#free rewriting

[funnynt]

They bombed Saint Porphyrius Church. The oldest church in gaza , it was consecrated in 1150. More than 300 people were taking refuge in it.

#destroying history so they can rewrite it the way they want it to be #free palestine #palestine #free gaza #gaza #i stand with palestine #christianity #church #orthodox

[ganondoodle]

the golden dragon zelda she only does the transformation for the final fight in the sky, here she is just after doing it chasing after 'ganondorf' to save link, she tackles and bites gan to make him let go of link

design notes:

(notes written here again for better reading) - horns are vaguely shaped like the hyrule crest - she has feathers and markings on the nose to reference owls - green mouth to switch the colors around (and neat contrast), bc gan has a blue mouth, zelda now has green, and if link ever was a dragon hed have it red -markings on the head feathers are a reference to the lil things satori and rumi (blupee?) have on their head

(totk rewritten project)

#ganondoodles #zelda #art #totk #ganondoodles rewrites totk #dragon zelda #also imo made her color design more harmonical .. (?) #also shes bleeding from her nose bc a transformation like that takes a toll on you #also i imagined it like #dragon gan caught both zelda and link between his teeth but she can wiggle free and falls #human zelda is falling and knowing she cant help link otherwise decides to do the transformation #trusting that link will save her at the end bc he has the remedy that she believes reverses the dragon thing #-believe- bc she doesnt know for sure so its still a huge risk #she does it mid fall and at first keeps falling as a dragon #since its a painful transformation and she needs to gather herself for a bit #but just above the ground she catches herself and flies upwards chasing after ganondorf #you know the scene in spirited away where wounded haku falls down that shaft and then catches himself just before reaching the pit? #like that in a way

[exilethegame]

Hi Pheo! So, I heard the Gorgon MC can actually bite Nikke in a fight? Absolutely feral. How does you get this option? 🤔

Hello!

Okay so-- first things first, I know there are multiple ways to get the bite, but there's so much variation here that I have a hard time combing through everything. That being said, I did find what I believe to be two fool-proof ways to get the bite. They're super niche, though, and they work if:

A.) Your MC has Strength and Strategy as their two highest stats OR B.) Your MC is VERY TALL, and has Strategy as one of their two HIGHEST stats, and strength as one of their two LOWEST stats (this method should work for werewolves too, but it doesn't have as much cultural flirtation as the gorgon bite scene does)

Like I said, I believe there are other ways, but these were the only two I could easily find. So!

1.) Choose the physical romantic path for the fight 2.) Choose any of the fight options, then "Wait for him to come to you." 3 [METHOD A:] Choose "Dodge him" IF your dexterity is not one of your two highest combat skills -> Choose charisma + flirt choice "You sure you wouldn't want to do anything else...?" IF charisma is not one of your two highest combat skills -> Bite him! (Alternatively, Nikke can bite you if you pick "This is your chance to bring it home" IF charisma is one of your highest two stats.) 3 [METHOD B:] Choose "Duck" IF strategy is one of your two highest stats -> Choose run at him IF strength is not one of your two highest stats AND if MC's height is "very tall" -> Bite him! (Works for werewolves too)

With all of this being said, as I rewrite fight scenes I am actively making guides for them as I write, so hopefully this won't be a problem in the future 😭

#answered #if anyone knows other ways uh... feel free to share #the Nikke fight scene is too long for it's own good #and there's so much deleted variation still D: #genuinely scared to touch that scene in the rewrite ngl #guide

[hana-loves-bumblebees]

So I’ve seen people making the argument that Percy canonicaly isn’t dumb + Sally taught him the myths, so it makes sense he’d recognize the monsters, and I’d like to put my two cents in.

Yes, Percy isn’t dumb, he’s an unreliable narrator who downplays himself because he’s not book smart like Annabeth. However, his smarts are more of the quick thinking on his feet and street-smart kind, which come out when he’s fighting and figuring out a way to defeat his foe. And yet. And yet we don’t get to see that in the show much at all, at least not Percy alone being the one to think up a strategy. And it takes away from his character.

“But Sally taught him the myths, of course he’d recognize the monsters-“ let me stop you right here. Because yes, it’s great Sally taught him, but she didn’t-couldn’t teach him how the monsters adapted to the modern world. Because that’s all the books are - myths brought into the modern world, myths adapted to the modern world, so that the demigods would have to display just as much skill needed to defeat the monsters as their ancient predecessors.

If you’re still not convinced, let me direct your attention towards this quote from The Chalice of the Gods, because there’s one more aspect a lot of people seem to disregard completely, and that is the Mist:

Even demigods need to concentrate to see whatever supernatural beings the Mist is hiding in plain sight. Even demigods can be easily fooled into thinking a monster is just a normal person.

We can also see that in the book Medusa scene, where it’s pretty heavily implied some sort of magic that affects both Percy and Annabeth is at play. They don’t immedietally connect the dots, which allows the reader to think for themselves who could this new character be and what their deal is. And the demigods are not any less smart for not immediately recognizing whatever foe stands before them, because the monsters have adapted and no longer are the complete same as they are in the myths, which is something neither the camp nor their mortal parents would be able to teach them. The camp cannot prepare them for how different the monsters and their tactics are.

I do think this could have been fairly easily portrayed in the show. You could have the show Annabeth and Percy be suddenly drowsy/sleepy when meeting Medusa, you could have Percy recognize Crusty after he’s already trapped Annabeth and Grover - he could suddenly remember Sally telling him the story, which would allow the audience to hear what the deal is here, and then have Percy manipulate + kill him.

So yeah. I hope this makes sense. Because I’m so tired of hearing “well it makes sense they recognized the monsters instantly” when no, it does not.

#rick riordan remember your canon challenge failed #also i’m obviously not trying to put down the people that like the show at all #and tbf the show’s not bad! #i just wish it had been marketed as the rewrite that it is instead of a faithful adaptation of the book #feel free to engage in polite discussion #pjo #pjo show #pjo show crit #percy jackson and the olympians #percy jackson #pjo tv show #pjo tv show crit #rick riordan #rick riordanverse

[incorrect-riordanverse]

the problem with all these white authors like rick riordan who are revealing their stances on the israel-palestine apartheid is that they barely do anything but virtue signal when they claim “i’m on the side against war” “i’m anti-violence” “i abhor terrorism.” zero people are going to disagree with you. zero people believe what hamas did is justified. zero people think israel shouldn’t have a right to defend itself against terrorism. but that isn’t what israel is doing when they collectively punish all of palestine, who doesn’t even have an official army. when rick riordan says some wishy-washy bullshit about the violence suffered on both sides of the conflict, and words his whole dumbass blog post like it’s violence that is in any way equal, that literally helps no one. in fact, it’s so damn negligent of the 75 years of violence that palestine has suffered and been oppressed for. yes, there are innocent civilians in israel who are suffering, no one is disagreeing with you. that doesn’t erase the fact that israel is a disgusting state that has used state-sanctioned violence on a systemic scale since its conception, and the oppressed people have responded to that in violent retaliation (because OBVIOUSLY they would). israel is built on the subjugation of palestine, there is no equal suffering between the two.

#ricky when i catch you ricky #so fucking disappointed with rick and aveyard and gaiman and brown and tjr and the list goes on #it makes me so damn mad. israel doesnt need your support to genocide palestinians #was thinking about buying chalice of the gods but im probs not going to for now #maybe until i can get it secondhand. but idk if i even care to read it atp #riordanverse #rick riordan #free palestine #percy jackson #pjo #hoo #heroes of olympus #toa #trials of apollo #correct riordanverse #rewriting #what is happening to innocent israelis is horrible. but i find it funny how the world only cares when its an israeli person #suddenly every innocent palestinian who has died since israel’s conception is flattened by history to somehow be on equal terms #10000 palestinians have died since 2008. its not equal at all. #how can u say that the attacks in gaza have reached genocidal proportions and then still talk abt suffering of israel like its equal??? #‘What can I do? I will continue to write books—‘ oh my god shut up #‘I will resist the urge to demonize entire groups of people.’ YAWN #‘ I will call for less violence not more violence. 🥺🥺’ #‘ And when asked whose side I am on I will tell you I am on the side of humanitarianism—‘ OH MY GOD SHUT UPPP

[rewritingcanon]

australia’s government are cancelling visas to palestinians whilst they’re midair on the way over here, so they won’t be able to access medicare or centrelink. same government who lent $75k to israeli victims btw.

if youre an australian follower please sign this petition to tell them they’re being cockheads. you can be under the age of 18, as long as you’re a permanent resident in australia.

#free palestine #palestine #australia #not hp #rewriting

[xyxofspades]

Tl;dr: I think we should rename Nekoette to Kitty

Kawaii~Chan always bothered me as a kid because I was raised in Japan (ages 4-18) and every time she spoke or tossed a Japanese word in there or gave certain characters certain suffixes I was so

So very,,,,, adjective. Mostly confused. That’s the adjective.

SO I GOTTA TALK ABOUT THE LANGUAGE IMPLICATIONS OF HER DAUGHTER NEKOETTE

She named her daughter Nekoette: Transliterated to cat-ette. -ette usually being tacked onto names in English to be more feminine and dainty, so OK her name is dainty cat.

But then they use the -tan suffix which isn’t a real name suffix it’s BABY SPEAK for -chan and I figured, alright well it is her daughter, and mothers baby speak their literal babies all the time. But then Nekoette never outgrows the -tan suffix? It’s with her the whole time. Meaning even as a teen she’s being called (baby voice) dainty kitty. Essentially her name means

POOR LITTLE MEOW MEOW

If Nana is Kawaii~Chan (可愛いちゃん : cute girl) then Nekoette is Kawaiisou (可愛いそう : poor thing)

Set her up for failure SO HARD. Transliterating her name gets you a mess, but localizing it it very easily localizes to Kitty. Which is such a cute name and also actually. A name.

Here’s the kanji for Nana’s name if anyone was curious: 那那 芦田

Not canon I had to write it out myself but that’s the most probable kanji for her. The kanji for Nana means beautiful, and the kanji for Ashida means rice farmer. Maybe her family in Tu’La were rice farmers??? Hidden lore?????? There’s no way her name was that thought out

Here’s that for Nekoette: 猫エト (猫エット？) 芦田

And for her rename, Kitty: キティ 芦田

(Technically you can kanji the name Kitty, but I feel like Nana would keep it in katakana because they live in Phoenix Drop and not Tu’La)

#minecraft diaries #mcd #aphmau mcd #aphblr #aphverse #nana mcd #nekoette mcd #kc mcd #kawaii chan #kawaii chan mcd #kitty mcd #free to use in your rewrites if you wish #I’m just so sick of her wack ass name

[fabdante]

The Party Animal and the Goth

Duncan tried to tell her before they showed up that this would be different. She should give it a try. It’d been years since the last party she went to with him (she’d been dating Trent at the time to, something Duncan further blamed for her bad time). Maybe she’d like it now. And Duncan wouldn’t leave her alone, he swore. No awkward hanging out by herself and the dog should they have one. And if Trent was there, Duncan would punch him just for her. Blah blah. All sorts of promises. Well. She wasn’t into it. Like she said she wouldn’t be. Duncan fucked off somewhere else. Like she thought he would. And she saw her ex Trent floating around and she was doing everything in her power to avoid any awkward small talk that would ensue the second he saw her again. Like she feared.  Of course the party was going to be that predictable. She should have put money on it. And there wasn't even a dog. Around midnight she’d gotten sick of the whole thing. But Duncan was off doing something (hopefully not someone) and Geoff found her. They talked. She mentioned maybe looking for DJ and leaving. But Geoff lit up like she’d just told him he won a prize and her night got a little weird. Instead of just saying bye or helping her find DJ or literally anything else, Geoff was instantly offering to talk her back to her dorm. So that got her where she was now, walking with Geoff away from his party.  What the fuck.

Summery: A classic 'Geoff walks Gwen home' story set in the year of 2013/2014, in which Gwen has decided to leave a party early and Geoff has decided he'll walk her home. (College AU, no camp.)

Words: 4,274

Rating: Teen (swearing)

Read Here!

#i needed to get this one out of the scrivener document and elsewhere so i don't rewrite it in another 5 years #total drama #total drama island #tdi gwen #tdi geoff #gwen/geoff #geoff/gwen #does anyone even look for stuff about them as a ship despite them almost being canon liiike #my fic #anyway i will not be writing more total drama fic unless i am taken by the madness again in another 5 years #i didn't realize until i started considering posting this and checked their ao3 tag that this is just the classic geoff/gwen #one shot formula but in my defense i wrote it the first time like 10 years ago so i didn't know that then #anyway woo hoo i'm free!!

[rainthespiritual]

Kai Anderson Spicy Headcannons

Tw it gets pretty intense yk how Kai is.. this post is intended for those only 18 and older you have been warned

Hes 100% a dom don't see him being anything else except MAYBE a switch before his culting days like we are talking about later Kai..

hes a total sadist, likes being worshiped and enjoys inflicting pain on you while you are doing sexual things

choking, slapping, whipping, even as far as wax play

he would tie you down and pour hot wax on you

very sadist daddy dom master stuff yk how Kai is yall bitches LOVE HIM

listens to cbat and goes to the beat..

NAH NAH I'M KIDDING

or am i

he loves watching you squirm in pain and calling you his pretty little hole

or his pretty little slut things like that

he enjoys you obeying him I see him only enjoying brat activities SOMETIMES

he will straight up slap you or spank you for saying certain things

like straight up slap your face he will BACKHAND you

he WILL leash you if he has to he loves humiliating you

should I make smut one shots of Kai or any evan peters character? if you have any suggestions or requests LET ME KNOW!

#i wrote this and even put tags and tumblr decided not to save so i had to rewrite it 😚fml #kai anderson #kai anderson smut #kai anderson x you #kai anderson x reader #ahs #evan peters #american horror story #headcannons #ahs fandom #i am cringe but i am free #kai being daddy master 🥰 #ahs kai anderson #american horror story kai anderson #smut #ahs cult #american horror story cult #cult #cult leader mm #anyways enjoy #leave suggestions to me plz

[extrastranszanepropaganda]

im gonna stay true to my name and humbly request a vylad doodle :)

-swag vylad anon

OKAY SO I GOT A LITTLE EXCITED

BUT CONSIDER

She’s just a lil guy 🥺

#IVE HAD THIS IN MY HEAD FOR SO LONG #IT HAD TO BE FREE #aphblr #aphmau #mcd #minecraft diaries #mcd rewrite #diares rewrite #swag vylad anon #aphmau vylad #mcd vylad #art #asks

[aqours]

i've shared my thoughts on this in dms with like 3 people so i wanted to put it on paper so i can always get it

so i think one of the biggest questions that goes around tcoaatl is regarding it's incest, asked in both good faith and by annoying antis: "so is the incest... actually like portrayed as bad? or is it just hot and fetishized and romanticized?" and y'know, i think the most genuinely HONEST answer regarding that is this: "it's both." (the later mostly romanticized)

the Graves siblings have a horrifically co-dependent relationship which even the steam page is very happy to make you remember, multiple characters acknowledge it, it's a fucking awful terrible thing and you can make decisions that acknowledge it and its obvious to anyone with two eyes and a brain capable of basic critical thought that realistically while you can do w/e you want in a fanfic in a canon sense there's no way gravecest cannot result in what will ultimately be a lifetime of suffering even if both parties don't want to admit it. you're condemning them both to a chance of ever finding real genuine happiness that can exist without the other

that being said? they're both conventionally attractive and the game doesn't really shy from making its physical intimacy look hot and it's clear that nemlei doesn't want that physical intimacy to be disgusting or something that will make you feel ashamed if you intentionally pursued

i feel like this is the aspect of tcoaal that is debated the most on all sides of the fandom and i just wanted to post my own two cents in that i think the answer is "its both." the extent of how co-dependent these two are is very clear that it's not good and that most likely in the final release the best outcome for these two will probably involve acknowledging it

but also if you were to approach nemlei and just told her "listen i just think it's hot i don't give a shit about any of that other stuff i just wanna ship them." i think nemlei herself would nod and respect your decision completely. probably feed you even more if anything

you're free to disagree with me, i just wanna state my own thoughts somewhere, so i think the answer is a very solid "it's both" when it comes to this. tcoaal portrays the incest as horribly psychologically damaging for these two but also at the same time it's obviously not gonna judge you for liking it and if you find it hot nemlei would never judge you for it i think

but i just cannot in any capacity really take the argument it's a hard one or another seriously. i think if tcoaal wanted gravecest to only be seen as bad and horrifying that nemlei would've made different decisions in writing it bc it's obvious she COULD have if she wanted to, but also it's not fair to say it just makes incest look hot and sexy when it does show how fucked up it's characters are because of it

so... just wanted to say yeah- i think it's both

#starposts #you are completely free to disagree with me i just want this written down #so i don't have to rewrite this 20 times bc i've already had to rewrite this like 3 times in private conversations #the coffin of andy and leyley #tcoaal #andrew graves #ashley graves #gravecest #coffincest #discourse cw #long post #nemlei #also its to my understanding nemlei uses she/her if i'm incorrect please let me know and i'll edit this asap

[chronomally]

I went to a local production of Romeo & Juliet where all the actors pulled their roles out of a hat two minutes before showtime and my favorite joke was the actor who played Juliet wore a trucker hat that said "GIRL" on it until the scene where Romeo and Juliet imply they've consummated their marriage, when he dramatically threw it to the side and pulled out another hat that said "WOMAN" on it

#please feel free to ignore this #Incredible bit #The actress who played Lady Capulet delivered all of her lines in a hilariously thick Long Island accent #and during the scene where Lady Capuley castigates Juliet for not wanting to marry Paris she tapped the 'WOMAN' hat knowingly #and Juliet threw it to the side and looked at the crowd sheepishly #The actor who played Paris kept stumbling over his lines during the scene where he finds Juliet in the tomb #and the actor kept laughing so Paris told him to 'Be a professional' #Also it was a 'happy ending' rewrite so everyone miraculously lived (except Tybalt because his actor was already on stage) #Also they replaced all the swordfighting scenes with random selections from a list of other competition options #Including walking the runway and interpretive dance

[ganondoodle]

some notes about luminous stones + enigma stones for the rewrite (to tired to add more notes onto this post now so maybe tomorrow)

(totk rewritten project)

#ganondoodles #zelda #art #tloz #ganondoodles rewrites totk #idk why i spent so much time painfully wtiting all this out while also super tired and having a horrible headache #just wanted to post something today lol #pleeeease let this headache be gone tomorrow i want to get the next comic update done so baaaad #anyway feel free to ask anything about this :)

[ellzilla]

Two brothers on a lovely stroll :) Surely nothing bad will happen between them :D

#spoilers #i wrote one of them killing the other #fuck do I tag this as LJ. IDK!!! #laughing jack rewrite #Jack Grossman #Isaac Grossman #lizard's art #creepypasta #its almost weird to tag this is as creepypasta bc I'm just writing gothic lit at this point. #but IDC I'm cringe and free

[invisiblequeen]

To all the people in power who helped this genocide happen, allowed it to happen, blocked aid from outside and ignored every voice of dissent...history is already spitting on your name. In today's age, you can never erase what you've willingly been a part of. You will never shut the people up. You will never rid the internet of your sins. You will never hide the proof. You will never be forgiven. You will never be remembered fondly. And you will never win.

#free palestine #this is all i can say #all the money people have sent #all the stories people have shared #all the protests people have staged #and the evil at the top still tries to rewrite history #not this time #wait till the people take their asses to the voting booth #wait till the other countries start icing you out #wait until you actually have to answer for what you've done #we see you clearly #and we are disgusted

[oh-shtars]

So for the Starsha dynamics in the “3 Star-keteers”I’ve collected in this fandom:

KOW!Starsha/“Wishing Star” by @annymation:

Aster tries to act all ‘cool and smooth’ only to end up a total idiot (affectionately) and embarrass himself trying, while their girl thinks they’re the funniest and most adorable person in the universe. Asha, on the other hand, thinks her art and gifts she’s drawn for him should burn in the trash while Aster thinks they deserve to be framed in a museum and make it worth a million blocks of gold.

TFS!Starsha/“RoyalStar” by @signed-sapphire:

Both are stuck in “The Nile” (Denial), and they can’t climb out of it so I guess we’re leaving them there to drown until they figure it out themselves. Everyone knows Cielo is down bad except Cielo himself apparently. Meanwhile, Asha thinks this rotten star has cursed her into feeling this weird feelings she never asked for. They’re both stupid <3

RFTS!Starsha/“Hopes and Dreams” by @oh-shtars (aka me):

Sueño is a very straightforward person when it comes to expressing feelings both positive or negative. A heavy PDA guy and gift-giver that showers Asha with every rock, trinket, leaf and flower he finds interesting until her hands are full. Asha gets highly overwhelmed by the affection since she’s used to her introverted ways of being a wallflower. But once she’s over her shyness and insecurities, it’s going to be Sueño’s turn to be blushing madly.

Basically:

RFTS!Asha: “Look, I can’t jump into conclusions. He’s like this to everyone. Besides, why would he like someone like me?”

Girl, he doesn’t literally light up or gift like 5 different rocks every 5 minutes to just anyone-

(Plus, both are pretty playful so they’re most likely going to be in friendly competition often of who flusters the other the most once they’re actually official.)

#Anny and Saph. you’re free to expand more on these dynamics btw :)) #they’re silly in every universe <3 #random flicker thoughts #Also I’m pretty sure they’d all kill if anything were to happen to each other #Aster for sure has already done it #reach for the stars au #wish au #rfts au #wish rewrite #wish starboy #wish star #wish asha #star x asha #asha x star #kingdom of wishes #the fallen star au #the fallen star