#she ra rewrite

[eatingsomegreeneggos]

Fan edit I made of Catra and Adora from my brother's She-Ra reboot @she-ra-princess-of-etheria !! 💗 It's very good, please show him some support! 🥰🫶

#do not tag as ship art btw! #fanedit #screenshot edit #my edits #she ra #satpop edit #spoe #she ra princess of etheria #she ra rewrite

[ur-local-demon-artblog]

I'm gonna be honest, I completely forgot about this blog lol. Here's two She-Ra pieces to make up for it :

#she ra rewrite #Spop #Adora and adam #She-Ra and He-Man

[theprincessofpowerremake]

just assume every character is POC queer, autistic, and has ADHD by default, please and thank you. - a POC queer autistic with ADHD

#she ra rewrite #she ra #motu #motu she ra

[plot-prominent-horde-squad-au]

Catra: While I’m gone, Scorpia, you’re in charge.

Scorpia: Yes!!!

Catra, whispering: Lonnie, you’re secretly in charge.

Lonnie: Obviously.

#that's it that's their relationship #that's roll with it #pphs!au #plot prominent horde squad au #She Ra #shera #she ra rewrite #she ra catra #netflix she ra #She Ra and the Princesses of Power #she ra reboot #she ra lonnie #she ra spop #SPOP #spop lonnie #she ra scorpia #spop scorpia #catra #catra shera #spop catra #incorrect quotes #incorrect she ra quotes

[theglimmadoraarchives]

Currently working on chapters for my She-Ra Season 5 rewrite. I'm sure there are few written by others, but I don't like the way Season 5 went and I don't consider that canon in my mind.

#she ra #spop rewrite #she ra rewrite #mainly season 5

[sheraheirofgrayskull]

still working on she-ra design I'm almost there. I can feel it. if you have any idea or suggestion feel feel to leave a comment

#80s she ra #she ra princess of power #fanfiction #artists on tumblr #motu #sheraheirofgrayskull #she ra rewrite #my art

[cherrytea556]

How she ra couldve developed its characters: Mermista

When we first met mermista, she was sarcastic, blunt and carefree/laidback and ended the show the exact same but is dating seahawk now and has a mention of being a leader which never gets brought up again. But with the leader thing, that couldve been the idea for her character arc: Her learning to become a leader. In her first episode, we see her kingdom already struggling:

Given how we dont see her with any parents/parent figure, she may either have to lead later down in her life for reasons like parental death or earlier with help like the staff she use to have but now, she doesnt have any left. It escalated further when salineas was invaded in s4:

This couldve been why she was determined to being a leader in launch and how she felt when she almost failed as she wasnt able to save salineas, her home and kingdom. However, I do wish her impact of the invasion was explored more such as in boys night out where given how shes reacting, it seems like she just went through a bad day or breakup than experiencing her home kingdom being invaded through her own eyes

Maybe if we see her hiding under hot tub refusing to leave because she couldnt face salineas invasion and is guilty for what happened until she hears the seagull of seahawk and bow getting caughted by the pirates (For my rewrite, the pirates werent part of the plan, rather would be the boys would try to help salineas while building back respect for mermista as many people in salineas relationship with mermista would defintely shatter after the invasion) Getting her motivated to go out and fix what happened, it wouldve been much better and fit more with what happened with mer mysteries. We couldve also see her be more of a leader such as in perls of peekablue:

I couldve had her find out peekablue was dt but I think seeing her be more of a leader like maybe giving scorpia some advice to find out about double trouble or make the guys that her an seahawk captured of when they could talk to peekablue or if they know peekablues new conspiracies (since in this rewrite, I would take mjtanners idea of peekablue being a conspiracist that turned out right in the end, hence this party celebrating their brilliance and the alliance here plan to have peekablue either join them or give them more info on horde primes plan to stop him) would work as well. I also would not have her be chipped along with scorpia (seahawk and perfuma would be replaced instead. Mermistas confession to seahawk in the finale wouldve worked better for their romance imo which I'll go in more depth in another post) Mermista and catra being on the same team wouldve been good for both characters, specifically mermista for closure, obviously being angry and distrustful of catra as she was with entrapta but both in the end may be in mutually distant terms with each other even when catra would have to recieve consequences for the salineas invasion such as maybe being banned from the kingdom, to contribute to fixing salineas with guards for the people in the kingdom to feel more safer.

Also we were seriously robbed of a sisterly mermista and frosta relationship. Think of it, mermista would help frosta embrace more of her kid self while frosta would help mermista lead her kingdom, we would also see more of mermistas and frostas character, it wouldve made so much sense.

And thats how she ra couldve develop mermista. Any other ideas for mermistas character would be greatly appreciated

#spop critical #spop salt #mermista #seamista #frostaandmermista #she ra rewrite

[ur-local-demon1]

Redesigned spop Princesses!!

(Perfuma, Mermista, Entrapta, Glimmer and Adora)

Click here and read "She-ra Rewrite" On Wattpad to see more :)

#ibispaintdrawing #Redesign #She-ra redesign #she ra rewrite #Shera #Princess adora of eternos #Queen Glimmer of bright moon #Princess mermista of salineas #Princess Perfuma of Plumeria #Princess entrapta of dryl #Queen adora of bright moon #Artist #asian artists #Black shera #Black adora

[sidecharactersdomatter]

Felt like redesigning intended SheRa characters from my memories of the 1st Season.

I had trouble sketching Catra’s right eye so that’s why it’s covered.

Glimmer has her dad’s hair color but still retains her signature sparkles.

Bow will get a character arc that will make him become a strong Rebellion commander, I gave him a short ponytail cause it makes him look cool, he also has a horse named Arrow who ends up befriending Swift Wind.

I made Sea Hawk poc ‘cause his VA is and gave him small dreadlocks and stache stubble.

(Maybe I should try redesigning Angella and Scorpia)

#my post #my art #my sketch #she ra and the princess of power icons #spop #spop redesign #she ra redesign #spop adora #spop catra #spop glimmer #spop bow #spop sea hawk #she ra rewrite #spop rewrite #spop angella #spop scorpia #spop swift wind

[spop-romanticizes-abuse]

fanon adora: heeheehoohoo catra is so sexy i love fighting her because i get to be topped by her i'm just a dumb horny lesbian

adora in the series:

#crazy how stans rewrite canon to fit their viewpoint #spop critical #spop salt #spop criticism #spop discourse #spop #she ra #anti catra #anti catradora #anti spop #anti c//a #antic//a #anticatra #anticatradora

[swearyshera]

#sweary she-ra #shera #spop #spopedit #adora #catra #horde prime #5x05 #cw suicide #i guess #mainly because of the parallel #which became less of a parallel with every rewrite

[shyrgyrryn]

Spop Rewrite

I mentioned in my first post that I was planning a Spop rewrite, and I want to go into more detail about what I'm planning and some major notes.

The Story

The story will include many elements from the 80s show, especially the world building, while following the reboot story structure.

Major plot points from the reboot will still be included, for example, the portal. However, it will be written differently and happen for different reasons.

I want to put emphasis on how war can affect people differently and the changes people undergo during it, as well as show multiple different demographics be affected rather than just the main cast.

Additionally, I want to focus Adora’s platonic relationships. Platonic relationships are going to take a forefront in this story rather than romantic ones.

Major Notes

Catra’s redemption arc will be longer and separate from Adora.

Catradora will be canon. However, their entire backstory and relationship will be rewritten. To clarify, I am not a C//A stan. However, I do like their characters in the 1985 comic and can entertain the idea of those versions of them dating. Also, the ship's writing makes me mad, so I want to prove that I, some rando with a lot of free time on her hands, can write a better friends, enemies to lovers relationship than the people who got paid to do it. So, I'm essentially making it canon just to prove a point.

The major changes in their relationship are that there will be no "siblings or dating?" mess involved in their relationship(yuck), Catra will actually be shown deeply caring for Adora, and their relationship will not be abusive in the slightest (still toxic because Catra is a villain but definitely not abusive, and becomes healthy later on.) Additionally, it will be a subplot to the story, not the main focus. It also will not only be made canon at the very last minute.

Seamista will also be canon. However, it is completely rewritten as Sea Hawk is 80s Sea Hawk, not reboot Sea Hawk.

I'm on the fence about Glimbow and Scorfuma, so there's a good chance they won't be canon.

(Clarification: My Double Trouble is closely resembling 80s Double Trouble and the She-ra Bible version, so if I use she/her pronouns for Double Trouble, I am not talking about the reboot version. )

Conclusion

Is there anything you would want to see in my rewrite? What should I consider when writing it? What should I avoid? Tell me what ya think.

(And before anyone complains, I'm tagging this in the main tag because this post is related to the show. I find the idea that you can't tag posts related to a show in the main tag because it's not " positive" and is criticizing it to be a bit ridiculous. There's nothing wrong with critism as long as it is respectful to the real people that post under the tag.)

#she ra #spop #shera critical #spop critical #spop salt #she ra and the princesses of power #80s shera #anti spop #anti catra #anti c//a #anti catradora #spop discourse #spop rewrite #shera rewrite

[she-ra-princess-of-etheria]

How they met.

(yes I forgot Adora's cheek stars, she is supposed to have them here :))

#> she ra #> adora #> catra #> the sisters #> redesign #> rewrite #> image #> image description #do not tag as ship

[theprincessofpowerremake]

[ DISORIENTING // BLOODY IMAGERY ]

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FIREWALL

/ˈfī(ə)rˌwôl/

noun

noun: firewall; plural noun: firewalls

a part of a computer system or network which is designed to block unauthorized access while permitting outward communication.

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PROTOCOL

if wielder is rendered dysfunctional, she-ra must intervene and take over the wielder's body to slowly restore them back to functional state.

side effects include:

wielder's hair, eyes, and blood becoming black

wielder emotionally and // or verbally unresponsive

wielder's abilities at utmost limits

wielder relying only on the instinct of the sword

protect them well, she-ra.

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#spop #she ra #spop rewrite #spop adora #she ra adora #adora #adoradeservedbetter #adora deserves better #spop salt #a little bit

[plot-prominent-horde-squad-au]

Fleshed Out AU Kyle Fic

So I’ve been making a few fics for this particular AU on AO3 (I’m hyperfixating on this AU rn), and I recently started one for Kyle! It is part of what is basically a three part plotline where I basically rewrite Protocol to, well, flesh out the Horde Squad more. I’m writing each part out of order, but when I’m done with all three parts, I’ll likely write some stuff for little in between things in it, then repost it as a new fic with everything in order.

I might also later make an animatic type thing for Kyle’s part, since there’s some visual storytelling stuff that can’t easily be translated into prose.

But anyways, I decided to cross-post the first chapter of Kyle’s part here, so more people can see it.

I’d prefer people read and like it on AO3, but you can do that here too. Just read the notes and stuff on AO3.

Here’s the first chapter of the fic:

Kyle stepped outside the truck, an unusually solemn look on his face. He looked up at the sky, taking a second to watch the fire-flakes gently float down. This was it. No backing out. Despite everything in his mind protesting against it, he stepped out further into the burning snow.

Hurrying was surprisingly difficult. There was nothing on the ground or directly in front of him to obscure his path, but no matter how hard he tried, he could only stumble through it.

Then again, he could feel the fire-flakes burning his shirt away as they landed on him, exposing the old burn scars that littered his body. The burning snow created new, fresh burns, and it felt like his whole back was on fire.

Fire. You’re on fire.

Kyle shook his head, waving the thoughts away, and continued trudging along, until he was about two-thirds of the way to his destination. The fire-flakes were burning away at his helmet, exposing his face to the elements, and he nearly collapsed in exhaustion, leaning against the truck for support.

He needed to hurry, or else he might not be able to make it all the way back. He pushed himself away from the side of the truck and continued walking. He was nearly there, he just needed to-

Suddenly a particularly big fire-flake hit an old burn on Kyle’s back, and he shouted in pain, falling forward and onto the ground. His body ached and screamed, making it nearly impossible to get back up. Fatigue washed over Kyle as he lay there, and he wondered if it was all really worth it.

He turned his head to the side, watching the fire-flakes fall, and fire flashed in his mind. He quickly closed his eyes, trying to shut the memories out.

No. It’s not fire. Sure, it feels like fire, and sure, it hurts a lot, but it’s not fire. I can make it out of this. I can do this.

Kyle opened his eyes back up, ready to continue the crawl forward, when he noticed something odd.

The burning snow had frozen in place, sitting in the air, unmoving. Nothing moved. All was dead silent. It was as though the world had been paused.

Kyle groaned in annoyance. “Not this again! Why, during this, did I have to get stuck in the mindscape?”

Suddenly, he heard a giggle, and a ghostly blur could be seen running around in flashes of blue light. Kyle’s heart skipped a beat, and his jaw clenched. “You.”

The giggling got louder and more frequent, until he could hear it standing above him. Kyle's eyes looked up, knowing what he would see, but dreading it nonetheless.

A ghostly child hovered over him, smiling down at Kyle as the teen twitched in pain. “Hello, Kyle,” the specter cheerfully greeted in its otherworld voice, like multiple people speaking in unison.

“Go away,” Kyle mumbled, not even sparing a glance at the being, “I don’t have time for you.”

The child giggled, and mockingly said, “but Kyle, you have so much time! Way more time than he ever did. You wanna know why?”

“No.”

“It’s because you survived. When, in all honesty, he should have survived, not you .”

“I know that, now can you leave me alone?” Kyle replied, his voice cracking slightly, as though he wanted to cry, but managed to hold back tears.

“This is your punishment, Kyle~” it said, walking onto his back whilst continuing to peer over him, “me haunting you forever.”

“Well, can you stop? I’m busy,” Kyle grumbled, his voice gaining a hint of irritation. The ghost paused and stopped leaning, its face dawning a slight frown. “Well,” it said, a bit miffed, “I guess I better remind you exactly why I’m here.”

Kyle’s eyes widened, and he began to hyperventilate. The child smiled again, though this time it looked much more malicious, like it was a wolf who had just spotted a helpless rabbit. “Let’s go back a bit,” the child said, its voice distorting as it held its hand above them.

Kyle gasped. “Wait-”

The specter snapped its fingers.

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I’ll be posting much more soon on AO3 (like, the next chapter will probably be at least three times the size of this, probably a lot more, depending on my estimations)

#She Ra #shera #she ra rewrite #She Ra and the Princesses of Power #she ra and the princesses of power fanfic #spop #spop fandom #spop fanfic #she ra fandom #she ra fanfic #she ra kyle #she ra 2018 #she ra reboot #cross posted on ao3 #fanfic #my fanfic #fleshed out au #spop kyle #blorbo from my shows #fanfiction

[theglimmadoraarchives]

Will the rewrite be posted here, a03 or another site?

It will be posted on Ao3.

#she ra rewrite