#it's constructive criticism

[asarigg]

koujaku slander

Something I've been thinking of is why the hell Koujaku carries that big ass sword with him everywhere.

He wants to forget his abusive past and everything that haunts him in nightmares, he says himself that he wanted to forget his revenge once he was in the island, so why would he carry a sword that he doesn't want to use? It's not like he needs it to fight, he knows how to, he does it frequently and got training as a kid, he wouldn't have a problem with the bunch of tryhards that try to defeat him in the island. Makes no sense to carry a weapon that would only remind him of what he was forced to do.

So anyway my main point is that I think him not carrying it would add a lot more to his character. They basically made him carry it because design stuff I'm guessing, convenience or whatever. Besides the fact that not carrying it would make more sense for the person he wants to be in the island, I think it would add to the mistery they build around him.

When things get dangerous, suddenly he appears with a sword, since when does he have it? How does he know how to use it? When and how did he learn? You know what I mean. The whole point of the conflict between him and Aoba is that Aoba starts to discover a bunch of things that relate Koujaku to the yakuza, you know, dangerous people. Which is funny because Vitrip, but anyway, you could still explain why Aoba trusts them and starts doubting Koujaku because Virus and Trip say it out loud and say that they don't do the dangerous stuff. Even if they're lying, they're lying very well and Aoba believes them, he doesn't have any reason not to, specially since he knew them before they joined, supposedly.

But Koujaku, that avoids everything he can about his past, has hidden his tattoos, he started acting weird, etc, suddenly appearing with a sword that he can use perfectly and having that murderous and tenacious aura he's suposed to have would make Aoba's doubting feelings more intense for him and for the spectator. I don't know, maybe he got his sword hidden in his house when he gave up his revenge and takes it when they're about to go to Platinum Jail, maybe he could grab a random sword from someone they fight, anything that is just not from the start.

Also him having that murderous aura when he fights I think could be a really nice resource to use too, he doesn't look like that until he fights Ryuhou and is mad as fuck (or well, the glitter incident, but i mean exclusively when using his sword).

When he fights dummies in the island he's like always, but when in PJ he sees signs of Ryuhou being around it clicks and starts with that relentless, no mercy fighting style, that even Aoba is like ??? 😨. He's a killing machine. In the end, he was born a slave, and he'll always be unless Aoba can scrap him correctly. Him being Aoba's slave in his bad ending is just perfect, the only reason he's still alive is because Aoba wanted him.

(in conclusion he likes aoba using him when they have sex)

#koujaku #koujaku dmmd #dmmd #dramatical murder #this is not slander actually #it's constructive criticism #it would be slander if it was any other character tho

[underwater-fox]

I borrowed my sibling's watercolor (after begging for weeks straight) and regretted it

Artist rendition of what happened

Proudly drawing

Shows to sibling

*Judgemental stareeee*

Gets roastes

Dies

Here's the art

My insides

#wally darling #welcome home wally #welcome home arg #picture #artwork #send help #whyyyy #she just roasted me #she so had a string of other roasts that just ended my career as a new artist #it's constructive criticism

[thewizardhole]

happy pride u vile sickos

#i love you all #happy pride 🌈 #baldur's gate 3 #bg3 #bg3 memes #bg3 fanart #gale of waterdeep #gale dekarios #astarion #karlach #lae'zel #shadowheart #wyll ravengard #halsin #i am not accepting constructive criticism at this time

[mebssann]

Amity pestered Principal Bump enough times that he finally allowed Hexside to have a student council

#this was an excuse to draw Amity and Matt as President and Vice President student councils respectively #listen #Amity is obviously a responsible student and dedicated enough to make this happen that she was labeled as 'obssessed' #with making a student council ok #and Matt is canonically a great leader I WILL NOT TAKE CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM #the owl house #Amity Blight #Boscha #Luz Noceda #Willow Park #Gus Porter #Mattholomule #Lumity #fanart #digital art #my art

[un-pearable]

ngl one of the most useful things i’ve internalized from doing art online is never tell people what to criticize. don’t preemptively apologize for things or point out where you think you fumbled, it’s just priming people to notice minor issues that might not actually matter and hit you where you’re sensitive and throw you off your game. don’t tell people your weak points. if it’s a genuine problem they’ll point it out

#especially not if they’re the professor grading your assignment!!!!!!!!!! feel so bad for my friend #i cant tell him it now bc it’ll come across as mean but i feel so bad :( he kept apologizing for things he didn’t need to and it made him #seem unprepared. when he actually had 95% of what he needed and apologizing made it LOOK like he didn’t #text✨ #i’m making it sound very dramatic here but it’s straight up helped me so much with my anxiety #the above doesn’t apply if you’re looking for constructive criticism kr any thing #i’m very specifically talking about stuff like posting art online or giving a presentation or whatever

[filibusterfrog]

#my art #you can probably tell i dont animate ever but i just wanted to learn how flintlock pistols work #and i did! #edit: please dont send me constructive criticism i dont care about improving my animation work <3

[denkies]

#this is canon btw (source: revealed to me in a dream) #anyway i think every woman in the series should clown on denji more. as a treat. #chainsaw man #csm #power chainsaw man #denji chainsaw man #denji #lesbian power + bisexual denji solidarity (i don't take constructive criticism nor do i care about denji saying he doesnt like men) #its okay guys he was just in the denial phase of bisexuality. hes normal about it now #aki hayakawa #aki chainsaw man #denji hayakawa #power hayakawa #THIS IS AT 12K WHAT THE FUCK

[zhellers]

modern au Ash and Chet, they met at work and now they hate eachother (they're besties)

#they probably work at a construction site #zhellers #digital drawing #digital art #dungeons and dragons #dnd #critical role #chetney pock o'pea #ashton greymoore

[isawjamfirst]

🐺🐺🐺

#‘98 ww is a full time menace #tristamp ww is very bratty-youngest-child coded change my mind #trimax ww has a first-daughter syndrome #did i stutter #no i dont take constructive criticism #did u see my attempt at drawing the stupid background #this did not come out the way i wanted it to #i just want all versions of wolfwood together #meme redraw #TRIGUN #trigun stampede #tristamp #trigun maximum #trimax #trigun 1998 #nicholas the punisher #nicholas d wolfwood #trigun fanart #wolfwood

[slaviccryptid]

#i made this 3 months ago for a guy i had a crush on but it didn't work out so i'm no. longer gatekeeping it #the hobbit #an unexpected journey #bilbo baggins #fili and kili #the company of thorin oakenshield #lord of the rings #tolkien #this is literally canon and i don't accept constructive criticism

[the-kipsabian]

saw a take so fucking rancid on twitter i almost deleted the entire app from my phone jesus fucking christ

first of all ao3 is an archive site. this is like going to the library and saying "oh i dont like this" on every piece of media you find that you dislike and thinking they should be stamped with some sort of a marker just cause you didnt like it

you can always click back and leave. fic writers owe you nothing to explain themselves and their creations. if they have mistagged or miscategorized fics, then i understand, however there are report tools for that instead of yelling at the artist tbh

im not saying free works arent necessarily above criticism. but this is just. fucking wild. its common courtesy to just enjoy stuff (or fucking leave if you dont, the back button is free) and if the artist specifically asks for critiques, then give one - constructive that is, shitting all over someones work is not proper criticism, mind you

i just find it fucking wild people are treating art and archive sites as social media these days like this and everything needs to be policed and ~catered to the algorithm~ like. no. ao3 doesnt have an algorithm. you should be able to fucking tell what you like and what you dont like and steer away from that kind of content and let people fucking be with their art. they dont owe you anything (except trigger warnings i'd argue, but i know some people disagree with that as well for some reason), and imagine how much more energy you'd have if you only engaged with things you liked and spent time looking at instead of going to places where you dont enjoy yourself. let alone spending time telling other people you dont enjoy what they enjoy. what a fucking life

#like what the fuck #where is the common courtesy of fandoms these days im just fucking asking. its ridiculous #the back button is free. shutting your fucking mouth is free. constructive criticism when people ask for it is nice but only then #these are fucking basic level fandom engagement things #am i old or are people just this fucking awful now that these guidelines dont exist anymore #im just. ough #sorry i had to get this out. idk as someone who has never left unsolicited advice for anyone and never gotten it back it just #it fucking grinds me that people are like this now. like fucking wow #ive been here for almost two decades soon and i still know how to behave. yall better fucking learn #im gonna go back to video game sorry i really needed to yell for a hot fucking second #if you choose to reblog this dont fucking clown on it okay. god #night is an absolute mess on main

[keethus-arts]

TBOBF Din be like

#Disclaimer: I have no idea what I'm doing #First time using shadows #so if they look wonky #that's why #constructive criticism is welcomed #the mandalorian #mandalorian #star wars #din djarin #mando #baby yoda #yodito #the child #my art #fanart #star wars fanart #keethus arts

[ingoodjesst]

have you put the pieces together yet, detective

#goro akechi #akechi goro #persona 5 #persona 5 royal #p5 akechi #p5 spoilers #persona 5 fanart #jesst some art #i may have worked on this for... just under two weeks? i had like. so many fckgin thoughts i might make a process/concept breakdown post #it's honestly just for my own peace (haha piece) of mind because i overthought about. SosoooOoOo many motifs and symbols and i just wanna #idk PUT EM ALL somewhere........ maybe it'll become its own jessay of mine. god. who can say. #also DUDE tumblr rly does crunch up quality wow ouch #unironically a core thematic inspiration for this piece is a quote from the folding ideas' video 'the nostalgia critic and the wall' #'it doesn't all make sense or resolve or coalesce because we don't all make sense' #'everyone is the illusion of order constructed brick by brick out of chaos' #i've watched that video essay through at least. a dozen times at this point. everything about it. yeah. it's good. #this piece initially went many different directions and i have realized ah yes to fully explore just THESE themes that i'm interested in as #they relate to goro akechi i will need to draw. at least two more pieces. sdlfhsdlkfjsd

[littlecajunlady]

I'm following a couple fan fic writers who get a lot of asks, and sometimes they get a salty one that reads like it wants to be constructive criticism but it's really just rude and a matter of preference and I just think that their responses to these people are much nicer than I think I could be.

I looked at a CR fan art recently and someone in the comments did the whole "come on don't draw her like that" that I used to bitch about constantly and the artist never responded to it.

I just don't think I'd have it in me to be nice anymore. Idk. I think if I got those kind of messages I would just tell them to shut the fuck up and leave me alone.

#I don't contribute anything #So this is not a problem I have #But I'm seeing this behavior again recently #Yeah I have delayed anger #I'm a big people pleaser too #So maybe I could be the bigger person #But some people need to be told to stfu sometimes yk? #It's constructive criticism

[boysaremytoys]

i deserve a cute boy who will gladly give me sexual favours and let me play with him as i please. why? because i’m pretty and horny.

#not taking constructive criticism

[poorly-drawn-mdzs]

As we approach the next arc in the story, an outfit change is now on the horizon! The question is, what are our lads going to wear?

(Please also vote in the Lan Wangji poll!)

#poorly drawn mdzs #mdzs #wei wuxian #outfitting arc #poll #Reminder that these outfits are just for the next arc #so they are sticking around for a while but will change later #I love wwx's outfits in The Untamed a lot (there are so many fun variations!) and I cherry picked some of my favourite elements #alas. I am limited in the level of detail that I can add. #but man oh man....this is already a huge step up from where I started. #wwx finally gets to have sleeves....his arms are staying warm #I honestly had a blast coming up with these 4 outfits and I'm very curious to see which one will win! #PLEASE feel free to blast me some constructive criticism too #I *am* doing this to learn (as well as have fun) #forgive me for not having these polls linked until later