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#ALL OF YOUR GUESSES ARE VALID AHH
bahja-blix · 2 months
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😐💀 A Dumbass Appeared (Ask Edition) A post regarding Viv Stans (Part 2)
Before we begin I want to say that I will absolutely not be censoring the person in this for valid reasons. I'll however censor the people who are just regular visitors.
What brilliance unfolds in my ask box? They put themselves out there on purpose "because reason"... I guess?
Reminder This is the Internet, you put yourself out there, your out there forever and if you do something stupid or say something stupid, your idiocy might go viral enough where you get called out so don't expect people to cover you up when YOU did this To Yourself
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When I changed my bio to say "Bored ASF, Ask a Goth" I didn't mean be a god damn loser and make up shit on purpose for Bait reasons.
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Yes this is real and Yes these were sent by a Viv Stan and it's OBVIOUSLY Bait but I still wanted to review it just for fun because I was literally laughing my ass off and I ain't even high!! 🤣 that And the actual person was Serious about deleting their profile along with taking the time to remove one by one every like and post from their profile which is hilarious. I didn't even make a post at the time and they disappear Anyway 😂. So I had absolutely no option to respond regardless. Lol you didn't think I'd see that but I did LMAO. You took the time to send me this but couldn't take a couple seconds to block me right after so I don't see your profile disappear but I guess you're just that stupid. What stopped you from just deleting your account without going through lengths to type this shit up?
We start with Kona, a boot lickin Viv stan living in denial over the fact that their obviously a Viv Stan. I said I wasn't going to answer this but this is HORRIBLE 😂 How could I Not share!
I love how you literally sat here and took the time to go ""Anonymous"" on the first ask you sent me showing your name and profile only to turn around and send me Another ask and Then another begging to me down on your knees basically telling me to forget I saw your ass 🤣🤣🤣
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Omfgfgfggg🤣🤣🤣
I absolutely applaud how you "went out of your way to ALL these critics" like your some kinda Big Dawg white knighting for Viv telling us to "Listen up" because God Damnit "This town ain't Big Enough for the two of us" only to completely disappear off the face of the earth because you knew I saw your ass and you got scared.
I'm assuming you saw my last post where I said "Stick it" when referring to someone else that didn't agree with the helluva boss and hazbin hotel critical community...so you took it to heart and used it in the ask!? Did my post offend you 🥺🥺🥺? Omg I'm terribly sorry that I'm not a boot licking Viv Stan... I truly am (⁠◡⁠ ⁠ω⁠ ⁠◡⁠)
So... you attack Showtoonz for no reason other than *Double Checks Notes* ahh here we go "Having valid opinions" fresh off the table *chef kiss excuse* lol
LMAO they really said "Ass takes" omg no wayyy 😂
I also applaud how you basically said that the entirety of the helluva boss and hazbin hotel critical community an "embarrassment to our democracy" lol where that come from? and that the best argument you can come up with is that "*ughhh* your all "cOnSeRvAtIvEs" like did you travel across time and space through the Internet, see my page, and pretend to get triggered over the fact that I'm p***tically balanced in every direction?? Open minded if you will!? What does critiquing a show have to do with what's going on outside in the world? You do realize a lot of these people critiquing Viv Are in fact Democrats (me included in that spectrum) that Were fans of Viv and don't agree with Viv because she messes shit up on purpose 😂
Love how your one of those people that's obviously too far on the edge who are an actual embarrassment to society because this is the shit you put out there along with the
"YoUr NoT oNe Of Us" argument because what else would you pull out of your ass like legit your literally the type of person that likes to sniff your own fucking farts... Geez
I can't stop laughing 🤣
"One of Us! One of Us! Gooble gobble, Gooble gobble, One of Us! One of Us!" Like I can't. We Dems ain't gonna bow down to you and kiss your ass like your some kind of King so you might as well get over it buttercup
Regarding the last one for Bait reasons you decided to bring janky brained Joe into this... What a legend! You really showed us Dems the middle finger and went "Fuck ALL of You" 😂 Hey pal I'm NGL, but all I'm saying is that maybe you shouldn't be so into your own p***tical fart clouds so much because all that methane n shit will clog up your thinking.
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"OMG I've been exposed by my own "Brilliance" in taking down these critics, please don't expose me"
W H E E Z E !!!
this last bits my favorite part
"*Clears throat* "If you disagree with me I'm going to "delete my account"
(Welp I guess I disagree with you :D, have a nice day ^^ Adios!! 🤣) Wait? You were actually Serious??? 🤣🤣🤣
"run to Twitter" with all my problems (because of course your one of those losers) and "bitch" to my two followers that "Will raise all hell" down onto those "Antis" who are so Mean and Negative where my post is sure to go viral enough to take down the entire critical community and reap their rights away from them"
Without any proof, but instead your tail tucked between your legs as you run and hide.
PA THETIC
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Managed to get this on the way out. A Viv Stan in denial who's also a hypocrite. Oh but we "anti Viv Stan critics" have "ass takes" and "no valid criticism" You blindly support woomy... The same person who attacked multiple people in our communities for having valid opinions!
Fucking Cringe dude
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mavrintarou · 1 year
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Lord Miya Osamu [2]
Its looking like three parts... makes me feel bad for Lord Sakusa. I might need to give him a second part.
Warning: explicit smut; mentions of pregnancy; angst Notes: If you're new to this bandwagon, welcome, this is this is the 5th Haikyuu character Lord Series - please check out the others in my master list. There is a part in here that it reflects a mini scene that happened in Lord Atsumu but nothing confusing.
First part
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Osamu’s cock hardens by the second and oozes milky white cum every time two of his fingers move in and out of the hot and soft walls of Y/n’s pussy. His fingers felt wonderful inside her, and he couldn’t wait nor imagine how euphoric it would be when his cock is replaced with his fingers.
He keeps his eyes alternating on his hand and her expression. Her knuckles are white from gripping the sheets of the futon, chest moving in slow deep breaths. Her eyes are shut with her lower lip trapped between her teeth.
“Does it hurt?”
She shakes her head.
“Do you want me to stop?”
She shakes her head again.
“Open your eyes and answer me properly.” He demanded, needing to know he is the one making her feel this way. Needing validation, that he is the only one that will make her feel this way from now on.
The moment her eyes open and look straight into his with the same burning passion, that was all Osamu needed.
“Please, don’t stop.” Her voice barely whispered.
Osamu adds a third finger, just to properly stretch her out and prepare her for his cock. He knows he is large. Thick. And long. But the way she feels around his three fingers, she was still much too tight, and he didn’t want to hurt her.
“’Samu,” her arms open wide, “enough, I want you.”
He lets out an agonizing groan, stroking his cock with his other hand. “This… might hurt you.”
Her mouth parted, watching the tip of his cock ooze cum each time he stroked upward. “I can handle it…”
And that does it for Osamu.
He pulls out his three fingers and uses the glistening juice to coat his cock. His other hand sticky with his pre-cum.
His thighs flex at the thought of cumming inside of her. Filling her over and over until he is sure that she is his.
Forever.
He wanted to make her round and beautiful with his child… no… children.
“’Samu…”
Osamu breaks out of his breeding trance of imagining her pregnant with his babies.
But he knows better. Not until they wed.
And he is going to wed her.
And put his babies in her.
He swallows the lump in his throat, shifting his cock closer to her wet glistening heat.
He knows he shouldn’t…
But what’s the risk if it’s just the pre-cum?
It won’t get her pregnant, right?
He presses the tip to her core, rubbing it before pushing the fat tip past her entrance. “Ahh… you –“ he chokes back on his words.
In one swift move, he thrusts until he’s fully nestled inside of her.
Osamu collapse over her, holding his weight on both his elbows. “Y/n… my Y/n… you feel so wonderful.”
Her hand cups his face and she bring his lips down to meet hers in a heated kiss. “Make love to me, ‘Samu.”
His thrusts are slow and deep, to ensure that she has adjusted to him.
Or that he has molded her pussy to his cock.
Because he is determined to be the only one to make love to her for the rest of their lives.
Osamu sits up and runs a hand through his hair. Hooded eyes land on her bouncing tits and he remembered lying in bed wondering the day he would get to feel them… touch them… suck them.
His guess was right the first time he touched them by accident, they are large.
His palm is filled with the softness and squishiness, and he gives them a handful squeeze. He swoops and takes a nipple into his mouth, suckling and swirling his tongue around the pucker tip.
Goodness, he couldn’t wait until they are full of milk.
Osamu switches over to the other side, making sure to show the same attention as well.
He doesn’t even notice his thrusts has become harder and faster.
“’Samu…” Y/n whined, legs wrapping around his body. “I’m…”
He was rutting so hard, so deep inside her sweet pussy that he came seconds after he felt her walls flutter and contracted around is cock.
He had not meant to cum inside of her but couldn’t help it.
“Y/n…” he mumbles breathless, sitting up and glancing down at his work. Her chest was marked with various red marks and her nipples looked like they have been properly suckled. “Sorry… I did not mean…” he loses his train of thoughts when her fingers graze gently along his arm. “You felt… too good.” He sits up straight and stills at the sight of their connection.
How intimate it was.
He withdraws slowly, wincing at the sensitivity.
While the damage was already done, Osamu lifts both her legs, pushing them forward until her pussy is facing him.
“What are you doing?” Y/n asked quietly. She watches his concentrated gaze at her intimate core and was about to close her legs when he prevents her from doing so.
“One second…” he mumbled.
Osamu is always careful, making sure to never cum inside any woman. His father always warned him, but he couldn’t help it when it came to Y/n.
All his senses went out the door and it came naturally to him.
As if it was rightfully his responsibility to be the one to cum inside of her.
He was too embarrassed to tell her he has always fantasized what it would be like to cum inside of a woman he cared about… and watching it flow out.
At last, the milky thick load he shot inside of her made its appearance by dribbling out of her hole and down her backside.
A hand shot out and covers his sight. He looks up at her and she mutters, “stop, it’s embarrassing.”
“Move your hand,” he orders softly, and she bites her lip before retracting her hand. His eyes hard at the gooey glob that trails down and stains the sheets. He releases his hold on her legs and uses his fingers to wipe the remaining fluid away.
His mind goes into the gutter again as he stares at the fluid that came from both their bodies.
To think this stuff can make a baby… Osamu thinks to himself.
“You’re so perverted,” he hears her say.
“Me?” he almost felt offended, but the thought went out when she sat up and turned around onto all fours and was about to get up when he grabbed her hips, stilling her. He presses himself behind her, grinding his hips against her bottom. “Where are you going?”
His cock instantly hardens again. He playfully humps her, “one more time?”
She doesn’t answer but drops down onto her elbow, pressing her bottom into him, submittingly.
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They laid tangled in each other’s limbs after a few rounds of love making.
“Do not mind me being bold and straightforward, but how old are you?”
Y/n lifts her head off his chest, “I’m twenty-six years old, how old are you, ‘Samu?”
He couldn’t help the foolish grin on his face, loving how she calls him ‘Samu now than my Lord. “I’m twenty-four years old. Just two years younger than you.”
Her eyes look at his lips, “two years still…”
Osamu lifts her chin, forcing her to look at him in the eye. “It’s only a number.” She smiles, but it’s not convincing. “What’s wrong?”
She sighs, “I don’t want to rush you, but my body is aging by the day… if… if you are serious about me, ‘Samu… I don’t want to waste too much time…”
He turns his body completely towards her and pushes the hair behind her ear. “I am. I will go back home later and discuss with my parents.” He brings his lips to hers, “I want to bring you home.”
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Two weeks later, Y/n keeps herself occupied with the Matsui. Saeko has visited twice and glows as a married woman.
“Any news with you and Lord Miya?” She whispers the moment they had a private moment.
Y/n tries to control the heat rising on her face. She will not disclose what happened that night. The following early morning, Osamu guided her back to the Matsui resident and promised her he will return for her. She was glad her aunt did not question her absence the night before. “We are speaking…”
“That’s it?”
Taking a deep breath, Y/n answers, “I am waiting on my Lord.”
What she means behind that was that he is speak to his parents and will make the next move.
Saeko’s face lights up with joy and she squeals. “I cannot wait to hear good news.” She gives Y/n’s hands a squeeze. She leans forward, “I have potentially good news too…” she leans back and places a hand on her abdomen.
Y/n’s eyes widen with joy, “already?”
“With the way Ojiro and I have been –“
“Shh!” Y/n covers her mouth. “No need for details.” They both giggled like schoolgirls. “I am very excited, and I pray to hear good news in a few weeks of time.”
“Same goes for you too Y/n. You are definitely glowing!”
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After a long day of what seemed like doing nothing, Y/n sighs and relax against the tub. The hot water was sooth for her body and muscles.
Her lower back was aching, and she caught herself yawning in the late afternoon.
And she was exhausted by bath time.
She grabs the soap and lather her arms and move to wash her breasts when she hisses at the tenderness.
A shock zapped her as she touches her chest again, feeling the tenderness.
She’s has had tenderness breast before her monthly bleed but… they were never this tender.
Counting in her head, it was more than fourteen days ago when Osamu made love to her numerous of times.
And he came inside of her all those times.
Of course, it was stupid of her to think it was okay since it was her safe days.
But the many times Tadashi made love to her when he was still alive, she did not conceive once.
Tenderness breast, lower back ache and fatigue?
Am I pregnant? A hand rests against her lower abdomen and a soft smile curve on her lips.
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“What do you mean no?” Osamu demeanor darkens at his father who sat across from him.
“No, you cannot marry that widow.” His father, who is a splitting image of his sons, repeated. “Atsumu has already caused enough problems for us,” he sighs deeply, “I do not need you to too, Osamu. So please, spare this family another case of embarrassment.”
Osamu narrows his eyes at his father, “Y/n is not an embarrassment.”
“’Samu,” his mother calls his name softly, “you’re right, she is not an embarrassment, but she is a widow – do you know –“
“Yes, mother, I know what it means to want to marry a widow. I know what everyone would say, and I do not care.” He looks at both, “and you two shouldn’t either. Y/n is kind, she is well mannered, and she would make a lovely daughter-in-law as well as my wife.”
His father sighs frustratedly. “You are a single man, ‘Samu. You should marry someone in your league.”
Osamu scoffs, “that’s stupid.”
“Osamu!” his mother scold, “I agree with your father, she is not fit for you.”
Osamu stands up, “I love her, and I will marry her whether I get your blessings or not.”
“Sit down.” Osamu’s eyes harden at his father. Never in his life has he ever looked at his father this way. “Sit down, Osamu.”
Inhaling sharply, he takes a seat again.
His father exhales, “I know it’s not what you want to hear but I cannot allow you to ruin your life to marry her. There are many other eligible women out there.” He looks at his wife, “in fact, we found one for you.” He glanced over at his wife, “the Imai family has their youngest daughter who is of age –“
“I will have to respectfully decline, father. I have a woman I wish to marry and that is Y/n.” Osamu stands up again, “please don’t make this hard. I only want to spend the rest of my life with Y/n and that is all.”
Osamu was about to leave the room, ending the ridiculous conversation when his father called his name with a tone he has not heard since he was a child.
“You will not marry that widow. That is the end of this conversation.”
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“Lady Miyazaki, you have a guest.”
Y/n’s face lights up, she stopped whatever chore she was handling and hurries towards the main room ready to see Lord Miya.
The excitement on her face morphed as it wasn’t Osamu, but a young woman.
“Hello,” Y/n quickly composes herself and bows respectfully. “How can I help you… Lady…”
The young woman stands up, bowing. “Hello Lady Miyazaki, I’m Lady Imai Suzu, Lord Miya Osamu’s future bethrow.”
Y/n kept her composure and controlled her facial expression even though her heart has just been pummeled. “Congratulations Lady Imai.”
Lady Imai looked a lot younger, no more than the ripe age of eighteen.
She smiles, cheeks flushing. “Thank you but I came today because I wanted to confirm something with you.”
Y/n’s breath hitched quietly. “What is it that you would like to confirm?”
The young lady herself was hesitating. “There are rumors that…” she broke eye contact, “you were seen entering a hotel with Lord Osamu a few weeks ago?” Y/n opened her mouth, but she continued, “I am not mad or upset. Lord Osamu is a man, and he has his needs but after we wed, I do hope you will know your place.”
Y/n nods her head, “of course, you will not need to worry about me.”
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Osamu is livid.
Lady Imai Suzu is sitting in front of him, smiling fondly at him and his parents.
“I am honor to be part of the Miya family.”
Had Osamu known that the guest they were going to have for lunch was her, he would have found a good enough excuse to leave home.
His father and mother has been keeping a close eye on him that he has not been able to go visit Y/n or send her a message.
Laying up late at night, Osamu has been trying to find a way to end this engagement with Lady Imai.
He had no idea that his parents has been working diligently behind his back with his own engagement.
Words has already been spreading and he needed to figure something out quickly before it reached Y/n.
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It was three weeks later when Osamu had enough.
Enough of his parents.
Enough of this engagement talk.
Enough of Lady Imai.
And enough of Y/n ignoring him.
As soon as Y/n walked out the Matsui gates in her black kimono, Osamu came from behind, covering her head to shield her face with his haori and guiding her away from any lurking ears and eyes.
“It’s me,” he whispered when she struggled out of his grip.
“’Samu?” he hears his name faintly.
When they are alone in an alley, Osamu turns her and cups her face, kissing her lips softly.
A kiss silently saying I missed you.
He pulls away and looks both direction before pushing the haori off her head, covering her shoulders.
They gazed at one another before something changed in her eyes and she looked away, “what are you doing here, you shouldn’t be here.”
At this point, he is sure she knew about his engagement.
“Look at me,” he softly demanded but when she doesn’t, he lifts her chin with a finger. “I’m sorry it took me so long to get to you.” His lips curve slightly, “you didn’t help by making it difficult, but I forgive you.” He teased.
“Well, you shouldn’t.” Snapped, pushing his hand away. “You need to leave before someone sees you.”
Osamu takes a step, closing the distance between them and cups her face. “Look at me, I am going to break this engagement.” His eyes soften when hers begin to gloss with tears. “I love you. I want to be with you and only you. I’m going to find a way out of this and I’m going to make sure we are together.” His thumb swipes her tear. “Believe me, okay? Just… just wait for me.”
“No, Lord Miya.”
Osamu’s face dropped. “What are you saying?”
She gently pushes his hands away and takes a side step away from him. “No, I am not going to wait for you. I do not want to be with you anymore either.”
He whispers her name, “you – you don’t mean that…”
“I do,” her voice firm, “it was good while it lasted but we need to go our own ways now.”
Osamu steps forward grabbing her shoulders, “stop – you don’t mean that. You want me just as much as I want you.” His eyes search her eyes, “you’re lying – you’re just saying that to get me to marry Lady Imai.”
“You need to marry her; it is the right thing to do.”
“Bullshit.” He swears, “I don’t understand this change of heart, but I know it’s not real, you don’t feel that way Y/n. I don’t believe you –“
Looking at him straight in the eyes with her glossy ones, she cuts him off with, “I have accepted Lord Matsui Satoshi’s marriage proposal.”
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Osamu’s brow knit as the servant of his brother hesitated. “What do you mean Lady Miya isn’t here? But my brother is here?”
She nodded her head, “yes, Lord Osamu.”
Osamu gives her a confused look and thank her, leaving to find his brother.
He enters his brother’s office and takes a seat across from him. Ever since his older brother settled down, Osamu never thought the day would come to see his brother act mature.
“I didn’t see sister-in-law, where is she?” Osamu asked when his brother set his writing brush down.
“Home.” Atsumu answered quietly and tiredly.
“In her room?” Osamu is genuinely confused. His brother’s demeanor and the atmosphere, something wasn’t right. “I came here to ask her for some advice…”
His twin lets out a sigh, “home as in her family home.”
Osamu blink, trying to understand the situation. “So, you’re here… and she’s… there?”
Atsumu sighed for the nth time, “yes little brother. She has been at her family home for a week now.”
He went on to explain what was going on between them.
Osamu came to get some advice from his sister-in-law to end up having to give advice to his own brother.
“… you need to get her back and treat her well.”
“I know,” Atsumu answered, “I need to get her back.” Atsumu lifts his chin, “why are you here?”
They spent the last twenty minutes talking about Atsumu that Osamu forgot why he was there until now.
“You see brother, I too am having woman problem.”
Osamu can’t remember the last time he and his twin had a serious conversation – one that seem like they needed each other.
He watched his older brother pull out a stash of fine sake and pours two cups, respectfully setting one cup in front of him. “Well then, spill it.”
“How do I break my engagement with Lady Imai?”
Atsumu sips his sake before answering, “you don’t want to marry Lady Imai?”
“Of course not, she’s still a young girl.” Osamu sips his sake, exhaling deeply. “I do not want to marry her because I’m in love with someone else.”
Atsumu’s brows hiked, “oh, who is this other lady?”
“Lady Miyazaki Y/n.”
Atsumu’s head tilt as he lets the name sink in. “Isn’t that Lady Aran’s – “
“Chaperone, yes.”
“The widow?”
“Yes,” Osamu gritted.
Atsumu takes a deep breath, lost in his thoughts. “Let me guess, mother and father said no?”
“Correct.”
“And engaged you with Lady Imai without your consent?”
“Correct.”
Atsumu lets out frustrated sigh, “you need to be a man and break it off with Lady Imai.”
“Just like that?”
Atsumu nods, “yeah, be honest and break it off with her. Tell her you love someone else.”
Osamu stared at his twin for a second, “when did you get so…”
“This happens when you fall in love, you understand things you didn’t get before.” He sips his sake, “is Lady Miyazaki someone you really want to spend the rest of your life with?”
“Yes.” Osamu answered in a heartbeat.
“She’s worth it?”
“Yes!”
“Then you need to fight for her.” Atsumu stares at his brother, “exactly like what you just told me. We need to fight for our women.”
“But she’s going to marry that punk Saitoshi.”
Atsumu crosses his arms against his chest, “you’re going to let that punk take your woman?”
“Over my dead body.”
. .
“We cannot marry.” The smile on Lady Imai’s face morphs into a frown. Osamu has called her to have a private meetup at her family home. “I am in love with someone else and it would not be fair to you or to me if neither of us is happy. So,” he inhales sharply, “I cannot marry you. I am sorry.”
Osamu is prepared for all scenarios. Ready for her to cry. Ready for her to hit him. Ready for her to yell at him. Ready for her to refuse.
She lets out a deep sigh. “It’s Lady Miyazaki?”
“Yes,” Osamu answered softly, “it is her that I am in love with. And she is in love with me too.”
“I know,” Suzu’s voice cracked, “I saw the pain in her eyes when I told her I will be your future bethrow.”
Osamu frown, “you met her? When?”
“About four or five weeks ago,” her head bows, “it was before our parents officially announced it.” She apologized immediately when Osamu closes his eyes and inhales sharply. “I did not think and assumed she was only someone to temporarily fill your needs until we would marry.”
“You are wrong,” Osamu said quietly. “I love her, and I wanted to marry her before my parents even spoke about your existence. Unfortunately, my parents do not approve and went ahead and moved forward this engagement.” No longer wanting to waste any more time, Osamu looks at her, “I am here to tell you that I will be calling our engagement off. I owe you the explanation first and will take all the responsibility. I wish you well, Lady Imai. You deserve someone who will love you dearly as I love Y/n.”
. .
First Lady Matsui looks at him with sorrowful eyes. “Lord Miya, she is no longer here.” She repeated. "She has returned home with my son, Satoshi.”
The colors on Osamu’s face drained. “What – what do you mean?”
“Lord Miya, you mustn’t come here, you have a bethrow already and I don’t want any issues to come to us – “
“It is Y/n that I love and that I want to marry.” Osamu interrupts her. “It is I that she wants to be marry too.” He steps forward, “aunty, please – please tell me where she is?”
“Osamu,” she lets out a sigh, “I know your parents will not approve of her because she is a widow, don’t make this hard for you and for Y/n. You knew better than to get involved with her.” She takes a step back past the gates, “you shouldn’t be here, please return to your home.”
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verycharismaticdragon · 10 months
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...Would it be alright to ask how the sequel to "A Transmigrator and a Time Traveler Walk Into the Bamboo House" that you mentioned in the AN is doing? If not, please ignore this ask, thank you for all of your writings, and have a lovely day!! Otherwise- it's been half a year, and I was curious if you're still working on it, or if you've shifted fandoms/stopped for one of many other valid reasons? Have you had any favorite moments that you looked/are looking forward to sharing? Any sections that you're really pleased with how they turned out?
I love your story so much!! Ahh, I'm just *still* so excited to see how the relationships develop, now that the truth is on the table!! I keep wondering whether or not Binghe will find out about his Shizun's plans to revive himself - with the System dangling the promise/reward of accessing the memory data, Shen Qingqiu might find out about it! But, would he tell Binghe? Would he think it would reassure Binghe, or make him feel like absolute *scum* - Binghe suffering so much due to his death that he turned back *time*, when he wasn't *really* dead!
And! It's only been 3 years, not 5 it took, but - did the System simulate the old reality long enough that he would have awakened?? Would he get access to any simulated memories that occurred between Luo Binghe turning back time, and him giving the System go-ahead to stop running that old world? AAHHHHHHHHHHHH
And, will we get CucumberPlane friendship??? The Binghe-Airplane friendship was *amazing*, so could they be an actual, proper group of friends????
I just keep circling back to imagining how on *Earth* Shen Qingqiu will respond to the truth and all of these revelations, once he's gotten over the initial shock and the immediate need to comfort and reassure Binghe! Once he has a chance to *think*, what knots will this man tie himself into???
...Ah, I love your story and world so much!!! I'd still be incredibly happy and satisfied if just what you've written so far existed - thank you so much for the wonderful, wonderful story!!!!!!!! Please know that it continues to live in my head-rent free, and it likely will for a *long* time to come!!
Have a wonderful day!!
It's still a thing that's happening! Just not... soon lmao. I'm currently re-reading canon slowly and thoroughly, to both sharpen my SQQ voice and to ensure I'm not missing details!
(Yes I'm still in mourning about forgetting that bit from vol.3 about LBH physically pulling SQQ out of bed during disciple days, and unknowingly contradicting it.)
(Also I gotta put it out there that it took me almost 2 years to write Transmigrator Time Traveler. With a year-long break in the middle. So I'm just hoping to write the sequel a lil faster than that.)
As for the scenes, I'm having a lot of fun with the post-realization convo, wherein SQQ is trapped between 'well im straight so im gonna turn him down' and 'cant make binghe sad!!!' (and the undercurrent of not really wanting to turn binghe down. that he refuses to acknowledge.)
Some highlights:
“And if not after three years, then maybe after five, or ten, or twenty years,” Luo Binghe continued, with a hopeful lilt Shen Qingqiu didn’t know how to smack down without feeling like a heartless villain. “If not then, then maybe in a hundred years shizun will consider giving this disciple a chance…” And thus, before Shen Qingqiu could think up a proper reply, he was blasted in the face with this enormous number Luo Binghe seamlessly threw out.
and this (context is that lbh has wheedled a 'well i guess lots of things could happen in 100 years...' out of sqq, and is trying not to be too demanding)
“This disciple has no right to ask for anything else. If shizun…” Luo Binghe, seemingly not aware he was doing so, pulled a face, “if shizun wants to… other people……” Shen Qingqiu swallowed an undignified chortle that threatened to break free. Binghe somehow managed to look both like he was a puppy left out in the rain, and like he had bitten into a particularly sour lemon. Shen Qingqiu truly couldn’t help it; the urge to tease was just too much! “What,” Shen Qingqiu asked mildly, “you aren’t gonna promise to poke out the eyes of any men that dare to look at me? Not even hang any of my exes on the palace gates..?” Luo Binghe startled out of his expression, blinking confusedly before looking up at Shen Qingqiu. “Oh, right, no palace,” Shen Qingqiu ‘remembered’. “And no exes, for my part.” After a moment, Binghe huffed out something between a laugh and an exasperated sigh. “I could get a palace, if shizun wanted one,” he said casually, almost offhandedly, as if that would require about as much effort as picking up dinner from the specific restaurant that was just a little out of the way — sure, some effort, but definitely nothing too daunting. (Binghe really was so effortlessly cool! — Shen Qingqiu couldn’t help but note.) “And shizun wouldn’t be happy if I poked someone’s eyes out on his behalf.” If it was anyone else, Shen Qingqiu would take this as a joke: like, oh, that’s the only thing that’s preventing you? But… no matter how sweet his Binghe was… he was still very much the protagonist who conquered the Endless Abyss. “Mn, please don’t do that,” Shen Qingqiu said seriously.
(me, writing this: im like dropping hints that sqq is still fundamentally comfortable with binghe despite being shook by the realization that he was being romanced!)
The first outline for this scene btw was just:
Sqq: sorry we can't be in a romantic relationship Lbh, dramatically: OK but I want to be the most important person in your life >:T Sqq, relieved: oh why didn't you just say so, okay In their thoughts, both: I don't think he understands what 'romantic relationship' means...
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As for other things:
SQQ will not be learning about the plant body thing for a while yet. I know where I would put it, but I'm as of yet unsure if I'm going to write that instalment. For the sequel, SQQ will not get his memories unlocked until very late into the plot. Watsonian explanation is that he will not have the time to watch like 6 years of memory-TV straight, and if he asks the System to show him something, he has to at least know it happened. Doylist explanation is that he will have enough problems for me to maintain tension level even without him being fucked up about putting Binghe through his fake death :) and so I'd rather save it for a moment where it could be a major tension point of its own.
The System did not simulate the other world for long enough for "SY" to come back there, and even if it did, it would be like. a chatgpt version of SY. Plus the way i described how system's saved memories work, it'd be more like how SQQ experienced SJ's memories in the dream realm, and not as if he had actually lived the events. (And honestly SY living through coming back to find Binghe gone would be too angsty for me. I like things balanced between hurty and comforty.) (But also every time I think about how this au could be used to set up a spare SY!SQQ and I've decided against it, I imagine this:
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sorry binggy)
Lastly, the cucumberplane friendship is on the menu, and so is the 1 braincell trio know-the-future club shenanigans ;D
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dorizardthewizard · 3 months
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Galactik Football season 3 rewatch, eps 13-15
Episode 13:
Funny how the Pirates, who have the most motivation to find the contact, are the ones supporting an immediate evacuation whereas Brim Simbra is going for the “no need to panic people” route
Brim Simbra: He's right. Especially since many people will leave Paradisia right after the final anyway. The evacuation has to take place calmly.
Well fuck all the retail workers and support staff on Paradisia then. You guys are at more risk because we'll only announce a proper evacuation once all the visitors are gone <3
Again they missed their chance to have D'jok and Sinedd taunt each other at the start of the match, their roasts used to be hilarious
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The way Mei is just watching them with her hands crossed sfdjhds girl, be ready!
Man I complain about Sinedd but D'jok's behaviour is annoying me more
Lol why did they just let the cat walk in, didn't they know about the incident at the start of the season?
Damn they really joker-ified Harris
Brim Simbra this wouldn't be a problem if you'd just ordered an evacuation
Luur came to watch the match in his football kit I guess
Damn, Galactik Football tournament finals can never go on without a disaster huh?
Why does it look like everyone has left the stadium already (that is a FUCK ton of people by the way, SEVERE danger of fatal crowd crushes. Which wouldn't be happening if you pre-emptively evacuated everyone, BRIM SIMBRA) but D'jok, Mei and Sinedd are still taking their time getting off the pitch?
I find it a bit hard to believe that D'jok's so far gone he'll literally just stand there as the stadium falls apart around him. In season 2 it was because he was in shock at least, and anyway this is all kind of a re-hash of the end of season 2 but worse
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This is so funny they're just standing there 😭 Unbothered
I do love Sinedd saving D'jok and that his excuse is that he can't fight him if he's dead dsfjkdf it's hilarious
Seeing the flux effect on the 2D animation is so uncanny!
They seemed to be able to switch to using the flux for different purposes pretty quickly, like in football it mostly just gives them more power/speed/agility but they immediately have no problem channeling the Breath outwards and shooting it at stuff
It's a huge moment though, seeing them use the flux outside of football. If there were more seasons it could have been cool to see this as a can of worms opening and a debate around the potential loosening of the rules, with a balance between the benefits flux can bring vs the dangers
Sinedd you dumbass they would have left already, that's how evacuations work. Although I see him being too scared of losing them again to think rationally
TRAIN BRAWL! TRAIN BRAWL! Spider-man 2 eat your heart out
RIP Harvey, a real legend. And flux war veteran!
Of course she's a serpent lady
ooo look you can see the space jump gates! Cool little bit of background lore on how travel works in this universe
Where tf is Sinedd
Ahh Phoenix is going down with the ship, pretty cool moment
DAN DAN DAAAAAN
Episode 14:
Aww Thran and Ahito holding hands 😭😭
MARK JUST... DANGLING MICRO-ICE BY THE LEG?? It's kind of cute he's comforting him in his own way, although Micro-Ice's very valid reaction to all this is still played for laughs lmao
Ok so how sentient ARE the robots in this show? Sidney is obviously very sad about Harvey being gone, and we've seen the Technodroids have normal conversations before. But everyone's reaction whenever Sidney gets sad is just 😬😬😬 awkward LOL. Are robots like second class citizens in this universe? No one believes their emotions are as real as humans? But are they?? So many questions
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Artegor coming over to help Aarch with unpacking sdhsdfjj and blaming himself for encouraging them to go to Paradisia 😭 Their hug 😭😭 Going feral over them
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Wuh... in the middle of a good natured conversation he just,, throws the trophy? Why? It's so random 😂😂
So did Aarch and Artegor actually resolve their dispute, as dumb as it was? Oh it was just thrown in to have drama for a couple of episodes and now suddenly they're good? Ok sure
Aw Norata seems so much happier now, look at him excitedly showing off rare flowers
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So these kids just.... use the flux? And NO ONE has noticed this yet? It's just... they were notified IMMEDIATELY that Rocket had used the flux to save Tia, how is this continuous use going undetected? I guess we already had that question considering Tia already knew how to use the flux in season 1, but with her you could at least make soooome sort of assumption of her being sheltered somehow as a daughter of diplomats. Maybe the flux society only noticed Rocket's flux use so quickly because they always make sure to track GF players really closely, but still if these kids are just chilling using it all the time, on GENESIS, it looks like the flux society are worryingly shit at their job lol
But that's the thing, season 3 introduces SO many crazy new concepts – new tournament, mixed flux teams, players moving to other teams, using flux outside of football, characters moving to different roles to shake up the status quo... so much interesting stuff but the execution just flubs it, especially with the character development.
Damn Tia's got gymnastics skills!
Oh so the last time we saw Sinedd, he was running back into a collapsing stadium to find his parents and we had no idea if he'd made it or not, and now the next time we see him he's just chilling walking with his team? I don't know much about direction in shows like this but I feel like we should have had a scene where he reunites with Mei at least before this??
Actually come to think of it, D'jok ends up on the Snow Kids' ship during the evacuation and we never get to see their reaction to him! Of course at first they all just want to survive and are obviously worried about him, but what about after? Was it awkward? Did they talk? TELL ME
Sinedd is a dick cutting Mei off like that but kind of sweet to see him refer to the Shadows as family
Wait have D'jok and Sonny interacted since Sonny got healed? I feel like we're sorely missing some father and son interactions here, and D'jok has been really needing it! And where's Maya in all this??
Mei is right to question the “parents” with how sketchy they're acting, but it's tough. Sinedd's finally got that part of himself back and there's no way he'll consider the idea of losing it again.
New flux society guy agreeing to move the date of the GFC, ooooor you could try and catch this guy? Useless mfers
Episode 15:
Show really doesn't give us any detail on how someone actually masters another flux. Like how does it work?
Oh Mei's getting sick now from the Smog, but how did Sinedd get over it? He did have symptoms of Smog poisoning in season 2 but I don't remember him ever getting cured like Artegor did? Aarch had to quit the Shadows because it had gone too far, is it actually something you can just overcome? Is it different for everyone? Is it down to overusing it? So many questions!
I like that Mei was just like. NOPE this is hurting me, even if I liked you I ain't staying! As she should.
Ooo Yuki's mastering the Elektras' flux!
Wait so everyone thinks team Paradisia are actually from the planet? Which iirc only became habitable not that long ago? I'm confused on the origins of these girls, how are they cyborgs? Do they have any lives and family outside of the team Lord Phoenix assembled? I mean they're not androids? I feel like since they're closely connected to a main character, they should have gotten some more backstory.
Oh so D'jok left team Paradisia already? Why exactly? He seemed all about winning with them. We don't even get a scene of him leaving them and their reaction??
What?? D'jok's just decided to do coaching all of a sudden? Because of one little encounter with kids playing football?? He was obsessed with winning tournaments like 5 minutes ago how did this change come about??? Like. I can SEE the vision and D'jok becoming a mentor figure is a fun idea but... we need to see the steps of getting there!
That Lightnings girl is so cute though
Mei says she only left temporarily but um... sis that was not the impression we got lol you disappeared abruptly and sent everyone heartfelt farewell messages
English dub goofs up again: D'jok says he'll never go back to the Snow Kids after what THEY did, but then goes on about how HE messed up and they'll never take him back. And again, what made him realise he was behaving poorly? You can't just set up a character's development, then suddenly show them once they've reached a conclusion. Was is the near-death experience? The fact Mei still wanted to help him despite how he'd acted? His loneliness finally catching up to him? I WANT ANSWERS
Mei: Don't you want to play for the cup? D'jok: We've done it, Mei. We've won twice! What's the point?
OK this is super interesting, I'm gonna link @millimononym 's post here about D'jok's potential arc (hope that's ok!) because I think it fits really well with this. For a guy obsessed with destiny, hitting his peak early could really mess with him. You could have such an interesting arc about this and accepting that life goes on and that our lives don't have to be defined by reaching some greater goal or purpose. It's about doing it with your friends and, if the show delved a little bit more in the whole post-flux war climate, it's also about being a symbol of hope for a planet that basically suffered the apocalypse. People joke about how the Snow Kids won three times in a row straight away, instead of doing the anime lose -> train to get better -> win scenario, but you could actually address this and use it to the story's advantage!
Aww Lun-Zia can't do it :( I can't remember what happens but it would be cool if she actually couldn't master the Breath, sometimes no matter how hard you try things just don't go the way you want
Wait so um... is no one questioning how the Paradisia girls still have their flux even though the planet is dead? And what are the girls even doing right now? They have no home and no Lord Phoenix, who took care of everything for them. And where did Nina-8 come from??
The Elektra's support of Yuki is so cute. Also kind of interesting lore that their planet is far from the other planets, and hence its residents find it very hard to connect to the flux, so much so it was assumed they didn't have one. A cool explanation for why the team hasn't shown up yet!
Oh she's been selected by the Wambas!! Of course they would want her on their team after seeing her play at Paradisia. Well that wrapped up nicely! Still, this confirms she was just some rando on the beach. And what was she up to before the tournament anyway? I wish we got to know more about her
Mark immediately has a crush on Nina-8 but somehow not Nikki-4 who looks just like her? XD
I don't mind Yuki staying with the Elektras actually, its the Elektra's first GFC and I can see her wanting to go further with them. And sometimes that's just life! Going on new adventures
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jojo-schmo · 5 months
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UHHHHH no anon but uh.....your art cool..i just wanted to say that lol- LIKE I REALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLY LOVE YA ART it makes me happy and your style is like...so cute! your style is pretty sweet and i like the au your doing (i am currently looking through all the stuff ya doin' lol) your really cool and your art cool and i hope you know u inspire me alot/gen! i hope ya have a good day and stuff ^^
AHHHH!!! Thank you SO MUCH for taking the time to tell me this omg!! So much love in my ask box, I'm so grateful for it!!
It means a lot to hear that you like my art style too! I spent so much of my life being dissatisfied with my style and thinking it was nothing special- but boy have I changed my mind and embraced what I can do :) I'm eager to keep improving and developing it further!
Shucks, being called cool just makes me feel so warm inside heehee! I'm just out here doing my best to enjoy myself and share some of those feelings with others on here! It genuinely means the world to be able to inspire even just one person. Thank you again, truly. Keep creating what you love!! <3
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Oh my goodness, that's incredible! Wow, THANK YOU! What an honor to even be able to help with a tiny part of your creative process. That character didn't exist before you brought them to life!! Isn't that just so cool? Feels like a superpower to me!
Don't feel bad about not wanting to share something! It's totally valid to have some creations to keep for yourself. I find that sometimes making things quietly to myself takes some of the pressure off and can still be very fun. And if you ever change your mind and decide to share, that's okay too! I bet there's someone out there who will love your drawings and ideas very very much. :)
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UWAHH thank you for saying that!! AHH I feel so much love and kindness!!
Honestly, it's pretty wild to me how much better and more confident I've gotten in my art even in the past year or so of making this comic. I look back at some of those first pages every now and then and marvel at the different ways I've evolved since then, hahaha.
I never would've imagined myself being able to commit to a project this big before. I guess I just kind of reached the mindset of, it's okay if I don't know how to draw everything. If something looks wonky, at least I gave it a try instead of giving up before I attempt it like I've done before. This can be a learning experience for me too! And I'm so glad I'm committed to it :D Turns out getting out of your comfort zone is a very good way to improve!
Thank you! Life in general is just all right haha. But I am definitely very happy to have a little corner of the internet here with kind people to share stories and art with <3
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ramenrescue · 17 days
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i know your main thing is ousa/usao and oripa but i was wondering how you felt about yuuo? do you think that the problem with them was that ogata wanted yuusaku to choose him over anything else (their father) which by extension meant that yuusaku had to accept his philosophies and (imagined) defectives or was it simply that ogata wanted the pure version of him to be secretly the same as him, proving himself correct? (or a third thing, i would love to hear your thoughts about them regardless)
I think both reasons you listed here for Ogata killing Yusaku are valid -- I don't think it's one or the other. Yes I agree. I agree with both (lol).
Thoughts, thoughts... welp, I still haven't quite wrapped my head around Ch. 310 when Ogata says "Yusaku was the only one who loved me". So I'll riff on about that even though that's off-topic -- oops!
"Yusaku was the only one who loved me" made me confused when I first saw it-- because one could argue that he received love from his mom at one point, his grandparents, Asirpa. The list is short but not completely empty... so *maybe* Ogata's 'real' definition of 'love' is for someone to 1) understand who he truly is (a "normal guy") and 2) genuinely, and unconditionally, show affection.
So like Usami fulfills 1) -- he can read Ogata like a BOOK -- but unfortunately he doesn't actually LIKE this part of Ogata and instead chastises him for being a weakling.
Asirpa, well, she SORT OF fulfills 2), she likes Ogata, but conditionally, when he's on their side. Also because Ogata lies too much to her for her to really understand who he is, doesn't quite fulfill 1).
His mom, well, she almost fulfills 2) but she kind of loves Ogata as an extension of Mr. Hanazawa, telling him to follow in his father's footsteps and all that, so her love for him might be more on the conditional side.
So I SUPPOSE Yusaku is the only one to fulfill both 1) and 2), in that he 1) saw through Ogata's edgelord-ass facade and explicitly told him "what the fuck are you talking about, literally everyone feels guilt, even yourself, because you are just a normal guy" and 2) he just genuinely loves Ogata, hugging him and crying for him, even after Ogata clues him in on his fucked up philosophy, even after Ogata tries to persuade him to kill a POW, even after Ogata tries to trick him into losing his virginity.
What's really tragic about this whole thing is that he had this realization that Yusaku genuinely LOVED HIM mere seconds before he took himself out ... AFTER he killed Yusaku for the reasons you mentioned in your ask... :'( like bro was looking for unconditional love the whole time and IT WAS RIGHT THERE...AND HE MURDERED IT.
I did answer in another ask that Ogata was agnostic about whether "attention" comes from a positive or negative place -- and I wonder if maybe his attention-seeking behavior is just a quick dopaminergic fix and what he was really looking for was for someone to truly "see" him and love him for it. Wehh.
Edit: I just realized after I posted this that yes, I guess it was sort of on topic -- because one last possible reason why Ogata could have killed Yusaku is that he was OVERWHELMED BY LOVE. and he literally was like ahh
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^relevant tweet. I posted this as a joke, but honestly, kinda true... the agape from Yusaku shone unto him ... and he was TERRIFIED...
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fitzrove · 1 month
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🖤or 💜 or 💛!
(Sorry for taking a bit of time to reply!! I wanted to answer all of them hehehe)
🖤 Black: Do you think about your story when you're not physically writing it? Does it help with plotting scenes, character arcs, etc.?
Yes, always... Most of my stories begin with rotating ideas in my head, so concepts and ideas, even dialogue, will usually have to exist as a starting point before I actually write anything down. And for actual plotting - I really like using outlines and outline almost everything I write, so really it is a thing where I will be thinking about a fic and then a random moment will turn into an outlining moment if I go to write new ideas down :D
💜 Purple: Name one song you're listening to while writing your next/current fanfic. How or why does it help the writing process?
Ahh... I wasn't really listening to anything while writing my most recent fic xD Actually, listening to songs with lyrics while writing can be tricky for me, I prefer to listen to music while doing the aforementioned rotating ideas in my head thing 😁 One EXTREMELY fitting todolf song though is Poison by Alice Cooper... everyone listen right now... don't want to touch you but you're under my skin (deep in) etc
💛 Yellow: Do you ever alter, highlight, or de-emphasize certain canonical traits in a character? If so, why and describe how.
Ahh, this is such an interesting thing to think about!!!!
For something like Tod/Death, every writer has to kind of come up with their own interpretation. We never get insight into what he's thinking (kkog doesn't count that's not canon...), we don't have a clear view of his motivations because of the layers and layers of lies by Lucheni (up to the viewer how many layers there are), all we know is that he's There and there is some sort of deep connection to Elisabeth and, to a lesser extent, Rudolf.
However, the more fic I write, the more I write Tod as somewhat of an extension of Rudolf's personality. The idea really is that he's whatever you want him to be, he taps into all your weaknesses and insecurities and approaches them in a way that will be the most effective on you for the purposes of You Know What. Mirrors etc,,,,, Unfortunately for the kind of Rudolf I usually write, this mostly means that tod is pretty b*sm about it AJSJDJJF. So I guess for Tod I tend to emphasize the sexuality aspect which is a side effect of the kinds of fics I write LOL.
Rudolf, on the other hand... I keep saying his canon personality is "sad, queer and rebellious", he is literally on stage for like 10 minutes and most of it is being gay s*x depressed ajsjdjdj. There's a lot of portrayals to pick from... I think one of the main things I do is try to add historical facts into the mix while keeping the canon meow meow personality. Fic Rudolf usually has noble goals but despairs his life away because the environment makes it impossible to fully pursue or reach them - IRL Rudolf was similar but also fanatically obsessed with hunting I'm told (by stephanie xD) and a raging misogynist. I guess, though, that the way I write him is influenced by the fact that when the fics take place (because of what todolf is...) we're seeing him at his most private and emotionally vulnerable.
Ooh the question also asked "why"... For Tod the "why" is that I just don't really care about the paranormal entity interpretation, I mean I tried my hand at it with my todesengel fic but even with that I tried to make it fit together with the force of nature interpretation and not "god" or "demon" or idk "Satan" etc. I don't like the god or paranormal interpretations, or stuff that leans too heavily into Tod as a "creature", because 1) it would shift the genre of what I'm trying to write - idk I try to go more for toxic historical fiction metaphysical romance or whatever and not for dark fantasy or paranormal romance, 2) it's hostile to religious beliefs, like, it precludes the existence/validity of other god-like entities in this universe and more "atheistic" belief systems like Buddhism. I don't want to base my fics on a take where, for example, the Christian tradition is in a worldbuilding sense "more true" than another religious system. I think that's lazy and lets author bias show through too much - though perhaps I have a different kind of author bias, as someone raised culturally as a member of a pretty hands-off organised religion, but with a cynical attitude towards its impacts on society XD Anyway um yeah to me Tod is usually more like gravity or temperature and not like an actual Dark Angel King Of The Underworld...
As for Rudolf - I just write him according to personal preference and the theme of whatever fic I'm working on at the moment. Part of it is my reading of historical events (heavy emphasis on the "troubled hero, huge loss of potential" line of thinking) and part of it is just what sorts of performances I like best and want to incorporate into my belief system ajajsjdj.
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sabraeal · 1 year
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as a writer how do you stop thinking about like getting kudos/comments? I've just started writing fanfic, and when I start a writing something -- it goes well and then eventually I get to point where I'm like "ahh but what the readers don't like that? or what if I don't get as many kudos or comments" and it makes it difficult to continue because then it becomes stressful -- I guess how do you deal with "wanting to write stuff for yourself" and "wanting validation" thanks!
You're going to hate this answer, because I hated it too, but TIME. When you first start writing and you get kudos and comments and people love what you're doing, it's a huge validation of your effort and talent, and it's natural that you want MORE of it. When I first started putting up fics I already had been writing for 15+ years, knew I was good at it, and still for a good few years found myself really glued to the hit counter, and the kudos, and wondering how I'd be able to get people to comment the same way they did on things like Seven Suitors.
But the thing is that commenting comes and goes in waves, and unless a fandom has a big comment culture, or is large enough that you're guaranteed a good glut of them every time you post...you're going to hit a point where you write exactly what everyone wants and get crickets. And at that point you'll get ANNOYED, because LOOK, I MADE THIS, i made it for YOU GUYS, and now y'all don't have anything to say? It'll get to you. It'll make you doubt that you know what anyone wants at all. It'll happen and it'll suck the whole time.
Lots of advice will say "write for yourself," which is an excellent sentiment. You should always write what YOU want. Put into your fic what you want to see, write the nitpicky poetic metaphors and craft the most screwball twists your heart desires. Pour yourself into the most niche AUs and most tin-hat canon theories. At the end of the day, you want the IDEAS you put down to be for you, because comments and kudos are nice, but if they don't come...you have to be proud of what you put out, even when it feels like an echo chamber.
But also...we don't POST things for ourselves. We post things to share. Fic are a conversation with canon and it is perfectly natural to want to create something that creates conversation among other fans. So you're never going to fully get the need for validation out of your head, you're not. You can hide hit counts and ignore your inbox all you like, but the want to have someone interact with your work, to inspire someone to reach out to you will ALWAYS be there. You just have to create a healthier relationship with it.
Be confident in what you write. Think less about whether people will like it, and more about how you WANT them to react. The reader is the most important character in any novel, but it's the one most authors forget to manage. When you come to a point where you go "oh man, I hope this is good for them!" stop and go, "what do I *want* them to be feeling here?" Focus on where you're putting their attention and whether you WANT it there. There's so much you can do when you visualize your relationship with the reader as PART of the work, and it takes off a lot of the pressure of "is this good? is it disappointing? will this get me validation?" and brings it back into the realm of storytelling. You are taking your reader on a journey, and when you do it well people will think less about "did I like that?" and more about "what comes next?"
#asks#writing advice#writing#please understand nonnie that what you are feeling is completely natural and part of the process#and shades of that will stick with you no matter how good you get#but the thing you want to keep in the center of your mind when it comes to that#is that you can only get kudos once on a fic and you are lucky to get a 1:100 comment vs hits ratio#so the instant validation WILL dry up and you'll have to have something about your story#that makes you push through. because people will come back and comment!#people will blow through 50+ chapter and leave you the most emotionally hungover review promising you their first borns#but sometimes you will have written a good third of them with NO feedback whatsoever#and you just have to trust in yourself that it's good. it's FINE#i used to obsessively check hits and be really put out to see how many people were coming and not commenting#especially when i wrote really emotionally driven stuff and really tore myself up to get those feelings through#but i also would have been miserable only writing fluffy 1 or 2 shots with no plot just to get the flush of comments those fics get#you just gotta do what you gotta do and let your audience find you. recontextualizing the relationship helps a LOT#i already was big on focusing on the meta plot of my works because as i said. 15+ years. had a lot of time to experiment and get good#but i still had to like. give myself the same pep talk 2 years in about how to view that relationship#everyone goes through it and if they say they don't they're a liar and i mean that seriously 🤣
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aajjks · 2 months
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TC!dad!JK
how can he not remember what he promised her? yeonjin isn’t hurt that the promise didn’t come into fruition, rather she’s hurt that he’s standing there glaring at her like she’s the enemy. you asked a question and she answered, but maybe jungkook doesn’t want the truth out yet. you were supposed to be her but she won’t hold what you don’t know against you because that isn’t the real reason why she’s here.
“jungkook, please” yeonjin begs “i didn’t mean any harm in what i said. we were talking about husbands and all i did was tell her about a promise we made when we were kids”
yeonjin bows to you “please forgive me if i came off a offensive. i did not want to disrupt anything i just…i needed a favor”
“you are forgiven, yeonjin” you say “what is it that you need?”
“i..i was hoping i could work here with you. i need a job and the brothel isn’t bringing in enough money for me anymore”
your eyes widen when she says brothel. from appearance, you would have never guessed she worked at a brothel and you’re sure the men there weren’t the nicest to work with.
“m-my son and i, we’ll work for you. i’ll clean, i’ll deliver, i’ll cook, please just…i need a job or we’ll be homeless. that’s why i’m here because i was hoping you’d find it in your heart to give us a job here”
your eyes soften, both she and her son are in dire need of jungkook’s help and you’re hoping her plea for his aid will soften his cold gaze set on her.
“say my husband gives you a job, how will i know you won’t try to seduce him? just a few minutes ago you told me he promised to wed you and now you’re begging him for a job”
yeonjin looks up “i swear i won’t bother you or him. i’ll stay wherever you put me and leave you alone”
“and you’re being truthful? because if i catch you doing something you aren’t supposed to or even having thoughts about my husband, i’ll personally kill you”
“y-yes. yes, i am being truthful”
you look up at your husband who is starstruck at your possessiveness that he finds absolutely sexy. anytime you get like this it’s hard for him to keep his composure and he can tell you meant every word you said.
“how about you and your son join us for dinner tomorrow then we’ll discuss it”
“that’s fine. we’ll be here. thank you so much”
“be safe” is the last thing you say before yeonjin leaves the office to retrieve her son and then officially leave the palace walls with hopes the two of you will allow her and hyunjin to work for the king.
“soooo” you begin “what’s going on in that head of yours? you thinking about letting them work here? i think she’s being truthful. what did you think about her son? was he being sneaky?”
~🫧
He’s not in his senses right now because of the way, you just threatened that woman, you have finally fulfilled his wish of being possessive over him and he’s so happy right now, this is the second time she’s done him a favor when it comes to you.
But when you snap your fingers at him, he’s back into this world, and he asks you to repeat your question,,still staring at you with now lust filled eyes.
Can someone give him water?
“Ahh… I don’t think her staying here would be a good idea.. yn she just told you that I was supposed to wed her— which is not true, but that promise was just childish.. it was before I even saw you, so it’s not even valid!” he immediately starts to defend himself, but you’re not even bothered about that.
He sighs in relief.
“Oh well… I am a king and it’s my duty to make sure that my subjects are not struggling, so how about I provide her son and her with a business that’s promising?! Like a fruit shop or a flower shop?! or maybe he could work in the coal factory or something like that?! or maybe… she could work in the kitchen, and I would make sure that her son receives education because he is the same age as jinseoul and I don’t think he deserves to work so hard right now…”
He feels bad for the kid if not for that woman, but she wouldn’t dare to come between you too because he knows you’ll kill her— like you just threatened her.
“honestly, you should tell me what to do and..,” he looks at you, “I don’t think you’re actually capable of killing someone, but that was really hot of you yn.” He presses a kiss on your cheek.
You’re so kind of even invited her to dinner tomorrow which was not even necessary in his opinion, this Nation is so blessed to have a queen like you.
“Her son? I’m pretty sure he was staring at my daughter. I wanted to kill him, but then I…. Should I kill him?” He grits his teeth as he remembers him.
“but overall, he’s a nice kid. He was really scared when I talked to them.”
“also brothels should be illegal.”
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I don't know who decided to put Ray under Isabella's care but the culprit is the biggest ever. giving her her own child to raise to death? Of course she didn't know and would have never knew if Ray didn't remember but still. Do it means that the other mamas in the other farms had to raise their child too? I love that thank to Isabella who has listed all the mamas and their alive children (when she was grandma) because now they can be reunited in the human world. It will be nice for the youngest
You know what.. for the longest time my most hated TPN character was that demon bastard who ends the life of my favorite villain ever.. BUT NOW? I think it might have a new contender hahahaa. Ahh, yeah, that’s really such a cruel move to pull off. I wanna doubt they had any idea on which babies go to which mother, but I sorta can't. It seems the Grandma distributes the babies to the individual plants and we know from Isabella’s side-chapter that Grandma’s have access to all sorts of information. So if Sarah (if it is her here) actually knew that she was handing Isabella her own son, then DAMN. Yet another reason for me to hate her!
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It’s not a totally bad thing though? If Ray was sent to a different plant, he would’ve still used his infantile amnesia to learn the secret of the house, but then I dunno how well his plan to survive would go if he had to make a deal with another mom. I hardly believe any other mom would even tolerate the idea one bit like Isabella did. Take Krone for example. Once she learned from Isabella that some kids knew the house’s secret, she was so quick to decide that those kids needed to be shipped off. I’m sure a handful of sisters/moms would’ve handled the situation the same way, so Ray might not have lived very long at another house. That is, if he even attempted to make a deal at all.
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So I guess we have to be thankful he did end up under Isabella’s care instead? Partly because she low-key says “to hell with the house’s rules” and cares more about producing high quality merchandise, but also because she was dealing with her true son. It’s a rare moment when her “Iron Lady” facade cracks so the revelation certainly effected her greatly, so as much as she tries to hide it, she does indeed care for him.
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As for other sisters/mothers raising their own kids or not, I'm sure it had to have happened occasionally, (Sarah certainly seems like that bitch to pull it off more than once too) but I don’t believe any of them knew like Isabella did. The four sisters in ch181.7 seem pretty surprised learning that their children are even still alive to begin with.
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I wanna say it’s rare the ladies wouldn’t know anything, but then again how did Krone manage to confirm Ray was Isabella's son from the note he left? We don't know what was fully written in the note aside from “Dear mother..” so while that alone could be valid enough proof, I still don’t understand how Krone managed to confirm this information as true instead of be skeptical about it or think it was just a trap.
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What book of secrets did you manage to get your hands on girl? I don't wanna put belief into something so random because there's really no better look at the book Krone uses, but they resemble each other very faintly..
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Anyways.. yeah, thanks to Isabella for raising the children so well that they were able to survive and possibly spend time with their potential mothers, if they ever choose to that is. I also find it real sweet that they're all so happy and relieved to be free. They truly deserve a life of happiness for all they've been through.
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I'm still unbelievably salty that ch177 ended the way it did (thank god that was the one positive change to come out of season two) because damn it, you can't give all these women and children freedom and a bright future and not include the best mom ever aka Isabella aka love of my life not ever having the chance to experience her happy ending with her own precious kids! Ahh I'm gonna stop here before I get emotional. Thank you again for the question anon!
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purble-gaymer · 2 months
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Howdy do! Resident geology graduate student here. The fact that you’re so invested in the geology of a fictional island is great, love that for you. Those volcanoes are, um, odd to say the least, but you make some very valid points about why they may be there. A+ work! That river is a whole different story and as a hydrogeologist it pains me deeply to see it, but I digress. Rooting for you with your classes! I’ve been there, did my time as an undergrad in geosciences, but the classes can be a ton of fun and if you enjoy the subject then you’re bound to find success. :)
Also- Love the blog and your writing. Been creepin for a hot minute and enjoy the story lore you’ve created. You have a creative mind that I only wish I could have.
Wishing you a fantastic weekend you lovely human <3
ahh hello!!! thank you so much! that’s so cool that you’re a hydrogeologist and you’ve just been here?? you’ve seen my work before?? the internet never fails to surprise me like small world huh. i was telling all this to my roommate last night and they said “with your inability to suspend your disbelief, how do you even enjoy things?” like listen if you took a geo course you would be mad about those mountains too
i guess i get to look forward to seeing some errors with the river next term, that’s fun. now that i think about it, shouldn’t it be running down from the mountains? or are there more mountains in the back we can’t see? wouldn’t it have just been easier and made more sense to put the mountains in the back as a natural border in the first place??
whatever. i’m looking forward to learning more, and i guess also further ripping apart dreamland. it’s a shame i can’t really do the same for the games because there isn’t a solid map. if they had a giant map of all of popstar you could put plate boundaries on there!! how cool would that be??? no one wants to talk about plate tectonics of their fantasy worlds
okay that’s enough i think. thank you for the message! have a good weekend, and best of luck with your work!
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I feel like I can guess the fandom you've been talking about given the recent Interests™ but even if I'm wrong you're so valid. People are different at different ages and sometimes you want one specific incarnation of them and sometimes you want another one! I have periods where I want adults with a job and I have periods where I want to see them ace their homework. The appeal of growing up together or the appeal of growing older together. And people just go "but but what if the teenagers have sex" do you think people who have sex at 15 don't exist? Is exploration of teenage sexuality not a topic that speaks to you?? Which, it's fine if it doesn't, gods know I get tired of teen coming of age stuff sometimes, but still. Isn't it interesting? To see people navigating this area of life for the first time? Especially if you add fucked up life circumstances on top. This is reminding me of possibly one of my fave porn comics where it's just the batfam but they're all Old Enough and then they have gay sex (except Alfred who I assume was considered too old and not hot and virile enough). This series rewired my brain at a time where I didn't care at all about comics. And it has teenage sexuality in it because sure it does! Why not! Anyway. Godspeed. May the teenagers kiss.
Yeah I'm purposely being vague in the posts bc ahh the Discourse(tm) might find me but it's fairly obvious which characters these are lmao. Thank you beloved <33
I also cycle through wanting to see characters be old together vs growing up together and everything in between, and I think spending three and a half months in the DC fandom with brudick and various assorted batcest ships has really spoiled me, between getting to just plug in various tags and having anything I want show up! And now here I am high key fixating on this other show and even though these characters are like Perfect ages for this kind of fic they're all always aged up 😭 I want to see the exploration of sexuality in relation to the world the live in, in how they have to approach their whole saving of the world thing, in the enemies to lovers speedrun that could've happened!! Just !!!!
Also can I get the name of that comic (if you remember it) because I would be very interested in reading it 👀
And thank you again beloved <33333 may your night be restful!
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fantomette22 · 1 year
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Ahh, I'm glad...! It is always good to take breaks, even with things you love, so please do so when you feel tired! I am one of your followers, yes, but I just got into bloodborne super recently and I feel a bit shy jumping into an already established community, especially since I don't really have much to offer it at the moment. The fact that there are active people at all thrilled me to bits! I'm sure with time I will get more comfortable with engaging!
You're right ! Breaks are important.
Oh I wouldn't have guess at first that you were a newcomer ! This is even more amazing.
And don't worry about that, take the times you need ! I first begin to play Bloodborne well one year ago now ;) but I began to really interact with the fandom and share stuff in May/June 2022. The time to finish the game for the first time after 100hours, dig in the lore researches and all. Make little stories in my head (if you just begin playing the game all the things we're sharing might be super confusing too XD)
It's also really cool to look at things around (some lore podcasts and a few things that the community made taught me so many things!) but it's even more important to look at the game on your own, take the time to analyze, learn and come up with your own ideas! Ideas you could share afterwards and discuss with everyone. And to look at many differents and diverse ideas as possible I believe.
The amazing thing with Bloodborne and fromsoftware games is that it's a puzzle with lot of missing pieces. There's so many unique things we can imagined and theorized about the universe that could fit. I want to believe that if any ideas don't contradict anything directly it's a valid idea and it should to consider, talk about (it's ok to disagree about some too but not to impose anything. It's important to respect people and what they can come up with).
Also I think you're probably playing the game right ? Well if you got an online subscription and need a little help with it... it will be my pleasure to help ! 👋
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vermillioncrown · 2 years
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What I’m getting from your response is that aomine finally got what he wanted ?? Ppl who have fun playing him and want to keep doing it?? Ahh that’s actually wholesome it’s been ages since I really thought abt the knb anime but that’s totally what happens in the anime it wasn’t the winning that helped it was the having fun
Like damn teikou really messed the GoM up like ?? They were middle schoolers damn .. I really like your portrayal of it :) thanks for sharing ur gift of writing <33 hope ur conference goes well!!
he's not immediately at that point. some sleepless nights, some pondering, "did that really happen? was it a fluke?"
the tōō match really felt like getting hit by a coin-filled sock for aomine (and momoi). the fact that no shit-talking happened after, they technically won, but if that's the case what is victory? there are valid strats using fouls and stuff... what makes this one different?
(momoi can guess but it's not like she can read minds. she's very intuitive in figuring out how high school sport boys think bc... fair. but she doesn't know the intricacies of how seirin approached this game, nor is it really understandable just watching the on-court team dynamic)
it'll take a bit before aomine realizes he might have what he wanted all along
(also it's a bit boring to make this indomitable antagonist be mundanely countered like all his other little friends, a checklist. i'm okay with how all of knb played out.
definitely wished they siked akashi out at the post-game lineup for disrespecting my boy mido tho)
yeah the kids got fucked up but it's possible to undo
thanks for enjoying (and thanks for the well-wishes)
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larryisromance · 2 years
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° The Eclipse°
Episode Walkthrough
Yes, I started another BL series, because apparently that's what I do in my free time, now.
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Episode 1
Another high school BL, but with a supernatural/mystery plot? Count me in! FirstKhao looking fine in this episode. The shorts are too much, but since they are portraying high school characters I guess that's what we'll have to bear?
Kan and Thua are gonna be a great second pair! I can already picture Kan adoring Thua because he's so cute and adorable, my chest hurts.
The mystery 'curse' is something I'm finding funny idek why. I know it's probably gonna be some teacher or even a prefect who is behind all this. It's a hoax, that I can already tell.
Episode 2
Ayan is so wonderful in this episode. Also, he sees beyond the tough exterior of Akk. I hope Akk shows more human feelings though. He's too much of a goody two shoes right now.
Akk is a virgin and the smile on Ayan's face when he gets to know this!!
I love the interaction with the dog, this shows that Akk is actually a kind hearted boy, who is trying to be a perfect-rule-following-Prefect Club President.
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They are so cute in this episode, I'm loving the interactions and they really do have an amazing chemistry till now. Even though, the plot is a bit heavy, I'm not finding this a hard watch. I'm craving more soft moments 🥺.
Episode 3
Ayan keeps teasing Akk, and it's so wholesome! Poor Akk, he's not even realising it yet, but you can already see that he is getting affected by the dashing Ayan. Akk is definitely stronger than Ayan, but that boy will have him wrapped around his finger pretty soon 😂.
Ayan giving Thua the needed courage is what I needed from this episode. He knows that Thua doesn't support all these forced upon rules, but he doesn't say or do anything about it. And he's trying to make Thua to let out all the pent up emotions he has. I'm hopeful they'll become great friends.
Kan admitted being worried about Thua!! Also he was jealous, but he didn't dare say that out loud 😂
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I feel Ayan's pain. His uncle's death had something to do with how the school treated rule breakers and he's trying his best to find out what happened. Or change it? We'll know more in the further episodes.
The rebel group is getting more courageous, lying down in front of the student welfare department. That was definitely Ayan's idea, wasn't it?
Ayan teasing Akk has me sighing in content. You can see how it affects Akk and messes with his heart strings..
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The flirting at Ayan's home? Oh Akk, I wonder how long can you resist this boy?
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Episode 4
This was so satisfying as Kan is clearly jealous. And I'm loving it.
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Judo, I love it. This was AkksGayPanic™.
Ahh, I was waiting for the 'accidental kiss' that always happens in Thai BLs. 😂 I love that they just awkwardly brushed the whole thing off and didn't even talk about it. Ignorance is bliss. The tension between them is palpable, now.
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I hope to see KanThua together in the next episode, because that boy is too precious to be suffering this much. :(
Episode 5
Kan is a precious yet clueless bean. He is trying so hard to make Thua feel comfortable, and wanting him to be happy, but he is himself scared of being judged. That is a valid fear and I can't help but empathize with Kan.
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Thua is such a sweetheart, he realises that Kan is affected by others' opinion and he spares Kan of having to leave his hand, and instead he leaves Khan's hand himself.
Thua has so many pent up emotions, he is bottling them up, and I'm afraid all of these will overflow soon. That Bruce Wayne account is Kan, for sure.
The trio of 'The World Remembers' group is so awesome. They keep on fighting despite getting so much hate, and being ridiculed yet they didn't give up on their rights. They represent the true spirit of fighting for your rights. I like this so much.
Ah, and I knew that Akk wouldn't delete the picture. He's so smitten by Ayan, I hope I'll be getting that pining soon!
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Episode 6
Akk, dear, although I knew it was most probably you who is making up this curse thing, still I'm disappointed in you. Ayan is totally justified in not trusting you blindly now. I hope you do better from now on.
Kan and Thua are making me feel many emotions right now. It's clear that Kan likes Thua as in more than a friend. Even Wat sees it. I just hope Kan realises it soon.
Ayan and Akk spending almost an entire day together, and the cute moments of them just staring at each other, pulling each other ahhh. Their locker moment. My heart is satisfied. But I feel sad that Ayan and Akk are still at odds with each other, Akk still not knowing that Ayan's uncle is dead. Ayan's recurring nightmares are heartbreaking. AND FINALLY, THE KISS WAS SO GOOD. THE TIMING WAS KIND IF PERFECT. AND IT WAS SO GOOD. YES, THAT'S THE KISS OF PURE FEELINGS, SO SOFT. AHHHH.
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The fact that Akk held Ayan even after kissing him, and not freaking out! Ahh, love it.
(Tumblr isn't allowing me more gifs so I'll reblog this with the other episodes later. Not my gif, last gif's credit to @heretherebedork ❤️. Sorry for reposting this gif, I couldn't find the kiss anywhere else. )
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KARMALAND REVOLUTION FINALE
Luzu: The first snow of the season comes with Karmaland first civil war. All the members at war and only one winner. Fire is calming me. Makes me feel things are simpler. Everything could've been simpler. What could have happened if we just spoke, if I just told Quackity why I did what I did, if Quackity wouldn't have done everything he did? I guess we'll never know. We only have what we have today. I can only defend me and my people today. Oh this writing is so beautiful but so tragic. What could’ve been... what was meant to be...
Luzu: I’m here Vegetta: Hold on a moment, I’m with Rubius :) Luzu: You’re WHAT
I’m watching Luzu’s POV did Rubius actually convince Vegetta to join him???
Rubius: This is shameful, smells like treason! Vegetta: You’re one to talk, you STOLE MY BRIDE
LMAO Alexby camouflaged lmfao. I adore Alexby
UHHHHH WHY IS STAXX RED. IS THIS THE STAXX FROM THE OTHER DIMENSION???
Wait is Staxx pretending to be on their side?? Does Luzu not know???
Staxx: I was told you are gonna have a good time and y'all will get me weapons. Vegetta told me they told me lies about you, Luzu. That you're oppressive, you kill them without warnings... STAXX. YOU”RE GONNA GET VEGETTA KILLED
Ahh Luzu’s telling them what happened to his daughter and showing them the heads Quackity left
I’m glad Staxx logged in for this event
Rubius just said he has a nuclear TNT, he says that if something bad happens they will blow it up and goodbye karmaland 5 RUBIUS DON”T YOU FRICKIN DSMP US, I”LL BE SO MAD
that would be a bit funny though since he just blew up the server on Saturday LMAO
OH STAXX ADMITTED HE AND ALEXBY FREED THE ANIMALS uh oh
FRICK QUACKITY LIVE
“Today, Luzu dies or I die” NOOOO
LMAO Rubius and Alexby eavesdropping
UH OH. THE LIGHTNING AND THUNDER... the gods are waiting to see how this ends
Luzu and the rest of the members: *screams of war as they fight* Quackity rn: *talking about yesterday’s Streamies*
QUACKITY FORGOT TO CHANGE HIS SKIN LMAO
What do you mean you haven’t eaten breakfast yet Quackity!!!!! (*is a hypocrite because I also haven’t eaten yet*)
Quackity really roll straight out of bed and hit stream, big mood
Quackity: I’m gonna text my mom, to ask her if we can eat some enchiladads. Awh..... that’s really sweet. I love Quackity’s mom :(
Awww Quackity’s talking about the skin maker who’s been doing all his skins :’)
Quackity didn’t want the one without a shirt ABSOLUTELY valid
WAIT NO HIS SKIN HAS BLACK CLOTHES, PLEASE DONT TELL ME THOSE ARE YOUR FUNERAL CLOTHES
Not Staxx asking for flashbang bombs because they’re what Titi loved best 😭😭 😭😭 
QUACKITY LITERALLY ALL THE OTHER BOYS ARE FIGHTING WHILE YOU”RE DOING THIS
wait I looked away for TWO SECONDS WHY IS LUZU SHOOTING AT SAPO PETA
Vegetta, talkinga bout the revolution: A cop that isn't a cop, a mayor that never was, and... Alexby. FRICKIN RUDE
Luzu: Wait, the fight can't be in town. No more innocent people can die, let's go to the esplanade. Well thank goodness for that
Luzu: Don't shoot first. If there's violence, it has to come from the revolution first. As always. QUACKITY DONT SHOOT AND MAYBE WE CAN TALK THIS OUT ok I say that but I don’t trust Rubius or Alexby’s trigger finger
Sapo Peta refused to choose a side and he logged out of Karmaland :((((((
Sapo Peta: I’ll come back when you decide to stop destroying each other sobs
Quackity: *is late* Luzu: A man late to the fight is a man with fear. LMFAO GETTEM
Not Rubius sending kisses in the chat
Luzu shaking Vegetta like “PULL YOURSELF TOGETHER, REMEMBER THIS MAN JUST RUINED YOUR WEDDING” and Vegetta’s like “But Luzuuuu :((((”
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LMAO Quackity just said love to Rubius but Rubius didn’t understand what he was saying LMFAO.... EMBARRASSING
OH FINALLY THEY”RE ALL TOGETHER I can finally mute one stream
I’m watching Luzu and Quackity ahhHHHH
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:(((
LMAO he revealed the Christiano Ronaldo ruse from yesterday pftt
HUH WHY DID EVERYONE’S SCREENS GO DARK
oh LMFAO THEYRE DOING THE CIVIL WAR POV SHOT
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I love that Quackity downloaded a mod to make it more dark and spooky
wait
HUH
ALIENS????? TITI’S DAD????
ARE THEY GONNA HAVE TO STOP THE WAR TO UNITE AGAINST ALIENS??? HELL YEAH
Ok here I was thinking they’d have to unite to fight against the gods but THIS IS JUST AS GOOD
SAPO PETA IS BACK
Alexby: They are rubius brothers, they are ugly as him THESE GUYS ARE SO MEAN TO EACH OTHER LMFAO
QUACKITY PLEASE IM BEGGING YOU, YOU AND LUZU HAVE TO UNITE TO FIGHT TOGETHER
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Vegetta: Alien attack thumbnail! :D VEGETTA NOW IS NOT THE TIME LMFAO
Quackity: What have you done, Luzu! Luzu: This wasn't me! It's from outside town! Can't we stop fighting for a second?!?! LMFAO QUACKITY IM BEGGING YOU
Quackity: After im done with this, you are gonna be the next one, Luzu. QUACKITY NO.... well you can’t say he doesn’t keep his eye on the prize
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OH.... THE IRONY....
Quackity was being attacked by an alien and Luzu rushed to protect him :((( Some things never change
I love how Quackity’s shaders add to the atmospheric-ness of the moment
Meanwhile Rubius and Vegetta are watching each other’s backs to make sure they’re safe wahHHH
Sapo Peta???
PLEASE don’t let Sapo Peta die today
Rubius: Help! Vegetta: I’ll save you even if I don’t like you Rubius: Careful, behind you! Don’t touch Vegetta, you bastard!
QUACKITY STOP BLAMING LUZU FOR TWO SECONDS AND LISTEN PLEASE!!!
STAXX KEEPS FLASHBANGING EVERYONE LMAO
Oh they’re gonna team up against the aliens and fight on Wednesday??? WELP. AT LEAST IT WONT BE WHILE IM AT WORK TOMORROW
Luzu: I compromised with Quackity to join forces one day and fight for the people. Quackity, are u free on Wednesday? LMFAO that’s so frickin cute it’s like they’re planning a date. Imagine aliens are raining down fire and Luzu’s like “So uh. You can’t do today or tomorrow, how about Wednesday?”
Vegetta: It’s a date it’s a date!!! LMFAO OK SO I WASN”T THE ONLY ONE WHO THOUGHT THAT, ALRIGHT.
Everyone: FOR KARMALAND!!!! SOBS
Staxx: AND HERE’S ONE MORE FLASHBANG! :D PFTTT
WAIT WHAT ABOUT WILLY
Luzu: Quackity... Quackity: I don’t want to talk to you ahhh the way they stopped to look at each other :(((
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Sapo Peta said they have to revive Titi to get his help to make a spaceship MAN. IS THAT THE ONLY WAY POOR TITI IS GETTING REVIVED LMAO
OHHH THEYRE GONNA GO TO ANOTHER PLANET, COOL
WAIT WHY ARE THEY GOING TO THE END TO KILL THE DRAGON
Luzu’s getting hit with such bad lag they suggested he go rest and Quackity was like “Rest? You’re such an old man” LMAO
Sapo Peta suggesting a party at Vegetta’s house PFTT. IT”S A TRADITION, I KNOW, BUT
Quackity: If Luzu doesn’t leave the mayor’s office after all this is over, I’ll kill him
NOOOO poor Luzu his lag is so bad :((( At least Alexby is hanging out with him
AWH... LUZU REUNITED ALEXBY WITH HIS HARAMBEE MONKEY.... :’) He’s still good in his heart of hearts
I flip from that wholesome scene to Vegetta and Rubius fighting about cats like an old married couple
Quackity is essentially just shoving his camera in Rubius and Vegetta’s faces rn LMAO
Luzu: I was taking care of him here. Alexby: I'll forgive you for everything! AWH... FRIENDSHIP WINS
Luzu’s having a heavy lore moment rn by himself meanwhile Quackity is chasing Rubius and Vegetta around listening to them fight with a giant grin on his face
Luzu: We won't do it for ego, or pride, or to show off. We'll do it for Karmaland! It's always for Karmaland. I love him so much
AHHHH Luzu looks so beautiful with the snow behind him like that
Awh Luzu did a great job
MEANWHILE QUACKITY....
Quackity: Any conversation between you two (Rubius and Vegetta) looks like a reality show, you guys get so frickin angry LMAO
Vegetta: It’s his fault! He’s the one who’s fighting! Rubius: Me? You’re the one crying. Mua mua mua
OH They’re fighting because Rubius wants to go to the end and Vegetta says they should do it when they’re all together I AGREE WITH VEGETTA
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IT REALLY DOES
SAPO PETA PULLED A FRICKIN ROCKET LAUNCHER ON THEM LMFAO, HE’S SO SICK OF THEM FIGHTING
Now LMFAO WAIT HOLD ON
hang on I’m clipping that
Rubius, chasing Vegetta and asking for a kiss Vegetta, spitting on him Quackity, pulling up their ages:
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QUACKITY CAN”T DO MATH
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Rubius: You don’t have a son! Vegetta: But I have my cats! >:( Quackity: Your guys’ ages combined are 65, just thought I’d let you know Quackity is SUCH a bastard, I love him so much
I love that Rubius and Vegetta will be yelling at each other at the top of their lungs then Rubius will give him a kiss and apologize. Lord. k!Rubegetta are so sweet....30 years married couple
NOT QUACKITY ASKING VEGETTA HOW TO FIND MODS AFTER BEING IN KARMALAND FOR 6 MONTHS.... BOY....
Awh Rubius told Quackity he was very handsome yesterday HE”S RIGHT
Quackity: Why would you make me have to team with Luzu to defeat this enemy? You know I hate him! Sapo Peta: ... just listen for a moment Oh???
HUH
THAT CAN”T ACTUALLY BE A GIFT FROM LUZU CAN IT???
Luzu destroyed his house and Sapo Peta just gave him a house he said was from Luzu. Is it really though??? Or is this Sapo Peta trying to smooth things over between Quackity and Luzu?
Quackity’s first instinct is to look for cameras because he doesn’t trust Luzu :(((
Quackity complaining about the house when Quackity’s own house that he built didn’t have a roof for MONTHS
Quackity: Trust Luzu? You want me to trust Luzu!? Sapo Peta, I'll tell you the truth: right now, I've made a temporary alliance just for Karmaland's sake, but when this is through, I'm going to put a bullet through Luzu's head. AGH... But yeah. Quackity’s not one to forgive and forget, no matter what happened
Quackity: I am bad because of the effects of my action, but I have never hurt anyone. It is always because they have forced me. They see my stupid face and I have to defend myself :((((((((( I want to hug him so tightly
Sapo Peta: That’s the talk of a terrorist That’s fair
Only one braincell between Rubius and Quackity, I swear
WHY ARE THEY MINING OIL ON QUACKITY”S OLD HOUSE
Girl the next Karmaland war is going to be about oil, I swear
MAN. MANNNNN IM SO GLAD IT DIDNT END IN BLOODSHED this is the best outcome I could’ve hoped for. This feels more in-line with Karmaland’s theme
This gives them time to heal and possibly reconcile, or at least, for tensions to lessen. I think Luzu will wind up forgiving him, but Quackity can’t. Either that, or Luzu will sacrifice himself to protect everyone else (which would suck and be a bad ending, but it seems likely too). Can’t wait to see what happens on Wednesday!
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