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[better-telugu-copy]

taaza kitchen - Hyderabad

Noticed this at a South Indian breakfast and tiffin place in Hyderabad. They mainly serve Karnataka breakfast almost through out the day. One thing that stands out is how they created an assembly line kind of operation with a limited menu.

This place receives a lot of footfall, seems crowded, but one doesn't have to wait for hours. It's a quick service restaurant, stand in queue, pay for the food, go to next line, grab your food, quickly eat and leave.

Entire kitchen and cleaning area area clearly seen from out side. They take pride and heavily advertise their cleaning and sanitization practices on the premises.

It was heavily crowded when I visited, but you could hardly see any disappointment or frustration in the crowd. The people visiting there do seem to understand their operation as everything moves very fast.

Coming to copy: it's is seen next to their menu board and essentially they want to focus on స్వచ్ఛత ( pure and clean), రుచి (taste) and వినియోగదారుని సేవ( customer service).

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Having seen the place and their operation in person, i think , i have some sense of their business and I have a few suggestions below to improve their copy.

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So this is my final suggested copy

స్వచ్ఛత లో పారదర్శకత

రుచికి ప్రాధాన్యత

వినియోగదారుని సేవ కి ప్రాముఖ్యత.

Translation and reasons :-

Transparency in cleanliness and purity ( the way their entire operation is transparent and every one see everything in kitch and dishwasher area)

Importance to taste ( the crowd itself shows the food is tasty, and i do agree)

Known for customer service ( as explained in the beginning of this post)

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[better-telugu-copy]

kudos NetMeds- Great Copy

while i dont have any issues in the main copy, i hope they could improve the wording a bit in “Free and Fast Home Delivery i.e .. మీ ఇంటికి వేగవంతమైన మరియు ఉచిత డెలివరీ”

Actual : - మీ ఇంటికి వేగవంతమైన మరియు ఉచిత డెలివరీ

Suggested  Options : - 

1) డెలివరి : ఉచితంగా మరియు వేగంగా నేరుగా మీ ఇంటికే 

2) సత్వర హోమ్ డెలివరీ - ఉచితంగా !

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[better-telugu-copy]

Almost perfect copy from Freedom Groundnut Oil print ad

I would not say it is perfect, but it is almost perfect. 

If i have to point 1 improvement, i would remove the word “అచ్చ్చమైన”  in the 3rd line, i think it was used to suggest the original way of making pickles, given that “సాంప్రదాయ"  is used in the 6th line, “అచ్చ్చమైన”  can be replaced and 3rd line can be written as “ స్వచ్ఛమైన, రుచికరమైన పచ్చళ్ళు”.

also “ ఒక ప్రత్యేకతను జోడించి"  is not adding any value, an can be replaced. 

I would write the entire copy as below 

ఫ్రీడమ్ వేరుశనగ నూనెతో

స్వచ్ఛమైన, రుచికరమైన పచ్చళ్ళు ఇంటివద్దనే తయారు చేసుకోండి.

ఫ్రీడమ్ వేరుశనగ నూనెతో, ఈ ఊరగాయ సీజన్ ను సాంప్రదాయ రుచుల సంబరాలతో నింపండి. దీని అద్భుతమైన సువాసన మరియు ప్రామాణికమైన రుచి, మీ చిన్ననాటి మధురమైన, రుచికరమైన జ్ఞాపకాలను తిరిగి తెస్తుంది.

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