current biggest problem with writing from Azriel's POV:
when you're the strong, silent type, who literally keeps to the shadows and observes as his job description - you don't have a lot of dialogue. Or action.
My man is just standing in the background watching everything go down like a damn tennis match why did I do this to myself
so are we just going. to skip over the fact that shane litteraly considered hiring the devil. to host a history show. and only pulled back because of his inept social skills.