he'd do a Secret Project(TM), c) Gale didn't bother telling Mystra what said project was, and/or she only vaguely warned him off it. And then Gale rolled a nat 1 on his arcana check, and then a second nat 1 for insight b/c the DM was attempting to take mercy on him and was staring at Gale and the book, worrying 4d6 under the table while not breaking eye contact and saying, very slowly, "...are you sure?"
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thisisanerror · 7 months
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Feeling himself in that trench coat ✨
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skrunksthatwunk · 4 months
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aurghhh ok still rewatching '97 and the way guts and casca only have the room to breathe and really come to understand and care for each other in griffith's absence because he has such a strong hold over them both.... and the way their mutual dedication to him is what causes them to bicker for years (casca thinks he's not serving him well enough, guts thinks she doesn't get that he cares/how much he cares, casca's jealousy over griffith's feelings for guts, how he won his heart without even trying or being aware of it or doing anything with it) and is also a big part of what brings them together (earlier when guts deviates from the plan to save griffith and she commends him, in the cave casca opening up about griffith and her's past, showing that vulnerability, while it's mostly confrontational, leads to guts kinda getting her better, and his efforts to save and protect her (falling off the cliff with her, taking on the 100 men so she can escape, encouraging her to return to griffith so she can help him because it's what she feels she's meant to do (her dream, the direction in life guts shares and yet is questioning because of griffith's speech at the fountain, whether or not it's enough to serve him if it means he'll never be a true friend in griffith's eyes because he's not an equal), supporting the idea of her being with griffith/being his most important person like he won't because he doesn't view it as a competition like she has been since day one) leading to her realizing that he's kind of not that bad a guy and they have a lot more in common that she thought. and how the bonfire of dreams conversation is guts opening up to her in kind, the answer to her talking about how griffith saved her, how she feels. how neither of them ever call it love but it's something they know they both have for griffith. how it's something they're beginning to have for each other, different in ways they couldn't put a word to. because they're equals this time. the way griffith kind of becomes less and less important as they find other reasons to live and fight, as they become less singularly obsessed with him. how griffith is unable to stand it, guts' personhood, that agency and peer-to-peer equality he claimed to want (and perhaps truly did) that disappeared guts from his life, his plans, his side. how it barely even matters to griffith how casca changes because he never wanted her like she wanted him. god i can't fucking stand their shakespearean nonsense drama (<- hopelessly in love with their interpersonal dynamics)
#god they're the only healthy part of this unholy mind-palace love triangle/throuple aren't they#they could have been the worst qpr/throuple in your social circle. like just insufferable when they're not getting along#if griffith hadn't [oh god oh fuck oh jesus christ] all over everything even remotely good in his life anyway#poor casca's in love with a gay man and then falls for his not-quite-boyfriend and when not-quite-boyfriend reciprocates said gay man fucki#g. Does The Eclipse Stuff. at least partially to get back at you two. oh my godd#i'm sorry i'm so not normal about them. it's starting to leak out into the blog bc i'm finally having a Berserk Moment since starting tumbl#but whewwwww. gotta get this outta my system#hope this wall of text makes sense oops <3#berserk#berserk 1997#how do i even tag their thang. their disastrous just horrible agonizing 3 guy dynamic. hm.#gutsca#griffguts#don't even know if anyone tags for griffith and casca. fair because 1) he raped her. yikes 2) he just straight up isn't into her#and i don't know if there's a tag for the three of them but trial and error led to nothing#but i wanna talk about their dynamic. their. (gestures wildly) whatever. it's not about thinking griffith should kiss anyone it's about lik#the agony. the pining and the torment and whatever miura so beautifully crafted for me specifically. sheesh#hope it's clear that i Don't Want Them To Be An Uwu Little Polycule Bc Casca Should Not Be In A Cutesy Throuple With Her Rapist#it's more that i think they kind of are or almost are part of this (gestures wildly again). Thing. with each other and i wanna talk about i#same with griffguts like oh man they should NOT be in a relationship. but i have this deep intense Need to study them and frankly they're#kind of crazy about each other for a while. like they care about each other so so much it's crucial to all three of their characters.#so it's kind of unavoidable. and i wanna talk about it. and have this read by people who also want to talk about it. yeah? yeah.#(and yeah i think griffith raping casca was about her and guts. like 'fuck you for making him okay with leaving me' type of vibe. even#though it wasn't her fault he's just. god. but it sure as hell isn't Mostly about casca because griffith's making eye contact like the Whol#time with guts. he makes him watch. it's just. shooooooooooo aughhhhghhghh fucking. jesus christ. that or it's the fear that his two most#important pawns are going to leave him Together and he just. can't deal with that. especially after the torture internment thing.#he's so weak and he was so close to his dream and now it's falling apart and they're leaving him and he can't even move. it's about making#damn sure they can't escape him or forget him ever again.#or maybe it's even a 'you can't have her she's mine' to guts but it's still largely like. spiteful/about possessing her as a soldier/human#because i don't think you could convince me it's about having her as a lover or about controlling/hurting/possessing her body.)
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lordshroom · 10 months
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2012 Good Genes: Vengence is Mine part 1
Ooooo an ongoing comic perhaps.
This is mostly an exercise in finding my own style for the Turtles so expect the models to change wildly and frequently haha. Also if you’re wondering what its about: mash 2003’s “Adventure’s in Turtle Sitting” and “Good Genes” with the Karai serpent deal in 2012 and I think you’ll get a rough idea.
Also also I’ve never made a comic before so expect some extra jank teehee. I want to update it at least once a week but beyond that I’m going to post pages when I’m done with them ;D
Also also also I have dysgraphia so can’t spell like at all and I’m doing the lettering in Procreate which doesn’t have the ever so helpful red squiggle so expect big words like “ingredients” to be misspelled if I don’t catch it.
I’m sure this will go smoothly.
Masterpost - Next
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Decided that I needed some writing practice, so I'm taking a shot at writing a scene from @xbomboi's EAH arc, Fable Fest. It's a great fan creation of what could've been, so please go read it!
Fair warning, this is my first time writing using canon characters AND fanon characters, so this may not turn out like my other writing. I hope I got Deter's and Wanda's characterizations down well. Enjoy!
"Look," Deter began, "We don't like you." At "you", he pointed his clapped hands towards the two royalty standing before him and Wanda.
I can't believe I had to say that. What are we, spellementary students?
Apple made a sound similar to that of a kicked dog's, and Raven face fell from confusion to disbelief.
The short blonde was quick to regain her posture, though to without squared shoulders and clasped hands. "But why?" Apple gasped out. "That isn't fairest!"
Isn't fairest? That "isn't fairest?" Is she joking?
Deter chuckled bitterly. "I'll tell you why, Apple White," he replied, the embers of anger sparking to life, "You fairytale royalty act all high and mighty," he moved his hands in a quick, grand flourish, "while you couldn't care less about what happens to us." At that, his hands dropped back into a tight cross on his body.
Wanda pushed up her glasses, eyes like flint as she lifted her chin. "It's true."
Apple stepped forward, ignoring Raven's attempt to pull her back. "That's not true!" the blonde fired back, "Everyone plays an important part." She nodded firmly to herself, while Raven winced like she'd been stung.
Deter scoffed. I can't believe this girl is supposed to be the queen someday. "In what, your stories?" He jabbed a finger towards Apple, mouth quirking into a mocking smirk. "What about those that aren't in them? What do they matter, your future highness?"
Apple stumbled back like she'd been slapped, eyes glassy. Raven's body flared a bright purple, before settling as she stepped forward. "Hey, back off." She glanced back at her friend, eyes softening, before turning back to Deter. "She's learning." The blonde perked up, her smile returning. Deter fought the urge to roll his eyes.
Guess little miss trailblazer needs a wake-up call, too.
"You're no better than her, Raven Queen."
Raven's brow furrowed, and her expression turned back to confusion. "What?"
This time, nothing deterred Deter from letting his eyes roll with a scoff. "They call you the rebel of all rebels, but I'd hardly call what what you've started a rebellion."
"Excuse me?" Her voice was sharper now, but Wanda's low chuckle and nod of encouragement to Deter fueled the burning rage in his throat.
Like a lion with a gazelle, he circled her, going in for the kill.
"Sure, you may think you "freed everyone from the chains of destiny", he retorted, putting emphasis with air quotes, "but that's only for the same people who've always had fairytales."
Her head swung as he waltzed, sparkling flames leaking from her clenched fists. "I'm fighting so that we can all have the freedom to choose our own stories."
This girl...! She really doesn't understand. Deter barked out a pained laugh. "All, huh? you really think that?"
Wanda clicked her tongue. "If any of us did what you've done, we'd be locked up in a dungeon."
"What!?" Apple's already porcelain face paled, and Deter fought back a vicious grin. Good. Her ignorance truly would be her downfall.
Deter could see Wanda's frustration grow as she sighed, long and hard, as though she was a teacher dealing with a particularly thick skulled student, leaning her head back and rubbing between her eyes before she locked in on Apple, lips curled back. "Fairytale society is designed to favor individuals with prestigious stories." Like yours, Deter thought, "Meanwhile, the rest of us are stuck living in them."
Deter stopped back in front of Raven. "That's what's not fairest." His smirk widened as Apple withered before his very eyes.
"I-I didn't know..." Her voice faded off, and she shrunk further into herself as Deter and Wanda glared.
That's right, you didn't, because you were too absorbed of yourself and your stupid Happily Ever After.
Wanda straightened and dusted off her clothes, her eyes still trained on the blonde. "Precisely why we must win. If our school beats Ever After High, everyone will be left with no choice but to acknowledge us for a change."
With the nail in the coffin, Deter turned sharply on his heel, hustling past Raven and knocking shoulders with her for good measure. Wanda followed, stalking past a wilted Apple and a shaking Raven.
Headmaster Perrault would be proud.
Turning his head, Deter snarked, "But good luck, right? You're surely gonna need it."
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And that's all! I hope this was good. None of these characters are mind, and I once again recommend reading Fable Fest!
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my-names-kris · 1 year
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i like my fgod ink in a way that people dont really characterize him.
to me, he started as a creative guy with god powers using those god powers to create. he could not hear the pleas of the one who created him telling him to stop.
when error came around, and started telling him what he was doing was wrong, his mind could not comprehend it. the joy of creation and what comes from it cant not be anything but a good thing, right? creation gives life, which is good. destruction takes away life, which is bad.
so he fights against error, who is only doing what he has to for the multiverse to survive. he dubs error as insane, because of the cold harsh truths that he shouts out. those truths are nonsense of a person who is less than sane to ink.
what he doesnt know is that hes driving error into insanity himself.
soon people start following ink as he saves and interacts with more universes each day. dream is one thats the closest to him, his right hand man if you will.
he creates a council of the stars.
as time marches forward, as thousands of years pass, neither side stops. this confuses ink, planting a doubt in his mind.
why does error not stop? he has few allies, and as his bones break and his heart shatters, he keeps on going.
keeps on going like he has to. like theres a purpose behind his actions. he does not break.
surely he would come to his senses by now. surely he would realize that hes in the wrong.
but what if thats not the case?
with that, theres a realization in ink.
error may be in the right. the two of them counteract each other. whatever being made them had to have known that.
error has a purpose to fill. ink is only stopping him from doing it.
but he also realizes that he enjoys their fights. he enjoys the praise he receives as everybodys dear creation god.
he cant stop. theyd all turn on him if they found out the truth.
so he decides that he wont stop. hell slow down so this place doesnt collapse, sure, but... this fun game must continue.
he cant stop now. or ever.
he has to keep going
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helloiamadrawer · 6 months
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I already said it but I'll say it again this does not make me a furry
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Dyspo NSFW Alphabet
A-Aftercare (what they're like after sex)
Dyspo is the mfing king of aftercar, quick to run you a bath or just grab some towels to clean yourself up and him as well, or just simply a nice cuddle session. Mans is all hands on deck when it comes you.
B-Body parts (their fav body part of theirs and also their partners)
It may sound pretty obvious coming from the supersonic warrior, but it's his legs 100%. On his partner however, it may be their legs as well or either their captivating eyes. Especially your waist, definitely his favorite place to hold you by.
C-Cum (anything that has to do with cum, basically)
His is on the thick but milky side. Being a rabbit with a built in breeding he's a messy cummer as well (lol). Unless you're not into the whole breeding thing he loves to cum on your stomach or if you're giving him oral, definitely your face. As for the taste, it depends on his diet. He could taste sweet one day and then a little bitter the next.
D-Dirty Secret (a dirty secret of theirs ;) )
To make love/have sex in every single one of his comrades' rooms (EXCEPT JIREN'S). Not because he has grudges for them but because he's adventurous like that sometimes (and horny). Let's say everyone is gone one day except for Dyspo (cause hey, someone has to protect the base) first thing he'll do is call you up and ask you if you want to hang out cause he's "bored" and next thing you know, y'all are heading to whoever's room doing it, but you two make sure to get a few essentials so no one will find out hehe.
E-Experience (are they experienced and do they know what they're doing?)
I think that Dyspo did have a couple one night stands in his past, so I would say he's mildly experienced and is confident in what he can do to satisfy you.
F-Favorite position
His definite fav is probably Face-Off, it gives you both the passionate but searing eye contact whilst making love. But more reason behind it is because when is Dyspo is thrusting up into you, he gets to watch your face contort in mixes of pain/pleasure. That or a whole ass mating press if he's really feeling it but is willing to experiment with other sex positions as well.
G-Goofy (are they more serious in the moment or are they humorous, etc?)
When he's usual chill self he would crack a joke or two if you did something silly or if he did but after that it's serious from there. Now, if he comes back from let's say...a very adrenaline coursing battle, yeah no jokes, bed. Now.
H-Hair (how groomed are they and does the carpet match the drapes?)
Okay i may be wrong, but it would be at least a little tuft of black down there. He tries to keep it tamed but his job as a Pride Trooper gets in the way of it sometimes.
I-Intimacy ( how are they in the moment? Romantic aspect)
He can be romantic don't get me wrong but he likes the playful aspect of it and the teasing..and the physical touch as well. Play fighting with Dyspo will always lead to tender or rough sex. Best believe he can be passionate for you as well, making love until the sunrise.
J-Jack off (do they masturbate? headcanon)
UM OF COURSE THIS MAN MASTURBATES
You're talking about a rabbit who has a high libido, plus it's a stress reliever as well. Also if you have the same libido level as him that turns on his mutual masturbation kink into overdrive.
K-Kinks
Dyspo's kinks are
Breeding-where do I start with this? He's mostly a soft dom when he's feeling soft, but when he gets to pounding you full of his hot seed, no regrets he's a h a r d dom af. Rearranging your walls and molding your slutty hole to fit his cock and his cock only hours on end until you can't walk the next day. Cherishes the idea of you carrying his child/children.
Mutual Masturbation- so if you're not into the breeding thing. This is one of his alternative kinks. God, the image of you using a wand against your clit and shuddering to him stroking his leaking, aching member in front of you is so fucking hot to him it's not even funny, he'll probably just cum so quick over that.
Marking-slight kink but he loves to mark your thighs, or your neck, or your chest--hell he loves all of you so one may be on your ass one day and not notice until you do lmao
L-Location
Not anywhere in public but the base when no one's there or his bedroom.
M-Motivation
Headcanon: wear stockings or some pretty thigh highs and he will pounce on you or drag you to the bedroom instantly. What can I say? He's a leg kind of man.
Sexting is another thing that riles him up easily. Picture it, you're in your bedroom at your house and you decide to risk it today and send Dyspo a picture of you on your knees in your sports bra and panties and to top it off, your fav stockings he likes and when he receives the pic, best believe he's gonna (get hard, duh) and reply with something cocky like, " u tryna get yourself pinned to mattress today aren't ya baby? Keep going like that and see what happens when I come over there >:)"
Or simply just dirty talk. If you're shy l, then be prepared to have your face set aflame by his lewd suggestions when he's outside of work.
N-No
Being a hero to the public means no sex anywhere except the bedroom and his or your place.
O-Oral
HE'S 👏GOOD👏AT👏BOTH
Giving oral to you only took him a good minute before he masters the art of ravaging your cunt with tongue. And don't get me started with the eye contact during it, he adores the view of you squirming under him with just a lustful glance of his golden eyes between your thighs. Slowly dragging his tongue against your sensitive nub and then growl, "mine." which sends vibrations through your slit and he knows how much you like vibrations if yk yk ;), if you come on his face, it's over for you cause he wants you to do it again 😩 all in all makes him feral.
Receiving is sort of the same, his pelvis easing his cock into your mouth to shut you up while he does some computer work in his office, hoping no one comes in cause of the marvelous head you're giving him. Gagging on his length, your ears are on alert footsteps but your boyfriend of a rabbit starts whimpering, they're focused on his sounds now and Lord...he sounds fucking amazing when he's hopelessly under your control and it only gets worse (or better for you), he starts moaning when hes coming, you can decide to swallow it or let him cum on your face. Whatever option is the best for him it's alright with you. Although he feels kind of ashamed that he's made a mess on you.
P-Pace (are they fast and rough? Or slow and sensual?)
It would depend on the mood he's in. If you tell him you're straight up horny..get ready, he's already ran to your room or about to wrap your legs on his broad shoulders if you're near him. He's more of a fan for sensual and slow sex cause he likes the build up and especially the result after.
HOWEVER, after a fight with a challenging villain, he'll rip your clothes off as fast as you can say his name and as fast you'll be praising it when he's almost balls deep slamming in your pussy. The ferality intensifies as well, growling curses and snarling praises all over the place until you both reach your climaxes.
Q-Quickies (their opinion on quickies)
Quickies and Dyspo are a good match, he doesn't mind knocking one out before he has to go to work. But he can't compare it to love making though.
R-Risk
Noted in the 'No' section.
S-Stamina (how many rounds can go for?)
The Fastest in the Multiverse can go as many rounds as you like. Usually 3-4
T-Toys (do they own toys? Do they use them? On themselves or their partner?)
Dyspo doesn't really have any toys...
But does like using yours on you ;) a dildo that's his right length and girth, sliding it in and out of your sopping wet hole. Vibrators? God, yes. You know there are rabbit vibrators, right? He's definitely buying you one for your birthday or an anniversary present just for the PUN of it but the fun too *wink wink*
U-Unfair (how much do they like to tease)
He can be the sweetest bunny boy alive...but sometimes he likes to be a cocky, evil bastard in bed. He will know when you're close to your orgasm and slowly pull back when going down on you with a shit eating smirk on his face. Will have you sinking down on his cock to chase his own release, even though you came multiple times. But it's 50/50 on that...well..unless you ask 😏
V-Volume (how loud are they? What sounds do they make?, etc.)
Dyspo is quiet at the start, breathing maybe some shuddering from you already turning him on so much. From there it'll escalate into dirty praises and moans and some growling when he's close. So not actually loud that the neighbors can hear lol.
W-Wild Card (random hc for character)
His long ears are sensitive to touch. So please for the love of god, nibble them or blow on them, maybe massage the back of them after sex it will lull him to sleep, trust me. But do any of that and you will receive a moan/shiver, it's cute but hot at the same time. Don't pull them though, it's a turn off unfortunately.
X-Xray (let's see what's going on under those clothes..)
This purple rabbit is quite impressive physique-wise. His cock is about 6 1/2 inches long with a prominent vein on the left of it as it usually hangs slightly to the right. Medium girth but never fails to make your walls flutter with ectsasy.
Y-Yearning (how high is their sex drive)
Moderately high/high as stated in the J section. It doesn't get in the way of being a universal hero and training but he loves to come back having the high strung energy of a rabbit he likes to hop to it (okay I'll stop with the jokes) and just strip off his clothes and take you to the bed to have sex every day if he wanted. (With breaks to eat and stuff ofc.)
Z-Zzzzzzz...(how quickly they sleep afterwards)
It's either..
He's out like a light...cuddling with you, big spoon as always cause that's his role in the cuddling department heehee 😊. Or be the aftercare king 👑 and run you a nice, warm bath while he chills on the bed, ears alert if you need anything from him (maybe another round after ;) )
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critter-core · 5 months
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So… I made a thing 👀
Chips belongs to me, Cheddar belongs to @corgiisaloser
I kinda love this duo ngl… I dunno if this is accurate to how they’d interact with each other but I love the idea that they just go sailing every once in a while Jfjfjfjd
And the speedpaint for those who want it!
*aggressively bops out to Pirates of the Caribbean Tavern edition
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jerktournament · 6 months
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Jerk Tournament ROUND THREE
Things are gonna get murderous.
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Always remember the Golden Rule: Treat others the way you want to be treated.
As usual, polls come out when I finish them, and I'll make an announcement the day before they go live. They'll be queued for 12 AM EST the day following the announcement.
🚨There's no right or wrong criteria for who to vote here because trying to establish that via Tumblrpoll is useless. 🚨 You can vote for someone because they're your favorite, because their propaganda swayed you, because they look cool, or because they're the meanest. Just think: Do You Want Them To Emerge Victorious? Or are they such an ass you'd delight in seeing them get swept? If you'd like a tournament with stricter rules feel free to take that into your own hands, I just work here and like watching Tumblr users like ants.
I highly encourage taking the time to read some propaganda. These guys have lots of love behind them.
And last but not least, be nice to other people on the internet. These polls may be for asshole characters, but that gives you no right to be an asshole back. Anything attacking the fans or fandom of a character will be executed via hounds.
Thanks for your patience and let the whooping continue.
Tag directory // Inbox, for propaganda, questions, chatter, etc.
Round Three matchups, in text:
Zote the Mighty (Hollow Knight) VS Magic Man (Adventure Time)
Murdoc Niccals (Gorillaz) VS Dennis Reynolds (It's Always Sunny in Philadelphia)
Ankh (Kamen Rider OOO) VS Louie (Pikmin)
Sentinel Prime (Transformers Animated) VS Herbert P. Bear (Club Penguin)
Goro Akechi (Persona 5) VS Five Pebbles (Rain World)
Dr. House (House M.D.) VS Dan (Dan VS)
Azula (Avatar the Last Airbender) VS GLaDOS (Portal)
Harrowhark (The Locked Tomb) VS Heather (Total Drama)
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nellycanwrite · 1 year
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“…his hand painting murals upon your barren back.”
Okay, I’m gonna need your “director’s” commentary on this line from Timeless Love because it has been living rent free in my head. I’m obsessed with the imagery here
UUUGHHHH YES YES YES I'D LOVE TO GIVE YOU MY THOUGHTS ON THIS SPECIFIC LINE!
So deadass I was in a very poetic mood while writing His Timeless Love, especially after I had written His Queen as a warm-up before I dove into writing again.
I'm a writer who leans more on the descriptive side of writing. It's also a goal of mine to write more unique lines other than the usual analogies.
Instead of writing "he drew circles on her back," I wanted it to be more...tied to his character, you know? I wanted it to be intimate, to be more poetic, in a sense.
Namor is canonically an artist (and a fantastic one at that), so just describing him "drawing circles" lowkey sounds like an insult to the skill he had honed for five centuries. I also wanted to establish a scene of intimacy with him and reader since it was implied that they're literally naked in bed together after a night of passion if you know what I mean.
Instead of just plain "drawing circles," I tied it to a specific part of Namor's artistry; his murals. And tie it to the fact that he draws these murals to immortalize history—it's him literally painting the murals of his time with reader and regarding it as historically significant enough to be painted on her skin, further emphasizing the point that he wanted to immortalize that little slice of heaven they had in the most mundane setting.
In other words:
"Namor painted the murals of his timeless love on your barren skin—for in the absence of his brush and his inked palette did he meticulously mark his promises in the canvas that was your hip, your back, your torso, your palms...anywhere his hands would so lay upon with great adulation to your name.
And perhaps it was a deep-rooted fear that gripped him like a vice; for you to suddenly be lost again in the hands of death and be reborn with no such spark of recognition. The pain would burrow deep into his heart, but he can take such ill-fated sorrow.
For one reunion carried far more joy than four untimely goodbyes.
At least, by then, he wished the ink that he had painted on the canvas of your skin would bleed through the seams and stick to your soul like stubborn stains—splashes of his love carried in the streams of the little paint that had not been faded by fate who so reared its ugly head for you to drown in the cracks of time."
Hope you enjoyed this Director's Cut of that line! I really really like the rapid thought process I had for that, too!
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hikarihenkoyo · 1 year
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Humanity means wearing your mistakes on your skin, means your body becomes a map, leylines connecting one trauma to the next and to the next, like stars in a constellation of pain. Immortals are supposed to be immune to that visceral sort of memory. 
“...why did that scar?”
“It was the greatest betrayal of my life; would you expect it to just fade away?”
- @etherati. Taproot.
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majimassqueaktoy · 1 year
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Kenzan ends with Kiryu taking on the entire navy.
On foot.
With two (2) swords.
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