would it be funny if the knuckles series introduced amy and metal? i mean, each episode is 60 minutes and the amount of very well known actors is actually insane (they also have already finished the script before the strike, i think that the filming was over too? i'm not sure)
I NEED the knuckles series to introduce Amy because I NEED her in Sonic 3 just because I love her very much and I'm scared there won't be enough time in the movie to introduce her and rouge and shadow and make them all fleshed out characters. I don't know about Metal? Like, I think he deserves a movie actually. I don't want him to get an episode of a tv show I need a full plot for her, treat Metal Sonic righttt 😫😫😫 I don't like that they gave us Shadow so early, like, I get why they did it but NOOOO stop it give me my boy Metal Sonic!!!! Give me Amy!!!
I'm moderately excited for the Knuckles series. I'm kinda slowly running out of patience for the Sonic franchise that has cops as main characters -_- so I'm kind of worried for this show but I'll probably enjoy it and HOPE they at least put my girl there. I'd probably feel disappointed tho bc I really would like both Amy and Metal to get more focus -_-
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quietly gritting my teeth every time I think "ugh I'm writing these characters talking like they've had way too much therapy" and reminding myself "bitch you LITERALLY write this shit rather than going to therapy yourself, a couple thousand words of subconscious wish fulfillment around working through identity and relationship anxieties is actually NOT a bad outcome here"
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"Bakugo has every reason to be angry and want revenge against Shigaraki right now"
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"Bakugo is absolutely not acting heroic at all, and is stagnating and falling behind on his quest to being the great hero he wants to be because he still doesn't understand Midoriya and what made him save him from the sludge villain that day"
are two statements that can and, as of right now, do coexist.
Like I know Bakugo reflected on that day, and it seems like he's found the answer. But if he really thought about WHAT made Midoriya save him that day (the drive to SAVE--despite everything from the past, or even the previous 12 hours lol), he'd have a clearer understanding of Midoriya as a person, and understand why he was noticed by All Might in the first place.
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Do you have any trusted writing resources you use? I'm trying to get back into writing fic and I think I'm about average at it, but I'm struggling to "show, don't tell" everything. It feels like I'm just writing scene directions and dialogue because I'm not supposed to describe how characters are feeling or what they're thinking!
I think this is a great question to ask to get at the meat of what good writing is, so you're on the right track!!
my first real job was at a lit mag and a lot of how I write now came from their advice. it was pretentious sometimes, but it helped me a lot with exactly what you're talking about.
they have this short article on 'the six principles of narrative' that I would refer to a lot. to put them here:
Most verbs are active and transitive, rather than forms of to be or the “copulative verbs”: wonder, think, realize, see, hear, smell.
The story contains few adverbs, adjectives and qualifiers (“a bit,” “quite,” “in a manner of speaking”).
Backstory, exposition and description of setting are worked into the narrative flow.
The pivotal events in the story take place “onstage” as they occur, rather than being referred to later by the characters or the narrator.
Something is at stake for a character or characters in the story. (As one writing mentor put it: “You only cheer for a racing horse, not a grazing one.”)
In telling the story, the narrator herself goes on a voyage of discovery and takes the reader along.
the bolded part is esp relevant to what you shared: that stuff can and should be in your story, it just needs to work with the flow and pacing. especially with fic, which is all about feelings, it would be flat and dissatisfying to NEVER know what the characters felt, thought, etc. it's just a matter of not droning on.
I assume you're asking me this because you like my work (this would be an insane thing to ask someone whose writing you didn't like) so, from a personal lens, I just make sure every sentence has a purpose. every single thing you say should move the plot along. even if it's thinking or feeling.
SO much of my editing process is cutting sentences that start with "[character] looked." I always have people LOOKING places, and stage direction stuff like you said, but you've gotta be like.. "does that matter? what am I actually trying to say?" it doesn't matter that x is looking at something, it matters what's happening over there. verb it up. etc
I hope this is helpful. I also find it super inspiring to read work of writers I like, nothing gets me in the mood to write more. I'm reading name of the wind by patrick rothfuss right now and his style of writing is so inspiring I can't get more than a few pages without working on my own stuff.
AND, not to be an asshole, but. read books, not just fic. amazing writers write fic, but fic has a certain WAY about it and I think reading only fic lets a writer..... lean too heavily onto the patterns we all know fic has. the quality goes down when you make a copy of a copy of a copy. nobody's fault, but. you know.
anyways, good luck! love and light
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I also saw lady jenevia’s video and she was def upset about the lack of romance and asked why not any for kimiko and frenchie when we see Hughie and Annie getting it on all the time? And then someone commented that it sounds like they made frenchie and kimiko family love and she just replied with shrugs. I’m officially scared now too cause it sounds like they went the just family route? Whyyyyyyy
I just- How??? Why?????
Why build the foundation of an incredibly unique and interesting and beautiful and nuanced love story and essentially acknowledge that if there were ever such thing as soulmates, they're it just to be like "he's like a brother to her :D"
That's not the point!!! First of all she has a brother he cannot be replaced nor should he be. That role is filled. Assuming Kimiko isn't aromantic or asexual or I guess a lesbian?? - WHY NOT?? What reason would the writers have to not have Frenchie and Kimiko in a romantic relationship it makes no sense it's right there!! She loves him they love each other like????? What am I missing??? Am I dumb?? It just makes so much sense that I can hardly see it going any other way
Second of all when it comes to Frenchie - he's had such shitty luck in love his entire life. All his previous relationships that we know of were intertwined with grief (Cherie and Jay) and abuse (whatever with that Russian lady?) - like PLEASE he deserves a shot at something better
They both have these horrible pasts and in each other they were able to both reach a turning point and now they're both on a better path, together, and seemingly the same path. The natural progression seems to be that they're building a life together, whatever that will end up meaning to them. They were able to move on from their pasts and they're each other's future. It's just like??? How could it not be romantic??? You don't live out the rest of your life every day with your brother or your best friend. That's kinda one of the things that defines a romantic relationship
Uhg I'm terrified but I'll watch the video at some point today
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I would be perfectly fine with it if it was a suuuper slow burn and nothing romantic happened until the final season. I think it could be done really well and be really beautiful. I'd even be fine with it if they never even get the chance to/we never see them have sex like as long as they acknowledge their feelings and hopefully kiss I will be satisfied.
But if they veer it off into family territory fuck no
This is way too long I'm so sorry I am just going nuts over the idea that they might take them in the family direction it's so disappointing and confusing
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