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#I was sooooo patient trying to capture this
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shaunamilfman · 5 months
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Jackie can’t handle herself when she gets the slightest bit horny. If she wakes up from a single wet dream, she needs you immediately, even if its 4 am and you’re asleep next to her, she will scoot right next to you and straddle your leg, slowly trying to start waking you up. She’ll start with slow kisses on your lips, cheek, and jawline but as she gets more impatient she’ll move to sucking hickeys onto your neck while grinding herself down onto your leg to get a little bit of friction going. When you finally wake up, you’re confused cause it’s pitch black, you feel some weight on your leg and all you can hear are Jackie’s little pants of breath. You start to slowly realize the situation as Jackie takes notice that you’re finally awake. She says “Thank god you’re finally up, please just—” she’s so desperate at this point that she grabs your hand and puts the in her pajama shorts that she’s already soaked through. If you even take a second too long to process, she’s already rocking herself on your fingers because she’s already been “sooooo patient” and she couldn’t wait anymore. She’ll remove her hand from her own shorts and grab your shoulder for leverage, and she’s clutching so hard that there are going to be nail marks on your shoulder and back. She’ll keep leaning down to capture your lips in a kiss that has her moaning in the back of her throat. And she’s definitely a little bossy because of how worked up she is, she’ll move your other hand to wherever she wants it and holds it in place there, on her waist, her neck, her chest. While she holds your hand against her. it sends her over the edge, her movement on your hand stutters and slows until she collapses on your chest in exhaustion. After a moment of silence between you two you ask, “Another sex dream?”, Jackie nods against your chest in response. “Okay well you’re not falling asleep now, because I’m awake, I’m sure you could take a second round.”
You both end up missing your first period of school the next morning, and half of the 2nd.
i don't have much to say im just gonna do commentary this was good as hell bro
desperately needy jackie i know that's right
poor pillow princess jackie having to do some of the work herself
i'm imagining jackies reaction to you doing that thing where your like half asleep and are like "im up im up" but fall asleep immediately. she almost cries tears of frustration
needy jackie using you to get herself off has me 😵‍💫😵‍💫
oh jackie definitely needs a second round the poor baby had to do all the work. maybe even a third one.
also im imagining her dream is something fucking ridiculous that only she would find hot. you ask her what it's about and shes just all shy about it lmaooooo. like her ass didn't wake you up with your hand down her shorts
okay okay but alsooooo. consider waking up before jackie while she's having a wet dream. you're woken up by her shifting against you in her sleep. you spooning her with one arm over her so you definitely notice as she starts moving against you. she's doing it unconsciously, groaning slightly in her sleep. thinking about slipping your hand in her shorts and not even moving it. she just starts softly shifting her hips against it as her dream gets better. her breathing quickens up as she wakes up and you just immediately start moving your hand, fucking her awake. she immediately gets all whiny, still half asleep, but she can't help but rock her hips against your hand. telling her you won't let her finish unless she tell you what she was dreaming abouttttt.
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factual-fantasy · 1 year
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Yoooo 30 asks??
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Look, I’m still working on it. I’ve made more progress on the timeline already, its probably around half way done. Just be patient and I’ll come back around to it soon.
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Ehh.. I am really not a fan. I personally don’t like ships and that specific one I have a sour taste for. Its definitely not a part of my AU. 
Of course nothing against anyone who ships it, they are fictional characters after all. I just personally am not a fan. :/
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@crazy-scary-crazy
Ah, so actually I forgot to mention in that post that I changed the 1-UP story a bit.
Originally Mario and Luigi were traveling to Bowsers castle to save Peach. At some point Mario absorbs a 1-UP mushroom after trying to pick it up. Then they encounter a gang of Koopa-troopas. One of them throws his spear and lands a lucky hit on Mario and kills him. Only for Mario to stand back up. Mario coming back to life scared them so bad that they just ran.
But I realized this would mess with the story. They would run back and tell Bowser, In which Bowser would take the Mario bros more seriously and probably send more troops after them. AND Mario would be fresh out of an extra life for the Bowser fight. 
Sooooo I changed it up a bit. Mario absorbed the 1-UP mushroom on the way to Bowsers castle. Bowser doesn’t take them seriously. He lets his guard down and kills Mario effortlessly.
Mario then gets back up.. 
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@sbuggbot​
I haven’t actually fully thought it through.. although I had an idea of them being lost and needing help. In which the toads take them in.
At some point they walk through a great garden of Power-ups. In which all of the Power-ups rise and open their eyes. They all bloom, stand up, and glow. All presenting themselves and making themselves visible to the hosts.
This happens in front of Toadsworth. He knew right then that they were the hero's of prophesy.
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I was when I was a kid! Man I must have made 100s of Sonic OCs back in the day.
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The idea I’m leaning towards is that Bowser wants Peach, AND Daisy’s land. Because their kingdoms sit on sturdy, plentiful land and it grows Power-Ups naturally. Meanwhile Bowsers kingdom is kind of a disaster..
Now the reason why Bowser doesn’t just mow them over with his troops, is because Peach and Daisy’s kingdoms stand together. He is greatly outnumbered, its 2 kingdoms against 1. He was only recently able to capture Peach and break this security that they’ve had for decades. He really thought he finally had the upper hand..
Well, that was until Mario showed up and ruined everything.
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I think that would be alright. I’m sure you know the line between copying and inspiration. Just don’t cross the line and you should be golden!
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@kaleschmidt
YES! Well, sort of.
The reason why they closed their eyes is because Luigi already had an Ice flower within him. So he was not an available host. And Mario in that moment was, well, dead. He did not register as an available host to expel their power.
So they just, shut their eyes. Waiting for a new host to appear...
Which is 15 seconds later when Mario wakes back up-
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@ardent-38 
Thank you! Also that’s an awesome idea!
Yes, the Power-ups do react to the Bros emotions. Which means no matter which one he’s using, Luigi’s powers tend to fly out of control due to his anxiety.. I don’t think there’s any Power-Up that helps Luigi keep his anxiety in check, but the ice flower is probably less explosive then the fire flower <XD  
And yeah! Mario is better at managing his powers because he’s really good at suppressing his feelings. Although that doesn’t mean they wont react at all. Any spike of adrenaline, any slowly boiling anger, the Power-Ups will respond..
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@kb2397
Actually, the Fire/Ice flowers are one of the only Power-Ups that don’t wear off overtime. :0 You have to use all of its power in order for it to go away.
Although the Super Shroom? Yes, it goes away either once you’ve used it all, you get hit really hard by something, or you’ve had it for an expended period of time.
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AAAA THANK YOUUU!!! :DDDD
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YES! That’s the first time she’s seeing Mario. And BOY was he scary! <XD He legit DIES, and then COMES BACK TO LIFE, and THEN, threatens BOWSERS LIFE.
He real spooky :0
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 In the AU as far as I’ve planned, sadly Mario doesn’t actually kill Bowser. Although he really wants to.
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@miss-cushion-corner 
Ooooooorrr, I could just make things angsty with no happy ending because I like angsty things! :D
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@milk-powrit
Both! I wanted to make Bowser seem more dragon like instead of turtle like. And I also wanted him to be more royal and greedy looking.
Actually, his design was kind’a rushed.. he was supposed to have a crown and a lot more colorful jewelry. Buuut I just wanted to make the comic soo... he doesn’t look as cool as he could have :/
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@ghostii-cannot-be-found-404​
Thank you! :DD But also uh, The comic is unfinished if that’s what you mean- the last post probably says “next part here! :)” and then I never finished it :/
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They are not twins, :/ Mario is the older brother by like a year and a half or so. :}
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FireAlpaca! :D
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Thank you! And yes! Wario, Waluigi and Rosalina are all in this AU! :D
Rosalina actually has a fleshed out story and a comic planned. But BOY would her comic take forever to makeee... uhggg... just thinking about all the coloring that would take makes me tired.
And as for Wario and Waluigi, oh yeah they exist. But I don’t quite know how to fit them into the story yet.. I have a couple ideas but I want something bigger for them. I want to make Wario and Waluigi important. So they don’t really have any story planned out yet.. :/
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@i-only-created-this-to-read​
1: I actually didn’t know Magmaargh were a thing! So I didn’t put them in my AU-
2: Sadly no, Mario does not get his own castle <XD
3: Wario and Waluigi are not human, although they are brothers. They are a very tall and strange species of critter that looks like a human, but not quite. Peach, Daisy, and Rosalina are actually the same species as Wario and Waluigi. Although they don’t look as grotesque as the Wario bros do..
4: No, Peach doesn’t have a whole castle dedicated to paintings, although there could be an art museum somewhere in her castle halls or in the kingdom itself :0
5: XD No Wario is not immortal, although that would be really funny-
6: Heck NO! XD Sure Wario is pretty strong, but his strength no where NEAR rivals Bowsers ands ESPECIALLY not Donkey Kongs! Sorry Wario but you’ve been out matched-
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@retro-system​
Mario and Luigi can only absorb one Power-up at a time, an exception being the 1-up mushroom. Of which they can have multiple.
If Mario tried to grab a Fire Flower and an Ice Flower at the same time, one of the flowers would be absorbed into Mario and the other one would close its eyes.
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That’s about right actually. My Bowser is cruel and evil, but he’s not totally black and white. There’s a heart in there somewhere.. and although he isn’t the best at showing it, he does care about his kids. And he puts their wellbeing above his own, and above his own kingdoms, every time. with no exceptions.
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@spookycolorooooo​
Their life system works like it does in the games. Find 5 1-up mushrooms? You have 5 more lives! You die 6 times? Game over..
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@dongpuncher-666​
Nah, Luigi was so anxious that be burned through all its power within like 2 hours. It wasn’t in his system long enough to do any harm thankfully.
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I didn’t write him into this AU, although that isn’t to say he doesn't exist. Maybe he’s living off in some far away kingdom as the royal scientist or something XD
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1: The Boos are free to leave the mansion as they please. In fact some of them freely roam the forest instead of staying cooped up in the mansion. So sometimes yes, if you’re really fun to mess with they’ll chase you out into the forest a little ways. Although they don’t tend to actually leave the forest.
2: “Oh my gosh there’s TWO of me- Oh my gosh I’m tiny- Oh my gosh I’m a raccoon- oh my gosh I’m a lion- Oh m-”
3: They’re probably a lil spooked by these giant mushroom people. But overall they think they’re chill. 
4: That’s a good question! I thought that maybe they think this Yoshi is crazy for leaving the safety of their island for these people. But some of them think “He left the safety of this island for those people.. they must be something special..” and might have even considered following him.
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That’s alright, you can give Calico Jack a coat because you were inspired by mine, but you gotta design your own jacket! <XD
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@yourlocalartperson
Honestly, you’ve probably heard this before, but just draw it again. And again, and again.
The first time I try to draw something it comes out looking kind’a garbo. But I look at the drawing, note what I didn’t like, and draw it differently next time.
After drawing it again, it’s bound to look better. Even if it doesn’t that’s okay! Just take notes, and draw it again.
If you’re struggling on how to draw a specific part of something, try looking at how other artists draw that thing if you can. Maybe take inspiration from them and try drawing it that way!
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The weird mushroom? No that’s creepy <XD
The Super hammer? Hmm.. I’m not sure..
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I haven’t gone into too much depth with Peach and Daisy, although I know that Peach is very classy and lady like. While Daisy acts classy for her kingdom, but she’s a real crazy person on the inside. She’s loud, rowdy, and isn’t afraid to get dirty.
This is probably really close to canon, but what’s been changed is mostly how Daisy feels about it. Daisy is jealous that she cant be perfect like her friend Peach, and she’s embarrassed that’s she like this on the inside..
Also yes! Peach and Daisy always comment on Mario and Luigi’s “cute” rounded ears. While Mario and Luigi low-key kind’a wish they could have cool elf ears too-
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lunaralight09 · 3 years
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SFW Alphabet - SCP 049
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A = Affection (How affectionate are they? How do they show affection?)
Very affectionate . If you're near him he will hug you/hold your hand . He can't help himself . But in public he will only hold your hand . And only ... Oh you like him to hug you  in public too ? No problem my dear !
B = Best friend (What would they be like as a best friend? How would the friendship start?)
He's uhhhhhh ... I don't know how should I call type of friend . Well he basically a listener . You can tell him any secret/insecurities . He won't tell anybody . And he will die with this secrets , sooooooooo don't worry about telling him anything .
C = Cuddles (Do they like to cuddle? How would they cuddle?)
Ohhhhhh he likes that . He WILL put his head on your neck and wrap his arms around you . Like 'Honeymoon hug' . It look's like this :
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D = Domestic (Do they want to settle down? How are they at cooking and cleaning?)
He need sometime for him to settle down with you . And he CAN cook , but ... firstly he need to learn how to cook . Expect to see cooking books in kitchen . And he will clean house . If you ask him . He'll do it . But not every time .
E = Ending (If they had to break up with their partner, how would they do it?)
... Well . He will say it straight . But he'll try not to upset you . He don't like to see you cry/get angry/just stare at him with cold expression . Oh and he will give you something .
F = Fiancé(e) (How do they feel about commitment? How quick would they want to get married?)
He will be commitment with you . But he need sometime for his to marry you . He need to warm up to you , and wants you to warm up to him and Lexie . Soooo ... Lexie will be like :
"Then you will be my actual parent Y/n ? I mean then daddy gonna marry you ! Uhhhh what's wrong ?"
G = Gentle (How gentle are they, both physically and emotionally?)
He's softie . Giant softie . All the time people didn't want to be around him . He had only Lexie . One of his family member . And Jay ... He didn't see him for sooooo long time .(He's in Site 19 and 049-j is in Site 17). He will be really gentle with you . And will listen to any problem you have and even try to make you happy and stop being insecure about it .
H = Hugs (Do they like hugs? How often do they do it? What are their hugs like?)
He LOVES hugs . No matter what ... he won't hurt you . You want hug ? Get ready for long hug in your life . If you want to go in any room in home . You will be just like this :
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I = I love you (How fast do they say the L-word?)
Very soon . When you start dating expect to hear it next day . What's the pint of waiting to say it ? If he gets a chance , he will do what he needs to .
J = Jealousy (How jealous do they get? What do they do when they're jealous?)
Oh god . If someone is flirting with you and making you uncomfortable ... He will 'talk' with that person . And then lead him/her away from you aaaaaaannnnnnddddd ... You will never see them again . NEVER EVER AGAIN .
K = Kisses (What are their kisses like? Where do they like to kiss you? Where do they like to be kissed?)
Welp : they are soft and sweet . He likes to ... let you know that you're loved . No matter what situation is .
L = Little ones (How are they around children?)
Well . He's good father . Cause he's like ... from 16th century . And he lives with Lexie ... Uhhhhh ... 5 centuries . And he's good with other kids . It's not the first time he see other kids . He saw Abbie , Stella , Victoria , Evolution and Sigurrós (Abbie - 053 , Stella - 134 , Victoria - 191 , Evolution - 040 , Sigurrós - 239 . Welp 040's real name for me is unknown so I named her : Evolution .)
M = Morning (How are mornings spent with them?)
He can wake up early to cure new patients . And he will leave note so you won't panic (WHERE THE F- DID HE GO- Ohhhh . He left a note- ) Or Lexie say to you that Doc left for curing people .
N = Night (How are nights spent with them?)
Ohhhhh . He will read Lexie a book (Maybe you will sit there listening to him). Then she fell asleep he will just cuddle with you . He don't care .
O = Open (When would they start revealing things about themselves? Do they say everything all at once or wait a while to reveal things slowly?)
Well he need sometime for telling his secrets . And he needed 2 days for telling his name . And some of his past .
P = Patience (How easily angered are they?)
Not easily angered . And don't want to hurt you ... So he just leave home for a walk so he won't accidently hurt you .
Q = Quizzes (How much would they remember about you? Do they remember every little detail you mention in passing, or do they kind of forget everything?)
He remember everything you said . EVERY SINGLE little detail you mentioned to him .
R = Remember (What is their favorite moment in your relationship?)
First kiss . It's his favorite moment and he loves that you met Lexie and she liked you ! Happy Doc .
S = Security (How protective are they? How would they protect you? How would they like to be protected?)
He's extremely protective . Someone hurt you ? Don't worry he will deal with them . And you won't see them anymore !
T = Try (How much effort would they put into dates, anniversaries, gifts, everyday tasks?)
He try his best . Welp . He will take victi- I mean patients things for you ...
U = Ugly (What would be some bad habits of theirs?)
... Ahem ahem ... ✨CURING PEOPLE✨
V = Vanity (How concerned are they with their looks?)
UHHHHH . Not really concerned . He mostly wears black clothes . And I mean he almost every time wears his robe and mask . He doesn't really wear his mask at home .
W = Whole (Would they feel incomplete without you?)
... Very incomplete . HE IS DIFFERENT WITHOUT YOU . DON'T LET HIM SEE HUMANS .
X = Xtra (A random headcanon for them.)
He almost every time write in his diary or read books . It was thig that he did before foundation captured him . And even Foundation don't know about Lexie . Cause he know what Foundation staff can start doing . EXPERIMENTS...
Y = Yuck (What are some things they wouldn't like, either in general or in a partner?)
Hurting other people . (I think in his mind he DO NOT kill or hurt people . In his mind he help people . He CURE them from pestilence . Disease that he can only see/feel .) He don't understand why people say that he's a murderer . He helps them !
Z= Zzz (What is a sleep habits of theirs?)
Hug you before you two are going to bed . No really . Nothing can stop him from doing it . Even if you already asleep . He will hug you and wish you a goodnight .
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chdarling-tle · 3 years
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Hello! I just finished reading TLE1 so naturally I had to come gush about it into your inbox. First of all, I’m truly sorry, this is going to be long. With the story’s growing popularity I assume that you get a lot of messages and comments like this so I genuinely apologise for bothering you and don’t feel obliged to respond but I simply must try to express all my emotions. I wanted to thank you for the rollercoaster of emotions you’ve put me through over the last few days as I binged your 1/7
story. I’ve been reading Marauders fics for 14 years and I’m such a canon whore, I can’t even enjoy a good old AU anymore. Unique canon compliant fics are so scarce these days, so the fact that you managed to capture the Marauders & co’s characterisation and dynamic so accurately and perfectly while telling an utterly engaging and captivating story … I really have no words. BOWING DOWN TO YOU, QUEEN. I thought that no matter how many other fics I read, none of them can mend my TLAT 2/7
induced heartbreak over the lack of closure of that story, but I think I finally found a worthy successor. I’m rambling because I cannot coherently express how much I loved TLE. I was trying to explain to my very patient irl friends that what absolutely obliterates me about it is your inclusion of the small details and character moments from the books, and developing them into intricate plotlines and complex, nuanced character backstories. I just can’t get over how well you handled it. 3/7
I was making so many notes and highlights when reading TLE. And the clever little canon Easter eggs (“she hates me now!” ”nah, she doesn’t”, “you see the best in people even when the others don’t” and countless others), again, I have no WORDS. The way you handled Sirius and his family, Remus’s little furry problem, the prank, the fallout and Snape’s worst memory fitting it into JKR’s weird chronology of events... James’s anger at Snape, Snape’s anger at Lily, Sirius’s rage and resentment, 4/7
it all makes such perfect sense… don’t even get me started on the Animagi plotline… Sorry I can’t form coherent sentences, I’m basically clutching my pearls (if I had any) and shouting at my laptop. Your prose is beautiful, your attention to detail immensely appreciated and your characterisation absolutely spot on. All the plotlines flowed so naturally and have I mentioned how you managed to construct a whole fucking book around canon tidbits without any convoluted plotlines??? 5/7
AND THE FORESHADOWING. Like connecting Peter’s failed transformation with Hogwarts plumbing (lol) which will lead to the map making ahhhhh HOW ARE YOU SUCH A GENIUS. I ABSOLUTELY CANNOT WAIT to see what you do with the Map making process, invisibility cloak, JILY OMG!!!! You gave us such a cute crush and delicious angst already! And the war years, I bet you’ll annihilate anything left of my heart.What I’m trying to say I’m your massive fan and will be eagerly anticipating anything you write. 6/7
Thank you so so so so sooooo much for putting so much time and effort into this project, I truly cannot form into words how much it means to me and undoubtedly hundreds - if not thousands - of other fans of these characters. I’m sure this story will become huge in the fandom. SENDING ONLY LOVE, COOKIES, SUNSHINE AND RAINBOWS YOUR WAY! <3 i'm so sorry for word vomiting this rant into your inbox 7/7
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ok I’m legit crying 😭😭😭😭
First of all, please do not feel the need to apologize for bothering me or for leaving a long message oh my goodness. This was truly the loveliest thing to read this evening. I SO appreciate you taking the time to not only read my story but share your thoughts and reactions with me!! I am thrilled that you enjoyed book one and I am very much looking forward to annihilating your heart in the future. 😉
Seriously, thank you for this incredibly kind message. I have been in Writer Despair Mode™ all week, so I can’t begin to describe how much opening Tumblr and finding these lovely messages means to me. You keep me going on days like today when I am debating just throwing my laptop into the pond and starting a new life… 😂
So much love to you ❤️❤️❤️
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lululawrence · 5 years
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Hey! Have you read any good abo fics recently?
ahehehehehe okay, so, i put this off until now because i needed to be able to look at a few things. so, by recently i am taking that to mean since i last did an a/b/o fic rec, which apparently was june of last year (and january before that). that’s far too long ago, meaning this rec is going to have about 30 fics on it. hahahaha i’m putting them in no particular order other than the order i bookmarked them in, meaning most recent bookmarks will be last, so if june of last year wasn’t recent enough, you’ll wanna scroll a bit. :D
I have also written two more a/b/o fics since my last rec, so i’ll start with a bit of self promo and then start lauding the work of others (hope you don’t mind)
The World Will Open Its Arms - this one is actually one of my more popular fics from last year, which i wasn’t expecting at all. haha my entire goal for this fic was to take a feeling i got while listening to a song on a random drive to take my daughter to her ice skating camp and capture it in a fic. i think i did, and i love the little bit of insight we get into their lives with this one. pregnant and unbonded omega harry, alpha louis. :)
How I Feel Inside - i wrote this one also for wordplay, and while there’s omega harry and alpha louis in there, the real focus of the fic is the fact that niall is missing. you find out why at the end, so i’ll try not to give it away, but i did it kinda as a gag and a joke and loved it so i hope you enjoy it too hahaha
okay! and now to the rest. Let’s do this.
Take What's Mine by @jaerie / jaerieall i’m really gonna say about this one is i first read it as a dark fic read and then she took it off anon so i figured if she was brave enough to say she wrote it then i was brave enough to say i loved it haha so here we are. it’s a bit of a dark fic but is ultimately healing and beautiful imo.
was it all a fake? by @jaerie / jaerieso this is a fic i didn’t realize she was gonna publicly gift to me and i asked for it, so fair enough, but i love it. i love it and it’s not everyone’s cup of tea, so please, like with the fic before, check the tags (i feel like this rec isn’t starting well with me warning about things before people read them, but i really do love these hahaha)
These Lover's Eyes by chasingxrabbitswhat i love most about this fic is it’s a pack fic. i feel like packs are something that used to be explored more in older a/b/o fics in the fandom but that it is often ignored unless it’s in the almost tribal sense of packs, and this is very different. like the summary literally reads “A/B/O verse where Liam is an alpha, Josh, Niall, Louis, and Harry are his betas and an unlikely little omega stumbles into the picture.” and i can’t really say much more than that, but i love it so much. haha so if you’re looking for a totally different dynamic to this verse, this older fic will defo give you that. (if someone also wants to kind of explore this idea and dynamic in their own ways as well, please tag me when you post lol)
hard to confess by @hereforlou / hereforlouACCIDENTAL MPREG! gosh i love fics like this so much and they did this one really well. accidental mpreg with assumptions made that might not be entirely correct and friends to lovers and just SO MUCH GOODNESS OKAY
Desire A/B/o series by @reminiscingintherain / reminiscingintherainthis series is an established relationship, somewhat canon compliant a/b/o series that was such fun to read. super fluffy, super sweet, super cute. basically, if the dark fics i kinda started this rec with aren’t your thing, this probably is. lol
I'm Sure It Happens To All Alphas by @jaerie / jaerieALPHA. LOUIS. HAS TROUBLE. POPPING A KNOT. gosh i died reading this fic. i love it so much. she works her magic, as usual, and does it in style.
The Wilds by @jaerie / jaerieThis fic was just. it was wow. it was such an interesting world for things to take place in and fascinating how it all played out. there are quite a few sensitive subjects that this does broach, so while i wouldn’t necessarily say it is a dark fic, you do need to be sensitive to the tags, so please be careful with those!
You Gotta Swim, Swim For Your Life series by @jaerie / jaeriei swear i do read a/b/o that isn’t done by jenna. lollll but this series is so good. it’s a really incredible fic that takes you through harry’s journey with grief and illness and all sorts of things, so if that’s triggering for you, then please don’t read this, but it’s so so so beautifully done. the emotions in this series are gorgeous.
Where You Lay by @ham-palpert / HamPalpertTHIS FIIIIIIC! gosh it’s a perceived enemies to friends with benefits to lovers fic but there’s such a journey along the way. it’s so so so amazing. it ended and i just felt so complete. hahaha it’s one of those fics. so yeah, love love love.
The Nearness of You by @louisalbumnow / theweightofmywordsTHIS FIC. the nesting in this fic! the description and emotions and just ALL OF IT. it’s just gold. in a 2k wrapper. it’s amazing. i don’t even have words just read it.
One Love by @13ways-of-looking / 13waysthis fic is SO EMOTIONAL. it hit me hard and was another one of those that packs a lot into few words. it was so interesting and a really fascinating world and just. yeah. it’s a great read!
I'll Take Care Of You by @dimpled-halo / dimpled_halojacky wrote me a part 2 of my fic for my birthday! she wrote the part 1 for my birthday too, so i guess she loves me a lot if she was willing to revisit it and write me some more. i love this ‘verse so much, though. the throw back to high school/college like it’s done here is so pure and complex and i love it.
I Know How To Whisk (But Teach Me Anyway) by @2tiedships2 / 2tiedships2mel comes and delivers another great a/b/o fic! i love how she always ties in the idea of soulmates with her fics. and this one is so fun and i love that it entirely revolves around an obsession with a bakery hahaha a great read, as always!
Alpha Seeking Alpha by @jaerie / jaerieOKAY OKAY OKAY. i love this one too. gosh i say that about everyone of these, don’t i? i suppose it’s a fic rec so i would hope i love them all but i’m not thinking well tonight so all you’re getting is read this cause i love it but like ALPHA/ALPHA THROUGH A SERVICE AND JUST AAAHHHHHHH
I Wanna Be More Than Friends by @2tiedships2 / 2tiedships2this is my fav mel fic yet. i kept throwing ideas at her hoping something would stick and then she came up with something completely unique that i’d never heard of before and I LOVE IT SO MUCH. alpha harry does not have a sense of smell. OMGGGGGGGG anyway. toooootally amazing twist on the a/b/o verse.
If I Loved You Less by @allwaswell16 / allwaswell16REGENCY A/B/O!!!! did you hear me? I SAID REGENCY A/B/O!!! With side shiall! i adored this fic because even through the end i was like HOW ARE THEY GONNA MAKE THIS WORK but it does and it’s magical and so great. gosh. so so great.
The Unsuccessful Promise by trysomecatsthis fic actually just got a part 2 added recently and i only just read that part 2 last night! lol good timing, i suppose! anyway, this one is sooooo fun because it’s got feisty didn’t think he’d be an omega louis with super sweet and obviously misunderstood harry with louis’ parents being ZIAM!!! it was a fun story that i really enjoyed reading lol my fav part might have actually been zayn and liam, i loved how they were written
Moments Like These Are To Die For by @fourdrunksluts / alienharrythis is one of those fics that sucked me in and spat me out afterwards and i keep thinking about it! months later i still think about this fic. it stayed with me and i love it. it’s an arranged marriage royalty au where harry and louis are from different packs and AHHHHHHHHH i love it so so so much. PLUS!!! THERE’S AN ACE CHARACTER!!! AN ACE CHARACTER IN AN A/B/O!?!?! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! so yeah this fic means a lot to me and i love it so much so please read it.
Your Touch Is The Only Thing I Feel by @2tiedships2 / 2tiedships2mel delves into touch depri here and i love that being explored! i felt like she did it in a different way than i’d seen it in other fics too, so i really like that as well. as usual, the relationship dynamics in her fics are spot on and hysterical while also making you just love every second. 
The light is coming by @pocketsunshineharry / ishiplouislisten. i have a soft spot for hurt/comfort, especially in a/b/o, and this fic just harnesses ALL OF THAT and makes it just. i can’t. i can’t say much more but i just loved this dynamic and how much louis just needed help and the war within himself and frustration with that but harry was patient and did what he could to help and it was just so great.
It's the Most Wonderful Time of the Year series by @2tiedships2 / 2tiedships2louis and harry didn’t exactly have the best first meeting hahaha it’s okay, though, because niall is there to force them to be friends. this is a super fun christmassy/birthday style two part series that not only explores the up to the point of finding louis’ alpha, but also what comes after that. it’s a lot of fun and i loved it hehe
Do Not Falter (There's a Star Ahead) by @londonfoginacup / LadyLondonderryNESTING HARRY. NESTING OMEGA HARRY. NESTING OMEGA HARRY NEEDING A SAFE PLACE. MUTUAL PINING. CHRISTMAS EVE. AHHHHHH this fic is short and sweet and i want to sit and sink into harry’s nest. it evokes the same warmth and almost magical feel all of emmu’s fics do. i love it.
You Should Be Here With Me by @dimpled-halo / dimpled_haloexes to lovers at christmas with pining and miscommunication and bonding and ahhhhhhhhh. i don’t even know what more to say, other than jacky is queen of exes to lovers, so make it a/b/o and christmas themed and you know you’ve got gold on your hands.
Merry Birthday by @jaerie / jaerieSOULMARK A/B/O. where they don’t even realize they’ve met until afterwards so then they’ve gotta find each other again and it’s just. gosh it’s so great and it’s so much more than just a christmas fic, even though it’s that too, it extends beyond and i love it.
Let Me Feel Your Heartbeat by @angelichl / angelichli love that “louis tomlinson wears harry styles’ clothes” is a legit tag in ao3. anyway. this is another one of those tentative enemies to friends to lovers with heaps of miscommunication and pining and confusion and everything are thrown together when mating cycles come into play and i love it. gosh i love it so so much. it was a great way to kick off the new year with a/b/o haha
Leave Your Mark On Me by @fullonlarrie / FullOnLarriespeaking of kicking off the new year with some amazing a/b/o, lauren tried her hand at it and I LOVED IT. it had so many twists i did not anticipate and i loved it so much. it was as wonderfully written as hers always are and with her signature humor and feelings and development and i adored it.
so that’s what i’ve got for you! i hope you find some on here that you haven’t read yet and that you like them as much as i did! hit me up again in another six months and i’ll see what i can do with another a/b/o rec update hehehe
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aelaer · 5 years
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Tagged: All about me and fanfic
Thank you for tagging me @dragonnan! My fan fic history is a long one... and in three fandoms. Which is why most of this will be under a cut for anyone who has a lot of time to waste. And is morbidly curious. But there’s some (okay, dozens) of fanfic recs for three fandoms under there too, sooooo.
Tagging at the top so you don’t have to read my verbose-ness if you don’t want to: @amethyst-noir @cairistiona7 @mdcbd @phierie if you’re interested in giving it a shot :)
1. At what age did you start writing fanfiction?
13. You can still find my earliest works online, too; I kept up anything that wasn't completely deplorable (though fanfiction.net deleted my stupidly popular, several hundred reviews of a story I did in 2004 because it was script format. The bastards xD Popular with all the little kids).
2. Who is your favorite author?
Lmaooooo what a question. Okay so for three fandoms. The big thing that’s common between all my favorite authors is that romance is not a primary genre with any of these writers. So if you like gen (of all genres) you’ve come to the right post.
If anyone here is a LOTR book fan (especially Aragorn), let me direct you to storiesofarda.com. It’s an old site, not even mobile friendly. Anyway, go read the works of Cairistiona and Meckinock. If you're more into hobbits and anything fluffy, go read Shirebound. That I remember their names since I was last active in fanfic in LOTR in 2011 speaks to their quality. I've had the honor of meeting Shirebound several times in real life as well, this last time in New York back in April after several years apart (though I'd like to meet Cair one day for sure, as well). I had a lot of favorites years ago but I’d need to reread the old stuff to see what still lives up to my expectations.
Scanning my favorites in Sherlock, Jolie Black , CaffeineKitty, and hollyesque on AO3. Stillwaters1, chappysmom, Radon65, and Morgan Stuart from fanfiction.net. But I have a couple favorite stories from authors who only wrote a couple fics (below).
Now the MCU (okay basically Doctor Strange, let’s be honest), on AO3: Grim Revolution and merrywil (the latter is pretty new and needs a hell lot more attention, she is a great writer). I love those long, introspective character one shots. There's not a lot of authors who don't focus on romance in the MCU with Stephen as a main character -- indeed, it’s partially nonexistent -- so shorter list. ElenaCee wrote some great stories just after the first film but has sadly moved onto other fandoms.
Dragonnan on AO3 is currently my favourite whump writer. Two of my fandoms and lots of my favorite tropes. I feel spoiled. My favorite romance-is-their-primary-genre writer is amethyst-noir for her characterization of Stephen combined with the oh-so-fun (for us) scenarios.
3. Favorite type of scene to write?
I can usually tickle myself quite a bit when I get some really great situational comedy into a story. I can never be fully an angst/whump writer because I adore comedy. So yeah, situational comedy for sure.
4. What is your favorite fanfic?
Stop asking me these questions ahhh. Okay so I'll be mentioning fanfics not by any of the authors listed above (which are in my most favorite stories too but, well, their works are all favorites anyway. Just look at all their works in said fandom for more favorites if you’re lacking reading material and have similar tastes. And once you’re done reading all the works by those authors, come back here for more. Seriously, read the authors above).
I listed these fics in alphabetical order because that seemed most fair.
LOTR (Most are book-verse. I need to reread a lot of these. Most of these authors have several works for the fandom, though I think each of these particular stories have Aragorn as a primary character):
A Proper Course of Action by GadFlyGirl (absolutely hilarious one-shot after Helm’s Deep about ‘the Denethor situation’)
Across the Years by MistyC (a very creative and well-written story that spins an old cliche in a much more interesting way)
Butterbur and the King by Eledhwen (fantastic character one-shot from one of my favorite minor characters)
Conversations with the King by athelas63 (great characterizations, good healing scenes)
Conversion by Pentangle-linnon (for everyone who says that first person can’t be done in fanfic - read this one-shot, then tell me what you think now. A work of pure brilliance)
Crossroads of Light and Shadow by Mirach (this one I recommend simply for the creativity alone; the art she was able to execute with the text in flipping fanfiction.net is really mind-boggling. Very creative!)
Doomed to Live by fliewatuet (it was never completed, but it’s so freaking good that I am putting it here anyway)
For Every Evil by Mirrordance (fantastic modern incarnation AU that spun out into a series)
Greet the Dawn by Neoinean (a great, very long long-shot with two characters meeting and it’s just a great combination of humor and angst. More great characterization)
Helping Strangers by Imaginigma (fantastic one-shot, really interesting OCs, a wonderful scenario)
In Shadow Realm by Legolass Q (original concept, well-developed characters, engaging plot, truly magnificent)
Light Fingers by Aearwen22 (I think this is the only fic here that doesn’t star Aragorn- he’s a pretty minor character. Brilliant brilliant characterizations of the OCs and a look of a part of society often ignored in LOTR fan fic)
Pale-Faced Tark by Carafinwe (everything by this author is brilliant, but the visceral imagery she managed to capture in two short chapters here still blows my mind)
The Patient by Scribe (another fantastic modern incarnation AU that spun out into a series)
Ransom by MP brennan (man I just continue to see how much the LOTR fandom completely spoiled me with all of these brilliant, plotty fics. Another original concept with brilliant OCs and fantastic execution)
Shattered Stones by MCat711 (a very creepy, original, well-executed one shot that keeps you guessing the whole way through)
The Weight of Power by Nefhiriel (does it follow canon as established by the Appendices? No. Do I care? No. The story’s absolutely fantastic and makes those small discrepancies mean nothing. This was also the first story I ever drew fan art for. I then made something for Shirebound a year later, then didn’t make anything again until that Ebony Maw piece I posted a bit back)
With Hope and Without Hope by docmon (AU scenario in that the Three Hunters are captured while trying to rescue the Hobbits. Very well-thought out and compelling plot, fantastic characterizations all around)
Sherlock:
Annie’s Song by Berouge (One of the only romantic-leaning fics listed here [Sherlolly], but that is due to its excellent characterization and execution. Creative one-shot.)
The Case of the Missing Bus Ticket by Unsentimentalf (I think I burst a rib laughing to this story. Long one-shot. Situational humor at its finest)
Constantly by thesignofserbia (great one shot concerning Serbia)
Drowning by Dayja (I like a lot of her stuff. Angsty.)  
Firestorm by Dustbunny13 (This is... beyond words. So gorgeous. I adored it from beginning to end. Have read a few times. Sometimes accept it as season 3 alternate canon, it’s just fantastic)
Fortune and Bust by ThessalyMc (a wonderful gap-filler fic, very similar to a lot of my favorite authors listed above in quality and type of content)
The Green Blade by verityburns (excellent case fic)
The Holiday by Scriblit (both whumpy angst and humor and case fic? Yeeeessss. Another I’ve read several times.)
Landscape With The Fall Of Icarus by Caitlin Fairchild (another Serbia fic? Yes predictable of me)
London Orbital (another story, very long one-shot, where I burst a rib laughing)
Rigging screws, size 1 3/8 inch, galvanised by AJHall (another excellent case fic)
World Enough, and Time by StoneWingedAngel (an excellent and creative execution of a trope that you'll realize by the time you get to day three)
Doctor Strange (unless stated otherwise, they’re all one-shots. Need more multi-chapter fics... or just gen Stephen content in general):
The Architect by mudgems (a great what-if with Stephen, Loki, and the Time Stone)
Born of the Same Impulse by GwendolynStacy (WIP multi-chapter. Time stone shenanigans send Stephen and Tony back to just before Ultron and a few months after the car accident, but before Kamar-Taj [the accident happens in 2015 rather than 2016 for this to work. It’s brilliant])
Citizen Erased by Imagined (WIP multi-chapter. One of the only romance-is-a-major-genre story [ironstrange] on the list, but the plot concept is incredibly unique, the mystery is being unraveled so wonderfully well, and the collection of characters is really fantastic and in-character.)
The End of Infinity by FriendlyNeighborhoodFangirls (WIP multi-chapter. It’s canon compliant, only Stephen does a fantastic trick after canon and snatches Loki from the claws of death to go back to 2016 and fix everything. Peter, Tony also co-star. I am very much looking forward to where this goes)
Extracurricular Activities by EmptyHead (I am cheating here and linking a series. But it’s so damn creative, and while Stephen plays a big role, he’s definitely not the starring character. Synopsis is that MJ learns the mystic arts. It’s really brilliant!)
Geniuses by decotex (Stephen Strange's and Tony Stark's backstories, published before IW came out)
Hearth Sorcery by keshwyn (Another cheat here with a series of 5 one-shots, but this is too excellent and undervalued not to link. Excellent OC and world-building, highly recommend)
Holiday Magic by KarToon12 (Stephen plays Santa Claus for sick kids. It's adorable)
i hope you hold the mirror up (to show me what i chose) by CallicoKitten (Stephen and Tony being assholes to one another, published way before IW. I love it)
Like an Old Coat by ValmureEld (Could definitely see this as a follow up scene to the events in the Doctor Strange film. Great character interaction sequence)
Magic In Our Veins by Luna_Heart (the lack of Loki and Stephen interaction stories is criminal. Absolutely criminal. I want more!)
The Night’s First Watch by fathomfive (omg this is so good. So so so good. Excellent character study, I can’t recommend it enough)
of coffee and (questionable) first impressions by Phierie (Ooohh I love this alternate first meeting lots. Beat up on monsters and a coffee break after the work. Great stuff)
Project Code 131793 by StrangeMischief (Absolutely haunting and incredibly well-executed AU. I would adore to see more in this universe, it is so interesting)
Replay by INMH (the horror of Dormammu and coping with it)
You’ve Got Mail by Jadesfire (it’s about the mail situation with the Sanctum. What is not to love about that concept)
5. What tags do you avoid like the plague?
A/B/O, mpreg, not Mary friendly (for Sherlock), not Team Cap friendly, anti-Steve, anti-Wanda (or similar). Any of that anti-character bullshit, but in the MCU those are the two I see the most (and so probably make me rage the most. I once saw anti-T’Challa for instance and that just confused me more than anything). A bit of a rant in the next two paragraphs (I have Strong Feelings on this topic).
I don't tolerate the anti-character crowd. I really don't. Disliking a character is one thing and completely normal (I have my own list), but expanding time and energy to write just how much this character sucks is mind-boggling (and tends to make for really shitty fanfic. So you create a strawman villain of the character you hate for your favorite character to go against? Good job, you’ve made your favorite character appear entirely too stupid to deal with a well-developed character in conflict, and have made your favorite character 2D. Have a gold star). Your energy can be used elsewhere that isn't focused on hate. If you hate the character but aren’t creative enough to present them as anything but a strawman in your writing, don’t bother. Create an OC for your antagonist instead. Stop making canon characters so ridiculously OOC.
The real world is too filled with negativity to have it as part of a major focus in my fandom experience. It actually really, really bothers me that I cannot save a filter that automatically excludes all those anti tags as they haven’t been canonicalized on AO3. What perhaps bothers me even more is the number of kudos those hate-filled fics with incredibly OOC characters receive. The hypocrisy in this crowd is just astounding when you start pointing out the flaws in their favorite characters, too (FYI: All well-developed characters have flaws. I love Stephen Strange for his flaws. Before Stephen made his debut, Tony Stark was my favorite for similar reasons. It makes them INTERESTING).
Anyway, rant over.
6. What AU do you wish to write but feel like you won’t manage?
If I really really really want to write something, I'll write it. That said, there are things that I don't plan to write that I would adore reading (like that unfinished Stephen travels to the HP universe in Harry's fifth year fic ahhhhh I want that it would have made the 5th year so much better. Maybe if I bribe the original writer with fan art... wardmason you’re killing me).
7. Do you outline, or write as you go?
Depends. The outlines only tend to come into play for long stories with several scenes, and writing tends to happen first before outlining.
8. What has been your favorite story to write so far? Why?
Such hard questions! Uhhh I had great fun writing in my youth but I can barely remember it. Within this last year, uh... can I just say all of them? I've written about 100k in 6 months, I'm clearly enjoying myself here. I’ve had vibrant moments of delight in writing or planning several of them.
9. Do you prefer to write one-shots or multi-chapters? Why?
Both. Just depends on the story I want to tell and how long that story is saying it should be. I like posting a variety too; have one-shots coming out while I am working on the longer stories in the background.
10. What is your favorite kind of comment?
Oh those deep analytical ones that clearly took time to write. They're so lovely and really make my day. Every fanfic writer knows exactly what type of comment I am talking about.
11. Why did you start writing fanfiction? Why are you still writing?
I started because I had just seen the first Pirates of the Caribbean movie and I really liked the characters (before the sequels ruined them in various capacities) and I thought, "I should put them in Middle-earth!" 45 chapters and 7 years later that damn fic got completed (after dozens and dozens of rewrites as my writing abilities improved over the years).
Now, it's because I really enjoy writing and I like playing in copyrighted playgrounds with characters and worlds I love. Yeah, I could write an original novel, but it wouldn't be nearly as much fun.
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snowthunder · 5 years
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Salty Kisses - A Klance Beach AU - Chp 6 DELETED SCENE  :o
Hello hello!
Liv and I feel bad because chapter 7 is going to be a little bit of a longer wait, sooooo we’ve decided to release a small deleted scene that was cut from chapter 6! 
It’s a we’re-sorry-we’re-making-you-wait-so-long-please-forgive-us-and-be-patient-it’s-on-its-way-we-promise gift :D
Enjoy <3
Weekend Post-Confession Deleted Scene
The next few days were both agonizingly slow and a whirlwind. Keith kept texting Lance live updates of his “family bonding time” with Shiro, which apparently consisted of a day of shopping, filming an Instagram video for Shiro’s account, and calling their parents.
Tila Tekeithla [11:37am]
Shiro’s trying on crop tops, please save me.
Sharkboi [11:38am]
oh no what a travesty
Sharkboi [11:38am]
definitely don’t need you to send me as many pics as humanly possible
Tila Tekeithla [11:39am]
One of these days I’m going to be concerned about how attractive you find my brother.
Sharkboi [11:39am]
awwww is someone jealous????
Lance spent the long minutes waiting for Keith to respond panicking, worried that he’d pushed too far or something, but when his phone screen lit up once more with a photo notification, he breathed a sigh of relief.
That is, until he opened the message and nearly died of a stroke.
Lance was no stranger to the art of the mirror selfie, but he had to admit that Keith might very well have him beat. There in the photo, framed in by the edges of the mirror, was Keith flaunting his own crop top, the words 2 GAY 2 FUNCTION in bold across his chest, and a tantalizing strip of skin peeking out above the waistline of his shorts. Lance wasn’t sure how long he sat there staring at his phone, but when a new notification flashed at the top of his screen he already knew it had been too long.
Tila Tekeithla [11:53am]
awwww is someone embarrassed????
Sharkboi [11:54am]
no no
not embarrassed i’m just busy
studying and stuff for my research
you know
turtles
evil straws
Ocean things, you wouldn’t understand
Tila Tekeithla [11:55am]
Uh huh, sure
Lance flipped his phone over next to his textbook, resting his way too hot cheek on a fist before trying and failing to pick-up with the paragraph he had left off with. Sighing, he flipped his phone back over, swiping into his message app, and tapping on The Photo. His eyes raked over the image, taking in the slight tilt to Keith’s hips and how they accentuated the little sliver of his abs just so, the cocky smirk on his face, even the lazy peace sign he was flashing his own reflection.
Didn’t take photos of people, my ass, Lance thought. Whatever Keith’s reasoning was for that, it certainly wasn’t for lack of skill. The boy knew how to capture all the right angles.
Well, two people could play at that game.
He shoved back from his desk and marched over to mirror hanging on his closet door. He wasn’t wearing anything particularly special, just an old pair of slightly-too-small volleyball shorts and a sleeveless hoodie, but he had enough ego to admit that he looked good.
He snapped a few pictures, adjusted the lights, and snapped a few more, before he chose one and sent it off with a, just repaying the favor.
He sat back at his desk, putting his phone face down and returning to his textbook, pretending he wasn’t reading the same sentence over and over again.
His phone buzzed and Lance snatched it up at a speed that most people would find embarrassing. What he found, though, wasn’t a text from Keith but from Shiro.
Muscles [12:23pm]
I’m going to have to ask you to stop harassing my brother when we’re having Bonding Time.
Lance Sanchez (Altea) [12:23pm]
i’m sure i don’t know what u mean i am the paragon of virtue
Lance Sanchez (Altea) [12:24pm]
ok but real talk what happened
Lance Sanchez (Altea) [12:24pm]
bc he hasn’t responded and im starting to freak out
Muscles [12:26pm]
He’s fine, he’s just really red and biting his lip trying not to smile.
Lance grinned and sent Shiro a thank you before opening up his message with Keith again.
Sharkboi [12:29pm]
so i hear u liked my selfie
Tila Tekeithla [12:29pm]
I especially liked the Backstreet Boys poster in the background
Lance scrolled up to see that yes, in fact, his Backstreet Boys poster was in plain view, fedoras and all.
Sharkboi [12:30pm]
i refuse to feel embarrassed about that
Sharkboi [12:30pm]
their new song is a bop
Lance could practically hear the soft laugh Keith made when he was trying not to give away too much, and it warmed him to his core.
Tila Tekeithla [12:32pm]
Of course it is
Tila Tekeithla [12:33pm]
Alright, Shiro’s yelling at me to get off my damn phone already. Text you later?
Sharkboi [12:33pm]
looking forward to it <3
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tmarie82 · 6 years
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Play to Win
Pairing: Liam x Olivia (Drake x MC implied)
Book: The Royal Romance (Book 3)
Word Count: ~1,800
Rating:  PG
Author’s Note:  Can anyone deny that last week’s TRR chapter 16 hinted heavily that Oliam is going to happen?!?!?  (If Liam is not your LI, of course.)  I am SOOOOO excited for these two to finally get together, and I know I’m not alone.  After their sweet little dance in the chapter, I decided they needed another private moment together.  Thank you @jadedpixiescribbles for the request #45 “Make bets together” for Liam and Olivia, which prompted the idea for this story.  💕💕
Please let me know if you would like to be added to my tag list.  You can find all of my fics here - MASTERLIST
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Liam sat at the bar in the hotel lobby, sipping slowly on his whiskey neat and observing his companions as they conversed animatedly in the lounge.  Emma and Hana were giggling like schoolgirls, whispering in each other’s ears and shaking their heads in agreement.  He saw the look in Emma’s eyes as she glanced up and met Drake’s stare, an unmistakable smile spreading across her lips.  And Drake ... standing between Maxwell and Bertrand who were deep in conversation, but he didn’t seem to hear them.  Liam had never seen his best friend look more content in his life.  He was lost in Emma’s deep blue orbs, his own eyes crinkling at the sides with affection and his mouth tugging upwards at the side.    Amongst the crowd and conversations, the couple saw only each other.
This is how it’s suspposed to be, Liam thought with a feeling that could only be described as bittersweet.  He had already acknowledged that the enchanting American woman and his surly best friend loved each other deeply ... but now, seeing with his own eyes the pure adoration in their shared gaze, he finally realized that he was happy for them.  And he needed to move on.  He stood from the barstool and dropped a few bills on the counter for the bartender, grabbed his drink and made his way towards the casino.  
He entered the ornate room, absorbing the bright lights and loud chimes of the slot machines as he surveyed the room.  The room bustled with patrons, all of them enthralled in the festivities, and for once the King was thankful to go unnoticed as he explored the scene.
He walked past the various games, first stopping in front of the craps table.  His mind wandered to the scavenger hunt earlier, an immediate reminder of Emma’s resonating laugh as they’d retrieved the royal crown.  He smiled fondly at the memory but quickly moved on, seeking a better distraction.
But instead the distraction found him, the tall fiery redhead approaching him with a dirty martini in one hand and a mischievous gleam in her emerald eyes.  Olivia gave him a smug grin and he couldn’t fight the knowing smile he returned.  She turned her head from side to side as she studied their surroundings, Liam taking her quick distraction as an opportunity to give her an appreciative head to toe assessment.  He couldn’t deny that his life-long friend looked especially radiant tonight in her dark beaded gown, her creamy skin glistening under the blinking lights.  
“Your Majesty, if I didn’t know any better I would suspect you were hiding out in here.”  She peeked up at him through her dark lashes as she took a long sip of her cocktail.
Liam chuckled at Olivia's sarcastic bluntness.  She was never one to hide her true opinion.  “Not hiding out, per se ... just ready for a change of scenery.”  
Olivia gave him a devilish grin.  “Well in that case, let’s have some fun Your Majesty.”  She quickly tilted back her glass and downed it’s contents before taking Liam by the hand and leading him towards the blackjack table.
Olivia was quite the accomplished blackjack player, staring at the cards intently each round and calculating her next move.  Liam noticed the small crease between her furrowed brow as she contemplated her strategy, eyes narrowed in determination.  He admired the victorious smile after each round she won, a rare sight that he subconciously wished he could witness more often.  At one point she caught him staring when she glanced up, quirking her brow in amusement while Liam quickly averted his eyes to the table.  “Enjoying the entertainment, Your Majesty?” she quipped playfully.
Liam cleared his throat, a slight flush rising to his cheeks.  “This is very educational, Liv.”  He turned back to her and met her stare, a soft smile on his lips.  “But you need to stop calling me that.  You know I hate that.”
Olivia smirked as she studied the cards she’d been dealt, then signaling the dealer to deal one more before holding.  “Alright, Liam, but you’re up next.”
He shrugged.  “I hate to admit it but I don’t know much about gambling.  Never had too many opportunities in the palace.”  
“Well, we’ll have to fix that.”  She thanked the dealer and collected her chips, then turned around to examine the various options.  “Follow me.” She instructed sternly.
Olivia passed by the various forms of gaming, muttering to herself as she crossed the options off her mental list.  “Poker, no ... too cliche.  Ugh slots, juvenile.”  She halted in front of the roulette table, peering up at Liam with a twinkle in her eyes.  “Here you go.  Figured I should be gentle with you, since it’s your first time and all.”  And there was that wicked smile of hers again, the one that drove him crazy.  “Do you know the rules?”  
“I think I can manage.”  He replied confidently.  He placed a chip down on the table just as the dealer spun the wheel; $100 on black.  He held his breath, watching the wheel closely as the ball rolled to a stop.  32 red.  “Argh!” He grunted as he balled his fist in frustration.  
“Try again.”  Olivia reassured him, her voice calmer and more patient than usual.
Liam tried again, this time putting another $100 on red.  He waited anxiously as the wheel turned round and round, the tiny ball flipping around sporadically until it settled ... on 11 black.   Liam groaned audibly, pressing his palm to his forehead.
“You know what I think your problem is?”  Olivia chimed in.
“I have a feeling you’re going to tell me regardless.”  Liam replied in a monotone voice.
Olivia grasped him firmly by the shoulder and turned him to her, looking him straight in the eye.  “I think you’re playing it safe.  You’re playing from here ...” she thumped him on the forehead with a quick flick of her fingers, “and not from here.” She pressed one palm against his chest, right over his heart, sending a jolt of electricity to Liam’s limbs.  “When it comes to gambling, if you’re going to play then you play to win.  Go big or home, as the Americans say.  Can you do that, Your Majesty?”  She emphasized the last two words, looking to provoke him.
Liam grinned at her and shook his head, not willing to give her the satisfaction of adressing her infraction.  He turned back to the table and picked up a large stack of chips.  He held them out to Olivia, arching a brow in question.  “Wish me luck?”  
Olivia smirked and nodded, then leaned forward to blow softly on the chips.  As she leaned back her lips grazed his palm slightly, and for a moment Liam could do nothing but stare at her in stunned silence.  His mind traveled back to their dance earlier ... the feel of his hands at her waist as they moved in sync, a shared moment that was much too brief.  He quickly shook his head out of his daze, focusing his attention back to the table.  “9 Red.”  He placed the $300 in chips down on the board.
The pair watched intently as the wheel began it’s turn, eyes never letting the tiny wooden sphere out of their sight.  Click ... click ... click .. click click.  Liam’s eyes opened wide in astonishment as he looked upon - “9 Red!” the dealer called out.  Liam pumped his fist in victory and released a small whoop before turning to Olivia and picking her up in his arms.  
“Oof!” Olivia exhaled as Liam pulled her against his broad chest and twirled her around twice in excitement.  She didn’t even realize she was laughing until her feet hit the ground again.  Her expression of joy quickly disappeared, although her racing heart did not return to its normal rhythm right away.  “Congratulations.”  She stated plainly, but with an underlying warmth that could not be completely masked.  “You must be very happy, your first win.”
Liam accepted his winnings from the dealer and turned back to her, a childish grin spread across his face.  “You must be my good luck charm.”  His eyes lingered on her, unfaltering until Olivia shifted uncomfortably to glance towards the exit.
“Well, now that that is out of the way ...” Olivia nodded towards the roulette table, “I believe I shall retire.  I’ve had enough of this adult amusement park for one day.”  
Liam laughed out loud, the first joyful release he’d allowed all night.  “I can understand that.  But I think I’ll stay and play a few more rounds, now that I got that first time out of the way.”  He paused, studying her face, trying to detect any sign of emotion underneath her stoic facade.  “Good night, Liv.  And thanks for being so gentle for my first time.” He uttered flirtatiously before turning back to the table.
Olivia couldn’t fight the wide grin that captured her lips, and promptly turned towards the exit in order to avoid anyone she knew bearing witness.  “Olivia!” She heard him call to her.
She turned to look at him curiously, the blood still pumping through her veins from just moments ago.  
“You know, you should laugh more often.  You look beautiful when you laugh.”  He paused, gaze never leaving hers.  “Good night.”  Liam nodded his farewell, then returned to the table.  
Olivia scurried off, her cheeks flushed pink and that unbidden smiling again taking hold of her face.  She turned the corner to the elevators- “Unh!” She crashed head on into the cheerful little Chinese butterfly herself.
“Oh, hi Olivia!  We were wondering where you went!”  Hana noticed Olivia’s grin, a perplexed look on her face.  “Is everything okay?”
Olivia straightened up, face returning to neutral position.  “Of course, why wouldn’t it be?”
“No reason ...” Hana eyed her suspiciously, then focused back on her mission.  “Have you seen Liam?”  
Olivia floundered for a second before replying.  “Yes, I just saw him in the casino.  At the roulette table.”
“Oh roulette!” Hana chirped.  “I see our King is feeling a little wild tonight, isn’t he?”  She giggled at her own joke.
“I suppose so.” Olivia replied dryly.  “Now if you’ll excuse me, I’ve had enough of this circus.  Good night, Hana.”
“Good night!” Hana called after her before rushing off to the casino.
Olivia entered the elevator.  She wore a straight face as she rotated to the sliding doors, regarding as the large metal panels met in the middle.  She pressed the button for her floor and stood up straight, maintaining her statuesque posture as the elevator hummed to life.  But finally alone, she didn't fight the tug, the slight pull, from lifting the corners of her mouth.
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daughterofsinsloth · 6 years
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Hi! It's stated in your bio that you analyze fics, so I just want to hear about your fic recs for Soukoku? Preferably fluff, but other genres are also fine since the ship is full of angst and smut lol. Thank you!
 Hello hello anon-chan!! How are you? Mm! It does, thank you very much for asking! Fluffly fluff heh? (my ultra favorite!!!!!!) Okay! Here are some fics! Enjoy ^^
Of sleepless nights and warm embraces by Konoha79 : 
this fic.. aaah this one is a true gem!  just amazing! its about Chuuya working really hard do he can have some free time will his boyfriend Dazai on Christmas Eve. this one has protective!Dazai and cute!Chuuya in.its really well written and the writer made their emotions appear well. another thing that I like is that the writer with only a few sentaces put a nice history behide and you dont need more informations. they write about an episode and thats it, without confussing the reader. the characters are build well and the bit of crack in there is really funny. Dazai is gently, something that we dont see often, and Chuuya is soooooooo cute, that gets your soul full! ITS A MUST READ FIC!
Oops by Witheryvine :
another good fic. in here Dazai and Chuuya are secretly married, but it slips off Dazai, while he trys to play the matchmaker to shin soukoku in front of EVERYONE! Mostly crack in here, but the fluffiness is located at protective!Chuuya Kouyou I can explain dont kill him and at how Dazai treats Chuuya. its short but full at the same time. well writen and the writer made a great job giving us some skk background. also also kunikichuu friendship!!!! THE BEST!
Captured by Witheryvine:
(AU) another short story by the same writer. Photographer!Dazai capturing lawmajor!Chuuya on camera and some good flirting!! well writen, cute and of course sweet.  its … “soft” and calm. love it.
Shared Gravity by writingfromtheshadows  and ZODIACHUUYA:
(AU/multe-chapter) okay  this one anon-chan! they start as academic enemies to enemies friends with benefits to lovers/couple. well writen. they portrait skk’s inner thoughts and fears really weel and realistic. this is like some friend of yours talking about their story and if this is not GREAT i dont know what its gonna be. they take turns with the chapters as Chuuya and Dazai PV, but its in perfect harmony. doesnt have much smut, if not at all. this one is a favorite coz it shows how you fell in love unexpected, hard and uncontrollable. Gin is the “come on you idiots you love its other!” in a cool way. its great that we can see her, coz not many give her spot time. im telling you this fic is GOLD. and leaves you with a healing feeling. complite
the opposite of alone by TheGreatCatsby:
short fic, cute fic. Chuuya can’t sleep, so he decieds to texts Dazai. its really sweet fic. Dazai immediately runs to were Chuuya is and they are all sweet couple but not really. its more about the feelings that are there but they cant get out, yet its all there for people to see.its an amazing fic and the best thing it is that it gives you the feels from the first part! also we are talking for thegreatcatsby, of course its well written, well structured and soooo satisfying. 
This by sodenoshirayuki_23:
okay anon-chan hear me up.this fic here is one of a majestic kind of story. BUT! THE WRITER!!!! has sooooooooooo many good fics that i couldnt choose. her angsty fics are masterpiece one by one. and please, i  beg you go read “heavy”; its angsty you die but you go happy. HIGHLY RECCOMENDED.  this one, tho, is AU and an mpreg (sorry if you are no into it) and its sooooo sweet and fluffy you could die. the children are sskk and spoiler later kyouka . well written.really nice story. fluffy fluff with fluff on top. what more can i say? its just sooo cute. the characters here are really interesting. and the episode is great. MUST!!!
Margin Of Error by izanyas:
its not fluff just to be clear. but its SO HIGHLY RECCOMENDED THAT YOU FLY TO ANOTHER PLANET. its AU,mafiaboss!Dazai anddoctor!Chuuya.After a failed assassination attempt on his person, Dazai finds himself recovering in an unfamiliar place: a hospital where criminals abound, staff and patients alike, and Dazai’s own doctor is a little too attractive. when you finish this, run to the writer’s other fics like Usen Bolt. they are soooooo talented. not so fluff but GREAT nonetheless. ruuuuun! ah! when you see Owe No Debt you will know that you reached the paradice.
This Time by stargazerlilith:
another MUST READ writer. this on this cuteness overload. well writen. another with workaholic!Chuuya and great boyfriend!Dazai. sweet and fluff compinate to an amazing resolt. read read it!. side note:their other stories and awesome! i storngly reccomend “mine”, which is smut with feelings.
Mother by WhisperingWinds99:
here we have skk relationship from the start. the fluff is of course in the relationship, but mostly coz we see the relationship between Kouyou and Chuuya. she is the ‘mother’ in Chuuya’s life more than the ane-san. its fluff coz you she skk get more mature and you see Kouyou growing old with them. well writen, good story. GODESS KOUYOU IS BACK! 
The art of paint by  Konoha79:
this one i promise you that its the most beautiful thing i have ever read. its skk family. canon universe, skk is married, Chuuya finds a child and everyone is oppose, but they keep him. this takes place two years later and shows us an episode of their life as famly. God its beutiful. when i have a bad day i read this. anon.. anon! read this! its really great. well writen, well build, well partial. you have a clean picture of their life and feelings. its sweet, its cute, its fluff and its a must. honestly,in my opinion,this is one of the best skk fluff stories i have read.
Now let me talk a bit about SoukokuParadise:
she is the fluff goddess of the skk fandom. she writes fluff, and a damn good ones. check out her works; they are great, well writen and well build, some character development and a lots of cuteness. i will talk for her favorite “How to Hate Nakahara Chuuya” and hear me up anon when im telling you that its great! its about Dazai taking care of Chuuya after ep. 21. as the writer says, Dazai speaks with actions (she keeps the characters close to the canon and that's really good, makes them more realistic), small words that speak loud of his true feelings. i really like how she  writes Chuuya. he is unconscious but his reactions are being given to us by Dazai. thats really interest and i havent see many writers do that. interest PV. spoiler Chuuya calls Dazai “Osamu” and im dead. also the endingggggg
lastly but not least!
Insomnia_Productions :
yet ! another one writer that I cant decide which one fic is the best. they are all GREAT and you should read them all! like ALL! the ones I LOVE LOVE LOVE are:
 The New Year’s Tradition (AU)
Not Safe For Work
“Ah… I Think We’re In What They Call A Hate/Love Relationship.” (AU)
Disney’s: The (Totally Not Little) Merman (AU)
How To Obtain A Child And Husband Entirely By Accident
  one is greatest than the other. well writen, like watching a movie. you “get into the character” and you are so into it that you cant leave them after the 3rd time you read them. trust me, this are the fics I always go back reading them over and over again and its always amazing. like the first time you read them you will be soooooo satisfied and sooo happy. perfect I tell you.
EXTRA: kiss me on the lips(and show you love me) by photography_tea:
this one is also a favorite of mine. its smut but more than that its making love. it has character development and realization of their feelings. crack and fluff combinate into love that leads to the unlimited epitomy of fluff, the lovemaking. being one with the other. loving and being loved in return. the writer did an amazing job at showing how in their mafia days skk find a small light to keep moving. oblivious!chuuya and hungry!Dazai are often a subject to write but here they are on another scale. their “play” shows more about their weird relationship than they would admit.  its a hell of a great fic! must read!
also! if you would like you can check my fic : Can you sew my suit? by alchemy_omi:
it has fluff in it with a bit of crack and liiiiight angst. also sskk are in it. its about their wedding. Dazai is the best man but he went for his suit the last moment. not being able to find a tailor shop, Akutagawa send him to his good friend Chuuya and the two fell in love. (AU/multe-chapter) 
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand thats it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh
hope that you like my reccomendetions anon-chan and happy reading!! please tell me your opion about them and ask me again if you are happy! I gave you fluffy suggestions but you can ask me for another gender if you want!
have a wonderful day and take care!
bye bye :)
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Things about 13x08 “The Scorpion and the Frog”
Alright, since I am awfully late with watching the episode and I don’t think anyone really needs a ton of my rambles on my live watch, I figured - also since I didn’t find much noteworthy to meta or talk about while watching - I’d just make one bigger “impression” post on the episode.
Overall, I have to say - while this wasn’t one of the best episodes ever written - I did not mind the episode. I can’t say I adored it or liked it massively, but I certainly didn’t dislike it as I did with the previous two. I actually found the episode entertaining somewhat. The pacing was alright and I did enjoy the characters introduced in the episode - even though they felt too close to certain other beloved already deceased characters, which kind of left a bad aftertaste imo. In general though and despite it’s silliness, I think the episode worked as a true one off and filler (and I usually tend to say fillers don’t exist, but with this one to me it truly felt like filler - and yes, despite the fact some of the big themes were worked into the episode - but I’ll go into that in a bit).
Alright, here are some aspects I feel like commenting on a bit more.
First of all there is the title - one I think worked pretty well in relation to the context of the episode, because the fable the title is inspired by, I suppose, is explored directly within the episode by the characters and all their “deal making with the natural enemy” that like Dean said right in the beginning usually never works out for them. And of course we saw that ending up being the case with Alice (though in the end she was freed), but most of all Barthamus (who I did enjoy - he was kind of cross between Balthazar and Crowley to me - though tbh seeing him just made me miss Crowley so much more than anything else) and Luthor Shrike as well. More than how the title related to the episode’s arc however it is important to see it in relation to the overarching theme of the season of “nature vs. nurture” especially considering it was the lead up episode to the mid season finale which features Jack heavily, who is the main character through with the whole “fighting against your ~nature”-theme is explored by. If the fable is anything to go by and it’s dark moral then it would allude to Jack going dark side (even though he has been taught and socialized differently) as this is simply part of his “nature” as Lucifer’s son. In this regard it feels also noteworthy that Aesop (which Dean has read) wrote a similar tale about a “Farmer and a viper” where a farmer finds a snake freezing to death and takes pity on it and warms it in his coat - revitalized by that the snake ends up biting the farmer and kills him), which feels even more fitting in relation to SPN lore and how Lucifer is seen as the “serpent”.
Then there is the whole talk on Solomon and him keeping tabs on the Queen of Sheba, which reminded me that earlier this season we had a scene featuring the “Song of Solomon”, which makes interesting, if Solomon ends up popping up a third time this season I’‘d call it a pattern and it’s probably interesing to di into all of that history a bit further.
As for the episode’s characters. I actually liked Grab, he was a kind of “one off”-demon - he wasn’t plain stupid or over the top cringeworthy evil like demons (and angels as well tbh) have been portrayed a lot on SPN the past seasons. I wouldn’t have needed to see him again as a character, but he was enjoyable for the time of the episode. I also liked Barthamus and how the actor played him, but in general to me just no one can in any way replace Mark Sheppard and Crowley so that’s that. And lastly there’s Alice. She was alright (the actress did an okay job), though tbh, to me she felt too much like a clichè and too much like Charlie 3.0 (seriously, they even had to give her a line featuring “Charlie”? Sorry, but… meeeh, I’m not a fan). Hell, they even sent her off with a bus scene and her showing the “victory”-sign. I mean…. how much more blatant can you be?
Now let’s move on to Luthor Shrike. I personally felt reminded of Magnus/Cuthbert Sinclair a bit with his collection of artifacts and such (forever disappointed they never picked Magnus as a big bad, that guy would have worked as that imo). Especially as he was described as “doing anything and everything to add to his collection”. Tbh though I did find him a bit stupid tbh. I fully believe he has his entrance video trapped (he just seemed like that kind of guy) so he must have seen Sam walking in an out of the devil’s trap and then when he hands Sam a shot of gin he hadn’t mixed holy water into that to test him? Seriously? That just seems to me awfully stupid for a 200 year old immortal being. Which brings me to the other character I had to think of aside from Magnus with how he lived secludedly: Cain. Like Cain, Luthor also seems to have drawn away from socitey after losing a loved one. And yes, of course the parallel to John giving his life for Dean and Dean then later dying was prettyy apparent, but I suppose it was alos meant as a possible moment of foreshadowing for Lucifer and Jack’s story. Will Lucifer in the end maybe sacrifice himself to save his son? While I really don’t need or want a Lucifer redemption arc, I’d take it if that meant we’d finally be rid of that character lol. In visuals also to me Luthor was aligned with Cain who was also immortal and got stabbed by the demon killing knife and then later died like Magnus by beheading.
And last but not least on to the Winchesters. I have to admit if Jensen wasn’t as good as an actor as he is the “compass hand thing” as well as the “paw thing” would not have worked. They were silly yes and once more Dean was used as comic relief, but Jensen delivered it. So I didn’t mind those a lot. What made me a bit moody was when the “Nerve damage”-scene rolled around, because it captured so much with nothing much said, but only “I lived off of that stuff when I was a kid, What is it like 10 times the legal amount of caffeine?”. Yeah, nice callback there to how Dean never was a child from 4 onwards and literally ran on coffeine to make it through. Like… how is that not yet another example of how friggin awful Dean’s life was and how much he had to shoulder at a way too young age? Aside from that I found it rather interesting that Grab called Dean a “hand puppet” - of course that as due to the spell he had cast on him, but I can’t help but rather think of that comment in a much broader sense with Dean as a vessel - yes, I am still stupidly hoping that someday Dean as Michael’s vessel will be rendered of import by the narrative again. Silly me…
And now truly lastly, the ending scene with the burning of Bart’s bones and the spell and how slow the Winchesters were there and how Bart just stands watching in slow mo almost when Alice patiently picks up the lighter after he just said he is sooooo quick was just… eye roll worthy imo. Also, lol, Bart saying Sam is the smart one? Apparently not when it comes to keep something from burning. ;P I mean, come on Sam, you blew on that? Really??? Bahaha.
Anyway… So yeah, that’s kind of all I have to say. Not much stuff for meta, but a few very pretty eye candy moments, so maybe I’ll try some editing. Anyway overall verdict: Alrightish irrelevant episode. Score: 6 out of 10.
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meenasmoon · 7 years
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How about a fic (animal world) where Johnny is Captain Underpants?
Hypnotism is NOT for Amateurs
Ok sooooo. I couldn’t bring myself to make him Captain Underpants so I decided to take the spirit of the story and bring in two best friends messing with someone using a hypno ring. I hope you can forgive me my artistic expression!!
Eddie carried the small cardboard box close to his chest as he hurried through the theater towards Buster’s office. He smiled giddily at Miss Crawly when she greeted him and then burst into Buster’s office with even so much as a knock. His best friend was precariously balanced on a rickety ladder and Eddie’s sudden entrance threw him off balance so that he was tumbling down to the floor. Eddie paid no heed to his friend’s situation and instead slammed the door closed and proceeded to close the blinds to every window. When Buster dazedly stood and looked over the other side of his desk Eddie was bouncing excitedly and gesturing towards a small cardboard box. 
“Eddie? Why are all the blinds closed?” He asked in confusion but Eddie didn’t offer an explanation. 
“Buster. Ohhh Man. You’re not gonna believe it. I finally got it! After all these years.” Eddie ranted giddily, almost vibrating with excitement. Buster raised an eyebrow at his friend, seriously considering whether or not his friend had finally lost it, but Eddie didn’t seem to care. He just pushed the box closer to Buster and let out an excited noise that was so loud that Buster felt his eardrums pop. He winced and rubbed at his ear with one hand and slowly lifted the lid of the box with the other. Buster glanced at the contents briefly and let out a loud gasp, his tiny hands flying to his face as he gazed into the box with intense wonderment. 
“Eddie. Oh my gosh Eddie no. This can’t be.” His voice was almost childlike and his gaze could not be pulled away from the object resting innocently in the box on his desk. 
“Dude yes. It’s exactly what you think it is.” Eddie said, the same childlike excitement echoing in his voice. 
Buster’s shaking hands reached into the box and slowly pulled out an aging plastic ring with a peeling black and white swirl sticker facing outward.“Is this what I think it is?” Buster asked breathlessly as he cradled the ring in his open palm, his gaze never leaving it. 
“The Limited Edition Hypno-Master Ring from the year 1980.“ Eddie leaned forward so that the two friends were huddled together like small children.“Awesome.” Buster whimpered and reverently put the ring on his finger, treating it like a precious family heirloom. After a few minutes of silence Eddie glanced at the door and then back to the ring. 
“We’re gonna try it out right Buster?” He asked tentatively and he held his breath as Buster seemed to consider the notion for a heartbeat. 
“Well of course!!” He leapt off of his desk, and hurried to the door, Eddie eagerly following behind him. They crept past Miss Crawly as she leaned back in her chair, snoring loudly and mumbling quietly. Once they cleared his office the two giggling animals snuck through the theater, imitating ninjas as they searched for their first test subject.
The first animal that they happened to find turned out to be the unsuspecting gorilla who was humming to himself as he jotted down notes on sheet music. Johnny had been working with Ash on creating his own music lately and as a result had been working himself to death in order to finish his first song. Buster tried to casually stroll up to his charge but his facade was broken when he and Eddie descended into a fit of childish giggles. Johnny stopped writing to shoot the two a confused look, watching them with tired eyes as they slowly composed themselves. Then, like two evil twins they turned to him, mischievous grins practically breaking their faces with their force.
“Uh… wots up guys?” He asked cautiously and Buster inched slightly closer to him, his hand twitching from behind his back.
“Oh nothing Johnny. Just….” Buster suddenly leapt forward and thrust his hypno ring into the unsuspecting gorilla’s face. Before Johnny could say anything Buster moved the ring back and forth.
Johnny couldn’t help himself as his eyes followed the movement and in seconds his mind began to fuzz over with an all-consuming, white blankness. He didn’t register Buster crowing with delight as he jumped for joy, and he definitely didn’t notice the stream of tears running down Eddie’s face.
Johnny was under their spell.
“So uh… what do we do now?” Eddie asked after he had dried his happy tears and stood staring into Johnny’s glazed brown eyes. Buster, who was still embroiled in his victory dance, which consisted of him kissing the ring and shaking his booty, stopped short.
“I…I don’t know.” He grumbled, suddenly put out by their lack of plan. He looked at Johnny, desperately wracking his brain for ideas on what he could do with his newfound power.
When his mind came up blank he turned to his partner in crime, who was still consumed with thought.
Suddenly Eddie’s face lit up and he motioned for Buster to come closer. Buster immediately hurried to his side and the lanky black sheep leaned down to whisper in his best friend’s large ears. With each word Buster’s grin grew and his eyes sparkled with mischievous glee.
“Oh. Oh hohohohohohoho.” He chuckled to himself and rubbed his tiny hands together eagerly. After their plan had been laid out Buster stepped up to where Johnny stood staring at nothing.
“Johnny. Johnny, Johnny, Johnny.” He cackled and then leaned over to whisper in his ear. When he finished whispering the command he stepped back and watched as Johnny shuffled off towards another part of the stage.
Eddie whipped out his phone, camera at the ready, and the two took off after the gorilla, intent on capturing his humiliation.
Johnny mindlessly made his way up the stairs, a small trail of drool making its way out of his mouth. When he reached the top of the stairs he made a beeline for the copier, keyed in a hundred copies and then proceeded to unbuckle his jeans and sit down on the copier.
Lights flashed under him and copy after copy of his pressed butt cheeks flooded the room. Buster and Eddie burst into the room just in time to catch the gorilla in the act.
They collapsed to the floor, heaving with laughter and clutching their stomachs. Once the copier was done Johnny hopped off, redid his pants and stood in front of it, patiently waiting for his next command.
Buster and Eddie laughed hysterically for a few minutes before they finally calmed down. They laid on the hardwood floor side by side, their eyes streaming with tears and their stomachs aching pleasantly.
“That was awesome!” Eddie exclaimed as he threw his hands into the air and let out another airy laugh. Buster let out a little giggle and rested his hands on his stomach, trying to soothe the aching muscles there.
“Your turn dude.” Eddie announced after another minute of silence and Buster pursed his lips as a million thoughts soared through his head. Buster hopped up to his feet and wandered over to where Johnny was standing dazedly in front of the copy machine. He circled the gorilla as he pondered each scheme that popped into his head, Eddie watching him in anticipation.
After a minute of pacing he suddenly stopped dead and snapped his fingers excitedly, “I’ve got it. This is gonna be hilarious!” He chuckled to himself and hopped up onto the copier so that he was level with Johnny’s ear. He then leaned in and began to whisper once more in his ear, giving poor Johnny his next task. When Buster finished talking and stepped back, Johnny began to strip down until he was wearing only his bright red boxers and dashed out of the room, yelling loudly.
Eddie shot Buster a confused look but his friend just grinned in reply and led the way out onto the stage. When they arrived Johnny was still yelling loudly but now he was swinging through the rafters like a primitive ape. It was in that moment that Eddie recognized his yell from an old kids TV show about a mammal living on a primitive island away from society.
“Oh my god you made him into Tarzan?!” He exclaimed and once more the infectious laughter started up. Within seconds the two were rolling on the stage, laughing loudly as Johnny swung around and made primitive ape calls. They didn’t notice as a figure came onto the stage slowly, their eyes glinting with mischief.
Eddie and Buster were pulled from their laughter by a familiar sarcastic voice as Ash walked over and pulled the hypno ring off of Buster’s finger, “Nice work guys.”
“Hey! Give that back it’s vintage.” Eddie pouted but Ash silenced him with a withering glare as she slid the ring onto her own finger.
“You had your fun. Now it’s my turn.” She cracked her knuckles and strutted off towards where Johnny was swinging in the rafters. From where they sat Buster and Eddie watched her go with pouting faces, their fun over and their ring gone. Eddie slouched off to go pout at home and drown his sorrows in a video games while Buster headed back to his office. Neither of them could shake the tingling feeling that whatever Ash was gonna do to Johnny was way beyond their imagination.
When Johnny awoke from his stupor he was laying face down in the middle of the stage. He groaned quietly and sat up, his head still spinning from whatever had happened to him. The first thing he noticed was that he was naked except for his boxers. He let out an unmanly squeak and tried fruitlessly to cover himself. He looked frantically around for his clothes and found them neatly folded just a few feet away. Johnny scrabbled frantically for them and shimmied on his jeans and long t-shirt, his heart pounding loudly in his chest.
He patted down his pockets and found two pieces of paper. The first, once unfolded was what looked like a photocopy of someones butt. Johnny stared at it for a second, puzzling over whose it was and why he would have it before his face drained of color and he dropped the photo like it was on fire. It was HIS butt. He grabbed the other piece of paper hoping that it would be something better than the first.
His pounding heart stopped for a couple beats when he saw the phone number and name written on the scrap of paper. It was Meena’s. Dumbfounded, he pulled out his phone and looked at his texts. Waiting for him was a cheery message from Meena wherein she expressed her excitement for their movie night the next day. A sappy smile spread across his face and as he left the theatre he decided that whatever the bloody hell had happened to him was a good thing.
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teamendgame-blog · 7 years
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Back at it again with the long post and theories...
Oh hey Rosewood residents,
Kate here <3 And I'm back at it again with the long post and theories! First things first, I was out of commission for 2 weeks with the worst flu and ear infection of my life.. coincidentally the same week PLL was NOT on. I BLAME YOU FOR THIS, MARLENE!! I also ended my Memorial Day weekend with a trip to the ER, so it’s been less than fun over here...
But while I've been too sick and weak to type, I’m never too sick to think so grab a little snack (and a PLL-mom approved glass of wine) and buckle in to hear my crazy take on this ride that is Pretty Little Liars EndgAme! I'm going to break my thoughts down into sections so y'all can easily skip around if you would like!
First things first (I'm the realest)... (I am also old and found that funny - don't judge me!) Let's travel back to what feels like forever ago... and the reveal that Ali is, indeed, carrying Emily's baby. I wanted to make the following point but then was bedridden, so the original thought comes before we viewed 7x15... *WHO'S YOUR DADDY -- THE ALI/EMILY BABY REVEAL*
Yup. They went there. We finally have confirmation (btw, BRILLIANT acting by Sasha in the reveal scene at the baby store!) that Ali is carrying Emily's stolen-egg baby. I saw a lot of reaction to this in the fandom, a lot of "I knew this would happen" (the best one being my amazing brother's live blog response!) and a lot of "I was afraid they would do this".. I saw a lot of comments bashing the storyline and a lot praising it for reiterating just how well-and-truly-evil AD actually is. But I didn't see ANY reaction that mirrored my own... IN A SHOW WHERE SO LITTLE IS ABLE TO BE FIGURED OUT (by a fandom who spends hours and hours rewatching, blogging, theorizing, screen-capturing), WHY DID THEY MAKE THIS SO OBVIOUS?! Yes, I realize I could be giving the showrunners too much credit here, but as an adult in her mid-thirties who has spent an abnormal amount of time trying to figure out answers and outcomes for this show and constantly figuring out NOTHING, WHY WAS THIS SO EASY TO DEDUCE. Well, to answer that I'm going to reference a movie many of you are probably to young to have seen... Years ago, a brilliant suspense/mystery movie called The Others came out (it starred Nicole Kidman - remember her!?) Anyway, the movie was awesome and mysterious and about halfway through anyone who is paying attention starts to put together the clues and its SO exciting but then you almost get annoyed that the characters in the movie aren't putting 2 and 2 together, but you're all proud of yourself for figuring it out, and BAM! Seriously out of left field the twist comes and you realize you were COMPLETELY AND TOTALLY WRONG and just lead to believe you'd figured it out... [side note: I watched this movie multiple times after my first viewing with friends who were seeing it for the first time and let me tell you, at the same point that I originally "figured out the mystery" they did too and were SO DAMN SMUG about it, one going as far to say "You know, I actually find it sooo hard to enjoy movies like this because I'm too smart and always figure it out and get bored waiting for the ending"... yeah, she shut up really fucking quick when she saw she was wrong). ANYWAYS (sorry, I ramble)... I'm kind of wondering if this whole Ali/Emily baby thing was made obvious to throw us off in a way. So many of us saw it coming and because we had "figured it out", we didn't think to look beyond waiting for the confirmation that we were right.. MARK MY WORDS, THERE IS MORE TO THIS THAN WE ARE SEEING because we've all been so stuck on having figured it out or being mad about it... What I keep coming back to is who the father is and who did the insemination... Ali tells Emily she remembers the procedure when she was locked up in Welby. THIS IS A HUGE CLUE OR POINT TO CONSIDER. I mean, clearly all official places in Rosewood are run by a bunch of dumbfucks (Rosewood Police, I'm looking at you.... until the delicious Furey showed up that is) and yes, clearly "Rollins" was lying about his identity in order to be a practicing doctor there... but they ARE NOT going to let some rando in a black hoodie and gloves come in with a turkey baster and shove it up some patient's hoo-ha. THIS HAD TO BE AN INSIDE JOB! Maybe Rollins was playing the AD game and was forced to do it? That I don't know. We DO know that AD stole Emily's eggs... so somehow, Emily's eggs were fertilized and inseminated into Ali... I'm still thinking on this one... I would love if someone would think about it too and tell me their thoughts because seriously, I think they duped us here (brilliantly!) by making the baby storyline obvious and having us focus on THAT rather than the real clues being shared...
Now that we've seen 7x15 and know that Ali is going through with the pregnancy and know that Emily wants the baby and know that they are trying to figure out who the father is, I feel like I am right in their being more to this.
*7x15: IN THE EYE ABIDES THE HEART*
Before I theorize, I just want to point out that I feel this was one of the best PLL episodes ever and don't think Troian's directing is a coincidence.... clearly this woman is talented, thoughtful and really GETS how this show should be done. Absolutely brilliant from start to stop and OH MAN the acting has been spot on from all of them..  And now onto the details.
*SHADY, SHADY EZRA AND THE NEAR HIDDEN EARPIECE*
Ohhhh Ostinato. You shady little bastard!! Gavin and I noticed at the same time that Ezra had a small, clear earpiece in his ear while he and Aria were arguing (as he was preparing to head to the airport). Now, let me start with this: I DO NOT BELIEVE FOR ONE SECOND THAT HE IS TROTTING OFF TO HELP NICOLE. I have been SOOOOO suspicious for a long while now about this... we only have his word that he's "helping Nicole". Yes yes, there was the article Aria saw in the magazine while she was with Holden, but those pictures were all clearly taken on the same day. Do I think *some* of the times he's gone he's been with Nicole? Yes... But the little hidden earpiece was a major point for me that he's hiding a shit ton!! Gavin and I saw it and he included a post with screenshots, so check it out! Ostinato is up to NO GOOD!!!
FURTHERMORE - let’s discuss this whole Wren & Ezra business... From the previous episode’s sneak-peek both Gavin and I were CONVINCED that he and Wren weren’t meeting for the first time... and after seeing the episode, I am even MORE convinced! There is NO WAY these two are being introduced for the first time (great acting, boys!) And beyond THAT... let’s look at the following facts -- Ezra was SO set on going to see “Nicole” that he had the fight with Aria (again, as I said above, I don’t believe for a hot second that he was flying off to Maine to see Nicole and her family...) We saw on the flight boards that there were a bunch of delays... then Spencer spots Ezra as she and Wren are clearly arguing... Ezra and Wren “meet”.... and then Ezra magically decides to skip out on going away!? NOT BUYING IT!! I think he stayed in Rosewood because of Wren... AND THEN when Ezra is telling Aria that his flight wasn’t delayed he just “didn’t get on it”... and then the camera pans over to his bag and we see a glow like from a phone ringing.. MY MONEY IS ON THAT CALL BEING FROM WREN!!!
*MONA, MONA, MONA...*
So I hadn’t crossed Mona off my suspect list... until the last episode. Again with the brilliant acting! Her fan-girling over the board game while at the same time the devastation crossing her face that she didn’t create it... pure genius AND also really changed my mind on her possibly being involved... I think we all need to pay attention to the “clues” that Mona gave us about who could have made the game... WHO IS THIS MONSTER!! 
*RANDOM THOUGHTS*
- Fuck, that comic book is cool... I gotta say, this whole Charles and Lucas friendship surprised the hell out of me and I LOVE IT! 
- As many have pointed out, did you see how the “A” in Lucas’s signature on the comic is the “A” a?! Lucas was TOP of my suspect list... but with a revel regarding him coming tonight I don’t think he’s the final AD... AGGH!
- WHAT IS THE DEAL WITH THE NUMBER 214!!!!?!?! Its shit like this that gives me hope that this storyline has been brewing all along....
- How long before Snapchat releases that creepy-ass Aria filter!? Honestly though, that was super amazingly creepy! I’ve seen a lot of people say the face looks like Paige, like Sydney, like Melissa (my first comparison was to Marlene actually...) but I feel like the clip at the end (YAY FOR AN A ENDING!) indicated that the face and voice are completely digitally generated and not someone talking live with some sort of filter on... Maybe cause AD has a British accent (WREN WREN WREN) or a recognizable voice to the PLL!? 
What did you all think!? Any comments, ideas or further pieces to examine!? I can’t wait to hear what you think and can’t wait to see tonight’s episode!!!!! 
Kisses, -K
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wrath-and-ruin · 7 years
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Welp... had no intention of posting smut today, but then this happened. X)
**(I would like to point out that this is ALL consensual, there is nothing happening here that either one of them doesn’t want. They do this kinda thing all the time, so plz no one send me any bullshit about it being rape. Raph would never do that.) **
30 Days NSFW Challenge: # 25: Toys
She had grown accustomed to finding her boyfriend in her apartment when she came home from work (probably about half the time). So when she walked through her door and spotted him sitting on the couch that evening it was nothing out of the ordinary. The devilish grin on his face, however, aroused her interest. Usually that didn’t happen until at least a few minutes later…
“What?” Rae asked suspiciously as she pulled off her boots.
He held up a hand, and she lifted a brow when she realized what he had pinched between his fingers.
“Snooping through my things, I see?” she sighed as she strolled up to him, dark brow lifting.
He glanced at the slender device, smile still firmly in place as he inquired, “Ya plannin’ on replacin’ me with this battery operated piece o’ crap?”
She laughed dryly, placing her hands on her hips and gave him a flat look. “Firstly, it’s not a piece of crap; it gets the job done very well, thank you. Secondly, if I was planning on replacing you with a toy… I’d get something a little bigger.”
He huffed to himself, switching the vibrator on for a moment before turning it off again.
A teasing smile cracked her mouth. “You’re not jealous of an inanimate object, are you?”
It was his turn to shoot her a flat look.
Rae shook her head. “I’m a grown woman with needs, and it just so happens that you aren’t always available to fulfill those for me. Now, kindly give it back so I can put it away.”
There was that naughty smirk again. He extended his arm toward her, offering the aforementioned item. “Here.”
She was instantly wary, his tone suggesting mischief. As expected, when she made to take it he pulled it just out of her reach, smug laughter bubbling in his chest. Eyes narrowing, she stepped closer, making a second attempt. The result was the same.
Raphael stood, dangling the sought-after toy over her head. “G’head. Take it.”
She growled, feeling her efforts were likely going to be in vain but deciding she would try anyway. She leapt, reaching for the slim object to no avail.
“Are you actually doing this right now?!” she snapped, slapping him on the plastron. She wanted to step on his foot… or punch his smug face… or maybe both, in that order. “Keep this shit up and you are so gunna get it!”
He took an intimidating step toward her, forcing her to move back lest she topple over.
“No…” he rumbled lowly as he herded her into the bedroom, placing a single finger on the center of her chest and giving her a shove. She went sprawling across the mattress in a tangle of flailing limbs, snarling like a little hellcat. “Yer gunna get it.”
The brunette sat up with a frustrated growl, shoving her hair from her face. “You think you can just manhandle me whenever you fucking please, you stupid asshole?!”
She was quick, her palm only a few centimeters from his cheeks when he caught her wrist, snatching it just before her hand could make contact. His tone couldn’t have been any haughtier. “Yeah, pretty much.”
The huge male moved over her, dragging her up the bed and capturing her other hand when she tried to dislodge him. He pinned her arms against the headboard, slinging one leg over her wriggling body so he straddled her thighs. Placing the vibrator aside, he slid a hand beneath the hem of her tank top, pushing the fabric up so it bunched over her breasts. Deft fingers pinched the clasp at the front of her bra, the motion fluid and practiced. Moving the black lace aside, he bent and took one dusky nipple into his mouth, sucking it harshly before moving to its twin. A strangled moan was wrenched from her throat.
“Y-You… are a complete bastard.”
Raphael grinned at the hissed utterance, biting the tight little peak and making her buck beneath him. He reached over and snagged the sex toy from the mattress, turning it onto its lowest setting and pressing it against her crotch.
She gasped, her expression strained as she tried to fight off the pleasure… if only to spite him. He was being such a bloody prick but that felt sooooo damn good.
The large turtle glanced up at her face as he slid the device higher, his pace torturous. He could see her jaw tighten as she clenched her teeth, brows knitting the further he went. He abandoned her pert breast, mouth skimming over her collar bone and latching onto the junction of her neck and shoulder.
Rae tried to squirm away from his mouth, cursing him under her breath for knowing every erogenous zone on her body. She was already wet, she could feel it as she shifted her hips, trying to press herself more firmly against the vibrator. He was moving it again, sliding lower… away from the one spot she needed it most.
“Goddamn you!”
He chuckled against her throat, switching her toy onto the next setting as he scraped his teeth over the abused flesh of her neck. She’d have a nice little bruise there in the morning, a reminder of who she belonged to. The thought made heat surge through his veins, his already hard cock swelling even further. It was almost painful at this point, but he wanted to prove something here… he had to be patient.
She tried to squeeze her legs together, hoping it might make things a little harder for him. Of course it didn’t deter him in the slightest. He simply pressed his massive hand between her legs and parted them with hardly any effort at all, continuing to torment her with his maddeningly slow pace. He rubbed the length of the device back and forth, nearly bringing her to her peak only to rob her of her climax with an abrupt retreat. He did it over and over and over, and she was going to lose her mind.
Raph moved his attentions to the other side of her neck, turning the vibrator to its highest setting and pressing it firmly over her clit for a fraction of a second, making her cry out in surprise.
She was going to die. He was going to kill her, she was sure of it. Every time he did that it was like she was being thrown into an orgasm, only to have someone pull her back at the very last second. If he didn’t stop that soon he was going to give her a heart attack! “Holy fuck, Raph, please!”
“Ya sure that’s all ya want? Or wouldja rather have sumthin’ else?”
She tried fruitlessly to rip her hands from his steely grip, wanting so badly to reach down there and just finish the job herself. But no… he just had to tease her… that insufferable, delicious… arrogant… fuck-machine!
He gave her another fleeting touch with the toy. “This?”
The breath caught in her throat.
He tilted his hips, pressing the bulge in his shorts against her clothed pussy and thrusting hard. “Or this?”
She nearly went cross-eyed, a strangled sound leaving her as she was robbed of her orgasm again, the devilish bastard pulling away before she could reciprocate the fevered grinding. The thought of his immense girth inside of her was almost enough to end it, but she was achingly empty. Damn it all, she needed him!
“I will throw that fucking thing straight into the garbage if that’s what you want, but you NEED to put your dick in me right the fuck now!” she shouted at him.
He growled triumphantly, dropping the sex toy and releasing her wrists. She made to undo the button on her jeans but he batted her hands away, taking hold of the material and ripping it right down the middle.
She probably should have been mad at him for ruining another perfectly good pair of pants, but at the moment they were just an obstacle, and she couldn’t have been happier that they were no longer in the way. Plus she’d be lying if she said it didn’t turn her on when he went all ‘caveman’ like that. Her panties followed suit, and she lifted her hips invitingly as he slid off her thighs, moving between them as he yanked his shorts down.
She had been expecting the satisfying pleasure of his hardness filling her in one hard thrust, but she hadn’t expected him to retrieve the vibrator and press it against her throbbing pearl at the exact same moment. The result was an instant and unexpectedly mind-shattering climax, the scream that issued from her throat likely having roused half the damn building.
Raph hadn’t expected it to be quite so intense either, and the feeling of her wet little box clenching around him like an unforgiving fist coupled with the vibration against the base of his shaft pushed him right over the edge too. He moaned loudly as he rode it out, the high seeming to last forever before he finally slumped forward, switching the device off and tossing it carelessly onto the floor.
His little kitten was still twitching beneath him, her eyes wide and dazed, her thighs trembling against his hips.
“Ya okay?”
She tried to speak, but all that came out was a whimper, so she managed a nod. She felt utterly boneless, little aftershocks still tingling through her with ever shift he made. Her wits returned to her slowly, and when she trusted herself enough to think again she managed to stammer. “Y-you… are such… an ass.”
He laughed, leaning down to nip her shoulder before he rolled to the side, slipping out of her and making her jerk a little as residual pleasure zinged along her spine.
They lay there for a little while, until finally Raphael said, “Don’t throw it out.”
She turned a questioning look his way.
He grinned. “It has its uses… but I gotta ask… why pink? Ya don’t seem like a pink kinda girl?”
She chuckled a little at that, shrugging. “I didn’t have a lot of options. There were only two colours.”
“What was the other colour?”
She smirked. “Blue.”
He scowled. “Pink is good.”
She laughed breathlessly. “Thought you might say that.”
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