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Sonic X: Gotta Go Fast Again - Chapter 4: The Rise of Metal

Sonic X: Gotta Go Fast again is a thrilling continuation of the beloved anime, promising action-packed escapades and heartwarming moments as our heroes embark on their next chapter! Available for Reading on AO3 & FF!

FanFiction: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14344080/4/Sonic-X-Gotta-Go-Fast-Again

Archive of Our Own: https://archiveofourown.org/works/54991219/chapters/140843446

Preview:

Decoe and Bocoe pressed their metallic heads against the heavy door leading to the secluded laboratory where the nefarious doctor was concocting his latest schemes. The muted hum of machinery and the occasional burst of manic laughter echoed through the reinforced walls, creating an atmosphere of suspense.

Their auditory espionage, however, was abruptly interrupted by the sudden appearance of Bokkun, greeting them with a high-pitched voice that could cut through steel.

"Hello!" Bokkun announced his arrival with the same level of subtlety as a blaring siren.

Decoe and Bocoe turned toward the robot, eyes narrowing as they raised fingers to their nonexistent lips, signaling for silence. Bokkun's enthusiasm was met with stern disapproval.

"Be quiet, Bokkun!" Decoe's metallic voice carried a sense of authority, demanding obedience.

"We're trying to listen!" Bocoe added, his tone more subdued but equally serious.

Bokkun, seemingly offended by the shushing, placed his hands on his metallic hips, attempting to muster an air of indignation. However, his childlike enthusiasm got the better of him, and with a gleeful burst, he activated his jetpack, propelling himself towards the door. His tiny metallic head pressed against the reinforced surface as he eagerly joined the eavesdropping effort.

The metallic trio—Decoe, Bocoe, and now Bokkun—all had their heads pressed against the door, their robotic ears straining to catch every word from within the secretive laboratory.

Suddenly, an unexpected silence fell, freezing the corridor in an eerie stillness. The robots exchanged puzzled glances, uncertainty etched on their metallic faces. Then, as if the very air had been holding its breath, the doors burst open with a dramatic flourish, sending all three eavesdropping robots tumbling backward with a comical yelp.

Eggman emerged, a picture of calm authority, not at all perturbed by the discovery of his underlings attempting to gather intel.

"It's finished," Eggman declared with calm assurance, his voice cutting through the awkward silence like a surgeon's scalpel.

Decoe, Bocoe, and Bokkun, now in a heap on the floor, exchanged confused glances before collectively peering into the dimly lit laboratory. The outlines of a newly created robot came into view, its form illuminated by the subdued glow of machinery. A wave of perplexity washed over the trio, for the creation before them seemed smaller and more intricate than the colossal machines typical of Eggman's diabolical creations.

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thewatcher727 · 8 days

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I think Sega should let Marine loose on a racetrack, she'd love it.

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Sonic X: Gotta Go Fast Again - Chapter 3: New Menace, Same Sonic

Sonic X: Gotta Go Fast again is a thrilling continuation of the beloved anime, promising action-packed escapades and heartwarming moments as our heroes embark on their next chapter! Available for Reading on AO3 & FF!

FanFiction: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14344080/3/Sonic-X-Gotta-Go-Fast-Again

Archive of Our Own: https://archiveofourown.org/works/54991219/chapters/140325601

Preview:

Sonic lay amidst the serene beauty of the forest, his eyes closed as he absorbed the peaceful ambiance. The gentle rustling of leaves, the faint chirping of birds, and the occasional ripple of a nearby stream filled the air around him. It was the kind of tranquility that offered solace and a chance to recharge.

However, the tranquility was soon interrupted by an unwelcome intrusion. A high-pitched voice, unmistakable and annoying, shattered the calm like a pebble dropped into a still pond. Sonic's pointed ears twitched, signaling his awareness of the intrusion.

"Hey! Over here!"

Reluctantly, Sonic opened his eyes, knowing that the source of that voice would not leave him in peace. He turned his gaze to find Bokkun, that troublesome messenger robot of Doctor Eggman's, descending from the sky. He landed clumsily at Sonic's feet, a prelude to yet another of Eggman's messages, most likely delivered through one of those explosive television screens.

Bokkun, never one to miss an opportunity to be a thorn in Sonic's side, produced the TV screen and propped it up on Sonic's knee, as if it were some kind of gift. "You've got a message from Doctor Eggman!"

Sonic's expression remained cool, though his annoyance was evident. It seemed that, despite the short-lived respite in the forest, their usual battles and confrontations were ready to resume. With a resigned sigh, he leaned forward, ready to see what new scheme the mad scientist had cooked up this time.

Eggman's visage appeared on the TV screen, a sinister grin stretching across his plump face. His round glasses glinted ominously as he addressed Sonic with mock politeness, his voice laden with condescension. "Resting well, Sonic? I hope so because, with the Meterax gone, it's back to business as usual! I've got a little surprise for you."

Sonic's curiosity piqued as he awaited the unveiling of Eggman's latest scheme. The scientist, always eager to show off his villainous creativity, moved out of the frame, making way for the unexpected twist of the transmission. Behind him, Sonic was met with a sight that both surprised and concerned him – Rouge, the sly and seductive bat, captured in an unfortunate predicament.

Rouge's situation was precarious, to say the least. Her hands were firmly bound behind her back with sturdy rope, leaving no room for even the slightest movement. Her legs were tightly tied together with rope, effectively hobbling her and restricting her ability to escape. To add to her dilemma, she hung upside down, her feet suspended from the ceiling by a securely fastened rope that allowed her to sway gently.

Her wings, those prized assets that usually granted her the freedom to soar, were also constrained. They were neatly folded and tied together, making her normally agile appendages useless in this scenario. Despite her precarious situation, Rouge's demeanor remained remarkably composed, as if she were accustomed to these kinds of perils. Her lips curled into a playful grin as she peered directly into the camera.

"Hey, Sonic," she greeted with a hint of mischief in her voice, her eyes sparkling with a mix of amusement and challenge. "Mind helping a girl out?"

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thewatcher727 · 11 days

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Brush test idk

Shadow is just a sketch because he's having identity crisis (not that i'm lazy or anything)

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thewatcher727 · 16 days

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Writing A Review Tip: How I Write A Review

Now here's an example of how I do a review and what I did to write it!

"We have finally reached the conclusion of the Mutagen Arc and I have much to say!

For your sequel adaption to Sonic X, it was fantastic! Your incorporation of elements from the story of Sonic Heroes, coupled with your unique settings and lore, crafted a captivating tale that kept me hooked from start to finish. The blend of old and new faces, the unfolding adventure, and the celebration of a new anniversary added depth to the narrative, creating a rich and engaging storyline. It's a reflection to your storytelling prowess that the day was saved once more, and the opening scene with Sonic coming to terms with a potential sacrifice highlighted the true heroism at the core of the character.

The defeat of Dr. Narasu and the saving of worlds marked a satisfying conclusion to the Mutagen Arc. The resolution showcased Sonic's resilience and selflessness, emphasizing his dedication to the well-being of everyone around him. It sets the stage for exciting possibilities.

I was a tad disappointed with the conclusion of the world two choices subplot. The unintentional discovery of a third option, while benefiting everyone, did alter the impact of the subplot. Exploring the consequences of one of the previous choices could have added an intriguing layer to the narrative. Additionally, the purpose behind Rusca's potential deception remains a question that could have added more depth to the resolution.

Despite the minor disappointment, your love for the story shines through, and I'm thrilled to hear that you are excited for what unfolds in the next chapters. The anticipation for more adventures is palpable, and I look forward to joining you in Arc 2.

All in all, despite that, I really loved this story so far and I certainly cannot wait to see what unfolds from here! More adventures await! My biggest suggestions for your next chapters is to remember to proofread and try to cut down on the similes so you're not using one every paragraph. Having them more spaced out gives a better impact. As they say, less is more!

I shall see you in arc 2! Looking forward to the next chapter and the adventures that await!"

Positive Feedback:

"For your sequel adaptation to Sonic X, it was fantastic! Your incorporation of elements from the story of Sonic Heroes, coupled with your unique settings and lore, crafted a captivating tale that kept me hooked from start to finish." Explanation: I started the review with a positive note, praising the writer's adaptation and storytelling, giving specific details about what worked well.

Highlighting Strengths:

"The blend of old and new faces, the unfolding adventure, and the celebration of a new anniversary added depth to the narrative, creating a rich and engaging storyline." Explanation: I continued to highlight specific strengths, mentioning the mix of characters, the unfolding adventure, and the celebration of an anniversary, which adds depth to the narrative.

Acknowledging Resolutions:

"The defeat of Dr. Narasu and the saving of worlds marked a satisfying conclusion to the Mutagen Arc. The resolution showcased Sonic's resilience and selflessness, emphasizing his dedication to the well-being of everyone around him." Explanation: I acknowledged the satisfying resolution of the main arc, praising Sonic's characteristics and the positive impact on the world.

Constructive Criticism:

"I was a tad disappointed with the conclusion of the world two choices subplot. The unintentional discovery of a third option, while benefiting everyone, did alter the impact of the subplot." Explanation: I provided constructive criticism by pointing out a specific aspect that disappointed me, the conclusion of the world two choices subplot, and explain how it impacted the narrative.

Offering Suggestions:

"My biggest suggestions for your next chapters are to remember to proofread and try to cut down on the similes so you're not using one every paragraph. Having them more spaced out gives a better impact. As they say, less is more!" Explanation: I offered specific suggestions for improvement, such as proofreading and reducing the frequency of similes, with a helpful explanation on how it can enhance the impact.

Closing on a Positive Note:

"All in all, despite that, I really loved this story so far and I certainly cannot wait to see what unfolds from here! More adventures await!" Explanation: I concluded the review on a positive and encouraging note, expressing my overall love for the story and building excitement for future chapters.

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thewatcher727 · 17 days

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Writing A Review Tip: Discuss Various Aspects In Your Review

Address different elements like character portrayal, atmosphere, tone, writing style, and errors.

Writing style: How does the author write? Example: "Your writing style creates a vivid atmosphere, but I noticed a few typos that could be fixed for a smoother read."

Pacing: Comment on the flow of the story. Is it too fast, too slow, or just right? Example: "The pacing in the middle section felt a bit rushed; consider allowing some scenes to breathe for better impact."

Dialogue: Evaluate the quality of dialogue. Is it natural, engaging, and does it contribute to character development? Example: "The dialogue between characters felt authentic, capturing their personalities well."

Plot Development: Share thoughts on how well the plot unfolds. Are there unexpected twists or does it follow a predictable path? Example: "The plot twists were captivating, keeping me hooked throughout."

Character development: Assess the evolution of characters throughout the story. Do they undergo meaningful changes or remain static? Example: "The protagonist's growth from a timid individual to a confident leader was well-executed, adding depth to the narrative."

Emotional resonance: Reflect on the emotional impact of the story. Did it evoke any strong feelings or leave a lasting impression? Example: "The poignant moments of loss and redemption resonated deeply with me, adding emotional depth to the storyline."

Symbolism: Analyze any symbolic elements present in the narrative and their significance. Example: "The recurring motif of the lighthouse symbolized hope and guidance, enriching the thematic layers of the story."

Narrative structure: Evaluate the organization and coherence of the storyline. Does the narrative flow smoothly, or are there disjointed elements? Example: "The non-linear narrative structure added an element of intrigue, although it occasionally led to confusion in certain segments."

Character relationships: Examine the dynamics between characters and the impact on the story's progression. Example: "The complex interplay between the protagonist and antagonist added tension and complexity to the plot, driving the narrative forward."

Moral ambiguity: Discuss any ethical dilemmas or gray areas presented in the story. Example: "The exploration of moral ambiguity challenged conventional notions of right and wrong, provoking thought and discussion."

Foreshadowing: Comment on the effectiveness of foreshadowing in hinting at future events or revelations. Example: "The subtle foreshadowing throughout the narrative added layers of anticipation, rewarding attentive readers with satisfying payoffs."

World-building: For genres like fantasy or science fiction, discuss the effectiveness of world-building. Example: "The world you've created is imaginative and immersive, providing a unique backdrop for the story."

Themes: Explore any underlying themes or messages in the story. Example: "The exploration of friendship as a central theme added depth and relatability to the narrative."

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thewatcher727 · 18 days

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Sonic X: Gotta Go Fast Again - Chapter 2: Parting Ways, New Beginnings

Sonic X: Gotta Go Fast again is a thrilling continuation of the beloved anime, promising action-packed escapades and heartwarming moments as our heroes embark on their next chapter! Available for Reading on AO3 & FF!

FanFiction: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14344080/2/Sonic-X-Gotta-Go-Fast-Again

Archive of Our Own: https://archiveofourown.org/works/54991219/chapters/139910845

Preview:

In the soft morning light, as the sun began to cast its golden hues across the landscape, Sonic watched from the outskirts of the woods as Chris made his way toward Eggman's newly constructed ship. His keen ears picked up snippets of the conversation between Chris and the doctor, though the scientific jargon meant little to him. What he did understand, however, was that this was a one-time opportunity for Chris to return to his own world.

As Chris boarded the ship, Sonic's heart felt heavy. He knew he should have raced forward, bid his friend a proper farewell, and maybe even shared a grin or a thumbs-up to reassure him. But deep down, Sonic understood the gravity of the situation. If he were to approach, to let his emotions run free, it might make Chris hesitate, and that wasn't something Sonic could bear.

So, with remarkable restraint, Sonic made a silent promise to himself to show his goodbye in his own unique way. As the ship's engines roared to life and it began to ascend into the sky, Sonic sprang into action. His cobalt form raced alongside the ship, his eyes locking with Chris's through the small window.

At that moment, time seemed to slow down. Sonic's emerald eyes held warmth and reassurance, his trademark grin touching his lips. "I'll be seein' ya, Chris!" he called out, his voice carrying through the thin barrier of the ship's hull, reaching Chris's ears.

Their gazes remained locked, filled with a multitude of unspoken words. Sonic's farewell was not just a simple goodbye; it was a promise of future reunions, of adventures to come, and the unbreakable bond between them. In those fleeting seconds, the message was conveyed, understood, and treasured.

A wistful smile graced Chris's lips, a delicate veil of melancholy shrouding his eyes. It dawned upon him that this ephemeral moment marked the likely conclusion of his encounters with Sonic, his best friend. Yet, an unusual serenity draped over him, veiling the sorrow that lurked within. The yearning to linger in Sonic's animated company had dissipated, replaced by the solace found in the kaleidoscope of splendid memories they had woven together.

As his vessel ascended, piercing the ethereal realm of clouds, Sonic diminished into a mere azure speck amid the sprawling expanse of nature. The cosmic canvas held their final tableau. It was at this poignant juncture, where the sky embraced the earth, that Chris chose to articulate his silent farewell.

"See you, Sonic."

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thewatcher727 · 18 days

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Writing A Review Tip: Even If There Were Several Negatives, Focus On The Positive Aspects Too

While providing constructive feedback, don't forget to highlight the strengths and positive aspects of the story. It encourages the writer and helps them understand what's working well. Example: "Your vivid descriptions really brought the setting to life, creating a strong sense of atmosphere. Keep up the excellent imagery!"

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Silver’s desire for peace (as symbolized by maple leaf 🍁 shape to his quills) seems to be fueled by empathy he has for the world and people in it. Silver’s feelings reflect the environment and those around him as it has been noted that:

The blue sky makes Silver feel at peace

He can’t help but smile when he sees smiling faces and wants to become a hero because it means being someone that can protect smiles

Silver denotes his good futures as happy ones or ones where people have a smile

Silver will drop his mission to help those in need, he simply can’t say no to a sad face as he helps Amy and takes a job as a delivery boy because of this

Natural beauty, flourishing environments or just places where people are prospering and living peacefully take his breath away

Desolate or destroyed environments sadden and upset him

He cannot stand the suffering of the people in his bad futures

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Writing A Review Tip: Offer Solutions, Not Just Critiques

If you point out a problem, suggest a potential solution to guide improvement. Example: "The transition between scenes felt abrupt; consider adding a smoother segue or a transitional sentence."

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Despite only making cameo appearances in the game itself, E-123 Omega and Big the Cat appear as attendees of Sonic the Hedgehog's birthday party in the Sonic Generations (2011) manga.

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thewatcher727 · 20 days

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Writing A Review Tip: Be Specific With Examples

Instead of general statements, provide specific examples to support your feedback. Example: Instead of saying, "The characters are interesting," say, "I found the backstory of the protagonist particularly intriguing, such as when…"

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thewatcher727 · 21 days

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Writing A Review Tip: Don't Be Offended If Your Feedback Isn't Taken

Writers may choose not to implement every suggestion. Be open-minded and respect their creative decisions. Example: "I would suggest trying to make the story more lighthearted, but if it doesn't fit your darker vision, that's completely fine."

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thewatcher727 · 22 days

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Dimension duo

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Writing A Review Tip: Explaining Likes Or Dislikes

When sharing your opinions, give specific details on what you enjoyed or didn't like. Example: Instead of just saying, "I dislike the ending," explain, "The ending felt abrupt; providing more closure would make it more satisfying."

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thewatcher727 · 23 days

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Writing A Review Tip: Clarify How Feedback Benefits The Story

Take time to clarify how your feedback can improve the overall quality of their work. Example: "More dialogue could enhance character interactions and make the plot more dynamic."

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