Everyone says: why the rule about dialogue tags isn’t cast iron
I’ve seen dialogue tags discussed a few times recently on writing forums.
The discussion goes like this.
‘When writing a piece of dialogue, do you need synonyms for “said”? Doesn’t it get boring for the reader? What about words with a bit more expression, such as exclaimed or spat or shouted or yelled?’
‘Noooo,’ comes the reply, overwhelmingly. ‘Only use “said”.’
I agree, mostly.
I also…
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50 WORDS TO USE INSTEAD OF “SAID”
Do you ever find yourself over-using the word “said” in your writing? Try using these words/phrases instead:
stated
commented
declared
spoke
responded
voiced
noted
uttered
iterated
explained
remarked
acknowledged
mentioned
announced
shouted
expressed
articulated
exclaimed
proclaimed
whispered
babbled
observed
deadpanned
joked
hinted
informed
coaxed
offered
cried
affirmed
vocalized
laughed
ordered
suggested
admitted
verbalized
indicated
confirmed
apologized
muttered
proposed
chatted
lied
rambled
talked
pointed out
blurted out
chimed in
brought up
wondered aloud
(NOTE: Keep in mind that all of these words have slightly different meanings and are associated with different emotions/scenarios.)
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Sanji: My handsome Marimo.
Zoro: You think I'm handsome?
Sanji: Of course I do.
Zoro: Handsome people have both their eyes.
Sanji: Are you self conscious about your eye?
Zoro: No...I don't know. Like it doesn't matter to me that its scarred but, I don't see it as a handsome feature.
Sanji: Well, maybe not handsome in the traditional sense but I think you're a handsome guy.
Zoro: *smiles* Then I don't care if other people think I'm handsome or not. You're the only one that matters to me.
Sanji: *smiles*
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i think. personally. niko (only person in the world who could pull this off) should convince edwin to do the flyana boss you wish trend with her. crystal films them.
both of their energies for the running and lip sync are WACK but it's adorable
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All evidence suggests yes
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every time I see that "words to use instead of 'said'" post I die a little inside.
1. Just use "said." It's an invisible word. If you're using it often enough that it's noticeable, you've got a problem with your prose and pacing, not your vocabulary.
2. half those words don't quite mean what the author thinks they mean.
3. if you use "uttered" more than once every 50k words, you're doing a lot of things wrong, and that's probably not the worst of it.
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Sorry for reaching out so randomly, but I'd just like to confirm that the part in your intro that says "i dont condone pedophilia, incest, homophobia, transphobia, racism etc etc. so like if you do, please go fuck yourself i dont want you here." is right? You really do not mind pedophilia, incest, transphobia and racism?
WHAT NO, THATS NOT WHAT CONDONE MEANS
IM TRYING TO SAY THAT PEDOPHILES AND VISE VERSA SHOULD FUCK OFF
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lwj is unmatched and also has no friends
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Source.
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I get where youre coming from but they Did say that Riz was asexual in an adventuring party episode
i don’t disagree that riz is ace (although i feel like ‘canon confirmation’ in the form of an adventuring party [already deuterocanonical] for another series where murph was not present is fairly weak confirmation)! but some people are very adamant about him specifically being aroace, which isn’t a bad or wrong reading by any means but isn’t incontrovertible canon either. i think that the ambiguity in the show in this regard is good! riz doesn’t need to definitively know who he is or how he feels or what he wants to call himself! he’s 16!
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another one of my little pedantic pet peeves is people thinking regency = historical, rather than a specific historical era, and calling literally anything regency even if it's like a solid 100 years later
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Watching Stampede with my family made me realize how genuinely insane I have turned thanks to it
Like wow the actual physical EFFORT it took me to not randomly start explaining the composition of a scene, the color choice, the framing, the voice directing and the choreographies of certain scenes, as well as some of the lore behind it I should not explain because spoilers.
No, sorry. I lied on my résumé . I can’t like anything a normal amount. I’ve liked this for less than 4 months and I’m very deep into the trenches. And it will unfortunately become everyone else’s problem as well, because this one will stick around for a long time.
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PISCINE MERMAID AND PORCUBUS
two of my favorites 🥰
If wonderlab is unable
Fairy Festival and Porcubus
god this took fucking forever but i kinda just picked this up and ran with it. YIPPY <33
scarlet nymph! a mostly stationary abno with a tendency to get very out of hand very quickly. taking inspo from lotuses, fae, and the game of loves me/loves me not. it never breaches, but it Does have the capability to kill any agents that get too careless and let it grow restless. rough theming/etc notes under the cut bc i sure did spend. a while. researching skdjgndkfj
ok lets take the codependency and dial it WAAAAAY up. game of trust / taste of happiness / love you, love you / grant me a soul. so like. from a place of love. it wont save you, it wont fix anything. but just once youd like to feel anything other than the crushing pressure of the depths. lie to me if you have to. we dont have to be able to see, we just have to live in this moment, together, now. may we burn up in a blaze of passion. ironically, the love of a moth to a flame. euphoria so blinding it consumes you in its entirety.
its the idea of giving and taking when theres nothing left to be passed about. an entirely self-serving image of love and joy, from the perspective of one who doesnt know any better. (shackled but it doesnt know why / a soulless lump.) all there is is extracting happiness from others, no matter what the cost may be. love me, love me not, but the petals all fall off anyway.
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ALEKSANDER BARKOV ✧ 240328
Somebody told me my first year that you gotta enjoy every day, because it goes by fast... I know it's been a quick eleven years, and hopefully many more.
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